浙江英语新高考阅卷体会-读后续写共20页

英语新高考读后续写书写高考作文改卷，每份卷子5-10秒阅卷时间，想要让评卷老师额外在你的卷子上花时间看下去，字一定要好看。

25分的续写，如果字不好看，有涂改，或者字太大太小给人字数不够或者太多的感官。

那么内容基本不会被看到，老师评分最多给9-12分。

什么是影响交际有些同学想当然的认为，自己写复杂句，长句，就能拿高分。

其实，并不是这样。

这次评分标准里特别加入了，“影响交际”这个表述。

如果你写的长句，复杂句特别晦涩，让评卷老师觉得看不懂，你也一样会丢至少一档的分数，本来20+的文章，降一档就是15分。

用超纲单词在这次的评分标准里面也明确降档扣分。

高中英语就是3500词的范围，超范围写文章，也是降一档。

所以，一定要用好高考范围内的词。

其实，90%的同学写的长句都是裹脚布，本来一个简单句就能表达的意思，故意写成长句，会让改卷人觉得很做作。

而且，大部分人写的还是错的。

字数问题不管是新作文，还是老作文，字数都是有要求的。

写太多扣分，写太少也扣分。

特别注意，字不要写太小。

写太小了，评卷人的直观感受就是你的字不够。

如果你写满格子，较真的评卷人又会发现你超字数，都会扣分。

字也不要写太大，情况和这太小一样的。

内容匹配度评卷人虽然评卷时间不多，但是只要扫一眼内容里面的关键词，他就知道内容有没有匹配了。

读后续写最关键的在于读，很多同学不读文章直接写，然后就跑题，跑题在评分标准里是降一档，其实，实际操作直接给不及格。

评分标准里的唯一加分项能够熟练运用常见的词组短语，这一条实际上是和第二天对应的。

不能用超纲词表达意思，必然有更接地气的表达，也就是词组短语。

英语日常交际40%表达是词组短语。

高中学的是常用词，相关的词组短语已经可以覆盖日常交流绝大部分的表达了。

所以，能够灵活运用词组短语，是英语水平高的表现。

对于续写，我们主要使用高频部分。

这部分评卷人看得懂，不会太冷，可以加分加印象。

英语作文拿高分本质上还是实际考试能力其实英语感觉老师的改分逻辑很简单，如果一个考生前面的客观题部分做得好，没有什么障碍，能够非常轻松的阅读并且找出答案，那么剩下的留给作文的时间肯定是非常充足的，就可以把作文的字写的工整美观，作文的内容自然就会更加的流畅通顺。

我建议：高考英语试题剔除读后续写从2016年起，浙江省的高考试题中开始启用读后续写，2020年，全国新高考一卷也启用了读后续写，据说这个题型会在全国范围内普遍得到启用。

我不知道这样做的目的是什么？如果是为了提高学生的英语写作能力，有没有必要搞这么个神秘的东西出来？教学实际真的像命题专家、教学专家设想的那样吗？首先，高考试题启用读后续写前是否进行了大量的实证研究是需要验证和商榷的。

本人在中国知网、国家社会科学文献中心、万方数据库查阅了所有有关读后续写的文献，发现在2016年（含2016年）之前几乎所有发表在核心期刊上的文章作者都是以大学本科生为研究对象，而以中学生为研究对象的实证研究非常少。

另外，关于读后续写的实证研究的研究者主要是硕士或者博士，他们都是以完成硕士或者博士论文为目的，其实证研究的效果说服力不强。

高考作为高利害性考试，在没有进行大规模的实证研究，没有进行读后续写题型促学效应的相关研究就在高考英语试题中启用读后续写是不是缺乏科学性、严谨性？其次，原本高考试题启用读后续写或许是为了防止学生提前背范文应对考试。

但现在从电商和书店的教辅书来看，有大量的书籍是为应对读后续写而编写的，而且，据资料的编辑分析，完全可以套用。

例如，有一本书中有心理描写的几十个句子，编辑给考生建议如果遇到某某情境就可套用这些句子，这就说明，读后续写不能杜绝学生背诵抄袭一些现成的句子。

教学实际中发现，很多学生受到教辅资料中的读后续写策略的影响，还是在读后续写的考试中背写一些句子套用在读后续写中，评卷老师还是不能轻易做出结论认定这样的续写作品不能给高分。

现实是，从现在已经进入新高考的省市来看，读后续写的促学效应并没有显现出来。

2022年中部某省有五分之一的考生读后续写是空白卷。

2016年，浙江省的读后续写题型平均成绩只有9.9分。

那么，我们要思考一个问题，读后续写的促学效应如何体现？第四，我最近阅读了200多篇关于读后续写的论文，都是讲在教学中如何来提高读后续写教学效果的策略、途径和方法，有拉波夫叙事模式、有主位推进理论，也有作者从人物形象创造、矛盾冲突解决、如何回应伏笔、如何照应标题、如何构造情节等方面论述了自己的教学实践，说明广大研究者、老师下了很大功夫研究如何解决教学中存在的问题。

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浙江新高考英语读后续写解 读
团结 信赖 创造 挑战
考纲解读
• 提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要求考 生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所 标示关键词进行续写（150词左右），将 其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情 节和结构完整的短文。
团结 信赖 创造 挑战

Sample
• A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day. As he walked along Park Avenue near the First National Bank, he heard the sound of someone trying to start a car. He tried again and again but couldn’t get the car moving. Arthur turned and looked inside at the face of a young man who looked worried. Arthur stopped and asked, “It looks like you’ve got a problem,” Arthur said.
Just as Arthur picked up the first suitcase and
started walking, he heard the long loud noise
of an alarm.
团结 信赖 创造 挑战
• It was from the bank. There had been a robbery(抢劫)!

2022年浙江卷英语读后续写范文全文共10篇示例，供读者参考篇1Title: My Adventure in the JungleHi everyone! My name is Lily and I am going to tell you about the incredible adventure I had in the jungle. It all started when I went on a school trip to the Rainforest Reserve. We were all so excited to explore the jungle and see all the amazing animals and plants.As soon as we arrived, our tour guide, Mr. Jenkins, led us deep into the jungle. The air was filled with the sound of chirping birds and buzzing insects. I felt like I was in a different world!Suddenly, we heard a loud roar in the distance. We all froze in fear, but Mr. Jenkins assured us that it was just a tiger marking its territory. We continued our journey, carefully following Mr. Jenkins through the dense trees and bushes.We had been walking for hours when we stumbled upon a beautiful waterfall. The water was crystal clear and glistened inthe sunlight. I couldn't resist the temptation to jump in and cool off. It was the most refreshing swim I had ever taken!After our swim, we sat down for a picnic lunch. As we ate our sandwiches, we heard a rustling in the bushes. Out popped a playful monkey! It swung from tree to tree, entertaining us with its acrobatic tricks.As the day came to an end, we made our way back to the entrance of the jungle. I was sad to leave such a magical place, but I knew that I would never forget the amazing adventure I had in the jungle.And that's the end of my story! I hope you enjoyed hearing about my incredible journey in the jungle. Thank you for listening!篇2Once upon a time in 2022, I read a story in my English book. It was about a little boy named Peter who found a mysterious key in his backyard. The key led him to a magical world full of talking animals and enchanted forests. Peter was so excited to explore this new place and meet all the interesting creatures that lived there.As Peter wandered through the magical world, he encountered a wise old owl who told him about the key's true power. The key had the ability to unlock any door and open up new possibilities for those who were brave enough to use it. Peter was thrilled to learn about this and couldn't wait to see where the key would take him next.As he continued on his journey, Peter met a mischievous squirrel who challenged him to a race through the forest. Peter accepted the challenge and raced through the trees, laughing and having a great time. In the end, the squirrel won the race, but Peter didn't mind because he had so much fun along the way.After the race, Peter found himself in a beautiful meadow filled with colorful flowers and butterflies. He sat down to rest and enjoy the peaceful surroundings when he heard a soft voice calling his name. It was a magical unicorn who had been watching him from afar. The unicorn told Peter that he was chosen to be the keeper of the key and entrusted him with its power.Peter was overjoyed and promised to use the key wisely to help others and spread joy wherever he went. With the key inhand, Peter said goodbye to his new friends and returned home, knowing that he had experienced something truly magical.From that day on, Peter shared his story with everyone he knew, spreading the message of kindness and adventure. The key may have led him to a magical world, but it also unlocked something inside of him – the power to make a difference and the courage to follow his dreams. And so, Peter's journey continued, filled with endless possibilities and endless joy.篇3Hey guys, have you read the passage from the 2022 Zhejiang English exam paper? It was about a girl named Lucy who went on an adventure to find her lost dog in the forest. I'm going to continue the story in my own words, so here we go!After searching for hours in the dense forest, Lucy finally spotted a flash of brown fur behind a bush. It was her beloved dog, Max, wagging his tail excitedly. Lucy ran towards him, tears of joy streaming down her face. "Max, I've missed you so much!" she cried, hugging him tightly.But their reunion was short-lived as a loud growl echoed through the forest. Lucy's heart skipped a beat as she turned to see a fierce-looking wolf standing just a few meters away. With atrembling hand, she reached into her bag and pulled out a small whistle. She blew into it with all her might, causing ahigh-pitched sound to fill the air.To her surprise, the wolf hesitated for a moment before slowly backing away. Lucy breathed a sigh of relief, thankful that she had remembered to pack the whistle her dad had given her for emergencies. She quickly grabbed Max's leash and began to make her way out of the forest, keeping a close eye on the wolf in case it decided to follow them.After what felt like hours of walking, Lucy and Max finally emerged from the forest, greeted by the warm rays of the setting sun. They made their way back home, with Lucy promising to never let Max out of her sight again. As they settled down for the night, Lucy couldn't help but feel proud of herself for facing her fears and reuniting with her best friend.And that's the end of my continuation of the story! I hope you guys enjoyed it as much as I did writing it. Remember, always be brave and never give up, just like Lucy. Happy reading, everyone!篇4Title: My Adventure at the Magical CastleYesterday, I read a story about a magical castle in the book. It was so exciting and I wished I could go there for an adventure. And you know what? When I woke up this morning, I found myself in front of the same castle from the story!I couldn't believe my eyes. The castle was huge and beautiful, with sparkling towers and colorful flags waving in the wind. I was so excited to explore it!As I entered the castle, I was greeted by friendly animals who could talk! They led me through the castle and showed me all the amazing rooms. There was a room filled with candy, a room with flying books, and even a room where you could walk on the ceiling! It was like a dream come true.But the adventure didn't stop there. The animals told me about a secret passageway that led to a hidden garden. In the garden, there were flowers that could sing and trees that played music. It was the most beautiful place I had ever seen.As I explored the castle more, I met a wizard who offered to teach me magic. I learned how to make things float in the air and how to turn invisible. It was so much fun!But all good things must come to an end. As the sun began to set, I knew it was time to go back home. The animals and the wizard bid me farewell and promised to see me again soon.As I woke up from my dream, I couldn't help but smile. It was the best adventure ever at the magical castle, and I will never forget it. Who knows, maybe one day I'll visit the castle again and have even more incredible adventures!篇5Oh! Hi guys! Today, I'm gonna tell you about this super cool story that I read in my English test. It's about a boy named Tommy who found a magic notebook that could make anything he wrote come true. How awesome is that?So, Tommy was just doodling in his notebook when he accidentally wrote "I wish I had a pet dinosaur". And guess what? The next day, a real-life dinosaur showed up in his backyard! Can you believe it? Tommy was so excited, but also a little scared because the dinosaur was HUGE!Tommy tried to hide the dinosaur from his parents, but it was really hard because the dinosaur kept knocking things over with its long tail. Eventually, his parents found out and werepretty shocked at first. But then they decided to help Tommy take care of the dinosaur, which was really sweet of them.One day, Tommy wrote in his notebook "I wish I could fly". And suddenly, he started floating in the air! It was like he was a superhero or something. He flew all over town and had so much fun. But then he realized that he didn't have a way to land safely. Uh-oh!Luckily, Tommy's best friend Jenny came to the rescue with a giant trampoline. Tommy bounced off the trampoline and landed safely on the ground. Phew, that was a close one! From then on, Tommy was more careful about what he wrote in his magical notebook.In the end, Tommy decided to use his magic notebook for good. He wrote "I wish everyone in the world was happy" and suddenly, people everywhere started smiling and laughing. It was like a wave of happiness spreading all over the world. Tommy felt really proud of himself and knew that he had a special gift that he could use to make the world a better place.I loved this story because it's all about friendship, adventure, and using your talents for good. It made me think about what I would do if I had a magic notebook. Maybe I would wish forworld peace or to be the best soccer player ever. What would you wish for?Anyway, I hope you guys liked my summary of the story. I had so much fun writing it and remembering all the cool parts. Reading is so much fun, isn't it? I can't wait to read more stories and imagine all the amazing adventures waiting for me. Bye for now!篇6I'm a little kid and I will write a story continuation based on the 2022 Zhejiang Province English exam. Once upon a time, there was a little girl named Lily who found a magic book in the library. The book was called "The Adventures of Magic World" and it was full of exciting stories about brave knights, wise wizards, and beautiful fairies.Lily couldn't believe her luck and she quickly started reading the book. As soon as she turned the first page, she was sucked into the magical world of the book and found herself standing in a lush green forest.She looked around in wonder and saw a group of fairies flying towards her. They greeted her with a smile and asked herto help them defeat the evil goblin king who had been terrorizing their kingdom.Lily, being a brave little girl, agreed to help the fairies and together they set off on a quest to find the goblin king's lair. Along the way, they encountered many obstacles and challenges, but with their combined strength and determination, they overcame each one.Finally, they reached the goblin king's lair and prepared for a final showdown. The goblin king was fierce and powerful, but Lily and the fairies fought bravely and soon they emerged victorious.The fairies thanked Lily for her help and she bid them farewell as she returned to the real world. She closed the book with a smile on her face, knowing that she had made a difference in the magical world of the book.And that's the end of my story continuation based on the 2022 Zhejiang Province English exam. I had so much fun writing it and I hope you enjoyed reading it too!篇7Oh, hi everyone! Today I want to tell you about the continuation of the story I read in the 2022 Zhejiang ProvinceEnglish exam. It was so exciting and fun to imagine what happened next!So, remember how the main character, Lily, found a mysterious map in her grandma's attic? Well, she decided to follow the map and see where it would lead her. She packed some snacks, a flashlight, and a compass, and set off on her adventure.As she walked through the forest, she noticed strange symbols carved into the trees. She followed them until she reached a clearing with a big, old tree in the middle. The map said to dig at the base of the tree, so Lily grabbed a shovel and started digging.After a few minutes, she uncovered a small wooden chest. Inside, there were shimmering jewels and a note that said, "Congratulations, you have found the treasure of the ancient forest guardians."Lily couldn't believe her eyes! She had found real treasure! She quickly filled her backpack with the jewels and started back home. But on her way, she heard a rustling in the bushes.Out popped a group of forest creatures, led by a wise old owl. They told Lily that she had passed their test and provedherself worthy of the treasure. They also warned her to protect the forest and its secrets from harm.Lily promised to do so and thanked the creatures for the adventure. She returned the jewels to the chest and buried it back at the base of the tree. As she walked home, she knew that she would always cherish the memories of her magical day in the forest.And that's the end of the story, my friends! I hope you enjoyed hearing about Lily's amazing adventure. Who knows what other exciting tales are waiting to be told? Let's keep reading and imagining new worlds full of wonder and surprises. Bye for now!篇8Title: The Adventure in the Enchanted ForestOnce upon a time, my friends and I went on a thrilling adventure in the enchanted forest. It all started when we decided to explore the mysterious woods near our school. As soon as we stepped into the forest, we felt a sense of magic in the air.The trees were tall and ancient, their branches reaching out like giant arms. The ground was covered in soft moss, creating acarpet of green beneath our feet. We walked deeper into the woods, following a winding path that seemed to lead us further into the unknown.Suddenly, we heard a rustling in the bushes. A group of friendly woodland creatures emerged, led by a wise old owl. They told us that the forest was a place of magic, where anything was possible if we believed in ourselves.Excited by the prospect of adventure, we followed the woodland creatures deeper into the forest. We crossed babbling brooks and climbed steep hills, all the while feeling the presence of magic surrounding us.Finally, we arrived at a clearing in the forest. In the center stood a magnificent tree, its branches reaching up to the sky. The wise old owl told us that this tree was the heart of the enchanted forest, and that it held the key to unlocking its secrets.Together, we placed our hands on the tree and closed our eyes. A wave of energy washed over us, filling us with a sense of wonder and awe. When we opened our eyes, we found ourselves surrounded by a world of beauty and magic.We spent hours exploring the enchanted forest, discovering hidden treasures and making friends with the creatures thatcalled it home. As the sun began to set, we knew that our adventure was coming to an end.Reluctantly, we said goodbye to our new friends and made our way back to the edge of the forest. As we stepped out into the light of day, we knew that we would never forget the magical journey we had undertaken.And so, our adventure in the enchanted forest came to an end. But we knew that the memories of our time there would stay with us forever, reminding us that magic truly does exist if we believe in it.篇9Title: My Adventure in the Enchanted ForestHi everyone! I'm so excited to share with you all about my adventure in the Enchanted Forest. It all started on a sunny day when my friends and I decided to explore the mysterious forest near our town. We had heard so many magical stories about it and couldn't wait to see if they were true.As we entered the forest, we were greeted by a beautiful rainbow shining through the trees. The air was filled with thesweet scent of flowers and the chirping of birds. It felt like we had stepped into a fairy tale.We walked along a winding path, marveling at the towering trees and colorful flowers that surrounded us. Suddenly, we heard a rustling in the bushes and out popped a cute little fairy! She had delicate wings and a mischievous twinkle in her eye. She told us that she was the guardian of the forest and was there to guide us on our adventure.The fairy led us deeper into the forest, where we encountered all sorts of magical creatures - from talking animals to playful elves. We danced with the fairies, sang with the birds, and even rode on the backs of friendly unicorns! It was like a dream come true.But our adventure took a surprising turn when we stumbled upon a mysterious cave hidden behind a waterfall. The fairy warned us that only those with pure hearts could enter, so we gathered our courage and stepped inside. To our amazement, we found a treasure trove of jewels and gems that sparkled in the dim light.We knew we couldn't take the treasure for ourselves, so we left it untouched and made our way back to the entrance of theforest. As we said goodbye to the fairy and the magical creatures, we knew that we would never forget this incredible journey.And that, my friends, is the story of my adventure in the Enchanted Forest. It was a day filled with magic, wonder, and friendship that I will always cherish. Who knows what other adventures await us in the future? Let's keep exploring and discovering the beauty of the world around us!篇10Title: My Adventure in the JungleHi everyone! I'm so excited to tell you about my adventure in the jungle. It all started when my friends and I went on a school trip to a wildlife sanctuary in the jungle. We were all so excited to see all the animals and plants.As soon as we arrived, we saw monkeys swinging from tree to tree and colorful birds flying above us. It was like a dream come true! The tour guide told us all about the different animals we might see, like tigers, elephants, and snakes. I was a little scared of the snakes, but I was also really curious to see them up close.We walked along a narrow path deep into the jungle, listening to the sounds of the birds and insects all around us. Suddenly, we heard a loud roar in the distance. We all gasped and looked at each other in fear. The guide whispered that it was a tiger, and we should stay calm and quiet.We followed the guide to a clearing where we saw a majestic tiger resting under a tree. It was so beautiful and powerful, I couldn't take my eyes off it. The guide told us all about the tiger's habits and how important it is to protect them from poachers. I felt so lucky to have seen such a magnificent creature in the wild.After our exciting encounter with the tiger, we continued our journey through the jungle. We saw elephants bathing in a river, colorful butterflies fluttering by, and even a family of wild boars digging for food. It was like being in a nature documentary!As the sun started to set, we made our way back to the entrance of the sanctuary. I was tired but happy, with memories of my adventure in the jungle that I will never forget. I learned so much about the importance of protecting wildlife and their habitats, and I can't wait to go on another adventure soon.That's the end of my story, guys. I hope you enjoyed hearing about my amazing adventure in the jungle. Thanks for listening! Bye!。

《一般高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科考试说明（高考综合改革试验省份试用）（第一版）》已经公布。

作为试点开头单位，2022年10月份开头的浙江省新高考英语科目考试题型有重大变化，其中英语写作分为两部分：第一节为应用文写作；其次节为读后续写或概要写作。

应用文写作与往年的写作变化不是很大，已为宽敞师生所生疏，但是其次节的读后续写或概要写作是一种新题型，之前考试中考生并未接触过。

为便利宽敞师生尽早生疏这种题型，高效备考，特作以下解读。

一、2022年浙江新高考《考试说明》英语写作样题读后续写其次节：读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面短文，依据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the wayto workone day. As he walked along Park Avenuenear the First NationalBank, he heard the sound of someone trying to start acar. He triedagain and again but couldn’t get the car moving. Arthur turnedandlooked inside at the face of a young man who looked worried. Arthurstoppedand asked, “It looks like you’ve got a problem,” Arthursaid.“I’m afraid so. I’m in a big hurry and I can’t start mycar.”“Is there something I cando to help?” Arthur asked. The youngmanlooked at the two suitcasesin the back seatand then said,“Thanks. If you’re sure it wouldn’t betoo much trouble, you couldhelp me get these suitcases into a taxi.”“No trouble at all. I’d beglad to help.”The young man got out andtook one of the suitcases from the backseat. After placing it on the ground,he turned to get the otherone. Just as Arthur picked up the first suitcase andstartedwalking, he heard the long loud noise of an alarm.It was from the bank.There had been a robbery(抢劫)!Park Avenue had been quieta moment before. Now the air wasfilled with the sound of the alarm and theshoutsof peoplerunningfrom all directions. Cars stopped and thepassengers joined thecrowd in front of the bank. People asked each other,“Whathappened?” But everyone had a different answer.Arthur, still carrying thesuitcase, turned to look at the bankand walked right into the young woman infront of him. She looked at the suitcaseand then at him. Arthur was surprised.“Why is she looking at me like that?” Hethought. “The suitcase! Shethinks I’m the bank thief!”Arthur looked around atthe crowd of people. He becamefrightened, and without another thought, hestarted to run.留意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

高中英语浙江新高考读后续写During the fall season。

XXX Churchill。

Manitoba。

Canada。

which is known as the "polar bear capital of the world."Photographing polar bears XXX a safe distance from thesewild animals。

When I come face to face with a polar bear。

I prefer to use a camera with a XXX。

this can be easier said than done。

as we soon discovered.As we were preparing our dinner。

XXX followed his nose to our camp。

which was enclosed by a high wire fence。

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浙江2024高考英语读后续写首考满分范文全文共3篇示例，供读者参考篇1Title: A Test of Success: The Perfect Score in the Zhejiang 2024 High School English Reading Comprehension SectionIntroduction:In the year 2024, thousands of high school students across Zhejiang province embarked on a journey towards their academic dreams – the high school entrance examination. Among the various subjects tested, the English reading comprehension section proved to be a significant challenge for many. However, for one exceptional student, this test became a platform to showcase their impeccable comprehension skills and achieve the ultimate goal – a perfect score.Main Body:The reading comprehension section of the Zhenjiang 2024 high school entrance examination consisted of five passages, each with a set of questions testing the students' understanding of the text. The passages covered a wide range of topics, from science and technology to literature and history. For the averagestudent, this section required careful reading, critical thinking, and effective time management. However, for the student who scored a perfect 100%, these challenges were mere stepping stones towards success.The student's journey towards excellence began long before the examination day. With a passion for reading and a thirst for knowledge, they devoured books, newspapers, and online articles on a daily basis. Their dedication to improving their English language skills was unparalleled, and it reflected in their performance on the reading comprehension section.As the examination day arrived, the student remained calm and composed, knowing that they had prepared diligently for this moment. They tackled each passage with precision, carefully analyzing the text, identifying key information, and answering the questions with confidence. Their ability to understand complex ideas, infer meaning from context, and make logical connections between ideas set them apart from their peers.In the end, when the results were announced, the student's hard work and determination paid off. They had achieved a perfect score in the English reading comprehension section, a feat that seemed unimaginable to many. The student'sachievement was not only a testament to their academic abilities but also a source of inspiration for their peers and teachers.Conclusion:The story of the student who achieved a perfect score in the Zhejiang 2024 high school English reading comprehension section serves as a reminder of the power of dedication, perseverance, and passion. By setting high standards for themselves and committing to their goals, this student was able to overcome challenges and achieve success. Their achievement is a testament to the limitless potential that lies within each of us, waiting to be unleashed through hard work and determination. As we look towards the future, let us remember the lessons learned from this remarkable student and strive to reach our own goals with the same level of determination and commitment.篇2Title: A Bright Future: The Story of the 2024 Zhejiang College Entrance ExaminationAs the sun set on the bustling city of Hangzhou, the students of Zhejiang province sat in eager anticipation, their hearts pounding with excitement and nerves. It was the year 2024, and the much-anticipated college entrance examination was aboutto begin. For many, this was the culmination of years of hard work and dedication, and the gateway to a brighter future.The first rays of dawn broke through the horizon, signaling the start of the examination. The testing rooms were filled with the sound of pencils scratching against paper, as students poured their knowledge and skills onto the answer sheets. The questions were challenging, but the students were well-prepared, having spent countless hours studying and practicing for this moment.As the day wore on, the students emerged from the examination halls, their faces a mix of relief and exhaustion. Some lamented the questions they had struggled with, while others beamed with confidence, knowing they had given it their all. But one thing was certain – they had all left their mark on the test, showcasing their abilities and potential.Weeks went by, and the results were finally announced. The students gathered in the school auditorium, hearts pounding once again as they awaited their fate. The atmosphere was tense, but as the names were called and the scores revealed, a sense of pride and accomplishment filled the room. Many had achieved outstanding results, with some even scoring a perfect 100%.They had proven themselves on the biggest stage, and the future looked brighter than ever.As the students celebrated their achievements, they knew that this was just the beginning. The college entrance examination was a stepping stone towards their dreams and aspirations, and they were determined to seize every opportunity that came their way. With their scores in hand, they began to apply to their dream universities, armed with the confidence and determination that had carried them through the examination.The year 2024 had been a monumental one for the students of Zhejiang province. They had faced the challenges of the college entrance examination head-on, and emerged victorious. As they looked towards the future, they knew that the road ahead would be paved with obstacles and hardships, but they were ready to face them with courage and resilience. The story of the 2024 Zhejiang College Entrance Examination would go down in history as a testament to the power of hard work, perseverance, and the unwavering spirit of youth. And as the sun set once again on the city of Hangzhou, the students of Zhejiang province knew that their futures were bright, and that they were ready to take on whatever challenges came their way.In conclusion, the 2024 Zhejiang College Entrance Examination was a turning point for the students of Zhejiang province, a momentous occasion that marked the beginning of a new chapter in their lives. As they looked towards the future, they knew that the opportunities before them were endless, and that with determination and perseverance, they could achieve anything they set their minds to. The story of the 2024 Zhejiang College Entrance Examination was a shining example of the power of education and the resilience of youth, and it would be remembered for years to come as a testament to the potential of the next generation.篇3Title: A Bright Future: Reflecting on the Zhejiang 2024 High School English Reading TestThe Zhejiang 2024 High School English Reading Test was a milestone in my academic journey. The diverse range of texts challenged my understanding of society, culture, and literature. As I sat down to write the essay portion, my mind raced with ideas and insights that the test had sparked.The first passage, a contemporary poem, spoke of the struggles of modern life. It resonated with me, as I consideredthe pressures of school, society, and family. The questions that followed pushed me to analyze the author's use of language and structure, deepening my appreciation for poetry as a form of expression.Next came a scientific article on climate change. The urgency of the topic struck a chord with me, as I considered the impact of our actions on the environment. The questions prompted me to think critically about the causes and effects of global warming, and the potential solutions that we can collectively pursue.The third passage, an excerpt from a classic novel, transported me to a different time and place. I immersed myself in the author's vivid descriptions and complex characters, contemplating the universal themes of love, loss, and redemption. The questions challenged me to interpret the text through a historical and literary lens, expanding my understanding of the novel's cultural significance.Finally, the essay prompt asked me to reflect on the connections between the three passages and my own experiences. I drew upon my personal insights and observations to craft a cohesive argument that synthesized the themes of individuality, responsibility, and resilience. As I polished my finaldraft, I felt a sense of accomplishment and pride in my ability to articulate my thoughts in a clear and persuasive manner.In conclusion, the Zhejiang 2024 High School English Reading Test was a rigorous yet rewarding experience that tested my analytical skills and critical thinking abilities. It challenged me to engage with diverse texts and perspectives, inspiring me to approach literature and life with a newfound curiosity and insight. As I look towards the future, I am confident that the lessons I have learned from this test will guide me towards success in my academic and personal endeavors.。

2020年07月浙江英语新高考读后续写在刚刚过去的浙江高考中，英语一科最后的读后续写，依然是人与动物，也依然是野外遇险，与2017年的那篇“人狼大战”有一些相似的地方。

小编今天帮大家详细分析一下这篇题目。

2020年07月浙江高考英语读后续写One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “the polar bear capital of the world” — the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada.Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears — like all wild animals — should be photographed from a safe distance. When I’m face to face with a polar be ar, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of those times.As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread.The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loudnoises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though — he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws （爪子）.I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter（相遇）, I took some pictures of the bear.Elli and I feared the fence wouldn’t last through 30 more minutes of the bear’s punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. Thespray burns the bears’ eyes, but doesn’t hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and, through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar（吼叫）, the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

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小编今天帮大家详细分析一下这篇题目。

2020年07月浙江高考英语读后续写One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “the polar bear capital of the world” —the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada.Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears — like all wild animals — should be photographed from a safe distance. When I’m face to face with a polar be ar, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of those times.As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread.The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loudnoises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though — he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws （爪子）.I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter（相遇）, I took some pictures of the bear.Elli and I feared the fence wouldn’t last through 30 more minutes of the bear’s punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. Thespray burns the bears’ eyes, but doesn’t hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and, through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar（吼叫）, the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

2023年3月浙江英语高考读后续写范文全文共10篇示例，供读者参考篇1Title: My Story of the 2023 Zhejiang English High School ExamHi guys! I'm so excited to share my story of the 2023 Zhejiang English High School Exam with you. It was such a memorable experience, and I can't wait to tell you all about it!So, the exam started with a reading section, and let me tell you, those passages were no joke. But luckily, I had studied hard and was able to answer all the questions without too much trouble. The questions were tricky, but I remembered to read each passage carefully and underline the key points to help me find the answers.Next up was the writing section, and I decided to write about my favorite hobby – playing soccer. I wrote about how soccer helps me stay active and healthy, and how it brings me closer to my friends. I made sure to use lots of descriptive language and to check my grammar and spelling carefully.After the writing section, there was a listening test. I was a bit nervous about this part because sometimes the recordings can be a bit fast. But I listened carefully and was able to answer all the questions correctly. Phew!Finally, the speaking test. This was probably the most nerve-wracking part of the exam for me. I had to talk about a topic for two minutes straight, without any notes. I chose to talk about my dream of traveling around the world, and I spoke about all the places I wanted to visit and why. I also answered some questions from the examiner about my travel plans. It was tough, but I tried my best to speak clearly and confidently.And that was it! The exam was over, and I felt a mix of relief and excitement. I was proud of myself for getting through it, and I hoped that my hard work would pay off.Now, I just have to wait for the results to come out. I'm keeping my fingers crossed and hoping for the best. But no matter what happens, I know that I gave it my all, and that's all that matters.Thanks for listening to my story, guys! I hope it inspired you to work hard and never give up on your dreams. Good luck to all of you in your exams, and remember – you've got this!篇2Oh my goodness, I just finished the English test for the Zhejiang high school entrance exam in March 2023, and it was so hard! But I tried my best and now it's time for the continuation writing part. Here goes nothing!After the bell rang, signaling the end of the exam, I quickly handed in my paper and walked out of the classroom. My heart was pounding as I waited for the results to come out. I had studied so hard for this test, and I really hoped I did well.A few days later, the results were finally posted. I scanned the list nervously, looking for my name. And there it was – I had passed the exam! I was so relieved and excited, I couldn't stop smiling.But then I remembered the continuation writing part of the test. I had completely forgotten about it in all the excitement. I quickly found the question and sat down to write.The prompt was about a magical adventure, where I had to use my imagination to create a story. I wrote about a girl who discovered a hidden portal in her backyard that led to a mystical land filled with unicorns and fairies. It was so much fun letting my creativity run wild on the page.As I finished my story, I felt a sense of pride wash over me. I had put my heart and soul into that exam, and I was glad to see it pay off.In the end, I learned that hard work and determination really do pay off. And even though the exam was tough, I knew that I had given it my all. I couldn't wait to see what the future held for me, and I was grateful for the opportunity to showcase my skills and abilities.So, here's to the next chapter in my academic journey –bring it on!篇3Title: My Adventure at the 2023 Zhejiang English High School ExamHey guys! So, last month I took the Zhejiang English High School Exam and it was a super crazy experience! Let me tell you all about it.First of all, the reading section was no joke. We had to read this super long passage about global warming and answer a million questions about it. I felt like a detective trying to find all the clues in the text. But you know what? I think I nailed it!Then came the writing section. We had to write a story based on a picture they showed us. It was a picture of a cat wearing a crown and sitting on a throne. I mean, how cool is that? I came up with this epic tale about a cat who became the king of all the animals in the forest. It was so much fun to write!After that, we had the listening section. They played all these recordings of people speaking in English and we had to answer questions about what they said. I have to admit, some of the accents were really hard to understand. But I just closed my eyes, listened closely, and guessed my way through it. Hopefully, I got most of them right!Overall, the exam was tough but so exciting. I feel like I learned a lot and really challenged myself. I can't wait to see how I did when the results come out. Fingers crossed for me, guys!That's all for now. See you next time!篇4Title: My Adventure at the 2023 Zhejiang English High School ExamHey everyone! Today I want to tell you about my super exciting adventure at the 2023 Zhejiang English high school exam. It was like a rollercoaster ride, full of twists and turns!First of all, let me tell you about the reading section. The passages were so interesting! I read about different cultures, animals, and even a story about a brave hero. I had to answer questions about each passage, and some were really tricky. But I tried my best and used my super skills to pick the right answers.Next up was the listening section. I had to listen to people talking and answer questions about what they said. It was a bit hard to understand some of the accents, but I focused hard and tried my best to catch every word. I was so proud of myself when I got most of the answers right!Then came the writing section. I had to write an essay about my dream job. I wrote about wanting to be a scientist and explore the mysteries of the universe. I poured my heart and soul into that essay, and I think I did a pretty good job.Finally, the speaking section. I had to talk about a topic for two minutes straight! I chose to talk about my favorite hobby, which is playing soccer. I spoke confidently and passionately, and I think the examiners were impressed.In the end, I came out of the exam room feeling tired but happy. I had given it my all and I knew that no matter what the results were, I had done my best. I can't wait to see how I did when the scores come out!So that's my adventure at the 2023 Zhejiang English high school exam. It was a wild ride, but I had a blast! I can't wait to see where my English skills take me next. Stay tuned for more updates from me, your favorite little English whiz!篇5Oh my gosh! I just finished my 2023 Zhejiang English Gaokao exam and let me tell you, it was wild! The text we had to read was about a girl going on an adventure to find a hidden treasure. It was so exciting and I was totally hooked from the beginning.After finishing the reading, we had to continue the story with our own ideas. I was so nervous because I wanted to make sure my writing was super cool and creative. I decided to have the girl face some challenges along the way, like running into a group of pirates who also wanted the treasure. But she was super brave and clever, so she outsmarted them and found the treasure first.I also added in a twist at the end where the treasure turned out to be a magical amulet that granted the girl special powers. She used these powers to help her friends and save her village from a terrible storm. It was so much fun coming up with all these ideas and I felt like a real author!I really hope the examiners like my story and give me a good score. But even if they don't, I had a blast writing it and I'm proud of myself for finishing such a challenging task. Bring on the next adventure, Zhejiang English Gaokao!篇6Hey guys, guess what happened after the 2023 Zhejiang English high school exam? Let me tell you all about it!So, after we finished the exam, everyone was feeling pretty relieved. We all headed outside to the playground to hang out and talk about how we did on the test. Some of us were feeling confident, while others were a little worried about their answers.But then, the unexpected happened - a group of teachers came out and announced that they were going to hold apost-exam activity for all of us! We were all super excited to see what it was going to be.Turns out, they had set up a mini English carnival for us to participate in. There were different booths set up with games, quizzes, and even a karaoke corner where we could sing English songs. It was so much fun!We spent the whole afternoon playing games, practicing English, and just having a great time with our friends. It was such a cool way to celebrate finishing the exam.In the end, we all left with big smiles on our faces and memories that we would never forget. It was definitely the best post-exam activity ever!Can't wait to see what they have planned for us next year!篇7Title: A Trip to the FutureHi everyone, I'm so excited to share with you my experience of traveling to the future during the 2023 Zhejiang English High School Exam!So, after finishing the reading comprehension section of the exam, I closed my eyes and suddenly found myself in the year 2050. It was like a dream come true! The first thing I noticed was how advanced technology had become. There were flying carszooming around, robots doing all kinds of tasks, and holographic displays everywhere.I met a robot named Robo who became my tour guide for the day. We visited a museum where I saw all kinds of cool futuristic inventions like teleportation devices and time machines.I even got to try on a pair of virtual reality glasses and felt like I was in a whole other world!Next, Robo took me to a school of the future where everything was so high-tech. The students had tablets instead of textbooks, and they were learning languages from around the world through virtual reality simulations. I even got to join in on a history lesson where we traveled back in time to ancient Egypt!After a fun-filled day exploring the future, it was time to return to my own time. I opened my eyes and found myself back in the exam room, with my classmates busy finishing their papers.I couldn't wait to tell them all about my amazing adventure!In the end, I learned that the future is full of endless possibilities and incredible advancements. Who knows what amazing things the world will have in store for us in the years to come? I can't wait to find out!And that's the end of my story about my trip to the future. Thanks for listening, and remember, the sky's the limit when it comes to dreaming big!篇8Oh my goodness, have you heard about the English exam in Zhejiang in March 2023? It was super tough, but also kinda fun! Let me tell you all about it.So, the exam was all about reading this cool story. It was about a group of friends who went on a crazy adventure to find a treasure hidden in an ancient temple. There were puzzles to solve, traps to escape, and even a sneaky villain trying to stop them. It was like a real-life action movie!After reading the story, we had to write a follow-up story with our own adventure. I decided to write about a magical island where the friends found a map leading to a hidden cave filled with gold coins and jewels. It was so fun letting my imagination run wild!But the best part was when we had to answer questions about the story. Some were easy, like "What was the name of the main character?" or "Where did they find the treasure?" Butothers were tricky and made us think really hard. It was like being a detective trying to solve a mystery.Overall, the English exam in Zhejiang was a blast! It challenged us to be creative, think critically, and use our language skills to the max. I can't wait to see what adventures await us in next year's exam!篇9Title: My Adventure with English Exam in 2023 Zhejiang College Entrance ExaminationHey everyone, guess what happened to me during the English exam in Zhejiang College Entrance Examination in March 2023! It was so crazy and exciting! Let me tell you all about it!So, the exam started with a listening section, and I was so nervous because I always find it the hardest. But this time, I focused really hard and managed to answer all the questions. I even guessed a few right answers and felt super proud of myself.Then came the reading and writing sections. I read the passages carefully and made sure to underline important information. When it came to the writing part, I had to write a story based on a picture. I came up with the most amazing storyabout a space adventure and I couldn't believe how quickly the time passed when I was writing it.After the exam, I met up with my friends and we all shared our experiences. It was so fun to hear about the different questions we had and how we all tackled them in our own ways. We were all so relieved that the exam was finally over and we could relax.A few weeks later, the results were out and I was over the moon to see that I had passed with flying colors. I couldn't believe it! All the hard work and practice paid off and I was so happy and proud of myself.Overall, the 2023 Zhejiang College Entrance Examination English exam was a rollercoaster of emotions, but I wouldn't change a thing. It was challenging, but it was also an adventure that I will never forget. I can't wait to see what the future holds for me and my English skills!篇10Title: My Adventure in 2023 Zhejiang English College Entrance ExamWow, guys! I had the most exciting experience at the 2023 Zhejiang English College Entrance Exam! Let me tell you all about it!First of all, the exam was held in a huge hall with hundreds of students from all over Zhejiang province. It was so cool to see all the smart and talented kids gathered in one place! The exam questions were super challenging, but I was determined to do my best. I tackled the reading comprehension section first, with passages about space exploration and environmental protection. It was so interesting and I felt like I was learning a lot while answering the questions.Next came the listening section, where we had to listen to recordings of native English speakers and answer questions about what they were saying. It was a bit tricky, but I tried my best to catch all the details. Then it was time for the writing section, where we had to write an essay on the topic of global warming. I poured my heart into it and tried to come up with as many good ideas as possible.After a few hours of intense concentration, the exam finally ended. I felt relieved and proud of myself for making it through. Now all that's left is to wait for the results and see how I did. I'm keeping my fingers crossed and hoping for the best!Overall, the 2023 Zhejiang English College Entrance Exam was a challenging but rewarding experience. I'm grateful for the opportunity to test my English skills and push myself to do better.I can't wait to see what the future holds for me!。

浙江省英语新高考作文续写练习10篇读后续写一、A farmer grew some vegetables in his garden. One day his wife was ill and he had no money. He had to sell some cabbages and carrots in the market. The next morning he took two baskets of vegetables to town. But it was raining hard that afternoon and there were few people in the street. When his vegetables were sold out, it was dark. He bought some medicine and hurried to his village.On his way home he saw a person lying on the snow. He placed his baskets on the ground and was going to help the person to get up. At that time he found it was a dead man and there was much blood on his body. He was so afraid that he ran away quickly, without taking the baskets with him.The next afternoon the farmer was sent to the police station. Having shown the baskets, an officer asked, “Are these yours” “Yes, sir.” the farmer answered timidly（胆怯地）. “Have you killed the man” “No, no, sir.” the farmer said in a hurry. “When did you see the dead man” “About seven last evening.” “Did you see who killed the man” “No, sir.” The officer brought out a knife and asked, “Have you seen it yet” “No, sir.” The officer became angry and told the policemen to beat him up and sent him into prison. the officer wanted to trap the farmer into the confession(供认), but the farmer didn’t admit he was the murderer.注意：1. 所续写的短文词数应为150左右；2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

浅谈浙江新高考读后续写体会作者：李美琴来源：《都市家教·上半月》2017年第07期2017年的高考已经圆满落幕了。

带着一丝忐忑看着今年英语的读后续写文章，心理倍感压力，同时也对读后续写文章有一些自己的小看法。

一、了解考试要求首先解读读后续写的要求。

本段落提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所给标示关键词进行续写（150词左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。

其次分析原文。

原文材料350词以内，所写文章150词左右。

一般文章多是情节丰富的记叙文，偶有少量的议论文。

原文给出10处的标有下划线的关键词语，所续写短文应使用5个以上。

续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已经给出。

续写部分分为两大类别：①半开放性质。

必须依据文章的语境逻辑推理续写。

②完全开放性质，可以根据文章思路，自己发挥。

再次关注注意事项：①词数要求。

②与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度。

③内容的丰富性和对所标出关键词语的应用。

④应用语言结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性。

⑤上下文的连贯性。

最后把握评分原则：本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。

第五档（21-25）第四档（16-20）第三档（11-15）第二档（6-10）第一档（1-5）还有最后空白卷（0）。

评分时，先根据所续写短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。

词数少于130的，从总分中减去2分。

评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑：①与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；②内容的丰富性和对所给关键词语的覆盖情况；③应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；④上下文的连贯性。

拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。

二、准确把握读后续写的特点了解文章的类型，抓住文章发展的主思路。

一般情况下续写短文多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主，故事情节曲折伏，但故事线索的逻辑性比较强。

探索未知，勇敢前行Once upon a time, there was a young girl named Emily who lived in a small village in the countryside. Emily was always fascinated by the mysteries of the world and dreamed of exploring the unknown. Her imagination was filled with wonders and adventures that lay beyond the horizons of her village.One day, Emily came across a mysterious map while rummaging through her grandfather's attic. The map led to a legendary treasure hidden somewhere in the vast expanse of the forest. Intrigued by the map, Emily decided to embark on a thrilling journey to find the treasure.As Emily ventured into the forest, she encountered various challenges and obstacles. There were treacherous paths, wild animals, and even a lost direction at times. However, Emily never gave up and continued to press forward with courage and determination.During her journey, Emily met many interesting characters.She met an elderly woodsman who taught her about the secrets of the forest and a young adventurer who joined her on her quest. Together, they faced the challenges of the forest and supported each other in their quest for the treasure.After many days of hardships and adventures, Emily and her companions finally arrived at the destination marked on the map. It was a hidden cave in the depths of the forest. With trembling hands, Emily pushed aside the branches covering the entrance and stepped into the darkness.Inside the cave, Emily found the legendary treasure - a chest filled with gold coins and jewels. However, what truly mattered to her was the journey she had taken and the experiences she had gained along the way. She realized that the true treasure was not the gold and jewels, but the courage, perseverance, and friendships she had gained throughout her adventure.As Emily and her companions returned to their village, they brought back not only the treasure but also stories of their adventures and the lessons they had learned. Emily's journey hadtransformed her into a more confident and brave individual, and she inspired many others in her village to pursue their own dreams and explore the unknown.In conclusion, Emily's story teaches us that courage and determination are the keys to unlocking the mysteries of the world. By stepping out of our comfort zones and embracing the unknown, we can discover new horizons and achieve our dreams. Let us all follow Emily's footsteps and bravely explore the world beyond our imaginations.**探索未知，勇敢前行**曾经，有一个名叫艾米丽的小女孩生活在一个乡村的小村庄里。

第三档 （11-15）
—写出了若干有关，应用了4个以上短文中标出的关键词语。 —应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求，虽有一些错误，但不影响意 义表达。
—应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯。
读后续写—各档次的给分范围和要求
第二档 （6-10）
第一档 （1-5）
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—与所提供短文有一定的关系，与所提供各段落开头语有一定 程度的衔接。
浙江英语高考阅卷启示录
2022年6月
读后续写
读后续写—试题分析
【试题重现】
I need to do something in my community in order to complete the community service hours required to graduate from high school. Some of my friends had signed up to spend time at a soup kitchen, so I did, too. It seemed like a good thing to do.
第四档 （16-20）
—与所给短文融洽度较高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接较为合理。 —内容比较丰富，应用5个以上短文中标出的关键词语。 —所使用语法结构和词汇较为丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但完全不影 响意义表达。
—比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。
—与所给短文关系较为密切，与所提供各段落开头语有一定程度的衔接。
— 写出了一些有关内容，应用了3个以上短文中标出的关键词 语。
— 语法结构单调，词汇项目有限，有些语法结构和词汇方面的 错误，影响了意义表达。
— 较少使用语句间的连接成分，全文内容缺少连贯性。

阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

AIn a small village，the parents of a little boy were very depressed due to his bad temper。

The boy used to get angry very easily and hurt others with his words。

While he forgot what he spoke in anger, his friends and neighbors avoided him.His mother and father tried many ways to make him give up his anger and develop kindness。

Unfortunately, all their attempts failed。

Finally, the boy’s father came up with an idea。

One day, his father gave him a huge bag of nails，asking him to hammer one nail to the fence every time he lost his temper。

The little boy found it funny and accepted what his father had said。

His anger drove him to hammer 30 nails into the fence on the first day！Over the next few days，the little boy found it very difficult to hammer the nails into the fence and decided to control his temper.Gradually，the number of nails hammered into the fence was reduced and the day arrived when he hammered none!Now, his father told him to remove the nails every day as he had controlled his anger。

形神兼备，比翼齐飞--2022年1月浙江高考英语读后续写阅卷感悟发布时间：2022-09-05T01:44:14.466Z 来源：《中国教师》2022年5月9期作者：甘爱根[导读] 学生对读后续写的学习还存在很多问题，在分析情节构思与文本主题不融洽的基础上，提出了形神兼备，吃透文本寻找伏笔的学习策略；从情节融洽、情感融洽、语言融洽、段落融洽、首句衔接融洽五方面提出比翼齐飞，注重情节语言融洽的学习方法，培养学生思维和文化交际能力，提升学科核心素养。

甘爱根浙江省温岭市第二中学 317500.摘要:学生对读后续写的学习还存在很多问题，在分析情节构思与文本主题不融洽的基础上，提出了形神兼备，吃透文本寻找伏笔的学习策略；从情节融洽、情感融洽、语言融洽、段落融洽、首句衔接融洽五方面提出比翼齐飞，注重情节语言融洽的学习方法，培养学生思维和文化交际能力，提升学科核心素养。

关键词：读后续写；形神兼备；比翼齐飞一、引言读后续写是考查学生核心素养的题型，有助于培养学生语言能力、文化意识、思维品质和学习能力（教育部，2017），自2016年浙江新高考引入读后续写题型以来，学者和教师们进行了大量的理论和实证研究，取得了一些教学成果和教学经验，但很多高中生在实际学习中仍存在以下问题：未认真研读文本，找不准伏笔，随意添加无关人或物，情节构思不合理，缺乏逻辑性；续写基调和主题定位不准，与所给文本脱节，未能体现思维和文化品质；词汇使用贫乏或过于高大上，与文本词汇风格不对应；过分使用背诵的经典词句，与上下文文意不符等，因此探索学生读后续写学习策略尤为重要。

二、读后续写学习策略浙江高考读后续写反映出不少学生英语学科综合核心素养差，未达到该题型的考查目标和要求，即丰富、准确、连贯和衔接（教育部考试中心，2015），下面以2022年1月浙江读后续写文本为例，分析学生存在的错误，提出相应的学习策略，帮助学生更好的学习该题型。

1.形神兼备，吃透文本寻找伏笔情节构思时，语言要自然流畅，与所给文本在逻辑性，衔接性等方面尽可能协同融洽，与文本主题整体上要一致，只有吃透文本，寻找伏笔，学生续写才能做到形神兼备。

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• （4）所给文章的未完部分的思路和内容并 不一定是唯一的，考生可以根据自己对文 章的理解，从而对文章的结尾有不同的诠 释。如《考试说明》中读后续写的样题的 结尾，考生可以理解为这个年轻人是银行 抢劫者，而Arthur因此成为一个大英雄； 考生也可以理解为这个年轻人不是一个银 行抢劫者，结果产生了误会。
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• （2）续写短文多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹 叙夹议类文章为主，故事情节有曲折、有起伏， 但是，故事线索的逻辑性比较强。这样考生能 够根据提示词语，顺着原来文章的思路续写文 章，并适当发散。 • （3）读后续写要求读写并重。与阅读理解题 一样，读后续写同样需要对本篇文章精确理解， 这样所续写部分才不至于偏离主题，就这方面 而言有点类似阅读理解题中对文章后续发展的 推断，如“What would happen next?”。
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• She looked at the suitcase and then at him. Arthur was surprised.” Why is she looking at me like that?” He thought. “The suitcase! She thinks I’m the bank thief!” • Arthur looked around at the crowd of people. He became frightened, and without another thought, he started to run. • 注意： • 1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右； • 2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词