雅思写作G类作文讲义
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Task 1 (G)
? Types of Letter
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2.Enquiry
3.Request
4.Apology
5.Acknowledgement
6.Suggestion
7.Job application
8.Recommendation
9.Self-introduction
10.Invitation
Tactics for Task 1 (General Training)
Structure
Dear Sir or Madam, ------- unknown authority/stranger
Dear Mr./Ms./Prof/Dr (Surname), --------known authority
Dear (name), ------- fYicndi'relative
Re: (position) only for application letter
」As one of your (identity) s, I am writing this letter to express my (emotion) fonnll I am)(name), writing to you for (purpose) informal
" -Question 1&2 --------- e xplanation of the whole event and expression of some emotion
'" Question 3 offer your own solution
Looking fonvard to your early reply and thanks for your great effort to deal with it.
Yours sincerely
(English name)
Emotion Words
Complain Request Thanks Apology Invitation App/Recom
Junk Words discomfort concern thanks regret invitation confidence dissatisfaction confiision appreciation sorrow
disturbance interest thankfulness grief
annoyance enquiry
irritatio n
Medium Words uneasiness perplexity remorse request selPassurance discomposure bewildeiTnent repentance boldness
Favorable words disconcertion solicitude chagrin proposition aplomb perturbation bafflement contrition solicitation poise vexation compunction
lamentation
? Complaint-说明意图+解释情况+解决方案
彳列：You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because he or she always has friends visiting. They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you.
Write a letter to the Accommodation Office at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons.
】?I am writing to complain about.../that???
2.I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with somebody about something
https://www.doczj.com/doc/165305483.html,m most reluctant to complain, but …
4.I feel sorry to trouble you but 1 am afraid I have to make a complaint about..?
Examples:
I am writing to complain about the service on the Beijing-Shanghai train which I took on August 16, 2001.
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about the Walkman I bought at the duty-free shop in your airport on February 14, 2005 ?
? End of a complaint letter
1. 1 would be grateful / 1 shall appreciate it very much if you could take the matter into consideration
and solve it at your earliest convenience?
2. 1 would like to have this matter settled by the end of.../ within 14 days.
Writing task 1
You live in a room in college which you share with another student? You find it very difficult to
work there because he or she always has friends visiting. They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you. Write a letter to the Accommodation Office at
the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons
?
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you that I wish to move into a new room next term. 1 would preter a single room, as I find the present sharing aiTangement inconvenient.
I must explain that the reason for my dissatisfaction is my roommate s inconsiderate behavior. For one thing, his friends arc constantly visiting him; for another, he regularly holds noisy parties?In addition, he sometimes boiTows my things without asking me. In these circumstances, I find it difficult to concentrate on my studies, and I am falling behind in my assignments.
I am sure you will agree that the only solution is for nie to move into a room of my own, where I will be tree from such distractions. Therefore, I would be grateful if you could find a single room for me, preferably not in the same building but as near to the college campus as possible?
Yours sincerely,
Janice Kennedy
考生样卷：
Dear Sir, Dear Madam.
I am writing you to express my dissatisfaction with my room mate and request to another accommodation next term?
My main problem is that I cannot study in my room because my room?ma(e always has friends
visiting. He also has parties, which usually ends early in lhe morning, several times a week.
Further more he often borrows my things without asking me.
I cannot accept this situation any longer. Especially because I have very important exams next term and I really must study hard? This is why I would be very grateful if I could have another room next tenn. It would be most convenient for me not having to share my room with someone else.
I am looking fbrward to hear from you soon.
Yours faithiully
Dee White
考官评分：6.5分
修正版：
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing you to express my dissatisfaction with my room mate and request alternate accommodation starting next term?
The main problem is that 1 find it extremely difficult to study in my room because my roommate constantly has friends visiting and throw loud parties which often last until early morning. This docs not just happen once or twice a month. He has these parties several times a week, ever since the beginning of the term. In addition, my roommate often borrows my things without asking me. Even after numerous polite requests, there has been no change in my roommate^ behaviour. 1( has now gotten to the point that we don't even talk to each other. This has added a lot of undue stress, which has started to take its toll on my studies.
Because I have very important exams next term, 1 must request a new room, and I would like to have a single room, if that is at all possible?I would be very grateful if you would consider this request at your earliest convenience? Thank you for your help in this matter. I look forward to hearing from you soon?
Yours sincerely,
Sam Zhang
Writing task I
You have received your pay for your summer holiday part-time job, but your pay is less than you were promised. Please write a letter to the manager of the unit, clearly stating what work you have done and how long your work took? While explaining your case, put forward your demand and suggestion.
Dear Manager,
I have received the $800 cheque which you pay to me as a part-time software programmer in your company during my latest summer vacation. However, I am at a loss why the amount is $ 100 less than you promised to pay me.
It was contracted that a part-time software programmer's weekly wage is $ 300. I signed the contract with you and consequently worked in your company for a total of 3 weeks? In the period, I went to and from work on time and to your satisfaction, I completed each task that you assigned me without any ciTors?
Also, no blame about me was ever heard in any aspect. So my total income should be $ 900, which is S 100 more than that I gained from you. I firmly insist on your kind explanation of the difference and making it up as soon as possible?
Your early reply would be highly appreciated.
Yours sincerely
Janet Smith
?Enquiry -目的+具体问题+ （急切心情+感激+联系方式）
1 ? lam writing for information about..?
2.I am writing to sec if it is possible for you to provide me with infonnation regarding ???
3.I would be most grateful if you could supply rue with the following infonnation.
?End of an Enquiry letter
1.Thank you for your consideration
2.I am expecting your early reply.
3.I am looking forward to your immediate response.
4.In addition, if you could let me have details of ??? I would be more than grateful.
Writing task 1
As part of a student social survey project, you are organizing a group to visit a historical exhibition in a small town? Write a letter asking for information regarding such things as the contents of the exhibition, and the dates of its opening and closing, and if there are any discounts available?
Dear Sir,
I am organizing a group of students to pay a visit to the historical exhibition in your town. This visit will be part of our school's activities to encourage the students to take part in social surveys. Therefore, I would be grateful if you could supply me with the following inlorniation.
First of all, what arc the dates bchvccn which the exhibition will be held, and what arc the daily opening hours? Secondly, what is the size of the exhibition, what is its theme and what objects are on display? Thirdly, are there any other activities being held in connection with the exhibition?
I must point out that I hope to bring over students to the exhibition, So I would like to inquire if there is any discount available on entrance tickets for students. If so, how much is the discount and what is the minimum number of students necessary to qualify tor it?
I look fonvard to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
George Moore
? Apology-li的+原因+再次表示歉意/补救措施
https://www.doczj.com/doc/165305483.html,m writing to apologize for ..?
2.I am terribly sorry, but ???
3.Thank you for ??but I am sorry to say that...
? End of an apology letter
1.I hope you can accept my apologies. Please allow me to say sony again.
2.Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused?
3.I would be very grateful if you could tell me if there is any way that I can make up for it.
I do apologize for any inconvenience this may cause you?
Writing task 1
One of your pen pals will shortly be visiting your city. For some reasons, you cannot manage to meet her at the airport on time? Write a letter asking her to wait for you at the airport and tell her how to identify vou.
Dear Mary,
I am very much looking forward to your visit to my city? Just think: afler all these years of writing to each other, we will finally have the chance to meet! However, I regret to inform you that I will not be able to meet you at the airport as soon as you arrive?
The reason is that your flight will arrive early in the morning, and the quickest I can get to the airport will be about an hour after you land? Please wait for me in the arrival lounge? You should be able to have breakfast there while you wait.
By the way, as we have never met I must tell you how to recognize me: I am medium height and have a small mustache?In addition, I will be carrying a copy of the morning newspaper tucked under my left “rm.
Looking forward to out first meeting.
Yours sincerely,
Harry
? Acknowledgement - Bl的+原因+再次感谢
I.I am writing to extend/convey my heartthanks/sincere appreciation/gratitude to you for...
? End of a thank-you letter
1 ? I must thank you again for your generous help / kind assistance?
2.Please accept my gratitude, now and always?
3.My true gratitude is beyond words? Thank you again.
4.If you need any help to ??., please let me know. 1 shall appreciate it very much if you can give me a
chance to return your kindness?
Writing task 1
After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by another person?
Write a special letter to express your thanks?
Dear John,
I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude? I am referring to that unfortunale accident the other day, when 1 was knocked off my bike by a taxi. If it had not been for your timely assistance in giving me first aid and taking me to a nearby hospital, I fear that the consequences might have been much more serious.
The doctor says that my broken leg is healing well, and the bruises and cuts I suffered will soon be completely bette匚】n addition, the taxi company has agreed to pay my hospital bills? Everyone agrees that it was your quick-witted response in that emergency that has led to this satisfactory outcome.
Although nowadays many people talk about the need to be unselfish to help others, we see very few people practicing what they preach. But you showed by your selfless action that you are an exception. If there were more people like you, this world would be a much nicer place.
Yours sincerely,
Ted
Writing (ask 1
You have just arrived in the city where you are going to spend two years for your master^ degree. You have a lot preparation to do before the new term starts, but you do not know how to go round the city. A friend you have newly acquainted offered you guidance and helped you through difficulties. Write a letter to express your thanks?
Dear Mary,
I am writing this letter to thank you for the guidance you gave me. I was a perfect stranger when arriving at this city. Once I lost myself for not knowing the way in a downtown street, although I