2019届高考英语二轮复习与策略讲练:专题3 应用文写作 类型2 建议信
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建议信1.近来抖音视频在青少年中间颇为流行,有些青少午甚至看抖音视频着迷,耽误了学习,荒废了学业。
假定你是某国际高中的学生会主席,请你准备一篇发言稿,在学生会的例会上致辞。
内容包括;1. 抖音视频(Tik Tok Short Video) 的流行;2. 抖音对青少年成长的危害;3,可以发展哪些更有益身心的爱好。
注意:1.词数100-120左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Good afternoon, everyone!_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ __________Thank you for your listening!2.假如你是某初中英语教师Mr. Wang,你以前的学生李华进入高中之后,觉得英语学起来比较费劲,苦恼之余向你写信求助。
请你给他写一封回信,给他提供一些英语学习方面的建议。
提示如下:1.学习英语的必要性;2.介绍日常学习生活中能够学好英语的方法:如扩大词汇量,多用英语与人交流等;3.劝他不要轻易放弃,只要坚持就能取得进步。
2019届二轮复习书面表达建议信(一)写作指导例析假设你是李华,最近你校根据学生的爱好和兴趣,开展了许多课外活动。
请你用英语给校报写一封建议信,内容应包括:1.列举你们学校开展的三项课外活动;2.介绍你感兴趣的活动,说明原因及这些活动带给你的益处;3.请你就如何选择课外活动提出两条建议。
注意:1.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;2.词数100左右,信的格式已给出,不计入总词数;3.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear editor,Yours,Li Hua [题目要求][四步写作]一、定人称、定时态,审题快而不偏人称以第一人称为主,主要时态用一般现在时二、列提纲、准写词,要点全而不漏1.学校开展的课外活动①课外活动afterclass_activities②例如 such_as2.你感兴趣的活动,说明原因及这些活动带给你的益处①对……感兴趣 be_interested_in②提高英语口语 improve_one’s_spoken_English③吸引某人 appeal_to_sb.3.给别的同学提建议①最好做某事 had_better_do_sth.②充分利用 make_the_best_of三、由词汇、组成句,表达亮而不俗1.如今,课外活动在高中正变得越来越受欢迎。
Nowadays, afterclass activities are becoming increasingly popular in senior high school.2.我们学校有各种各样的课外活动,如英语角、阳光电台、快乐阅读俱乐部等。
We h ave many kinds of afterclass activities in our school, such as the English Corner, Sunshine Radio Station, Happy Reading Club and so on.3.我对英语角感兴趣,因为它不仅可以帮助我交一些新朋友,也可以提高我的英语口语。
1.技法点拨(1)题型特点及写作步骤建议信是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议和忠告。
建议信可能是写给个人,也可能是写给某个组织或机构。
信的内容要包括写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由等。
建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。
具体写作步骤一般是“三段式”,通常以firstl y, secondly, thirdly或to begin/start with, then,later,last but not least等依次陈述建议,具体为:第一段:陈述事由,表明写作意图。
第二段:应该首先肯定对方的优点,然后指出需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体的建议或忠告。
第三段:对提出的建议进行总结。
要注意有礼貌,使对方容易接受。
(2)写作注意事项建议信要写出写信的原因、建议的内容及提出建议的理由。
提出的理由要入情入理,语气一定要礼貌当先。
建议的角度要多样化,避免重复。
可从政治、经济、文化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建议;基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。
(3)句式积累①段首常用语I am writing to express my views concerning ...You have asked for my advice about ... and I will try to make some suggestions.②表达建议常用语I think the most suitable ... for you is ...I would like to suggest that ...You'd better ... /It's better to ...As far as I am concerned ... /In my opinion ...For one thing ...; for another ...If I were you, I would ...It seems to me that you could ...③段尾常用语I think it would be more beneficial if you could ...I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration.I hope you will find these proposals/ suggestions/recommendations practical/ useful/ helpful.I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions.2.经典范文你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行,有两条线路可以选择:“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。
建议信1.学校英文报正在开展以How to Stop Procrastination为主题的征文比赛。
请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:1. 拖延症的危害;2. 分析拖延的原因;3. 提出合理建议。
注意:1.词数100左右;2. 短文的题目和首句已为你写好。
procrastinate 拖延_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 2.“双减(double reduction)”之后,如何让我们的业余时间过得快乐而有意义?假定你是李华,请你从阅读、运动、参加社团等方面给校报英语专栏写一篇短文,为同学们提供一些建议并说明理由。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _3.假定你是李华。
高考英语应用文写作练习与讲解一、回复信:学校晚会的节目准备过程(浙南名校联盟寒假返校联考2023学年第二学期高一年级)假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Olivia获知你的班级参加了学校举办的晚会,写信向你了解节目准备的过程。
请你写一封回信,内容包括:1.准备过程;2.你的感受。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Olivia,Yours,Li Hua写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般过去时。
2.写作思路:三段论。
第一段开门见上表明写信目的——介绍班级在晚会的节目准备;第二段介绍准备的具体过程(要点1)和我的感受(要点2);第三段期待分享对方的活动。
【参考范文】Dear Olivia,Learning that you take a great interest in my class’s participation in the school party, I’m writing to share it with you.The performance of my class is poetry recitation. Full preparations were made to perfect the performance and each individual did his job. With the recitation text ready, the presenter was in charge of leading the introduction of the background of the poem, and the reciters were responsible for the recitation and tried to figure out the emotion and artistic conception behind the poem. Plus some students with artistic talents were selected to give a dance and Chinese zither performance to make the program more poetic. The performance witnessed my cultivation of teamwork spirit and promotion of my class identity.Are there any interesting activities in your school? Looking forward to your sharing. (135 words)Yours,Li Hua【中文翻译】亲爱的奥利维亚:听说你对我们班参加学校晚会的事情很感兴趣,我写信和你分享下相关情况。
2019年高考英语二轮复习专题六应用文写作常见文体4【建议信】一、写作架构要规范建议信是生活中常见的一种文体,是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议或忠告。
建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确,具有合理性和说服力。
具体写作步骤一般是“三段式”,通常以firstly, secondly, thirdly或to begin/start with, then, later, last but not least 等依次陈述建议。
具体写作结构为:二、靓点句式背一番(一)开头常用语1.I know you have trouble in ...after reading your letter. I am writing to give you some suggestions/offer you some advice.在读了你的信后,我知道你在……上有困难。
我写这封信的目的是给你一些建议/忠告。
2.You’ve asked me for advice with regard to/regarding ...and I’ll try to make some useful suggestions here.关于……你向我征求建议,在此,我尽力提出一些有用的建议。
(二)主体部分常用语1.The following are my suggestions./My suggestions are as follows.我的建议如下。
2.In my opinion/Personally/As far as I’m concerned, it would be wise to take the following action.在我看来,采取如下行动是明智的。
3.I think it would be more beneficial if you could ...我认为如果你能……可能会更有利。
(三)结尾常用语1.I hope you will find these suggestions helpful./I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you.我希望你会发现这些建议有帮助。
2019年高考英语二轮复习应用文写作2《建议信》精练卷及参考答案1、假定你是李华。
新落成的外文书店为增加访客量现向市民征求建议,请给书店经理Mr. Davis写一封建议信,内容包括:1.拥有宽敞的空间以提供良好的阅读体验;2.提供咨询、讲座等服务;3.其他建议(至少一条)。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ______2、假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Alice来信说她因为要参加一次重要考试,最近出现了头晕、睡眠不好的焦虑症状。
请根据以下要点,给她写一封书信提一些建议。
信的内容应包括下列要点:1.正确认识考试;2.积极为考试做准备;3.注意劳逸结合(例如:运动、睡眠等)。
建议心语料库第一段:照应来信+写作目的第二段:提出建议+说明理由第三段:表达祝愿与期望必备词汇:1.functional/beneficial/effective adj.实用的;有效的2.constructive adj .建设性的3.means/ measure/ approach方法4.with regard to/concerning/regarding/of关于…5.proposal n .建议,提议propose v .6.remend v.建议remendation n.7.tackle/handle/ settle v.解决8.cope with/deal with应对,处理【高级建议句型】1.be supposed to do= should※ You are supposed to get rid of the feelings of being frustrated in order to keep a positive attitude towards life.2.You may consider doing sth.※ You may consider playing less game.3.It is beneficial for you to do sth.※ It is beneficial for you to take part in afterclass activities actively, building a relationship with your classmates.4.I think it would be more beneficial if you could do sth.※ I think it would be more beneficial if you could eat less snacks and sleep more.5.What you need to do first is to do sth.※ What you need to do first is to talk to someone you trust about how you feel, which is a good way of releasing your anger.6.I highly remend that you should do sth.7.sth. is an effective means to do sth.※ Physical exercise is an effective way to release/ relieve your mental stress.8.Only when you …/through …/by … can you …※ Only when you make some Chinese friends and often chat with them can you have enough chance to practice you Chinese.9.If I were you/WereIyou,I would …※ Were Iyou, Iwould talk to my parents about my true feelings.Beginning写信背景(引出对方需要建议的主题)+写信目的I’m glad to receive your letter asking for advice on …I’m writing to express my views about...I have received your letter saying …Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble in…I feel that it is my duty to make some suggestions concerning it.Main body提出建议+说明理由As far as I’m concerned, it would be wise of you to ... / I think it will be benificial to...It is necessary for you to.../If I were you, I would…/It should be a good idea to do…When it es to…,my suggestions are as follows. /I think it would be more beneficial if you could…Ending表达祝愿与期望I hope you will find these suggestions useful. /I hope my suggestions will meet with your approval.I sincerely hope my advice will be of some help for you. / I hope that you can take my suggestions into consideration.I would appreciate it if you could consider my suggestionsSentence patterns to give advice1. Why not do ... / Why don’t you do...2. How about/What about doing ... ?3. You’d better do.../You’d better not do...4. It’s necessary to do...5. You need/should/can/must/needn’t/shouldn’t/can’t do...6. You are supposed to do...7. I advise you to do.../I suggest doing...8. It’s a good/great idea to do …9. It would be a good idea if you...10. Doing...is a good choice/a better choice.Conjunctions for listing points1.First of all,...Besides,...At last,...2.Firstly,...Secondly,...Finally,...3.To begin with,...In addition,st but not least,...4.In the first place,...What’s more,...In the end,...。
建议信1、假如你是李华,收到笔友Mary的如下来信。
请你针对信中Mary遇到的问题进行回复,给她提出建议。
Dear Li Hua,How are you? I am having trouble with my deskmate Jenny at the moment. Last week, we had a maths test. The test was important and everyone had prepared for it except Jenny. During the test, she asked me to help her. I refused and didn’t let her copy from my paper. As a result, she failed the test. She is angry with me and hasn’t talked to me since then. Now I don’t know how to deal with this problem. Can you give me some advice?I’m looking forward to your reply.Yours,Mary 1.写作要点:• 给Jenny写信,告诉她诚实的重要性及作弊的坏处;• 帮助她学习数学,使她对学习数学充满信心;• 如果她的英语比你好,可以让她帮你学英语,因为互帮互助可以加深(deepen)友谊。
2.词数100左右(开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Mary,I’m sorry you are having trouble with your friend._______________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________Best wishes.Yours,Li Hua答案:Dear Mary,I’m sorry you are having trouble with your friend. Here are some tips that may help you. First, if she doesn’t talk to you, why not write to her? You can explain the importance of honesty and the harm of cheating in the exam. I’m sure she will understand you. Also, you can try to help her with her maths. Only in this way can she make progress and believe in herself. If she is better than you in English, you can ask her to help you with your English.I’m sure your friendship will be deepened by helping each other.Best wishes.Yours,Li Hua2、假如你是李华,你的朋友Jack正在美国学习汉语。
【范文解析】(2019·全国卷Ⅲ)假定你是李华,你校将举办音乐节。
请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加,内容包括:1. 时间;2. 活动安排;3. 欢迎他表演节目。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________写作思维模板Step 1 三审定题:审体裁、人称、时态体裁人称时态邀请信(格式与套用语,三段论)第一人称为主,第二人称为辅一般将来时和一般现在时Step 2 列明要点1文字叙述部分:第一个要点(文章第一段)2活动的时间、地点第二段3具体的内容安排4对Allen的希望5最后一段:结束套语Step 3 斟词酌句:列关键词、重点短语和重要句型词汇coming/approaching, hold/take place, fancy/enjoy, include/contain, welcome/expect, perform短语take interest in, invite sb. to do sth. , take part in/join in/participate in, be absorbed in, more than, share with句型被动语态,倒装,强调,三大从句专题十应用文(感谢信、道歉信与邀请Step 4 衔接过渡:Step 5 润色升级: 仔细推敲, 用词升级Step 6 完美成篇:认真工整, 誊写在卷Dear Allen,You must have heard of the good news that a Music Festival is going to be held in our school. Since you take much interest in music, I am writing to invite you to participate in the festival with me.As scheduled, it will be held on the playground from 5 pm to 8 pm next Sunday. At that time, seated on the grass and enjoying the tasty food and drinks provided by sponsors, we will be fully absorbed in the fascinating performances. Furthermore, we also expect to see you on the stage. And I’d be more than delighted if you could comeand share this joyful moment with me.Hopefully you can take this invitation into consideration. Looking forward to your early reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua 【答案】Step 5 润色升级词汇提升1. approaching/upcoming2. hold3. take interest in4. participate in5. schedule6. more than句子整合1. will be held2. Sitting/Seated on the ground【写作模板】•感谢信模板与套用句式Dear _________,How is everything going? I’m writing to extend/express/deliver my sincere gratitude for _________(感谢的原因).Everyone agrees that it was you who _________(给出细节). Owing to your help with _________, I’ve made great progress in my work. If it had not been for your assistance in _________(对方给予的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been _________(没有对方帮助时的后果).Thank you again for what you’ve done. Please accept my gratitude.Yours sincerely,Li Hua•道歉信模板与套用句式Dear _________,How are you doing with your _________? I am terribly sorry to tell you that _________(道歉的原因).The reason is that _________(介绍事由)._________(进一步阐述理由). I hope that you can forgive me for my not keepinga promise. Can we make it another time when it’s convenient to both of us? How about _________(具体时间).Once again, sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.Yours sincerely,Li Hua•邀请信模板与套用句式Dear _________,A _________(具体活动名称) will be held at/in _________(地点) on _________(时间). I am writing to invite you to be a part of the members in this activity.The activity will start at _________(具体时间与详细地址). Present at the activity are _________(其他人员介绍). The details include _________. It will be followed by a _________(进一步的安排).We hope you will accept our invitation if it is convenient for you. /We’ll be more than delighted if you could take this invitation.Looking forward to your earliest reply.Yours,Li Hua【模拟演练】1毕业季也是感恩季,来自澳大利亚的Feinstein在她的网站上发起感谢信接力的活动。
类型2| 建议信
1.写作目的:建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告,观点要合情合理,注意礼貌当先。
2.写作方法
(1)首段:
a.简介自己,不要啰嗦;
b.说明目的,注意语气。
(2)主体:
a.提出具体建议;
b.首先肯定优点,再写需改进内容,否则变成投诉信;
c.经常进行交流,注意对方感受,时时提升你和我,否则容易跑题写成议论文,因为内容与议论文相似。
(3)尾段:总结建议,注意礼貌,盼望回复。
假如你叫李华,你的英国朋友Andrew下个月要来你校学习两个月。
他来信请你对他上学期间的交通方式提出建议。
现在,请你用英语回一封信,按以下各点答复:
1.建议骑自行车上学;
2.自行车是学生常用的交通工具;
3.骑自行车的一些好处;
4.骑自行车需注意的问题。
注意:词数80左右。
[习作评阅]——自我修改三档作文
Dear Andrew,
As for the question about the transportation to and
from school,I'd like to recommend your riding ①bicycle.Here are some reasons.
②(骑自行车上、下学在学生中是很常
见的。
)As is wellknown,buying or repairing a bicycle doesn't cost a lot.And parking a bicycle is easy in our school.Bicycleriding is also a way to do ③exercises and protect the environment.What you should do ④careful is just to keep an appropriate speed while riding and lock it after you're off it.⑤By this way,you'll feel it simple and ⑥relax to ride a bicycle while you're here.
Hopefully,these tips could be helpful.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua 1.避免词汇搭配错误
④处careful改为carefully
⑤处By改为In
2.杜绝语法错误
①处添加冠词a
③处exercises改为exercise
⑥处relax改为relaxing
3.要点一定不要遗漏
补上②处要点:Riding a bike to
and from school is very common among the students.
[自我提升]——向极优作文迈进
Dear Andrew,
As for the question about the transportation to and from
school,I'd like to recommend your riding a bicycle.Here are some reasons.
Firstly,①riding a bike to and from school is very common among the students,for buying or repairing a bicycle doesn't cost a lot.Next,parking a bicycle is easy and ②(便利的) in our school.③(事实上),bicycleriding is also a ④(实用的)way to do exercise and protect the environment.What you should do carefully is just to keep an appropriate speed while riding and lock it after you're off it.In this way,you'll feel it simple and relaxing to ride a bicycle while you're here.
Hopefully,these tips could be helpful.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua 1.高级词汇
②convenient
③Actually/As a matter of fact
④practical
2.高级句型
用it is common practice to do...改写句①加黑部分:it is common practice for the students to ride a bike to and from school。