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写作指导第一步：审题本次习作的内容是看图写话，必须根据给出的图画展开想象来写，不能脱离图画随意写作。
第二步：选材图中的小明友在放风等，可以把放风筝的两个男孩作为重点描述的对象。
开头：时间、地点、人物经过：人们在什么？他们在做什么？结尾：表达心情、总结方法、发表感想第三步：构思根据图画内容，简要列出习作提纲。
开头：开门见山，交代放风筝的时间、地点、人物。
(略)中间：描写天上风筝的样子。
(略)描写“我”和东东放风筝的过程。
(详)结尾：欣赏自己的风筝，表达感想。
(略)第四步：表达构思出提纲后，就要考虑如何让文章吸引人了，不妨从以下几个方面着手：①为习作起一个有趣的题目，如《我和风筝一起飞》；②运用修辞手法，如比喻、拟人、排比等；③按照事情发展的顺序来写他们放风筝的过程。
题目《放风筝》《又是一年三月三》《燕子飞了》《一件趣事》写作素材好词各种各样形态各异手忙脚乱翩翩起舞欢呼雀跃兴高采烈汗流浃背不约而同精神抖擞跑来跑去跃跃欲试佳句开头1.星期天，阳光明媚，我和东东高高兴兴地来到滨江大道的草地上放风筝。
2.风和日丽，正是放风筝的好时候。
公园的草地上早就聚集了好多人。
结尾1.哈哈，风筝似乎飞到了云彩上。
我忍不住大声喊：“成功了，成功了，我把风筝放到了云彩上！”2.一阵风吹来，风筝使劲地飞，飞得更高了。
我望着它，渐渐浮想联翩，它变成了一只鸟，一只真正自由的鸟……引用1.草长莺飞二月天，拂堤杨柳醉春烟。
2.又是一年三月三，风筝飞满天，牵着我的思念和梦幻，走回到童年……范文+点评范文一：放风筝星期天，天气晴朗，暖风徐徐，正是放风筝的好天气。
我和东东、丽丽一起到人民广场的草地上放风筝。
广场上的草已经长出来了，嫩嫩的，绿绿的，非常可爱。
广场的上空已经飞满了风筝，有凶猛的老鹰风筝、长长的巨龙风筝、拖着长尾巴的金鱼风筝……天空成了风筝的海洋。
各种各样的风筝，在蓝天白云的映衬下，展翅飞翔。
看着这些美丽的风筝，东东不禁说：“快把我们的风筝放起来吧！”说着，他把风筝高高地举过头顶，我右手拿着线轴，左手拉着风筝线，飞快地向前跑。
语文作文看图写话《放风筝》英文版Kite FlyingIn the vast expanse of the sky, a kite floats gracefully, trailing a long string of color and joy. The image captures the essence of a perfect spring day, filled with warmth, laughter, and the thrill of adventure.The kite, a vibrant creation of paper and bamboo, dances in the breeze, soaring higher and higher with each gust. Its owner, a young child perhaps, stands with arms outstretched, eyes fixed on the kite, guiding it with the string. The child's face is a picture of pure joy, reflecting the freedom and fun that kite flying brings.Around them, the world comes alive. Trees rustle, flowers bloom, and birds sing in celebration. The kite flying session has become a festival of sorts, bringing people together to share in the simple pleasures of the outdoors.As the kite reaches new heights, so does the child's imagination. Dreams of exploration and adventure take flight, carried by the same wind that propels the kite. The experience is not just about flying a kite, but about stepping into a world of possibilities and wonders.In this moment, the kite flying session transcends itself, becoming a metaphor for life's journey. Just as the kite rises with the help of the wind, so do our dreams take flight when we embrace the opportunities that come our way. The string,代表our roots and the support we need to stay grounded, ensuring that even in the face of challenges, we never lose sight of our goals.As the sun sets and the kite comes down, the child's face is still filled with the glow of happiness. The experience has left a lasting impression, one that will serve as a reminder of the joy and freedom that can be found in the simplest of pleasures.中文版放风筝在广阔的天空中，一只风筝优雅地漂浮着，拖着一条长长的彩带和欢笑。
