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I．历城区一模——摔倒，拍照
范文：One day, Tom went to a park with Jack. It was quite a beautiful day. They decided to take some photos. While they were having fun. Tom suddenly heard someone crying and ran off. Jack followed Tom to see what was happening. A girl fell down and she was crying loudly. Tom helped the girl stand up and cheered her up. Jack quickly took a photo of them to record the important moment. The photo will be kept for ever. And it tells us Tom is a good boy.
II. 专项训练——酒驾
醉酒驾驶作文分图辅导——句子
Picture 1
1.Jim drove to his friend’s house last weekend. He had a big meal with his friends.
2.Jim was invited to a party last weekend, and they drank a lot of wine at dinner.
3.Jim got drunk.
4.They were so excited that they drank a lot of beer.
Picture 2
1.His friends told him not to drive home.
2.It was too dangerous.
3.Jim didn’t think so and he refused.
4.He said, ―No, no problem.‖
5.Then he drove off.
Picture 3
1.He drank so much that he couldn’t see anything clearly.
2.His car ran into a tree, and he got badly injured.
3.Soon he was taken to hospital.
4.Someone took him to hospital later.
Picture 4
5.He had to stay in hospital for a long time.
6.What was worse, the policeman revoked his driving license.
Unluckily his driving license was revoked.
全文：
Last night, my uncle was invited to have dinner with his friends. He got drunk during the party. His friends tried to stop him from driving the car home, but he refused. On the way home, my uncle drove so fast that his car ran into a tall tree. He was badly injured. He was taken to the hospital in time. And he had to stay in hostpital for two weeks. What was worse，the policeman came and revoked his driving license. He said he would never drive after drinking.
范文：
1. Yesterday, my uncle had a terrible experience. My uncle was invited to his friend’s house for dinner. They had fun chatting and drank too much. As the night came, my uncle decided to leave. His friend tried to persuade him not drive the car after getting drunk, but failed. As a result, my uncle was so confused that he ran into a tall tree while driving. He was hurt badly and taken to the hospital. What’s worse, the police revoked his driving license so
that he could not drive for some time. This has been an important lesson for us: Obey the rules, and follow the right advice.
—By 毛悦
2. It was a moonlit night, My uncle was invited by a friend of his, So he came to his friend’s house and had a big supper. But he couldn’t hold his drink. Even though the host reminded my uncle not to drive home. He felt good about himself so he didn’t care it at all. As we can imagine, my uncle ran into a tall tree unluckily. He was hurt badly. Then he was taken to a hospital . And my uncle was told he was crippled and he had to stay there for two weeks or even longer . A policeman came to see him and revoked my uncle’s driving license. My uncle was very sorry, for himself and for others . I believed he had known how to protect himself and not to get into trouble with others
—By 李筱霖
3. Drinking alcohol is dangerous for kids and teenagers, and sometimes for adults , too. To support this, I will tell you a real story next .It happened to my uncle yesterday. Last night , he was invited by his firend to have dinner. At the end of the dinner, he got drunk. It was time for him to go back home and although he had drunk a lot , he would rather drive by himself than be sent home,“No……no problem”, he refused other’help. However, it was too dark for him to see things clearly, So at last he ran into a tall tree. When my uncle woke up ,he realized he had been taken to hospital. He was injured and he couldn’t move at all. What’s worse, the policeman came in to told him that his driving license had been revoked . My uncle’s story told us ——Drunk driving is a serous problem and it’s illegal.
—By 牛童
III．槐荫区一模——小熊放风筝
范文：It was a beautiful spring morning. A bear was flying a kite near the forest. While he was running with the kite happily, suddenly he was stopped by something. He was surprised to find the kite was hung on the top of a tree. It was too high for him to reach. He didn’t know what to do and couldn’t stop crying. Just at that time, a giraffe came by. He decided to help the bear to get the kite. And he succeeded. The bear was very thankful. And they became good friends.
IV．市中区一模——小燕子：
范文：
1. As spring comes, trees turn green, and swallows fly back (with the greeting of spring).
Two swallows arrived at Tom’s house and built a nest under the eaves to raise (look after, bring up) their baby.
One day, the baby swallow fell down from (fell off) the nest. Luckily, this was seen by Tom. He (immediately) ran to the baby as fast as possible and caught it just in time. Next, Tom climbed up a ladder so that he could reach the nest. Then, he put the baby swallow back carefully.
The baby’s parents (that had just returned after hunting) saw the scene (what Tom did). They flew happily around Tom and said, ―Thanks very much for saving our baby! You are a hero! ‖
