高考英语为什么我觉得自己作文写得不错,却得不了高分?
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为什么我觉得自己作文写得不错,却得不了高分?(一)
相信很多同学都有如题目中的困惑“为什么我觉得自己作文写得不错,却得不了高分?” ,那么,你是否知道一篇高分作文的得分标准之一就是要能应用较多的高级词汇?
我们来看2012年天津高考书面表达中的一个句子:“这部话剧是关于梁山伯和祝英台的感人爱情故事。
”如果我们写的是“The play is about a touching love story betweenLiang Shanbo and Zhu Yingtai. ”,句子没有问题,但是用词稍显平淡。
但如果我们写出“The play concerns a touching love story between Liang Shanbo and Zhu Yingtai.”,用高级词汇concern替换表达相同含义的be about,这样的用词会让阅卷老师眼前一亮,自然也就能拿到高分。
接下来,小编总结了同学们在写作中的常用词,并对应给出了可替换的高级词汇,一起来学一学吧。
常用词可替换的高级词汇
1. He got good grades in his final exams. achieve
2. The accident happened while she was at school. occur
3. Most workers find it hard to live on the money they earn. the majority of
4. You’ll soon getused to it. adjust
5. They won’t let you in without a ticket. admit
6. When she heard the news, she got on the next plane for Chicago. board
7. They sell a wide range of bikes. broad
8. We have to do something now. act
9. He soon got a reputation for being unfriendly. acquire
10. The letter didn’t arrive. fail to
11. Luckily, no one was hurt. fortunately
12. I often see him. frequently
13. We still haven’t worked out how much it’s all going to cost.calculate
14. The journey took about seven hours.approximately
15. I’m afraid he’s not here at the moment. Can I take a message? absent
16. They offered me the job and I took it.accept
17. She’s trying to find somewhere to live.accommodation
18. Do you want me to go with you to the station? accompany
19. Everyone was clapping and cheering. applaud
20. The same problems come up every time. arise
21. I didn’t go to the parents’ meeting.attend
22. They hid under the table. beneath
23. People waited on the other side of the barrier. beyond
24. The accident was his fault.He was to blame for the accident.
25. We’ll just have to call it off.cancel
26. The writer makes a comparison between the 1950s and the present day.draw a comparison
27. The book is about women’s experiences of war.concern
28. They’re doing a survey of opinions about organic food. conduct
29. Is there a number where I can get in touch with you? contact
30. Is this a good time for you to talk? convenient
31. We were beaten by 3 goals to 2. defeat
32. You can have anything you want.desire
33. It’s good to be able to talk about these things. discuss
34. He was fired for being late all the time. dismiss
35. He can’t tell the difference between right and wrong. distinguish
36. Christmas is getting nearer. draw
37. The company was set up in 1976. establish
38. I had a look at the car but I couldn’t see anything wrong with it.examine
39. A bomb went off in the city centre. explode
40. If the system is working as it should, you’ll be paid within two weeks.function
41. She got a degree in English. gain
42. I feel bad about leaving him on his own. guilty
43. These chemicals are bad for the environment. harm
44. Her English is definitely getting better. improve
45. I plan to spend the night there. intend
46. They want to bring in a system of identity cards. introduce
47. I’ll ask my colleague to look into it. investigate
48. He didn’t know much about American history. have much knowledge of / about
49. They behaved in a very reasonable way. manner
50. Maybe this explains why the figure is so high. perhaps
51. The light means that fuel supplies are low. indicate
52. This is a secure way of storing information. method
53. The rent is reasonable and, what’s more, the location is perfect. moreover
54. He was spotted going into a restaurant with a well-known footballer. observe
55. You have to get permission from your parents. obtain
56. Work takes up most of her time. occupy。