注意,用各种不同的句型写建议,
各条建议按重要性排列,把你认为最重要的 放最后。
结束语:Animals are members of our family, so it’s our duty to take good care of them. Together we can save these animals before it is too late. And please remember that when the buying stops, the killing can too.
Let’s protect animals
写作思路
• 分三段写 • 处于危险的原因 • 如何保护动物(详写) • 自己的感想或者倡议
众所周知,越来越多的动物处在危险当中了!(后面直接 跟上原因)
As we all know, more and more animals are in danger!
As we all know, there are more and more animals in danger, such as the tigers, the pandas and so on.
人们为了动物的皮毛或者肉把他们杀掉…
人们把他们的陆地和森林拿走,动物们没有生活的地方 了…
动物们没有足够的食物可以吃,甚至没有干净的水喝,因 为人们把水弄脏了…
可用的关联词:What’s worse,更糟糕的是…
动物们的形势很严峻,那我们究竟能做些什么来保 护动物呢?
The situation of animals is getting more and more difficult, so what on earth can we do to protect them? First,………. . Second,………….. Besides,…………..