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Direction: For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to a short essay entitled education pays based on the statistics provided in the chart below(unemployment rate in 2010).please give a brief description of the chart first and then make comments on it. you should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
第一段:描述图表总结趋势
A trend, as is illustrated in the bar-chart, is that a higher level of education is followed by lower chance of unemployment.Specifically, the rate touches almost 15% among those under high school level, but no more than 2% among those with doctoral degrees. The conclusion is education pays.
第二段:联系现实论证主题
Some reasons must be lying behind this correlations. For one thing,the degree of education is commonly viewed as value of the diploma-owner. Therefore, those with descent diploma are always cherished by employers. For another, years of education indeed endows them with the capacity in their professions, which increases their job performance and decreases their chance of unemployment.
第三段:重申主题提出建议
Obviously, a diploma is not necessarily a guarantee against unemployment, but at least a proof of lower chance of being laid out. Therefore, it is a safe bet to go on further education.
第一段:
A trend, as is exhibited in the pie-chart, is that only few college students have adequate physical exercise every week, while the vast majority are under exercised. Specifically, the percentage of those who work out over three hours per week stays merely 2.42%, but 61% of youngsters who do exercise less than an hour weekly.
第二段:
Some reasons must be lying behind this situation. For one thing, must of them are busy taking part-time jobs or tests, sparing no time to exercise for physical health, For another, some of them are lazy to spend even a minute on the playground. Rather, they are willing to sit in front a screen for hours.Something must be done to deal with such “business”and “laziness”.
第三段:
We should bear in mind that physical health is not necessarily a guarantee to a glorious life, but at least a proof against weakness and sickness. Therefore,i t is a safe bet to invest health by having physical training regularly.。