四级作文阅卷评分标准、范文 阅卷老师内部资料
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四级作文阅卷评分标准、参考范文四六级阅卷是按分数档给分的，此为阅卷老师内部资料，以2014年1月四级作文为例，提供了14分、11分、8分、5分、2分的范文，如果觉得好，请5分好评哦！“Dear Andy-How are you? Your mother and I are fine. We both miss you and hope you are doing well. We look forward to seeing you again the next time your computer crashes and you come down-stairs for something to eat, Love, Mom and Dad.”14 pointsNowadays, with the development of science and technology, great changes have taken place in people’s life. For instance, they communicate on the Internet more often than talk face to face. Even the communication between the parents and their son is mostly on the Internet—though they live in the same house!It is true that our life becomes more and more convenient, benefiting from varieties of new technologies. People can chat online in a more relaxed manner, thus saving time and avoiding some embarrassment.Now that electronic communication is so popular today, can it replace face-to-face contact? Definitely not. We can’t deny that electronic communication is a modern trend in our life, but if a ll your relationship is only connected by the Internet, that will be horrible! On the contrary, face-to-face contact makes people more energetic, outgoing and positive, while electronic communication makes them less sociable, lonesome and passive. So, although there have been so many people communicating on the Internet, it can never take the place of face-to-face contact.切题。
表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言戳物，仅有个别小错。
11 pointsThe Internet makes it easier for us to communicate with others but it can't replace face-to-face contact. The electronic communication may cause many problems. In the picture, Andy's parents cannot see him unless he comes downstairs for something to eat. It is quite strange. Now, I know itis the problem of using electronic communication too often.Actually, we meet problems caused by electronic communication in our daily life. First we can't express our emotion exactly in the Internet, so it may easily cause mistakes. Second, the distance between you and me will be expanded. We can't communicate face to face, how can we communicate heart-to-heart? Third, I think we can't discuss some questions with others heatly if we use the electronic communication.While electronic communication has many disadvantages, face to face contact is full of advantages. We can see each other, we can see the face expressions, we can understand each other exactly. And the most importantly we can communicate heart to heart.In a conclusion, I don't think electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact.切题。
表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。
8 pointsToday, more and more people use electronic communication. There is no doubt that the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate is very important.I guess that there is some opinions that people like electronic communication. First, electronic communication is cost cheap and quickly. Second, in the Internet, you can make many new friends, even you do not know how old are they. Finally, in the electronic communication that you can talk about anything, because there are no one know you.However, I still think that the electronic communication can't replace face-to-face contact. Personally, I think the face-to-face contact is easy to express our ideas, and the face-to-face contact is more funny to us. Now we live in the real life. We need real life and need to face kinds of problems, the computer or phone just a thing, but the face-to-face contact is easy to help us solve these problems.基本切题。
有些地方表达不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些严重错误。
5 pointsWith the booming of the economy, now about everyone can buy computer playing. So people face-to-face contact is very short! Many people think electronic communication is population, including old people's.First of all, the electronic communication is simple, then it is very easy to study. So many people will take it to talk somethings, even everythings. Use this way people no get out to look other peoples. If someone want to see other someone, He/she also from electronic communication achieve.In my opinion, I think electronic communication and face-to-face contact all is important, who is not replace who. First, face-to-face contact can better to development people's relation. For electronic communication that it is easy to development relation when you are far from other peoples.So we should better to use these two ways to keep people's relation.且本切题。
