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根据图片提示，写一写假如你得了流感会有什么症状？应该怎么做？不少于5句话。（10分）
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write . 写一写。（7%）
请你用几句话来介绍一下你的朋友，如身高，体重等方面。（至少写5句）
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作文：说说你是怎样度过周末的，你的心情如何，都干了些什么事情，不少于五句话。
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根据所给的图片，说明John 上星期天去了哪里，在那看见了什么，干了什么事情，心情会怎样？请展开丰富的想象，写几句英语。（10分）
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十． 看图作文。（10分）
．根据所给图片写不少于五句的英语小短文。请描述图中人的相貌，身高，体重，她是做什么的？她在哪里工作？
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看图作文：（10分）
请根据所给图片并以“My last winter holiday ”为题写一篇小短文，描述自己在假期做过的一些有意义或有趣的事情。要求条理清楚，语句连贯，不得少于5句话。
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根据所给的图片写几句话。说明图片中有什么人？在哪里？在做什么？女孩的心情如何？（10
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一、看图作文。（10分）
请用英语描述一下得了流感有何症状，应该怎么办？（不少于五句话）
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看图作文（10分）
这个人是谁啊？他在上个周末做了些什么啊？他的心情怎样啊？
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看图作文（10分）
要求：用一般过去时描述图片中的人物是如何度过他的假期的。
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1、根据给出的材料，写一写Mike这个周末的活动计划。 Saturday Sunday read a magazine go to the zoo buy a book do Kungfu watch TV Mike is a student. He is my good friend. He is busy at the weekend. He is going to read a magazine this Saturday morning. He is going to go to the zoo this Saturday afternoon. He is going to buy a book this Sunday morning. He is going to do Kungfu this Sunday afternoon. He is going to watch TV this Sunday evening. 3、根据下面提供的内容，写一篇英语短文。要求语句通顺，条理清楚，字数不少于50个单词。 你叫Amy,是个中国女孩，六年级学生，十二岁。她向别人自我介绍，并介绍她的家庭。她有个双胞胎姐姐，爸爸是医生，妈妈是老师，她非常爱他们，他们也很爱她。 My name is Amy. I come from China. I am a student. I am in Grade Five. I like my teacher. Her English is good. There are four people in my family. I have a twin sister. My father is a doctor. My mother is a teacher. I love them very much. They love me, too. 6、。要求：1、写一封介绍你一家的电子邮件给Jay 65个单词左右 Hello, Jay, I am very happy to be your friend. There are four people in my family. They are my parents , my sister and I. My father is the oldest and the tallest. He can drive a car. He is a doctor. My mother is a factory worker. She works hard. My sister is a student. She is the best in her class. My hobby is playing basketball. My sister and I go to school on foot. I have a happy family. What about you? Bye- bye， Benson 7、Jack 昨天跟他妈妈买东西，请根据下表的信息，写一篇不少于60个单词的小作文。 Yesterday was Jack’s shopping day. He went shopping with his mother. They went to the Happy Shop . They bought some pieces of candy. They are 4 yuan. They bought a roll of toilet paper. They bought a carton of ice cream at Mr. Chen’s Store .They bought a bottle of shampoo and a pair of socks at Uncle Eddy’s Store . They went to the Big Blue Department Store. They bought a toy car. It’s 105 yuan. They were very happy.
My Hometown我的家乡 I am from Mingxian . Mingxian is my hometown. It is very beautiful. There are many buildings, parks, cars and roads. In spring ,it is warm and wet. I can fly kites. In summer, it is hot and wet. I can swim in the swimming pool. In fall, it is cool and dry. I can go hiking. In winter, it is cold and dry. It never snow. I like my hometown very much. This is me我
My name is Jake. I’m a boy/ girl. I’m 13. I’m tall and strong. I go to school on foot. I like reading books and singing. My favorite food is fish. It’s tasty. I have a happy family. There are three people in my family. They are my father, my mother and me. I like them very much. This is me. I’m a happy boy. My Mother
六年级上册英语作文范文【三篇】 hello,my name is tian jiaxin ,i'm twel*e year age .I had a happy family,they are four people in my family，there are my father,my mother,my brother and I . i like me. do you like me? 修改后： Hello, my name is Tian Jiaxin. I'm twel*e years age. I ha*e a happy family. There are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my brother and I. They all like me. How about you? My plan for the summer holiday The summer holiday is coming . I am going to my hometown to see my grandparents first . Then I ha*e to re*iew my lessons because some of my lessons are bad . At last I plan to *isit Beijing. Beijing is the capital of my country and there are many places of interests, such as the Great Wall , the Summer Palace. I think I will ha*e a good and interesting time this summer . A busy weekend
中考英语作文专项训练 一、考点分析： 在中考中，写作占20分，分值所占比例大，而写作考察学生的英文综合运用能力，因此非常关键。 【中考英语作文的评分标准】 比较为学生所熟悉的就是“8+8+4”结构，即： （一）内容： 7-8分：内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。 5-6分：内容基本切题，意思大致连贯，表达基本清楚、但不够完整。 2-4分：内容不够切题，意思不够连贯，表达不够清楚、有些离题。 0-1分：文不对题，表达不清。 （二）语言： ①词数：每少5个字扣0.5分，以此类推。只写出个别单词、词不成句不给分。 ②拼写：每错扣0.5分，同一错误不重复计数。 ③语法：同② ④标点符号、大小写：每两处错误扣0.5分，但扣分总和不超过1分。 （三）组织结构： ①内容充实、上下文连贯、用语规范、表达准确、无语法错误；词汇和句型句式运用恰当，多 见好句型和习惯表达用语者，可给3-4分。 ②内容充实、不写废话；上下文连贯、用语规范、表达准确、无或少见语法错误；词汇和句型 句式运用恰当，多见好句型和习惯表达用语者，可给2分。 ③一般情况下，内容和语言累计得分在15分以上者（含），方可得到1-2分组织结构分。 ④内容和语言在15分以下者，如文中有值得肯定的好句型和表达，可酌情考虑给1分组织结 构分。 ⑤通篇句型、句式单一、词汇贫乏者，即使无语法错误，一般也不予给组织结构分。 二、写作中常见问题：
①内容空洞，没有清晰的思路，表达能力不强，表达生硬呆板，甚至中式英语翻译思维。 ②议论过多，描写不足。大多数情况下，把议论当成的作文的重点，常常跑题。 ③句式单一，都是简单句，缺少复合句。 ④结构散漫，思维跳跃，文章缺乏条理性。 ⑤连词的使用较少，并且使用单一，句子之间的连接很生硬。 ⑥文章平淡，无亮点短语和句型，连接词等。 三、写作技巧分析： 【高分作文的必备元素】 1. 书写工整，书面整洁，很少有涂改痕迹。 2. 不出现语法，拼写，标点，大小写等错误。 3. 文章字数最好控制在80-100字之间，切记过长或者过短，8-10句即可。 4. 要点齐全。为了避免遗漏要点，可以将题目中给出的要点标注出来。 5. 开头言简意赅，不啰嗦，不偏题，迅速引入主题。 6. 连接词使用恰当，不重复，上下文有连贯性，使之自然成一体。 7. 应用词汇: 高级词汇的合理使用、同义词的变化使用、短语的恰当使用。 8. 多用亮点短语，并且使短语多样性，尽可能使用多种表达方式。 比如：同一个意思“帮助”，假如你就用一个动词“help”，显得词汇贫乏。如果能在作文中不断 地变换方式，用help、give sb. a hand、do sb. a favor、be in need of 等以表达“帮助”，表达更灵 活生动。 9.句式多样性，可适当使用陈述句，疑问句，祈使句及感叹句，强调句，倒装句，定语从句， 状语从句，宾语从句等。 10. 能够恰当使用谚语、格言、名言等给文章添彩。 11. 语法结构多样性,主动被动交叉用，原级比较级灵活用，非谓语动词恰当用。 12.灵活使用万能句型，增添文章亮点。 四、中考经典范文解读： VII. Writing (作文) （共20分） 94. Write at least 60 words on the topic “I want to invent_____” (以“我想要发明________”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
六年级下册英语作文 一、介绍自己的家人 My family There are four people in my family. My father is a work. He is a worker. My mother is an English teacher. She is younger than my father. I am a student. I love my family very much. 二、用there be 句型介绍一下自己的bedroom My bedroom This is my bedroom. There is a big bed in my bedroom. There is a desk next to the window. There are two chairs in my bedroom. And there are many books on the bookshelf(书架). I love my bedroom. 三、暑假马上到了。写一下你的暑期计划。 My summer vacation Summer vacation is coming. I will go to Hainan with my parents this summer vacation. We will get there by air. We will play volleyball on the beach. I will buy many gifts for my grandparents. We will have fun. 四、写一下你的理想中学 My ideal high school My ideal high school is a big school. There are many flowers and trees. It’s very beautiful. The school is famous for science club. The school is not far from my home. I will go to School on foot. 五、写一篇关于保护环境的作文 I am a student. I think we should protect the environment. We should stop using plastic bags. We shouldn’t litter everywhere. We should plant trees every year.
6年级英语作文 6年级英语作文1 The Winter Holiday,I like the winter holiday very much. Though it’s very short,I can enjoy the Spring Festival. I can watch cartoon every day.I needn’t go to school frepuently. Sometimes I can go to play with my friend outside.With the festival coming,I can play all the time. I can play video game with my brother.I am good at playing PC game. So I often beats my brother.Then more and more relative came to my home. We had dinner together.It’s so lively that I’am very hap py.But I still have to do my homework. 6年级英语作文 2 Modesty is one of the many qualities that cross - century young people should possess. It makes you foresee your imperfections. It gives you the impetus to go forward. Most important of all, it makes you accessible and creates favorable
六年级英语作文范文集 班别：姓名：学号： Mike is a student. He is my good friend. He is busy at the weekend. He is going to read a magazine this Saturday morning. He is going to go to the zoo this Saturday afternoon. He is going to buy a book this Sunday morning. He is going to learn Kungfu this Sunday afternoon. He is going to watch TV this Sunday evening. 2、看图写作文。（园地29页） 题目：A Happy Day in Spring 提示：下图是Mr. Black 一家人在春天的某一天在野外游玩的场景。请用一般现在时描写图中所呈现出的内容。可作适当的想象和发挥。 要求：1、条理清晰，意思明确、连贯，句子通顺，标点正确，书写工整、规范。 2、不少于70个单词。 A Happy Day in Spring It’s spring. It’s sunny and cloudy today. There are many big trees in the park. Mr. Black’s family have a picnic in a park. They bring many food there. They bring fruit, drink and bread. Mr. Black and Mrs. Black talk with each other. They talk very happily. Ann reads a magazine. Tom likes flying a kite. The kite flies very well. They are hungry now. They want to eat their food. They are very happy. 3、根据下面提供的内容，写一篇英语短文。要求语句通顺，条理清楚，字数不少于50个单词。Mary 是个英国女孩，五年级学生，十二岁。她向别人自我介绍，并介绍她的家庭。她有个双胞胎姐姐，爸爸是医生，妈妈是老师，她非常爱他们，他们也很爱她。 My name is Mary. I come from England. I am an English girl. I am a student. I am in Grade Five. I like my teacher. Her English is good. There are four people in my family. I have a twin sister. My father is a doctor. My mother is a teacher. I love them very much. They love me, too. 4、题目：My net friend（我的网友） 要求：1。条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，书写清晰、规范； 2．要将提示词全部体现在作文中；不得少于50个单词。 提示词：（1）computer （2）net friend (3) talk with each other(互相交谈) (4) in the chat room (在聊天室) （5）talk in English (用英语交谈) （6）good now My net friend I am Tony. I a have a computer. I have a net friend. His name is Jack. He is 12 years old. He is a student. He likes surfing the net. We often talk with each other in the chat room. We talk in English. My English is good now. He is a good boy. I like him very much. Do you want to have a net friend? 5、提示：根据下面所给出的这张Ann的小名片，以“我的好朋友”为题，写一篇小短文，介绍Ann 的基本情况。 要求：1、条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，书写清晰、规范。 2、要将名片中的内容全部体现在作文中。 3、不少于60个单词。
六年级英语作文范文精选10篇 六年级英语作文范文精选篇一 My fa*orite animal is raadfdsit. Its name is Sweet. Sweet has long ears. It’s *ery small. It’s white. It has a short tail. It has red eyes. It likes eating carrots. It likes jumping. It goes jumping three times a day. I like it *ery much. It’s lo*ely. It’s my best friend. I like the raadfdsit. It’s spring. It’s sunny and cloudy today. There are many big trees in the park. Mr. Black’s family has a picnic in a park. They bring much food there. They bring fruit drink and bread. Mr. Black and Mrs. Black talk with each other. They talk *ery happily. Ann reads a magazine. Tom likes flying a kite. The kite flies *ery well. They are hungry now. They want to eat their food. They are *ery happy. Who is your fa*orite people? My fa*orite people is my mother. She is beautiful. She is 38 years old. She is tall and thin. She has big eyes andlong hair. She likes cooking. She cooks good meals for us e*ery day. And she always does all the housework. She looks after my father and me. I lo*e
高考英语作文专项训练：任务型写作训练(9) 高考英语任务型写作训练（九） 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。 The Growth in Fast Food Today more snack bars than ever before can be seen in all residential areas and downtown. Chinese food is always sold side by side with foreign one；for example，noodle，rice and fried mutton are served on the same table.Why does fast food enjoy so great popularity. The reasons are of different types.First of all，having snacks is economical of money compared with formal meals.The cost of less than 100 yuan only reflects the 0rdinary level of a formal meal，while as much as 10 yuan is enough to satisfy one's appetite at most snack bars.Next，convenience weighs heavily.In a snack bar，you don't have to pretend to be graceful，and you may also take your meal away，which helps save you much https://www.doczj.com/doc/d54388284.html,st，diverse features of fast food form a good attraction. For example，in Xi'an， Shanxi food along with Sichuan food and typical food in Northeast China are within your easy reach. Obviously，fast food adds great convenience to our life. With its further improvement in all sides，snacks will surely be enjoyed by more people from all walks of life. 「写作内容」 1）概括短文的内容要点，该部分的字数大约30词左右； 2）就"就如何看待快餐食品？"这个主题发表你的看法，至少包含以下的内容要点，该部分的字数大约120词左右； a）工薪一族对快餐的看法； b）父母对快餐的看法； c）快餐的利和弊 d）你对快餐的看法。 「写作要求」 你可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不能抄袭阅读材料中的句子。 参考例文：
WORD 格式 专业资料整理 六年级下册英语作文 一、介绍自己的家人 Myfamily Therearefourpeopleinmyfamily.Myfatherisawork.Heisaworker.Mymother isanEnglishteacher.Sheisyoungerthanmyfather.Iamastudent.Ilovemyfamilyvery much. 二、用therebe 句型介绍一下自己的bedroom Mybedroom Thisismybedroom.Thereisabigbedinmybedroom.Thereisadesknexttothe window.Therearetwochairsinmybedroom.Andtherearemanybooksonthe bookshelf(书架).Ilovemybedroom. 三、暑假马上到了。写一下你的暑期计划。 Mysummervacation Summervacationiscoming.IwillgotoHainanwithmyparentsthissummer vacation.Wewillgettherebyair.Wewillplayvolleyballonthebeach.Iwillbuymany giftsformygrandparents.Wewillhavefun. 四、写一下你的理想中学 Myidealhighschool Myidealhighschoolisabigschool.Therearemanyflowersandtrees.It ’s very beautiful.Theschoolisfamousforscienceclub.Theschoolisnotfarfrommyhome.I willgotoSchoolonfoot. 五、写一篇关于保护环境的作文 Iamastudent.Ithinkweshouldprotecttheenvironment.Weshouldstopusing plasticbags.Weshouldn ’t littereverywhere.Weshouldplanttreeseveryyear.
2009年高考英语作文专项训练：任务型写作（15） 1. 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。 Students should think now about what extracurricular (课外的) activities they'd like to participate in. Participating in extracurricular activities may help you deepen your physical, creative, social, political, and career interests by bringing you into communication with other like-minded people you didn’t previously know. You can join groups as a way to get support from other students. A club or group can also be a great way to meet people who are different from you. Lots of youth programs bring people together with those who are different as a way to break down the barriers between people. Participating in extracurricular activities helps you in other ways, too. It looks good on college and job applications and shows admissions officers and employers you're well-rounded and responsible. Specific activities help with specific goals. The most basic reason for joining a club or team is that it gives you something better to do than staring at the wall, wandering the hall, or sleeping all afternoon. People who are participating are less likely to pick up bad habits, like smoking or drinking. [写作内容] 1．概括短文的内容要点，该部分的字数大约30词左右； 2．就“学生是否应该参与课外活动”这个主题发表你的看法，至少包含以下的内容要点，该部分的字数大约120词左右： a) 简述你们学校有哪些课外活动； b) 你认为课外活动能给你的学习生活带来什么； c) 你认为学生应如何处理好学习和课外活动之间的关系。 [写作要求] 你可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的观点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子。 参考范文
小学英语五年级上册各单元作文例及点评 My English Teacher Miss Tang is my English teacher. She’s very pretty. She is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes cats very much. And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play games in English classes. She is very kind to us. We all love her. 【要领点评】 这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”，是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作者开门见山，直接点题，首先介绍了英语老师的，然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。 小朋友们在写作文时，要注意使用自己最熟悉的词[组]，以免写出一些错句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规等。 My Days of the week I’m a student and I am in Grade 5.I get up at six o’clock every day. I have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven o’clock. I have classes from Monday to Saturday. I have an English class on Friday and I have a PE class on Tuesday. I don’t have to go to school on school, and I like to go swimming on that day. 【要领点评】 这篇作文的题目是“我的一周”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的亲身经历写起，叙述了自己一周七天的所作所为，并特别强调了星期天的喜好，写得自然、流畅。 小朋友们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化，要依据提示，结合自己的实际，写自己身边熟悉的事情。 My Favourite Food Do you know what this is? Guess! Its colour is yellow. It’s long and thin. It looks like a small boat and crescent. Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what that is? Guess again! Its colour is orange. It’s round. It looks like a small ball and a small lantern. Oh, it is an orange. I like then a lot. I like ice-creams. I like to chew gum. Chocolates and candies are yummy. I like them very much. How about you? What’s your favourite food? 【要领点评】 My Favourite Food 是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是简单地列举出自己最喜欢的每一种食物，而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另外，文章中出现了一些生词，可见小作者是用心查字典了。 I can help do housework I am a girl. My name is Li Ling. I’m in Class Three, Grade Five. I’m helpful at home. I can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor. After meals, I can help my mother do the dishes. On Sunday, I can wash the clothes. What about you? Are you helpful, too? 【要领点评】 本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”，作者主要叙述自己在家帮助做的事情，介绍自己的名字，所在年级及在家能做的家务，很详细，到位。 小朋友们在写作时，应尽量写一些亲自经历的事情，这样会避免在作文时显得太空，因为只有自己经常做的事情印象才会特别深刻。写作时还要注意大小写和时态。
1、My friend （用英语介绍一个朋友，包括年龄，特点，上学方式，爱好，下周计划） I have a good friend. His name is Yi fan. He is twelve years old. He is ta;; and thin. He goes to school by bike. He likes playing football and reading a book. He is going to take a trip next week. 2.My family (我的家人） （介绍父母的职业，上班的方式，在哪里上班，你上学的方式） My father is a teacher. He works in a school. He goes to school by bus. My mother is a nurse. She works in a hospital. She goes to hospital by car. I am a student. I go to school on foot. 3.My friend and I ( 用比较级介绍自己的朋友和自己，包括年龄、身高、体重） My friend Yi fan is twelve years old. He is older than me. He is 1.60 meters. He is taller and thinner than me. He is 45 kilograms. I am heavier than him. 4.My weekend plan(周末计划） I am going to have a bust weekend. On Saturday morning, I am going to the park. On Saturday afternoon, I am going to play football. On Saturday evening, I am going to visit my grandparents. On Sunday afternoon, I am going to do my homework.
提纲类作文专项训练 1.【2014年福建省龙岩市中考】 英语课上，老师向同学们介绍了2013年度“最美孝心少年”的感人事迹，你深受感动。请你用英语写一则日记，写出自己的感受。 内容要点及要求： 1. 表明自己将向“孝心少年”学习； 2. 你将在日常生活、学习中做些什么来孝敬父母； 3. 词数：80左右。开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。 提示词（可选用）：learn from, respect, care for, do some housework, study hard Monday, June 30 Sunny This morning, our English teacher told us some stories about “the most beautiful filial piety youth in 2013 ”. 2.【2014年湖南省长沙市中考】 随着年龄的增长，不少青少年发现越来越难与父母沟通和交流，各方面的分歧使两代人之间的关系日益紧张。请围绕该话题用英语谈谈你的看法。 要求：（1）内容包括①分析这种现象产生的主要原因； ②提出解决该问题的具体建议。 （2）字数：60-80字 （3）短文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。 3.【2014年湖南省娄底市中考】 请根据表格内Zhang Ying的一些表现的提示用英语写一篇短文，把她介绍给你的外国朋友Mary。
要求：1、语言要通顺，表达要正确。 2、文章要求包含表格中的所有提示。 3、词数不少于60个英语单词。 4、文章开头结尾已给出，不计入词数。 4. 【2014年辽宁省沈阳市中考】 某英文报刊开辟中学生栏目，请你以 Reading Comic Strips is____为题写一篇小短文，为报社投稿(词数 80-100)。步骤与要点如下： 1．确定主题，并在文中说明原因； 2．围绕主题，进行叙述； 3．讲述一段与主题有关的故事或经历。 要求：1．补全标题（参考词汇:interesting; popular; useful; boring; my pleasure等）; 2．字迹工整,内容完整连贯,语言准确规范; 3．鼓励写出真情实感,对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数; 4．作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照图文中的内容,但不可以直接引用图文中的句子; 5．作文中不要出现考生和相关人物的真实校名和姓名. Reading Comic Strips is ______ There are many kinds of stories in comic strips. In my opinion, reading comic strips is ... 5. 【2014年内蒙古包头市、乌兰察布市中考】假设你是李华，请在答题卡相应位置用英语给你的美国笔友Jim写一封电子邮件，告诉他以下事情： 1．感谢他给你寄来的那些书。你非常喜欢它们，每晚睡前都会读几页。请他下次来信时给你介绍一些美国的节日。 2．非常盼望与他面对面交谈，所以希望他明年夏天能来你的家乡。你愿意作他的导游。你们可以一起参观一些有趣的地方。
小学英语五年级上册各单元作文范例及点评 My English Teacher Miss Tang is my English teacher. She’s very pretty. She is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes cats very much. And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play games in English classes. She is very kind to us. We all love her. 【要领点评】 这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”，是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作者开门见山，直接点题，首先介绍了英语老师的姓名，然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。 小朋友们在写作文时，要注意使用自己最熟悉的词[组]，以免写出一些错句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规范等。 My Days of the week I’m a student and I am in Grade 5.I get up at six o’clock every day. I have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven o’clock. I have classes from Monday to Saturday. I have an English class on Friday and I have a PE class on Tuesday. I don’t have to go to school on weekend, and I like going swimming on that day. 【要领点评】 这篇作文的题目是“我的一周”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的亲身经历写起，叙述了自己一周七天的所作所为，并特别强调了星期天的喜好，写得自然、流畅。 小朋友们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化，要依据提示，结合自己的实际，写自己身边熟悉的事情。 I can help do housework I am a girl. My name is Li Ling. I’m in Class Three, Grade Five. I’m very helpful at home. I can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor. After meals, I can help my mother do the dishes. On Sunday, I can wash the clothes. What about you? Are you helpful, too? 【要领点评】 本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”，作者主要叙述自己在家帮助做的事情，介绍自己的名字，所在年级及在家能做的家务，很详细，到位。 小朋友们在写作时，应尽量写一些亲自经历的事情，这样会避免在作文时显得太空，因为只有自己经常做的事情印象才会特别深刻。写作时还要注意大小写和时态。 My Village My village is very beautiful. There are many houses in the village. Near the village, there is a forest. A small river is in front of the village. The water in it is very clean. We can see some fish in the river. Near the river, you can see a mountain. Some flowers and grass are on the mountain. I like my village. Welcome to my village! 【要领点评】