(通用版)2017届高三英语二轮复习第1部分专题5短文改错训练2短文改错(Ⅱ)

语鹅市安置阳光实验学校语法填空＋短文改错组合练(四)题组(一)Ⅰ.语法填空(2017·四川成都高中毕业班第一次诊断性检测)Over 2,200 years ago, Chengdu was threatened by frequent floods. Li Bing, together with his son, decided to construct an irrigation system on the Minjiang River __1__ (prevent) flooding. __2__ having a long study and a lot of hard work by the local people, the great Dujiangyan Irrigation System was completed. Since then, the Chengdu Plain __3__ (be) free of flooding and the people have been living peacefully and wealthily.It is the __4__ (o ld) and only surviving no­dam irrigation system in the world. It is also __5__ wonder in the development of Chinese science. The project consists of three important parts, namely Yuzui, Feishayan and Baopingkou, which were __6__ (science) designed to control the water flow of the rivers throughout the year.There is a glorious bridge called the Anlan Cable Bridge crossing the Minjiang River above Yuzui, __7__ you can clearly see the entire system. The great __8__ (construct) originally started before the Song Dynasty. At that time, the body of the bridge was constructed with wooden blocks and the handrails (扶手) were made of bamboo. Recently the wood and bamboo have been replaced with steel and concrete to guarantee the security of __9__ (visit) from home and abroad. Seen from afar, the bridge looks like a rainbow __10__ (hang) over the river.【解题导语】本文是一篇说明文，介绍了成都都江堰水利工程的建造过程、世界地位、历史价值以及该工程的现状。

2017年高考英语全国Ⅱ卷短文改错试题精细解析资深高考英语命题研究者黑龙江高云峰187******** Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. beside, they often get some useful informations from the internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the vegetables！1.把all改成both。

解析：all这个不定代词的使用是作Mr. and Mrs. Zhang（两个人）的同位语，不合适，因为all是代指三者或三者以上的全部肯定的代词，而代指两个人的全部肯定的代词是both。

2.把不定冠词a改为an。

解析：当不定冠词后跟着的词是以元音因素开头的单词的时候，该不定冠词应该使用an。

hour的音标是/auə/,它是以元音因素开头的，所以它的前边的不定冠词必须使用an。

3.把interesting改为interested。

解析：英语中这类由一个动词派生出的一对形容词——v-ing和v-ed的区别必须搞清楚，即v-ing型形容词是说明事物或人的性质特征的，而v-ed型形容词则是说明人所处的某种精神、情绪或心理的状态的。

高考英语二轮复习--短文改错专项训练一、明确方向：课标对短文改错题目要求：第一节：满分10分。

本题给出一篇约100个单词的短文，文中有10处错误，错误类型包括词法、句法、行文逻辑等。

要求考生对每个句子进行判断，如有错误即将其改正。

二、解题规范：假定英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

三、牛刀小试：可以先从单句改错练起：单句改错.（下列句子各有一处错误，请改正）1. Now people get a lot of informations from TV.2. Germany is an European country.3. They didn’t want me to do any work at family.4. Yesterday I met an old friend of me.5. Boys and girls, don’t lose hearts. Do better next time.6. They are of different size.7. It is so beautiful place that you must visit it.8. What a terrible weather we have been having!9. It took place in France, an European country.10. Suddenly I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crowd.11. What good time we had last night!12. We shall spend three-day holiday together.13. I came to understand that was not easy to earn money.14. Some parents think useless for girls to go to school.15. When he bought a chocolate cake, he put them in a secret place.16. One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher.17. It’s important that we should think over before doing anything.18. The truck was moving so fast that the driver couldn’t control.19. I apologized and controlled me at my best till the dinner started.20. We must take part in social practice to prepare us well for our future.21. The teacher did not punish for cheating but instead gave me a second chance.22. Henry did not like his car, that ran badly and often broke down.23. There was a five-pound note in the pocket of the trousers I had told her to wash it.24. People can hardly do some fishing there.25. I visited a place where is surrounded by mountains.26. I am sure you will find one you like it.27. It was yesterday when he broke the window.28. He had lost his glasses without them he couldn’t see.29. Oliver Twist, the hero of the story, he was an orphan.30. It starts with choosing a tree from neither a farm or a store.31. She never has enough time for that she wants to do.32. I find what I have one shortcoming in my character.33. What necessary it is that we get rid of the bad habits .34. It didn’t matter that I would win or not.35. People in the US drink more coffee than people in any country.36. The development will bring us much more hopes and chances.37. The Olympics are held each four years.38. A summer, Fane traveled abroad.39. I hope you think about my request as soon as possibly.40. I know you are particular interested in Human Rights.41. As there is no air or water, there can be no life , too.42. There were too many nice things that I didn’t know what to choose.43. He decides to travel a lot and visit such many new places as possible.44. I couldn’t see as clear as before.45. The water in it is so dirty that it smells terribly.46. I appreciate your help very well.47. You always gave me specially attention and inspired me.48. It was until midnight that it stopped raining.49. People both at home and abroad have been great helped by the new computer.50. He has to work if he wants to live comfortable.51. She is a brave and honesty girl.52. It is much easy to make plans than to carry them out.53. It is convenient for me to prepare for the exam than before.54. He gave me an order worthy 15 million dollars.55. The tree was put into a Christmas stand that holds the tree up straightly.56. Is teaching kids English as interested as you expected in college?57. We had guests last night who had not stayed in it ago.58. We are all very much active and the activities are enjoyable.59. If you won’t want to take a taxi, you can go by bus.60. Our city is a modern city. It set up in the early 1980s.61. Bad habits not come suddenly.62. I have caught a bad cold for a week and I can’t get rid of it.63. Following the road and you will find the store.64. I rush over without delay, jumped into the water and swam towards him.65. You must do everything you can help them.66. When a rabbit see something dangerous, it runs away.67. Its tail, which is white, moving up and down as it runs.68. Think perhaps I was too tired, I stood up and was going to sleep.69. I was often tired and watch TV demands little effort.70. The little girl hurried home with the remained money.71. His young patient was soon able to get up and ran about again.72. It was kind of them to meet me at the station and drove me to their home.73. She liked it very much and reads it to the class.74. There were over 1000 students attend it.75. Is it likely to be any food at the party on Saturday?76. Please excuse us for not able to say goodbye to you.77. He spends hours on the telephone, talks to his friends.78. Filling with many people, the room is crowded.79. At the interview there are many people who wait to interviewed for jobs.80. It will cost a rocket a hundred thousand years to reach it.81. There used to have a church in front of the school.82. Hope you great success in your work!83. All you can do is encouraging him, show him understanding and offer him advice.84. In Friday afternoon, some students took part in a speech activity.85. In a few weeks the story was returned to her.86. It was very fine when I got up early on last Sunday morning.87. I rushed out the house as quickly as I could.88. It is necessary to decide what is worth taking notice.89. I had difficulty in grammar after I entered into the school.90. She could hardly afford for the medical care.91. But we don’t seem to ha ve much time to talk about together.92. He was punished because what he had done.93. The ice isn’t thick enough for us to skate.94. I gave you my luggage at a quarter of an hour ago.95. I am writing to thank you with your kind help.96. He means to come no earlier as that time.97. We must return back to school this afternoon98. Child as he is, but he knows a lot.99. Having been ill for a long time, so she fell behind her classmates.100.Thinking he happened to have no work to do, and he came back home.四、步步为营：单句改错（下列句子各有两处错误，请改正）1. If you close your eyes, you can’t see something, because your eyelids prevent the light enter your eyes2. For our joy, Li Ding, monitor of our class, who was among the winners.3. The only thing I can think is when I am going to get home listen to my music.4. All my classmates are busy prepare for the exam except myself.5. The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate anything into English.6. I communicated myself thanks to his great kindness.7. I was great delighted to learn that you do very well in the mid-term examination.8. If you learning English, it is not enough only to keep in minds the rules of grammar.9. I get up very early this morning to go to the airport to meet Mr. White, a expert from the USA.10. One and a half year later, I now think English a fun to learn.11. I went through the test for many times but I can only answer three out of the twenty questions.12. For instance, on one night, they played strong and loudly music till 4 o’clock in the morning.13. Thinking he had no work to do, and my father came back home, quickly finishing his supper and left for the cinema.14. Men have been interesting in the stars ever since they first looked up into sky.15. That is difficulty to say how many people are learning English.16. Three years ago, he was picked out and send to study in abroad.17. Sometimes, I wish I can stay in a quiet place lonely, away from this city for a long time.18. Many years ago, I step into a bookstore for some books I wanted them.19. Having learned why he wanted the book, and the bookseller gave him some writing papers anda new pencil as a gift.20. you can find all kinds information in just a few minute on the internet.21. I got know that they were college students travel in china.22. Under the help of him and my classmates, I made some progresses.23. We went to the zoo on last Sunday. There were a lot of visitors stood in front of the ticket window.24. With development of mobile phones, the short message service is becoming more and more popular for us nowadays.25. On the night before my first day, I was much excited to go to sleep and as a result, I got up lately in the morning.26. Three years ago, I was studying to abroad in Japan. It was there where I began reading comic books.27. Have they ever thought of plastic bags do harm our environment?28. It is certainly that Zhang Village will built into a better modern village.29. On the ceremony we made a statement which as grown-ups we should have sense of duty to our society from now on.30. Though the city is modern, but there are still some problems, such as air pollution crowdedness and noisy.五、经典再现感悟高考【2014年高考各省市短文改错题汇总】一、Correction 1(2014课标全国Ⅰ)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

短文改错2017年Correction 1 2017全国卷Ⅰ，10分In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember howhard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, "Speed up!" "Slow down!" "Turning left!" I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car.It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.Correction 2 2017全国卷Ⅱ，10分Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about ahour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetablesin their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables!Correction 3 2017全国卷Ⅲ，10分When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically,and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.2012—2016年Correction 1［2016·乙卷(全国Ⅰ)］My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurantis popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had towait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady. Correction 2［2016·甲卷（全国Ⅱ）］The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortablebut there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on atrip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.Correction 3［2016·丙卷（全国Ⅲ）］The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn't seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. Atone time, I even felt my parents couldn't understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.Correction 4［2016·四川］It is Mother's Day today. Though it's a western festival, it's popular in China now.Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the houseworks. She is a great mother. Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother's Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand. Iasked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen. The dishes what I cooked were Mom's favoritest. At dinner, we said to her, "Happy Mother's Day!" Mom was grateful and moving.Correction 5［2016·浙江］When I was a very young children, my father created a regular practice I remember well years late. Every time he arrived home at end of the day, we'd greet her at the door. He would ask who we was and pretend not to knowing us. Then he and my mother would have had a drink while she prepared dinner and they would talk about his day and hers. While they chat, my father would lift my sister and me up to sit in the top of the fridge. It was both excited and frightening to be up there! My sister and I thought he was so cool for putting us there.Correction6 [2015·新课标全国卷Ⅰ]When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living ina city, but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted.Lotsof studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.Theairs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so, we'll live to regret it.Correction7 [2015·新课标全国卷Ⅱ]One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into theshop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said, "How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried." Tony promised her that this would never happen again.Correction8 [2015·陕西]My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked,"I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits."My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter! Correction9 [2015·四川]Hi, Janice,It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time-wasting activity! In fact, I don't like to go anymore, so I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me, wouldyou talk to him?Please help with me and give me some advice.Grace浙江]Correction10 [2015·My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I couldeasy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the backof the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right sideof the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.Correction11 [2014·新课标全国卷Ⅰ]Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes (圣女果) in our back garden. Since then —for all these year —we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!新课标全国卷Ⅱ]Correction12 [2014·My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn't need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more timewith after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sportsfor one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.浙江]Correction13 [2014·I was taking a train to London's Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise andfilled with people.Before long, a train inspector comes to check our tickets. A passenger realized he couldn't findhis ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.陕西]Correction14 [2014·My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals,insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.One evening at sunset,we sat by the fire,have our barbecue.Just then a bird was flying over us.My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target.Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky — they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.That day I didn't learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!Correction15 [2014·四川]Hello, boys and girls! Today，I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stayclose to your teacher and classmate. Don't panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it's a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tellyour teacher immediately.Correction 16 [2014·辽宁]Dear Jeremy and Alice,Although we've been delighted to have you as neighbors, we're hoping to settle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dog — Cleo.We've called several time about Cleo's early morning barking. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she's outside. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even before 5 o'clock. That is too much for us, considering how closely the houses are.We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.Sincerely,Jack and Rose 新课标全国卷Ⅰ]Correction17 [2013·I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others inour small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known. Correction18 [2013·新课标全国卷Ⅱ]The book I'm reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800's. Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o'clock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain (瓷器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handlesto suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.陕西]Correction19 [2013·My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught. Within the next few minute,my grandfather also caught a fish.Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.Correction20 [2013·四川]Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficulty, but I tried hardly to do it. Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking me to let her to copy my answers. After think for some time, I let hercopy my answers. But after the test, all of us were called to the teacher's office. The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests. We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents. I was very upset. I didn't cheat. I was just helping a friend. Why does she punish me? Correction 21 [2013·辽宁]Mr.Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day，he spends too much time with his work.With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him veryill. "He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him." That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon, I paid visit to Mr. Johnson.I was eager to see him,but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down.Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picturewe had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.Correction 22 [2013·浙江]Dear Diary,Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week?Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained,"He was lucky to find other one."His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school or just everything else I love inthe world.To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie.Tomorrow is first day of school.I am awfully tiring, but I know I'll never fall sleep.Good nightand remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.Yours,Rosemary Correction 23 [2012·新课标全国]I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.Correction 24 [2012·陕西]My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month.It isin the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath.What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room.I checked my email messages every day.I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing.The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing. Correction 25 [2012·辽宁]Dear Diana,Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne's friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accidenton the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, wedrove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearlygot knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina offat her parents' and made our own way to home.Much love,Fiona短文改错答案2017年Correction 1①考查序数词。

题型二短文改错对应学生用书P8短文改错主要考查语法基础知识，语篇通常取材于考生自己的习作或类似于考生的随笔，且话题常见，篇章结构的难易程度符合高中生的认知水平，即通俗易懂，基本上无生僻的语言障碍和怪、偏、难的语法结构。

短文词数通常与书面表达一样，也是100词左右。

感悟高考]A(2016·全国卷Ⅰ)My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.答案：第一句：that→where第二句：去掉but第四句：had→have第五句：honest→honesty第六句：or→and; using→used第七句：dreams后加of; the→a第八句：our→his; steady→steadilyB(2016·全国卷Ⅱ)The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world.If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.答案：第二句：how→what第三句：chose→choose; take→taking第四句：but→and第五句：world前加the第六句：your→our; knowledges→knowledge第七句：去掉can或can→should第八句：thought→think1。

2017高考英语一轮短文改错综合训练（2）短文改错Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to EmeiMountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows, it’s famous1. _____ __mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather 2. _______was fine. It was about noon we arrived at the foot of 3 _______the mountain. The three of them were very excited. As we 4._______climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples 5. __ _____and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture 6. __ _____since the scenery was so beautiful. The time passes quickly.7. _______Evening came down. We spent the night in a hotel at8. ______ _the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and 9. _____ __the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleepat the moment my head touched the pillow.10. ______答案及解析1. famous 前加 a。

mountain 为可数名词。

又是第一次被谈及，故应在 famous 前加不定冠词。

专题五短文改错训练1AAt present，I am extreme happy because I am doing what I like.As a senior three student，I study hard every day and live it at the full.It feels like good to study hard with my determining classmates to fulfill our dreams.When I recalled the happy things happened to me，the experience of my receiving the scholarship in middle school topped it all.It was a time when my family is going through financial difficulties.So I made up my mind to win the scholarship，hoped to lighten my parents' financial burden.After making tons of painstaking effort，I succeeded.At the ceremony，my mum was the most poorly－dressed woman，and with the brightest smile on her face.答案：At present，I amextremeextremely happy because I am doing what Ilike.As a senior three student，I study hard every day and live it atto thefull.It feels good to study hard with my determiningdetermined classmates tofulfill our dreams.When I recalled the happy thingshappened to me，the experience of my receiving the scholarship inmiddle school toppeditthem all.It was a time when my familyiswasgoing through financial difficulties.So I made up my mind to win thescholarship，hopedhoping to lighten my parents' financial burden.Aftermaking tons of painstaking effortefforts，I succeeded.At the ceremony，mymum was the most poorly －dressed woman ，and yet/butwith the brightest smile on her face.BOn September 29，the students in our class paid visit to ChinaScience and Technology Museum.At 8：00，we leave for China Science and Technology Museum by school bus.At 8：30，a guide introduced them to us briefly and told us how we should pay attention to duringour visit.Ten minutes later ，we were divided into five groups but began our separate visit.Some students took notes carefully as if theyvisited.All the students were amazing at the rapid achievements inscience and technology.Three hours had gone by after we knew it.At 11：30，we returned to our school.This visit not only broadened my outlook but also aroused my greatly interest in science and technology.答案：On September 29，the students in our class paid visit to China Science and Technology Museum.At 8：00，we leave leftfor China Science and Technology Museum by school bus.At 8：30，a guide introduced them it to us briefly and told us how whatwe should pay attention to during our visit.Ten minutes later ，we were divided into five groups but andbeganour separate visit visits .Some students took notes carefully as theyvisited.All the students were amazing amazedat the rapid achievements in science and technology.Three hours had gone by after beforewe knew it.At11：30，we returned to our school.This visit not only broadened myoutlook but also aroused my greatly greatinterest in science and technology. CThis morning ，I was jogging in the park when I caught the sight of a wallet on a bench.I picked up and checked the contents.Inside it ，I found some money or a card with a phone number.Believe that the owner would be worried ，I immediately tried the number.A mananswered it in an amazing voice.Hearing that I had his wallet ，he sighs with relief and told me he would return right away.Ten minutes late ，the man arrived.After confirming he was an owner ，I handed the wallet back to him.With his thumb up ，he expressed his gratitude to me repeated.Seeing the smile on her face ，I felt happy that I was able to help.答案：This morning ，I was jogging in the park when I caughtsight ofa wallet on a bench.I pickedup and checked the contents.Inside it ，I found some money or and a card with a phone number.Believe Believingthat the owner would be worried ，I immediately tried the number.A mananswered it in an amazing amazedvoice.Hearing that I had his wallet ，he sighs sighedwith relief and told me he would return right away.Ten minutes late later ，the man arrived.After confirming he was an theowner ，I handed the wallet back to him.With his thumb up ，he expressed his gratitude to me repeated repeatedly .Seeing the smile on her hisface ，I felt happy that I was able to help.When it comes to the TV ，there will be different word in different people's minds.Some people think that watch TV is a good way to relax.Firstly ，we can broaden our horizons or know more about the world by watching latest news and reports.Secondly ，watching TV is a good way to kill our spare time.Finally ，we can predict that may happen in the future and be prepared.Therefore ，every coin has its two sides.There is also disadvantages of watching TV .Not only do it do harm to our eyesight ，but it also has a bad affect on our studies and everyday life.Definitely ，TV plays a big role in our life.We should treat to it in a right way.答案：When it comes to the TV ，there will be different word wordsin different people's minds.Some people think that watch watchingTV is a good way to relax.Firstly ，we can broaden our horizons or andknow more about theworld by watching latest news and reports.Secondly ，watching TVis a good way to kill our spare time.Finally ，we can predict that whatmay happen in the future and be prepared.Therefore However ，every coin has its two sides.There is arealso disadvantages of watching TV .Not only do doesit do harm to our eyesight ，but it also has a bad affect effecton our studies and everydaylife.Definitely ，TV plays a big role in our life.We should treatit in aright way.训练2My name is Li Hua.I was born in Qingdao，Shandong Province on February 1995.I started the school in 2001 when I was six.I studied happy in Guangming Primary School from 2001 to 2007.After that I went to No 39 Middle School of Qingdao and graduate last summer.The main subjects I studied at school included Chinese，maths，English，physics，chemistry and computer.I like English and computer best but I am very good at st year I winned first prize in the school computer competition.In my spare time I enjoy listening popular music and collecting stamp.My favourite sports is swimming in summer and skating in winter.答案：My name is Li Hua.I was born in Qingdao，Shandong Province on inFebruary 1995.I started school in 2001 when I was six.I studied happyhappily in Guangming Primary School from 2001 to 2007.After that Iwent to No 39 Middle School of Qingdao andgraduate graduated lastsummer.The main subjects I studied at school included Chinese，maths，English，physics，chemistry and computer.I like English and computerbest butand I am very good atitst year Iwinnedwon first prize in theschool computer competition.In my spare time I enjoy listeningpopular music and collecting stampstamps.My favourite sportsisareswimming in summer and skating in winter.BOne day，I was walking home after school when an old man fell heavy onto the snow－covering road.Many people passed by，and noone took action.Some of them said it was none of their business ；others worried that if they helped him ，they might got into a difficultsituation.Seeing what had happened ，I called 120 immediately.While waiting the ambulance ，I took down my coat to keep the old man warm.In no time did the ambulance came.Having helped the doctorscarry him into an ambulance ，I felt relieved.In my opinion ，this is our duty to help those who are in troubles.答案：One day ，I was walking home after school when an old man fellheavy heavily onto the snow －covering snow －coveredroad.Many people passed by ，and but no one took action.Some of them said it was none of their business ；othersworried that if they helped him ，they might got getinto a difficult situation.Seeing what had happened ，I called 120 immediately.Whilewaiting the ambulance ，I took down offmy coat to keep the old manwarm.In no timethe ambulance came.Having helped the doctors carry him into an the ambulance ，I felt relieved.In my opinion ，this itis our duty to help those who are introubles trouble. C I'm going to study in the senior middle school on September.I can live either at school and at home.But I can't decide because both hasadvantages and disadvantages.At home ，I have my own room ，but I can have a good sleep.However ，I have to share one room with 5－6 student at school.Maybe I can't sleep good.It's a problem.Although I can have better food at home ，I enjoy eat with my classmates.I think it's a greatfun and I can make more friends.If I live at home，I'll have ride to school.It's a waste of time and not safely.It's so hard to make a decision.答案：I'm going to study in the senior middle school onin September.I canlive either at school andor at home.But I can't decide because bothhashaveadvantages and disadvantages.At home，I have my own room，butso/and I can have a good sleep.However，I have to share one room with 5－6studentstudents at school.Maybe I can't sleep goodwell.It's a problem.Although Ican have better food at home，I enjoyeateating with my classmates.Ithink it's great fun and I can make more friends.If I live at home，I'llhave ride to school.It's a waste of time and not safelysafe.It's so hard tomake a decision.DBeijing has lots of famous tourist attractions.Every year many tourist come here to enjoy its beautiful scenery and rich culture.But several years ago，visitors behave badly.Some talked loudly in public and threw litter everywhere.Some picked flowers，cutting down trees and hurt animals.And even better，some painted on the walls and smoked in the woods.Luckily，things has changed.Rubbish is always put into dustbins.People are friendly at animals.Everybody smokes in the woods.All these changes make us happily.As student，I think we should know it's our duty to protect the environment.Let's to change our behaviour when we travel.答案：Beijing has lots of famous tourist attractions.Every year many touristtourists come here to enjoy its beautiful scenery and rich culture.Butseveral years ago，visitorsbehavebehaved badly.Some talked loudly in publicand threw litter everywhere.Some picked flowers，cuttingcut down treesand hurt animals.And even betterworse，some painted on the walls andsmoked in the woods.Luckily，thingshashave changed.Rubbish is always put intodustbins.People are friendlyatto/towards animals.EverybodyNobody smokes inthe woods.All these changes make us happilyhappy.As student，I think weshould know it's our duty to protect the environment.Let's change our behaviour when we travel.训练3A(导学号59430108)Dear Friend，As you got up this morning，I watched you and hoped you would talk to me，asked my opinion or thanking me something good that happened in your life yesterday.But I noticed you were too busily.I waited again.When you ran around the house getting ready I knew it would be a few minutes for you to stop and say a hello，but you were too busy.At one point you have to wait fifteen minutes with nothing to do except sitting in a chair.Then I saw you jump to your foot.I thought you wanted to talk to me and you ran to the phone and calling a friend.Love always.Your Friend，JesusDear Friend ，As you got up this morning ，I watched you and hoped you wouldtalk to me ，asked asking my opinion or thanking me something good thathappened in your life yesterday.But I noticed you were too busily busy.I waited again.When you ran around the house getting ready I knew itthere would be a few minutes for you to stop and say hello ，butyou were too busy.At one point you have hadto wait fifteen minutes with nothing to do except sitting sitin a chair.Then I saw you jump to your foot feet .I thought you wanted to talk to me and butyou ran to the phone and calling calleda friend. Love always.Your Friend ，JesusBRecently ，I got package notice from the post office.I was notexpecting a package.I thought ，“Oh no ，it's probably a package from some companies that I will not want.But I will have to go to the trouble of send it back.” Late that day a good friend mentioned to me that I should be getting anything in the mail from him.Well ，my attitude on the package waiting for me at the post office changeimmediately.Because I now knew who had been sent it ！I went to the post office as soon as I could.I was delightful to get a set of stainless steel pots from my friend.Recently，I got package notice from the post office.I was not expecting a package.I thought，“Oh no，it's probably a package fromsome companiescompany that I will not want.ButSo I will have to go to thetrouble ofsendsending it back.”LateLater that day a good friend mentionedto me that I should be gettinganythingsomething in the mail from him.Well，myattitudeontowards/to the package waiting for me at the post officechangechanged immediately.Because I now knew who had sent it！I wentto the post office as soon as I could.I was delightfuldelighted to get a set ofstainless steel pots from my friend.CIt was an unusual cold day.Spring had arrived and everything was alive with colour.So a cold front had brought winter's cold back.I sit with two friends by the window of restaurant just off the corner of the town square.The food were especially good that day.As we talked，my attention was drawn outside，across the street.There，walking into town，was a man which appeared to be carrying all his goods on his back.She was carrying a well－worn sign，reads “I will work for food.”My heart was sank.We continued with our meals，but his image lasted in my mind.答案：It was anunusualunusually cold day.Spring had arrived and everythingwas alive with colour.SoBut a cold front had brought winter's cold back.Isit sat with two friends by the window of restaurant just off the cornerof the town square.The food were wasespecially good that day.As we talked ，my attention was drawn outside ，across the street.There ，walking into town ，was a man which whoappeared to be carrying all his goods on his back.She He was carrying a well －worn sign ，reads reading“I willwork for food.” My heartsank.We continued with our meals meal，but his image lasted in my mind.DWhen I was seven years old and my sister were only four ，ourfather was killed in an automobile accident just two week after histwenty －seventh birthday.Mum was disappointing.Although we were really so young to understand what was going on ，but I knew life would never be quite the same.We had a nice home ，plenty of that we needed ，but we miss our father.About every evening we would go to ourgrandparent's house for visit.My grandmother had begun working part time at Kentucky Fried Chicken.His boss was a nice young man named Charles which got to know my mother and fell in love with her later.答案：When I was seven years old and my sister were wasonly four ，our father was killed in an automobile accident just two week weeksafter his twenty －seventh birthday.Mum was disappointing disappointed.Although we were really so too young to understand what was going on ， I knew lifewould never be quite the same.We had a nice home，plenty of that what weneeded，but wemissmissed our father.About every evening we would go toour grandparent's house for visit.My grandmother had begunworking part time at Kentucky Fried Chicken.HisHer boss was a niceyoung man named Charles whichwho got to know my mother and fell inlove with her later.训练4A(导学号59430109)Dear John，I heard you were injured in a accident and stay in hospital now.I feel so sorry for you.The classmates and me plan to see you next week.Don't hesitate to turning to us if there is everything we can do for you.In addition，don't worry at your school work.We will help you make it up when you return back to school.During recovery in hospital，try to keep a good mood，which help improve your health.What's more，eat more fruits or drink more water than usually.Always follow the doctors' advices.It's very important. Looking forward to your coming back.Yours，Li Hua 答案：Dear John，I heard you were injured inaan accident and stay in hospital now.Ifeel so sorry for you.The classmates and meI plan to see you nextweek.Don't hesitate to turning turn to us if there is everything somethingwe can do for you.In addition ，don't worryat about your school work.We will helpyou make it up when you return to school.During recovery inhospital ，try to keep a good mood ，which help helpsimprove your health.What's more ，eat more fruits or anddrink more water than usually usual .Always follow the doctors' advices advice.It's very important. Looking forward to your coming back.Yours ，Li HuaB(导学号59430110)In our life ，everyone is surely to have difficulties.It is the same with me.I still remember how worried I am about my English learning three years ago.I found it difficult to following my teacher in the English class.Beside ，my classmates often laughed at me because my poor English.So I was determined to do something about it.Firstly ，I took a part in the English Corner that I met many friends.They willing shared their methods of learning English with me.I also found it useful to keep English diaries.What's more ，you talked with friends on the Internet and exchanged emails in English.As a result ，I made great progresses in learning English.答案：In our life ，everyone is surely sureto have difficulties.It is the same with me.I still remember how worried I am wasabout my English learning three years ago.I found it difficult tofollowing followmy teacher in theEnglish class.Beside Besides，my classmates often laughed at me becausemy poor English.So I was determined to do something aboutit.Firstly ，I took part in the English Corner that whereI met many friends.They willing willinglyshared their methods of learning English with me.I also found it useful to keep English diaries.What's more ，you Italked with friends on the Internet and exchanged emails in English.As a result ，I made great progresses progressin learning English. CThe trip of Shanghai with my family left a deep impression on me.I remember I was so excited to fall asleep the day before we setoff.Boarding the train ，I found it crowded with people but we didn't get a seat.Therefore we keep standing all the way.Eventually we reached Shanghai.The first thing I did was lie in bed to have a rest because we were all tired out.But early the next day ，I jumped out of bedexcited.My aunt took my family around Shanghai and we visit many places of interests.I deeply attracted by the beauty of the city.I made up my own mind to study in Shanghai University after graduating from high school.答案：The trip of toShanghai with my family left a deep impression on me.I remember I was so tooexcited to fall asleep the day before we set off.Boarding the train ，I found it crowded with people but andwe didn't get a seat.Therefore we keep keptstanding all the way.Eventually wereached Shanghai.The first thing I did waslielying in bed to have a restbecause we were all tired out.But early the next day，I jumped out ofbedexcitedexcitedly.My aunt took my family around Shanghai and wevisitvisitedmany places of interestsinterest.I deeply attracted by the beauty of thecity.I made up my mind to study in Shanghai University after graduating from high school.DI want to share one of the things that I'm proud here.It dated back to the summer three years ago.I was preparing for the new life in high school.I put that I needed in a big box.The big day had arrived.I said goodbye to my parents and then got on the bus by me.I felt proud and excited.I thought there would be something interested waiting for me.On arrival I found many student accompanied by their parents.I feel sad at first but soon threw this feeling away.I managed to carrying my luggage to my dorm on my own.Though tired，I felt very proud.I became more dependent through it.答案：I want to share one of the things that I'm proud here.It dated datesback to the summer three years ago.I was preparing for the new life inhigh school.I put thatwhat I needed in a big box.The big dayarrived.I said goodbye to my parents and then got on the bus by memyself.I felt proud and excited.I thought there would be somethinginterestedinteresting waiting for me.On arrival I found many student studentsaccompanied by their parents.I feelfelt sad at first but soon threw thisfeeling away.I managed to carrying carrymy luggage to my dorm on my own.Though tired ，I felt very proud.I became moredependent independent through it.训练5AI still remember the day which I learned the importance offollowing the traffic rules.It was warm Saturday afternoon.I wentshopping with some of my best friends.We bought what we were needed and had a good time.But when we went home ，we had a narrowly escape.The street was crowded and the zebra crossing was about 50 metres ahead.So we were too tiring and decided to cross the streetdirectly.Hardly have we reached the middle of the street when we heard a sharp noise.A car stopped just two foot away from me.Whatdangerous it was! From then on I really got to know the importance of obey the traffic rules.答案：I still remember the day which whenI learned the importance offollowing the traffic rules.It was warm Saturday afternoon.I wentshopping with some of my best friends.We bought what we neededand had a good time.But when we went home ，we had anarrowly narrow escape.The street was crowded and the zebra crossing was about 50metres ahead.So But we were too tiring tiredand decided to cross the street directly.Hardly have hadwe reached the middle of the street when we heard a sharp noise.A car stopped just two foot feet away from me.What Howdangerous it was! From then on I really got to know the importance of obey obeyingthe traffic rules. BHow often should you pay a visit the dentist ，then? A medicalmagazine ，that provides guidance ，say that the frequency of dental visits all depends on the individual.It recommends that children go at least once a year because their teeth can become bad fast ，while adultswithout problem can wait as long as two years.That they even go longer than two years are OK for people who have been caring for histeeth.Similar advice is giving elsewhere.An expert group review the evidence in Finland back in 2001 had recommended that under －18s who are at low risk visit between every 18 months and two years.答案：How often should you pay a visit the dentist ，then? A medicalmagazine ，that which provides guidance ，say saysthat the frequency of dental visits all depends on the individual.It recommends that children go at least once a year because their teeth can become badfast faster ，while adults without problem problemscan wait as long as two years.That they even go longer than two years are isOK for people who have been caring for his their teeth.Similar advice is giving givenelsewhere.An expert group reviewreviewing the evidence in Finland back in 2001 recommended that under －18s who are at low risk visit between every 18 months and two years.CHi Thomas ，How is everything with you recently? I'm very exciting because Ihave applied for a holiday job ，taught English conversation in a teacher training college near Shanghai.I'm a bit of worried because I don'tknow if I should bring some present for the teachers I'll meet.Should I shake hands when I meet people ，or just smiling? What topics will my students want to talk then? Might I say or do something that will seem rudely? This may seem unimportant with you ，but I want to planeverything in advance ，or I'd love to know what you think.You had been to China before.Looking forward to your reply.All the best ，Bruno答案：Hi Thomas ，How is everything with you recently? I'm very exciting excitedbecause I have applied for a holiday job ，taught teachingEnglish conversation in ateacher training college near Shanghai.I'm a bit worried because Idon't know if I should bring somepresent presents for the teachers I'll meet.Should I shake hands when I meet people ，or just smiling smile？ Whattopics will my students want to talk then? Might I say or dosomething that will seem rudely rude ？ This may seem unimportant with to/foryou ，but I want to plan everything in advance ，or soI'd love to know what you think.Youhad havebeen to China before.Looking forward to your reply.All the best ，BrunoDDear Mum ，This afternoon ，our teacher asked us list what our parents haddone for us.I write down a lot of good sides.Time passes quickly ，isn't it? It is three years when I became a high school student.Looking back on the progresses that I have made so far ，I really appreciate for your support.I know that without your properly guidance ，I would not have done so well.However ，what still makes me puzzling is how to make my dream to go to the top university come true.Please continue to lend I a hand.I really need your help.Kate答案：Dear Mum ，This afternoon ，our teacher asked uslist what our parents had done for us.I write wrotedown a lot of good sides. Time passes quickly ，isn't doesn't it? It is three years when sinceI became a high school student.Looking back on theprogresses progress that I have madeso far ，I really appreciate your support.I know that without your properly properguidance ，I would not have done so well.However ，what still makes me puzzling puzzled is how to make my dream to go to the atop university come true.Please continue to lendI mea hand.I really need your help.Kate训练6ADear manager，I am writing to express my interest in your recently advertised positions as a secretary of English.Here I would like to introduce me briefly.I am a 25－year－old young man graduated from the Foreign Languages Department of Jilin University.I have been a English guide for two years after graduation.As a result，my oral English is pretty well.I have great interest the job.I had much confidence in myself.If I am given to the job，I can assure you I will do my best to do it well.I'd like to meet you at your convenient to discuss the possibility of working in your company.An early reply to my application will be high appreciated.Yours respectfully，Wang Y ong 答案：Dear manager，I am writing to express my interest in your recently advertised positionsposition as a secretary of English.Here I would like to introducememyself briefly.I am a 25－year－old young man /graduatedgraduating from theForeign Languages Department of Jilin University.I have beena anEnglish guide for two years after graduation.As a result，my oralEnglish is pretty well good .I have great interest the job.I had havemuchconfidence in myself.If I am given the job ，I can assure you I will domy best to do it well.I'd like to meet you at your convenient convenienceto discuss the possibility of working in your company.An early reply to myapplication will be high highlyappreciated. Yours respectfully ，Wang Y ongBDear Mandy ，I'm not doing well in my lessons at school ，especial in maths.Mydad says I must try hard because he wants me go to university.He thinks I'm lazy ，but it's not true.I work really hard ，often study late into the night ！I've tried to talk to my mother ，but she always said I have towork as hard like my brother does.My brother doesn't study very hard ，and he always gets excellent grades.It's not fair!The only thing I like it is art.My teacher says I'm the best studentshe's had for year.When I told my dad ，all he said was ，“You mustn't waste your time in art.You must focus your mind on your lessons ！”I'm feeling quite puzzling about what to do now.Would you please help me out?Thanks a lot!Yours sincerely ，Lisa答案：Dear Mandy ，。

短文改错4步曲——再看句法技法一明确定语从句类型，关系词要分清1．(2018·全国卷Ⅰ)They also had a small pond which they raised fish.解析：which→where或which前加in本句是含有定语从句的复合句，先行词是pond，引导词在定语从句中作地点状语，用关系副词where引导，相当于in which，故which改为where或在其前加in。

2. (2017·全国卷Ⅲ)Around me in the picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments.解析：they→that/which分析句子结构可知，the things是先行词，其后是定语从句，从句缺少主语，指物，故引导词应用that或which。

3．(2016·四川高考)The dishes what I cooked were Mom’s favorite.解析：what→that/which或去掉what先行词为The dishes，且定语从句中cooked后缺少宾语，故应用that或which引导定语从句，因其在从句中作宾语，也可省略关系代词。

4．(2018·陕西西安八校联考)I am a 25-year-old young man which graduated from the Foreign Languages Department of Jilin University.解析：which→who/that本句中含有定语从句，先行词为man，指人，且在从句中作主语，应用who或that引导。

5．There are many people think that wealth is better than health.解析：think前加who或think→thinking分析句子结构可知，people后为定语从句，先行词为many people，故用who引导该定语从句；因many people和think之间是主谓关系，也可以用现在分词thinking作many people的后置定语。