Modified sentences examples.Txt27 belief of the strength is even in the face of adversity, can also help you summon up ahead of the sails. The charm of belief is even in the face of cargo insurance, can also summon the courage to pluck up your life; faith is a great even misfortune, also can make you keep the soul of the sublime. Analysis and revising sentencesA syllabus requirements:Analysis and modify the wrong sentences, type sentences: improper word order, collocation improper, composition and incomplete or redundant, confusing, unclear meaning, illogical.Two, to release testThis test is mainly based on the analysis and modification of candidates. From in recent years, the college entrance examination papers can see four major forms of proposition of the test sites are: (1) to determine whether the sentence is grammatically wrong; (2) to allow candidates to modify the sentences in the original sentence; (3) to determine analysis the problems of wrong sentences is correct; and (4) to determine changes of wrong sentences is exactly when. To determine the type of questions appear in the first volume, such as in 1999, 2000 and 2001 national college entrance examination questions of the 5 questions, sometimes also allow candidates modify hands, in the second volume, such as the 1998 national college entrance examination questions of the 32 questions.There are many different kinds of sentences, "examination" by defining the types of wrong sentences for six. So, we should grasp the test points and effectively understand the essence, to carry out test review.Three, knowledge point decompositionType sentences:(a) improper word orderImproper word order common circumstances:1, the position of the attributive and the center of the word upside down:Example: the production of cotton in our country can not be self sufficient for a long time. ("cotton production" should be "the production of cotton")2, the real language on the position of adverbial:Example: the majority of young people show great enthusiasm for reform. (the "incomparable" to "passion")3, put the adverbial in the position of the attributive:Should play the full role of the majority of young people. (the "full" to "play", and a "delete").4, multi attributive improper word order:Exhibit the cultural relics unearthed thousands of years ago. (before and after "thousands of years" to "cultural relics" and "")5, multi adverbial word order is improper.Example: we are not of any country bullying powers. (before should be "arbitrary" to "bully")6, the location of the associated words is improper:If he can't seek truth from facts, his career will be lost. ("he" should move to "if")7, the cart before the horse:Example: Aositeluofusiji "how the steel was tempered" for China youth is no stranger. (should be changed to: Chinese youth of Ostrovsky.)8, improper location clauses:For their own way, they are exploring them in the judgment, they are looking for, they are thinking about. To their own way, they are thinking, they are judging, they are exploring, they are looking for.(two) collocation is not properly.1, subject predicate collocation:His revolutionary spirit comes to me. ("spirit" and "emerging" cannot constitute the subject predicate relation, the "spirit" to "image")2, moving bin collocation improper:To mark the arrival of the three leading festival. ("memory" can only be "three eight", can not be "coming")3, modifiers and the center of collocation inappropriate:We seriously studied the suggestions of the employees and consulted with an open mind. "Serious" can not be modified "research", can be changed to "serious", "prudent" and so on4, the guest of honor collocation:For example: we firmly believe that there is such a day, China's agriculture and agriculture will become a developed country. (should be "state" to "act")5, collocation is not associated with the words:Now that you are here, I should go. ("since" and "also" can not be used by collocation, should be "also" to "on")(three) incomplete redundant components1, incomplete composition(1) lack of subject:Because she is such a good result, got the praise of the teacher and the students. (should be changed to "as a result of such a good performance, she got the praise of teachers and students")(2) lack of predicateOld society, the working people are not enough to eat, wear not warm life. Or remove the "life" or "live" before "eat".(3) lack of object:Example: they have the motherland, vigorously carry forward the games to have the whole world in view, stroke, finally won the championship. (should be "dare to fight" plus "spirit")(4) the lack of necessary additional components:For example: a spring wheat grows well, gained gratifying harvest. (should be "get" plus "summer" in order to limit the time)(5) incomplete related words:This academic society, the harvest is very big, the time is not long. (should be in "time" before adding "although" one word)2, redundant(1) subject redundancyOur revolutionary predecessors, for the benefit of the people, they shed much blood, gave many precious lives. (in front of the subject "revolutionary predecessors", and "they" are not necessary.)(2) predicate surplus:Students are working hard to review, to greet the arrival of the college entrance examination. "Welcome" is the "college entrance examination", rather than "arrival", it should be deleted.(3) redundant object:Example: today, I came to Yangzhou where the Slender West Lake, visited the White Pagoda, the five scenic spots such as Jun and yutai. ("place" is unnecessary, should be removed)(4) additional ingredients:For example: concise words, have to delete some slightly. ("some" and "slightly plus" repeat, you can delete one)(four) combined with chaos(1) sentence combinationYou don't study hard, then how can you have a good result can be imagined. (the rhetorical question and declarative sentence destruction of the sentence structure and tone mix together, complete. If you use a rhetorical question, it should be "that how will have good results? "If use the judgment sentence, should be" the result is not good can be imagined ".(2) statement of hybridityExample: Shanghai Literature and Art Press published "survival", the author is a sting has resided abroad for more than 20 years of Chinese Canadian author. (is subject predicate predicate and verb predicate sentence and mixed to get rid of the end of the sentence, "the authors hand")(five) ideographic unknown1, refers to the unknown:Example: it was accepted that some people objected that he agreed with the idea. "This kind of idea" in the end is to refer to "accept", or "opposition", the account is not clear.2, sentence ambiguity:Case: my sister can't find my father and mother in the heart very anxious. What is the situation is"sister" in the heart worry? Or "Dad""mother" in a hurry. Or "mother" in the heart worry? Can be in the "father" and "mother" in the middle of a comma, but also in the "father" before the addition of a comma(six) illogical:1, self contradictory:For example: he is a number of victims in the escape. (since the "escape" nature is not dead, how can say is "dead in a"? Should be changed to: how many people died, he is a spared).2, the scope is not clear:From the perspective of the development of the cause, but also the lack of scientific experts and personnel. (the talents include scientists, should not be tied, it should be said that "the subject of experts and other personnel")3, the imposition of cause and effect:I saw him come out of the factory two times, and I knew that the old man who was eager to help the patient turned out to be a worker. (by the two time he saw the old man coming out of the factory, he concluded that he was a worker, and that his reasons were not sufficient.4, no misconduct:For a few years, he has never forgotten to collect, sort out folk songs, and accumulated a lot of information. ("all the time" or "at any time", the sentence is just the opposite, can be "forget" to "in")Summary: the above of wrong sentences classification is not strict, for sentences, do not have to memorize the type, as long as the practice, to found faulty and can correct it.Four, college entrance examination sample1, each of the following sentences, the sentence is not good (1999 national college entrance examination)A, during the Spring Festival this year, the city's 210 fire engines, more than 3000 fire officers and soldiers, give up leave, always adhere to their respective duties on the job.B, "?Yan Xia Xi Cha; woman; fly thorium Metaplexis japonica troubled Sheng Yan boom team leech Kang pat heir graben Nao halo ye; better dainty bites melon Yan Kou Na Xi Xian Mei stir vulgar Yu Sheng Hao magpie seek; for?C, she to accumulate guide to 400 yuan pocket money and aid to poor areas dropouts Chang Bo Zhao, to ensure that he finished primary school tuition payment.D, March 17th, 6 members were expelled from the International Olympic Committee for the bribery scandal. Second days, the world's major newspapers about this shocked the international sports events were reported in detail.Analysis: the correct option is C. A collocation inappropriate, officers and soldiers can give up leave, stick to their posts, fire engines can not be. B is a sentence combination, "should be welcomed by the vast number of consumers". D items preposition collocation inappropriate, should be "on" to "for".2, each of the following sentences, the sentence is not good (2000 national college entrance examination)A, the network seminar participants, in addition to the north of the school staff, as well as from Tsinghua University, 15 years of college teachers, students and technical personnel also participated in the study.B, our newspapers, magazines, TV and all publications, more responsibility give an example. Stop words are not standardized phenomenon, enhanced by using the normative consciousness in the language.C, in the new millennium, the Chinese nation the dragon will proudly soaring in the boundless sky, order to create the miracle of the world amazing to change.D, although the factory is not standardized, but had two times won the provincial Science Conference award, the three was awarded the title of provincial quality products, products are exported to all parts of the country and Southeast asia.The key points of the analysis ability. The correct answer is C. A of a sentence can be said "students in hybridity...... Outside, and Tsinghua University...... Teachers, students and scientific and technical workers. "Can also say" students in addition to...... Outside, from...... Also participated in the study. The use of two kinds of sentence types in the combination of soft and soft is bound to result in structural disorder. B items not logical, "all publications" including "newspapers and magazines", so they can not be tied. D collocation inappropriate, the subject of this sentence is "factory", "small", "two times won the provincial Science Conference Award" can refer to "this factory", but "was awarded the title of provincial quality products" can not be "this factory".3, each of the following sentences, the sentence is not a (2001 national college entrance examination)A, in science and technology is the first productive forces of the concept of the people today, whocan not believe that technology will bring the gospel to mankind? Because of this, no wonder the crooks have to play under the guise of the fish in troubled waters, high-tech.B, how can we get rich? The key problem is that knowledge plays a decisive role. The lack of knowledge will inevitably lead to the lack of wealth, the wealth of the rich is often based on the full knowledge of the premise.C, by the Beijing people's Art Theatre complex row of large-scale historical drama "Cai Wenji" is scheduled to be staged in the capital theatre in May 1st, a few days ago under intense rehearsal.D, in recent years, China has accelerated the pace and scale of the development of higher education, colleges and universities will further expand enrollment, and focus on the construction of a number of high-level universities and disciplines.Analysis: the correct answer to this question is A. B made a sentence combination structure of chaos caused by faults. Above said "how to make everyone rich?", the following should be went on to say, "Let knowledge plays a decisive role, still in the bud mood, now have already become tone obviously before and after lost care. C's paradox, illogical. "A few days ago" means "a few days ago", and "...... Among them, the behavior is still in the process, so the two words in the tense phase of the conflict, should be a few days ago, to the present". D has made a move bin collocation improper problems, saying that "speed up" can be, but can not say "to speed up the scale", but can only say "to expand the scale".Five, method summaryCollege entrance examination of wrong sentences test not for test of life and death type sentences in mind, as long as you find out the trouble and can be modified. Therefore, we should do exercises, grasp the methods of discrimination and correction of incorrect sentences, the following simple the analysis grammar, modify the wrong sentences method.(a) of related methods1, the sense of language readingMobilize the sense of language, reading in the process, from the perceptual to detect faults according to the statement, the statement is awkward habit. If uncomfortable, then pay attention to the analysis and comparison, such as prudential reasons, to modify. For example:Regardless of climate and geographical environment is extremely unfavorable, climbers still overcome the difficulties, the success of climbing to the top. No matter...... All...... "It is not used, the correct statement should be" no matter...... Despite the bad ""...... Very unfavorable".2, tightening methodRemove the branches and leaves of the sentence (set, shape, fill) to tighten the trunk, to see if there is any problem with the trunk, if the main problem, and then check the branches and leaves.For example: his lofty revolutionary quality often comes to my mind. (the main "quality", obviously refers to the improper collocation.)3, sentence analogyModeled on the structure of the original sentence made commonly used sentences, after comparison, there is no problem will be clearFor example:The experience of cultural and educational workers especially teachers' attention. (the original sentence structure is more complex, the first compression of Jane as "this is worth their attention". Then, mutatis mutandis, the structure of the sentence: "this is worth their learning""this is worth visiting and they". These three sentences and daily statement than the "a" word, so the original sentence should will "teacher attention" in the "" remove)4, logical significance analysisSome mistakes from the grammar can not find a problem, have analyzed from the theory, this is the logical meaning of analysis. That is, from the concept of use, judgment, reasoning methods to consider whether appropriate, the sentence before and after the order, the relationship between the sentence is appropriate.For example: (1) the city was fake and shoddy products use unscrupulous divisive tactics......(2) those who have outstanding achievements, is in the difficult environment become torch grinding.(1) the sentence "fake and shoddy products" is not reasonable, should be changed into "shoddy products" or "fake brand-name products". (2) in the sentence with "any...... "The universal affirmative judgment, exaggerated, should be changed to" all "as the" most ", behind the" remove "word.(two) modify incorrect methodCan be divided into words:Add (component incomplete) delete (excess) change (a misnomer) shift (improper word order)Revision is not recycling, do not change the original meaning of the sentence. Especially shouldpay attention to, can adjust the word order is no additions and deletions, can change a place, never changes two, change the sentences should be brief and efficient.1, to explore the success of the footprint, mostly benefit from a good family education and good social education.2, her rosy cheeks like a blooming flower.3, 6 o'clock in the morning, on the road to the airport on both sides of the street has been full of tens of thousands of people out.4, in order to prevent the harm caused by tree diseases, garden workers one by one to public places, parks, squares, streets of trees for investigation.5, through the performance of the Chinese men's football team, so that we recognize that a good attitude is very important.6, a love of reading, since we can not have a comfortable house, quiet night, will always maintain a pure reading feelings.7, the students of the school education curriculum reform and exchange of a wide range of views.8, whether to study hard, so that we obtain excellent results of the guarantee.9, we should establish the courage to take the bull by the horns.10, middle school students understand and read a large number of literary works, is conducive to broaden their horizons, cultivate sentiment.Change: 1, to explore the footsteps of successful people, most of their success to benefit from a good family education and social education. (lack of subject)2, her rosy face like a peach blossom in full bloom. (common sense, pear is white)3, to the airport at 6 o'clock in the morning, the street has been full of tens of thousands of people out. (1)4, in order to prevent the harm caused by tree disease, garden workers one by one on the park, square, street trees for investigation. (Park, street, etc. is a public place, repeat)5, the Chinese men's football team's table?Zheng Gua Yi Qiao Xin Jimei male milk fresh bag with under shallow V plaque G? Prepositional phrase but not subject)6, a love of reading, even if you can not have a comfortable house, quiet night, will alwaysmaintain a pure reading feelings. (improper use of words)7, the students of the school education curriculum reform widely exchanged views. (there is no widespread opinion)8, whether to study hard, is we can obtain the outstanding achievement the guarantee. (conditional clauses, after should be consistent)9, we should establish the fear of difficult in the study of confidence. (improper collocation)10, middle school students to understand and read a large number of literary works, is conducive to the wide field of vision, Tao。
![英文改写句子[大学英文句子改写大全]](https://img.taocdn.com/s1/m/ca90d6ac33687e21ae45a9cf.png)
