英语短文写作句子改错练习<2>
1．指代方面
1）Sometimes teachers will inform students of the heavy burden they have to bear.
改为:Sometimes teachers will inform students of the heavy burden the students have to bear.
2）People have been fighting against the influence of TV commercials, but it often proves useless.
改为:People have been fighting against the influence of TV commercials, which
often proves useless.
3) Television provides us with a vivid, colorful world, which enables us to enjoy life thoroughly.
改为:Television, which enables us to enjoy life thoroughly,provides us with a
vivid, colorful world.
2．修饰方面
1）To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off poisonous gases to the countryside.
改为:To keep the air clean, we must move the factories which give off
poisonous gases, to the countryside. 2）Without television, people can't get information which comes from other parts of the world immediately.
改为:Without television, people can't
immediately get information which
comes from other parts of the world. 3）At the age of six, my father began to teach me English.
改为:When I was six, my father began to teach me English.
4) Having carried out economic reforms in our country, people's living standard has greatly improve
改为:Having carried out economic reforms in our country, people have greatly improved living
standard.
5) To improve one's writing skill, regular practice is essential.
改为:To improve one's writing skill, we need regular practice.
3．平行方面
1）While we reduce the number of vehicles, the speed of traffic can be increased.
改为:While the number of vehicles is
reduced, the speed of traffic can be
increased.
2）The price of milk isn' t higher than grain.
改为:The price of milk isn' t higher than that of grain.
3）The energy problem is currently of great concern to a nation, the world, and
human beings.
改为:The energy problem is currently of great concern to a nation, to the
world, and to human beings.
4）But other people argue that everyone has
a certain opportunity and a wise man
will never lose it whenever it arises.
改为:But other people argue that everyone has a certain opportunity and that a
wise man will never lose it whenever
it arises.
5）Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me of the difficulty of the course and how long it lasted.
改为:Before I selected the new course, my teacher warned me of the
difficulty of the course and of the
length of it.
6）Making cities greener has a lot of advantages, such as its improvement of
our environment, its contribution to our industry and its making our cities
beautiful.
改为:Making cities greener has a lot of advantages, such as its
improvement of our environ-
ment, its contribution to our
industry and its beautification
of our cities
4. 语法方面
1）Narrow streets easily cause to happen many traffic accidents.
改为:Narrow streets easily cause many traffic accidents.
2）A great change has been taken place since then.
改为:A great change has taken place then.
3）But it may occur some new problems.
改为:But some new problems may occur.
4）Opportunities are only belonged to those who work hard.
改为:Opportunities only belong to those who work hard.
5）Green trees can protect our air from polluting.
改为:Green trees can protect our air from being polluted.
6）Comparing with other countries, China pays little attention to the energy problem.
改为:Compared with other countries, China pays little attention to the energy problem.
5. 搭配方面
1）However the speed of a car is much faster than that of a bicycle.
改为：However the speed of a car is much higher than that of a bicycle.
2）In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it.
改为:In the past the price of milk was so high
that most families could not afford it.
3）We should study/learn as much knowledge as possible so that we can be fully prepared for the future.
改为:We should get as much knowledge as possible so that we can be fully prepared for
the future.
4）The opportunity to be promoted in a joint venture will be smaller if one cannot speak English.
改为:The opportunity to be promoted in a joint venture will be less if one cannot speak Eng-
lish.
6. 赘言问题
1）In my opinion, I believe the free medical system is in need of reform.
改为:In my opinion, the free medical system is in need of reform.
2）People try to find a solution to solve the problem.
改为:People try to find a solution to the problem.
3) Many visitors who visit our city have the impression that there are few trees in the street.
改为:Many visitors of our city have the impression that there are few trees
in the street.
4) The reason why people choose to live
in the country is because there is no pollution or noise there.
改为:The reason why people choose to
live in the country is that there is
no pollution or noise there.
5)1 have to rewrite my composition again.
改为:1 have to rewrite my composition.
7. 汉化问题
1）Traffic is a serious problem, one of the reasons is that Shanghai has over ten million people.
改为:Traffic is a serious problem, one of the
reasons is that there are over ten million
people in Shanghai.
2）My level of English has thus been improved.
改为:My English has thus been improved.
3）Nowadays young people who seek to go abroad are becoming more and more.
改为:Nowadays more and more young people seek to go abroad.
4) With the development of cities, green land becomes more and more less.
改为:With the development of cities, there is less and
less green land.
5) Smoking will do harm to our body.
改为:Smoking will do harm to heath.
6) We should put out hearts into the study.
改为:We should pay attention to the study
高考英语短文改错错误类型及具体表现形式 1.词法错误 即词的使用错误，是改错频率最高的部分。通常包括以下几个方面： （1）形容词与副词形式的错用。比如happy--happily （2）形容词与副词级别的错用。搞清楚什么时候用原型，比较级，最高级。还有前面的修饰语，比如a little, a lot, even等通常修饰比较级。而almost, nearly, second, by no means等修饰最高级。还有注意比较级不能修饰比较级。（3）ed结尾的形容词与ing结尾的形容词错用。太简单了不再赘述。 （4）冠词使用不当。高考题中比较常见的是a--an, a/an--the, the的缺失与多余 （5）名词单复数 2.句法错误 （1）动词时态、语态。一般来说高考题中必有一个动词时态错误。语态错误主要包括被动语态与主动语态使用错误，以及不及物动词使用了被动语态。 （2）非谓语动词。比如to的多余或缺失，过去分词和现在分词错用等，一遍不会很难，细心就好。 （3）主谓一致错误。 （4）对是否是及物动词的判断。动宾间的介词是不是多余，这类错误比较隐蔽。（5)主句从句连接词的错误。名从中连词选择错误；定从中关系代词关系副词的选择；状从连接词的选择错误；主从复合句间缺连接词。 3.行文逻辑错误 （1）代词及副词指代错误。注意指代的对象性别、单复数，代词的格，反身代词错用，副词指代错误（比如there--here)。这类错误较隐蔽，要细心。 （2）副词及连词逻辑意义错误。转折--并列，结果--原因等等。 4.常见搭配错误 （1）介词与名词的搭配 （2）动词与副词介词的搭配 三、细节着手 1.时态是否一致 2.主谓是否一致 3.代词是否一致 4.句子中谓语是否完整 5.是否该用被动语态 6.主从句的连接词是否用对了 7.从句中谓语是否完整
高考英语短文改错解题指导教学设计及反思 一．教学设计的背景 随着新课程改革的深入,新的《高中英语新课程标准》的颁布，各地高考英语试题的变革也势在必行。为与新教材,新课标接轨,在继承历年命题传统的基础上,力求命题符合高中英语教学实际,试卷在内容和形式上进行了创新和发展,设置了新的题型。其中的能力指向是考查考生的语言能力，这体现了新课改的要求和方向。 二．教学内容分析 短文改错主要测试考生发现、判断、纠正文章中错误的能力，进而考查他们用词、词的拼写与搭配、词法、句法及语篇中的行文逻辑等方面的水平。对短文改错的解题指导应让学生了解命题特点、考查内容、设题类型、分项训练入手，进而到最后的语篇训练，层层递进，解决学生的困惑，突破学习的盲点，最终提高解题能力。 三．学习者分析 学生的语言基础薄弱，对基本词汇的词性功能、句法结构、语法运用都存在很大的漏洞。学生对错误的发现、判断、纠正能力比较欠缺，造成短文改错的得分率很低。但学生的学习积极性很高，渴望提高解题能力。急需老师对短文改错的答题方法进行详细的指导。 四．教学重难点 1.指导学生把握不同词性的词，包括实词和虚词的常见错误形式。 2.学会分析句与句、行与行之间的逻辑关系。 3.学会运用短文改错口诀解题和检测答案。 五．教学目标 知识目标：学生能掌握不同词性的词，包括实词和虚词的常见错误形式，能掌握分析句与句、行与行之间的逻辑关系。 能力目标：能灵活运用口诀答题。能在语篇改错中提高正确率。 六．教学策略与情感、态度与价值观 采用自主学习策略，合作与交流策略和阅读策略。运用直观手段-视频调动学生学习的积极性，帮助学生理解和掌握短文改错的答题方法和诀窍。 七．教学设计 Step1. Lead-in
经典一、指出现象或争议话题 Ever since…, there have been ongoing disputes over…自从……起，就有对于……的持续争论。With the increasing concerns about…, people are calling for…随着对……的日益关注，人们呼吁………draws the public’s attention once again to…, a repeatedly discussed yet constantly unsolved social issue.……再一次吸引公众的注意力至……，这是一个经常讨论但一直未得到解决的社会问题。 经典二、引出各方观点 There exists a philosophy that…有一种观点认为……While many advocate…, I believe it's a better idea to…尽管很多人支持……，我认为……更好。Quite many are disgusted by this kind of…, because it goes against the traditional Chinese virtue of…很多人都反感……，因为它有悖于中国的传统美德。 经典三、表示赞同 It is apparent that it is a more sensible choice to…很明显，……是更为明智的选择。…should be encouraged, because it is a rewarding journey, promised with...…应鼓励……，因为它所带来的回报奇迹丰厚，并且允许……It is fair to say that…, is a plausible and advisable option for…客观来讲，……对于……是合理且明智的选择。 经典四、提出建议 In my opinion, there are three aspects to be improved so that…我认为，要改进的方面有三点，以便……It would be better if…如果……会更好。 经典五、引用名人名言 As …rightly/ aptly put it, “…”正如……恰如其分地提出……As is maintained by …，“…”正如……提出，………is the golden rule to stick.……是一条金科玉律。 经典六、举例说明 A case in point is…一个恰当的例子是……The recent incident happened in …proves …最近发生在……身上的一件事情证明了……A simple example can be drawn from…一个简单的例子就是……According to figures/statistics /the findings/data released by an institute, …根据某机构发布的数据/研究结果，……经典七、阐述原因 The epidemic of …is brought / caused both by …and by………的出现是由于……和……造成的。One of the chief causes of…is the fact that ………的主要原因之一是……The upsurge of …is resulted from two-fold factors ——………的出现源于双重因素——…… 经典八、做出总结 In conclusion, it takes the endeavor of both …and …to …总之，……需
英语作文万能句子 开头常用万能句子 1.Depending on personal experience personal type and emotion concern we find that some people hold the idea of... while others prefer... 基于个人经历、个性类型和情感关注的不同，我们发现有人持……的观点，而另外一些人则更喜欢…… 例句：Depending on personal experience personal type and emotion concern we find that some people hold the idea of living in the small town while others prefer the big city. 基于个人经历、个性类型和情感关注的不同，我们发现有人喜欢生活在小 城镇，而另外一些人则更喜欢大城市。 2.When asked about... the vast/ overwhelming majority of/ most/ many/ quite a few people say/ think/ believe/ answer that... But... 当被问及……时，多数（大多数、许多）人认为（回答）……但是…… 例句：When asked about choosing living place the vast people think that living in the big city is perfect. But I think living in the small town is the better choice. 当被问及在选择居住地方时，多数人认为居住在城市是很棒的。但是我觉 得住在小城镇更好。 3.When it comes to ... some think/ hold/ believe... 当提及……时，有人认为…… 例句：When it comes to sports some believe basketball is the most popular one. 当提到运动时，有人认为篮球是最受欢迎的。 4.It has become apparent to us that... 对我们来说，……已经变得很明显了
高中英语短文改错技巧总结 短文改错口诀：动词形，名词数; 注意形和副;非谓动词细辨别;习惯用法要记住;句子成分多分析;逻辑错误须关注。 一. 动词形 主要包括两类错误：动词的时态和语态错误，以及主、谓不一致的错误。例如： My favourite sport is football. I was member of our school football team. (is) Now my picture and prize is hanging in the library. (are) 上述两例分别属于时态错误和主、谓不一致错误。找出此类错误的关键是树立牢固的时态概念，注意短文内容发生或存在的时间，保持时间概念的一致性。 二. 名词数 指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。常表现为将名词复数写成单数。例如： …so that I'll get good marks in all my subject. (subjects) 三. 区分形和副 及区分形容词和副词在句子中的作用和具体用法。这也是高考短文改错的常考点。例如： I'm sure we'll have a wonderfully time together. (wonderful) Unfortunate, there are too many people in my family. (Unfortunately) 需要注意的是，形容词多用来做定、表、补语等，而副词只能在句子中作状语，修饰动词、形容词、副词或整个句子。第一例中的wonderful作定语修饰time，第二句的Unfortunately作状语修饰整个句子。 四. 非谓动词细辨别 这是考查最多的错误形式之一。主要有分词和动名词类错误，也包括不定式类错误。例如： …in my spare time, but now I am interesting in football. (interested) Play football not only makes us grow up tall and strong but also …(playing) My parents love me…and will do all they can ∧make sure…(to) 上述二、三例分别是动名词作主语，和不定式作目的状语。一般的，现在分词有主动态和进行时的含义，而过去分词具有被动态和完成时的含义，不定式有将来时态的含义。 五. 习惯用法要记住 主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识。这也是历年高考的常考点，其错误表现形式主要有三种：多词、少词和搭配错误。例如： It was very kind for them to meet me at the railway station and…(of) We must keep in mind that we play for the team instead ∧ourselves. (of) 六. 句子成分多分析 不同的句子成分要用不同的词类;不同的语景要选择不同的词语。这些都有待我们对句子结构和句子成分作细致的分析，才能找出用词不当的错误。例如：They ∧eager to know everything about China and…(were) I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China. (which) 第一例漏掉了谓语动词were，这是受寒于习惯的影响而导致的错误;第二例则是词类与它在句子中的成分不相符，where是副词，不能作主语。 七. 逻辑错误须关注 与句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属于逻辑性错误。如称谓上的张冠李戴，人名、地名、时间、方位等方面的错误，常是这类错误的考查对象。例如：The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home. (their) First, let me tell you something more about myself. (去掉more) …no way of setting the matter except by selling the set.Now someone at home reads instead. (everyone) 上述第一例中的主语是Smiths(史密斯夫妇俩)，因此后面的his不合逻辑。第二例中的more在这儿表“再”的意思，才开始告诉别人，怎么能说“再告诉你
高考英语短文改错解题指导 1、动词的时态和语态 2、句子结构和句子完整性 3、名词单复数及主谓一致问题 4、上下文语意和指代 5、介词 6、固定（习惯）用法 7、词性 8、冠词 9、连词和从句引导词 10、动词不定式 【练习】 Dear Sir, I’m glad to recommend (推荐) to you my friend Li Ming. Li Ming was born on July 15, in 1974 in Beijing. 1. _______ He graduated from Xisi Primary School in 1986. 2. _______ When he was in the middle school, he did good in maths, 3. _______ physics and chemistry and fond of art. After graduating 4. _______ from No.4 High School, he entered into Beijing 5. _______ University study physics. After four years of hard 6. _______ work there, he went to the United States for farther7. _______ study. Because of his excellent work, he get a doctor’s 8. _______ degree in physics this year. He is now in good health but would like to make contributions to our 9. _______ country. I should be most grateful if you would favorably consider my recommendation. Looking forward to receive your early reply.10. ______
英语作文万能句型 1、提出现象句型: ①Nowadays,it is common to find that......(如今，......很常见） ②In recent decades,with the rapid development of......,more and more......(近年来，随着......的快速发展，越来越多......） ③....has been gaining in popularity in recent years in China,particularly among young people.(....近年来在中国变得越来越流行，在年轻人中尤其受欢迎。） 2、引出不同观点句型： ①When it comes to ......, some people like to.......,while others choose to ...... （说到......，有的人喜欢......，有的人则选择......） ②There have been different opinions on this issue.Some people are in favor of.....However, other people hold a quit different point of view.（人们对此看法不一。一些人赞同....。然而，其他人则持不同观点） 3、分析原因句型 This phenomenon can be attributed to several main reasons. First,.....。Second,....。Third,.....。（这个现象可归因于几个主要原因。首先.....其次.....再次......） 4、分析利弊/优缺点句型 As is the case with many issues,...have both merits and dmerits.On the one hand,......On the other hand......(正如其他许多事物一样，......也是有利有弊的。一方面，......。另一方面，......。）
英语作文万能句子：英语作文万能句子大全 2017-12-17 英语作文万能句子1.asanoldsayinggoes,...正. 如一句古老的谚语所说 2 ....... benothingbut ...... 不过就是...3.fromwhereistand . 从 我的立场来说 4.giveoneselfachanceto ....给. 某人一个机会 去...5.ifeelsurethat...我坚信...6 ... i sthebestwaytomakesurethat ... 确保...的 最好办法是...7.wemustdoourabsolutebestto ... 我们必须竭尽全力 做...8.thereisnodenyingthefectthat...无可否 认….9.nothingismore+adj.+thanto+v没有比…更重要的了10.主语 +cannotemphasizetheimportanceof….toomuch再怎么强调..的重要性也不为过11 poseagreatthreatto .............. 对..造成了一大威胁 (eg.Pollutionposesagreatthreattoourexistance.)12.stolethespotlightfrom... 从. . .获得大众的瞩目13 .. touchsb.ontheraw ... 触到某人的痛处 14.itisnotuncommonthat... 这是常有的事儿。 15itisalmostimpossibletodo..。 是很困难的16therecentresearchhasshownthat..最近研究表明。 17...has/havenoalternativebutto...除...外别无选择 18 .. betweenthedevilandthedeepbluesea 进退维谷，左右为难 19.contentinthethoughtthat... 满足于...的想法20(重磅出击，一般老师都会感动，这个句子可以千变万化，可以替换其中的一些 词)Thelo ng,(costlystrike)provedtobethelast naili nthecoffi nfor(thecompa
高考英语单句短文改错专项练习100句一．单句改错.（下列句子各有一处错误，请改正） 1. Now people get a lot of informations from TV. 2. German is a European country. 3. They didn’t want me to do any work at family. 4. Yesterday I met an old friend of my father. 5. Boys and girls, don’t lose hearts. Do better next time. 6. They are of different size. 7. It is so beautiful place that you must visit it. 8. What a terrible weather we have been having! 9. It took place in France, an European country. 10. Suddenly I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crowd. 11. What good time we had last night! 12. We shall spend three-day holiday together. 13. I came to understand that was not easy to earn money. 14. Some parents think useless for girls to go to school. 15. When he bought a chocolate cake, he put them in a secret place. 16. One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. 17. It’s important that we should think over before doing anything. 18. The truck was moving so fast that the driver couldn’t control. 19. I apologized and controlled me at my best till the dinner started.
英语作文优秀句子 一、引出开头 1：It is well-known to us that……==As far as my knowledge is concerned, … 2：Recently the problem of…… has been brought into focus. ==Nowadays there is a growing concern over …… 3：Nowadays（overpopulation）has become a problem we have to face. 4：Internet has been playing an important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well. 5：With the rapid development of science and technology，more and more people believe that…… 6：I t is a common belief that……==It is commonly believed that…… 7：A lot of people seem to think that…… 8:It is universally acknowledged that + 二、表达不同观点 1：People's views on……vary/differ from person to person. Some hold that……However, others believe that…… 2：People may have different opinions on…… 3：Attitudes towards （drugs）vary from person to person.==Different people hold different attitudes towards（failure） 4: There are different opinions among people as to…… 三、表示结尾 1：In short, it can be said t hat…… 2：From what has been mentioned above, we can come to the conclusion that……3：Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally/reasonably come to the conclusion that……
写英语作文可以用到的好句子 Never regret. If it's good, it's wonderful. If it's bad, it's experience. 不必遗憾。若是美好，叫做精彩。若是糟糕，叫做经历。generation rent 租房一代 80后和90后中，因经济形势的变化多选择租房而非买房的群体。 Everybody wants happiness. No one wants pain. But how can you make a rainbow without a little rain? 大家都想得到幸福，却不愿承担痛苦。可不经历风雨，怎能见彩虹？ Delayed Sleep-Phase Syndrome 睡眠相位延迟综合症 一种生物周期性睡眠紊乱症，表现为夜猫子们晚上不睡，早上不起。 Some people want it to happen, some wish it would happen, others make it happen. 有些人想成功，还有些人渴望成功，另有些人通过努力使梦想成真。 We are what we repeatedly do. Excellence, then, is not an act,
but a habit. 重复的行为造就了我们；因而，卓越不是一种举动，而是一种习惯。 Whatever is worth doing is worth doing well. 任何值得做的事就值得把它做好！ When we step on the battlefield, I will be The First Boots On and the Last Boots Off. 当我们踏上战场，我必将首先发起冲锋，也必然坚守到最后。Don't ever let somebody tell you can't do something. You got a dream, you gotta protect it! 别让别人告诉你，你成不了才！如果你有梦想的话，就要去捍卫！ Always be a first-rate version of yourself, instead of a second-rate version of somebody else. 永远都要做最好的自己，而不是第二好的别人。 Great things are not done by impulse, but by a series of small things brought together. 伟大的成就并非源自一时冲动，而是由一系列小事汇聚而成的。 Strength alone knows conflict, weakness is below even defeat, and is born vanquished. 强者才懂得斗争；弱者没有失败的资格，而是生来就是被征服的。
短文改错专项训练·主谓一致错误 1.Selling newspapers not only makes some money but also give us some working e xperience during the summer vacation. 2.To deliver newspapers are a tiring job. 3.It is he who study very hard. 4.The rest of the trees was cut down. 5.The day we have been looking forward to having come at last. 6.The number of the guests invited to the party are 100. 7.The wounded in the earthquake was sent to the hospital. 8.Tom, as well as his children, are to visit Beijing this summer. 9.Either of the sides of the street are lined with the tall trees. 10.Here “you” are used as a noun. 【答案和分析】 1.give改为gives。makes和gives为平行结构，作并列谓语。 2.are改为is。不定式、动名词、主语从句作主语要看作为一个整体，动词用单数形式。 3.study改为studies。强调主语时，谓语动词应保持变强调句以前的状态。 4.was改为were。rest指的是可数名词的复数形式，谓语动词用复数形式。 5.having改为has。主句的主语是The day，后面缺少谓语动词。 6.are改为is。the number of 表示“……数目”。谓语动词用单数形式。 7.was改为were。the wounded表示“伤员们”时，是复数概念。 8.are改为is。主语为Tom。as well as结构重心在前一个名词，谓语动词和前一个名词保持一致。 9.are改为is。either后面的动词用单数形式。 10.are改为is。you用作专有名词，看作单数。 短文改错专项训练·非谓语动词类错误 1.A lot of money has been spent to buy the book. 2.You will have to pay the cost of send a postcard. 3.What he did was puzzled. 4.I will spend a week reading and prepare for the examination. 5.Charles and Linda do all of these things as well as climbed buildings. 6.Yesterday I had my bad tooth pulling out.
英语作文中可引用的谚语格言 1)Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。 2)God helps those who help themselves. 天助自助者。 3)Easier said than done. 说起来容易做起来难。 4)Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成。 5)One false step will make a great difference. 失之毫厘，谬之千里。 6)Slow and steady wins the race. 稳扎稳打无往而不胜。 7)Facts speak plainer than words. 事实胜于雄辩。 8)Experience is the mother of wisdom. 实践出真知。 9)Rome was not built in a day. 伟业非一日之功。 10)A ction speaks louder than words. 行动胜过语言。 11)Love makes one fit for any work. 热爱令人胜任任何工作。 12)A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.千里之行始于足下。 13)L ook before you leap. 三思而后行。 14)F ailure teaches success. 成功是失败之母。 15)T he older, the wiser. 姜是老的辣。 16)A life without a friend is a life without sun. 人生没有朋友，犹如生活没有阳光。 17)A man can do no more than he can. 量力而行。 18)H aste makes waste. 欲速则不达。
?一、开头句型 ?我们常说，良好的开端等于成功的一半。做事如此，作文也是如此。所以我们颇有必要在作文的开头花一番心思。 ?在写议论文时，你通常以什么样的方式开头呢？最简单也最常用的可能就是开门见山法。也就是说——直截了当地提出你对这个问题的观点，点出文章的中心思想。?I．．．．has both advantages and disadvantages．……既有利又有弊。例如：?1．Obviously television has both advantages and disadvantages． ?2．Living in a city has both advantages and disadvantages． ?3．Compared with cars，bikes have their advantages and disadvantages． ?举一反三： ?1．Although computers bring people a lot of convenience，they have many disadvantages．?2．．．．has many advantages．For example，．．．However，just as every coin has two sides，．．．has its disadvantages．（本例将利弊分开讲，转折过渡自然。just as every coin has two sides也很值得背诵。） ?II．．．．play（s）an important role ／part in．．．……在……中扮演重要角色／起重要作用。例如： ?1．Computers play an important role in science and technology． ?2．Computers play a more and more important role in our ?life． ?Computers play an increasingly important role in our studies． ?3．Education plays an important part in developing our mind． ?4．Addiction to alcohol and drugs play a role in homelessness． ?举一反三： ?1．Advertisement plays an informative role in our daily life． ?2．In the past，letters played a decisive role in long-distance communication．But now ，telephone，email，fax have taken their place． ?III．With the development of．．．，随着……的发展，例如： ?1．With the development of our economy，m any Chinese families can afford a car．?2．With the development of our economy and society，pollution is more and more serious．?3．With the rapid development of science and technology，people can get a college degree by taking online-courses at home． ?4．With the current social and technological developments，employees with more knowledge and higher academic degrees are needed． ?举一反三： ?1．With the rapid increase of China's population，housing problem is becoming more and more serious． ?随着中国人口的急剧增加，住房问题越来越突出。 ?2．With more and more women entering society，people's attitude towards women is changing． ?随着越来越多的妇女走入社会，人们对妇女的态度也在改变。 ?3．With the deepening of Chinese reform and opening up，an increasing number of Chinese ?families can afford a car． ?随着中国改革开放的深入，越来越多的中国家庭买得起车了。（“越来越多”除了常用
高二英语短文改错练习 ▲按改错题的正确格式改正下列短文中的错误。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用(\)划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。 2.文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。 改错一 David joined the army when he was eighteen. And for several months he taught how to be a good soldier. He did quite good in everything except shooting. One day he and his friends are practising their shooting, and all of them did well besides David. At last the officer said, “David! You are quite hopeless! Do not waste your bullet. Go behind the wall, and shoot you.” David felt ashamed. He went behind the wall and a few seconds late the officer and the other young soldiers heard a sound of a shot “Heavens!” the officer said, “has t hat silly man really shooted himself?” He ran behind the wall anxio us. But David was all right. “I am sorry, sir,” he said “And I missed again. 改错二 One day we were having English class when Mr Black saw a boy reading a picture-book and said, “Tom , how do you usually do after
高考英语短文改错技巧 李仕才 第一步必须熟悉设错方式 1.必须熟悉设错方式：多词、少词、错词。 ⑴多词现象大多出现在冠词、介词、助动词、连词、语义重复及行文逻辑等方面。 ⑵少词现象主要出现在冠词、介词、副词、助动词、不定式符号to、连词等。 ⑶错词现象主要在冠词、介词、名词单复数、动词时态、非谓语动词、主谓一致、代词、 连词、词形。 2.平时应加强基本功训练，用一个“错题集”本把自己或同学在书面表达中出现的错误归纳一下，以便考前复习。 第一步加强基本功训练 短文改错与书面表达一样，最能反映一个人的语言功底。大家在该题上失分最厉害，因为此题而影响英语总成绩的占大多数。 第二步对全文宏观把握 大家应把改错内容当作一篇小短文来理解，这样能对短文有个宏观把握，对上下文有全面的了解。在理解篇章的基础上逐句审读，分析判断，上下兼顾，把明显的、拿的准的题先做完，这样可以缩小包围圈，也有助于对全文的进一步理解。 第三步从语法角度审查 1.查看时态是否一致。
My favorite sport is football. I was a member of our football team.全文都是用的一般现在时，此句中的was显然与上下文语境不符，应改为am。 2.查看主谓是否一致。 Anyonemayborrowbooks,anditcostnothingtoborrowthem.cost应改为costs，因其主语是it(为形式主语)，且上下文均为一般现在时。 3.查指代是否一致。 The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home.句中的主语the Smiths表的是Smith一家人，因此指示代词his应改为their。 4.查平行结构是否平行一致。由and, or, but, either...or..., neither...nor..., not only...but also...,as well as等并列连词和词组连接的结构可称为平行结构。 It was very kind of them to meet me at the railway station and drove me totheir home.句中的drove显然与and前面的to meet不平行，应改为drive。 5.查名词的单复数与修饰词语或上下文是否一致。 We study quite a few subject, such as Maths, Chinese... quite a few只能修饰复数名词，故subject应改为subjects。 6.查行文逻辑是否一致。 Most people can quicklygethelp from adoctoror go to ahospital since theyareill.根据行文逻辑，这里不应该由since来引导原因状语从句，而应该是 when/whenever或if来引导时间或条件状语从句。 第四步十大常见错误 短文改错是有一定的规律可循的，纵观近几年的高考试题及我们平常的模拟考试，可以发现短文改错主要有以下十大错误： 1.形容词与副词的误用。