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2023考研英语：英语作文的精华解析2023考研英语：英语作文的精华解析一、大作文万能模板考研英语大作文(即短文写作_占20分，要求考生根据提示信息写出一篇160~200词的短文(标点符号不计算在内)。
提示信息的形式有主题句、写作提纲、规定情景、图、表等。
1. 图画描绘段As is vividly shown in the picture，…It is clearly depicted in the picture that…This picture depicts a thought-provoking scene of…According to the figures given in the chart，…The chart above provides a series of essential figures， illustrating the changes taking place in a time span of… years.The graph demonstrates that the number of... is growing/declining rapidly in...2. 话题引出段Nowadays， there is a growing concern over the issue of…People in growing numbers are directing their attention to…When it es to…，people’s notions may vary from one to another.Traditional virtue/value has it that…， yet people are… cur rently.3. 观点比照段Opposite voices are now rising in the debate. Some people firmly believe that…. On the contrary， quite a few people argue that…The controversial issue has aroused opposite opinions. One focuses on…; the other opinion revolves around…4. 利弊列举段Is this phenomenon a blessing or a curse? The following list of advantages and disadvantages can explain everything.5. 举例论证段For instance， ...Take… for an exleA case in point is…The following illustrations can serve as strong evidence of the phenomenon.6. 原因列举段Why should this phenomenon take place? There are generally three factors accounting for it.Having taken everything into consideration， we may attribute the sharp change to three aspects.7. 意义阐释段The purpose of the picture is to show us that due attention has to be paid to…The fact/phenomenon that… indicates that…Having scrutinized the details of the picture， we can discuss the implications subtly conveyed from it.8. 归纳结论段In conclusion， ...In my opinion， ...As far as I am concerned， ...Taking into account all the analyses above， we may confidently e to the conclusion that…9. 预测趋势段There is no denying that… will continueincreasing/decreasing in the better/worse direction.10. 建议措施段Therefore， it is imperative that we should take some drastic measures.As far as I am concerned， two effective measures must be immediately taken to pull through the crisis.As a result， it is advisable to settle theproblem by two means.二、小作文万能模板考研英语小作文占10分，要求考生根据所给情景写出约100词的应用文，近来考的都是书信。
【导语】成功根本没有秘诀可言，如果有的话，就有两个：第一个就是坚持到底，永不言弃；第二个就是当你想放弃的时候，回过头来看看第一个秘诀，坚持到底，永不言弃。
以下我为考生整理的《考研英语作文真题解析及参考范文》供您查阅。
一、英语(一)Part ADirections:Write a letter of about 100 words to the president of your university, suggesting how to improve students’ physical condition.You should include the details you think necessary.You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.Do not write the address. (10 points)命题解析：2014年英语(一)小作文并未考察去年很多辅导机构和考生猜测的求职信、求学信、申请信等各类考研(微博)写作尚未考察过的书信，而是再次考察了建议信这一题型：写给大学校长，关于如何改进学生们的身体状况提出自己的建议。
这已经是考研小作文自开考十年来第六次考察建议信这一题型，再次体现了目前考研写作命题严重的反押题倾向!2007年考研写作曾经考察写给图书馆关于改进服务的建议信，2008年考察写给房东关于如何归还CD的建议信，2009年考察写给编辑的关于限制使用塑料袋的建议信，2011年英语(二)考察写给表弟的关于大学生活的建议信，2012年英语(一)考察写给留学生的关于大学生活的建议信。
考生如果认真研究这五道真题，2014年考题并不难写。
考研写作之所以反复考察建议信原因有二：一是此种书信非常重要，二是为了反押题。
考研英语小作文的真题解析我们在进行考研英语的准备时，需要把小作文的真题了解清楚。
店铺为大家精心准备了考研英语小作文真题分析资料，欢迎大家前来阅读。
考研英语一小作文真题范文及解析以下是往年参考资料Directions:You are supposed to write for the postgraduate’association a notice to recruit volunteers for an international conference on globalization. The notice should include the basic qualification for applicants and the other information which you think is relevant。
You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the notice. Use " postgraduate’association " instead。
(10 points)参考范文Volunteers WantedJanuary 9, 2010To improve students’ability and enrich extracurricular activities, the Postgraduate’Association is recruiting volunteers for an international conference on globalization to be held on April 7, 2010 in Beijing. To begin with, applicants should have Chinese nationality, a strong professional spirit, cheerful personality and be aged under 35. In addition, candidates must have outstanding skills at English listening comprehension and the ability to speak Chinese and English fluently. Finally, students with relevant professional experience are preferred. Those postgraduates who are interested in taking part in it may sign up with the monitor of their classes before February 1, 2010.Everybody is welcome to join in it。
考研英语作文有哪些写作的方法考研英语高分作文写作方法一、了解意图，抓住精髓近年来的大作文非常玄妙，值得细品。
首先，很可能大作文正在经历由时事向哲理过渡的重大变革，这在2001年、2002年、2004年、2007年、2009和2010年真题上表现得最为明显。
其次，出题人将尽量用图画来表达意图，而不借助或少借助图中或图旁的文字，这样意义表达的会更深刻，对考生的思考力和判断力的要求也就更高。
第三，图画的含义深刻，可以接受的解释也较多，但要想取得高分，必须紧扣图画，把握住其中的精髓，最深刻地表达其核心的意义。
二、扣紧主题写大作文时切记要扣紧主题，切不可离题太远，导致最后回不来或时间不够写不完。
另外，各部分之间的比例应适当，第一段不要太长。
与主题相关的关键词语一定要用对，否则会影响分数。
三、看清要求有的同学一看到写“网络”，就立即联想到这方面最火爆的话题“网络成瘾”，将主题确定为此。
有的同学干脆将之转变为自己看到过的文章——“网络的利与弊”。
这些都是不正确的做法。
写大作文时，首先要减少语言的错误，提高语言的准确性。
语言错误有许多种，有的是小错误，甚至可以忽略不计，而有些是大错误，是让老师看到后不得不扣分的错误。
另一方面就是增加闪光点，除了结构清晰外，闪光点主要指好的词、词组或句型，一是使用恰当，二是要有变换。
上述这两点都不容易，而结合起来就更难了。
如果文章分为三段，那么起始段、结尾段和中间段落的开始部分是非常关键的。
对于背诵的好词、词组和句型，一定要和具体的行文联系起来，融入到文章中去，不仅要用对，还要用好，避免给人突兀的感觉。
四、避免投机取巧近年来，有些考生有投机的心理，结果却很惨烈。
有的考生准备了万能模板，直接往上套，这样的效果并不好。
正如有的较为激进的阅卷老师所说，这些考生是想通过不诚实的手段得到不属于他的东西，这样的人应该得到惩罚。
实际上这些考生中有的水平还不错，如果坚持依靠自己，咬紧牙关奋力拼搏的话，结果会是不错的。
2019年考研英语作文——社会热点系列分析及范文作文主题：社会信任危机作文框架：1.人们之间的信任度下降，出现社会信任危机2.社会信任危机造成的不良影响3.解决方法参考范文：A recent news report must be very alarming that an old drunken man fell down at the crossroad but no passerby ever tried to pull him to his feet or moved him to a safe place.In the end,he was crashed to death by a car.What caused the tragedy?The loss of mutual trust especially among strangers should be largely blamed for the accident.The loss of mutual trust is an obstacle to a harmonious society,to say nothing of its immediate damaging effect.More crimes may happen considering no one will stand out to say No to illegal attempts,because people without mutual trust are always cautious and tend to protectthemselves from any possible risk.Children who are brought up to be suspicious of others will become hesitant about helping others. Accordingly,our society would turn into a place of coldness and indifference.In order to develop mutual trust,people should be educated to believe1that a harmonious society is necessary for one's happiness,which depends on mutual trust and cooperation.Chinese mass media could direct people's attention to the bright side of life and give more coverage of sincerity and kindness typical of human nature.With an increasing number of people realizing the problem of loss of mutual trust,it is time to overcome our hesitation and change for a better society.作文：低碳生活（学派原创）1.低碳生活受到人们的普遍欢迎2.低碳生活方式非常有好处3.我们应该如何去做参考范文：Nowadays,an increasing number of individuals choose to lead a low-carbon lifestyle：more and more commuters prefer to go out by public transportation instead of driving around in the city.Low carbon lifestyle can endow us and our society with numerous benefits.It goes beyond doubt that low carbon lifestyle is an effectiveway to prevent the climate of the earth from getting worse and that also means a lot to our health.There is a diversity of measures we can take so as to lead such an environmental-friendly life.For one thing,we can try to minimize the use of private cars,which will emit a large amount of the exhaust gas.For2another,we are supposed to cultivate the public awareness of energy conservation.For instance,we might as well turn down the air-conditioner in summer and heater in winter.In brief,low-carbon lifestyle is a heathy and beneficial way of life which will help us develop a harmonious relationship with the environment.社会热点话题:传统图书馆未来的命运(学派原创)1.有些人认为信息时代不再需要传统图书馆了，因为……2.有些人认为信息时代传统图书馆仍然有重要作用，因为……3.你的看法……【范文】There has been a heated discussion about the future of conventional libraries.Some people,especially the younger generation,believe that they will fade out soon.Those people tend to surf the Net for the information they need at work or in their studies,which is more convenient and efficient.While others,including most old people as well as scholars,value traditional libraries.They love them partly because they enjoy the sight of a collection of books，which to them are a sea of knowledge waiting for them to explore.And they can also have access to rare academic works needed for their studies in the libraries.3At the age of knowledge explosion when knowledge is respected and valued,conventional libraries won’t quit the stage of history.Instead, quite a few electronically-equipped libraries are becoming a reserve of human wisdoms and thus the existence of libraries is justified.孝顺(学派原创)写作框架：孝顺的定义和理解如何做到孝顺参考范文：Filial piety,originally signifying respecting all the people from around the world and now mainly representing caring for parents heart and soul,has been prized in China since ancient times.How can we observe filial piety?Does filial piety means buying our parents a big and comfortable house in return for what we have got from our parents:enormous love and care,which,however,we usually can't afford until we have been very successful in our career.But then,at thattime our parents may be too old and weak to enjoy it.We can't take it for granted that our parents are healthy enough to wait for our successful moments.Regrets often come from a long wait.Filial piety means trying to do what we can do for our parents.Often go home to see our parents,listen to their chattering about their past and how naught we were as children and help them with their housework.4Those things may seem to be mere trifles but are just what our parents expect of us considering they are old and sometimes feel lonely and so our company is the best way to show our love of them.作文主题：礼仪(学派原创)写作框架:一些中国人在外出游乐时不注重礼仪礼仪对一个人和社会的重要性参考范文：People from around the world attach a great deal of value to good manners.Some Chinese tourists,however,behaved badly by spitting on the ground,allowing their kids to pee in the public places,and even carving their names on the buildings or statues of historic significance. What they did has put both his family and China to shame.T o certain degree,good manners indicate a person’s good education and breeding.There are good manners that can be taught to our children and learn by ourselves.It is a good manner to offer help to the old and the handicapped when they are in need of it.Besides,we shouldguard against such offenses as making a loud noise,casting peels and shells,smoking,and spitting.Resist the temptation to carve your names on public buildings and statues.Setting an example of good manners for you kid to follow will win you praise and admiration.If everyone has developed good manners,people will form a more5harmonious relationship and live a happier life.So,for a better world, please follow the golden rule:Be polite and behave yourself.命题作文:The man I admire most(我最敬仰的一个人)学派原创参考范文：Looking back at the human history,there are many great figures worth our respect and admiration,who have contributed a lot to the development of civilization.The one I admire most is a world-famous software engineer and entrepreneur named Bill Gates who also impresses people as a generous philanthropist.Striving for success despite imperfection deserves respect.Gates was not the apple of his teachers'eye and he even dropped out of Harvard University.But motivated by his interest,he worked day and night to design the first version of BASIC language,which laid a good foundation for his future business success.Gates succeeded as a billionaire.But he announced in2008that he would contribute his personal assets of58billions dollars to the charity,which won him the respect of the whole world.Gates,a billionaire whose wealth and and fame are far beyond my reach, sets me a good example to follow,for his dedication to his career and generosity.6参考范文：As is depicted in the picture above,a teacher dressed in ancient clothes is impressing upon his student that reliability,a nation’s treasure,is what makes a man.From the picture we can see that reliability is a Chinese traditional virtue and should be treasured today.Reliability is the basic requirement of a man.No one is willing to make friends with those who are not reliable because friendship is built on trust and confidence.The same is the case with enterprises.If anenterprise isn’t reliable,it will lose more and more customers,no matter how excellent it claims to be in its advertisements.But nowadays there are some Chinese companies that exaggerate their products’quality and functions to take advantage of customers.Eventually,Chinese people have completely lost confidence in some Chinese brands such as7“Nanjin Guanshengyuan”,“Sanlu Milk Powder”,or whatever. Reliability is the basis on which friendship is built and an enterprise develops.reliability usually takes much time and effort to acquire but can be lost overnight.so treasure reliability which will ensure friendship for out,profit for enterprises and a bright future for a nation.8。
考研英语作文写作技巧和方法考研英语作文写作技巧和方法一、背诵高分模板，并灵活套用一般在备考考研英语写作之时，大家都会记忆一些作文模板，但是很多模板都是千篇一律的句式和内容，这就导致大家写出来的*也是千篇一律的模式。
所以，选好背诵的素材非常重要。
建议还是买一本最新的作文书，模板和范文都背一些，我觉得30篇是最起码。
背的多了，写作文的时候都感觉“下笔如有神”，所以想要快速提高作文水平，好好背模板范文是性价比最高的。
二、把低阶词汇替换掉我们在写作的时候，要学会用适当的表达方式去进行同义替换。
不要看到“我认为”，满脑子都是“i think”，这样的*，阅卷老师可能只想给你及格分。
我们可以多积累一些同义词，既可以替换掉脑子中的低阶词汇，又能保持句子的多样性，这样更容易拿高分!比如，我们在表达“许多”的时候，除了常见的many， several， a lot of等，我们还可以用： a body of ，a host of。
学会同一表达的多样性表述可以增强我们*的语言的丰富性。
这样才能获得阅卷老师的青睐，才可以在众多枯燥的*中脱颖而出。
三、丰富句型丰富句型可以使你的*更有“逼格”，一方面避免千篇一律，另一方面避免给阅卷老师留下写作水平不高的印象。
丰富句型主要有以下几种方式：1. 主动句变被动句“英文多被动，汉语多主动”，还需要警惕名词与动词之间暗含的“主被动”关系。
2. 简单句变从句名词性从句，含主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句和同位语从句四种;定语从句;状语从句A. 主语从句B.宾语从句C. 表语从句D. 同位语从句E. 含同位语句式F. 定语从句3. it 句式A. 形式主语 it is +被动/形容词/名词+that从句/to do …B. 形式宾语4. 强调句A. 强调谓语B. 强调句式：It is/was +被强调成分+that/who+句子其他成分。
强调句式特征】去掉it is/was…that/who结构，整个句子无冗余或成分残缺5. 倒装A. 表否定的副词、短语或状语位于主语之前或句首，主句半倒装(一般疑问句语序);如never, seldom, hardly, scarcely, little, on no account, by mo means, in no caseB. Only +状语位于句首，主句半倒装C.As/though倒装形式6.双重否定7. Ving/ved 状语A. 两个动作同时发生且主语一致，将次要动作写成v-ing或v-ed形式做状语，即动作与逻辑主语之间为主动关系时写成v-ing形式、为被动关系是写成V-ed形式。
2021考研英语：写作范文的经典评析2021考研英语：写作范文的经典评析一、范文Dear Mr. Scott,I’m writing to express my gratitude for your entertainment during my stay in your house. I cannot forget your beautiful wife’s cooking. And thank you so much for the splendid present that youhave sent me, and I feel deeply moved by this token of your affection. The book you chose to offer me is very interesting and instructive. I have read a few pages with great eagerness. It is agreat consolation for me, when confined to the hospital by illness. I am sure there will be a great pleasure and benefit in store for me.I really appreciate your concern. Thanks again.?I am looking forward to seeing you.??Sincerely yours,Li Ming今年英语一的大作文主题相当鲜明，跑题的人很少。
画的是一个火锅，火锅里煮着古今中外各类文化现象：毕昇、后现代、莎士比亚、功夫、佛、爱因斯坦。
显然文章主题是文化融合，属于积极类作文。
这个题目与2002年的作文题“文化交流”同类，写今年作文很容易。
像这类题目和2021年上海高考卷的“杂”如出一辙，也与上海世博会这个时代背景相一致。
七次考柱状图。
作为历年来被考得最多的一种图表，柱状图的特点是形象直观，一目了然。
我们要写好这篇图表作文，首先要仔细观察图表，找出图表中的变化趋势。
图表的标题为我们准确理解图表提供了重要线索，因此看图先看题。
这幅图表的标题告诉我们，它反映的是2018年至2020年间我国快递业务量的变化情况。
我们再结合三组柱状图可以看出：从2018年，我国的快递业务无论是总量还是在农村地区均呈迅速增加的趋
我们可以把这篇图表作文写成三个段落。
第一段完成写作指令中的第。
既然是解释（interpret），就不能仅仅把图表）一番。
因此我们在开始描述图表之前，最好先用一句话概括出图表的内容，然后引用图表中的数据作为支撑。
我们在描述图表时要尽量选用意思具体的下义词，还要注意措辞的变化。
第二段完成写作指令
give your comments，即对图表中所反映的趋势做出评论。
我们一般从分析原因的角度展开评论。
就本文而言，我们可以分析中国快递业务量迅速增加的原因。
分析原因没有标准答案，因此考生可以根据自己的知识储备自由发挥，只要能自圆其说即可。
比如，我们可以首先指出随着互联网的兴起，中国电子商务异军突起，导致了快递业务量迅速增加。
其次，政府制定了各种优惠的政策。
比如，为了发展经济和促进就业，各。
考研英语作文解析回答1:English Version:Analyzing the English Writing Section of the Postgraduate Entrance ExaminationThe English writing section of the postgraduate entrance examination is an important part of the test, which requires candidates to demonstrate their ability to express themselves effectively in written English. In this section, candidates are usually required to write an essay on a given topic within a limited time frame.To perform well in this section, candidates should first understand the requirements of the task and the criteria for grading. They should also have a good command of English grammar, vocabulary, and sentence structure. Furthermore, they should be able to organize their thoughts logically and express them coherently.In terms of the structure of the essay, candidates shouldfollow the basic format of an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. The introduction should provide a clear thesis statement and set the tone for the rest of the essay. The body paragraphs should present supporting evidence and arguments to support the thesis statement. The conclusion should summarize the main points and provide a final thought or recommendation.In addition to the above, candidates should also pay attention to their writing style. They should avoid using overly complex language or convoluted sentence structures, as these can make their writing difficult to understand. Instead, they should aim for clarity and simplicity, using precise language and concise sentences.Overall, the key to success in the English writing section of the postgraduate entrance examination is practice. Candidates should practice writing essays on various topics and seek feedback from others to improve their skills. With sufficient preparation and effort, candidates can excel in this section and increase their chances of success in the postgraduate entrance examination.中文版：考研英语作文解析考研英语作文是考试的重要组成部分，要求考生能够有效地用英语书写表达自己。
考研英语：英语作文写作分析硕士研究生入学英语考试的最后一题是短文写作，根据国家教委公布的《全国硕士研究生入学考试英语大纲》的规定，考生应能写不同类型的应用文，包括私人和公务信函、备忘录、摘要、报告等，还应能写一般描述性、叙述性、说明或议论性的文章。
短文写作时，考生应能：1）做到语法、拼写、标点正确，用词恰当；2）遵循文章的特定文体格式；3）合理组织文章结构，使其内容统一、连贯；4）根据写作目的和特定读者，恰当选用语言。
英语短文写作要求考生在40分钟内完成不少于200词的英语短文（不包括试题中所给出的短文开头的第一句话），短文必须根据考试题目和提纲所规定的范围来写。
近年来作文的分数由15分提到了20分，更加突显了写作能力的重要性。
为了使大家对考研作文有一个宏观的了解、全面的把握和准确的理解，第一天主要是向大家通报好、差作文的各种表现，剖析考研作文的命题规律，并对最新的2004年考研作文进行精评细说。
知己知彼才能百战不殆！一、细说考研作文评分标准作为阅卷老师，评定短文写作的成绩，首先看内容是否切题，是否符合题意的要求，然后看语言表达是否清楚、连贯、正确，语言基本功是否扎实，根据内容、文字、句子和用词，采用通篇分档计分，计分标准如下：20~17分：内容切题，包括提纲的全部要点；表达清楚，文字连贯；句式有变化，句子结构和用词正确。
文章长度符合要求。
16~13分：内容切题，包括提纲的全部要点；表达比较清楚，文字基本连贯；句式有一定变化，句子结构和用词无重大错误。
文章长度符合要求。
12~10分：内容切题，基本包括提纲的要点；表达基本清楚；句子结构和用词有少量错误。
文章长度符合要求。
9~5分：内容基本切题，基本包括提纲的要点；语句可以理解，但有较多的句子结构和用词错误。
文章长度基本符合要求。
4~1分：基本按题写作，但只有少数句子可以理解。
0分：文不切题，语句混乱，无法理解。
此外，作文的字数也有规定，要求不少于200字，长度的具体计分标准分析：151~160词：扣1分141~150词：扣2.5分131~140词：扣4分Nothing is too difficult， if you put your heart into it. 世上无难事，只怕有心人。
121~130词：扣6分111~120词：扣8分101~110词：扣10分100词以下：扣12分最后，向大家通报一下差作文的种种劣迹表现，以防万一！1）不通顺，三无：无段落，无结构，无明显主题；2）笑料多，出现很多基本语法错误，拼写错误；3）不达意，词汇量很小，词不达意，缺乏英语表达能力；4）乱堆砌，不像一篇文章，仅是把一些不连贯的词语拼凑到一起。
二、剖析考研作文命题规律英语短文写作主要测试考生的英语书面表达能力，其中包括词汇、句型、语法以及用英语逻辑组织短文的能力。
短文的类别有命题、情景、图表、提纲等。
1）从类型上看，大体可以划分为两部分：一是从1991到1996年给出提纲或开头句的命题写作（writings based on the given outlines or opening sentences）；二是从1997到2004年给出提纲的图画或图表写作（writings based on the visual information or pictures or graphs）。
2）从选题范围上看，大都是目前人们最为关注的问题，从子女与父母的关系到健康的重要性，从近年来泛滥的行业承诺到世界烟民的现状，从希望工程到电视广告，从环境保护到生物种类趋于灭绝，以及2002年、2003年和2004年考题所涉及的国际文化交流、青少年成才和哲理性题目，反映了当前社会的热门话题或可以用热门话题来透视的哲理性问题。
3）从文体上看，可以划分为说明文和议论文。
因为考这类体裁的写作比较符合形势发展的实际需要，在学习、工作和生活中，人们所书写的材料大多也是说明文或议论文。
4）从出题形式上看，在平稳中逐渐趋于多样化。
写作题目易于理解，无论以文字的形式还是以图表、图画的形式出现都浅显易懂。
考生不会因题目中出现生词或难以理解的短语而影响正常发挥。
从多年辅导和阅卷的情况看，考生英语作文的成绩并不理想，比如，2004年的500份考卷抽样分析的结果是：成绩好的（17分以上）约为12％；比较好的（15分左右）为约30％；差的（10分以下）约为35％；很差的（少于8分）约为23％。
如果考生想在较短的时间内对考研英语写作有所认识、有所突破，首先应该了解考研英语写作常见题型，并了解各种题型的写作技巧，然后进行有针对性的练习，并且研读相关范文。
为此，我们将考研英语写作中已经出现过的和尚未出现的（漏网之鱼，嘿！）题型基本分为如下八类：图画式、图表式、提纲式、情景式、摘要式、书信式、主题句式、关键词式。
在今后近一个月中，我们将从基础入手，并辅以专项训练，还会介绍各种题型的写作要点和分析方法，叫一声芝麻开门，打开一个宝库；然后，抽调该类型当年的高分实考样卷，对原汁原味的材料加以点评（偶或兼评低分样卷）；紧接着就是我们特别奉献的友情提示，即与考试准备有关的小提小醒，力求万无一失；最后，归纳总结出秘密武器式的最最经典的惯用表达、句式结构等，以他山之石，攻作文之玉。
三、精评2004年考研作文多少年来，大家一直都是在当学生写作文，今天就换一个角色，当一回老师判作文，这可绝非仅仅寻求感觉的刺激！最重要的是，我们要用上面讲的高分作文的评判标准和差作文的劣迹表现，分别对2004年漫画考题的高、低分实考样卷进行评判打分，然后对症下药、量体裁衣，才有出奇的效果啊！As every thread of gold is valuable， so every moment of time. 一寸光阴一寸金。
2004年考研作文实例：Directions：Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should 终点又是新起点1） describe the drawing，2） interpret its meaning， and 3）support your view with example. You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. （20 points）高分作文：The cartoon depicts a vivid picture in which an athlete， dripping sweat， is rushing to the end. Obviously， he wins the match， but this is not the key message conveyed by the picture. The most striking feature of the drawing is that the same line is marked as boththe startandthe end， which indicates that although the athlete came to the finish， a new race is waiting for him. The idea conveyed by the cartoon is apparent： the end is a new start. It is widely accepted that we should not be satisfied with the present achievement， for nowadays new challenges and competition never stop. The market economy and competitive society drives many people studying hardfor higher academic degrees， some of them even seeking the opportunities to study abroad. We should spare no efforts improving ourselves， master high technology and professional skills. Then we can make use of it to devote ourselves to society. Take my father as an example. He was denied higher education for historical reasons. But by self study he became a technician in a factory. Many people thought he was content. But he never stopped studying. He took courses of law in his spare time. Later he became a lawyer.The finishing point is just a new starting point， he said to me.（219 words）该文在2004年的考研阅卷中获得18分（满分20分）的好成绩，是有原因的。
内容切题，表达清楚，语义连贯，的特点是句式富有变化，基本功扎实。
文章的第一句，作者就用了定语从句、分词结构两种形式，使阅卷人眼前一亮，接下来分析图画的寓意，也很简洁到位。
最后一段的举例也是一个亮点，运用父亲不断学习的事例来进一步论证观点，具体而贴切，不落俗套。
另外，句子结构和用词正确，但也有个别错误，如上文第二段标出的master与improve并列，应用mastering的形式，但毕竟瑕不掩瑜。
低分作文：All things in their being are good for something. 天生我才必有用。
The place of end pointis also the starting point. From the picture， we can see a young man who is running toward the end point，it s very clearly to show that every one of us must effort and can t stop for the aim of us in the fierce competition society. As we all know， firstly， a young man who study and work in the modern society need have a spirit of to study hard and activity， to keep a good situation and position. For instance， this year is my ninth year after when I graduated， after nine years，I m always felling need to continue study to improve my knowledge of major. because， this society developing is so rapidly， if I can t catch more knowledge of now about my major， I will can t keep the continous developing society. So I think，personally， It s like the sportman of the picture that only continue to run and effort toward the place of end point， that is necessary to young people in the society. In summary， my final conclusion is only to continue running toward end place and the place is also a new stating for another aim， only so. It s a spirit of all young people. although the road is very hardship. but this is very important to us. （216 words）这篇文章得分6分，远远低于及格分12分，可能作者还有点委屈，我的字数也符合要求，也是三段，也有举例，也有分析，为什么这么不公平呢？其实，文章虽然基本包括了题目所要求的内容，但条理不清，语言错误很多，其中很多是严重的错误，如文中用黑体标记出的地方。
