Are We More Connected or More Alone？69

Just Write ！批改网，让英语学习更简单Are We More Connected or More Alone？姓名：李佳倪学校：天津外国语大学附属外国语学校分数：93The network is like a train,accelerating the pace of our future,leading us to the ever-changing work has become one of the most requisite parts in our life,many people's lives and work has been inseparable from the network.But after people possessing their own phone,they become extremely cold to their friends or families.Indeed,when you are having a family party,you shall see all the people fixing their eyes on their phones around the table,without communicating with others.This kind of situation always happens in our work entertainment and other functions,make folks relay on the Internet,lest ignoring the interaction of genuine life.The Network has limited our living space,and made our real life become narrow.Beyond all doubt,we are estranged from each other."Thanks to"the Social Network Site,people's relationship with their phones are getting closer and closer.Indeed,people become more and more unconcerned.I think everyone should introspect!Don't drift your friends or families.Put down your phones,and use your heart to perceive your real life!about one another.。

Are We More Connected or More Alone？在这个时代，人人都有手机，我们想要找朋友、找家人，网上联系十分方便。

与从前相比，我们是更加联系的。

但这同时又使我们更孤单。

从前，我们想要联系别人，我们会见面，我们将信息口口相传，无论是在时间上还是在空间上，我们都是一起的。

然而今天，我们跨越耳机听到对方的声音，我们隔着屏幕看到对方的脸。

但这是不可避免的、这是趋势，社会的发展注定我们不会永远待在一个地方，就像现在，我们离开从小到大一起生活的父母，到很远的地方上学，所以我们要感谢电子通讯的发展。

也许当声音停止你摘下耳机，你的心中有一丝惆怅，当视频结束你退出微信，你的心中会有一丝失落，这其实也是我们越来越联系的动力，正因我们的孤单是不可逆的，我们才要发掘越来越多的途径来世我们保持联系。

In this era, everyone has a cell phone, we want to find a friend, find a family, online contact is very convenient. Compared with the past, we are more connected. But it also makes us more lonely. In the past, we wanted to contact others, we will meet, we will word of mouth, whether in time or in space, we are together. Today, however, we hear each other's headphones across the headphones, and we see each other's faces across the screen. But it is inevitable that this is the trend, the development of society is doomed we will not stay in a place forever, just like now, we leave parents who live together from small to large, to go to school far away, so we would like to thank the development of electronic communications.Maybe when the sound stops you off the headphones, your heart has a trace of melancholy, when the end of the video you exit WeChat, your heart will be a trace of loss, which is actually more and more of our power, because our lonely is irreversible , We have to explore more and more ways to stay in the world we keep in touch.In my opinion, we aremore connected, and also more alone. The two are mutual influence, mutual promotion.。

Just Write ！批改网，让英语学习更简单Are We More Connected or More Alone？姓名：王虹学校：天津外国语大学附属外国语学校分数：94Nowadays,more and more people communicate with each other through social media,such as Wechat,QQ and so on.The importance of face-to-face talking never fails to attract people's attention.Let's see a story:It was grandfather's birthday.All the family members came to celebrate the birthday with this old person.However,when they got together with each other,they didn't say anything.Everbody kept silent because they chatted on line with their friends so carefully that they neglected to talk with these two old people.The elderly felt frustrated because they thought their children was unconcerned to them.According to the story above,I think there are a lot of things like that.From my perspective,I think chat online has a negative impact on interpersonal relationships.We are alone when we communicate with each on Social Network Site because you lose a sense of security and a sense of trust.Therefore,from now on,we should try to talk more with each other in reality!。

Just Write！ 批改网，让英语学习更简单 Are We More Connected or More Alone？姓名：曾同学 学校：昆明市第十四中学 分数：88With the development of technology, Internet has become more and more important. And many people use it more and more.But we are more alone.In our daily life, we can see that many folks playing the games or reading the e-books or cheating and so on with their phones everywhere, and they even forget someone who stands with them. Once I took a gathering, which I found that most of my friends were playing games if not sending messages with their phones bythemselves. They were face friends without talking. Everyone was so lonely. In the past, there was a period of time, which all of our family always use Internetcommunicated with others and not communicated each other. At that time, I feel very lonely. That I want to share what my happiness, sadness, excitement and success with my parents. But I can't do so. I argued that my parents didn't care about me, and I was very angry. I ignored my parents for a long time. After that, my family always communicate together. I don't feel lonely any more. Now, I feel very happy. With the development of technology, Internet has become more and more important. Many folks use it more and more. But we are more alone。