雅思真题写作班精讲班第10讲讲义
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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The bar chart below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and 1980.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Many women want to need to continue working even after they have children. The charts below show the working patterns of mothers with young children to care for. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the charts below.
The table below summarises some data collected by a college bookshop for the month of February 1998.
Write a report describing the sales figures of various types of publications, based on the information shown in the table.
Non – Book Club Members College Staff College Students Members of Public Book Club Members Total Fiction Non-Fiction Magazines 44 29 332 31 194 1249 - 122 82 76 942 33 151 ********Total 405 1474 204 1051 3134
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Sample Essay 1
The table describes some sales figures gathered by a college bookstore for February, 1998.
We can see from the table that the non-book club member figures are made up of sales to college staff, college students and members of the public. More specifically, college staff bought 332 magazines, 44 fiction and 29 non-fiction books while college students bought 1249 magazines, 194 non-fiction books and 31 fiction books. More magazines were sold to college students than any other group of customers. In contrast, although no fiction books were sold to members of the public, they bought 122 non-fiction books and 82 magazines.
According to the table, book club members bought more fiction(76) and non-fiction books( 942) than other customers. On the other hand, magazine sales to club members( 33) were fewer than to any other type of customers.
The total number of sales for the month was 3134( 1474 to college students, 405 to staff, 204 to the public and 1051 to book club members). 151 books sold were fiction and 1287 were non-fiction. Therefore, it can be clearly seen from the table that magazines accounted for the greatest number of sales( 1696)
雅思大作文写作步骤整理 如何合理安排写作时间和写作步骤，今天给大家带来了雅思大作文写作步骤整理，希望能够帮助到大家，下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。 雅思大作文写作步骤整理 写作部分两篇*的字数要求是不一样的。大作文必须完成250字以上写作任务，而小作文150字以上。根据这一指令，从机械地写字速度来看，考生较为合理的时间分配为大作文40分钟，小作文20分钟。另外，大作文占写作总值的60%，小作文为40%，从这分值的权重来看，时间上2：1的分配也是相当合理的。 所以，要想成功完成大作文任务一定要把时间控制在40分钟左右，前后不超出5分钟。 那么如何充分利用这40分钟，完成一篇基本令人满意的*呢? ◆步骤一：审题(3 分钟) 审题是有效完成任务的第一步，也是最关键的一步。从评分标准看，审题的正确与否与"Task Response"有着直接的联系。而在当前模板泛滥，*千篇一律的大环境下，有效审题是突破六分
的一条准绳。不少考生在审题时，要么蜻蜓点水、草草一读，要么只关注题目中词的同义转换。如此读题，都有可能对之后的*撰写方向造成偏差。而有效的读题方法应为： →通读题目，了解大意。 →细读题目，分析句子间的逻辑关系。 →再读题目，辨别关键词，区分主题词和限定词，推测考官的出题意图。 由于大部分考生只作到了读题的第一步，所以出现离题或部分离题的可能性很大。现以20XX年11月15日的考题为例：There are more workers to work from home and more students to study from home. This is because the computer technology is more and more easily accessible and cheaper. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?(题目为考生回忆，与原题可能有少许出入) →通读题目，了解大意。 当前有越来越多的工人在家里工作，有越来越多的学生在家里学习。这是因为电脑技术越来越容易获得，也越来越便宜了。你认为这是个正面的还是负面的发展趋势?
15句逻辑框架 Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace rather than pure knowledge. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 第1句：背景介绍
Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about the purpose of university education. 现在，越来越多的人关心大学教育的目的。 Explanation: ●Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about the phenomenon that … ●Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about the purposes that university education serves. ●Nowadays, more and more students are concerned about what they will learn in the universities. ●Universities are one of the most important institutions in modern society. 如果很难再短时间内想出第一句内容，就直接表达观点，两句话写完首段。 ●I agree with this opinion. Reasons are as follows. 我赞同的观点是……原因如下。 第2句：交代辩论话题 A. “是否应该……” However, whether universities should mainly provide job-related skills to graduates is a controversial issue. 但是，大学是否应该主要提供给学生工作相关的技能是一个饱受争议的话题。
Topic 1: When international media (including movies, fashion shows, advertisements and other TV programs) convey the same messages to the global audience, people argue that the expansion of international media has negative impacts on cultural diversity. What is your opinion? 媒体信息一致的缺点： ?国际媒体（global media)—般掌握在少数几个有实力的机构手中（in the hands of a few, large, powerful organizations)；有了媒体的宣传(propaganda)后,西方文化成了主流(domineering force),大规模的、有吸引力的广告(mass seductive advertising )唤起了落后地区人们对物质新的向往（create fresh desires),经济联系增强（strong economic ties),西方产品取代了本地产品，使人们更加向往西方的文化； ?文化开始融合在一起(mingle),人们被新的价值观所围绕(bombarded with new values)，对自己的文化失去信心和自豪感（confidence and pride),拒绝接受自己的文化传统（rejection of their cultural heritage)转而接受西方的文化习惯（adoption of Western cultural practices);西方媒体削弱了民族的特征(ethnic identity)和社会的凝聚力（social cohesion);因为担心失去观众(a loss of viewers),当地的电视台也开始播放西方的电视节目（television shows), ?国际媒体的普遍会降低世界文化的品质和多样性（degrade the quality and diversity of world culture);文化被商业化（commercialized), —些文化产品（cultural goods),如音乐、服装，都变成了商品（commodities in the marketplace)。因此，即便一些文化在世界其他地方传播，它原来的性质（authenticity)已经丧失。 媒体信息一致的优点： ?国家之间的频繁交往会促进文化之间的交流。因此，相互了解和相互认同的可能性(likelihood of mutual understanding and mutual acceptance )就会增加，这是顺应全球化的趋势； ?未必一定放弃传统观念（not necessarily lead to the abolition of traditional values),事实上媒体可以起到宣传和稳固传统文化的作用； ?主流媒体一般都会反应文化多元性（The dominant media reflect cultural diversity.); —些外国节目其实促进了文化多元性(Most foreign programming is promoting cultural diversity.),适应了当地的条件（adapt to local conditions)，注意到了当地文化的敏感性（aware of cultural sensitivity).自我调节来适应市场(exercise self-censorship to suit the market :)。 As international media companies expand across the world, the growing popularity and uniformity of some media programs (such as TV shows, movies, fashion shows) is causing worldwide concern. Many people have strong views toward this trend. In my opinion, international media is closely linked to cultural globalization and cultural homogeneity. The dominance of international media is a sign of Western cultural imperialism and has the potential to thwart cultural diversity. It is not a secret that international media is owned and operated by a handful of giant corporations, such as Time Warner. They control large sectors of the media market and place national media companies at risk. The contraction in the number of media owners will cause a proportional reduction, in the variety of programs broadcasted. For example, painting, music and movies accessible in the media have a small number of genres, imposing restraints on one's knowledge of artworks of different cultural backgrounds. In addition to seizing control over those creative industries, global entertainment companies affect cultural diversity by reshaping the perceptions, beliefs and norms of ordinary citizens in different countries. Most of the cultural values and ideals promoted by the leading mainstream media are of American origin. American culture values individuality, maximization of one's benefits and material wealth, rather than communal life and family solidarity, the values and norms previously treasured in" many Asian countries. Unfortunately, many Asian people now imitate American people, causing the alteration of their perceptions of family. This radical change can be attributed to those movies and TV programs that portray the success of American individuals or corporations.
雅思经典小作文柱状图4篇范文+写作要点分析 C1T3 题目 The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods. Write a report a university lecturer describing the information shown below. The chart shows that high income earners consumed considerably more fast foods than the other income groups, spending more than twice as much on hamburgers (43 pence per person per week) than on fish and chips or pizza (both under 20 pence). Average income earners also favored hamburgers, spending 33 pence per person per week, followed by fish and chips at 24 pence, then pizza at 11 pence. Low income earners appear to spend less than other income groups on fast foods, though fish and chip remains their most popular fast food, followed by
【06】全文翻译练习题目 Some people think schools should only teach students academic subjects.Others think schools should also teach students how to discriminate between right and wrong.Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 介绍段 背景句 1.学校一直被认为是一个帮助年轻人提高知识和增加就业能力的地方。 阐述立场 2.在我看来,学术课程很重要，但是学生如果不懂得对错的区别，也很难事业成功。 主体部分第一段 中心句 3.很多老师认为学生应该关注主科，因这些课程决定了他们以后是否可以进大学。解释 4.这些课程学到的知识可以给大学打下好基础（a firm grounding for university），以后找到好的工作。 举例 5.如果中学好数，那么他们以后可在大里建立模型去分析数据，成为金融分析师和工程师。 对比 6.如果学生需要花时间习道德准则和行为规范，他们可能就不关注主科。 主体部分第二段 中心句7.学校可以灌输一些重要的美德（virtue），让他们可以利用好自己的知识，成为对社会有用的人。 正确句子： Schools can instill some important virtues into student and enco urage them to make good use of their knowledge to contribute p ositively to society.（句7以这个答案为准） 举例8.如果一个人懂得忠诚，那么就不会将公司的机密材料卖给竞争者。 举例29.如果一个工程师有社会责任，就会设计出能够让消费者安全使用的产品。 对比10.一个学生即便在校的表现很好，如果不能够遵循道德规则，他也很难成功。 主体部分第三段 中心句11.我个人觉得，学生能够分辨对错才可能成功。 举例112.学生在学校里要懂得尊重老师，和同学很好相处。 举例213.一些小孩可能喜欢吃快餐，这样会引起肥胖。 对比14.如果他们不意识这些问题，这些问题不仅影响学习，也影响以后的工作。
满分雅思大作文赏析 对于雅思写作的复习，一些雅思大作文范文，例文还是很有必要自己观摩的，为此小编特收集整理了这篇雅思大作文九分例文点评，分享给大家。希望考生能从中总结出对自己有用的知识点。 满分雅思大作文赏析 范文第一段： C h i l d r e n w h o g r o w u p i n f a m i l i e s w h i c h a r e s h o r t o f m o n e y a r e b e t t e r p r e p a r e d t o d e a l w i t h t h e p r o b l e m s o f a d u l t l i f e t h a n c h i l d r e n w h o a r e b r o u g h t u p b y w e a l t h y p a r e n t s.T o w h a t e x t e n t d o y o u a g r e e o r d i s a g r e e? S o m e f e e l t h a t t h e c h i l d r e n o f l o w i n c o m e f a m i l i e s a r e b e t t e r e q u i p p e d t o d e a l w i t h d i f f i c u l t i e s p o s e d b y t h e r e a l w o r l d w h e n t h e y g r o w u p a n d t h e y a l s o b e l i e v e t h e p r i v i l e g e d c h i l d r e n o f w e a l t h y f a m i l i e s a r e l e s s f i t t o d e a l w i t h t h e s e d i f f i c u l t i e s .T h e i m p l i c a t i o n s a n d v e r a c i t y o f t h i s a r g u m e n t s e e m s e l f-e v i d e n t,b u t i n f a c t r e q u i r e c l o s e r e x a m i n a t i o n.(58w o r d s) 名师点评：
# 43. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows CO2 emissions for different forms of transport in the European Union. The Pie Chart shows the percentage of European Union funds being spent on different forms of transport. You should write at least 150 words.
model answer: The chart shows CO2 emissions per passenger kilometre for variuos methods of transport in the European Union while the pie chart shows European Union spending on transport. Flying by air produces by far the greatest CO2 emissions, approximately three times as much as passenger cars which are the next largest producers. Very little is spent by the EU on air travel while roads make up more than half of the EU transport budget. Trains produce about three times less CO2 emissions per passenger kilometre than passenger cars and eight times less than air travel. Nearly a third of EU transport funds are spent on railways. Ships are a clean form of transport and produce about the same amount of CO2 per passenger kilometre as trains do. However, only 2 percent of EU funds are spent on ports. A further one percent is spent on inland waterways. Coaches are the cleanest form of transport. Emissions of CO2 per passenger kilometre from coaches are half those of buses. Buses emit less than half as much CO2 per passenger kilometre as cars. The European Union spends 10 percent of its transport budget on public transport, such as buses and coaches. (197 words)
雅思写作小作文范文118篇之范文14 以下是三立在线雅思网给大家分享的雅思写作小作文范文118篇：范文14。希望对大家的雅思备考有所帮助，更多雅思备考资料欢迎大家随时关注三立在线雅思网。 范文14 The computer is widely used in education，and some people think teachers do not play important roles in the classroom. To what extend do you agree or disagree? In this period of communication,computer has been used in all kinds of fields widely, and plays a particular role in our lives. Especially computer has become more and more important in educational field, therefore dozens of people considered teachers could be replaced computers that will go with the current of the times. The above point is certainly wrong; this essay will outline three reasons. The main reason is that people’s brain better than computer. Firstly, people design all kinds of computer’s programs. Secondly, computer doesn’t have logistic ideation. Computer only can defend on that designer inputted computer’s programs to judge a question’s right or wrong. In other words, computer can’t defend on thinking that computer independently analyzes a question’s right or wrong. In case, designer inputted programs that are wrong. Computer output the result that also will be wrong. If this kind of problem happened in classroom, students would be infused plenty of wrong information.
雅思写作G类作文讲义 主讲：张弛新 随笔分类： 雅思写作互动及欣赏区 新闻“报”料 雅友大联盟 必下载文件： 小新课堂笔记version 8.0 雅思冋家复习计划 插入雅思写作答题纸 Task 1 (G) ? Types of Letter https://www.doczj.com/doc/d64559510.html,plaint 2.Enquiry 3.Request 4.Apology 5.Acknowledgement 6.Suggestion 7.Job application 8.Recommendation 9.Self-introduction 10.Invitation Tactics for Task 1 (General Training) Structure Dear Sir or Madam, ------- unknown authority/stranger Dear Mr./Ms./Prof/Dr (Surname), --------known authority Dear (name), ------- fYicndi'relative Re: (position) only for application letter 」As one of your (identity) s, I am writing this letter to express my (emotion) fonnll I am)(name), writing to you for (purpose) informal
" -Question 1&2 --------- e xplanation of the whole event and expression of some emotion '" Question 3 offer your own solution Looking fonvard to your early reply and thanks for your great effort to deal with it. Yours sincerely (English name) Emotion Words Complain Request Thanks Apology Invitation App/Recom Junk Words discomfort concern thanks regret invitation confidence dissatisfaction confiision appreciation sorrow disturbance interest thankfulness grief annoyance enquiry irritatio n Medium Words uneasiness perplexity remorse request selPassurance discomposure bewildeiTnent repentance boldness Favorable words disconcertion solicitude chagrin proposition aplomb perturbation bafflement contrition solicitation poise vexation compunction lamentation ? Complaint-说明意图+解释情况+解决方案 彳列：You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because he or she always has friends visiting. They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you. Write a letter to the Accommodation Office at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons. 】?I am writing to complain about.../that??? 2.I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with somebody about something
雅思大作文开篇如何让人眼前一亮 雅思写作除了词汇量要达到以外，还有很多提分点的哦。出guo 为雅思栏目大家带来雅思大作文开篇如何让人眼前一亮，希望对大家备考雅思有所帮助! 正所谓好的开始是成功的一半，雅思大作文的写作也一次次验证了这个道理。很多同学往往不重视雅思大作文开头段的写作，只是简单套用一些现成的模板，殊不知这样已经给考官留下“背诵模板”的印象，这样一来，不仅给后面的主体段带来了巨大压力，而且人的第一印象往往是很难改变的。大作文开头段往往要包含如下几个关键内容，即，介绍背景，引出有争议的话题，阐述对立观点和陈述作者自己的观点。无论使用还是不使用模板，这几个关键信息是一定要包含在开头段落当中的，不然云里雾里，只能是适得其反。 根据这些信息，备战过的考生们一定都熟悉下面这一套开头写作流程，首先It is quite mon these days...介绍背景，或者用The issue of ... is a plex and sensitive one.这样的句型来引出有争议话题，然后千篇一律地分别介绍对立双方观点，如Some individuals believe that..., while others hold the view that...最终用Personally, I agree with...至此，内容上完美无
瑕，但恐怕考官心中已经大大打下“模板”两个字的烙印，这无疑对于想取得6分及以上的同学最不利的事情。 例如，一道雅思写作高频题目，讨论到底大学应该教授实用性课程(如计算机和商科课程)还是传统课程(如历史和地理)。我们依然按照开头段应该包含的关键信息开始写作，但是却可以这样轻松突破：These day there is a growing tendency for college students to have difficulties in finding jobs when they graduate.(介绍背景)A large number of people hold the opinion that lack of practical knowledge, among other things, contributes to this situation. In light of this, they contend that college teachers should lay more stress on practical courses than on traditional ones. (引出有争议的话题，并阐述大多数人的观点)For my part, I am in favour of their viewpoint.(作者观点)这一段写得非常灵巧，第一句结合题目背景，介绍现如今有一种趋势，即大学毕业生很难找到工作，紧接着作者陈述有许多人认为这是由于学生缺少实用性的知识，并因此提出大学应该更多关注于教授实用性的知识，这一句将有争议话题的其中一方观点用因果链条清晰阐述。最后一句表达作者自己的立场，就是支持前面大多数人的想法。总的来看，这一段只提及了对立双方的其中一方观点，然后表达自己支持这一方观点。这就是一种对于开头段模板的超越，简单可行，只对其中一方观点清晰论
雅思10范文急求雅思范文10篇 无忧雅思网论坛： 这是他主页： 3g雅思网： 上面都有范文！希望对你有帮助！ 首先分析这种现象的利与弊 advantages：pany 会进一步推进科学研究的发展，由于公司大多数会投资有生产或者市场价值的研究，这样就弥补了政府在这方面投入的不足。而且商业性研究会带来利益，进而带来一系列好处。。。 disadvantages: 也许会导致科研商业化，吸引研究者更多的从事商业研究而忽略基础研究，造成基础研究薄弱，科学技术研究水平发展不平衡。 然后，假设你认同利大于弊，进一步阐述你的理由，强化利大于弊的观点。
假如你不认同，同上。 最后别忘了作总结，再次重申你的观点 Training Experience in Shanghai chmin 发表于 xx-3-28 8:29:00 Last week I went to Shanghai for the taining classes held by Altair, a famous engineering software pany.I can't remember the exactly times that I have been to Shanghai, but this time, i'd like to say, is very memorable. Not because I excursed some splendid artifical sights nor I was taken to some characteristic restaurants, just only since the afflictive time in autobus every morning. Life in school is quite fortable. If there's no class in the morning, I just need to wake up naturally, and inordinate some time, the moment i opened my eyes, it's alreay 12 o'clock. Incredible, I got up before 7 o'clock the whole last week, and spent more than one and half an
雅思大作文万能模板「精华」 1. Introduction的作用： An introduction is crucial, not just for what it says about the topic, but for what it tells the reader about writers style and approach. Unless you can introduce the subject clearly the reader may not wish to continue. For a relatively short essay written under exam conditions, the following are worth including, in this order. a. Definitions of any terms in the title those are unclear b. Some background information c. Reference to other writers who have discussed this topic d. Your purpose in writing and the importance of the subject e. A summary of the main points you intend to cover 2.雅思大作文写作类型： 雅思task 2一共有两种类型，第一种为Argumentation, 第二种为Report。
Argumentation: 1)给出一种观点-------Do you agree or disagree? Nowadays computer are widely used in education. As a result, some people think teachers no longer play important roles in classrooms. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 2)给出两种对立的观点-------Discuss both views and give your own opinions. Some people argue that there are no basic differences between the way men and women approach academic study. Others insist that there are big differences in areas such as organization, attitude and ambition. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 3)分析优缺点-------Do you think the advantages/ benefits outweigh its disadvantages/ problems? Some people agree to adopt a new language (Such as English) that can be used by people all of the world for international communication. Do you think the benefits of this would
【最新整理，下载后即可编辑】 范文的思路好了。这样好的东西，可惜不是我整理的，是一个叫landfish姑娘收集的，厉害！ v105 Some people claim that the disadvantages of the car are more than the advantages,do you ag ree or disagree? 范文1 The birth of cars has made an enormous change to our life. In the past, we travelled fro m one place to another only by foot, nowadays, cars can do the same job . It goes withou r saying that the invention of cars bring great benefits to all of us. but as an ancient prove rb goes, no garden without weeds. Car is no exception. Owing a car has a lot of advantages. For one thing, car provides us the most convenient wa y of transportation. we can get around freely without spenting a lot of time. Emotionally, I always found driving is so exciting. For another , it is comfortable to drive a car.in winte r.Drivers always can stay warm and dry even in rainy weather .In addition, drivers are saf er in their cars when they are out at night. While cars bring the human a large number of merits ,their side-effects gradually come t o the surface .Firstly, running a car needs a lot of oil,which is getting less and less.The incre asing number of cars contributes the lack of energy.Secondlly,as more and more cars are util zed,the traffic ecpecially in big cities is getting heaver and heavier,which leads to the seriou s traffic jam.Moreover,the inceasing numbers of cars ,which excaust sent a huge quantitie s of carbon monoxide into atmosphere.It makes the air of cities unbreathable, it strips peop le’s contact with fresh air. Therefore, the new energy should be explored to replace the oil so that our envionmental p ollution can be avioded , and the strick law should be issued to keep the numbers of cars un der control. Thus, our heavier traffic can be solved!