专题05 读后续写之各种“走”和“跑”-新高考英语读后续写考前冲刺读背素材

读后续写必背万能句型一、动作描写:构造“动作链”和编织”动作面”句式1：A, B and C她上了出租车。

她喊了一辆出租车，跳进去然后告诉司机目的地。

She hailed a taxi, jumped into it and told the driver the destination.她发表获奖感言。

她瞥了一眼奖杯，深吸一口气，说道“谢谢图图”。

She glanced at the trophy, took a deep breath and said,”Thank you TuTu！句式2：After doing A, B and C.After glancing at the trophy, she took a deep breath and said,”Thank you TunTun！句式2：Having done（强调该动作先于谓语动作发生）“拿肉扔狼” 他先拿出肉，瞄准狼，径直扔向这只凶狠的动物。

Having pulled up the meat, he aimed at the wolf and threw it straight at the fierce animal.句式3：Doing..., 主句，doing...围在营火旁，他们吃着烧烤，享受这一令人难忘的时光。

Gathering around the campfire, they feasted on BBQ (吃着烧烤), enjoying the unforgettable moment.句式4：Done...,主语, doing...被老师的话所鼓舞，Lucy举起了手，小声说，“我来。

”Encouraged by the teacher’s words, Lucy raised her hand, whispering, “I’ll do it.”被眼前的这一幕吓坏了，他一动不动，不知道该说什么。

Terrified/Frightened by the scene in front of him, he was rooted to the spot, being at a loss (茫然不知所措)what to say.句式5：主句，doing...and doing...他欣喜若狂，在雨中又唱又跳。

新高考读后续写素材之关于走路的描写1.stagger 蹒跚英译：to walk with weak unsteady steps; as if you are about to fall例句：He staggered home,drunk.他酒后回家，步履蹒跚。

He was staggering and had to lean on the bar.他步履蹒跚，不得不依靠着吧台。

2.Plod 沉重缓慢的走英译：to walk heavily and firmly,as when tired,or through mud.例句：Our horses plodded down the muddy track.我们的马沿着泥泞小路蹒跚而行。

The old man plodded along on his way.那个老人吃力地走着。

3.pace 来回踱步英译：walk up and down in a small area many times,especially because you are feeling nervous or angry例句：As they waited,Kravis paced the room nervously.在他们等着时，克拉维斯在房间里紧张不安地走来走去。

He found John pacing around the house,unable to sleep.他发现约翰正在房子里私下踱步，无法入眠。

4.march 前进；行军，游行示威；（坚定地）快步走英译1：walk fast,with regular or measured steps;walk with a stride（坚定地向某地）前进；行军，游行示威例句：He marched into the classroom and announced the exam.他大步走进教室，宣布要考试。

英译2：If you say that someone marches somewhere,you mean that they work there quickly andin a determined way,for example because they are angry.(坚定地）快步走例句：He marched into the kitchen without knocking.他没敲门就快步走进了厨房。

高考英语读后续写素材一、描写动作常用词（一）行为动作描写表示人物做出的具体行为（走、跑、跳、舞、游）walk, run, jump, dance, swim1.走【笼统词】 walk【具体词】 stroll, march【例】The couple strolled （漫步）along the beach after dinner.He marched （行进）purposefully towards the podium.2.跑【笼统词】run【具体词】sprint, jog, dash, scamper【例】She sprinted （冲刺跑）to catch the last train.He jogged （慢跑）along the beach, breathing in the fresh sea air.He dashed （急奔）along the platform and jumped on the train.Children scampered （蹦蹦跳跳地跑）into the playground after class.3.跳【笼统词】 jump【具体词】 leap, hop, bounce, skip【例】The young girl leaped （跳过）over the small puddle.I hopped （单脚跳）down three steps.The puppy bounced （上下蹦跳）excitedly through the park.The girls were skipping（跳绳）in the playground4.舞【笼统词】 dance【具体词】 twirl, sway【例】They twirled （轻快地转动）across the dance floor, lost in their own world. She swayed （摇摆）to the music, her eyes closed in bliss.5.游【笼统词】swim【具体词】 float, dive【例】A group of swans floated （缓缓飘过）by.She dove （跳入水中）into the cool water, feeling the refreshing embrace.（二）身体动作描写表示人物身体上发生的变化（微笑、皱眉、点头、眨眼）smile, frown, nod , wink1.微笑【笼统词】smile【具体词】 grin, beam, smirk【例】She grinned （咧嘴笑）at her friend, feeling grateful for her companionship.He beamed （眉开眼笑）at the journalists.He smirked （幸灾乐祸地笑）when we told him the bad news.2.皱眉【笼统词】 frown【具体词】 grimace, pout【例】She grimaced （龇牙咧嘴）at the bitter taste of the medicine.Like one of the kids, he pouted （噘嘴）when he did not get what he wanted.3.点头【笼统词】 nod【具体词】 shake, bow, tilt【例】He shook （摇头）his head in disbelief, refusing to accept the truth.The Colonel bowed （低下头）his head and whispered a prayer of thanksgiving.Mari tilted （斜着头）her head back so that she could look at him.4.眨眼【笼统词】wink【具体词】 blink, flutter, twinkle【例】When I told him the news he didn't even blink（眨眼）.She fluttered （眨眼）her eyelashes at himShe saw her mother's eyes twinkle （双眸闪闪发亮）with amusement.（三）社交动作描写表示人物之间社交交流的动作(问候、拥抱、挥手、握手)greet, hug, wave, shake hands1.问候【笼统词】 greet【具体词】welcome, salute【例】She warmly welcomed（招呼、迎接）the guests into her home, making them feel at ease.He saluted （致敬、致意）the officer with a respectful gesture.2.拥抱【笼统词】 hug【具体词】embrace, cuddle, snuggle【例】They embraced （拥抱）each other tightly, feeling the warmth and comfort of their friendship.The mother cuddled （充满爱意地抱）her baby, feeling the tender love between them.Jane snuggled （依偎）up against his shoulder.3.挥手【笼统词】 wave【具体词】 gesture, signal, motion【例】She gestured （手势示意）for them to come in.He signalled （动作示意）his friend with a wave of his hand, indicating that it was time to leave.I motioned（用头手示意）to the waiter for another drink.4.握手【笼统词】 shake hands【具体词】grip, clasp, squeeze【例】‘Please don't go,’ he said, gripping （紧握）her arm.They clasped （攥紧）hands firmly, forming a strong bond of trust.He squeezed （紧捏）the other man’s hand, congratulating him on his success.（四）感情动作描写表示人物情感起伏的动作(哭、笑、叹息、亲吻、触摸)cry, laugh, sigh, kiss, touch1.哭【笼统词】 cry【具体词】 weep, sob【例】She wept（流泪）silently, feeling sad and lonely.He sobbed （呜咽）uncontrollably, having suffered a great loss.2.笑【笼统词】 laugh【具体词】 chuckle, giggle, burst into laughter【例】They chuckled （轻声笑）at the silly jokes, feeling happy and relaxed.The girls giggled（咯咯地笑）at the joke.She burst into laughter （突然大笑）at the sight of his funny face.3.叹息【笼统词】 sigh【具体词】 heave a sigh/let out a sigh【例】She heaved a deep sigh（喟然长叹）, feeling exhausted after a long day.4.亲吻【笼统词】 kiss【具体词】 peck, smooch【例】She gave him a quick peck （匆匆轻吻）on the lips, feeling shy but happy.He smooched （拥吻）his girlfriend passionately, feeling deeply in love.5.触摸【笼统词】touch【具体词】 stroke, pat【例】She stroked （轻抚）the cat’s soft fur, feeling relaxed and calm.She patted （轻拍）the dog on the head.二、“说”的不同用词（一）“说”的三个位置1.说在前Thomas responded, “Do what you like, brother.”2.说在后“Can I leave my bag here for a while？” Marry inquired in a low voice.3.说在中间“It was my cousin who did it, ” he said angrily “I was not there when the accident happened.”（二）常用的精细化的“说”1.低声说whisper / mumble“Can you meet me tonight?” Tom whispered to me“I am sorry.” she mumbled.2.大声说yell / scream / roar / growl / exclaim“Be careful!” he yelled.“Help!” she screamed.“Stand back！” he roared.“Who are you?” he growled at the stranger.“It isn‘t fair!” he exclaimed angrily.3.建议说propose / recommend / advise / suggest“Why not use this new method?” he proposed /recommended /advised /suggested.4.警告说warn"Don't do anything yet," he warned."Too risky."5.命令说order / command“Sit down and be quiet！”the teacher ordered.“Stop arguing!” their father commanded.6.宣布/宣称说declare / announce / claim"I'll do it!" Tom declared."I‘ve given up smoking," she announced."I am entitled to be proud," he claimed.7.问答说inquire / enquire / ask / reply / respond / answer“What are you doing there?” she inquired /enquired/ asked.“I won't let you down,” he replied confidently.“I'm not sure,” she responded.“I‘d prefer to walk,” she answered him.8.结巴说stammer / stutter“I am s-o-r-r-y?” he stammered.“I saw a big m-o-n-s-t-e-r?” she stuttered.9.补充说add / continue“And don‘t be late,” she added.“In fact,” he continued, “I‘d like to congratulate you.”10.打断/插话说cut in / interrupt"Not true," Tom cut in."Hold on," the man interrupted.（三）添加状语进一步细化“说”“These are the medals I have got in the past three years,” Marry said proudly. （"这些是我在过去三年获得的奖牌，"玛丽骄傲地说。

读后续写之引人入胜的开头距离高考还有一段时间，不少有经验的老师都会提醒考生，愈是临近高考，能否咬紧牙关、学会自我调节，态度是否主动积极，安排是否科学合理，能不能保持良好的心态、以饱满的情绪迎接挑战，其效果往往大不一样。

以下是本人从事10多年教学经验总结出的以下学习资料，希望可以帮助大家提高答题的正确率，希望对你有所帮助，有志者事竟成！养成良好的答题习惯，是决定高考英语成败的决定性因素之一。

做题前，要认真阅读题目要求、题干和选项，并对答案内容作出合理预测;答题时，切忌跟着感觉走，最好按照题目序号来做，不会的或存在疑问的，要做好标记，要善于发现，找到题目的题眼所在，规范答题，书写工整;答题完毕时，要认真检查，查漏补缺，纠正错误。

总之，在最后的复习阶段，学生们不要加大练习量。

在这个时候，学生要尽快找到适合自己的答题方式，最重要的是以平常心去面对考试。

英语最后的复习要树立信心，考试的时候遇到难题要想“别人也难”，遇到容易的则要想“细心审题”。

越到最后，考生越要回归基础，单词最好再梳理一遍，这样有利于提高阅读理解的效率。

另附高考复习方法和考前30天冲刺复习方法。

一篇好的文章就要一开始就将读者吸引住。

同样，一个好的段落，也要有一个引人入胜的开头。

它就像是一块敲门砖，可以敲开读者的阅读欲望之门，敲开阅卷老师的高分之门。

而一个平平无奇的故事开头，定会让读者有食之无味之感。

As the saying goes," well begun is half done !"良好的开始就是成功的一半！可见，写出一个引人入胜的开头是多么的重要。

那么在时间紧迫的考场上到底如何才能写出靓丽的开头呢？以下招数定可以助您开门大吉。

1）巧用时间状语先看一句以时间状语开头的句子，体会其妙用①At that moment, I can’t help but shed tears of gratitude. 在那个时刻，我唯有流下感激的泪水。

专题05 人物肢体动作、行为描写（高分定律）养成良好的答题习惯，是决定高考英语成败的决定性因素之一。

做题前，要认真阅读题目要求、题干和选项，并对答案内容作出合理预测;答题时，切忌跟着感觉走，最好按照题目序号来做，不会的或存在疑问的，要做好标记，要善于发现，找到题目的题眼所在，规范答题，书写工整;答题完毕时，要认真检查，查漏补缺，纠正错误。

总之，在最后的复习阶段，学生们不要加大练习量。

【考情分析】在读后续写过程中，成功的动作描写，可以交代人物的身份、地位，可以反映人物心理活动的进程，可以表现人物的性格特征，有时候还能推动情节的发展，无论是描摹景物还是刻画人或事物的形象，都能收到淋漓尽致、形神兼备等独特的表达效果。

【写作指导】在进行人物肢体动作、行为描写时，,要细化动作,把动作过程分解成细微的动作, 学会描写动作时不仅表现“在做什么”,而且表现“在怎样做”。

除了精选表示动作的词语，而且要给动词加上适当的修饰成分。

适当的修饰成分可以细致地表达出动作的时间、速递、力度、方式等，使人物形象更加具有活力，能更好地表现人物鲜明的个性与思想境界。

动作描写中最常见的修饰成分就是状语，如副词、介词短语、非谓语短语等。

（2023年浙江卷）As my car neared it my thoughts drifted back to the moment when I rescued the hummingbird from the spider’s web. I rushed back to the deserted house. It was a great comfort that the original hole in the window was nowhere to be found. Leaving the house, I couldn’t help wondering how it was getting on now.当我的车接近它时，我的思绪又回到了我从蜘蛛网中救出蜂鸟的那一刻。

超实用高考英语专题复习：专题05读后续写优秀范文-高考英语专题复习读后续写距离高考还有一段时间，不少有经验的老师都会提醒考生，愈是临近高考，能否咬紧牙关、学会自我调节，态度是否主动积极，安排是否科学合理，能不能保持良好的心态、以饱满的情绪迎接挑战，其效果往往大不一样。

以下是本人从事10多年教学经验总结出的以下学习资料，希望可以帮助大家提高答题的正确率，希望对你有所帮助，有志者事竟成！养成良好的答题习惯，是决定高考英语成败的决定性因素之一。

做题前，要认真阅读题目要求、题干和选项，并对答案内容作出合理预测;答题时，切忌跟着感觉走，最好按照题目序号来做，不会的或存在疑问的，要做好标记，要善于发现，找到题目的题眼所在，规范答题，书写工整;答题完毕时，要认真检查，查漏补缺，纠正错误。

总之，在最后的复习阶段，学生们不要加大练习量。

在这个时候，学生要尽快找到适合自己的答题方式，最重要的是以平常心去面对考试。

英语最后的复习要树立信心，考试的时候遇到难题要想“别人也难”，遇到容易的则要想“细心审题”。

越到最后，考生越要回归基础，单词最好再梳理一遍，这样有利于提高阅读理解的效率。

另附高考复习方法和考前30天冲刺复习方法。

1.【原文内容】A Run to RememberThirteen can be a challenging age. Not only did I have to adapt to my changing body. I also had to deal with my parents’ bitter divorce, a new family and the upsetting move from my country home to a crowded suburb.When we moved, my beloved companion, a small brown pony(小马), had to be sold.Feeling helpless and alone, I couldn’t eat or sleep, and I cried all of the time. I missed my family, my home and my pony. Finally, my father, realizing how much I missed my pony, purchased an old red horse for me at a local market.My horse, Cowboy, was without a doubt the ugliest horse in the world. He was pigeon-toed and knock-kneed. But I didn’t care about his faults. I loved him beyond all reasons.I joined a riding club and faced rude comments and mean snickers about Cowboy’s looks. I never let on how I felt, but deep down inside, my heart was breaking. The other members rode beautiful registered horses.When Cowboy and I entered the events where the horse is judged on appearance, we were quickly out of the game. I finally realized that my only chance to compete would be in the timed-speed events. I chose barrel racing(绕桶赛), an event in which a horse and its rider attempt to complete a triangular pattern around three barrels in the fastest time.One girl named Becky rode a big brown horse in the race events. She always won the blue ribbons. Needless to say, she didn’t feel threatened when I competed against her at the next show. She didn’t need to. I came in next to last.The bitter memory of Becky’s smirks(得意的笑)made me determined to beat her. For the whole next month, I woke up early every day and rode Cowboy five miles to the arena(运动场地). We practiced for hours in the hot sun and then I would walk Cowboy home. On the way home I would be so tired; those five miles seemed twice as long.All of our hard work didn’t make me feel confident by the time the show came. I sat at the gate and sweated it out while I watched Becky and her horse charge through the pattern of barrels, finishing the course with case.本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者才13岁就承受着家庭的变故，并且失去了宠物小马驹的陪伴，他很孤单，需要陪伴。

新高考读后续写素材库之关于走路的描写1.stagger[ˈstæɡə(r)] 蹒跚英译：walk as if unable to control one's movements蹒跚可仿写例句：He staggered along/across the road.They staggered out of the pub(酒馆) completely drunk(喝醉).The staggered from the coffee shop.2.plod [plɒd]沉重缓慢地走英译：v.walk heavily and firmly, as when weary, or through mud 沉重缓慢地走可仿写例句：The old man plodded along on his way. 那个老人吃力地走着。

3.pace [peɪs]踱步；缓慢而行英译：vi. walk with slow or fast paces 踱步；缓慢而行As they waited, Kravis paced the room nervously.在他们等着时，克拉维斯在房间里紧张不安地走来走去。

He found John pacing around the house, unable to sleep.他发现约翰正在房子里四下踱步，无法入眠。

4.march [mɑːtʃ]前进；行军，游行示威;(坚定地) 快步走英译1：vi. walk fast, with regular or measured steps; walk with a stride（坚定地向某地）前进；行军，游行示威；可仿写例句：He marched into the classroom and announced the exam.英译2：If you say that someone marches somewhere, you mean that they walk there quickly and in a determined way, for example because they are angry. (坚定地) 快步走可仿写例句：He marched into the kitchen without knocking. 他没敲门就快步走进了厨房。

冲刺2022高考英语名校最新模拟试题限时组合练习专题05 完形填空+语法填空+读后续写（时间：45分钟满分：55分）第一节（共15小题；每小题1分，满分15分）（2022·湖南省祁阳县第一中学二模）Standing on the edge of the plane, my tandem skydiving (双人跳伞) instructor, Bill, turned to face me. “Do you have any last words?” he asked. “Yes,” I said, joking. “I hope my parachute (降落伞) ____1____.”I’d never felt more alive as Bill and I ____2____ and started our free fall. As we reached 4,000 feet, I felt a parachute open. This, I was told, would slow us down for a smooth____3____. But why were we still ____4____ so fast? I could hear Bill swearing as he tried to ____5____ whatever had gone wrong.Worse still, our emergency parachute unexpectedly got ____6____ on something. At that moment, I just felt so ____7____ that I’d even invited my family along to experience sorrow instead of watching my wonderful performance.We ____8____ the ground. An unimaginable pain shot up my back. Feeling weak and tired out, I gathered all my ____9____, and turned to face Bill. He started screaming. From my neck down, I could hardly ____10____. My mother couldn’t help crying as we were placed into a(n) ____11____ from the hospital.After years of treatment, the deep physical and mental pain is ____12____. I heard Bill made a full ____13____ and returned to skydiving.I was always terrified of being myself and doing the things I wanted. Now I’ve learned I need to be ____14____. There’s nothing like falling from 15,000 feet without a parachute and surviving. It forces me to ____15____ every day!1．A．flies B．breaks C．opens D．folds 2．A．dropped out B．stepped out C．climbed out D．rolled out 3．A．blow B．rise C．turn D．fall 4．A．traveling B．riding C．skipping D．escaping 5．A．evaluate B．define C．ignore D．fix 6．A．caught B．burnt C．charged D．controlled 7．A．relieved B．curious C．guilty D．stressed 8．A．occupied B．hit C．attacked D．swept9．A．strength B．faith C．spirits D．thoughts 10．A．scream B．whisper C．breathe D．move 11．A．taxi B．coach C．ambulance D．bus 12．A．returning B．healing C．beginning D．worsening 13．A．recovery B．list C．impact D．fortune 14．A．hopeless B．aimless C．selfless D．fearless 15．A．spend B．value C．recall D．imagine第二节（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）（2021·江苏·海安高级中学模拟预测）阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。

2020届高三山东名校好题速递分项汇编（1）之读后续写读后续写【2020届山东省淄博市高三下学期一模】阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

续写的词数应为150左右。

There was a rich couple who was throwing a big New Year party at their house. So they went shopping at the market where everything was of high cost and fixed price. They wanted to maintain their level of standard so they didn’t mind paying for it. After purchasing all they needed, they called a porter to carry everything and drop it at their home. The porter who came was of an old age, and looked very unhealthy, and his clothes were torn, and he looked as if he wasn’t even able to meet his daily needs.They asked the porter about the charges for delivering their goods to their home. The old porter quoted just $20, well below the market price. Yet, the couple argued and bargained with the porter and finally settled for $15. The porter was struggling to make even one time’s meal so he needed anything he could earn.The couple was very happy thinking how well they bargained with the poor porter and paid him $15 in advance and left after giving the porter their address for delivery. They reached their home and one hour passed, and two hours passed, but the porter still didn’t deliver their stuff.The wife started to get angry at her husband, “I always tell you not to trust such person, but you never listen to me. I am sure instead of delivering the goods to our home, he must have disappeared with everything. We must immediately go back to the market to inquire and then to the police station to file the complaint against him.”They both left towards the market. On their way near the market, they saw another porter. They stopped him to inquire about the old porter and noticed that he was carrying their goods in his cart! The angry wife asked him, “Where is that old thief? This is our goods and he was supposed to deliver them. It seems you poor thieves are stealing our goods and going to sell them.”Paragraph 1:When the porter heard the angry wife asking.____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________Paragraph 2:Upon hearing this, the husband had tears in his eyes,____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________【答案】Paragraph 1:When the porter heard the angry wife asking, he turned back. The porter replied, “Madam, please calm down. I’m not a thief. That poor old man was sick since last month. He couldn’t earn enough to even have a single meal of the day. Therefo re, he fell down and handed me $15, saying, ‘I have taken an advance for this delivery, and you deliver the goods to the couple’s home.’ Madam, he was poor and hungry, but he was an honest man. I was just on the way to completing the old man’s last delivery to your home.”Paragraph 2:Upon hearing this, the husband had tears in his eyes, and the wife felt so ashamed that she had no courage to look her husband in the eyes. Suddenly she rushed to the market. Half an hour later, the wife came back with some food in her hand. She passed the food on to the porter, and said sorry to the porter, saying that she shouldn’t suspect them, and took them as thieves. At last, the porter took the goods to their house, and the rich couple changed their attitude to the man like the porter.【解析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。

专题05读后续写之各种“走”和“跑”专题05 读后续写之各种“走”和“跑”在我们的日常生活中，有许多种不同的“走”和“跑”的方式。

从闲逛到大步走，每一种方式都有其独特的特点和用途。

有些人喜欢闲逛，这种方式被称为stroll。

他们会沿着林荫大道或人行道漫步，或者在大街上闲逛。

而有些人则喜欢碎步走，这种方式被称为mince。

他们会轻快地走着，很像跳舞的样子。

还有一些人会婴儿学步，这种方式被称为XXX。

他们会摇摇晃晃地走着，好像随时都会跌倒。

而另一些人则会蹑手蹑脚地走，这种方式被称为XXX。

他们会尽可能地轻盈，以免被人听到。

有些人喜欢拖着脚走，这种方式被称为shuffle。

他们的步伐缓慢而沉重。

而其他人则会列队走，这种方式被称为march。

他们会保持整齐划一的步伐，以示团结和纪律。

有些人会趾高气扬地走，这种方式被称为strut。

他们会昂首阔步，以显示自。

而另一些人则会昂首阔步，这种方式被称为stalk。

他们会以一种威风凛凛的姿态走着，好像正在展示自己的力量和地位。

当然，也有一些人会鬼鬼祟祟地走，这种方式被称为XXX。

他们会尽可能地避免被人发现，以免被揭穿。

除了不同的“走”之外，还有许多种不同的“路”。

有大街、林荫大道、散步的路、环行路、胡同、人行道、人行过街横道、街道和主要街道等等。

每一种路都有其独特的特点和用途。

有些人会偷偷溜出家门，这种方式被称为sneak out of the house。

他们会尽可能地避免被人发现，以免被责备。

而另一些人则会跳到空中，以表示开心和兴奋。

有些人会侧身走，这种方式被称为sidle。

他们会尽可能地避免被人注意，以免引起不必要的麻烦。

而其他人则会瘸着走，这种方式被称为limp。

他们可能因为受伤或生病而无法正常行走。

还有一些人会跌跌撞撞地走，这种方式被称为stumble。

他们可能因为路面不平或者其他原因而失去平衡。

而其他人则会蹒跚地走，这种方式被称为stagger。

他们可能因为醉酒或者疲劳而无法保持平衡。

备战高考英语满分作文万能模板（五）读后续写距离高考还有一段时间，不少有经验的老师都会提醒考生，愈是临近高考，能否咬紧牙关、学会自我调节，态度是否主动积极，安排是否科学合理，能不能保持良好的心态、以饱满的情绪迎接挑战，其效果往往大不一样。

以下是本人从事10多年教学经验总结出的以下学习资料，希望可以帮助大家提高答题的正确率，希望对你有所帮助，有志者事竟成！养成良好的答题习惯，是决定高考英语成败的决定性因素之一。

做题前，要认真阅读题目要求、题干和选项，并对答案内容作出合理预测;答题时，切忌跟着感觉走，最好按照题目序号来做，不会的或存在疑问的，要做好标记，要善于发现，找到题目的题眼所在，规范答题，书写工整;答题完毕时，要认真检查，查漏补缺，纠正错误。

总之，在最后的复习阶段，学生们不要加大练习量。

在这个时候，学生要尽快找到适合自己的答题方式，最重要的是以平常心去面对考试。

英语最后的复习要树立信心，考试的时候遇到难题要想“别人也难”，遇到容易的则要想“细心审题”。

越到最后，考生越要回归基础，单词最好再梳理一遍，这样有利于提高阅读理解的效率。

另附高考复习方法和考前30天冲刺复习方法。

【题型分析与写作方法】题型解析：读后续写是写作的一种新题型，顾名思义就是我们在阅读一篇还未写完的文章之后，按照语段所给的开头写出两个语段（约150词），从而把这篇文章未写完的部分补充完整，使之浑然一体。

读后续写不仅要求考生准确使用词汇和语言框架，会合理润色语言，更重要的是，它还要求考生能够明白应该如何整理续写内容，以使得其形成和前文统一连贯的、能够表述完整信息的表达内容。

应该说，这种题型是阅读理解和书面表达的沟通桥梁，它不仅考查了考生在阅读文章的基础上分析文章逻辑的能力，又考查了考生的创造力、想象力，以及运用准确丰富的语言进行表达的能力。

解题方法：下面是读后续写类作文的写作步骤：1.读文精读文章，确定文章线索。

每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索，比如，是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索，这样有利于考生“顺藤摸瓜”完成续写。

专题05读后续写之各种“走”和“跑”一、关键词各种“走”stroll闲逛mince碎步走toddle婴儿学步tiptoe蹑手蹑脚shuffle拖着脚走march列队走stride大步走strut趾高气扬地走stalk昂首阔步sneak鬼鬼祟祟地走sidle侧身走limp瘸着走stumble跌跌撞撞地走stagger蹒跚trudge吃力地走plod沉重缓慢地走wade涉水wander 漫步saunter 闲逛各种“路”1)avenue 大街；2)boulevard 林荫大道；3)walk, promenade 散步的路；4)ring road 环行路；5)alley 胡同；6)pavement 人行道,便道；7)pedestrian crossing 人行过街横道；8)public thoroughfare 街道；9)high street 大街,主要街道（英）10.main street主街道（美）11.along/up/down the street 沿着街道12. across the street 街对面13. on the other/opposite side of the street 在街道的另一边/对面14.side/back street 小路/偏僻街道15.crowded street 拥挤的街道16.one-way street 单行道17.street corner 街角二、常用短语1)sneak out of the house偷偷溜出2)give a jump in the air 跳到空中（表示开心）3)Jump to one’s feet 跳起来（表示震惊）4)make a running step back 跑着后退5)dash back 冲回6)Pace restlessly 不安地走动7)aimlessly 无目的地8)pop down a hole 跳入一个洞9)dig into one’s pocket 插入口袋10)Press one’s hand upon one’s heart 用手压住胸口（表示惊吓）11)stand a few moments without saying a word 无话可说地站在那里12)...flashed across her mind 闪过脑海13)start to one’s feet 站起来三、句子赏析1．Then Lisa stood up and made her way through the crowd toward me.2．Lisa planted her feet firmly in front of me.3．She managed to climb onto it and waited patiently.4．Reuben ran/rushed down Water Street, trembling with great panic.5．The shadows were lengthening when Reuben arrived at（动作） the factory. 6．Then, clutching the tin can, he headed for the shop.7．Racing home, Reuben burst through the front door.8．Disappointed and frustrated, the poor man made his way back to his family. 9．Suddenly, the woman stood up and entered the house in tears.10．And yet, they all just stood there staring at me, motionless.11．Belle Ringer nodded thoughtfully, and Frannie hurried off to wait on the rest of her tables.12．I led them toward a large corner booth. I could feel the rest of the staff following behind as we marched through the dining room.13．I dragged myself through daily chores, feeling exhausted.14．The elderly man fled away with great panic.15．The man stepped back/stepped onto the platform to take a good look at the paintings.16．He leapt to his feet and rushed out of the living room.17．He sprung from his chair and rushed to pick up the telephone.18．He jumped up and rushed out of the living room.19．She just sat there staring into space20．The kids sat around a campfire21．Please remain seated until your name is called.22．He seated himself comfortably at the foot of the bed.23．He took his usual seat at the front of the classroom.24．That man is hurt, he's limping.25．He was so drunk that he staggered all the way home.26．She stumbled upstairs and into bed.27．She tiptoed to the bed so as not to wake the baby.28．They strolled around the park.29．They enjoy wandering through the countryside.30．He paced up and down the platform, waiting for the train.31．Demonstrators marched through the streets of the city.32．A baby crawls before he can walk.33．Paul decided to edge away from the crowd.34．The cat crept silently towards the bird.35．The boy sneaked in without paying.36．I must dash or I'll miss the train.37．She goes jogging every day.38．He tripped over the step and fell.39．The group hiked up to the top of the hill.40．As I was sitting in the park, I watched as couples seemed to meander around happily.四、翻译练习1.这个运动员失去了平衡，向后趔趄摔倒了。

高考英语写作备考：读后续写之表达走路表达常规走路的方式to walk slowly around or to a place, often without any particular sense of purpose or direction 漫无目的的闲逛She wandered aimlessly around the streets.Visitors are free to wander through the gardens and woods.The child was found wandering the streets alone.to walk somewhere in a slow relaxed way 放松的慢悠悠的走People were strolling along the beach.He hummed to himself as he strolled leisurely through the streets.I strolled through the market stalls, stopping occasionally.We ambled down to the beach.They ambled along for miles.They spend their time fishing or ambling through the woods.He sauntered by, looking as if he had all the time in the world.She smiled and sauntered casually away.to walk with long steps in a particular direction 大步向前We strode across the snowy fields.He strode off in search of a taxi.She strode angrily into his office.The man strode confidently onto the stage.to walk with quiet steps 轻轻的走She padded across the room to the window.She padded softly around the house.The girl padded barefoot over to the window.The cat padded silently along the track.to make a long or difficult journey, especially on foot 长途跋涉I hate having to trek up that hill with all the groceries.Finally, we trekked across the wet sands towards the camp.They trekked the 45 miles across the glacier.She trekked across southern Africa when she was younger.to go for a long walk in the country, especially for pleasure 野外徒步You'll need some strong boots for hiking over rough country.I've hiked the canyon four times.We're going to hike to the top of that hill over there.to walk somewhere quickly in a determined way 坚定的走She marched over to me and demanded an apology.Ann marched straight past me and up the stairs.He marched off, muttering something.They marched proudly onto the football field.to walk in an angry or proud way 生气的离开He stalked off without a word.The actress stalked out of a press conference when asked if she had a weight problem.Snatching up her bag, she stalked out of the room.to walk, dance, or move with heavy steps 脚步很重的踏着She stomped angrily out of the office.The children were stomping around noisily.I could hear my mother stomping around in the other room.to walk for pleasure, especially in the countryside 漫步We spent the summer rambling in Ireland.You can ramble through some beautiful countryside in the area.to go somewhere secretly, trying to avoid being seen 偷偷溜进鬼鬼祟祟（走）SYNONYM creepI sneaked up the stairs.Did you sneak into my room while I was asleep?I caught him trying to sneak in without paying.We sneaked out through the back door.I crept up the stairs, trying not to wake my parents.I heard someone creeping around the house.The cat was creeping stealthily through the long grass.表达走路困难的方式to hit your foot against something while you are walking or running and almost fallThe child stumbled and fell.I stumbled over a rock.to walk with weak unsteady steps, as if you are about to fallThe injured woman staggered to her feet.He staggered home, drunk.The company is staggering under the weight of a £10m debt.She staggered blindly off into the darkness.She staggered to her feet and tottered unsteadily across the room.to walk with difficulty, especially because your feet or legs hurt 举步维艰He hobbled painfully across the road.She was hobbling around on crutches.He was still hobbling around with a stick.to walk slowly or with heavy steps, because you are tired or carrying something heavy 举步维艰+ noun He trudged the last two miles to the town.+ adv./prep. The men trudged up the hill, laden with supplies.We spent the morning trudging around the mall looking for a suitable gift.when a young child who has just learnt to walk toddles, he/she walks with short, unsteady steps 蹒跚学步I have to watch him all the time now that he’s toddling.to go in a particular direction while moving unsteadily from side to side 摇摇晃晃wobble down/along/towards etcCindy wobbled along the street on her bike.to walk with heavy or noisy steps, especially for a long time 长途跋涉(+ adv./prep.) We tramped across the wet grass to look at the statue. tramp somethingShe's been tramping the streets looking for a job.表示走路的名词a journey on foot, usually for pleasure or exerciseLet's go for a walk.I like to have a walk in the evenings.I decided to take a walk to clear my headHe's out for a walk with a friend.a long, hard walk lasting several days or weeks, especially in the mountainsThey reached the refugee camp after an arduous two-day trek across the mountains.a slow relaxed walkWe went for a strol l in the park.The beach is a leisurely ten-minute stroll away.They took a leisurely stroll along the river bank.a short walk in or around a place, usually with no special purposeI went to the park and had a wander around.a long walk in the countryThey went on a ten-mile hike through the forest.We could go into town but it's a real hike (= a long way) from here.a long walk for pleasureThey decided to go for a ramble in the country.We went for a ramble over the moors.We had a long tramp home. (a long walk)。

新高考读后续写素材库之关于走路的描写1.stagger[ˈstæɡə(r)] 蹒跚英译：walk as if unable to control one's movements蹒跚可仿写例句：He staggered along/across the road.They staggered out of the pub(酒馆) completely drunk(喝醉).The staggered from the coffee shop.2.plod [plɒd]沉重缓慢地走英译：v.walk heavily and firmly, as when weary, or through mud 沉重缓慢地走可仿写例句：The old man plodded along on his way. 那个老人吃力地走着。

3.pace [peɪs]踱步；缓慢而行英译：vi. walk with slow or fast paces 踱步；缓慢而行As they waited, Kravis paced the room nervously.在他们等着时，克拉维斯在房间里紧张不安地走来走去。

He found John pacing around the house, unable to sleep.他发现约翰正在房子里四下踱步，无法入眠。

4.march [mɑːtʃ]前进；行军，游行示威;(坚定地) 快步走英译1：vi. walk fast, with regular or measured steps; walk with a stride（坚定地向某地）前进；行军，游行示威；可仿写例句：He marched into the classroom and announced the exam.英译2：If you say that someone marches somewhere, you mean that they walk there quickly and in a determined way, forexample because they are angry. (坚定地) 快步走可仿写例句：He marched into the kitchen without knocking. 他没敲门就快步走进了厨房。

高考英语读后续写高分句一、面部表情1.哭与笑Tears cascaded down her cheek like a torrential downpour, her sobs echoing through the room, as if the weight of the world had crashed upon her shoulders.泪水像暴雨一样从她的脸上倾泻而下，她的哭泣在房间里回荡，仿佛世界的重压压在她的肩上。

Laughter erupted from his soul, just like a contagious symphony of joy that filled the air, as if he had discovered the secret to eternal happiness.笑声从他的灵魂中涌现，一曲感染力十足的喜悦交响乐充满了空气，仿佛他发现了永恒幸福的秘密。

Her tears painted a vivid portrait of heartbreak, as if her very soul was weeping.她的泪水勾勒出一幅鲜明的失落画卷，仿佛她的灵魂正在哭泣。

With a giggle that danced upon the air, she radiated aninfectious happiness, her laughter like a bubbling spring thatrejuvenated the spirits of all who heard it.她的咯咯笑声在空气中跳跃着，散发着感染力的快乐，她的笑声如同冒泡的泉水，让听到它的人们焕发精神。

His tears flowed silently, like a gentle stream carving its way through the landscape of his emotions, each drop a glimpse into the depths of his sorrow.他的泪水静静地流淌，如同一条温柔的小溪在情感的景观中开辟道路，每一滴都是对他悲伤深处的一瞥。