主题训练15----托物思景
【名师点拨】
对于一个中学生来讲,从小应该具有爱国主义精神。在这个主题训练中,学生们可以通过今昔对比,抒发对故乡、对祖国的美好情怀,从而树立起报效祖国的坚定信念。这样既训练了学生的写作能力,又具有爱国主义教育意义。另外,这个主题中也涉及了人们之间互赠礼物的行为,其实一方面是对某人或某一节日的美好祝愿,另一方面,也正是体现了当今社会人与人之间的和谐气氛。
【主题词汇】
个人成长: birthplace,be brought up,be educated in
家乡面貌:take on a new look, change a lot modern buildings, develop rapidly, more and more,better and better
风土人情:beautiful views, natural resources( 然),local customs, special local product
个人感受: be proud of,be rooted in( 報在)
【常用句型】
1. Great changes have taken place here.
2. No matter where I am, I'm forever rooted here.
3.With the help of the government,my hometown will become mo re and more beautiful.
4.My hometown has changed so much that I could hardly believe my eyes.I hope it'll change for the better in the future.
【模拟试题】
Changes in my hometown
a.What changes have taken place in your hometown?
b. What do you think of these changes?
【要点分价】
1.要写出家乡的今昔变化,可用对比手法.
2.家乡的变化中有人和物的变化。
3.变化的原因可以从两个角度来写:政府的措施和人为的力量,最后要落实到自己的行动。
【思路写作】
①上海的地理位置及景点介绍
1. Shanghai lies in the east of China.
2.In Shanghai there are many scenic spots such as...
3.Its special charm attracts a lot of tourists all over the world every year.
4. You can see plenty of landmarks which are familiar to foreigners in Shanghai，such as...
5. Shanghai is a modern and international city which is famous for its beautiful views and buildings of different styles.
6.It is full of Chinese traditional culture.
7.Its famous for its shopping centres and night views.
8. People's Square is known as the centre of Shanghai.
9. Of all the landmarks,the Oriental Pearl TV Tower is one of the most attractive destinations.
10. No matter where you go , you will be caught by the views.
11. That is why many tourists come to Shanghai for a visit every year.
12. Therefore,it's not surprising that many tourists come to visit Shanghai every year to shop.
②上海的变化
1. Shanghai is playing a m ore and more important part in the world.
2. More and more high-rise s will be built soon.
3. The narrow streets have been widened so the traffic becomes better.
4. A large number of old ho uses have been pulled down. Instead,more and more new high-rises have been built. They look high and magnificent.
5.Many trees have been planted on both sides of the road. They make our city more beautiful and cleaner than it used to be.
6.Public transport has improved,with the network of undergrounds,light rails and several elevated highways.
7.Shopping malls and supermarkets have made shopping more convenient.
8. In recent years, Shanghai has developed a lot and great changes have taken place.
③希望和祝愿
1.No doubt, Shanghai will be more beautiful than before.
2. Welcome to China!Welcome to Shanghai!
3.I think no one will miss the chance to visit the beautiful city-Shanghai.
【范文评讲】
原文稿
Great changes have taken place in my hometown. When I was a young child,there are few high-rises in Shanghai. And only a few people went shopping in huge shops. Nowadays, there are more and more tall buildings in Shanghai, Many
foreigners visit Shanghai. They always visit the landmarks in Shanghai, such as YuGarden and the Bund. There are more trees beside the streets which make our city clean.
All in all, Shanghai changes a lot- It will play a more and more important role in the world. Why not visit Shanghai?
【点评与评分】
文章中心明确,结构合理。句型使用正确,内容符合要求。按中考作文20分计算,属于第二档的文章,可得15分左右。需改进之处:
1.When I was a young child,there are few high-rises in Shanghai.讲述过去的状态用一般过去时.
2.上海的今日变化要具体阐述,可分为三个部分来写:建筑、环境和交通。
修改稿
Great changes have taken place in my hometown.When I was a young child,there were few high-rises in Shanghai. And only a few people went shopping in huge shops. Nowadays, Shanghai has developed a lot. More and more new high-rises have been built. They look high and magnificent.Besides, many trees on both sides of the roads make our city more beautiful and cleaner than it used to be.Furthermore,public transport has improved,with the building of undergrounds ,light rails and several elevated highways. Many foreigners visit the landmarks in Shanghai,such as Y u Garden and the Bund.
All in all. Shanghai changes a lot. It will play a more and m ore important role in the world. Why not visit Shanghai?
【范文选登】
1.Shanghai is a beautiful city.It is in the east of China. There are many tall buildings and interesting places in Shanghai such as Yu Garden,People's Square and so on. It is famous for night views and shopping malls. Now great changes have taken place. More and more high-rises have been built. People plant more trees to make the city clean. The traffic becomes better and better. The 2010 World Expo was successfully held in Shanghai. Everyone is trying to be a lovely Shanghainese. We believe “better city, better life".
2. It's a long time since I left my hometown. After I made a cal I to a friend living there, he was ready to show me some pictures through an e-mail.
From the photos,I found that great changes have taken place there, For example, the streets have become wider, and the house is higher. Besides,the people there are dressed in modern clothes. Many modern buildings are being built.
My hometown has changed so much that I could hardly believe my eyes.I hope it'll change for the better in the future.
【范文链接】
1
My hometown
a.I live in a small town. I like it very much. It has lots of tall trees and the air is fresher than that in cities. My hometown has changed for the better. People's living conditions are getting better and better.
People in my hometown are very kind and friendly. Most people here are farmers.They plant crops with the help of machines. Children can get good education. And people can enjoy leisure activities in their spare time.
With the help of the government,my hometown will become more and more beautiful.
b.My hometown is a very beautiful place. The environment there is excellent.There are small rivers,beautiful trees and flowers.
People here are all kind-hearted.If you come here for a visit, you will feel very comfortable,just like staying at home. People's main activities are planting crops. They can also enjoy many sorts of leisure activities, such as fishing, swimming, planting trees an d so on.
Thanks to the government, now my hometown has developed rapidly. All the people are working hard to make our village more beautiful. I hope my hometown can become better and better in the near future.
2.
Shanghai
Nowadays, Shanghai is playing a more and more important part in the world.Many changes have taken place in my hometown.
So far,the n arrow streets have been widened so that the traffic is improved.A large number of old houses have been pulled down.Instead,more and more new high-rises have been built. With its beautiful gardens, cultural places such as museums and temples, Shanghai attracts thousands of visitors both at home and abroad every year.
Besides,Shanghai is the biggest economic and financial center in China. With the rapid development of science and technology, Shanghai now be comes one of the
largest economic and financial hubs in the world. You can go there by all means of transport: ship, highway and railroad transport, air flight,etc.
I think Shanghai will be more beautiful and powerful than before because of the great changes. Welcome to visit Shanghai.
3.
_______is calling
a.
Paris is calling
Paris is the capital of France. It is one of the most popular tourist destinations in the world. With its world-famous landmarks such as the Eiffel Tower, the Arc de Triomphe, and its wide tree-lined streets,Paris is one of the most beautiful cities in the world. Besides, French restaurants are also very famous, and y ou can enjoy tasty local food there-Paris is calling! We're looking for ward to visiting Paris.
b.
Shanghai is calling
Shanghai is a city full of energy. Therefore,it is a wonderful place to go for a holiday. The traffic system in Shanghai is so modern that it enables people to go to different places more easily. You can take an underground to Huaihai Road to do some shopping.If you are hungry after shopping, you can try some local food in some restaurants. The meals will not cost you very much. Besides, don't miss the People's Square.It is relaxing to take a walk with your friends there. Since the summer holidays are coring, why not spread your wings and visit Shanghai?
4.
My birthday gift
I still keep a precious present that my father gave me.It is a watch.It's black and looks very beautiful. My father bought it while he was in America. When he came back, he gave re the watch as a birth day present. He told me not to waste any time, but make full use of my time. I like the watch very much because it keeps good time and it shows a father's love to me, Whenever l look at my watch,I’ll think of what my father has said. Then I will work harder. Thank you,my father.
5.
My valuable present
My valuable present is a lovely toy rabbit. Every night when l go to bed,I always put it beside me. When I was eight years old, toy rabbits were very popular. In our city these toys were soon sold out.My grandfather learned l couldn't get a lovely toy rabbit in Shanghai.He bought it for me from Suzhou.Two years ago,my grandfather died. It always reminds me of my dear grandfather.
【相关主题】
1.My home town
2. Great changes in my hometown
3. My favourite city
4._________is calling
5._________is my best gift
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my study. She respects my privacy and never checks my mobile phone. I always want to do something for my mom. Mother's Day is coming. I'm going to make a surprise breakfast for her on that day. 2.你最想感谢的人 根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数，所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 假如你是李华，在你的成长过程中，一定有某个人陪伴你、影响你、感动你，让你健康、快乐成长，学会感恩、学会回报。你们学校的《英语园地》正在以“Learn to Be Thankful”为题征文，请你写一篇文章。谈谈你最想感谢的人是谁，他/她是什么样的人，为什么感谢他/她。 提示词语：kind, hardworking, helpful, encourage, solve the problem 提示问题： ?Who is the person that you want to thank? ?What is he/she like? ?Why do you thank him/her? 经典范文：
中考英语作文讲解 1 2 中考作文评分标准： 3 结构+要点+逻辑+语法+亮点 4 1. 结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，“观点——要点——总结” 5 第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话 6 第二段：分2-3点说为什么 7 第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有8 升华。也可以提出希望和建议等 9 10 2. 要点：实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字，翻译！因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个11 要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。 12 13 14 3.逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻15 辑词等。递进：除了first, second, third, finally 等还可以使用高级点的，如first of 16 all(首先)，in addition, what's more, moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word, all in 17 all（表示总结的）。转折：but, yet, however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻18 辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。 19 20 4.语法：其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却21 是硬性的。如，单词的使用，时态等
22 23 5.亮点：当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一24 等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文25 摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，26 但是A篇只用了beautiful,good-looking,B篇却用到了fascinating，wonderful等，我坚27 信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有28 力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。 29 英语基本的句子结构 30 1、主语+不及物动词 31 2、主语+及物动词+宾语 32 3、主语+系动词+表语 33 4、主语+及物动词+间接宾语（人）+直接宾语（物） 34 5、主语+及物动词+宾语+宾语的补足语 35 作文万能词组 36 1. It takes sb. +时间+to do…花费某人多少时间做某事 37 2.Sb. spend+时间/钱+on sth./ (in) doing sth. 某人话时间/钱买某物/做某事38 3.It’s important/necessary/useful/useless/common…(for sb.) to do…对某39 人来说做某事是重要的/必要的/有用的/无用的/常见的…… 40 4.It’s nice/kind of sb. to do...某人做某事是…… 5.It’s time for sb. to do sth. 是做某事的时候了 41 42 6.Great changes have taken place in…发生了巨大变化
2010年全国中考英语作文题目及范文12篇 2010重庆中考英语作文题目及中考英语作文范文 在和谐社会里，人与人之间的互帮互助已构成我们生活中的重要组成部分。下周英国友好学校将来你校访问，你校英语俱乐部将举行一次以“Helping Each Other Makes the World Wonderful”为主题的英语演讲比赛。假如李智要参加演讲比赛，请你以“李智”的名义用英语写一篇讲稿。内容要点提示：帮助同学---友谊；帮助老人---幸福; 帮助病人---快乐; 帮助别人体会…… 要求： 1、词数：80词左右。正文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数; 2、文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。 Helping Each Other Makes the World Wonderful Hello, everyone. I’m Li Zhi. It’s nice to speak about help here. _________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ Thank you for your listening. 中考英语作文范文 Helping Each Other Makes the World Wonderful Hello, everyone. I’m Li Zhi. It’s ni ce to speak about help here. In our life we often help others and also get help from others. When we help our classmates with their study and other things, we can develop our friendship. If we give a hand to old people, we can understand the meaning of pleasure. As we know, patient in our life. I think we can get much when we help the people around us. As the saying goes, “Giving is much better than receiving.”
中考英语作文复习专题一 现代技术通讯 一．与专题相关的话题项目 通讯(C o mmunication) 、科普知识与现代技术（Popular science and modern technology） 二．与专题相关的知识准备 1. 相关单元：7BU6 Electricity,8AU1 Encyclopaedias, 8AU2 Numbers, 8AU3 Computers, 8AU4 Inventions, 8AU7 Memory, 8BU7 The unknown world 2. 相关词汇： 高频词：rule, anyone, reply, foolish, connect, moment, cooker, fridge, lock, test, tidy, touch, human, dinosaur, inventor, musician, scientist, born, countryside, intelligence, ability, perhaps, invention, notebook, include, even, however, suddenly, nobody, win, dollar, number, check, son, chess, wise, promise, prize, amount, rest, gold, instead, realize, copy, traffic, accident, order, type, brain, control, expensive, tiny, depend, speed, railway, company, price, sell, popular, funny, telephone, comfortable, invent, since, lose, improve, mind, silly, letter, worth, spell,unless, trouble, manager, unknown, receive, hill, loud, quiet, round, wonder, refuse, knife, pleased 高频短语：in a way,switch off, tidy up, in the countryside, human being, die out, find out, go for a walk, a long time ago, and so on, copy down, work as, depend on, in addition, look forward to, since then, keep in touch with, in the daytime, keep…off, at the same time, instead of, take out, keep quiet, because of, as soon as possible, agree with, disagree with
最新中考英语作文写作方法 中考英语作文写作方法 正确无误的造句能力 这得从初中一开始就抓起，首先可以从替换单词、扩词造句训练，做到有效积累，扩大视野，灵活运用。 如：如何修饰一个最简单、最常用的"说"?我们就可以写出许多：say some thing gladly(merrily excitedly sadly kindly worriedly loudly sweetl ytimidly bravely confidently) 还可说say some thing in a friendly way.替换了一个副词，生动地表达了说话时的不同心情。 扩词有：play football——play foot ball in the play ground ——play football in the play ground with my friends——play football in the play ground with my friends after school.对其中
的动词我们还可替换成playgames，play the piano…等，后面的状语都可以有相应的更换。 又如：a friend——my friend——my close friend——my close friend named Mary.以此类推，我们可以模仿着进行扩句训练。The students love life.——The studentsof Class One love enjoyable school life verymuch.为了避免句型的重复，我们还可以转换不同的句型，来表达同一内容。如：The dictionary is so big that it doesn’t fit in tomy pocket.——The dic ti on ary is too big to fit into my pocket.——The dictionary is not small enough to fit into my pocket. 这样训练写句的方法，可以帮助学生克服心里先想好中文，然后逐字翻译的不良习惯，从而造的句子符合英语表达的习惯。 在平时的学习中，我们可以试着用课文中所学的句型和词汇，设计一些中译英句子，虽然对初中学生有一定的难度，但长此以往可以有效地掌握正确的句子结构，巩固所学词汇，做到活学活用，为中考作文作好铺垫。 在《牛津》7B开始，我们针对所学的句型和学生日常学习生活的真实情景，设计了许多中译英，如：
【英语】中考英语书面表达专项练习经典经典 一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析） 1．最近一份学生体质健康调查结果显示，学生近视率仍维持在高位水平，且越来越低龄化。请根据下表所提示的内容，用英语写一篇短文，并发表自己的观点。 参考词汇：近视的 shortsighted 要求： （1）词数：80～100个。 （2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ 【答案】The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes. Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest. Some students even like to watch TV or use computers for a long time. In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes. I think all of us should understand the importance of protecting eyes and try our best to protect them. 【解析】 【详解】 这是一篇图表作文。根据题干要求可知，本篇文章主要使用一般现在时写作，人称用第三人称复数和第一人称。内容包括：学生近视原因：1.睡眠不足（not enough）2.长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等（for a long time）防止近视的方法：1.做眼睛保健操，多进行体育活动（eye exercises）2.养成正确的用眼习惯（have the good habit of）个人观点：如：我认
2019年中考英语作文写作指导 (名师剖析解题技巧，接近实战考题，值得下载练习) 1. 动笔之前，认真审题 《中考考试说明》指出，书面表达要切中题意。怎样才能切中题意？就是要认真审题，看到考题后，先不要急于动笔，要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己 的头脑中构思出一个框架或画面，确定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下笔，看懂题意，根据图画、图表、提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主体时态、活动时间、地点等。 2. 围绕中心，拟定提纲 书面表达评分原则有四条： （1）内容要点； （2）运用词汇和结构的数量； （3）运用语法结构和词汇的准确性； （4）上下文的连贯性。 由此可见，要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点，同学们要充分发挥自己的观察力，把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾，设想几个承上启下的连词，将主要句型、 关键词语草草记下，形成提纲，写时切忌结构分散，废话连篇，严重跑题。书面 表达，内容广泛，题材多样，要弄清考题的要求是写人、叙事、介绍、评论、图表、书信、日记、通知、便条还是看图作文或改写缩写。如果是日记，要写清年、月、日和天气情况；如果是书信，则要注意书信的格式，注意短文字数不要低于
或超过规定的字数太多。 3. 语言通顺，表达准确 (1) 避免使用汉语式英语，尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用，以避免重复和呆板。 (2) 多用简单句型，记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈 述句、一般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的 句型。 (3)．注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。 1) 语态、时态要准确无误。 2) 主谓语要一致，主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。 3) 注意人称代词的宾格形式。 4) 注意冠词用法，例如：He is an honest student.中的an不能写成a。 5) 注意拼写、标点符号和大小写，例如：receive, believe, fourteen, forty, ninth, restaurant等。 标点符号特别注意汉英的不同，例如： 汉语英语 A. 句号。 . B. 省略号…… … C. 顿号、无 (4) 描写人物时，要生动具体，例如： 1) 外表特征：tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。 2) 服饰颜色：red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。
中考英语10大专题作文写作技巧 英语老师：初中3年，我只教这10个专题写作技巧，学生个个拿优！ 在进入初中阶段的英语学习过程中，很多同学都会面临这样的一个问题，那就是在基础部分的掌握上都还不错，不管是在单词短语的掌握，还是句子语法的学习掌握上，问题都不是特别大，但是提到作文写作就害怕，拿到一个作文话题就是不知道应该从哪里入手，所以每次考试在写作部分上丢分都十分严重。 作为英语来说，写作是英语考试中最难的题目，一般放在试卷的最后。但其实初中英语作文写作并不算太复杂，考试都是考的一些生活中比较常见的话题，最常考的话题也就那么几种类型，如果能够把握好，也就不成大问题了。 之所以很多同学之所不会写，是因为平时的训练不到位，除了平时的考试，很少会专门针对作文写作做一个系统的练习。 但其实初中作文的写作都是从“模仿”到“创作”的过程。也就是开始时模仿课文句子，这需要学生能够理解透课文和背诵课文句子。这个要求非常低，只要学生经过一段时间后就可以练好基本的模仿能力。然后再根据作文提莫的要求去写作。 而到了后期就是话题的把握和创作的过程，这个时候也同样可以借鉴一些优秀的作文范文作文参考，去学习他的写作结构，把一件实情陈述清楚，并写出自己的想法，一篇完整的作文也就出来了。 今天针对于很多同学在初中英语作文上写作上存在的种种问题，老师这次就整理了一位特级英语老师整理分享整理的英语作文写作技巧，这位
老师表示在初中英语作文的写作上，她只教学生10个专题写作技巧，班上学生个个写作拿优，英语写作不理想的同学同学们，可以认真的学习一下，把这10个写作专题弄清楚，初中3年，写作也就不成问题了。
中考英语写作专练 1 2 3 1、Letter 4 （1）假设你是Li Ping，深圳中学的一名学生。请根据提示写一封100 5 个词的英文信。 6 7 信息提示： 8 受信人的姓名Jim 9 10 11 写信人的姓名Li Ping 12 13 写信人的地址中国广东深圳市宝安北路180 号 14 写信的内容简介深圳中学，学校生活，个人生活，个人爱好，家庭情况等。 15 16 17 写信的日期2004年6 月19日 18 19 （2）下面是你的笔友给你的一封来信。请你根据信的内容，给你的笔友20 写一封回信。 21
要求：意思连贯，表达正确，语言流畅，必须充分表达书信中要求所要表 22 23 达的内容，格式正确。（你叫李华，住在广东省深圳市红岭路175号，邮编：24 518102 日期：2004年8月19 日。）100 字左右。 25 26 Dear…， 27 I haven’t heard from you for a long time. How are you？ 28 29 30 I have just finished the exams. Now I am glad I have time to write 31 to you. Our teacher tells us that China is a large country. It has the 32 largest population in the world. It is very far from the USA. It is on 33 the other side of the world. Now the sun is shining brightly while I am writing to you. But perhaps you are sleeping in the dark night. How 34 35 interesting it is！ I’m becoming more interested in China. I wish to 36 know more about your life. Could you tell me what kind of food you often have for meals？Please write me soon！ 37 38 39 Best wishes to you！ 40 41 yours， 42 Catherine 43 44 例文：
主题训练（十二）学习技能 —Learning skills 名师点拨： 对于一个中学生来说，学习一门技能是很有必要的。每个学生可以选择自己喜欢的项目去学习和练习。这样一方面可以让自己掌握一门额外的技能，一方面也丰富了自己的业余生活。总之，这是非常值得讨论的主题之一。 主题词汇： as a middle school student, a kind of skill, for these reasons, depend on, with the help of sb, put my heart on it, be interested in, make our bodies strong, practice doing sth carefully, learn from, one’s favourite traditional skill 有用句型： 1. This is the first reason I want to learn swimming. The second one is …… 2. I want to learn swimming by ……… 3. … is an important skill in our life. 4. As we have grown up, we are no longer depend on parents, so we should 5. Although the knowledge in our books is important, different skills in our daily life are also important 6. Life is full of challenge, so we can’t stop the step of learning 7. I;m sure it will be one of the most delicious soup in the dishes. I’m eager to make it. 8. This is the first reason I want to learn swimming. The second reason is ….. 模拟试题： How can we learn a skill? 1. What do you want to learn? (swimming, cooking, reading books….) 2. Why do you want to learn it? (Give at least two reasons) 3. How will you learn it? 要点分析： 1. 着重写一个你喜欢的技能。 2．第三点要展开写。 3．最后要从这个技能的学习中得到一个启示。
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2010中考英语写作技巧汇总 （一）掌握技巧： （1）注意篇章结构，合理布局 开始部分（openingparagraph）——说出文中的要点、核心问题。 正文部分（Bodyparagraphs）——围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。 结尾部分（concludingparagraphs）——对全文的总结和概括。 要做到全文中心突出、段落之间必须是有机地联系，内容完整、连贯。前后呼应，祛除与主题无关的内容。 （2）确定主题句 主题句是对全文的概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常主题句出现在一篇文章的开头，而后，全文对主题句所提出的内容进行解释，扩展。 写主题句应注意以下几点： ①归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点 ②提炼出一句具有概括性的话 ③主题句应具有可读性，抓住、吸引读者。 （二）巧用连接词
要想使文章有整体性、连贯性，就要学会正确使用连接词 （三）掌握常用句型： 下面只列举比较常用的。 1.in order to 为了实现他的梦想，他学习非常努力。 Heworkedveryhardinordertorealizehisdream. 3.so…that 他们太累了，除了伸懒腰什么都做不了了。 Theywereallsotiredthattheycoulddonothingbuty awn. 5.would rather…than 他宁愿听他人讲而不愿自己说。 Hewouldratherlistentoothersthantalkhimself. 8.not only…but also 在短短的三年的时间里她不但完成了所有课程，而且还获得了博士学位。
中考写作专题 做题步骤： 1.审题（要求、要点） 2.定人称、时态 3.定结构（三段论：总起段，内容段；总结段）、逻辑（衔接；内容） 4.定草稿、写作、审查。 篇章结构: 1.总起段--主题句/点题句+过渡句 2.内容段--分点/衔接First of all,...What’s mor e...,(Besides,...), Finally,... First...Second...Third, But, However,... 3.总结段--重申主题/期盼未来In short, 一、写人叙事类 1.经历 2.偶像 二、观点建议类 *1.网络利弊 2.通讯：手机 3.安全：如何自我保护 *4.保护环境 5.健康 三、学习生活类 1.学习困难 2.安慰 3.阅读
四、介绍类 1.传统节日：春节 2.交通：共享单车* 3.科技：机器人 五、计划打算
一、写人叙事 写人 1.点明谁，简单人物介绍（品格、关系） 2.事情 3.感谢/感想 2018安徽卷 某英文杂志社正面向九年级毕业生征文，请从以下要点中选择一至两个方面，并结合具体事例，用英语写一篇题为“Thank you, my teacher!”的短文参加此次活动。要点如下：1.严格要求；2.耐心指导；3.热情鼓励；4....... 注意：1.词数80~100；2.课适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。 Thank you, my teacher! Mrs.Zhang is one of the best teachers /I’ve ever met /in my study life. /Mrs.Zhang is my teacher who impress me most deeply.She teaches us English. When we have any difficulty, she always helps us patiently. She is kind to us and she is also strict with us in our studies. Once, I failed in an English exam. I was too sad to go on learning English. As soon as she knew that, Mrs. Zhang had a long conversation/talk with me. She encouraged me not to give up and gave me some advice. For example, she suggested me read more English newspapers. She asked me to remember “He who never failed might never succeed.” Thanks to her help, I’ve made great progress in English now. 叙事 1.时间、地点、人物 2.详细描述起因、经过、结果 3.感想 2018天津卷 请你根据以下内容提示，以“The story of Li Hua”为题，为学校广播站英语专栏写一篇短文，介绍发生在你班同学李华身上的一件事。 1.上周放学后李华乘公交车回家，看到有人在吃橘子，并把橘皮扔在车上。 2.李华把橘皮捡起，放进垃圾桶。 3.乘客用手机拍了照片，发布到网上。 4.老师知道后表扬了李华，李华说这是她应该做的。 5.你觉得... 注意：词数80~100个；短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数；要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 The story of Li Hua