2012届高考英语考前冲刺精选短文改错分类讲解
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2012届高考英语考前冲刺精选短文改错分类讲解
高考英语短文改错历来是考生的一个难点,因为它考察的是考生的综合语言运用能力,涵盖英语语言的各个层面。
但是综合分析历年试题我们不难发现短文改错是有规律可循的,考察的常考考点是固定的。
因此,考生只要具备较扎实的英语基础知识,在此基础上明确有那些考点,分解练习各个考点,再综合到短文中有意识的在只要出现考点的地方停顿核查,不断练习,定会有提高。
考点解析:名词
一、考点规律分析
短文改错的名词考点金太阳新课标资源网主要涉及名词的单复数问题,即在该用复数的地方误用其单数,或在该用单数的地方误用其复数,关键是记住常用的不可数名词和集体名词以及复数形式表达不同意义的名词(见核按钮)
二、真题单句归纳
(1)We stopped to rest for a while and to drink some waters from a stream. (waters 改为water,因“水”为物质名词,不可数)(全国卷)
(2)We climb everywhere,not only in America. We have been to Europe many time. (time改为times,many times 意为“许多次”)(全国卷)
(3)There are branch library in many villages. (library 改为libraries,因其前的谓语are为复数)(全国卷)
(4)I hope that you two could come and visit us some times soon. (times 改为time,some time 意为“某时”)(全国卷)
(5)Today I visited the Smiths —my first time visit to an American family. (去掉time,因first 已含有“次”的意思)(全国卷)
(6)They were eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of question. (question 改为questions,因其前有表示复数意义的修饰语lots of)(全国卷)(7)We study quite a few subject,such as maths,Chinese,English and physics. (subject 改为subjects,因 a few 后应接复数可数名词)(全国卷)
(8)…and often watch football match on TV together. (match 改为matches)(全国卷)
(9)Happy birthday,Peter,and many happy return of the day!(return改为returns,many happy returns of the day!为祝贺生日的惯用表达)(北京春季卷)(10)She said that she and my schoolmate all wished me success. (schoolmate 改为schoolmates,因校友不只一个,另外根据其后的all 也可推知)(全国卷)(11)I used to love science class —all of them—biology,chemistry,geography,physics. (class 改为classes,指其后提到的所有课程)(北京春季卷)
(12)They did not want me to do any work at family. (family 改为home,因at home 为固定短语)(全国卷)
(13)…so that I‘ll get good marks in all my subject. (subject 改为subjects,请注意前面的all)(全国卷)
(14)On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. (picture 改为pictures,picture 作为可数名词,其前应有限定词,或为复数形式)(全国卷)(15)No one worries much about the radio program young people listen to. (program 改为programs,从句意上看,此处应用复数)(北京春季卷)
(16)Their word were a great encouragement to me. (word 改为words,注意其后的
复数动词)(全国卷)
(17)You know,that was a dinner we had waited for several month.“(month 改为months,因several 后要用可数名词的复数形式)(江苏卷)
(18)…but after class we become stranger at?? once.(stranger改为strangers,由本行前面的we可知应该用名词复数)(全国卷)
(19)You can find all kinds of information in just a few minute on the Internet. (minute 改为minutes,因为a few后面的名词一定是复数)(广西卷)
(20)Nowadays millions of people of all age take pleasure in a hobby…(age改为ages,因谈到不止一个人的年龄,age用复数;of all ages指各个年龄阶段的人(浙江卷)(21)She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when…(homeworks改为homework,因它是不可数名词,没有复数形式)(福建卷)
(22)Without enough knowledges,?? you can never teach well. (knowledges改为knowledge,因knowledge是不可数名词,没有复数形式)(湖北卷)
(23)I stay here for one and a half hour and……(hour 改为hours )
(24)The second man pointed his glass and asked if the angel could cure his poor eyesight.(将glass改为glasses.此处指的是眼镜)
(25)Some of his friends go to see him every day ,who take him lots of good book and some fruit.(将book 改为books)
(26) I would like to stay there for a month, visiting place of interest…(把place 改为places)
(27)I had many wonderful experience ,but I also had a bad one .(吧experience 改为experiences ,次处指经历)
三、模拟单句演练
(1)Women live longer than men in most country.
(2)The film is very interesting. I have seen it many time.
(3)It‘s said that all the ticket have been sold out.
(4)The children spend a lot of times watching TV.
(5)I met a lot of interesting peoples on holiday.
(6)The flower in the park were all pleasing.
(7)As the day went by,she became less anxious.
(8)Computer are becoming more and more popular in the country.
(9)It‘s one of the most interesting book that I’ve ever read.
(10)He made his first time visit to China when he was 18.
(11)Hearing the news,the woman burst into tear.
(12)He hasn‘t lived here long,but he has a great many friend here.
(13)I was afraid she would have left for family when I got there.
(14)He‘s getting married next month and decides to buy some furnitures.
(15)There‘s a paper’s factory near our school.
「参考答案」
(1)country 改为countries,因其前的most 意为“大多数”。
(2)time 改为times,many times 意为“许多次”。
(3)ticket 改为tickets,因它是可数名词,且受all the 的修饰。
(4)times 改为time,因time 表示“时间”时不可数。
(5)peoples 改为people,因people 表示“人们”,本身是复数,其后不能再加词尾-s.(注:复数的peoples 表示不同的民族)
(6)flower 改为flowers,因为其后的谓语为复数。
(7)day 改为days,句意为“随着时间的推移,她变得不那么焦急了”,此处的day 应用复数。
(8)computer 改为computers,根据句意和其后的谓语are,可知computer 要用复数。
(9)book 改为books,因one of 后表示范围的名词要用复数。
(10)去掉time,his first visit 即为他第一次访问,其中已包含“次”的概念。
(11)tear 改为tears,因tear 为可数名词,不要误认为它是不可数名词。
(12)friend 改为friends,因a great many 后要接复数名词。
(13)family 改为home,leave for home 意为“动身回家”。
(14)furnitures 改为furniutre,因它是不可数名词。
(15)paper‘s 改为paper 名词的所有格表示的是所属关系,即所有权,而这里指的是造纸厂而不是“纸的厂"
短文改错考点解析:从句
一、考点规律分析
短文改错对从句引金太阳新课标资源网导词的考查主要涉及根据句意正确选用引导词、引导词的误加与漏用、将不是从句的东西误认为是从句而误加引导词等。
二、真题单句归纳
(1)In the last five years that they‘ve climbed churches,high buildings and television towers. (去掉that,因此处的in the last five years 为时间状语,其后无需用that)(全国卷)
(2)Charles said,“As soon I see a really tall building,I want to climb it.(I 前加as,因为as soon as 为引导时间状语从句的引导词)(全国卷)
(3)Most people can quickly get help from a doctor or go to a hospital since they are ill. (since 改为when / if / whenever.从句意上看此处用since 讲不通,改为if / when / whenever 均可)(全国卷)
(4)However,there are still some countries there people have shorter lives. (there 改为where,where 在此引导定语从句)(全国卷)
(5)…in other places where you are limited to a certain number,of which some may be novels. (去掉where,in other places 在此为地点状语)(全国卷)
(6)…in other places you are limited to a certain number,of that some may be novels. (that 改为which,因介词后要用which 来引导定语从句)(全国卷)
(7)…and whether you pay the cost of sending a postcard,the librarian will write to you. (whether 改为if,表示“如果”时,不能用whether)(全国卷)
(8)I also enjoyed the evenings when we spent together. (去掉when 或将when 改为that,因这里的定语从句中谓语动词(spent)缺宾语,故只能用关系代词that或将其省略)(全国卷)
(9)I live in Beijing,where is the capital of China. (where 改为which,因此处要填关系代词作主语)(全国卷)
(10)…but it didn‘t matter that I would win or not. (that 改为whether,whether 与or not 搭配,表示“是否”)(全国卷)
(11)I felt so nervous as I shook like a leaf. (as 改为that,so…that…为固定句式,其中的that 引导结果状语从句)(全国卷)
(12)In one class,I learned it rained. (it 前加why,why 在此表原因)(北京春
季卷)
(13)For example,when he bought a chocolate cake,he put it in a secret place where I couldn‘t find. (where 改为that / which,或去掉where,I couldn’t find 为修饰place 的定语从句,其前用关系代词,也可省略)(北京春季卷)
(14)It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain. (we 前加when,时间状语从句缺少连词引导)(全国卷)
(15)Besides,I have few friends,I don‘t know that they don’t like to talk with me. (that 改为why,why 引导宾语从句,表示原因)(年全国卷)
(16)I have a good friend who‘s name is Liu Mei. (who’s 改为whose,因who‘s=who is,不仅结构错误,而且意思也不通;whose 引导定语从句,表示“……的”)(福建卷)(17)It has been five years when we graduated,but those memories are as sweet as ever before. (when 改为since,It is / has been +时间段+since(谓语动词是短暂性动词)是固定句型,意为“自……以来有多久了”)(年天津卷)
三、模拟单句演练
(1)He is the man his car was stolen.
(2)That‘s the hotel which we were staying last summer.
(3)That‘s the palace where we visited last summer.
(4)I suddenly woke up in mid-night. And it was a long time I got to sleep again.
(5)In the past few years when we‘ve planted thousands of trees along the river.
(6)At the airport where all the baggage must be examined.
(7)He wrote me a letter and asked I was getting on.
(8)She stayed in France for 10 years. That‘s she spoke French so well.
(9)It‘s really a beautiful place,where everyone hopes to visit.
(10)It cost nothing. Anyone can get it unless he likes it.
「参考答案」
(1)his 改为whose,whose 在此引导定语从句。
(2)which 改为where,where引导定语从句且在从句中用作状语;此题还可在staying 后加in.
(3)where 改为which / that,也可去掉where,因visit为及物动词,此处应用关系代词作其宾语(也可省略)。
(4)第二个I 前加before,此句意为“过了好久我才又睡着”。
(5)去掉when,否则全句没有主语。
(6)去掉where,否则全句没有主语。
(7)asked 后加how,否则句意不通。
(8)That‘s 后加why,否则句意不通。
(9)where 改为which,which 在此引导非限定性定语从句,且在从句中用作宾语(用作visit 的宾语)。
(10)unless 改为if,否则句意不通。
短文改错考点类析:并列连词
一、考点规律分析
短文改错对并列连词的考查主要涉及and,but,or,so 等几个表示并列、转折、选择、因果等关系的词语。
严格说来,这类错误主要属于行文逻辑的错误。
二、真题单句归纳
(1)We tried to fix it and there was nothing we could do. (and 改为but,因此处语意
转折)(全国卷)
(2)I told Mother,Father,Sister,all my friends here what a great time I had. (all 前加and,表示并列关系)(全国卷)
(3)It is a very important exam but I can‘t afford to fail it. (but 改为and / so,此处表因果关系,并非转折关系)(北京春季卷)
(4)She was smiling but nodding at me. (but 改为and,因此处并无转折之意)(全国卷)
(5)It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest. (and 改为or,a visitor 和a guest 应是选择关系,意思是“好像我的父母亲把我当作一个来访者或一个客人”)
(6)The food was expensive and the service was good. (and 改为but,此处意义发生转折)(全国卷)
(7)I‘m the captain of our school team so with my fellow players we’ve won several games. (so 改为and,表并列关系)(安徽春季卷)
(8)My grandma was the best cook in the world but could make the most delicious dishes.(but 改为and,此处表示并列,而不是转折)(江苏卷)
(9)So once you‘ve started collecting seriously,you…(So 改为But,因为前后是转折关系)(年浙江卷)
(10)Clever as she is,but she works very hard. (去掉but,因前面已有引导让步状语从句的连词as(=though 虽然),千万不要受汉语句式“虽然……但是……”的影响,而重复用连词)(福建卷)
(11)I teach them,play with them,but watch them growing up.(but 改为and,因为teach / play 与watch 是并列关系,而不是转折关系)(湖北卷)
三、模拟单句演练
(1)Do you want a bath at once,and shall I have mine first?
(2)Are you going to clean your car before and after supper?
(3)Hurry up,and you‘ll be late for school.
(4)She never said she was rich,and she was.
(5)Mr Smith worked very hard so without any success.
(6)Everyone asked me to go,but I went.
「参考答案」
(1)and 改为or,or 在此表选择。
(2)and 改为or,or 在此表选择。
(3)and 改为or,or 在此表示“要不然”、“否则”。
(4)and 改为but,but 在此表示转折。
句中的she was 为she was rich 之省略。
(5)so 改为but,此处语意转折。
(6)but 改为so,so 在此表示因果关系
短文改错考点解析:非谓语动词
一、考点规律分析
短文改错对非谓语动词的考查主要涉及不定式符号to 的有无,介词后该使用动词的什么形式(用动名词),并列结金太阳新课标资源网构中几个非谓语动词是否一致,动词用作主语时用何种形式(可用动名词或不定式,但不能用动词原形),-用---ing还是----ed分词作状语,定语和表语
二、真题单句归纳
(1)David and I wanted go off to find help but Bill insisted on staying near the car.
(wanted 后加to,因为want 后要接不定式)(全国卷)
(2)…rather than go into the forest and getting lost. (getting 改get,因为get 与其前的go 并列)(全国卷)
(3)David pointed to a path which he thought would probably leading to a village. (leading 改为lead,因为其前有助动词would)(全国卷)
(4)I went back to get David and helped him to stood up. (stood 改为stand,因为to stand up 在此为不定式结构)(全国卷)
(5)Charles and Linda Mason do all of these things as well as climbed building. (climbed 改为climb / climbing,若将as well as 视为连词,则将climbed 改为climb,因为它与其前的do 并列;若将as well as 视为介词,则climbing,因为介词后动词用动名词)(全国卷)
(6)Modern people know more about health,have better food,and to live in clearer surroundings. (去掉live 前的to,因为live 与其前的know,have 并列)(全国卷)(7)The World Health Organization and?? other organizations are working improve health all over the?? world. (improve前加to,to improve…为表目的的不定式短语)(全国卷)(8)…you pay the cost of send a postcard,the librarian will write to you. (send改为sending,因为介词后接动名词作宾语)(全国卷)
(9)…and let you to know when the book you want has returned (去掉know 前的to,因为其前有动词let)(全国卷)
(10)I want to thank you again for have me in your home for the summer holidays. (have 改为having,因为介词后接动名词作宾语)(全国卷)
(11)I had always wanted return to the village after moving away. (return前加to,因为want 后要接不定式)(全国卷)
(12)It was very kind of them to meet me at the railway station and drove me to their home. (drove改为drive,因为drive 与其前的to meet 并列,此处的drive 为省略to 的不定式)(全国卷)
(13)I look forward to hear from you soon. (hear改为hearing,因为其前的to 是介词)(全国卷)
(14)Play football not only makes us grow up tall and strong but also gives us a sense of fair play and team spirit. (第一个play改为playing,因为动词原形不能用作主语)(全国卷)
(15)I was often a little tired after a day‘s work and watch TV demands very little effort. (watch改为watching,因为动词原形不能用作主语)(全国卷)
(16)I‘d like very much come but I have an examination on Monday morning. (come 前加to,因为would like 后接不定式)(北京春季卷)
(17)I‘ll spend the whole weekend reading and prepare for it. (prepare 改为preparing,因为它与其前的reading 并列,与其前所用的动词spend 有关)(北京春季卷)(18)But then there is always more mysteries look into. (look 前加to,此处为不定式作后置定语)(北京春季卷)
(19)After learn the basics of the subject,nothing else seemed very practical to me. (learn 改为learning,因为介词后接动名词作宾语)(北京春季卷)
(20)My parents love me dearly of course and will do all they can make sure that I get a good education. (make 前加to,因为to make…在此用作目的状语,注意句型do all one can to do sth)(全国卷)
(21)He did not want share things with other people. (want 后加to,因为want 后要接不定式)(北京春季卷)
(22)That is,a game of tennis making him very busy. (making 改为made,因为缺谓语,不能用非谓语形式,根据上下文用一般过去时)(北京春季卷)
(23)As we climbed the mountain,we fed monkeys,visiting temples and told stories. (visiting 改为visited,因为它与其前的fed 和其后的told 并列)(全国卷)(24)But his parents think go to college is more important than playing sports. (go 改为going,因为动词原形不能用作主语)(安徽春季卷)
(25)…children may not develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves. (read 改为reading,因为介词后要接动名词)(年北京春季卷)
(26)…to make children to want things that they don‘t really need.(去掉want 前的to,因为want…在此用作使役动词make 的宾语补足语)(年北京春季卷)(27)Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express myself in simple English. (talk 改为talking,因为动词enjoy 后要接动名词作宾语)(全国卷)(28)Shake her head,she said,“It isn‘t a good time to do that,dear.”(Shake 改为Shaking,现在分词表伴随)(江苏卷)
(29)It‘s like going to a huge library without have to walk around to find your books. (have 改为having,介词后用动名词作宾语)(广西卷)
(30)I am thinking of making a trip to London,and visit the British Museum and some parks. (visit 改为visiting,因visit与making并列,作介词of的宾语)(四川卷)(31)I have some records giving to me as birthday gifts.(giving 改为given,“把某物给某人”是give sth to sb;句中records与give是被动关系,故用过去分词)(32)I dream of standing on the platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys and girls. (give改为giving,因它与standing并列,作dream of的宾语)
三、模拟单句演练
(1)In those days we were forced work twelve hours a day.
(2)It‘s very difficult for a foreigner learn Chinese.
(3)It was silly of you believe what he said.
(4)He was made wash the boss‘s car once a day.
(5)I‘ll let you to know as soon as I hear from her.
(6)I waved to her but failed attract her attention.
(7)I have already seen the film twice. I don‘t want see it any more.
(8)What I want know is when all this happened.
(9)It was clear that he wanted be alone.
(10)Most children are interested in listen to stories.
(11)Walk quickly is difficult for an old man.
(13)Be careful in cross the street.
(14)The film is very interesting. It is worth see twice.
(15)Find work is very difficult these days.
(16)Most of us students enjoy ask questions in English.
(17)Look,some of my classmates are practising speak English over there.
(18)Teach a child to sing and dance is very interesting.
(19)Learn to speak English is more difficult than to write it.
(20)My friend Jim is very good at making things and repair things.
(21)He decided to go to the south,find a good job and living there.
(22)It was very kind of you to buy us some much fruit and seeing us at the station.
(23)Excuse me,would you to tell me the way to the zoo?
「参考答案」
(1)work 前加to,此句为force sb to do sth 的被动形式。
(2)learn 前加to,此句用的是it‘s difficult for sb to do sth 句型。
(3)believe 前加to,此句用的是it‘s silly of sb to do sth 句型。
(4)wash 前加to,make sb do sth 中的do 不能带to,但若make 用于被动语态,则其后的do 要带to.
(5)去掉to,因为let 后用作宾语补足语的不定式不能带to.
(6)attract 前加to,fail to do sth 意为“未能做某事”。
(7)see 前加to,want(想要)后接动词要用不定式。
(8)know 前加to,want(想要)后接动词要用不定式。
(9)be 前加to,want(想要)后接动词要用不定式。
(10)listen 改为listening,介词后接动名词作宾语。
(12)Walk 改为Walking,用作主语要用动名词,不用动词原形。
注意不能将walk 视为名词,因为其后有副词修饰语quickly.
(13)cross 改为crossing,介词后接动名词作宾语。
(14)see 改为seeing,worth 后接动词要用动名词形式。
(15)Find 改为Finding,用作主语要用动名词,不用动词原形。
(16)ask 改为asking,enjoy 后接动词作宾语要用动名词形式。
(17)speak 改为speaking,practise 后接动词作宾语要用动名词形式。
(18)Teach 改为Teaching,用作主语要用动名词,不用动词原形。
(19)Learn 改为Learning,用作主语要用动名词,不用动词原形。
(20)repair 改为repairing,因它与making 并列,一起用作介词at 的宾语。
(21)living 改为live,因它与其前的go to…,find…并列。
(22)seeing 改为see,因它与to buy 并列,see 为省略to 的不定式。
(23)去掉tell 前的to,因would you…后应接动词原形,不接不定式
短文改错考点解析:缺词
一、考点规律分析
与多词错误的情形相似,缺词也主要涉及英语中一些“小”词,如冠词、介词、不定式符号、人称代词、动词be等。
具体说来,漏词错误可能涉及的问题有:不及物动词后接宾语时漏加必要的介词,在该金太阳新课标资源网带不定式符号to的地方漏加to,在单数可数名词表示泛指意义时漏加必要的限定词(尤其是漏加不定冠词),漏掉表特指的定冠词,漏掉被动语态中的助动词be,漏加系表结构中的连系动词be,漏加一些常用结构或表达中的介词(如漏掉a lot of 中的of,漏掉because of 中的of,漏掉instead of 中的of等),漏掉某些从句的“引导词”(通常会导致意义不通),漏掉形式宾语it
二、真题单句归纳
(1)When we walked to the car,Bill smiled and shook head. (head 前加his,汉语可“摇头”,而按英语的习惯要说shake one‘s head)(全国卷)
(2)When I have free time I go a long walk. (go 后加for,go for a walk 是习语)(全国卷)
(3)Charles said,“As soon I see a realy tall building,I want to climb it.(第一个I 前加as,因为as soon as 为引导时间状语从句的引导词)(全国卷)
(4)Good health is person‘s most valuable possession. (person’s 前加a,这里的a 表泛指)(全国卷)
(5)The World Health Organization and?? other organizations are working improve health all over the world. (improve前加to,to improve…为表目的的不定式短语)(全国卷)(6)There is public library in every town in Britain. (public library 前加a,因这里的public library 是单数可数名词表泛指,故在其前用a)(全国卷)
(7)In some places you may borrow many books as you want. (many 之前加as,因此处为as ……as 结构)(全国卷)
(8)…and let you know when the book you want has returned. (returned 之前加been,因从句意上看,此处用被动语态)(全国卷)
(9)I had always wanted return to the village after moving away. (return前加to,因为want 后要接不定式)(全国卷)
(10)I told Mother,Father,Sister,all my friends here what a great time I had. (all 前加and,表示并列关系)(全国卷)
(11)They eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of questions. (eager 前加were,因此处缺谓语动词)(全国卷)
(12)I‘d like to your pen-friend,and get to know more about your country. (to 后加be / become,因would like 后接不定式,根据句意此处应补be / become)(全国卷)(13)What your favourite sport?(what 后加is 或将What 改为What‘s,此句缺谓语)(全国卷)
(14)We must keep in mind that we play for the team instead ourselves. (instead 后加of,instead of 为复合介词,在此表示“而不是”)(全国卷)
(15)Each player must obey captain,who is the leader of the team. (captain 前加冠词the,captain 为特指)(全国卷)
(16)I was happy with any programme but the others spent a lot time arguing…(a lot 后加of,因 a lot 不能直接修饰名词)(全国卷)
(17)I‘ll take this chance to wish you wonderful time on your birthday. (wonderful 前加a,该表达与have a good time 类似,其中的a 不可省)(北京春季卷)(18)I‘d like very much come but I had an examination on Monday morning. (come 前加to,因为would like 后接不定式)(北京春季卷)
(19)The day before the speech contest(比赛)English teacher talked to me. (English 前加my,teacher 为单数可数名词,前面要限定词)(全国卷)
(20)In one class,I learned it rained.(it 前加why,why 在此表原因)(北京春季卷)
(21)But then there is always more mysteries look into. (look 前加to,此处为不定式作后置定语)(北京春季卷)
(22)My parents love me dearly of course and will do all they can make sure that I get a good education. (make 前加to,因为to make…在此用作目的状语,注意句型do all one can to do sth)(全国卷)
(23)As everyone knows,it‘s famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals.(在famous 前加a,注意mountain 是单数可数名词)(全国卷)
(24)It was about noon we arrived at the foot of the mountain. (we 前加when,时间状语从句缺少连词引导)(全国卷)
(25)There will an important game next month. (will 后加be,此处缺谓语动词)(安
徽春季卷)
(26)Because so much viewing,children may not develop the habit of reading and the ability to enjoy themselves. (Because 后加of,因so much viewing 相当于名词)(北京春季卷)
(27)One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. (showed 后加it,showed 在此作及物动词,后面缺少宾语)(全国卷)
(28)When I was boy,the most exciting thing was to celebrate the Spring Festival. (boy 前加a,因boy 为可数名词)(江苏卷)
(29)You can find all kinds information in just a few minutes on the Internet. (kinds 后加of.all kinds of 意为“各种各样的”)(广西卷)
(30)…discover an interest which can even last lifetime. (lifetime 前加a,指人的一生是a lifetime)(浙江卷)
(31)She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbor‘s house. (look 前加to.因为“停下来去做某事”是stop to do sth,不定式作目的状语)(福建卷)
(32)Ten minutes later,the firemen came and put out fire. (fire 前加the,因这是特指的一场火灾)(福建卷)
(33)As we all left homeat early age,we met lots of problems in our daily life…(early 前加an,at an early age 意为“在年幼时”)(天津卷)
(34)I often dream of a teacher. (a teacher 前加上being 或becoming,根据后文的内容看来,作者不是梦见老师,而是自己梦想“成为”一名教师)(湖北卷)
短文改错考点解析:形容词与副词
一、考点规律分析
短文改错对形容词与副词的考查主要涉及形容词和副词比较等级的误用(尤其是在本身已是比较级的词前误金太阳新课标资源网加more)、形容词与副词的混用(如修饰动词时误用形容词或修饰名词时误用副词)等,另外,用作表语时该用形容词的却误用了名词、简短副词(如in,down 等)的误加与漏用、涉及形容词搭配的as…as 结构、how 与what 的混用等也是常考的考点。
二、真题单句归纳
(1)After an hour or so we began to feel very frightening. (frightening 改为frightened,因它表示某人感到害怕,而不是令人害怕)(全国卷)
(2)Charles said,“As soon as I see a realy tall building,I want to climb it. (realy 改为really 或real,若改为really,则修饰tall;若改为real,则修饰building)(全国卷)(3)Last Sunday,police cars hurry to the taller building in New York. (taller 改为tallest,因从含义上看此处应是最高级)(全国卷)
(4)As a result,people in the modern world generally live much more longer than people in the past. (去掉more,因为longer 本身已是比较级,不能再受more 修饰)(全国卷)(5)Therefore,there are still some countries where people have shorter lives. (Therefore 改为However,因此处语意转折)(全国卷)
(6)People in industrial countries can expect to live for twice so long as people who lived a few hundred years ago. (so long as 改为as long as,其意为“与……一样长”)(全国卷)(7)In some places you may borrow many books as you want. (many 之前加as,因as ……as 结构不完整)(全国卷)
(8)I told Mother,Father,Sister and all my friends here that a great time I had. (that
改为what)(全国卷)
(9)I never knew a ride down a river could be so much exciting. (去掉much,因much 不能用来修饰形容词的原级,尽管它可用来修饰比较级和最高级)(全国卷)(10)I‘m sure we’ll have a wonderfully time together. (wonderfully 改为wonderful,因它是放在名词前作定语)(全国卷)
(11)First,let me tell you something more about myself. (去掉more,因从上下文看,这是第一次给对方写信,不存在谈谈“更多情况”的问题)(全国卷)
(12)I used to play ping-pong a lot in my spare time,but now I am interesting in football. (interesting 改为interested,be interested in 意为“对……感兴趣”)(全国卷)(13)Also,the sport teaches us the important of obedience. (important 改为importance,teach 后可接名词或代词作宾语,但不接形容词作宾语)(全国卷)(14)Unfortunate,there are too many people in my family. (Unfortunate 改为Unfortunately,因此处要求用副词作状语)(全国卷)
(15)I think I liked those classes because I felt that they helped me understand what the world works. (what 改为how,how 在此表示方式)(北京春季卷)
(16)After learning the basics of the subject,?? nothing else seemed very practically to me. (practically 改为practical,此处用形容词作表语)(北京春季卷)
(17)Whenever I see them I will often think of my English teacher. (去掉often,因句中的whenever 与often 意义重复)(全国卷)
(18)What things are in other homes,I wonder. (What 改为How,句意为“不知其他家庭的情况是怎样的”)(全国卷)
(19)For instance,one night he played strong and loudly music till four o‘clock in the morning. (loudly 改为loud,与strong 并列作定语,修饰music)(北京春季卷)(20)But he is difference now. (difference改为different,即用形容词作表语)(北京春季卷)
(21)The time passes quickly. Evening came down. (去掉down,要表示“夜幕来临”,直接说Evening came 即可)(全国卷)
(22)…although radios can be very noise. (noise 改为noisy,即用形容词作表语)(北京春季卷)
(23)…all planned and written by grown-ups to make children want things that they don‘t real need. (real 改为really,修饰动词要用副词)(北京春季卷)
(24)But one of the best players in our team told me just then that he wouldn‘t play basketball any more. (then 改为now,just now 为习语,意为“刚才”)(安徽春季卷)(25)But one of the best players in our team told me just now that he wouldn‘t play basketball once more. (once 改为any,not …any more为习语,意为“不再”)(安徽春季卷)
(26)I would describe myself as shy and quietly. (quietly 改为quiet,and连接并列成分quite和shy)(全国卷)
(27)Finding information on the Net is easily. (easily改为easy,作表语要用形容词)(年广西卷)
(28)Yes,a concert can be very excited. (excited改为exciting,表示某事物是“令人兴奋的”用exciting;表示某人“感到兴奋”才用excited)(四川卷)(30)Nowadays millions of people of all age take pleasure in a hobby which is both interested and fun. (interested 改为interesting,指某事物是“令人有趣的”,用interesting,。