18-19 Unit 5 Section Ⅶ Writing——如何写音乐会评论

Section ⅦReading for Writing——建议信本单元的写作任务是读一封建议信，了解建议信的结构和语言特征，然后再写一封建议信。

Ⅰ.Pre-writing(Ⅰ)Learning to write after the model10 September，2018Dear Worried Friend，You wrote that you are very worried about your friend，Chen Lei.I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible.You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much time online.I recommend that you talk to your friend about his behaviour.It is not unusual for teenagers of your generation to be attracted to computer games and the online world.But spending too much time online is unhealthy and makes it very difficult to focus on other things in life.Some students even become addicted to the Internet and cannot concentrate on school and family life.I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies.Why not discuss the problem together?I am sure he will listen to you，since you are his good friend.All the best，Susan Luo(Ⅱ)Preparation for writing—Words and phrases①recommend v t.建议②unhealthy adj.不健康的③encourage v t. 鼓励④useful adj. 有用的⑤advice v t. 忠告，建议⑥in on e’s spare time 闲暇⑦look forward to 盼望，期望⑧be worried about 对……担心⑨be attracted to 喜爱⑩be addicted to 对……上瘾⑪concentrate on 集中精力于⑫be good for/do good to 对……有益处⑬make friends 交朋友⑭hear from 收到……的来信⑮enjoy oneself/have fun玩得愉快Ⅱ.While-writing假如你是李华，你的好朋友苏茹在交友方面存在着一些困难，请根据下面提示给她写一封建议信。

Section ⅦReading for Writing——剧本写作本单元的写作任务是戏剧剧本创作。

戏剧剧本属于记叙文。

在写作形式上以对话为主，应主要包括戏剧人物、人物的语言、舞台说明性文字等。

Ⅰ.Pre－writing(Ⅰ)Learning to write after the modelTHE MILLION POUND BANK NOTEAct 2，Scene 1Narrator：Henry is walking along the street holding the bank note in his hand.His coat is worn in several places.He sees a sign for a tailor’s shop.Henry：(entering the shop)I’d like to have a suit coat.1st Clerk：(in a rude manner)See him there.(pointing to another clerk)2nd Clerk：Ready－made suits？Downstairs.Henry：(after going do w n some stairs)Can you show me a suit，please?3rd Clerk：Yes ，I can ，sir.This way，please.Ah，here we are，the very thing you need.1st Clerk：(pulling the3rd clerk aside and w hispering)Mr Reid says you’d better serve him quick and get him out quick!3rd Clerk：I know what I’m doing.I’ve got eyes，haven’t I?Henry：It’s a little too bright，isn’t it?3rd Clerk：(looking at him w ith a fro w n)It’s all we have in your size.Henry：Well，I suppose it ought to do for now.I’ll take it.3rd Clerk：Good.Shall I put it in a box?Henry：No.I’ll wear it.Oh，I’d rather not pay you now.I’d like to pay in a month.You see，I don’t have any small change.3rd Clerk：(trying not to sho w he’s angry) I suppose a gentleman like you only carries very large bills.Henry：Now，you shou ldn’t judge people by their clothes.I just don’t want to cause you trouble with a large note.3rd Clerk：It’s no trouble at all.,Henry：In that case，there’s no problem.(He gi v es the clerk the bank note.The clerk drops Henry’s coat.Then he folds the bill and slo w ly unfolds it again，as if looking at something he can’t belie v e is there.)Owner：Well，what seems to be the trouble?Henry：I’m just waiting for my change.Owner：Give him his change，Todd.Get going...(after getting the bank note from Todd)Would it...could it be the one I saw in the papers last week？I remember thinking that never would I hold such a note as this ...(to Henry)Oh，take off this coat，sir.(to Todd)Go get the others，Todd！(to Henry again)Allow me，sir！This way，sir. (in another part of the shop，w here there is a w ide range of options for Henry to choose from)Henry：This is nice，but I really don’t need it.Owner：Never mind.(w ith a broad smile) Oh，it’s perfect！It was made for some king but he’ll just have to wait.You’ll need many suits for many occasio ns.Yes，indeed you will.Henry：Wait a minute.I only came here to get a suit coat to wear today.I dare not buy all these things.You would have to wait a long time to get paid.Owner：A long time，sir？Why，you don’t have to worry about that!3rd Clerk：Yes，we can wait forever!Henry：Well，all right.I’ll take the suit coat for now and get the others later. Owner：Fine，fine.Your address，sir?Henry：I don’t have one.Er...I’m moving.Owner：Of course you are！That’s very normal！A busy man，I’m sure.,篇章结构Before showing the bank note：the clerks look down upon Henry and treat him in a rude manner.After showing the bank note：the clerks and owner respect Henry a lot and even try hard to please him.(Ⅱ)Preparation for writing—words and phrases①a__large__bank__note一张大额支票②in__a．..manner 以一种方式③show__sb__sth 向某人展示④serve v t. 服务⑤suppose v t. 认为⑥would__rather 宁愿⑦pay v t. 支付⑧small__change 小额零钱⑨judge...by__... 通过判断⑩worry__about 担心Ⅱ.While－writing根据下面提示，写一篇戏剧，介绍亨利带着100万英镑的钞票去理发的过程。

18-19 Unit 5 Section ⅦWriting——如何写音乐会评论音乐会期间的氛围令人相当振奋。

7．His performance is very popular with the audience.他的演出很受观众的欢迎。

8．I hope I will watch his performance again in the future.我希望在不久的将来能再看到他的表演。

[满分佳作构建][文体指导]请根据以下内容写一篇音乐会评论：1．去年，中国著名歌手周杰伦在上海举办了演唱会。

我很幸运买到了一张票。

他的歌曲很受年轻人的欢迎。

2．虽然天气很热，观众还是很开心。

3．周杰伦是中国最知名歌手之一，出了很多唱片。

他在全国各地巡回演唱过。

我们经常在电视上和收音机上听到他的歌。

4．他此次唱了《七里香》《青花瓷》等歌曲。

我被他的歌曲深深打动了，盼望能再次听到他演唱。

参考词汇：周杰伦Jay Chou；《青花瓷》Green Flo w er Porcelain；《七里香》Se v en Feets Soundly注意：1．词数100个左右；2．不要逐句翻译。

[审题谋篇]体裁评论时态以一般过去时为主主题周杰伦的音乐会人称以第三人称为主结构第一段：介绍音乐会的时间、地点和演出的歌手第二段：介绍音乐会的表演场景第三段：表达自己的感想Ⅰ.对接单元词汇1．performance n．演出2．such as 例如3．look forward to 盼望4．be popular among 受……欢迎5．have a very good time 过得很快乐6．be deeply impressed by 被……深深打动Ⅱ.巧用单元句式、语法(一) 完成句子1．去年，周杰伦在上海举办了演唱会。

Jay Chou gave his singing performance in Shanghai last year.2．他的歌曲很受年轻人欢迎。

Section ⅦWriting——如何写文学评论[文体指导]文学评论是一种以作家、作品、文学创作和文学思潮作为评论对象的文体。

文学评论的作者旨在表达自己对文学作品的理解和认识，启发和帮助读者提高阅读水平，对作品的作者提出正确而有益的建议。

写文学评论可分为以下几步：1．介绍所要评论的文学作品(标题、作者和类型)；2．简述作品情节；3．讨论作品的主题和意义；4．介绍读者对作品的评析。

要想写好文学评论，首先，我们要细致地品读文学作品，准确把握评论对象；其次，写文学评论的过程中，我们要做到以下几点：1．评价要明确。

2．结构要清晰。

对作品的评价常常是一开始就明确提出，下文加以证明，形成总分结构。

3．评论语言要简洁、形象、生动。

4．文学评论经常使用一般现在时，但是有时也可根据需要使用其他时态。

5．文学评论通常采用夹叙夹议、评析结合的写法。

[亮点句式]1．...is a novel by...writer...2．The novel is told in the form of...3．The book written by...is about...4．...written by...is one of the most popular and highly regarded...in...5．The book tells us a story of...6．From the story，we can learn...7．I am greatly impressed by...8．I think/In my opinion...[写作任务]根据表格中提供的信息，写一篇关于“The home­made ball”的文学评论。

Ⅰ.对接单元词汇1．modern­day adj.现代的；当代的2．theme n.主题3．author n.作者4．brand new sneakers 全新运动鞋5．main character 主要人物6．be set in 以……为背景7．be worth doing sth. 值得做某事Ⅱ.巧用单元句式、语法(一)完成句子1．故事发生在现代美国。