【专项突破】2017高考英语二轮复习短文改错集训(二)

精研真题 模拟演练A(2015·全国Ⅱ)One day ，little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After looks at the toy for some time ，he turned around and found where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun to cry.A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later ，Tony saw parents.Mom said ，“How nice to see you again！Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised he r that this would never happen again.答案One day ，little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent parents.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on ina shop window.He liked it so very\ much that he quickly walked into the shop.After looks lookingat the toy for some time ，he turned around and found where that 或where\ his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun beganto cry.A woman saw him crying and telling told him to wait outside a theshop.Five minutes later ，Tony saw ∧his parents.Mom said ，“How nice to see you again！Dad and I were terrible terriblyworried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.B(2014·全国Ⅰ)Nearly five years before ，and with the help by our father ，my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes (圣女果)in our back garden.Since then —for all these year —we had been allowing tomatoes to self­seed where they please.As result，the plants are growing somewhere.The fruits are small in size ，but juicy and taste.There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors.Although we allow tomato plants to growin the same place year after year ，but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!答案Nearly five years before ago ，and with the help by ofour father ，my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes (圣女果)in our back garden.Since then —for all these year years —we had havebeen allowi ng tomatoes to self­seed where they please.As ∧a result ，the plants are growing somewhere everywhere .The fruits are small in size ，but juicy and taste tasty.There are so much manythat we often share them with our neighbors.Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year ，but 或but yet we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.We are growing wonderfully wonderfultomatoes at no cost! C(2014·全国Ⅱ)My dream school starts at 8：30 a ．m.and ends at 3：30 p ．m.They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon.We didn’t need to do so many homework.Therefore ，we have more time with after­school activities.For example，we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden.There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings.We can lie on the grass for a rest ，or sat by the lake listening music.The teachers here are kind and helpfully.They are not only our teachers but also our friends.答案My dream school starts at 8：30 a ．m.and ends at 3：30 p ．m.They Thereare three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon.We didn’t don’t need to do so many muchhomework.Therefore ，we have more time with forafter­school activities.For example，we can do reading for one and a half hour hoursand play sports for one hour every day.My dream school look lookslike a big garden.There are all kinds of the\ flowers and trees around the classroom buildings.We can lie on the grass for a rest ，or sat sitby the lake listening ∧to music.The teachers here are kind and helpfully helpful.They are not only our teachers but also our friends.D(2014·辽宁)Dear Jeremy and Alice,Although we’ve been delighted to have you as neighbors，we’re hoping to settle something that bothers to us.In a word ，your dog —Cleo.We’ve called several time about Cleo’s early morning barking.It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she’s outside.The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby.Beside ，Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day.This morning she starts barking even before 5 o’clock.That is too much for us，considering how closely the houses are.We appreciate our apologies and goodwill ，but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.Sincerely ，Jack and Rose答案Dear Jeremy and Alice,Although we’ve been delighted to have you as neighbors，we’re hoping to settle something that bothers to us.In a word ，your dog —Cleo.We’ve called several time timesabout Cleo’s early morning barking.It is difficult to understanding understandwhy she barks every minute she’s outside.The early morning barking have has been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby.Beside Besides，Cleo tends to bark a an average of six hours a day.This morning she starts startedbarking even before 5 o’clock.That is too much for us，considering how closely closethe houses are. We appreciate our yourapologies and goodwill ，but we hope that you can figure ∧out a goodway of settling the matter.Sincerely，Jack and Rose。

2017年高考英语全国Ⅱ卷短文改错试题精细解析资深高考英语命题研究者黑龙江高云峰187******** Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. beside, they often get some useful informations from the internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the vegetables！1.把all改成both。

解析：all这个不定代词的使用是作Mr. and Mrs. Zhang（两个人）的同位语，不合适，因为all是代指三者或三者以上的全部肯定的代词，而代指两个人的全部肯定的代词是both。

2.把不定冠词a改为an。

解析：当不定冠词后跟着的词是以元音因素开头的单词的时候，该不定冠词应该使用an。

hour的音标是/auə/,它是以元音因素开头的，所以它的前边的不定冠词必须使用an。

3.把interesting改为interested。

解析：英语中这类由一个动词派生出的一对形容词——v-ing和v-ed的区别必须搞清楚，即v-ing型形容词是说明事物或人的性质特征的，而v-ed型形容词则是说明人所处的某种精神、情绪或心理的状态的。

第二部分专题十六短文改错（二）ADear Sir or Madam，My name is Li Hua. I am writing this letter to tell you my terribly flight experience on BA793 on March 3rd, 2016。

The first trouble started when a flight was listed as “delayed”。

We were stuck at the airport but no one come to offer us any explanation. Seven hours before, when all the passengers finally got on board the plane, we were told we had to keep on waiting for another hours due to the bad weather! If we had informed earlier, we would have chosen to stay in the wait room. What was worse, upon my arrival, I found my suitcase buying by my best friend out of shape，and its handle were broken!I am looking forward to an explanation about this unpleasant experience and I strongly suggest your company did something to provide good service to passengers.Yours,Li Hua1．第二句中的terribly改为terrible 考查形容词。

位敦市安定阳光实验学校第二讲 短文改错A(2017·十校二模)It is clear shown that many middle school students have physical and mental problems.68% of the students surveying have studying anxiety as well as poor eyesight too.And a larger percentage lacks sleep.52% are short of physical exercise.42% of the students won’t obey our parents or teachers.Personal ly ，I think we student should balance our physical exercise and studies.Without sound body ，one can ’t achieve anything.However ，too much attention has been paid only on studies.As a result, I suggest we are given less homework or more time for out －of －classroom activities. Only in this way can we live a happy and healthy life. 答案：It is clearclearly shown that many middle school students have physicaland mental problems.68% of the students surveyingsurveyed have studyinganxiety as well as poor eyesight too ＼ .And a larger percentage lackslacksleep.52% are short of physical exercise.42% of the students won’tobey our their parents or teachers.Personally, I think we student studentsshould balance our physical exercise and studies.Without∧asound body ，one can ’t achieve anything.However ，too much attention has been paid only on to studies.As a result, I suggest we arebe given less homeworkorandmore time for out －of －classroom activities. Only in this way can we live a happy and healthy life.B(2017·模拟)Studying in the UK have been a good experience for me.When I first arrived, I find life very hard as I didn ’t know anybody here ，but I soon got to know other Chinese student at theter I became interesting in communicating with people from various cultures ，and I made fewer friends.During my study ，I chose to live in with my classmates in the dormitory.I think it ’s better than living in British family because I can meet people from different countries easy.The courses here are excellent. I enjoy the way the teachers give lessons.We are encouragedto think for yourselves，which is quite different from that I have experienced before.答案：Studying in the UK havehasbeen a good experience for me.When I firstarrived，I findfoundlife very hard as I didn’t know anybody here，but Isoon got to know other Chinese studentstudentsat the ter Ibecame interestinginterestedin communicating with people from various cultures，and I made fewermorefriends.During my study，I chose to live in＼ with my classmates in thedormitory.I think it’s better than living in ∧aBritish family becauseI can meet people from different countrieseasyeasily.The courses here areexcellent. I enjoy the way the teachers give lessons.We are encouragedto think for yourselvesourselves，which is quite different fromthatwhatI haveexperienced before.C(2017·六校)The day before Mother’s Day, everybody around me was talking about what was most suitable gift they would buy for their mothers.Buying flowers were what most students would do.However，I wanted to do something differently. As then I lived in school and couldn’t go back home on Mother’s Day, so I decided to call her and sent her my best wishes.I searched the Internet for suggestions, what were very useful ，and I read it carefully. When I called my mother，however，I had the feel that someone else’s words would have no meaning to her.So I gave in and just told my mother I loved her and thanked her to all she had done for me.答案：The day before Mother’s Day, everybody around me was talking about what was∧themost suitable gift they would buy for theirmothers.Buying flowerswerewaswhat most students would do.However，I wanted to do somethingdifferentlydifferent.As then I lived in school and couldn’t go back home on Mother’s Day，so＼ I decided to call her andsent send her my best wishes.I searched the Internet for suggestions, whatwhich were very useful ，and I readitthemcarefully. When I called my mother ，however ，I had the feelfeeling that someone else’s words would have nomeaning to her.So I gave inup and just told my mother I loved her andthanked her toforall she had done for me.D(2017·二模)Here is a funny story.One day three mouses said proudly to each other that t hey each could drink more wine ，so they decided to have a drinking contest. At last they both felt dizzy.One suggested ，“Will anybody go to the wine cellar to fetch another bottle of wine ？”The first s tood up and down then fell to the ground.The other two laughed and said ，“He was drinking and couldn ’t walk.” The second stood up. He just made several steps and couldn ’t help thrown up. The third laughed hardly and then it was their turn. He stood up and made one step, two steps... Nothing is wrong.He went straight to the wine cellar but took a bottle of wine.He stood there for while, turned backand said excitedly ，“Ha ha, where is the cat now ？” 答案：Here is a funny story.One day three mousesmice said proudly to eachother that they each could drink more wine ，so they decided to have a drinking contest. At last they bothall felt dizzy.One suggested ，“Willanybody go to the wine cellar to fetch another bottle of wine ？”The first stood up and down ＼ then fell to the ground.The other twolaughed and said ，“He was drinkingdrunk and couldn’t walk.” The secondstood up. He ju st made several steps and couldn’t help thrownthrowing up.The third laughed hardly hard and then it was theirhis turn. He stood up andmade one step, two steps... Nothingiswaswrong.He went straight to the wine cellar but and took a bottle of wine.He stood there for ∧a while,turned back and said excitedly ，“Ha ha ，where is the cat now ？”。

去伪存真揭密短文改错第一节立足整体——步步提升高考短文改错题用以考查考生判断、发现、纠正语境中英语语言使用错误的能力，及考生在语篇角度上把握内容、查找行文逻辑的能力。

因此，仅仅把改错题视为对语法的考查，是对高考中短文改错的误解。

[命题规律——知趋向]1．短文改错通常从词法、句法和行文逻辑三个角度设题，考查考生在语篇中综合运用英语的能力。

2．错误类型有三种：多词、少词和错词。

在总题量10个小题中，其比例一般为1∶1∶8，即1个多词、1个少词、8个错词。

在错词中，多涉及动词、名词、形容词和副词；多词和少词主要涉及冠词和介词等。

[解题技巧——明方法]1．四要法(1)要浏览全文，把握大意。

(2)要找出短文中的句号，把短文拆分成若干句子。

短文改错不应按行去分析改错，而应以句子为单位进行断句改错。

(3)要认真分析句子结构，从“多、缺、错”三个方面入手，进行改错。

(4)要重新通读自己改正过的文章，进行检查。

2．四看法(1)看每行或每句有无“一致性”错误：①主谓是否一致；②指代是否一致；③修饰语与被修饰语是否一致；④前后时态是否一致；⑤单复数是否一致；⑥并列连词and，or，but等前后的形式是否一致。

(2)看每行或每句有无“搭配”错误：①动宾搭配；②动词与介词搭配；③介词与名词搭配；④固定短语等。

(3)看每行或每句有无“词法、语法”错误：①冠词the，an，a误用；②非谓语动词的误用；③引导词误用；④形容词与副词误用；⑤时态、语态使用不当；⑥并列连词误用(and，but，or，so等)；⑦名词单复数形式误用等。

(4)看每行或每句有无“逻辑意义”错误，如按照上下文意思本该用push的地方用了pull。

[失分误区——晓缺陷]1．对语法的基础知识掌握不准2．不能正确分析句子结构3．对固定结构识别不清楚4．对上下文逻辑理解不清5．未能把握文章整体意图假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

语鹅市安置阳光实验学校专题限时集训(二十五)短文改错(Ⅱ)A(2018·第学校模拟)Last month，my good friend Mark got an expensive watch as his birthday present.He showed to everyone in our class proudly.I really envied him and I ask my mum to buy me an expensive present.However，to my disappointment，I only got a second-hand bike at that special day.So one day while I was riding his “dear” bike back home from school，I passed the shop that my mum worked.I saw a familiar figure kneeling down in the front of it cleaned the outside steps of the shop.It was my mum! She worked so harder to raise me! Tear in my eyes，I got off the bike and worked together with her.【答案】Last month，my good friend Mark got an expensive watch as his birthday present.He showed ∧it to everyone in our class proudly.I really enviedhim and Iaskaskedmy mum to buy me an expensive present.However，to mydisappointment，I only got a second-hand bikeatonthat special day.SoButone day while I was ridinghismy“dear” bike back home from school，Ipassed the shopthatwheremy mum worked.I saw a familiar figure kneeling downin the﹨ front of itcleanedcleaningthe outside steps of the shop.It was my mum!She worked soharderhardto raise me!TearTearsin my eyes，I got off the bikeand worked together with her.B(2018·西安交大附中模拟)Mistakes are unavoidable in life.Butattitudes towards it may make a difference.I still remember how my spoken English was improved.In a beginning，I always kept silent in our oral class to avoid make mistakes.Before longmy teacher got to know about my situation.He encouraged me to speak outthat I thought.Whenever I made mistakes and felt discouraging，my teacherand my classmates would help me figure out how I must have avoided them.Ialso joined in an English club to get more chances to speak.Practice madeperfect.Now I can talk fluent in English.Just as the saying goes ，“Every bean has its black.” Don't afraid of making mistakes ，because success is just waiting for us.【答案】Mistakes are unavoidable in life.But attitudes towards itthem maymake a difference.I still remember how my spoken English was improved.In athebeginning ，I always kept silent in our oral class to avoid makemakingmistakes.Before long my teacher got to know about my situation.Heencouraged me to speak out thatwhat I thought.Whenever I made mistakes andfelt discouraging discouraged ，my teacher and my classmates would help me figure outhow I mustcould have avoided them.I also joined in ﹨ an English club to getmore chances to speak.Practice made makes perfect.Now I can talk fluentfluently inEnglish.Just as the saying goes ，“Every bean has its black.” Don't ∧be afraid of making mistakes ，because success is just waiting for us.C(2018·南昌二中模拟)I lived in my hometown ten years before.It was a quiet village with green tree and clean water.I miss the days spend in my hometown so much.When I was in my hometown ，I always wake up early in the morning.Somepeople took a walk around while others was doing their farm work.I usedto go to the hill nearby with my grandpa on every day with a little dog following them.There I'd like to play the dog while my grandpa was taking care of his fruit trees.Sometimes I would go to the river to catchfish.What happy I was!I will keep the beautifully memory forever. 【答案】I lived in my hometown ten years beforeago .It was a quiet village withgreen tree trees and clean water.I miss the days spendspent in my hometown somuch.When I was in my hometown ，I always wake wokeup early in the morning.Somepeople took a walk around while others waswere doing their farm work.I usedto go to the hill nearby with my grandpa on ﹨ every day with a little dogfollowing them us .There I'd like to play ∧with the dog while my grandpa was taking care of his fruit trees.Sometimes I would go to the river to catch fish.WhatHowhappy I was!I will keep the beautifullybeautiful memory forever.D(2018·模拟)I am the shared bike.People can ride me just via a mobile app.So far ，we have been wide used in many big cities.I'd like to serve for people.But horrible things happen a few days ago.Several people stolesome of us without pay their bills on the app and treated us badly.They broke my saddle but even threw my friends everywhere.We felt angry for which those bad guys had done.People have the right use the public facilities ，but it is also our duty to use us with care.Designed to help the public with traffic problems ，we are neither toy nor private vehicles.People should obey the basic rules when using us.【答案】I am theashared bike.People can ride me just via a mobile app.So far ，we have been wide widely used in many big cities.I'd like to serve for ﹨ people.But horrible things happenhappened a few days ago.Several people stolesome of us without paypaying their bills on the app and treated usbadly.They broke my saddle butandeven threw my friends everywhere.We feltangry for whichwhat those bad guys had done.People have the right ∧to use the public facilities ，but it is also ourtheir duty to use us withcare.Designed to help the public with traffic problems ，we are neithertoytoys nor private vehicles.People should obey the basic rules when using us.。

【考纲解读】高考短文改错着重考查考生的语言基本功和准确使用英语实行表达的水平。

此题型不但要求考生牢固的掌握一定的词汇和语法知识，还要求考生具有一定的阅读理解和逻辑推理水平。

它针对考生平时学习英语过程中，尤其是在写作中常犯的错误而设计的，考生在平时写作中常出现的错误是短文改错考查的重点。

【试题特点】一般来说，短文改错的语言材料通常来自考生文章或类似于考生习作的文章。

所选材料篇幅较短，约100词左右，10—12个句子；难度不大，基本上无生僻的词汇和语法结构。

短文改错的话题较常见，通常是叙述一个事情或说明一个事物。

从体裁上看，历年高考试题中的短文改错以记叙文和应用文为主，兼顾说明文和议论文。

通常从词法，句法和行文逻辑三个角度设题，错误类型有多词，缺词，和错词三种，比例一般为错词：多词：缺词=8（7）：1（2）：1短文改错：近三年的对比分析【备考启示】（1）要学会分析句子结构，尤其是较复杂的句子，弄清词性与句子成分之间的关系，多从语法角度考虑语言使用的准确性，不要随便改变词义（行文逻辑错误除外），纠正错误要从同根词上考虑，如词性、词形变化等。

（2）把握语言使用的多样性，多从句意和语义方面考虑语言使用的准确与否。

（3）增强基础知识训练，准确把握常用词语的用法和搭配。

（4）严格按照题目指令规范答题，减少非智力因素造成的失误。

【高考预测】根据上表可知，近三年新课标卷I短文改错的高频考点为名词单复数、连词、冠词、介词、形容词和副词、动词时态和代词。

出题遵循的原则：＂一删，一添，八改＂。

文章共8—10个句子。

预计2019年高考短文改错还会延续此原则，从词法、句法、行文逻辑三个方面来出题，难度不高。

专题一错误类型：错词、多词、缺词错词、多词和缺词三者的比例大致为：8： 1： 1。

其中，错词主要针对实词，多词和缺词主要针对虚词。

实词包括动词、名词、代词、形容词、副词；虚词包括冠词、介词、连词。

一、错词1.冠词：固定搭配、序数词、最高级等。

2017年高考英语专项---改错题一、题型解读：短文改错题检测考生发现、判断、纠正文章错误的能力，进而考察学生的词法、句法及行文逻辑等方面的水平，考察学生在语篇中综合运用英语的能力。

二、命题特点：1）错误类型相对稳定（错词、多词、缺词三种类型）2）考点覆盖面广、分布合理3）难度保持平稳。

三、考查类型：错词、多词、缺词四、考点分布近三年高考短文改错考点分布表五、应试技巧：通读全文，掌握大意；分句阅读，整句找错；反复通读，复查验证。

六、解题注意要点：1. 核对错项时，若的确有一时难以改出的地方，可以参考所改动项是否基本符合“1：1：8”的比例。

即多一词1个，缺词1个，错词8个。

2. 核对改正的语法项目是否有重复。

因为短文改错往往覆盖面广，一般不会出现重复考查某个语法点的现象。

3. 核对答题符号是否规范，位置是否准确，看看有无遗漏符号，忽略字母大小写和拼写等问题。

2016年短文改错汇编Passage 1(2016·全国Ⅰ)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the Restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some People even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.Passage 2(2016·全国Ⅱ)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。

题型二短文改错对应学生用书P8短文改错主要考查语法基础知识，语篇通常取材于考生自己的习作或类似于考生的随笔，且话题常见，篇章结构的难易程度符合高中生的认知水平，即通俗易懂，基本上无生僻的语言障碍和怪、偏、难的语法结构。

短文词数通常与书面表达一样，也是100词左右。

感悟高考]A(2016·全国卷Ⅰ)My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.答案：第一句：that→where第二句：去掉but第四句：had→have第五句：honest→honesty第六句：or→and; using→used第七句：dreams后加of; the→a第八句：our→his; steady→steadilyB(2016·全国卷Ⅱ)The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world.If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.答案：第二句：how→what第三句：chose→choose; take→taking第四句：but→and第五句：world前加the第六句：your→our; knowledges→knowledge第七句：去掉can或can→should第八句：thought→think1。

高考英语-短文改错集训（二）【专项突破】短文改错假定英语课上老师规定同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同窗写的下列作文。

文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。

错误涉及一种单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一种漏字符号（ ）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多出的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。

Passage 1Last month, the 18th Foreign Language Speech Competition was successfully held in our boarding school. Luckily, the Students’Union organize an English Speech Competition. At first I didn’t show some interest and wasn’t very much confident. Then my English teacher Mr. Smith encouraged me. Inspiring by my teacher, I signed up for the competition and made fully preparations for it. Two weeks later the time I had been looking forward to coming and it was his turn. Glancing at my teacher’s smiling face, I built up my confidence. Much to my delight, the result was announced and I was one of the winner. But my teacher’s encouragement, I couldn’t have won the first prize. I’m proud of Mr. Smith or the wonderful experien ce.Passage 2As is known to all, drunk driving in the road traffic safety is strictly prohibited. Unluckily, I saw a traffic accident on my way home on last night. A car hit a motorbike. The motorbike driver was bad hurt and sent to hospital. After a while, the traffic police came. Under the help of the people who witnessed the accident, the police found out a truth. The driver of the car was drinking and his car went out of control. At last he was taken to the police station. All the people there think the car driver was to blame for this accident.Which is reported in the news reports, drunk driving should be treated more seriously. It often causes many people lose their lives, such as the accident that happened in Hangzhou and Chengdu. It is high time that we prevent drunk driving.Passage 3Dear Sir/Madam,I write this letter to you to draw your attention to my complaint about your service. A few days ago, I joined a three-days trip to E-mei Mountain in your travel agency. I found a little differences between your advertisement and action. As you say, you will provide a largeair-conditioned bus, but we only rode in a shabby bus with any air conditioner. Yes, you served us lunch, and the food tasted terribly and some even with sand. We didn’t enjoy any kind of shower. In fact, we only bathe in cold water. As for sightseeing, the guide took us to several expensive souvenir shops, what wasted us much time. As the result, two scenery spots were finally left unseen. We do hope something can done to prevent such things happen again.Passage 4As we all know, playing is one of man's itself characteristics. Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play. All over the world men and woman, boys and girls enjoy sports. Since many years ago, many adults and children have call their friends together to spend hours, even days play games. One of reasons why people like to play is that sports help them to move happily. In other words, they help to keep people strong and health. If people are playing games, they move a lot of. Having fun with their friends make them happy. Many people enjoy sports by watch others play. So that is why sports are good activities for people’s health.Passage 5Last Sunday I went shopping with my father. We have a lot of things to buy. We drove to the center of the city and stopped our car in the front of the shop. An hour late, we came back to the car. But it was strange that we couldn’t open the door. So we asked the policeman for help. It was glad to help us. A few minute later, he got the door open. Just then a man came up and shouted angrily. ‘How are you doing with my car?’ We were surprising and went to see the number of the car. What you think we did then? We had to speak sorry to the man again and again.Passage 6Yesterday, it was just on the point of big shopping this season. Li Mei goes to a store to return a shirt without carrying the receipt(收据）.When she got there，she refused. The salesman said that he wouldn’t take it back if she showed him the receipt. Thinking it was no way out，Li Mei put the shirt back in her bag and left. Suddenly two shop guard stopped her and began tosearch for her. They found the shirt in the bag and looked at it careful. Many eyes were staring at her, what made Li Mei very embarrassing. Luckily, a salesman came up in time and she was allowed to go.Passage 7Changes create happiness. Fortunately, great changes have been taken place in my village．Ten years ago, the small and low houses, which lie on the north of the lake, produced much waste．As the result, the lake was serious polluted．To the west was a sandy field, that was the source of dust．Better still, a brickyard on the southwest side of the lake used up a great deal good soil．Now poor house have been replaced by green trees and the brickyard by tall buildings．The sandy field that the villagers used to ploughing has been covered with fruit trees．On the lake the villagers often spend his spare time boating and fishing．高考英语-短文改错集训（二）答案与解析Passage 1本文是一篇励志小故事。

手惰市安逸阳光实验学校专题限时集训(二十七)短文改错(Ⅱ)A(2020·名校联考)My school holds a sports meeting in every year, which usually lasts three days.All of our students are fond of it because we don't need to have classes.We are allowed participate in the wonderful games and go to watch them.Whenever I watched my classmates rushing towards the finish line, I can't help yell out “come on”．That I like most is the relay race, which is extremely excited.The athletes compete fierce during the race and all the students shout loudly.The school sports meeting brings me so many unforgettable memory.【答案】My school holds a sports meeting every year, which usually laststhree days.All of ourusstudents are fond of it because we don't need tohave classes.We are allowed ∧to participate in the wonderful gamesandorgo to watch them.Whenever I watchedwatchmy classmates rushing towards thefinish line, I can't helpyellyellingout “come on”.ThatWhatI like most isthe relay race, which is extremelyexcitedexciting.The athletes competefiercefiercelyduring the race and all the students shout loudly.The schoolsports meeting brings me so many unforgettablememorymemories.B(2020·第一次质检)This summer vacation, I took a trip to Beijing with my parents.Itwas the first time that I visited Beijing, so I was very excited.On our arrive, I was amazed at the tall buildings.We went to theForbidden City locating in the centre of Beijing first.I saw manyantiques and attractively ancient buildings there.The next day, wevisited the Great Wall, one of the wonder of the world, that was not easyto climb.I finally made it in my parents' encouragement.We also went toothers tourist attractions and tasted local snacks.Seeing the greatchanges taken place in our country, and I felt very proud.【答案】This summer vacation, I took a trip to Beijing with my parents.Itwas the first time that I visited Beijing, so I was very excited.On our arrivearrival， I was amazed at the tall buildings.We went to theForbidden City locatinglocatedin the centre of Beijing first.I saw manyantiques and attractivelyattractiveancient buildings there.The next day, wevisited the Great Wall, one of the wonderwondersof the world,thatwhichwas noteasy to climb.I finally made itinwith/undermy parents' encouragement.Wealso went to othersothertourist attractions and tasted local snacks.Seeingthe great changestakentakingplace in our country, I felt very proud.C(2020·模拟)Recently, there has been an activity of “doing your bit for an energy ­saved society” in our school.Our schoolmates were highly concerned about the increasing lack for energy and provide their own advice.Many a student propose that we shouldn't waste any food or paper, though they appear very easily to get.Meanwhile, some other students think that advisable to refuse to use disposable chopsticks and plasticbags.Besides, it is also strongly recommended those used textbooks as well as reference books of graduates not be thrown away and be recycled.After all, most of these books are still in a good condition.Actually, there are still quite a lot that we can easily do.All of these will definitely make a contribution to build a better world.【答案】Recently, there has been an activity of “doing your bit for anenergy­savedenergy­savingsociety” in our school.Our schoolmateswerearehighly concerned about the increasing lackforofenergy and provide their own advice.Many a studentproposeproposesthat we shouldn't waste any food or paper, though they appear veryeasilyeasyto get.Meanwhile, some other students thinkthatitadvisable to refuse to use disposable chopsticks and plastic bags.Besides, it is also strongly recommended those used textbooksas well as reference books of graduates not be thrown away andbutberecycled.After all, most of these books are still in good condition.Actually, there are still quite a lot that we can easily do.All ofthese will definitely make a contribution tobuildbuildinga better world.D(2020·四川省九市联考)Last week, in my Eng1ish class we watch a video about the earth and how to help the environment with some simply actions.My family and I have decided to change our daily habit to save energy.Now I take a shower quickly than before.That makes me happy is that my mother no longer relies on the microwave for breakfast, but use a gas stove instead.When we leave home, and we turn off all the lights because nobody is going to use it.If we change our way of life, with my opinion, we will make a contribution to protecting the earth.Why not having a try?【答案】Last week, in my English class wewatchwatcheda video about the earthand how to help the environment with somesimplysimpleactions.My family andI have decided to change our dailyhabithabitsto save energy.Now I take ashower∧more quickly than before.ThatWhatmakes me happy is that my motherno longer relies on the microwave for breakfast, butuseusesa gas stoveinstead.When we leave home, we turn off all the lights becausenobody is going to useitthem.If we change our way of life,withinmy opinion,we will make a contribution to protecting the earth.Why nothavinghavea try?。

2017高三二轮复习短文改错考点分析本课学习目标：学生了解短文改错测试点的分布，及做题的切入点。

学习方法：分类总结，巩固高考英语短文改错主耍考查考生在语篇中综合运用英语语言知识的能力，它不同于单句改错，考生应在理解短文的基础上,，根据上下文的逻辑关系，对文中的错误做出判断，并进行纠正。

因此，该题型综合性强，涉及面广。

1、动词2、名词3、形容词4、连词5、代词、6、介词7、冠词8、副词短文改错的设题切入近几年高考短文改错题题型稳定、考查点多、覆盖面广。

—•般以三种题型出现：力口，删或改。

设问的角度有三个：词法、句法和行文逻辑。

从这三个角度考查学生在语篇中综合运用英语的准确性。

从错误比例上看1:1:8；2:1:7固定句式固定句式一、动词（改）谓语动词16 全国II： We can chose between staying at home and taking a trip.12 陕西:By the time I got back, they have finished the scene and the actorcouldiVt be seen anywhere.12 陕西: Not only did I had photo taken with him, but he signed his name on my shirt.12 陕西：My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel when we visit Beijing last month.14新课标：Since then, we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please.15全国I： Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a veryserious problem.全国II： My dream school look like a big garden.全国ii： Some students suggest we can go to places of interest nearby.此类题的错误设置一般包括以下几个方面：（1）短文中时态的使用前后不一致（2）主动语态和被动语态（3）主谓一•致（4）情态动词用法模拟单句演练1.You can found all kinds of delicious food in Beijing.2.There is a great number of tourist attractions worth visiting.3.While we were having dinner, the sun hide behind the clouds once4.I went to the station and manage to buy two tickets.5.Not only the students but also the teacher like the film.6.The sports meeting usually last for three days.非谓语12 陕西:I was really disappointing.12 巫庆：Gradually, I became interesting in biology.12 全国ii： We should find ways to reuse the water using in washing.12 陕西：I also shared many photos taking in Beijing.09 全国2： So I helped them going to the nearest hospital.09 陕西：My classmate, Joseph, is at present in hospital with a breaking leg.07 浙江：I could not to run very fast and fell behind・07 宁夏：Li Meng came see me every day.NMET98： Play football not only makes us grow up tall and strong but also (I)travelled because I like exploring and take adventures.【考点剖析】此类题的错误设置一般包括以下几个方面：(1)谓语动词与非谓语动词的混用.(2)非谓语动词之间的混用.(3)在并列结构中非谓语动词的误用.模拟单句演练I• Um looking forward to hear form you as soon as possible.2.I went to the station see them off.3.Waved goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happy for them.4.All the students go to the playground to watch or joining in the games.5.They longed see the beautiful natural scenery there.6.He secretly slipped into a boat, slept all day.7.To his disappointment, he wasrTt even giving a chance for an interview.8.The accident caused by a careless neighbor living high in an apartment.9.You are supposing to listen to some English radio programs regularly.10.I was praising for being an outstanding volunteer at the end of the vacation. II• Keep English diaries can also help you a lot.12.Is it difficult fit in with your new life?13.With time go by,「11 make great progress.二、名词(改)12 新课标：I destroyed each of my toy.12 全国II： We, as well as animal, cannot live without water.12 四川：I have never expressed my thank to you before.11 陕西：I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favorite actor.06 木畐建：If you have interests in it, reply to me soon.11 浙江：I was playing at my cousin house.11 新课标：When I finally arrived at my friend he lent me lots of clothes.【考点剖析】(1)名词单复数；(2)不可数名词(常考的不可数名词)：furniture, fun, homework, paper, news, progress,trouble, vvork(工作)，advice, information 等(3)名词所属格模拟单句演练1.You asked many question in your letter.2.All the student go to the playground to watch or join in the games.3.After visiting a few place of interest near Yidu, he stopped a car.4.I searched the Internet for the train schedule and some hotel informations.5.Here I will give you some advices on how to improve your oral English.6.This was very useful, as I had not done this type of works before.7.With time going by, Fll make a great progress.8.We should all keep in minds: honesty is the best policy.三、形容词、副词(改)12 陕西：We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath.07 浙江：I got to the finishing line first. I won the race. I felt very proudly of myself.06 福建：We can hear birds singing happy all around・09 浙江：So I grateful accepted the offer.12 辽宁：Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home.12 新课标：I had to be more patient and little aggressive.08 全国II: I will learn more about the history of the Olympics as good as the 2008Olympic games.【考点剖析】(1)形容词和副词的混用，是短文改错中常见的考点之一.修饰名词、be动词、系动词要用__________ ；修饰动词、形容词、副词、整个句子用___________ ；(2)比较级和最高级模拟单句演练1.I promise you will have a wonderfully time here in Beijing.2.The sun was blocked complete by thick clouds.3.I wish them a safety journey.4.To be frankly, it was a bit disappointing to me.5.Surprising, he didn't go to school on Monday.6.What's bad, the driver's information might be unreliable.7.So it is convenience for both shopping and entertainme8.He encouraged me when I felt certain and unconfident about doing something.四、连词（改、删、加）只有对句子结构和成分作细致的分析，才能找出连词不当的错误。