高三英语一轮复习作文专题---2017高考真题读后续写突破讲解

一、读后续写（25分）A farmer grew some vegetables in his garden. One day his wife was ill and he had no money. He had to sell some cabbages and carrots in the market. The next morning he took two baskets of vegetables to town. But it was raining hard that afternoon and there were few people in the street. When his vegetables were sold out, it was dark. He bought some medicine and hurried to his village.On his way home he saw a person lying on the snow. He placed his baskets on the ground and was going to help the person to get up. At that time he found it was a dead man and there was much blood on his body. He was so afraid that he ran away quickly, without taking the baskets with him.The next afternoon the farmer was sent to the police station. Having shown the baskets, an officer asked, “Are these yours” “Yes, sir.” the farmer answered timidly（胆怯地）. “Have you killed the man” “No, no, sir.” the farmer said in a hurry. “When did you see the dead man” “About seven last evening.” “Did you see who killed the man” “No, sir.” The officer brought out a knife and asked, “Have you seen it yet” “No, sir.” The officer became angry and told the policemen to beat him up and sent him into prison. the officer wanted to trap the farmer into the confession(供认), but the fa rmer didn’t admit he was the murderer.注意：1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

专题02 如何巧妙构思读后续写的故事情节之高分技巧、高分手段和易错点读后续写能否拿否拿高分某种程度上取决于故事情节的构思。

这就要求考生做到学会分析情节。

分析故事情节一般从故事六要素着手，即who, when, where, what, why, how。

然后根据故事情节发展线和主人公的情感变化来续写文章。

简化为：❖高分手段读后续写的故事情节设计中，矛盾冲突和转折总体上应当体现清代袁枚《随园诗话》中“文似看山不喜平”的意思，即写文章好比观赏山峰那样，喜欢起伏，不喜欢平铺直叙。

所以读后续写的冲突就体现了这种跌宕起伏，而最终的矛盾冲突会变为积极的正能量。

❖易错点在续写过程中，应当体会原材料故事中的语言特点，从人物动作描写，场景描写，情感情绪描写，人物心理和神态外貌描写等方面进行润色，提升语言表达的准确性，完成语言风格高契合度的短文。

典例剖析【2022年高考浙江卷6 月】阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

I needed to do something in my community (社区) in order to complete the community service hours required to graduate from high school. Some of my friends had signed up to spend time at a soup kitchen, so I did, too. It seemed like a good thing to do.I thought that we would just be passing out dinners to those in need, but I found out we would be doing everything from preparing to serving the dinner. We began preparing the food, from mixing salad dressing to separating frozen meat. Much still needed to be done before dinner was served, but already outside the building many homeless people were gathering. It wasn’t until a couple of hours later that we opened the doors and began serving dinner.As the line of people came toward me, I got a little scared. I’d come face to face with the homeless: How should I act? How would they treat me? Would they hate me for having more than they did? While some of the people looked very friendly, some of them looked so dangerous. I didn’t have too much time to worry about i t. I was assigned (分配) to serve the salad with the lady next to me. She smiled at me and said if I needed help, she’d be right there, which I found quite comforting.I had never seen so many people wanting food. They were of all ages and nationalities. Most of them wore clothes that were torn and dirty. Some looked like they had tally given up on life, while others seemed to be making the best of the situation, smiling and joking. Some were better off than others, but they all needed a good meal and a warm place to eat. It saddened me to think of how many people there were who didn’t have a place to call home and the only food they got came from a soup kitchen.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

专题06 读后续写之各种不同的“说”描写+易错点--新高考满分作文读后续写高分突破目录一say和各种常用“说”的替换词二八种表达修饰的“说”三“说”出现在句中的位置三常见容易丢分的“说”说的不同表达法1.可以替换say的动词典例赏析1.【2022年新高考全国I卷】“You have a full preparation before this event, which is the most important reason why you show up here”, I added with a sincere tone.“你在这次活动之前已经有了充分的准备，这是你来这里的最重要的原因，”我用真诚的语气补充道。

2.【2022年湖南周南中学模拟】“No, it is not your lamb. It is ours! ” said Charlie, placing himself in front of it. “不，这不是你的羔羊。

这是我们的了！”查理说着，站在它面前。

3.【2021年新高考浙江卷6月】“How much money have you earned?” Dad asked. I was surprised, reluctant to say my income.“你赚了多少钱？”爸爸问。

我很惊讶，不愿意说我的收入。

4.【2022年厦门大学附中2022-2023学年期中】As the boat was approaching, Kiana pointed to her father and sister and someone screamed,“They are in the water! Help!”当船驶近时，基亚娜指着她的父亲和妹妹，有人尖叫道：“他们在水里！”救命！”5.“I did finish my work," he emphasized.“我真的完成了工作。

读后续写原题In our weekly staff meeting, our editor Ashley was not pleased with the quality of our reporting.“Our readership is way down. We need better stories for this Thursday's school newspaper. Does anybody have any ideas?” she said.I handed her my article about our basketball team beating Deerfield High School the previous night by one point. “Sports stories are fun,” she said,“but not good enough for the front page. We need something to really get people’s attention.”After our meeting, we left the newsroom together and heard someone screaming,“Perry is missing!” Perry was a big red parrot and had been our school mascot (吉祥物) for ten years. He played an important role in students' lives, both in and out of class. He had also been a constant presence at school events, inspiring a sense of unity among students.Everyone gathered around Perry's empty cage, heartbroken. Suddenly, a student from the crowd came over and showed me a photo. "You're a reporter for the school paper, right? I happened to take this yesterday," he said. In the photo was a Deerfield High School basketball player with something large hidden under his shirt around the size of a parrot.“He must have stolen Perry to get back at us for winning the game!” Ashley cried. We hurried back to the newsroom, agreeing to run the photo on the front page with the headline "Deerfeld Stole Perry.”“This is just the story we need. Everyone will read it,” Ashley said confidently.After she left, I took a closer look at the photo. The clock in the background read 4:15 pm, but our game against Deerfield hadn't started until 4:30 pm. Why would the boy have taken Perry before we even played? An uneasy feeling came over me that we might have falsely accused someone.I went to Perry’s usual caretaker to ask if he knew Perry was missing. “He’s not missing. He’s retired. He's ready for some quieter days,” he said. Learning the truth, I immediately told Ashley and suggested writing a story to say goodbye to Perry.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右:2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

考点33读后续写〔试题特征与句式策略〕一、试题特征读后续写原文所提供短文词数在350左右，划线词语涉与到名词(词组)、动词(词组)、介词(词组)和形容词等，其中，以名词(词组)为主，在续写中至少要使用5个关键词语，需要注意：在使用关键词语时根据时态和语态的需要，可以改变动词的形式，可以改变名词的单复数，但不要改变关键词语在原文中的含义和词性；多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主，故事情节有曲折、有起伏，但故事线索的逻辑性比拟强。

1.创造性：即发挥想象力，该题型具有一定的开放性，考生需用自己的语言对故事情节进展内容创造；2.逻辑性：即根据已提供的关键信息，按照可能的合理的方向续写，使文章逻辑结构完整；3.丰富性：即语言能力的充分表现，词汇句法的准确与复杂程度，细节描写的生动性等都将让故事更加立体饱满。

读后续写操作简便，通常的做法是从外语读物中截留一篇结尾缺失的材料，让学习者读后写全内容。

此法用于外语学习，大致有以下优点(王初明，2012)：〔1〕释放想象力，培养创新思维能力。

在理解阅读材料的根底上创造性地构思续写内容，必须发挥想象力，而想象力是创新的源头，续写有助于培养创新思维能力。

〔2〕理解与产出严密结合。

如前所述，这是提高外语学习效率的重要条件。

假设要完成好续写任务，必须充分理解阅读材料的内容，同时接着续写，记忆新鲜，模仿容易，协同效应佳。

〔3〕与阅读材料与其作者互动。

续写时，学习者需要回读原文，以保持所写的内容和语言与原文连贯，因而迫使产出和理解协同，如同与比自己语言水平高的本族语者互动，产生拉平效应。

〔4〕创造性地模仿和使用语言。

续写必须生成新的内容，在表达新内容遇到语言障碍时，可直接使用阅读材料中出现的词句，为写作纤困。

这是一种语言模仿，但具有创造使用的特征：模仿阅读材料中的词语句型，表达自己创造的内容。

学习者马上运用新学到的词语或进展熟词新用，不仅学得好记得牢，而且容易产生成就感，增强外语学习兴趣和动力。

一、读后续写（25分）A farmer grew some vegetables in his garden. One day his wife was ill and he had no money. He had to sell some cabbages and carrots in the market. The next morning he took two baskets of vegetables to town. But it was raining hard that afternoon and there were few people in the street. When his vegetables were sold out, it was dark. He bought some medicine and hurried to his village.On his way home he saw a person lying on the snow. He placed his baskets on the ground and was going to help the person to get up. At that time he found it was a dead man and there was much blood on his body. He was so afraid that he ran away quickly, without taking the baskets with him.The next afternoon the farmer was sent to the police station. Having shown the baskets, an officer asked, “Are these yours” “Yes, sir.” the farmer answered timidly（胆怯地）. “Have you killed the man” “No, no, sir.” the farmer said in a hurry. “When did you see the dead man” “About seven last evening.” “Did you see who killed the man” “No, sir.” The officer brought out a knife and asked, “Have you seen it yet” “No, sir.” The officer became angry and told the policemen to beat him up and sent him into prison. the officer wanted to trap the farmer into the confession(供认), but the fa rmer didn’t admit he was the murderer.注意：1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。