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2016广州一模精选优秀作文4篇“暖闻”2016年广州一模作文试题阅读下面的材料，根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。
某报为了发掘有温度和人情味的新闻，引导读者以温暖的视角看待社会，开设了《暖闻》专栏。
编辑部收到三则新闻：一位卖油条的青年多年坚持不用有害的“复炸油”炸油条，给顾客提供新鲜健康的油条，被网友称赞为最帅的良心“油条哥”。
一位老父亲从外地来医院看望儿子，看到儿子正在坐诊，忙得抬不起头，根本说不上话。
老人家等了两个多小时后，只好挂了个号，和儿子见了一面。
某地举办珍品画展，一位男孩在探身观赏时不慎跌倒，损坏一幅珍贵名画。
主办方认为男孩只有12岁，又不是故意的，因此仅备案而未报案，希望男孩的心理不要受到影响。
从以上新闻中选择一则刊登在《暖闻》专栏上，你认为哪一则更合适？请综合材料内容及含意作文，体现你的思考、权衡与选择。
要求选好角度，确定立意，明确文体，自拟标题；不要套作，不得抄袭。
审题材料由两部分组成，第一部分叙述了三则新闻，它们分别为“油条哥”坚持不用“复炸油”、老父亲等候挂号排队看望儿子、主办方宽容12岁男孩无意损坏珍贵名画。
这三则新闻均为有温度和人情味的事件，体现出向他人或社会传递的温暖。
第二部分提出写作要求，明确写作任务。
第一，必须从这三则新闻中选择其中一则新闻；第二，围绕“温度和人情味”这两个关键词，阐述选择该新闻的理由；第三，把选择的新闻与其他两则新闻进行对比性分析，凸显所选择新闻的温暖所在。
因此，符合题意的立意，综合而言应该为“向他人或社会传递温暖和人情味”。
对三则新闻能进行权衡，则属于符合题意，如果没有权衡这三则新闻，亦属于符合题意。
如果脱离材料的内容及含意，不写“向他人或社会传递温暖和人情味”的内容，则属于偏离题意；如果没有做出选择判断，只是分析了三则新闻的温暖，则亦属于偏离题意。
立意1、选择第一则新闻：“油条哥”坚持不用“复炸油”，提供新鲜健康的油条。
①坚守良心，温暖他人。
2016广州一模优秀作文阅读下面的材料，根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。
某报为了发掘有温度和人情味的新闻，引导读者以温暖的视角看待社会，开设了《暖闻》专栏。
编辑部收到三则新闻：一位卖油条的青年多年坚持不用有害的“复炸油”炸油条，给顾客提供新鲜健康的油条，被网友称赞为最帅的良心“油条哥”。
一位老父亲从外地来医院看望儿子，看到儿子正在坐诊，忙得抬不起头，根本说不上话；老人家等了两个多小时后，只好挂了个号，和儿子见了一面。
某地举办珍品画展，一位男孩探身观赏时不慎跌倒，损坏了一幅珍贵名画；主办方认为男孩只有12岁，又不是故意的，因此仅备案而未报案，希望男孩的心理不要受到影响。
从以上三则新闻中选择一则刊登在《暖闻》专栏上，你认为哪一则更合适？请综合材料内容及含意作文，体现你的思考、权衡与选择。
要求选好角度，确定立意，明确文体，自拟标题；不要套作，不得抄袭。
神似重于形似——对2016年广州“一测”作文题的几点思考（上）神似重于形似——对2016年广州“一测”作文题的几点思考（上）广州市高三语文中心组1.任务驱动型作文，力避假大空2016年广州“一测”作文题在形式上是严格按照2015年全国课标甲卷的形式而设置，旨在努力创设高考考试的真实情景，为考生参加6月份的高考做好充分的实战演练准备。
“一测”作文题与2015年全国课标卷甲卷作文命题“三个当代风采人物，谁更具风采”十分相似，都是“材料写作要求”的命题形式，并且在写作要求里增加了包含着具体要求的任务型指令，故被称为任务驱动型材料作文。
本次写作任务是“从以上三则新闻中选择一则刊登在《暖闻》专栏上，你认为哪一则更合适？这就规定了考生写作时必须在三则新闻中做出选择判断，并阐明理由，在比较中思辨说理；阐述三则新闻中哪个最有温度和人情味，更值得登报宣扬。
任务驱动型作文在很大程度上规定了具体情境，有了近乎真实的写作任务，能较好地规避宿构和套作，更好地解决考场作文“假、大、空”等问题，这是今后高考作文命题的发展趋势。
2016年“广州一模”作文及审题指引18.作文评分细则【题目】阅读下面的材料，根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。
（60分）某报为了发掘有温度和人情味的新闻，引导读者以温暖的视角看待社会，开设了《暖闻》专栏。
编辑部收到三则新闻：一位卖油条的青年多年坚持不用有害的“复炸油”炸油条，给顾客提供新鲜健康的油条，被网友称赞为最帅的良心“油条哥”。
一位老父亲从外地来医院看望儿子，看到儿子正在坐诊，忙得抬不起头，根本说不上话。
老人家等了两个多小时后，只好挂了个号，和儿子见了一面。
某地举办珍品画展，一位男孩在探身观赏时不慎跌倒，损害一副珍贵名画，主办方认为男孩只有12岁，又不是故意的，因此仅备案而未报案，希望男孩的心理不要受到影响。
从以上新闻中选择一则刊登在《暖闻》专栏中，你认为哪一则更合适？请综合材料内容及含意作文，体现你的思考、权衡与选择。
要求选好角度，确定立意，明确文体，自拟标题；不要套作，不得抄袭。
一、材料与审题：材料由两部分组成，第一部分叙述了三则新闻，它们分别为“油条哥”坚持不用“复炸油”、老父亲等候挂号排队看望儿子、主办方宽容12岁男孩无意损坏珍贵名画。
这三则新闻均为有温度和人情味的事件，体现出向他人或社会传递的温暖。
第二部分提出写作要求，明确写作任务。
第一，必须从这三则新闻中选择其中一则新闻；第二，围绕“温度和人情味”这两个关键词，阐述选择该新闻的理由；第三，把选择的新闻与其他两则新闻进行对比性分析，凸显所选择新闻的温暖所在。
因此，符合题意的立意，综合而言应该为“向他人或社会传递温暖和人情味”。
对三则新闻能进行权衡，则属于符合题意，如果没有权衡这三则新闻，亦属于符合题意。
如果脱离材料的内容及含意，不写“向他人或社会传递温暖和人情味”的内容，则属于偏离题意；如果没有做出选择判断，只是分析了三则新闻的温暖，则亦属于偏离题意。
二、角度与立意：1、选择第一则新闻：“油条哥”坚持不用“复炸油”，提供新鲜健康的油条。
2016年广州一模语文作文优秀范文2016年广州一模语文作文优秀范文这是一篇由罗燕廷老师撰写的2016年广州一模语文作文范文，看看老师是是如何应对这样的“奇葩”作文题的。
去年暑假，我坐火车回老家。
坐在我对面的是一个怪老头。
他的身上穿着一件洗得发白的纯蓝校服，校服明显短出他的身子一截。
我来自贵州的一个偏远的农村，他自顾自地唠叨起来，完全没有问过我愿不愿意听。
我原本也有个孙子的，他叫二娃子，如果他还活着，也应该和你个儿高了，他幽幽地说，声音明显地沙哑起来，如果去年没有下那一场大雨，他也不会走得那么快的，他结实得像头牛犊子，孝顺、可爱。
我被他的话触动了，他眼里泛着泪光，混浊的双眼却像一口枯泉一样流不出一滴液体。
我还是递过去一张纸巾，却被他推了回来。
他爹妈走得早，可怜的娃，和我相依为命，十五岁才有机会上初中。
他走的那一天是星期一，我记得很清楚。
前天晚上下了一整夜暴雨，坝子河的水涨得像张弓。
那天一早，我的二娃子就穿好了他珍爱的也是唯一的一套校服，高兴地去学校参加升旗。
这套校服是学校送给他的，他可珍惜着哩。
平时都不怎么舍得穿。
我的二娃穿好校服总爱在床边的破镜子里照个美，说，爷爷，我现在真的像个学生了。
爷爷，我将来上高中、上大学要自己赚钱买校服。
爷爷，我要穿着校服和你照相。
我的二娃子要上学了。
坝子河的独木桥被洪水冲垮了，他要趟过坝子河才能去到村子对面的学校。
我说，二娃子今天不要去学校了。
二娃子没有听我的，执意要去，二娃子太爱上学了。
我送二娃子来到河边，河水急得打窝儿。
二娃子说，爷爷，你回吧，我游过去得了。
二娃子是游泳的好手。
平时一猛子扎下去已经到对岸了。
二娃子脱光了衣服，小心翼翼地把校服放到书包里，拉了链子，还用力按了按。
下河了，他把书包举过头顶，举得老高老高。
我看着他一点一点地游出去，叫着，二娃子，慢点儿呀。
得咧，二娃子大声应着我。
可就在这时，我看见二娃子猛地向外偏了一下，他手上的书包霎时被抛离了手心，只一会儿，已漂出两丈多远。
2016广州高考一模我校英语优秀作文选登2016英语高考的写作部分由原来的两篇写作改为写一篇词数100左右的短文。
占分25.（150满分）我校高三在全市一模考试中英语总平均分是102（满分120）；其中最高分为116.写作中全级得24分有14人。
申博文（高三1/24分）I’m LiHua. I’m conducting a survey about the differences between Chinese students and English students in their winter holidays. Therefore, I’m writing this letter to exchange relevant information.Our winter holiday lasts for about 20days. Basically, we need to finish our assigned homework first. Then, we can take part in some extracurriculum activities. Hanging out with friends or going for a trip are both advisable. What’s more, Spring Festival, the most cheerful and anticipated one in China, falls on winter holiday. During the night, we’ll have f amily reunion meals and watch the CCTV Gala Evening. When the clock strikes twelve, we send new year resolution to parents and pocket money will be passed out from adults to children.What’s the winter holiday like in England? I would really appreciate it if you could share more details with me.曾泽宇（高三1/23分）I’m carrying out a research on winter holiday of both Chinese and British students. I’m writing to inquire you about some relevant information.To begin with, I would like to share domestic studnets’ li fe with you. In China, the winter holiday lasts for 20days. During the period where the Spring festival is included. Students are drowned in joyfulness as well as relaxation. Apart fromcelebrating the festival, they sometimes have a trip with their families. To most students, it is this valuable holiday that provides them with enough time to temporarily escape from the stressful academic work, so as to refresh themselves and get fully prepares for the new term.How is the winter holiday like in your country? I am very curious .Could you please share some interesting things about this with me?曹浩铭（高三3/24分）As I am going to do a survey about how studnets in China as well as Britain spend their winter vacation, I am writing to you to exchnage information.Generally speaking, the winter holiday in China is about 20days, and its beginning usually indicates that the Spring Festival, the most important festival in China, is drawing near. So apart from finishing the piles of assignments, our Chinese studnets also participate in some of the celebrations of it. Besides, some studnets prefer to pay a visit to other cities, some go back to their hometown for family reunion, while others choose to stay at home, sleeping late and devoting their time to computer games.I am quite curious about how long the British winter break lasts and what students in the UK are likely to do during the holiday.Thank you for sparing your precious time reading my words. And I would appreciate it if you could answer my questions.张毓盛（高三6/23分）I’m going to carry a survey about the differences between Chinese students’ winter vacation and British students’. I need to collect some information and it is you that I first come up within my mind.First of all, I’d like to show you Chinese studnets’ winter. In China, we only have a very limited 20-day holiday, maybe less than 20, to get away from the stress of competing with the pees. So we’ll participate in various kinds of activities. Some of us will go to the cinema or a concert, while others will choose a winter camp or a short trip to other country. What about you? How do British students spend their winter holidays?I would appreciate it if you can offer me some information. It’ll be great for me to hear from you as soon as possible.游捷（高三7/24分）Since I’m required to conduct a survey about the winter vacation of the UK and Chinese studnets, I’m writing to ask you some questions.Above all, let me introduce our vacation. It lasts for 20days, and weith this 20-day break, we can refresh ourselves and free ourselves from the daily study burden. Some of us spend the holiday doing some part-time jobs because they say it is the working experience matters most for our future career. While others are finally capable of listening to live concerts, enjoying art shows in museums or sharing wonderful time with their own family. Only in this vacation can we actually relax for a while .But how does your winter vacation like? Is there something special compared to ours? What will you do during these several day s? I’m really interested in it so it’s your turn to write me back and tell me some information. Your early reply is highly apprecialed.赖子浩（高三7/24分）I am doing a research about the life in winter holiday among Chinese and Britiash studnets these days. Therefore, I would liketo write to exchange some opinions on this topic with you.In terms of Chinese studnets’ life in winter holiday, it generally lasts for 20 days. And the holiday consists of colorful activities and study. Students usually expand their scop of knowledge by travelling to many places or joining some socializing activities. All are bound to be wonderful experiences. Besides, students may spend days enhancing the learning skills in some subjects to prove good marks and gain more confidence.As for British pupiles, I am curious about their life in winter holiday. I think it must be also splendid and meaningful. Could you introduce some to me? I am thrilled to learn more about it!Thank you for sparing time to read this letter.朱乐源（高三15/24分）In order to do a survey on the winter vacation of Chinese studnets and British students, I’m writing to exchange some infromation concerned with you.Surprisingly, our winter vacation lasts for about 20days, which is a precious chance for us to take time out from study to relax. In China, most of the students would like to go traveling rather than stay at home. What’s more, reading our favourite books and doing some sports also stand out as favours.These activities are so meaningful that the Chinese studnets can broden their horizons and fully prepare for their next new term.How about the vacation of the British students? I am curious about how they arrange their vacation and what activities they usually take part in. Your answers will be appreciated in no time.冯修儒（高三17/23分）Recently, I’m doing a research about winter vacation between Chinese students and British students. As soon as I started a research, I thought of you because you are a Britishstudnets as well as my good friend. So I’m writing to exchange ideas with you in this regard.To begin with, the winter vacation in China is about 20 days. Like in any other vacation, we usually go travelling or shopping and so on. But the most important and special thing is that we will take part in the Spring Festiv al in which we’ll have big meals and hold family gatherings. Every year all of us enjoy this vital festival and have great fun. And absolutely, we should also finish our homework before coming back to school.From what have been mentioned above, you must have basically known our winter cavation. So what about yours? I’m very curious about it. I will highly appreciate it if you are willing to introduce it to me in detail.林星羽（高三17/24分）It has been a long time since I wrote to you last time. Recently, I’m bus y doing some surveys about the winter vacation in different countries, especially between China and the UK. Therefore, I will appreciate it if you can give me some opinions.First of all, I would like to show you the Chinese studnets’ winter holiday. Genenrally speaking, the winter holiday lasts for 20days. Students around me are always going traveling with their family. As you know, the Spring Festival is within the vacation, so some people will go back to hometowns to enjoy their family reunions. Besides, there are some extra classes for the studnets who want to improve their study. Also, it’s necessary for students to finish their homework.Now I’m so curious about the differneces between our winter vacation. Do you go travelling? Do you have homework to do? I can’t wait to explore the mystery of your winter holiday. It must be wonderful and special !朱晓月（高三18/24）I’m doing a research on “How do Chinese and British studnets spend their winter holidays”. And I hope you can give me a help and provide some information which relates to my project.Our holidays last for about 20 days. In our holidays, we are usually busy doing mountainous homework and taking courses at poor sujects. Though it wil build a solid foundation of our future studies and make contributions to our academic performance, we are unpleasant to do it. If we have more free time, we often travel abroad to relax ourselves and then prepare for the new term. How about your winter holidays? Do you have a lot of homework to do or have more flexible time to study? Will you make some plans about travelling? How will you make good use of your holidays?I would appreciate it if you can answer my questions. Thanks for sparing your time to read my letter.朱恩宜（高三18/23分）I’m Li Hua. Since I’ve been working on a survey about the winter holidays of British and Chines students, this time I’m writing to exchang some information on this topic with you.To begin with, our winter holidays last for 20 days, in which we students lead different lives. Some simply keep on studying to guarantee excellent academic performances at the very beginning of next term. The others are engaged in a variety of socializing activities, busy traveling or just eat and drink to their hearts’ content, shifting their focus from exhausting s tudy work for a while.I can’t help wondering what your winter holiday is like! Would you tell me how long it will last for? What kinds ofactivities do you fancy most, and most importantly, is homework also involved in holidays in Britain? Your detailed information is highly appreciated.(黄色部分为微改动)书面表达（25）假定你是李华，你要完成一项关于中英学生寒假生活的调查。
2016广州一模语文作文2016年“广州一模”语文卷参考答案及评分细则1.【概念理解】(3 分)D(原文中“厚往薄来”的意思是：“厚往，谓诸侯还国，王者以其材贿厚重往报之。
薄来，谓诸侯贡献使轻薄而来。
”本项“尽其所能来回报对方的深情厚谊”的转述不正确。
)2.【内容理解】(3 分)A(原文“亲仁善邻，国之宝也”中的“亲仁”不是一种理想境界，而是处理好国家关系的方式。
本项“以达到‘亲仁’的理想境界”的理解不正确。
)3.【内容分析】(3 分)A(原文中论述的“涉外理念”并不包括“天下一家”，也没有说“天下一家”是建立理想世界的重要保证，本项的分析不正确。
)4.【文言断句】(3 分)B(“或问其故”的主语是“有的人”，“曰”的主语是崔郾，“曰”应属下句;“吾抚之不暇”表意完整，“不暇”应属上句;“犹恐其扰”表意完整，另外“鄂土沃民剽”与前文的“陕土瘠而民劳”句式对称，因此“鄂”应属下句;“非用威莫能治”表意完整，“政”是“所以贵知变者也”的主语，因此“政”应属下句。
)5.【实词理解】(3 分)B(《论语》不属于《六经》，应改为“《乐经》”。
)6.【概括分析】(3 分)A(“不赡私”指不能供养自己和家人，而不是不赡养父母;“不赡私”和“安暇恤民”都是崔郾的假设，不是事实。
)7.【文言翻译】(10 分)(1)陛下使臣侍讲，历半岁不一问经义。
臣无功，不足副厚恩译：陛下让我担任侍讲学士，过了半年并没问过一次经书义理。
臣下没有功劳，不能与皇上的厚恩相称(对不起皇上的厚恩)。
“使”1 分，可以翻译为“让”，或者“派遣”，或者“任命”等“侍讲”1 分，可以翻译为“担任侍讲学士”，或者“为皇帝讲学”“历”1 分，可以翻译为“经过”，或者“经历”，或者“过了”“不一问”1 分，可以翻译为“没问过一次”或者“”“副”1 分，可以翻译为“符合”，或者“与……相称(相符)”或者“对得起”[5 分。
“使”“侍讲”“历”“不一问”“副”各 1 分。
