高分作文

四级作文基本要求：1.按段落指定内容展开，不跑题；2.结构合理，论述条理；（写作文要先写成结构框架，然后往里填充内容，前五分钟审题。

理清思路）学会写主题句3.言之有物。

4.字迹工整。

英语四级高分作文技巧：1、是否长短句交叉;2、是否会使用插入语及过渡单词使得文章更有逻辑性；3、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词;4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词;5、句型使用是否准确、地道。

下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：1. 适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实，句子开头不要总是用we / I （比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ）举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：It is ，therefore，high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.2.善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。

如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。

比如说：Other individuals，however，take the attitude that …3. 一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。

（考试中一般不要出现good，bad ，many，thing，think，people，opinion 等等）比如上面例子中，applicable替换proper，approaches替换ways，implement 替换carry out，sharpen one‘s competitive edge替换enhance one’s competitiveness（提高某物竞争力）下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同学写的优秀作文（14分）的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。

这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。

Computer and I （By Simmy ）I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present，which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that I indulged myself in googling a great deal of useful information I had expected ，and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless，feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly 替换verythrilling 替换excitingsth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换sb. be interested in sth.google 替换searcha great deal of 替换a lot ofThe dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology，computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to g rowing individua ls. I t is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them，in large measure！（在很大程度上）The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情; Increasing popularity 替换more and more popularCoincident with …非常地道的句型，表达“与…一致”的意思，替换With …Advancement 替换developmentPour into （flood into / swarm into ）替换enter intoCurrent （currently ）替换nowAppeal to sb. 替换sb. be interested in sth.Growing individuals 替换more and more peopleIt is no exaggeration to say 经典句型，说某事是毫不夸张的For a start，we can，freely，search desired information at any moment. Little by little，our knowledge will bewell enriched，and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally，we can get huge recreations online by chatting，playing games，or deliverin g email. For a start 替换To begin withWe can，freely，search 用了插入语的写作手法our knowledge will be well enriched，and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被动Additionally 替换In addition / BesidesDeliver 替换sendThere is no denying that ，however，computers can function in the disservice of human beings，in a way，especially the growing violence，porn pictures，A V-films emerging on the screen, which leads quiet a few net citizens to copy.There is no denying that ，however，computers can function in the disservice of human beings，这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先There is no denying that这个句型，还有however作为插入语，function in the disservice of 替换do harm toEmerging 替换appearing （fading 替换disappearing ）Net citizen 网民，属于精彩用词As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people’s lives，despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ，therefore，take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds 替换Every coin has two sidesComputers do play ，do 强调Positive 替换important / good 等A slice of 替换a part ofUnfavorable 替换badImpacts 替换effects / influencesWe should，therefore，take advantage of …使用插入语Fruits （而且fruits 用的非常形象，merits/ virtues）替换advantage （defects 替换disadvantage ）Facet 替换aspect大学英语四级作文常用过渡词汇1) 先后次序关系：at this time; first; second; at last; next；previously; simultaneously; eventually；last but not least；to begin with；to start with；to end with；finally；seeing...；since then；first of all；afterwards; following this; preceding this.2) 因果关系：because；because of this；being that；another important factor／reason of... ；since；as；for；in that...；owing to；due to；for the reason that...；in view of；the reason seems to be obvious; there are about... ；for this reason; as a result of this；therefore；...and so...；consequently；as a result；thus；hence；so；so that...；in consequence；as a consequence；accordingly; inevitably; under these conditions; thereupon.3) 转折关系：but；even so；however；though；even though；independent of；reckless of ；despite that；in spite of that；regardless of; yet...；and yet；but unless.4) 并列关系：and; also；too；as well as；either...，or...；both...and...5) (补充)递进关系：furthermore；moreover；further；In this way ；still；not only...but also...；not...but...；in addition (to)；additionally, much more interesting, more specifically, next, besides；as far as... is concerned; moreover；in other words；along this line of consideration；on the one hand...，on the other hand...；even；as a poplar saying goes...；in order to do it...; meanwhile；at the same time；accordingly；In the first place...，in the second place...;equally important; of even greater appeal.6) 比较关系：similarly; in like manner, in comparison with；when compared with；compared with；when in fact...; like...；likewise；similarly important；apart from (doing)...；... rather than...，by doing so ；both…and...; in the same way; not only...but (also).7) 对照(不同点)：yet; still; for all of that; notwithstanding; rather; neither ... nor; although; though; but; however; something is just the other way around；yet; conversely；unlike；opposed to; as opposed to ；in contrast (to)；by way of；on the contrary；different from this；as opposed to this；nevertheless; contrary to；whereas；while；but on the other hand.8) 举例关系:for example；for instance；in this case; namely；as you know；you may as／say；as he explains；like；such as；a case in point is...; consider...；in particular；including...；for one thing...，for another...；put it simply；stated roughly；as an illustration，I will say...；a good example (of...)would be...；to detail this，I would like to...；It is interesting to note that...；in this situation; as proof; take the case of; take as example (something)；as for; as regards；as to；according to; on this occasion.9) 强调关系：in fact; especially；particularly；moreover；naturally; what is more important；in reality；certainly; of course; indeed; in particular；not to mention...；believe it or not；undeniably; other thing being equal；it is certain／sure that...；to be strict; to be true；by definition; definitely; undoubtedly; without a doubt; in truth, in any event(不论怎样); without reservation(毫无保留地); obviously, not only.. but(also...), both... and...10) 条件关系: if；unless; lest；provided that；if it is the case；in this sense；once...；if possible；if necessary；if so；if not all; if anything.11) 归纳总结类：in other words；on the whole; in sum; therefore；hence；in short；in brief；to sum up；in conclusion; in summary；to conclude；the conclusion can be drawn that...; for this reason; in short.12) 地点关系：beyond; opposite to; adjacent to; at the same place; there; over; in the middle; around; in front of; in the distance; farther; here and there; above; below; at the right; between; on this side.13) 目的关系：with this object; for this purpose; in order that; in this way, since; so that; on that account; in case; with a view to; for the same reason.14) 重申关系：in other words; that is to say; as I have said; again; once again.15) 结果关系：accordingly; thus; consequently; hence; therefore; thereupon; inevitably; under these conditions; as a result; as a consequence; because; because of; so that; not only...but (also...); so... as to.16) 顺序关系：first; second; thirdly; next; then; at the outset(在开始时)，following this; at this time; now; at this point; after; afterward; after this; subsequently; lastly; finally; consequently; before this; previously; preceding this; simultaneously; concurrently(同时).17) 时间关系：at once; immediately; at length; in the mean time; meanwhile; at the same time; in the end; then; soon; not long after; later; at once; at last; finally; some time ago; at present; all of a sudden; from this time on; from time to time; since then; when; whenever; next point; a few minutes later; formerly; as; once; since; occasionally; in a moment; shortly; whereupon; previously英语四级作文万能句（一）段首句1. 关于……人们有不同的观点。