2017届高考总复习限时规范训练(人教新课标) 第三部分 写作技能步步高 要诀3 7 高级句式添彩

专题训练十要善于转换叙述视角[专题引语] 长期以来，考生写记叙文几乎形成了一种定势：从“我”的角度叙述，而且“我”一定是作者自己。

单调、狭窄的叙述视角，使考生走不出构思、想象的小圈子，无法上升到“大我”的视野，千文一面，“面目可憎”。

其实，只要把“我”的叙述视角轻轻一变，就能美妙无限：开阔视野，拓展写作的空间，“吹皱心中写作的一池春水”。

研习完该专题训练，你的写作会有意想不到的提高。

真题回放(2015·全国Ⅱ)阅读下面的材料，根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。

当代风采人物评选活动已产生最后三名候选人：大李，笃学敏思，矢志创新，为破解生命科学之谜做出重大贡献，率领团队一举跻身国际学术最前沿。

老王，爱岗敬业，练就一手绝活，变普通技术为完美艺术，走出一条从职高生到焊接大师的“大国工匠”之路。

小刘，酷爱摄影，跋山涉水捕捉世间美景，他的博客赢得网友一片赞叹：“你带我们品味大千世界”“你帮我们留住美丽乡愁。

”这三人中，你认为谁更具风采？请综合材料内容及含意作文，体现你的思考、权衡与选择。

要求选好角度，确定立意，明确文体，自拟标题；不要套作，不得抄袭。

满分佳作“摄影机”如是说贵州一考生我是一个小小的摄影机，自从那次主人的获奖作品在博客发布以后，赢得了网友的一片赞叹；这次主人的事迹荣登高考作文题，受到高考学子的青睐，作为他的助手，我同样感到荣幸。

我的主人是一个才华横溢的青年摄影师，是数码读图时代的宠儿。

他的心中涌动着对美的热爱，他的意识中潜藏着对美的追求，他的肩上担负着传递美的责任。

他背负着我，走乡串巷，穿梭于繁华闹市；跋山涉水，进军于深山野岭。

他战胜浮躁，战胜寂寞，摒弃粗俗、丑恶的风格，用一颗纯净的心，去探索美的源头，去探究美的真谛。

说起主人的风采，当数他对美的热爱。

高山流水、深谷浅滩，野芳幽香、佳木繁阴，东篱菊开、山萧枫黄，苍松绕云、石溪成潭，风霜高洁、水落石出……种种美景，无不使他心动。

即便是循环往复的寻常四季，在他心中也如诗般激昂，如歌般悠扬。

第三部分要诀四(2012全国新课标Ⅱ卷)假定你是李华，你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会。

请你写信邀请外教Susan参加，要点包括：1．时间：周五晚8点至9点2．地点：学生俱乐部3．内容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等4．要求：备小礼物注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．结语已为你写好。

Dear Susan，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，Li HuaHi Susan，We're throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming's birthday.We'd like to invite you to the party. (1)We want to give him a surprise, ① but please keep quiet about it. We'll gather at the Students' Club at 8：00 p．m. ②the Friday, after the evening classes. And it will last about an hour. We each will prepare a little present. When he ③come, we'll light the candles and sing “Happy Birthday” together for him. (2)Then the cake will be cut and we'll sing songs and play games. It'll be nice to see how excited he will be. I'm sure you'll have a good time at the party, too.Yours，Li Hua 1．错误聚焦(1)①but前后两句话的意思没有转折关系，只是一种承接关系，故要将but改为____________。

第三部分要诀三【美句卖萌】根据所给的提示，完成下列句子1．In spite of the large-scale construction of roads and highways, _____________(仍然有很大的空间) for improvement.(2015江苏)2．______________(有一个问题) with the parking place for bikes in our school.(2014北京) 3．As a student, I can tell you that __________________________(没有东西) better than being praised by my teacher before my classmates.(2015湖南)4．______________________(无可否认) good learning methods can increase learning efficiency.(2014江西)5．From my point of view, __________________(没有用处) in reciting the text without understanding its meaning.【答案】1.there is still much room 2.There was a problem3．there is nothing 4.There is no denying that5．there is no sense/point【短文秀场】用there be句型的适当形式完成下面的短文Dear Mr.Smith，I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school.Much to our delight, 1.________________(我们的学校已发生了很大的变化)．On one side of the road 2.____________________(矗立着一座新教学楼)．On the other side of the road stands is our library where 3.___________________(里面有各种各样的书籍), newspapers and magazines.At the back of the school 4.______________________(是我们的操场), around which we have planted a lot of trees.I hope you will come and see for yourself one day.Best wishes.Yours，Li Hua【答案】1.there have been great changes in our school2．there stands a new classroom building3．there are all kinds of books4．there lies the playground【微篇创客】用There be句型的适当形式将下面的句子译成英语并连成一篇表意连贯的短文。

第三部分要诀三【美句卖萌】根据所给的提示，完成下列句子1．____________________(这里有两条建议)for you.(2015四川)2．Besides, _________________________________(我英语掌握得非常好) that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.(2015陕西)3．Not only ____________________________ (她的慷慨能够帮助) those in need realize their dreams，but also it will motivate more people to participate in such a good deed.(2014广东) 4．Only after you have a heart-to-heart talk with your parents _____________________(才能更好理解他们)．5．_____________________(尽管这个问题很难), we didn't give up it.【答案】1.Here are two suggestions2．so good is my English3．will her generosity help4．can you understand them better5．Difficult as the problem was【短文秀场】根据括号中的提示完成下面的短文Dear Sir/Madam，When learning your company is in need of an English secretary, 1.________________________(简单句：我非常兴奋)．Much interested in the job, I am writing in the expectation of getting it.I am an 18-year-old boy 2._____________________________(并列句：我将从光明中学毕业) this July.I am good at various subjects, such as Chinese, math, physics and English.3.__________________________(倒装句：我的英语说得如此好) that I can communicate with foreigners fluently.In addition, I once won the first prize in an English speech contest, 4._______________________________(定语从句：这增强了我的自信心) in English.In my spare time, I enjoy reading and collecting stamps.5.________________________________(倒装句：它们不仅开阔了我的视野) but also have made my life rich and colorful as well.When it comes to my character, I am easy to get along with and strong-minded.Whenever faced with difficulty, I was never cast down but gathered my courage to meet the challenge.I am convinced 6._________________________________________(名词性从句：我在上面提到的能帮助我成为一名好的秘书)．Looking forward to your early reply.Sincerely yours，Li Hua【答案】1．I am very excited2．and I will be graduating from Guangming Middle School3．So well do I speak English4．which built up my confidence5．Not only have they broadened my horizons6．what I have mentioned above can help me work as a good secretary【微篇创客】用适当的倒装形式(至少三处)将下面的句子译成英语并连成一篇表意连贯的短文要点提示：1．我是一个意志坚强的人，无论何时面对困难，我都不会放弃；2．我的英语说得很好，能够和外国人自由地交流；3．在业余时间，我喜欢读书；4．尽管有时候我很忙，我也尽力抽出时间读书；5．它不仅开阔了我的视野，也丰富了我的生活；6．实际上，正是读书改变了我的生活；7．这儿是如何选择好书的几条建议。

第三部分要诀四(2015课标I)假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。

请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：1．栏目介绍；2．稿件内容；3．稿件长度：约400词；4．交稿日期：6月28日前。

注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头语已为你写好。

Dear Peter，I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school's English newspaper.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，Li Hua考场作文Dear Peter，I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school's English newspaper.There is a part ①calls the “Foreign Cultures” in the newspaper, which has broadened our horizons greatly.(1)It is so interesting that we all love it very much. I hope you can write something about American festivals and customs.What's more, you can also tell us something about the life of American high school students.Most of us are much ②interested for it.(2)When you write, you had better limit your article within about 400 words.If ③possibly, could you send us your article before June 28?Looking forward to hearing from you.Yours，Li Hua 1．错误聚焦：(1)call和part构成被动关系，故将其改为________________。

第三部分要诀四(2014湖北)请根据以下提示，并结合具体事例，用英语写一篇短文。

Small things make a big difference.The small things we do can make us a responsible member of the society.注意：①无须写标题；②除诗歌外，文体不限；③内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例；④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；⑤词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。

考场作文From a thing some days ago, I knew that it isn't too hard to become a responsible member of the society.I can still remember ①a incident which happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon.I was on my way to the bookstore and was ②waiting the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car (1)and it drove off quickly.A man immediately rushed to the girl to give her first aid.I also joined in without hesitation.③Comparing with the escaped driver, I am proud of what I did.As a member of the society, I realize that (2)responsibility plays a very important role in creating a better society.1．错误聚焦：(1)incident的首字母发元音音素，故应将①a改为______。

限时综合训练(二)(用时：25分钟满分：18分)一、阅读下面的文字，完成文后题目。

(9分)自古以来，文学的社会价值一直都是其最基本、最主要的价值。

纵观整个中西文学发展史，我们会发现文学的社会价值一直都居于文学价值体系的重要位置，只是不同年代所承担的具体的社会责任有所不同。

在中国，从先秦孔子的“兴观群怨”说到宋代理学家的“文以载道”观，不仅强调了文学对社会伦理道德的教化作用，更是让其肩负起了兴国大业之重任。

近代梁启超、鲁迅等人也都强调过文学的社会价值。

在西方，以柏拉图谈文学的教育作用始，直至19世纪硕果累累、影响广泛的现实主义文学，文学的社会价值在实践和理论中均备受推崇。

美国的“废奴文学”即是典型代表，用文学的形式主张废除血腥、残暴的奴隶制，伸张人道主义和自由平等，取得了很大的社会反响，推动了废奴运动的开展。

在当下，新的社会问题、时代主题，又为文学的社会价值注入新的时代内涵。

文学作为一项特殊的精神活动，能够重塑人的价值观念，丰富人的精神世界。

通过文学作品，我们能够形象生动地认识人类社会历史发展进程，也能够多层次地把握当今社会生活的各个维度，这样既能以史为鉴，又能充分认清当前社会基本问题；文学的认识不是纯粹的理论说教，它并非枯燥地为我们呈现当下的社会面貌，而是通过审美化的语言和艺术化的形象来展现时代风貌；文学能够带给人奋发向上的正能量，人能够将此转化为实践的动力，规范自己的言行，影响和感化他人，从而更好地改造大众的精神世界，整个社会精神面貌也将会焕然一新。

但近年来文学社会价值的地位却有所下降。

随着大众传媒业的发展，以电影、电视、网络等新型媒介为载体的娱乐文化活动蓬勃发展，文学的读者变少了，对社会的影响力也有所下降，文学渐趋小众化；文学创作本身在适应商业化、娱乐化的过程中，又出现了忽视社会价值的现象。

有些作家陷入盲目虚构和大玩文字游戏的怪圈，他们的文学创作完全脱离了时代和社会；有些作家则一味迎合市场需求，机械地生产出毫无道德内涵，仅是满足感官享受的媚俗作品；还有些作家为了快速适应商业化的运作模式，盲目追求短期经济效益，忽视了文学的社会效益。

第三部分要诀四(福建)请阅读下面图画，按要求用英语写一篇词数为120左右的短文。

内容要求：凿壁偷光1．描述画面；2．概述其含义；3．谈谈个人感想。

注意：1．短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；2．可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、行文连贯；3．文中不能出现考生的具体信息。

参考词汇：凿，钻：boreIn the picture，____________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________考场作文In the picture, we can see a boy in rags.He was ①seating at a table with a pile of books on it.(1)He was reading a book attentively with the help of a weak ray of light coming in through a small hole in the wall.②As is known to us that this is a story from an ancient Chinese idiom.So poor was the boy that he couldn't afford even a candle.Therefore, in order to read at night, he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbor's house.What we can learn from the story is that we should do what we can ③acquire knowledge when faced with difficult situations.(2)When we try to improve ourselves by learning, we can make good preparations for the future.1．错误聚焦：(1)①seat作动词时是及物动词，故应将①改为______或__________。

【25份】2017届高考总复习（人教新课标）必修1-5限时规范训练及答案目录第一部分必修1Unit 1Ⅰ.完形填空(2015全国课标Ⅱ)Where do you go when you want to learn something? School? A friend? A tutor? These areall __1__ places of learning.But it may well be that the learning you really want __2__ somewhere else instead.I had the __3__ of seeing this first hand on a __4__.My daughter plays on a recreational soccer team.They did very well this season and so __5__ a tournament, which normally was only for more skilled club teams.This led to some __6__ experiences on Saturday as they played against teams __7__ trained.Through the first two games, her __8__ did not get one serious shot on goal.As a parent, I __9__ seeing my daughter playingher best, __10__ still defeated.It seemed that something clicked with the __11__ between Saturday and Sunday.When they__12__ for their Sunday game, they were __13__ different.They had begun to integrate (融合)the kinds of play and teamwork they had __14__ the day before into their __15__.They played aggressively and __16__ scored a goal.It __17__ me that playing against the other team was a great __18__ moment for all the girls on the team.I think it is a general principle.__19__ is the best teacher.The lessons they learned may not be __20__ what they would have gotten in school, but are certainly more personal and meaningful, because they had to work them out on their own.()1.A．public B．traditionalC．official D．special()2.A．passes B．worksC．lies D．ends()3.A．dream B．ideaC．habit D．chance()4.A．trip B．holidayC．weekend D．square()5.A．won B．enteredC．organized D．watched()6.A．painful B．strangeC．common D．practical()7.A．less B．poorlyC．newly D．better()8.A．fans B．tutorsC．class D．team()9.A．imagined B．hatedC．avoided D．missed()10.A．if B．orC．but D．as()11.A．girls B．parentsC．coaches D．viewers()12.A．dressed B．showed upC．made up D．planned()13.A．slightly B．hardlyC．basically D．completely()14.A．seen B．knownC．heard D．read()15.A．styles B．trainingC．game D．rules()16.A．even B．stillC．seldom D．again()17.A．confused B．struckC．reminded D．warned()18.A．touching B．thinkingC．encouraging D．learning()19.A．Experience B．IndependenceC．Curiosity D．Interest()20.A．harmful to B．mixed withC．different from D．applied to【主旨大意】作者通过自己观看女儿参加足球锦标赛的经历告诉我们，一个人真正需要的是自己在亲身经历中通过摸索、反思获得的东西。

一、语言基础知识1．在下面一段话空缺处依次填入词语，最恰当的一组是()对历史细节，普通人往往采取________，大而化之，甚至是玩笑戏谑的态度。

比如中国戏曲，台上摆一张桌子，旁边放两把椅子，服装道具，________，善恶忠奸，美丑妍媸，全靠脸谱区别，什么朝代，都是这一套。

它和文人艺术真是________，另有自己的欣赏规矩。

即使贵为天下母仪，如慈禧太后，国学大师，像陈寅恪，只要是进戏园子听戏，都得遵守这套规矩，根本没有谁跟历史较真儿。

A．漫不经心千篇一律大异其趣B．漠不关心千人一面大异其趣C．漠不关心千篇一律各异其趣D．漫不经心千人一面各异其趣2．下列各句中，没有语病的一项是()A．换季时节，某服饰公司将于近期推出数十种最新时装流行款式，来帮助爱美的女士们打造光彩焕然的新季衣橱。

B．“扶一把——中美扶爱基金”是首个国内聚焦摔伤医疗救助、见义勇为保障的公益项目，有助于解决“路人摔倒扶不扶”的道德难题。

C．我们曾经推崇鲁迅怀疑、批判和抗争的精神，然而在当下，不但这种精神没有被很好地继承，而且被很多人遗忘甚至铲除。

D．瑞典哥德堡大学研究人员对4 100多名年龄20岁到24岁的瑞典男女研究一年后发现，那些经常使用电脑或手机的人，更有可能出现压力增大、睡眠紊乱以及沮丧抑郁。

3．在下面一段文字横线处填入语句，衔接最恰当的一项是()一个不容否认的事实是，________________要尽快提高国民的科学素质，一个最重要的途径就是在更大的范围内建立公众热爱科学、理解科学、接受科学的现代科普理念，培养和启蒙国民科学精神的因子。

①有关部门的一份中国公众科学素养调查报告显示，中国公众达到基本科学素养水平的比例尚不到2%。

②从横向和总体上看，当前我国国民的科学素质不容乐观。

③这种竞争，最终又必然体现为国民科学素质的竞争。

④虽然从“天狗蚀日”的迷信，到今天凡有井水处皆争看日全食，我们的国民科学素养，已经有了一个质的提高。

第三部分要诀四(2005全国卷)假设你是李华，正在英国牛津参加短期语言培训，计划星期天去伦敦旅游。

互联网上的一则广告引起了你的注意，但一些具体信息不明确(箭头所指内容)。

以下是该则广告的信息。

注意：1.词数100左右，信的格已为你写好。

2．可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3．参考词汇：牛津Oxford；费用feeDear Sir/Madame，(1)I am a Chinese student and I am taking short-term English training courses in Oxford.I plan ①pay a visit to London on Sunday. I've read your advertisement and have some questions. When will I shop in the tour? Is there any special price for students? (2)Besides, I want to know the entrance fees and lunch arrangement. Is the lunch included in the ￡45? And I am not clear the time to return.I'll appreciate ②that if you can give more information about the day tour to London.Yours，Li Hua1. 错误聚焦(1)“计划做某事”的短语是：plan to do sth，故①pay前面应加____________。

(2)“如果你可以……我将不甚感激”的句型应该是：I'll appreciate it if you can…，故②that 应改为____________。

第三部分要诀四(2014课标Ⅰ)假定你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语，为期六周。

下面的广告引起了你的注意，请给该校写封信，询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。

注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3．参考词汇：住宿：accommodationDear Sir/Madem，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours faithfully，Li Hua考场作文Dear Sir/Madam，I am a student ①live in China.I want to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.(1)I've seen your advertisement and I'd like to know something more about your 3 week English course. First, (2) I want to know the start date of the course, class hours per week and the type of accommodation.In addition, I want to know how much I have to ②pay the course.Can you tell me whether the accommodation is included in the fee?I am looking forward to ③hear from you.Yours faithfully，Li Hua1．错误聚焦：(1)①live处于非谓语动词的位置，它与student构成主动关系，故将live改为____________。