医学英语写作与翻译

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第三部分 医学英语的写作

任务一 标题的写作(Title)

 标题的结构

1. 名词+介词

Blindness(视觉缺失) after Treatment for Malignant Hypertension

2. 名词+分词

Unilateral Neurogenic Pruritus Following Stroke

中风后单侧神经性瘙痒

3. 名词+不定式

Suggestion to Abolish Icterus Index Determination(黄疸指数测定)

where Quantitative Bilirubin Assay(胆红素定量) is Available

建议能做胆红素定量的化验室不再做黄疸指数测定

4. 名词+同位语

Gentamicine, a Selelctive Agent for the isolation of Betahemolytic

Streptoccociβ-溶血性链球菌

庆大霉素是分离β-溶血性链球菌的选择性药物

5. 名词+从句

Evidence that the V-sis Gene Product Transforms by Interaction with

the Receptor for Platelet-derived Growth Factor血小板源性生长因子.

V-sis 基因产物由血小板生成因子受体相互作用而转化的依据

6. 动名词短语

Preventing Stroke in patients with Atrial Fibrillation心房纤维性颤动

心旁纤颤患者中风预防

Detecting Acute Myocardial Infarction(急性心肌梗死)by

Radio-immunoassay for Creative Kinase(酐激酶)

用放射免疫法测定酐激酶诊断急性心肌梗死

7. 介词短语

On Controlling Rectal Cancer

8. 陈述句

Dietary Cholesterol is Co-carcinogenic协同致癌因素 for Human

Colon Cancer

9. 疑问句

Home or Hospital Births

Is Treatment of Borderline Hypertension Good or Bad?

 注意副标题的作用

1.数目:Endoluminal Stent-graft 带支架腔内搭桥for Aortic

Aneurysms动脉瘤: A report of 6 cases

带支架腔内搭桥治疗动脉瘤的六例报告

2.重点:Aorto-arteritis 大动脉炎Chest X-ray Appearance and Its

Clinical Significance

大动脉炎胸部X线表现及临床意义

3.方法: Gallstone Ileus(胆结石梗阻): A Retrospective Study

4.作用: Carcinoembryonic Antigen in Breast-cancer Tissue: A useful

prognostic indictor

乳腺癌组织中癌胚抗原—— 一种有用的预后指示

5.疑问: Unresolved—Do drinkers have less coronary heart disease?

6.连载顺序: Physical and Chemical Studies of Human Blood Serum:

II. A study of miscellaneous Disease conditions

人类血清的理论研究:II. 多种病例的研究

7.时间: A Collaborative 综合Study of Burn Nursing in China:

1995-1999

 常见标题句式举例

1. 讨论型: Discussion of/ on; An approach to; A probe into;

Investigation of; Evaluation of / on

汉语中的“初步体会”、“试论”、“浅析”之类的谦辞可以不译。直接表达本意。

2. 观察、报告、结果型: An observation/ Observations of / on/in

3. 调查类: Survey of / on

4. 体会经验类: Experience in / with; Reflection on

5. 总结综述:Summary of/ Experience of ; Review of

6. 问题型:Problem of ; Some Aspects on

7. 探究: Study of/ on / in; Probe into; Exploration of

8. 报告:Report of / on

9. 药物治疗和非药物治疗: … in the Treatment of …; Management

of …; Treatment ... with..; Use of … in the treatment of … Therapy of /

for … by …

10.诊断: … in the diagnosis of … ; Detection of … in … Diagnosis of …

by/ with … Detection of … by … Application of … to the diagnosis of …

练习

1. 判断下列标题的书写格式是否正确

- Treatment of Psoriasis by hemodialysis(不对)

- Asthma in a Vietnamese refugee population(不对)

- Management of Hypertension in diabetes(不对)

- Does the Chronic Fatigue Syndrome Involve the Autonomic Nervous

system? (不对)

- Treatment of macroprolactinoma with cabergoline: A study of 85

Patients(不对)

- Clinical Observation on 342 Cases with Allergic Rhinitis鼻炎(对)

2. 在下列英文标题中识别关键词、分析结构并翻译。

- Sudden cardiac death:Clinic pathologic investigation of 51 cases

心脏性猝死51例临床病理探讨

- Paranthyroidectomy in Chronic Renal Failure: Survey of 38 Cases

慢性肾功能衰竭的甲状旁腺切除疗法38例调查

- Recent Experience with Bacillemia菌血症 due to Gram-negative

Organisms.

治疗革兰氏阴性杆菌血症的新体会

- Treatment for Malignant Hypertension: An Experience of 35 Cases

35例恶性高血压治疗总结

-Certain Problems of the Surgical Treatment of Hyperparathyroidism.

甲状旁腺机能亢进手术治疗的几个问题

- Platelet Function Studies in Heart Disease

心脏病患者血小板功能的研究

- A Report of Rosai-Dorfman

腮腺肿块性病报告

- Use of Steroid (类固醇)in the Treatment of Clinical Septic Shock

皮质激素治疗败血症休克

- Treatment of Psoriasis by Hemodialysis

血液透析治疗牛皮癣

- Ultrasonography in the Diagnosis of Gallstones.

胆石症超声波诊断

3. 请把下列句子改写成名词性短语标题(noun phrase titles)

- Thyroid cancer is a late consequence of head-neck irradiation

改为:Thyroid cancer as a late consequence of head-neck irradiation

- Coronary heart disease: Overweight and obesity are risk factors

改为:Coronary heart disease: Overweight and obesity as risk factors

- High blood pressure is a side effect of drugs, poisons, and food

改为:High blood pressure: A side effect of drugs, poisons, and food

- High uric acid serves as an indicator of cardiovascular disease

改为:High uric acid as an indicator of cardiovascular disease

- Prostaglandins serve as mediators of inflammation

改为:Prostaglandins as mediators of inflammation

任务二 引言的写作(Introduction)

 引言的构成

阅读下列引言,分析其构成部分并概括每一部分的大意。

Helicobacter pylori(Hp幽门杆菌) is considered to be the main

aetiological agent发病原因 of the most common form of chronic

gastritis]胃炎 in the adult population—type B gastritis. Type B

gastritis is localized in the antrum窦, 腔, 房 and pylorus幽门,

whereas type A gastritis, the classic autoimmune gastritis, mainly

occurs in the fundus 底部. H pylori positive chronic gastritis of the

antrum has been found to be closely related to duodenal十二指肠

ulcer and can lead to gastric atrophy萎缩, a precursor 前兆of gastric