高中英语漫画作文.ppt.

• 注意：1.仔细品味漫画中两个孩子的不同心情， 分析其反映的社会现象，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯。 • 2.词数120左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数
Step 1 Describe the picture
As is vividly shown in the picture,
The picture shows a common phenomenon that…… The picture describes an interesting phenomenon of..... This is a funny and instructive picture, from which we can see…
The following are the possible reasons for this phenomenon
The picture indicates the phenomenon of education inequality in modern China. There are at least two good reasons accounting to the phenonmenon. On one hand, school-age country children are often dropping out of school due to poverty. On the other hand, city children have much better opportunities to receive good education.
Thinking?
How to deal with this phenomenon?
Step 3 Solutions (opinions /suggestions) ●As far as I’m concerned/In my opinion, 从大到小 From my point of view,… 从意识到行动 It is high time we took some measures to put an end to this phenomenon./ Immediate measures should be taken to… ●The government should make laws to… ●The media should appeal for … ●Everyone should make great efforts to… Only in this way can…./Only if…, can we…

谢谢
11、越是没有本领的就越加自命不凡。——邓拓 12、越是无能的人，越喜欢挑剔别人的错儿。——爱尔兰 13、知人者智，自知者明。胜人者有力，自胜者强。——老子 14、意志坚强的人能把世界放在手中像泥块一样任意揉捏。——歌德 15、最具挑战性的挑战莫过于提升自我。备的头脑有特别的 亲和力 。 27、自信是人格的核心。
28、目标的坚定是性格中最必要的力 量泉源 之一， 也是成 功的利 器之一 。没有 它，天 才也会 在矛盾 无定的 迷径中 ，徒劳 无功。- -查士 德斐尔 爵士。 29、困难就是机遇。--温斯顿．丘吉 尔。 30、我奋斗，所以我快乐。--格林斯 潘。

UNDERSTANDING AND RESPECT (TOPIC SENTENCE)
• In my opinion, this social phenomenon should be viewed as normal. Some people tend to be a loner at birth.
• I cling on to the belief that diversity of personality beautifies our society.
UNDERSTANDING AND RESPECT
• to begin with, independence is the ability we are expected to acquire, which brings with it the term “lonliness”. today, more and more people are learning to enjoy the beauty of loneliness, ma it unlikely for them to socialize with people around. moreover, due to the boosting development of social media, people tend to be divided according to common interests rather than places. in other words, we may have many friends far away but no acquaintances around. it is not that people are becoming apathetic(冷漠的), but rather, they are connected in another way.

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角度 criticize
主旨
The students as well as their parents only focus on their academic achievements, neglecting psychological quality and moral standards.
Social phenomenon
Topics of cartoons
Attitudes towards life
Ⅱ.解意(theme)-----to the point
注意: 文字说明部分往往含有重要信息(clues)， 切记要认真阅读！！！
1. 辨明褒贬，找准角度 (angle) ２. 联系生活，明晰主旨 (theme)
Conclusion: When it comes to attitudes towards life, using proper sayings makes sense.
Ⅲ.谋篇 ---organization
发现问题
Step1. Description
step2. Analysis 分析问题
Step3. Solutions 解决问题
Organization
Step 1 Description （人称/时态）
To what degree should we describe the cartoon?
Example
a country boy crying long for education a city boy enjoy all the benefits of education
Writing based on cartoons
Are you familiar with this cartoon?

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If only I could keep a real bird!
We should protect our environment and live in harmony with our animal friends.
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Mind your behavior in public places.
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Structure
简要描述图片内容，
结合生活实际，
就图片的主题谈谈自己的想法。
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As is seen in the picture, a girl is riding a bicycle,
with the nervous
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* It seems very ridiculous that…However, this kind of story is performed everywhere.
* The picture shows that…It is the exact reflection of…
* The picture indicates a common phenomenon that…
* As is vividly shown/indicated/seen in the picture, …
* As can be seen in the picture, …
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Part 2 Interpret its implied meaning (analyze the reasons or results)

26、要使整个人生都过得舒适、愉快，这是不可能的，因为人类必须具备一种能应付逆境的态度。——卢梭
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27、只有把抱怨环境的心情，化为上进的力量，才是成功的保证。——罗曼·罗兰
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28、知之者不如好之者，好之ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ不如乐之者。——孔子
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29、勇猛、大胆和坚定的决心能够抵得上武器的精良。——达·芬奇
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30、意志是一个强壮的盲人，倚靠在明眼的跛子肩上。——叔本华
英语书面表达漫画写作指导
1、 舟 遥 遥 以 轻飏， 风飘飘 而吹衣 。 2、 秋 菊 有 佳 色，裛 露掇其 英。 3、 日 月 掷 人 去，有 志不获 骋。 4、 未 言 心 相 醉，不 再接杯 酒。 5、 黄 发 垂 髫 ，并怡 然自乐 。
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谢谢！
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describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon among…
1.State your position: In my opinion, it is wrong for parent's to do so.
2.Give your reasons: ( various reasons )
there is (are)… doing…
★The picture above is about …
温馨提示： 第三人称，现在时为主
How to interpret the its meaning ★What’s your understanding of it? ★What’s the common social phenomenon
As is shown in the picture, a girl is learning to ride with her parents and her grandma helping her. It’s ridiculous that her mother is carrying a first-aid kit .
• Do/Don’t • I consider it necessary…
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Only in this way can….
(Description)
As is shown in the picture, Xia Hua is riding a bicycle with her parents and grandma helping her. They are so tired that all of them are in a sweat. Xia Hua is wondering why. (details)

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30、风俗可以造就法律，也可以废除 法律。 ——塞·约翰逊
高中英语漫画作文
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26、要使整个人生都过得舒适、愉快，这是不可能的，因为人类必须具备一种能应付逆境的态度。——卢梭
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27、只有把抱怨环境的心情，化为上进的力量，才是成功的保证。——罗曼·罗兰
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26、我们像鹰一样，生来就是自由的 ，但是 为了生 存，我 们不得 不为自 己编织 一个笼 子，然 后把自 己关在 里面。 ——博 莱索
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27、法律如果不讲道理，即使延续时 间再长 ，也还 是没有 制约力 的。— —爱·科 克
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28、好法律是由坏风俗创造出来的。 ——马 克罗维 乌斯
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29、在一切能够接受法律支配的人类 的状态 中，哪 里没有 法律， 那里就 没有自 由。— —洛克
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28、知之者不如好之者，好之者不如乐之者。——孔子
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29、勇猛、大胆和坚定的决心能够抵得上武器的精良。——达·芬奇
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30、意志是一个强壮的盲人，倚靠在明眼的跛子

Writing based on cartoons
1.汉语式思维 See the film will took me much time. He happened an accident yesterday. 2.谓语缺失 He told me that all my classmates sitting in the classroom. She in the classroom yesterday. The building like a match box. 3.There be句型出错 There are five students play basketball on the playground. There are some workers are working in the field. 4.谓语动词用法出错 He dressed in a new coat. Great changes have been taken place. When I arrived Hong Kong, my mother was there waiting for me.
Let’s practise!
Describe the picture
We can see in the picture that a child is burdቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱned with heavy schoolbags as well as huge mental pressure. When he was a kid, he was expected to be able to go to a key elementary school, and later a key high school. And now he is expected to be admitted to a key university.

漫画作文谋篇——三步走
• 拿到漫画类作文，首先精读文字部分，确定写作 主题，其次根据中文提示，按照“描述图 片”“联系生活”“个人见解”三步走战略来谋 篇。 1.紧扣漫画主题，描述图片 （.抓住画面有效信息，合理发挥想象 尽量用一些新颖词汇、句型结构 确立人称、时态） 2、由图画到生活 （特点：把握漫画的寓意，揭示事件的本质或 分析问题产生的原因） 3.个人见解 提出对策

The picture mirrors a common phenomenon, which has aroused our social concern and is in fact thought-provoking. What the picture wants to stress is that some people in society are -----. There’s no denying that the picture shows a real phenomenon in society. This picture is thought-provoking and what it reflects is an increasing phenomenon in our society, one that should be given serious thought to. This has become a common phenomenon in our country, which we should give serious thoughts to.
Practise !
Practise
• As is vividly betrayed in the drawing above, a student is trying his best to reach the full score of important subjects including English, maths, physics, and Chinese while neglecting the more important aspects such as psychological quality and moral standards. This drawing mirrors a common social phenomenon, which has aroused our social concern and is in fact thoughtprovoking.

• We are busy with our work all day long.
• Some don’t want to get in touch with others
• People often stay at home watching TV or playing computer games.
找关键词，关键句
• 1.紧扣漫画主题
• 2.抓住画面有效信息，合理发 挥想象
• 3.尽量用一些新颖词汇、句型 结构
• 4.确立人称、时态
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1.Parents desire that their chidren shall be equipped with much knowledge.
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Topic for cartoon 2
• People don’t like to communicate with others in modern days,just staying closed to themselves.
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5.They want them to be more intelligent than others’ chidren.
6.They educate them too early, sometimes wrongly.
7.T2h009e-12y-24should give their children reasonabl1e2
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• two ladies living in the opposite flat

The picture is talking about/shows…
The picture shows a common phenomenon.
The picture describes an interesting phenomenon.
In the picture, there are…/…is (are) doing…
Let’s practise!
Describe the picture
The picture is talking about a story about neighborhood. Two ladies living in the opposite apartments say “hello” when they happen to meet each other in the corridor. One of them says, “I moved here 5 years ago, but I never met you before. Could I ask your name please?” The other says,” I have been here for 6 years. How should I call you?”
Let’s practise!
Let’s practise!
The picture shows some problems in the present education system in China. In the poor countryside, there are no buildings for classrooms, let alone good teachers. They are sometimes forced to leave their studies because their families cannot afford the necessary fees. However, the situation is totally different in the cities. Almost all the children in the cities can have regular education. But they have their own problems. What they face is the endless homework, which puts so much pressure on them that some students don’t want to continue their studies.

Enjoy this excellent ending!

In my view, this phenomenon is no good to us, nor to our society. It’s time that we took some measures to improve it. People living in the same zone can be organized to have some activities together. We should call on people to be friendly to each other. As a popular song says, “ If everybody gives a little love to each other, the world will become the sea of love.”
高考英语书面表达写 作指导
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漫 画 作 文
(议论类)
英语漫画作文
(议论类)
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攻 略
谋篇
3 parts:
1) describe the picture
2) interpret its meaning
3) give your opinions about the phenomenon
Part 1 Describe the pilent ending!

In my opinion, spare-time training courses are a waste of time for many students. They might do better when they show interest in what they are learning. Please don’t force these students to do what they are not willing to, and when learning is fun, surely they will do better than we expect!

漫画类
1. 该漫画告诉了我们什么；
1. (陈炎焱) As is shown clearly in the caricature, the son is playing the computer and chatting with his friend. His mother want to talk with him, but the son doesn’t want to talk and continues to chat online. (37words)
3. implied meaning
☆ It mirrors a common phenomenon, which
has raised social concern.
Tip: Describe the picture briefly and keep it to the point.
2. 你对此现象的看法；
1. (朱旭彬) This caricature mirrors a serious problem which worries many parents. As far as I’m concerned, being addicted to the Internet destories children’s dream. If we devote too much valuable time to surfing the Internet. W communicating with our parents.(44words)
Cartoon writing
Yanqiao Middle School Taolic
caricatures, cartoons, comics
2012年江苏省高考说明：writing