中考英语专题讲座（四）数词导学案（有答案）二、英语书面表达专项训练2．目前，许多中学生利用周末和节假日上课外补习班，对此人们有不同的看法。
请根据下面内容写一篇短文。
注意：1. 表达清楚，语法通顺，上下文连贯；2. 必须包括提示的所有信息，并适当发挥，至少两点；3. 词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of after-school classes at weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it.Some people think that_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________【答案】Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of after-school classes at weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it.Some people think that students can get better exam results and go to better senior high schools by taking extra classes. They also believe that students can avoid watching too much TV or playing computer games in this way.But others have a different opinion. They think that students need more time to rest. If they take too many classes, they mi ght feel too stressed. That’s not good for their health.As for me, I don’t think taking extra classes is necessary. Learning hard in class is enough. We just need to go over our lessons after class. We can also teach ourselves as it is very important for us to have a lifelong learning ability.【解析】【分析】整体分析：这是一篇提纲话题作文。
是一篇议论文，第一段要写目前，许多中学生利用周末和节假日上课外补习班，对此人们有不同的看法。
第二段要写中学生利用周末和节假日上课外补习班赞同者的观点。
第三段要写中学生利用周末和节假日上课外补习班反对者的观点。
第四段要表述作者自己的观点。
【详解】写作之前要1.审清题目，看看有哪些要求？哪些时态？人称？2.确定文章类型，记叙文？说明文？议论文？看图？还是应用文？3.确定时态，单一还是混合。
4.写下关键词、短语、句型。
5.列出提纲和段落，并运用适当的句型和过渡词衔接。
6.根据提纲和段落结构句型及关键词句完成文章。
写完后反复阅读修改推敲润色，人称、时态、单复数一致等。
运用自然过渡法和自然衔接法来是文章更为地道、通顺、纯正。
用短语、句型：all kinds of ，Some ···others，As for me ，Some people think that ···。
They also believe that···。
If they take too many classes。
It is very important for us to have a lifelong learning ability.来增加了文章的亮点。
【点睛】这类作文的写作方法要注意认真审题，可以分四段写：总体简单描述话题；赞成；反对；你的看法。
注意过渡性语言的使用。
做到：要点要全，表达要清晰明确，使用短语，句型要准确，注意避免拼写和语法错误。
3．临近毕业，学校在学习小组内开展了初中阶段自评和组评活动，假设你是 Moonlight 小组的组长，请根据下面表格中的信息和提示，为你的组员 Tommy 进行综合素质的评价，写一份素质报告．要求：1、表达清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯；2、要点必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；3、词数：100 词左右；4、不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight.【答案】Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his friends.He likes reading because he thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has a good effect on children’s growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school, he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traffic rules. He crosses the road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year. However, Tommy is stressed when the exam comes. And he doesn’t have enough sleep.I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. It’s better for him to manage his time wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.【解析】这篇作文要求我们按照表格里的内容介绍一下Tommy的情况，为Tommy写一篇综合素质的评价报告。
在表格中有非常详细的关于Tommy各方面的内容，我们需要用正确的英语把这些内容有条理的表达出来。
表格中涉及的内容较多，写作时要注意表达的条理性。
这篇作文应主要使用第三人称来写。
在最后要给Tommy提一些建议，这一部分应该用第一人称。
同时注意表达的准确性，尤其是表格中的第五项和第六项内容。
【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的范文。
这篇作文内容完整，包含了表格中的所有内容，没有遗漏要点。
表达准确，注意了被动形式的使用，如He was rewarded by our school this year.。
写作时注意了条理性，使文章具有层次感，条理清楚。
短文注意到了长短句的结合，并恰当的使用了一些连词，使文章表达的连贯。
如He is always ready to help others.、He not only likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news.、He is good at running. He won the first place in our school sports meeting this year.等。
4．书面表达安全对于每个人都很重要。
中学生年龄较小，学生安全更是人们关注的焦点。
请根据以下提示，写一篇关于学生安全的英语作文。
内容提示：1.交通安全：遵守交通规则，不闯红绿灯等；2.食品安全：吃健康食物，不吃垃圾食品等；3.活动安全：进行体育锻炼时，不要弄伤自己，不私自下河游泳等。
提示词语：study hard, read, healthy food, exercise, help, chores, at home,Travel Safety is very important to everyone._______________________________________________________________【答案】Safety is very important to everyone. Middle school students are like precious flowers –so their safety is becoming a focus for us all.First, we must obey the traffic rules when we go out. Don’t cross the street when t he light is red. Secondly, we should eat healthy food. Don’t eat junk food. Eat more fruits and vegetables. Eat less meat and eggs. Finally, be careful not to hurt yourself while you are playing outside. It’s dangerous to go swimming by yourself, so don’t go swimming without permission. These are some important safety tips to remember.【解析】【详解】这是一篇材料作文。
