阅读短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
The way of Chinese people’s life has been changed through the China’s “New Four Great Inventions”. What are “New Four Great Inventions”？They are High-speed rail, Shared bike, Online shopping and AliPay.
What did the China’s “New Four Great Inventions” bring to us？
High-speed rail—Modern transportation makes everybody neighbors. The invention of the high-speed railway makes it easy to thousands of miles a day. Today China’s rail transit technology is the best, the China’s daily avera ge of 4, 000 trains, sending about 4.6 million passengers.
Shared bike—Short walks become more convenient and faster, and carbon missions are reduced, which is friendly to the environment. You can download the APP about shared bikes, pay some money, then you can use bicycles everywhere in the street. The Chinese shared bicycle programs have been becoming more and more popular.
Online shopping—Don’t need to go out to find the needs for living. Online shopping, as the name implies, is to pay money online. Purchases(购买物) can be sent home. China has 751 million internet users, 724 million mobile phone users; total transactions (销售额) on November 11 and December 12 hit a record high every year. Online shopping lets Chinese internet users enjoy “shopping carnival” every day.
Alipay—A software which can replace cash payment. With intelligence phones’ popularization, AliPay has become an indispensable (不可或缺的) APP. Through scanning the “QR code”, AliPay wants to realize the ambition of “replacing cash payments” gradual ly. On 11 November 2018, both the mobile payment account and the transaction reached 213.5 billion.
There is no doubt that China has already used its own power of “New Four Great Inventions” to become the great powerful technological country, showing the p ower of China once again.
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_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】China’s new “Four Great Inventions”— High-speed rail, Shared bike, Online shopping and AliPay have changed Chinese people’s life. High-speed rail makes trips faster than before. Meanwhile, Shared bike lets the short walks become faster, more convenient and environmentally friendly. Online shopping creates many business opportunities on the internet and Alipay will gradually replace cash payment. Without doubt, new four inventions contribute to a great and powerful technological China.
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这是一篇概要写作应用文。
【详解】如何提取要点，注意事项。
本文是一篇说明文。主要介绍了中国新的“四大发明”：高速铁路，共享单车，网上购物和支付宝。文章结构为总分总结构。
第一、二段总起全文，介绍了中国新的“四大发明”，因此围绕这一句话可以展开概述。第三、四、五和第六段详细介绍新的“四大发明”。第四段介绍高速铁路，其中“The invention of the high-speed railway makes it easy to thousands of miles a day.”指出高速铁路的发明使得交通更加快速，故可根据本句进行概述为High-speed rail makes trips faster than before.；第五段介绍共享单车“Short walks become more convenient and faster, and carbon missions are reduced, which is friendly to the environment.”指出共享单车使短途行走变得更加方便快捷，减少了碳排放任务，对环境友好。故可根据本句进行概述为Shared bike lets the short walks become faster, more convenient and environmentally friendly.；第五段介绍了网上购物，指出“total transactions (销售额) on November 11 and December 12 hit a record high every year.”高额的销售额意味着更多的商业机会；第六段介绍支付宝“A software which can replace cash payment.”可替代现金支付，故可根据本句进行概括为Alipay will gradually replace cash payment. 。
最后一段阐述新“四大发明”对中国的影响为：become the great powerful technological country。
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高中英语写作课教学设计 院系：外国语学院 班级：2010级（1）班 姓名：赵乙徽
英语写作课教学设计 设计意图：运用“讨论式”的英语教学模式和采用“任务型”英语教学途径，培养同学们的听说读写能力，突出阅读和写作技能的 训练、学习策略的培养、阅读和写作的实践，从而使学生领 会语言信息的输入与输出、阅读和写作之间的内在联系，并 引导学生独立思考并以讨论、合作学习的方式练习英语写作。教学年级：高一 课题名称：Unit 3 Information Report——Moon Park 授课类型：英语写作 教材版本：人教版 相关领域：景点描写 授课时间：45分钟 教学目标：1.培养学生的阅读策略和提高阅读能力 2.下课后学生能够写一篇描述地点或景点的文章 3.能够正确的运用本单元学到的单词、短语和语法 教学重点：引导学生仔细阅读文章，了解文章中心思想，并能之后用自己的话描述一个喜欢的地方，实现用词准确，行文流畅 教学难点：学生需要学会合理运用有关的语法项目来描述地点 教学方法：讨论法 教学手段：多媒体Powerpoint 教学过程：
第一环节：信息输入——阅读课（用时约20分钟） Step 1:Pre- reading 课前给学生布置如下任务：1）：what kind of things can you do at a fun park? 2）：look at the picture below.do you know what this ride is called?what does it do? 要求学生带着这些问题预习课文。由于学生是在任务目标驱 使下预习，预习就很有成效，而不是走过场。为课堂讨论奠 定了基础，同时也提高了课堂教学的效率，发挥了学生的主 体作用，培养了学生查找信息的能力和较强的自学能力。 Step 2: Lead-in 让学生讨论以下问题： Answer the following questions: 1):Have you ever been to a fun park? What kind of things can you do at a fun park? Look at the picture below.Do you know what this ride is called?What does it do? 分组展示预习任务的完成情况。一方面教师可以检查学生的 预习效果，另一方面做到以学生为中心自然导入新课。学生 分组（四人一组）讨论，（也是初步展示预习成果），学生 交流气氛热烈，学习兴趣很高。为使学生主动参与教学的全 过程开了好头。 Step 3: Reading 这一阶段为学生对语言知识、语言材料进行加工、处理的
高中英语课堂教学评价标准 一、教师主导作用 ◆教学理念 1．体现《新课标》的思想精髓，面向全体学生，注重学生个性发展，注重因材施教。2．体现当代外语教学理念，灵活使用先进的外语教学方法和教学策略。 ◆教学素养 1．熟悉教材，能创造性地使用教材。内容科学，容量、难易程度适当；体现学科知识的整合。 2．教学目标、重点明确，注重联系学生生活实际创设真实的语言环境。从学生实际和教学要求出发,内化和活化教材。 3．专业基本功扎实，能用流利的英语组织教学。 4．语音、语调和语流地道、自然,语言知识准确。 5．有驾驭课堂的语言表达能力、组织能力和应变能力。 ◆教学艺术 1．教学思路清晰，收放自如，难易得当。 2．教学语言生动，善于创设问题情景来启发、提问和开展活动。教态亲切自然，有感染力。 3．注重教学方法的调控和学习方法的指导。 4．课堂结构有层次，过渡自然。 ◆创新意识 1．有自己独特的教学特色，教学设计新颖。 2．能把现代教学理论和课堂教学实际有机结合。 3．教学改革意识明显，能在教学过程中生成新的教学资源。 二、学生主体地位 ◆学习常规 1．课前有预习，带着问题上课。 2．认真做好课堂笔记。 ◆课堂氛围 1．积极参与语言实践活动，参与面广并富有成效。 2．积极参与师生之间、学生之间真实的情感交流。 3．交际活动有合作意识，愿意倾听、获取他人信息。 ◆思维状态 1．思维活跃，能主动表达看法、观点。 2．能较好地感知、理解学习内容。
3．注意力集中，思维紧随整个教学过程。 ◆创新精神 1．敢于提出质疑，勇于探索。 2．有独特见解或解决方案。 3．善于将知识迁移，有较强的知识再生能力。 三、教学实际效果 ◆目标达成 1．完成课时计划，达到预期知识和能力目标。 2．不同层次学生都学有所得。 3．学生对知识、技能掌握好。 ◆学生面貌 1．学生对本节课的教学满意。 2．学生学习兴趣浓厚。 3．学生学习方法得当。 ● 评价一节英语课是否达到“自主学习”方式的要求，主要抓住以下五个环节： 一看，学生学习热情的高低。是否解决好了“要我学”与“我要学”的问题；二看，教师主导作用发挥得如何。能否有效地启发、引导学生进行自主学习；三看，学生参与自主学习人数的多少；四看，教学设计的激思程度。教学设计是否有利于激活学生的创造性思维；五看，学生在课堂上发表意见的多少。教师是否精心设计了让学生自由发表意见的时间和情景。
高考英语题型训练：概要写作 概要写作是在正确理解文章的基础上，在不改变原文的中心思想，体裁和结构的前提下，省去细节，用简明、精炼的语句高度浓缩地概况文章的主要内容和观点。注意只需要用不同语言复述原文主旨，不能加入自己的观点。 I helped an old man in rags who lost his way, Main point: I helped an old man. Details: in rags, who lost his way. 概要写作是阅读理解和书面表达的沟通桥梁，考查的是学生在实现自由的思维表达之前，对他人的信息在理解的基础上进行概括表达的能力。选材上，提供一篇350词以内的短文，题材不限，一般以议论文说明文或者记叙文为主，要求考生写出一篇60词以内的内容概要。 完成一篇概要写作，需要经过下列步骤。 1，读原文，找出全文中心思想和段落主题句。注重全文第一句，每段首尾句。碰上细节句，比如具体数字、举例等可以跳过不读。 2，组织语言，对主题句和中心思想同义替换表达。在转换改写中，注重语言表达的准确性、高级性，不照抄原文句子，同时注意篇幅的比例安排，用较多的文字表达重要的内容。 转换方式： （1）常用词替换：比如be able to 替代can, have the ability；a great many 替换 a lot of; convincing替换persuasive等。 （2）改变词性，比如successful变成succeed in doing; happy变成happily; adapt 替换adaptive, reproduction替换reproduce、reproductive等。 （3）改变句式，比如把原文两个句子变成主从复合句，把原文的从句变成非谓语动词，普通句改成it is句式等。 3，找出恰当的关联词，连贯全文。如：first, what’s more, last but not least等，关注各段落之间的逻辑关系，关注一切有转承关系的连接词，如however, besides, in addition, therefore, instead等。 4，大略估算一下字数，如果不足50个字，尝试加上形容词、副词如：extraordinary, amazing, significantly, greatly等，或者用定语从句，状语从句、非谓语动词加上一点文中的细节扩张原来的短句。 5，检查：语法错误如单复数、主谓一致、时态、主干和从句主谓齐全、非谓语动词准确。杜绝低级错误。 为写好概要写作，在平时的阅读中，应注意： 1，培养抓中心句、概况中心思想的习惯。 2，掌握词性和句型转换方法，学会用不同的语法结构表达同一个主题。 3，积累同义替换词和连接词。
写作基础训练三 1 Tom感到既紧张又害怕。 _____________________________________________________________________________. 2.那个年轻人的照相机和Tom的照相机一样。 ______________________________________________________________________________. 3.高中生背英语单词是很重要的。 ____________________________________________________________________________. 4.我的英语老师就写作给我建议。 _____________________________________________________________________________. 5.粗心不是一个好习惯. ____________________________________________________________________________. 6.他们的争论持续了一个小时。 ____________________________________________________________________________. 7.我喜欢读小说。 ___________________________________________________________________________. 8.我们必须努力学习来实现梦想。 ____________________________________________________________________________. 9.Mary让我耐心一点。 ____________________________________________________________________________. 10.毫无疑问学生在课堂上玩手机是不被接受的。 _____________________________________________________________________________.
写作 假如你是李华，你刚收到了你的朋友王梅的电子邮件，她在邮件里向你询问在高中如何学好英语。请你根据下列的内容给她写封回信。 1.上课认真听讲，做好笔记，课后及时复习； 2.词汇是基础，每天早上花半个小时的时间背诵单词，朗读课文； 3.课外多与同学用英语交流，提高听力和口语能力； 4.每天坚持写日记。 注意：1.词数120—150词左右，短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总数； 2.内容可适当发挥，注意行文连贯。 Dear Wang Mei, I’m very glad to have received your e-mail.
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高中英语写作教学现状与方法研究 洋泾中学沈兰萍 【摘要】本文通过对执教学生的写作现状的调查分析，依托过程-体裁教学理论，有机地把教学材料与书面表达结合起来，因文制宜地进行科学合理的教学实践尝试，摸索了一种有效又切合高中实际的提高书面表达能力的途径。 【关键词】写作问题 ; 教学策略 英语写作在听说读写四项技能中相对较难，它能够体现英语学习者的英语表达能力和思维能力，能够比较客观地反映他们综合运用语言的能力。因此，培养学生的笔头交际能力是高中英语教学的目的之一。历年高考中的Translation 和Guided writing是直接检测学生写作技能的题型，要求学生具有较高的写作能力。然而，在目前的英语教学中，写作训练相对薄弱，存在着“学生说到写作心烦，教师见到学生的习作头痛”的现象。从历年高考来看，学生的书面表达失分相当多，问题主要表现在写作内容贫乏、用汉语思维方式造句、谋篇布局与衔接能力薄弱以及语法错误多等方面。自９５年始新教材的全面推广使用，从客观上加强了英语写作教学，广大英语教师也在进行空前的辛勤耕耘，而学生的写作水平却仍在低谷徘徊，这说明了什么？是近几年中学英语教学没有什么进步？还是大纲规定的“写作能力”要求过高？为此，笔者对目前高中学生英语书面表达能力的现状进行了多方面的调查和分析，并就怎样提高课堂写作教学的心得略陈管见。 一、写作调查与分析 笔者对本校06届学生刚进入高三时进行了书面表达能力的测试调查，进行现状分析，以更清楚地了解学生书面表达能力以便进行有的放矢的写作教学。 （一）、写作实例调查 完成NCE(Book V) Unit1 Common Home教学后，笔者让学生写了一篇题为”Give opinions on endangered animals”的文章。答卷时间和评分标准类同高考，阅卷后对两个班的97篇习作文章进行了逐个的错误登记、归类，并进行了统计分析。调查结果列表如下： 错误类型97篇习作中错误总量平均每篇习作错误数量
新高中英语概要写作答题技巧 概要写作要求读懂所给的阅读材料，用自己的语言高度概括文章的主要内容和观点，有三个步骤：1阅读 a.把握文章体裁。概要写作的前提是要理解原文。首先，通读原文，把握文章体裁、中心思想和整体结构，根据文章的体裁特点来决定内容的取舍，可以从以下方面的内容(见下表)入手。 ▲不同体裁文章的要点 b.画出主题句或关键词，主题句一般出现在段首或段尾。在找到主题句后，要分析主题句的意义，进一步确定衬托主题句的一些关键词（组）如动词、名词等。 c.整合概括大意。根据阅读时获取的信息、主题句或关键词(组)等，对相关的内容进行整合，理清各层次、要点之间的关系，用自己的语言把词(组)扩展成句，归纳出各段落的大意，也就是表达的要点。2写作
概要写作不是对原文的简单复述，而是在透彻理解原文的基础上，对原文进行高度的概括。注意以下几点： a.准确。准确理解原文包括对原文中每个要点及与之相关的“一些重要论据，句子的理解等。概要写作必须绝对忠实于原文，既不能遗漏任何要点，也不能随意添加内容。概要写作的时态顺应与原文的时态，顺序一致。由于概要写作是转述别人的事情或观点，所以，不管原文使用何种人称概要写作一般都要用第三人称。 b.客观。在进行概要写作时，要依据原文作者的观点，客观地转述文中的要点，不要把自己个人的观点和看法掺杂进去，不要使用“I think”和“I believe”等主观性的词句。由于概要写作不允许照抄原文中的句子，因此，可采用句型转换、同义词转化、语态互换等手法将原文中的句子进行改头换面，达到“雁过不留痕”的效果。如可用单个词汇替换具有相同语法功能的单词和词组：用determine 代替“make up ones mind”;用therefore和to等表示逻辑意义的连接词代替较长的词组“as a result”和“in order to”等。 c.简洁。由于概要写作的词数有限，所以，可以采取削“枝”去“叶”的方法来减少词数。通常的方法是去掉原文中的一些实例、冗长的说明、描述性的修饰语以及省略或简化图表，删除直接引语的对话。如果必须保留某些重要的对话，可将其改为间接引语的形式，即把对话体变为叙述体；或采用主谓缩写( we are→we're；they will→they'll)，句式省略( when he crossed the road= when crossing the road)，合并句子，使用简单句、并列句，with的复合结构，适当使用复合句等方法来进行概要写作。 d.连贯。连接词是内容概要的桥梁，它在句与句或段与段之间起铺垫的作用，能够把内容概要有机地串联起来，确保行文流畅，衔接紧凑。因此，概要写作哪怕只有一个段落，也要根据原文的层次结构，在适当的地方添加连接词，如表示顺序关系的“firstly”¨secondly"“finally”；