人教版高一英语必修一建议信how-to-write-letters-of-advice

Lead in
Suggestions: You can…/Why not…/You’d better…
I called the policeman and
wrote a letter of advice to the government.
Dear lucy,
I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble adapting to your new
How many paragraphs did I write in the passage?
What is each paragraph about?
My letter
Structure
I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble adapting to Para.1 your new school life in America. I'm writing this letter to purpose
help to make life more interesting. By doing this，you will be happier
with your new life soon.
I hope you will find these ideas useful.
Yours， Hou Tao
Analyze the structure of the letter
trouble adapting to your new school life your letter.
in America. I'm writing this letter to offer Having received your letter,I know...

Yours, ______
Dear ________ 建议信的模式 It is nice to receive your letter. You have asked me for my advice about your problem.Here is my advice. Firstly, it is important to_____________(建议1） If you do this,___________________(建议1的原因). Secondly, you should ______________（建议2) . In this way, You can_____________(建议2的原因). At last, it would be a good idea to _____（建议3）。 By doing this, you can_____________(建议3的原因) I hope you will find these ideas useful.
4. join club/ join in activities
4. make more friends
Your for Xiao Dong How toadvice join the advice and its reason into a sentence
Reasons: Advice： 1. get to know different 1. join in discussions people and let them see you and show interest in others’ are friendly ideas 2. find classmates with 2. ask people their likes and the same interest dislikes 3. let others know more 3.share your feelings with about you others 4. make more friends 4. join club/join in acticities Useful sentence patterns(可用到回答的句型）

Besides, keeping a dairy is also a good choice, as it can improve your writing skills. I hope you will find my suggestions helpful and useful and make great progress in Chinese. Yours, Li Hua
Dear Peter, I'm glad that you are interested in learning Chinese and I would like to offer you the following tips. To begin with, it is a good idea to make more Chinese friends in you daily life. You can pracice your spoken Chinese with them. What's more, it would be wise to listen to Chinese songs and watch Chinese movies. They can make you have a better understanding of Chinese culture.
开头句： 1. 我知道你在....方面有困难，我想给你提如下 一些建议。 I have known that you have some trouble (doing sth) and I would like to give/offer you the following suggestions. 2. 当涉及/关于...，我的建议如下。 When it comes to/As for .. the following are my suggestions. 3. 我写这封信的目的是给你一些建议。 I'm writing to give you some suggestions/ advice/tips.

Would you please have some special smart phones designed and produced f or the old?
Yours， Li Hua
本课结束
Unit 1 Teenage Life
Period Five Writing—Write a letter of advice
PART 1 技法点拨 PART 2 写作训练
Hale Waihona Puke PART 1技法点拨
◆写作指导
本单元的写作任务是写建议信。建议信是常用的书信形式之一，主要用来 针对收集的一方存在的某一问题提出自己的合理化建议，从而达到帮助对方解 决问题的目的。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。
1.首段：表明写作意图。首先应该简单地就对方对自己的信任表示感谢， 亦可表明自己的诚意。建议信的开头必须指明建议的前提和事情的原委，对自 己的立场作解释。
2.主体段落：应该首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对 具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。千万注意不要让别人以为你是在投诉，而不是 提建议。
5.人口老龄化使得我们国家老年人越来越多。 The aging of the population makes our country have more and more old people. 6.老年人组成了一个庞大的消费群体。 Those old people make up a big consumer group.
◆组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词 左右的英语短文。
参考范文 Dear Sir/Madam， I’m a high school student and I’d like to make a proposal today. Smart phones become more and more popular with people but these smart phones are difficult for many old people to operate.So I wonder if your company could make some special smart phones that are easy to use for the old. Firstly，the aging of the population makes our country have more and more old people，who make up a big consumer group.Secondly，most old people are eager to catch up with the development of science and technology.A smart phone will be of great help in some way.Thus，old people need their own smart phones.

Writing
How to write a proposal letter ---建议信
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Miss Wang has received a letter from Xiao Dong.(Book P6) He is also asking for some advice. Read the letter carefully and help Miss Wang answer it.
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Read the letter and answer the
questions.
1. What problem does Xiao Dong have? 2. What is Xiao Dong asking for? 1. He is not good at communicating with people
to get to know different people and let them see you are friendly
3. …
…
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Ideas
Why
1. to ask people their likes to find classmates with the
and dislikes
same interests
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A Good Writing
1. The handwriting is good. 2. The structure is reasonable. 3. Include all information. 4. Correct grammar. 5. Use linking words and different sentence patterns. 6. 100 words.
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题材：a letter
人称 Person (The first/ third person…)
时态：Tense (the simple present tense) 要点：…
第一步：审题
养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但 审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题： 思考的问题 第几人称？（person） 文章的题材是什么？ 样题分析 第一人称 一封信
学校和一所小学毗邻，对着 政 府应采取措施 , 大街，高峰期交通繁忙；加 如修天桥等。 之孩子小 , 家长接送。交通 更拥挤；学生过街在车辆中 穿行危险。 参考词汇: 穿行 thread one’s way 天桥 overpass
第一步: What must we pay attention to when writing an article ?
适当运用模板
Dear Bob, I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to (引出主题). Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to . Then, it also helps to . Besides, it should be a good idea to . You can also . (此三句不同的句式提出建议) As to , I suggest (有时根据需要 具体到某一反面). In addition, (其他建 议). I'm sure (预测可能的结果，给对 方以行动的信心和决心). I'm looking forward to (表达愿望). Sincerely yours, Li Hua

Task 1: Brainstorming Watch the video and find the answer to the question.
1.What’s Riley’s problem? (Individual work) 2.What suggestions or advice would you give to Riley? (pair work)
sentence patterns
A. state your purpose
1. I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on… 2. I am writing to express my views concerning… 3. Knowing that…, I’d like to give some suggestions.
Dear Riley, I’m sorry that you are having trouble in making friends. ___________, the situation is easy to change if 1: you take my advice. Here are some tips to help you: 2 Firstly, ___________ more outgoing and take part in your classmates’ activities. Then more classmates will know you and they will find that you are friendly and would like to make friends with you._______, you should 3 be helpful. You are welcome since you are always there 4 when others are in trouble. __________, you will also get happiness from helping others._______________, 5 __________________a good listener. ____________, 6 7 your classmates would like to communicate with ou whether they are happy or sad. Then, you will be good friends. I hope you will find these proposals helpful. Yours, Miss Zhao

Part2 Ideas and reasons

1. First(ly), why not…? If you do this, …. 2. Second(ly), you should /can… Then/ That way, … 3. Third(ly), it would be a good idea if… By doing this, ….
表目的：
For this reason / purpose, … For the purpose of … …… so that …… in order to / so as to……
常见连接词
表总结：
/ In short, / In brief, / In conclusion, / In a word, / All in all, / In general, / In summary, /
To befriendly to others To show interest in others’ ideas
How to write a letter of advice?
Part1 Introduction 1.I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble/difficulties/problems in…. 2.I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on… 3.I’m writing to offer you some advice on… 4. Here are some suggestions./Here are some tips to help you.
to my classmates, I still find it hard to make

Advice
reasons
1. to ask people their likes 1. to find classmates with
and dislikes
the same interest
2. to join in discussions 2. to get to know different
Firstly, ____________, because________. Secondly,
you’d better________________, because_________.
Thirdly,
you’d better
_________________. Only in this way can you __________. What’s more, _____.
Best wishes to you.
Yours,
Lihua
❖Read Xiao Dong’s letter on page 7 and answer: ❖What is Xiao Dong’s problem?
Problems 1. He’s not good at communicating with people. 2. He finds it hard to make friendswith his classmates. 3. He feels lonely
第二段：
Suggestions
常见连接词——罗列观点
firstly, first of all, in the first place, to begin with, above all, for one thing
secondly, besides, moreover, in addition, what's more furthermore for another,

Summary
What have we learned today?
Put your smartphone aside and cherish your time and people around you.
手机成瘾 smartphone addiction
sentence patterns A. state your purpose
1. I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on… 2. I am writing to express my views concerning… 3. Knowing that…, I’d like to give some suggestions.
Language sentence structure ★★
Make no grammar mistakes ★★ Handwriting clear and neat ★★
writing
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