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读后续写之情绪描写微技能课件

读后续写之情绪描写微技能课件

Emotional nouns anger; rage
sadness; sorrow; pain disappointment;desperation
frustration; depression confusion; puzzlement
/ /
Emotional words ( Negative emotions )
Emotional words ( Positive emotions )
Emotional adjectives
喜悦 happy; delighted; pleased; cheerful; joyful
激动
excited; thrilled
惊讶 surprised; amazed; astonished; shocked
焦虑 无助 害怕、恐惧 羞愧、尴尬 后悔;内疚 疲惫 不情愿
Emotional adjectives anxious helpless
afraid; scared; frightened; ashamed; embarrassed regretful; guilty tired; exhausted unwilling; reluctant
control.
① with + 情绪n.
2. With a_n_g_e_r__/ _ra_g_e_(怒气冲冲地), he rushed into my room.
3. Smiling in _r_e_l_ie_f_(宽慰地), m②y mionth+er情hu绪ggne.d me gently.
4. When the flood broke out, the villagers fled in p_a_n_i_c_(恐慌地

2025届高三英语上学期二轮复习专项：读后续写情绪表达万能句式课件(共22张PPT).ppt

2025届高三英语上学期二轮复习专项：读后续写情绪表达万能句式课件(共22张PPT).ppt

the good news. 一听到这个好消息，我很开心。
升级1： 句首可以加上doing sth，表示这种情绪产生的原因。
Eg： Hearing the thunderous applause for her performance, she felt a wave of excitement and pride welling up in her heart. 听到为 她的表演而想起的雷鸣般的掌声，一股兴奋感和骄傲感涌上了她的 心头。
welling up in her heart and surging through her. 10. 尽管她很恐慌，但她仍然试图一层又一层地揭开她面前未 知世界的神秘面纱。
Panicked as she was, she still tried to demystify the unknown world before her one floor after another.
delighted and excited sad and frustrated nervous and anxious worried and scared determined and confident surprised and touched annoyed and disappointed exhausted and hungry
crossing the finish line , conveying his happiness and gratitude .
高考读后续写应用翻译练习（2021年-2024年）
9. 意识到发生了什么，她感觉到一股暖流在她心里涌动，奔腾而来 。 Realizing what had happened, she felt a wave of warmth

高中英语优质课读后续写描写技能让喜怒哀描写更有画面感精品PPT课件

高中英语优质课读后续写描写技能让喜怒哀描写更有画面感精品PPT课件
confusionpuzzle尴尬embarassedembarassment羞愧ashamedshame捂嘴张嘴惊讶head低头点头摇头挠头facedrooponesheadnodonesheadshookonesheadscratchoneshead发亮高兴脸红苍白lightupflushbepaleeyeface闪烁兴奋扫视四周凝视盯着怒视mouthsparksparklescanaroundgazeatstareatglareatcoveronesmouthdropopentears滚落模糊视线rolltrickledownbluronesvisiontomysurperiseamazementhenoddedhisheadnotunderstandingaword
I was so delighted that I couldn't help jumping up and down. So delighted was I that I couldn't help jumping up and down.
moved exhaustion
with tears blurring her eyes with foot shaking.
模糊 blu(r视on线e’s)vision
To my surperise/amazement, he nodded his head，not understanding a word.
body hand reach伸o出ut o手ne’s hand hold握on住e’s手hand raise举on起e’s手hand rub o搓ne手’s hand
How to make moods descriptions picturesque?

读后续写微技能训练之心里活动描写.ppt

读后续写微技能训练之心里活动描写.ppt

tired surprised angry excited cautious upset/uneasy frightened
1、当她知道考试结果时，她兴奋极了。 When she knew the result of the test, she felt extremely___e_x_c_it_e_d_/_jo_y_f_u_l_.
6、当主持人宣布她获奖时，她的激动之情溢于言表。 When the host announced that she won the prize, a wide
ex_c_i_t_e_m__e_n_t_took hold of her.
7、如痴如狂的自豪和喜悦已经渐渐化作轻柔、甜蜜和无 言的欣慰----是那种深沉隽永，说不清、道不明的心满意足。 人人脸上都流露着平和而圣洁的幸福表情。
12、我欣喜若狂，三步并作两步就跑过去。 I was __o_v_e_r_jo_y_e_d__and ran three steps at once.
1、她分手了，她伤心不已。 She broke up with her husband,
and she felt extremely ___s_a_d_____.
B4 confuse, regret, depressed, content, astonish, bored, curious, frown, anger, yawn
B5 delight, thrill, uncertain, exhausted, delighted, guilty, dilemma
and she was overcome with _s_a_d_n_e_s_s_/_so__rr_o_w_s_/_g.rief 2、我的心似乎被撕裂了。

高考英语读后续写训练之怎么表达惊讶之情-how to express surprise 课件

高考英语读后续写训练之怎么表达惊讶之情-how to express surprise 课件
Continuation Writing
读后续写
1
When a tornado touched down in a small town nearby, many families were left completely ruined. One Sunday, a particular picture especially touched me. A young woman stood in front of an entirely ruined home. A young boy, seven or eight years old, stood at her side, eyes downcast. Clutching（紧握）at her skirt was a tiny girl who stared into the camera, eyes wide with confusion and fear. The article that went with the picture gave the clothing sizes of each family member. With growing interest, I noticed that their sizes closely matched ours. This would be a good opportunity to teach my children to help those less fortunate than themselves. I taped the picture of the young family to our refrigerator, explaining their difficulty to my seven-year-old twins, Brad and Brett, and to threeyearold Meghan.

读后续写之情绪描写篇 课件 2024届高考英语一轮复习

读后续写之情绪描写篇 课件 2024届高考英语一轮复习
guilty astonished nervous
anxious frustrated courageous
brave
情绪名词
恐慌的 后悔的
panic regret
悔恨的
remorse
有罪的
guilt
惊讶的
astonishment
不安的
nervousness
焦虑/担心的；紧张的
anxiety
沮丧的；挫败的 勇敢的；无畏的
, afraid of looking straight into

the teacher's eyes.
2.他不知道该怎么办了，一个劲地挠头。
He had no idea what to do, scratching his head constantly
.
Part2
eg:My father was surprised to be rejected when he tried to hug me. 当我父亲试图拥抱我时，他很惊讶自己被拒绝了。
eg:The little boy stood there speechless, with sorrowful tears rolling down his face.
小男孩站在那里，说不出话来，伤心的泪水从他的脸上滑落。
1.他拥抱了他的母亲，喜悦的泪水从他的脸上滑落，在赢得了冠军赛后。
He hugged his mother, with tears of joy rolling down his face, after winning the championship game. 2.她哭着，悲伤的泪水顺着脸颊滑落，在和心爱的宠物告别。
2.想起过去犯过的错误，她感到一阵后悔。

读后续写情绪“惊恐”课件高考英语专题复习


1.一想到要独自留在那所黑暗的大
毛骨悚然 浑身发抖 血液凝固 心脏狂跳
one’s hair stand on end shake all over(one’s body) the blood in one’s body freezes rapidly one’s heart is racing with fear
Frightened Molly
Activity 4. Further proper details
一想到要独自留在那所黑暗的大房子里，她就毛骨悚然。 半夜有人敲门。
“妈妈？爸爸？”他们在哪里？ 莫莉(Molly)从床上爬起来，踮着脚尖下楼。
恐惧使她浑身发抖。她的手指蜷曲成拳头，指甲戳进手掌。 看到玻璃门外的黑影，莫莉感觉体内的血液迅速凝固起来。 她的心因恐惧而狂跳。她伸手拿手机给警察打电话，却发现没电了。
二、心理描写 1．心理描写的2种方法(1)直 接描写：具体写作时，可用
“I felt” “she thought” “he would”等句式。(2)间接描写： 人物的性格不同，情绪不同， 其所表现出的动作和神态也 就不同，因此可以利用人物 的动作和神态体现其心理， 也可以利用语言描写表现人 物心理。
2
who Molly
3
what Molly scared at seeing something; Locked in a 4 cage
when May be at night
1
Story elements
why
5
6 How
The evaluation standard
维度 立意 逻辑
内容
评价项目
高考真题
读后续写话题
2022年1月浙江卷

读后续写--惊慌安慰篇


anxious –awful- hopeful
Para. 4 Para. 5 Para. 6
elevators Floor 3
was abandoned pressed button 3 no check-in counters
Tears formed in my eyes as I saw the empty hall and realized that I would miss my plane. 点1 点2
in despair helpless hopeless
1. I –失望难过—表现 2. 老人见到—安慰-主动 提出帮助
When I turned to thank him for 1. I – 遗憾 心怀感激 all his help, he was gone.点1 点2 2. 从中学到什么？
Who : I , an airport employee
I was!
感叹句表达感激之情
有意识--多尝试
微技能---细节描写 “how to show”
to tell: The boy felt very tired.
to show:
Fall asleep Have a deep sleep Sleep soundly
In Mother’s arms
Head on the shoulder
词组：
安慰篇
1. pat sb. on the shoulder 2. look sb. gently in the eyes 3. cast comforting glance at sb.
4. hug/hold sb. in one's arms 句子：
1. He didn't say a word , but smiled a watery smile and held my hands tightly . 2. She stroked(轻抚）her fingers through my hair , and said ,”Things are going to be fine .” 3.The woman was staring tenderly(和善温柔地at the girl , wiping out tears from her cheek . 4. Seeing her condition , I immediately felt a huge surge(汹涌）of sympathy for her . It was coming deep from within

读后续写惊慌安慰篇PPT课件

P2: When I turned to thank him for all his help , he was gone .
可推知 P1：得到那个老人的帮助。 1. 衔接提示句， 老人注意到我， 如何注意到？ 我的动作被看到 2. 我的回应—— 心情 举止 3. 帮助过程———找到check-in-counter- the inspection counter
didn't know _w__h_e_r_e_was the check-in-counter. I tried to ask a passing business man but failed because I didn't
express clearly.
Another bus arrived , I __fo_l_lo_w__e_d__ all the passengers and finally reached the _a_b_a_n__d_o_n_e_d___ , but I didn't
.
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1. Seeing me crying with sadness, the elderly employee came up to me ,patted me
on the shoulder, and gently asked me what had happened, which made me feel
guy? ” --伴随状语表示形态 加定语更形象生动
show----not tell
said smiling come running ran out shouting stormed out roaring “…”
4.Never before had I felt so excited that I couldn't wait to follow him, sighing with

【课件】读后续写：运用身体信号来表达情绪 课件-2023届高三英语写作专项


Step1:Observe and discover The kids jump with joy, waving their arms.
Step1:Observe and discover
He scratched（挠） his head , not understanding a
word.
Step1:Observe and discover
which one is more vivid? which one can you get the
picture?
He is very angry Stheell=isgevneeryraslad
description I am very lamming the door.
She stsohoodws=idleetnatillye,dtears rolling ddoewscnrihpteironcheeks.
Lowering down my head, I take a long deep breath.
Don’t just tell
KEVIN
But Show!
Step1:Observe and discover Po is surprised, with its mouth open and eyes widening.
John slammed on the brakes, hands shaking even more violently.
Step1:Observe and discover I patted him on the shoulder, encouraging: “Come on!”
Step1:Observe and discover
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in despair helpless hopeless
1. I –失望难过—表现 2. 老人见到—安慰-主动 提出帮助
Para. 6
When I turned to thank him for 1. I – 遗憾 心怀感激 all his help , he was gone. 点1 点2 2. 从中学到什么？5
2
3
4
读原文（一个中心两个基本点三条线）预测全文走向（两条线）定结局 —读首句定段意- 细节刻画
Para. Para.1
Time
a past experience
Place airport
Plot
3 hours later got to the … watched …set my luggage on the airport sidewalk Why?--
Who : I , an airport employee
Step1 ：准确理解材料，确定续写结局
When Before taking my plane home
Where: the terminal airport , the elevator , the third floor
一个中心，三a. 4 Para. 5
elevators Floor 3
was abandoned pressed button 3 no check-in counters
Tears formed in my eyes as I saw the empty hall and realized that I would miss my plane. 点1 点2
Why: I was anxious , for this was the first visit alone to the airport
沿着时间线 抓住情节线 抓牢情感线
How:
明确写作目的 ---预测走向
This was my visit____a_lo_n_e___ to the international terminal of the airport . Nothing was__f_a_m_i_li_a_r_, and I even
didn't know __w__h_e_re_was the check-in-counter. I tried to ask a passing business man but failed because I didn't
express clearly.
Another bus arrived , I __f_o_l_lo_w__ed__ all the passengers and finally reached the ____a_b_a_n_d_o_n_e_d_ , but I didn't
manage to fit in and was _____ab_a_n_d_o_n_e_dagain . Then I got on it , but I pressed the wrong button 3 . On the third
, but he forced himself not to panic .
. 舌头打结 手心出汗 . 感到嗓子发紧
安慰篇 词组：
1. pat sb. on the shoulder 2. look sb. gently in the eyes 3. cast comforting glance at sb.
Emotion
anxious : my anxiety had just begun
Para. 2
terminal of…
my first visit alone-unfamiliar had to find help- couldn't be late
anxious+ panic
Para. 3
tried but in vain another bus –followed
4. hug/hold sb. in one's arms 句子：
1. He didn't say a word , but smiled a watery smile and held my hands tightly . 2. She stroked( 轻抚）her fingers through my hair , and said ,”Things are going to be fine .” 3.The woman was staring tenderly( 和善温柔地at the girl , wiping out tears from her cheek . 4. Seeing her condition , I immediately felt a huge surge( 汹涌）of sympathy for her . It was c oming deep from within my heart .
感知到我对未来的紧张和担忧， ... 3. He was about to respond when he felt his tongue tied and palms sweating 4. A flood of tension welled up in him ./Tension flooded over him . 5. His heart beat wildly and his legs trembled , feeling his throat tightened 6. Scared and nervous , she was frozen to the spot .
续写--惊慌篇 安慰篇
1
惊慌篇 1. Rigo was a little nervous , lowering his head and couldn't help trembling 2. Sensing my stress and fear of the unknown , he tried to make me laugh .