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Sample 1 (A12 陈思臣)Recently, a book called Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother has caught many people’s attention. The author, Amy Chua, who is a Chinese American professor of Yale, managed to cause te discussion on whether Chinese way or American way is better for children’s education, using her story about raising her two daughters in a traditional Chinese way. The book came out in the year 2010 and was introduced into China at the start of 2011. According to the latest news, Amy’s elder daughter has just got the offers from both Yale and Harvard. To some extent, it seems that the traditional Chinese way has received great achievement, but most Chinese moms doesn’t agree with what author did because its brutality.Sample 2 (A12 曹庭赫)Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother, which was written by Amy Chua, professor of Yale, first came out in 2010. In the book, the Chinese American tells of how she has brought up her two daughters with traditional Chinese methods, leading to a wide range of discussion on whether Chinese or American ways to educate are better to the kids. It became available on Chinese market at the start of 2011 and soon became one of the best sellers in the country known for strict and stressful education. Most Chinese mothers, to everyone’s surprise, held a negative attitude towards the Tiger Mother’s methods, for they would rather let children grow up in a happier and freer atmosphere. Despite all the disagreement and criticism, Amy Chua’s 17-year-old daughter has received offers from Harvard and Yale.Sample 3 (A 12 曾奕博)Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother, a book written by Amy Chua, a Chinese American professor from Yale, has captured the attention of the public since its coming out in 2010. The story that Chua’s two daughters have been educated in a traditional Chinese way arouses a heated discussion on strengths and weaknesses between Chinese and American method of teaching.The Chinese version was on sale at the beginning of 2011, however, only to get the result that most mothers in China tend to disapprove of the measures Chua took.. Hence, when words came that the 17-year-old elder daughter had been admitted to Yale and Harvard, the public are lost in a deeper thought than it has ever been.Sample 4 (A 11 陈硕)The book Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother, which came out in 2010, now leads to a discussion about the difference between Chinese education style and American education style. The writer, Amy Chua as a Chinese American and a professor in Yale, recorded the story that she educated her two daughters in a traditional Chinese way. However, with the Chinese version available at the beginning of 2011, most of Chinese mothers don’t agree with what the writer did despite the fact that Amy’s 17-year-old elder daughter has been admitted by both Yale and Harvard. Sample 5 (A11 陈晓宇)A book entitled Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother was published in 2010. Its author is Amy Chua, a Chinese American and professor in Yale, who tells of stories in her book about how she educates her two daughters in the traditional Chinese way. Its publication has sparkled a debate as to which way of educating is superior, the traditional Chinese way or the American way. The Chinese version of the book came onto market in China in early 2011, but surprisingly a vast majority of Chinese mothers are not in favor of the writer’s practice despite the fact the Amy’s elder daughter, 17 years old, has been admitted to both Harvard and Yale.Sample 6 (A 11 李铂垚)The book Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother, which was published in 2010 is written by Amy Chua, a Chinese American professor in Yale. The content includes the experiences of the author bringing up her two daughters in a traditional Chinese way, which leads to a discussion and argument about the advantages and disadvantages between the Chinese and American educational method.In addition, the book began to be on sale in China in the early 2011. To everyone’s surprise, most Chinese mothers hold negative attitude to what the author did, even if the method has made great achievements—her 17-year-old elder mother has been admitted to both Yale and Harvard. Sample 7 (A 10 任冬旭)Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother written by a Chinese American called Amy Chua was first published in 2010. The author who works in Yale University as a professor tells us a story about how she educated her two daughters in the traditional Chinese way, which leads to a heated discussion on which educational method is better, the Chinese one or the American one.In 2011, the Chinese edition of this book came out in China. To everyone’s surprise, most of the mothers in China hold an opposite opinion to the book. But according to the latest news, the author’s elder daughter has been accepted by both Harvard and Yale at the age of 17.Sample 8 (A 9 曹欣然)Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother, published in 2010, is written by Amy Chua, a Chinese American who is now a professor in Yale. Amy Chua tells of her own story about how she has educated her two daughters in the traditional Chinese way in the book. The book soon caused a discussion on the advantages and disadvantages of Chinese and American education.After the book coming out in Chinese a year later, to our surprise, most Chinese mothers tended to show their negative attitude towards Amy’s way of teaching. However, according to the latest news, the writer’s 17-year-old elder daughter has been admitted to both Harvard and Yale. Sample 9 (A 7 李雨桐)Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother written by a Chinese American named Amy Chua, a Yale University professor, came out in 2010 in the USA and has brought about widespread concern without a doubt. It is surely based on an honest story of the author’s experience in sparing no effort to educate her two daughters in what she described as a traditional Chinese upbringing way. It also has led to a heated discussion over which one is better, Chinese or American ways of education. But to our surprise, the majority of Chinese mothers were against her views when the book went into China in early 2011. However, the latest news showed that her daughter of 17 years old had been admitted to Harvard and Yale, which seemed to have proved her success in education.Sample 10 (A3 张沛锦)Recently there’s a book that tells a story how the writer uses Chinese traditional educating way to teach her two daughters, which draws people’s attention and even causes a discussion on whether Chinese educating style is better than that of America.Amy Chua, the writer of the book and professor of Yale, is a Chinese American and had the booked published in 2010. To people’s surprise, as the Chinese version was available in China in early 2011, most Chinese mothers weren’t in favour of what Amy did in her book. Instead, they stick to their own methods which are less strict. In spite of that, the latest news shows that Amy’s elder daughter aged 17 has been admitted to both Yale and Harvard.Sample 11 (A2 陈栎杉)A book named Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother came out in 2010, in which the writer, Amy Chua, a professor of Yale, tells the story of her personal experience of educating her two daughters in the traditional Chinese way.As soon as the Chinese version began to sell in 2011, the book aroused the attention of the public and led to a keen discussion on the issue whether the Chinese education is better than the American one. Surprisingly, most Chinese parents stand against this ruthless way of education, even though the latest news come out that Amy’s seventeenth-year-old daughter is accepted both by Harvard and Yale.Sample 12 (A2 张瑞佳)In 2010, the publication of Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother has aroused a heated controversy about the differences between Chinese and American education modes and their respective merits. As the author of this sensational book, Amy Chua, a Chinese American working for Yale as a professor, vividly recorded her bittersweet experience in bringing up her two daughters in the traditional Chinese way.The Chinese version has been on sale since early 2011. But much to our surprise, most Chinese mothers hold a negative attitude to it. While the battle between the two education styles is till in a full swing, a latest report showed that Chua’s 17-year-old daughter has got her offers from Yale and Harvard.Sample 13 (A 5 耿丹)Recently there is a book coming out in China and drawing people’s attention. Written by Amy Chua, a Chinese American and professor of Yale University, this book named Battle Hymn of Tiger Mother talks about how the writer educated her two daughters in the traditional Chinese style, and unexpectedly caused a discussion on which is better, American style or Chinese style.As its Chinese version was available in China at the beginning of 2011, to Amy’s surprise, most Chinese mothers aren’t in favour of what the writer did in her book. However, according to the latest news, Amy’s elder daughter has been admitted to both Harvard University and Yale University by now. Sample 14 (A 5 杨悦宁)Battle Hymn of the Tiger, the book published in 2010, is written by Amy Chua as a Chinese American and professor of Yale University. In her book, Amy Chua tells the story about how she raises two daughters in her own traditional Chinese way and the book aroused a discussion about the differences between Chinese and American education methods.Chinese readers have already read the book since its Chinese version was published in early 2011. To our surprise, a large number of Chinese mothers reckon that Amy’s education method isn’t suitable for their children. Nevertheless, the latest news is that Amy’s 17-year-old daughter has been received by Harvard and Yale.常见错误：1. A book published in 2010 and caused a discussion.2. A book had been first published in 20103.old/ older daughter4. a Chinese American profession5.Chinese issue6. A book which written by ….7.The book tells a story about the writer educated/educate/educates her two daughters has causeda discussion8.…has been admitted by Yale9.the book’s publishment made a discussion that between American and Chinese education stylewhich is better.10.… has been enrolled/recruited by Harvard11.a book broke out12.by Chinese education waycate her daughters with Chinese education14.the book was came out in 201015.…leading to a discussion whether the ways of Chinese or American education are good or not16.lead to the discussion that which is better or worse between the means of educating in Chineseway and American one.17.The mother is really successful because of the fact that is the writer’s 17-year-old daughter hasalready been admitted to Harvard and Yale.18.By talking about teaching the two daughters in traditional Chinese way, the book has led to aheated discussion about teaching the children in which way is better.19.It leads to people to discuss the Chinese education compares with the American’s which isbetter.。
高二精选作文系列讲评讲评：这两篇作文均逆向立意，认为在磨合中可以使人消磨了斗志，磨平了棱角，变得世故圆滑起来。
此立意着实有深度，透过一片对磨合的赞美声，我们确实看到了磨合的另一方面，即磨合的副作用。
《顽石》的作者用形象喻体告诉我们保住了自己个性的完美；《警惕磨合》的作者一分为二的分析论述，更显得深入严谨。
此外两篇文章的议论结构，典型的古今例证以及简练生动的语言也给我们留下难忘的印象。
（分数48-55）我是一只霰雪鸟，一只笼子里的霰雪鸟。
就在几天前，我还在雪雾森林里快乐地飞翔歌唱，然而现在……我看了看自己置身其中的这个笼子，冰冷无情的铁丝网阻断了我对蓝天的最后一丝幻想。
“当”的一声，一碟鸟食送进了笼子。
我收回思绪，专心的吃了起来。
想起来到这里的第一天，我固执地不肯碰这里的食物和水。
我用了一整天的时间尖叫，一次次的把身体撞在笼子上。
然而一切都是白费力气，我知道自己将无法摆脱这个牢笼了第二天，精疲力竭的我忍不住吃了一口鸟食，然而立刻就吐了出来——那食物里有种腐败的味道，还夹杂着塑料的刺鼻气味，我厌恶的把那个碟子推到角落里，这样的情况并没能持续很久，在饥饿的威胁下我不得不做出妥协。
在我第一次把准备好的食物吃光的时候，我听到女主人对男主人说：“你可真行啊，我听人说这种鸟很难养活的。
”“这有什么难的?什么事都有个磨合的过程。
只要它习惯了就没事了。
”我已经习惯了这样的生活吗?我又看看窗外的蓝天，突然发现，失去自由的伤痛已经变得那么模糊，那么遥远……我是一只霰雪鸟。
一只笼子里的霰雪鸟。
就在前几天，我还在雪雾森林的上空自由地飞翔，然而现在……我感到生命在一点点流逝。
我躺在笼子的底部，注视着窗外那一小片天空我希望我的亡灵可以在我死后，挣脱这铁丝网的束缚，回到我热爱的蓝天。
霰雪鸟是热爱飞翔的鸟，我们可以无目的的在天空中盘旋几天几夜而不知疲倦。
我最喜欢向着太阳飞翔，让炫目的阳光照耀在我银白色的羽毛上，熠熠生辉。
然而那天，我被关进了笼子里。
话题作文主题解读专题：人生解读类话题引导考生探讨人生价值、树立正确的人生态度，一直是高考作文命题的主旋律。
命题意图非常明显，就是引导学生树立积极、健康、向上的人生观。
要有主见、信心、善于把握自己，要勇于探索、大胆实践，要正确认识自己、评价他人，要有社会责任感，回报社会，要有坚忍不拔的优秀品质等等。
写好这类作文，要靠平时多留心生活，与名人名作进行思想上的交流，积极思考人生，切准时代的脉搏，在学习、生活中做好实践和品行的积累。
随着经济的全球化和东西方文化的交流日渐增多，人们的思想观念必然发生着天翻地覆的变化，高考作文命题必然关注这种变化，进一步拓展命题的深度和广度。
1.鲜明地表达出健康的人生观。
这类作文是作者人生观的直接显露，而且选择这个话题的目的也是要考察我们是否具有积极的人生观。
一个人要想扎扎实实地工作、学习、生活，就必须克服重重困难，这就需要有勇气、决心和毅力。
一个人只有热爱生活，才能感受到生活的意义，才能感到生活的充实，才有克服困难的勇气和毅力，这样他的人生才会充实。
不热爱生活，必然对生活失去信心，看不到生命的价值，缺乏追求和进取精神，过着浑浑噩噩、毫无生气的日子。
热爱生活，就会热爱学习，热爱工作，热爱事业。
热爱生活，就是热爱人生。
热爱人生就会使人充满活力，并能以极大的热情投入到工作中去。
所以只有树立正确的人生观，才会有积极的生活目的，也就能写出充实的“人生”之文。
因此，我们就应该在作文中明确地表现出自己对于生命的正确的认识，也就是积极向上的态度、坚韧不屈的意志、孜孜不倦的追求、朝气蓬勃的精神、明朗愉快的情绪、坚定不移的信念和健康乐观的心理等等。
只要选取其中的一个角度切入，写出自己对生命的正确理解，那么这篇文章的主题就比较明确了。
2.从小事入手，挖掘成长经历中生命的真谛。
“人生”这个话题十分抽象，如果只是一味地进行论说，最容易给人造成空洞无物的感觉。
同时，这个话题又很大，因为几乎任何事情都包含着生命的主题。
高考作文写作讲评：“冲浪”所谓迁移性思维是指人脑在发展创造性的思维过程中，根据已经获得的知识、技能和方法等因素，来获取新知识、新技能和新方法的思维能力。
迁移思维与写作的关系十分密切，具体运用中，通常表现为以下几种情况。
一、命题采用迁移思维。
如2023届高三深圳市第一次模拟考试作文《在惊涛骇浪之上翱翔》，命题采用比喻的形式，材料内容说的是怎样才能驾驭冲浪板在惊涛骇浪中翱翔，而正真的命题意图却是告诉人们具备哪些条件才能驾驭生活中的“惊涛骇浪”，从国家层面来说，就是怎样去驾驭波诡云谲、风急浪高的国际形势和实现中国式现代化征途中遇到的复杂多变的国内形势，抑或人们生活中遭遇的艰难险阻。
不难看出，这种命题方式就是采用了由此及彼的迁移思维。
【原题重现】23.阅读下面的材料，根据要求写作。
(60分)冲浪是冲浪者站在冲浪板上驾驭海浪的水上运动，已被列为2024年巴黎奥运会的正式比赛项目。
在惊涛骇浪之上翱翔，需要具备以下条件:海浪够高够大，且在冲浪者可驾驭的范围内;冲浪板尺寸合适，能被冲浪者灵活操控;冲浪者有足够的勇气，也有良好的身体素质。
当今世界正经历百年未有之大变局，我国正处于实现中华民族伟大复兴的关键时期。
在时代的浪潮中，我们应该如何做好一名冲浪者?请结合材料写一篇文章，体现你的感悟与思考。
要求:选准角度，确定立意，明确文体，自拟标题:不要套作，不得抄袭:不得泄露个人信息;不少于800字。
【审题解析】本命题很好地贯彻了语文学科引导学生“关注时事，培养国家意识”的核心精神，符合《新课标》“立德树人"的要求。
这是一篇比喻型的材料作文。
命题以水上冲浪比喻驾驭国际国内形势、复兴中华伟业之惊涛验浪。
命题形式新颖，内涵深刻。
命题材料分两层意思：第一层、引子，意在起铺垫作用：冲浪是冲浪者站在冲浪板上驾驭海浪的水上运动，已被列为2024年巴黎奥运会的正式比赛项目。
第二层：核心部分。
“在惊涛骇浪之上翱翔"是目的：需要具备三大方面的条件是前提，或者说是要件。
