培优点十八短文改错
一、真题在线
Passage 1（2019·全国新课标I卷·短文改错）
I became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoon where I was in primary school, I was walking by the school playground. Suddenly football feel just in front of me but almost hit me. I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground. To everyone’s surprising, the ball went into the net. All the football player on the playground cheered loudly, say that I had a talent for football. From now on, I started to play my football with classmates after school. I am a good player now.
Passage 2（2019·全国新课标II卷·短文改错）
Since I was a kid, I’ve considered different job I would like to do. First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered mg goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.
二、对点专练
Passage 1
Dear Joes,
I am more than delighted to sincere invite you to be a judge for a speech contest. I hope you can agree to come. For your reference, I will share with you the details as follow. First of all, this contest focuses on Man and Nature, that is scheduled to start at 2 p.m. and ends at 4 p.m. next week in Classroom 301. Ten players will attend the contest, give their prepared speeches. In my opinion, not only can you provide us with our professional judgment, but also you can enjoy scenery around our school. You will surely have a good time in this beautiful spring day.
I'll be very much grateful if you can accept my invitations. I am looking forward to you arrival.
Yours
Jenny
Passage 2
It was a rain and cold night. I finish my evening classes and was about to go back to my house I got into a taxi and told the driver my destination. To my surprise, the driver made an apology, says he didn't know the way. What come a taxi driver didn't know the way? I was a little of angry. At the moment, an old couple stopped our car. Their
destination was the same as me, so he let them in. The two greeted us but the grandpa told the driver the way. From their conversation I knew the driver was a fanner and he had become a taxi driver just for three days.
I'm also new to Chengdu. Sometimes I make direction mistakes, but there is always someone can help me. It was cold outside, but I felt real warm.
培优点十八短文改错
一、真题在线
Passage 1（2019·全国新课标I卷·短文改错）
【答案】
第一处：第一句，interesting改为interested
第二处：第二句，where改为when
第三处：第三句，football前面加上a
第四处：第三句，but改为and
第五处：第四句，hardly改为hard
第六处：第五句，surprising改为surprise
第七处：第六句，player改为players
第八处：第六句，say改为saying
第九处：第七句，now改为then
第十处：第七句，去掉my
【文章大意】这是一篇记叙文。作者讲述了由于一次偶然的经历，自己喜欢上了踢足球。从此成了一名优秀球员。
【解析】
第一处：考查形容词用法。“interest（使感兴趣；使关注）”的形容词有interesting（使人感兴趣的）常修饰物；与interested（表现出兴趣的）常修饰人。本句的意思为：多亏一个偶然的事件，我对踢足球产生了兴
趣。主语是I，故将interesting改为interested。
第二处：考查定语从句。先行词one afternoon表示时间在定语从句中作状语，所以关系词使用when。故将where改为when。
第三处：考查冠词。名词football为可数名词，前边需要有限定词。这里football第一次出现，故在football 前加a。
第四处：考查连词。句意：突然一个足球落在我前边并且差点打到我。“足球落下来”与“打到我”两个动作是顺承关系，不是转折关系。故将but改为and。
第五处：考查副词。“hard（努力地；费力地）”与“hardly（几乎不；几乎没有）”都为副词，但是词义不同。本句意思为：我挡住足球，并使劲地将它踢回操场。故将hardly改为hard。
第六处：考查固定搭配。“to one’s + 名词”在句中表示结果，“to one’s surprise”意思为“使某人惊讶的是…”。故将surprising改为surprise。
第七处：考查名词的数。“player（运动员）”为可数名词，所以all（所有的）后需要用player的复数形式。故将player改为players。
第八处：考查现在分词。本句句意：操场上所有的足球运动员大声欢呼，说我有足球天赋。句中谓语动词为cheered，say在这里作伴随状语。与主语players是主动关系，故将say改为saying。
第九处：考查固定搭配。句意：从那时开始，我放学后跟同学一起踢足球。且“from now on（从现在开始）”后边句子应该表示从现在开始所发生动作或存在的情况，不能用一般过去时。此处后面是一般过去时，表示“从那时起”是from then on，故将now改为then。
第十处：考查固定搭配。“踢足球”的英语表达为“play football”，中间不能加冠词或者代词。故将my去掉。
Passage 2（2019·全国新课标II卷·短文改错）
【答案】
第一处：第一句，job改为jobs
第二处：第二句，coolly改为cool
第三处：第三句，five改为fifth
第四处：第三句，too改为very/so
第五处：第四句，chemistry后面加上in/at
第六处：第四句，or改为and
第七处：第五句，They改为There
第八处：第六句，amazing改为amazed
第九处：第六句，去掉more
第十处：第七句，is改为was
【文章大意】这是一篇记叙文。作者讲述了从小到大自己的职业梦想随着求学经历不断改变的过程。【解析】
第一处：考查名词的数。“job（工作；职业）”为可数名词，用different（不同的）修饰时意思为不同种类的工作，应该用名词的复数形式。故将job改为jobs。
第二处：考查形容词的用法。句中的“looked（看起来…样）”为系动词，系动词后需用形容词作表语。故将coolly改为cool。
第三处：考查序数词。年级、班级是按数字顺序排列的，所以“在几年级”中的数词需要用序数词。故将five 改为fifth。
第四处：考查副词。句意：在五年级的时候，因为我非常喜欢我的英语老师，所以我想变成一名老师。“so much”在句中一般表达肯定意思，可与that连用表示“如此…以至于”。而“too much”表太多，一般与to搭配，表达否定意思“太…以至于不能…”。本句话表达肯定意思，非常so much或very much，故将too改为very/so。第五处：考查介词。“在高中”需要用介词in或者at，故在high school前加in/at。
第六处：考查连词。句意：在高中学化学的时候，我重新考虑了自己的目标并决定变成一名医生。“重新考虑”与“决定变成一名医生”之间是顺承关系，不是选择关系。故将or改为and。
第七处：考查there be句型。句意：有两个原因可以解释这个决定。句中的they在前边句中找不到指代关系，且后边句子中的one与the other是对这两个原因的解释。故将they改为there。
第八处：考查形容词用法。“amaze（使惊奇；使惊愕）”形容词形式有amazed（大为惊奇）与amazing（令人大为惊奇的）。本句话中主语为I，句意:病人看完医生就会感觉好很多，对此我感到惊奇，而不是我令别人惊奇。故将amazing改为amazed。
第九处：考查形容词比较级。句中better为well（健康；身体好）的比较级形式，多音节的形容词或副词构成比较级用more 加形容词或副词，即more不能与better连用。故将more去掉。
第十处：考查一般过去时。本篇文章使用的全是一般过去时，且与最后一句并列的“one was that…”用的也是一般过去时，所以最后一句话时态应为一般过去时。讲述当时做决定时的原因。故将is改为was。
二、对点专练
Passage 1
【答案】
第一处：第一句，sincere改为sincerely
第二处：第三句，follow改为follows
第三处：第四句，that改为which
第四处：第四句，ends改为end
第五处：第五句，give改为giving
第六处：第六句，our改为your/the
第七处：第六句，enjoy后加the
第八处：第七句，in改为on
第九处：第八句，much去掉
第十处：第八句，invitations改为invitation
【文章大意】这是一篇邀请信。作者邀请Joes来演讲比赛做评委，并与Joes分享了这次演讲比赛的一些细节信息。
【解析】
第一处：考查副词。原句中的sincere直接修饰动词invite，应该用副词形式。故将sincere改为sincerely。
第二处：考查固定搭配。“as follows”是一个习语，意思是：如下。通常放在句末。故将follow改为follows。
第三处：考查定语从句。句意：首先，这场竞赛是关于人与自然的，安排在下午两点开始四点结束。从翻译以及that前逗号可知这是一个非限制性定语从句，先行词为this contest，故将that改为which。
第四处：考查不定式。此句中“and”前后是两个并列的动作，一个是竞赛开始时间，一个是竞赛结束时间，句式结构相同，都是be scheduled to do sth.，前后都是不定式时省略第二个to，故将ends改为end。
第五处：考查现在分词。句意：十个选手会参加竞赛，他们会分别展示他们提前准备好的演讲。这个句子中will attend是谓语动词，give就需要变为非谓语动词。又因为the players与give speech是主动关系，故将give改为giving。
第六处：考查物主代词。句意：我认为，你不仅可以提供给我们你专业的评价，还可以欣赏一下我们学校周边的风景。这里专业的评价是老师提供的，物主代词应与指代老师的第二人称you一致，故将our改为your 或者the。
第七处：考查定冠词。欣赏学校周边的风景，这里的风景是特指关系，故在enjoy后加the。
第八处：考查介词。“在具体某一天”用介词on。故将in改为on。
第九处：考查副词。句意：如果你能接受我的邀请我会非常感激。“grateful”是形容词原级形式，而much是用来修饰形容词或副词比较级的。故将much去掉。
第十处：考查名词的数。句意：如果你能接受我的邀请我会非常感激。我邀请老师来做评审员是一个邀请，不需要用名词复数形式。故将invitations改为invitation。
Passage 2
【答案】
第一处：第一句，rain改为rainy
第二处：第二句，finish改为finished
第三处：第三句，says改为saying
第四处：第四句，What改为How
第五处：第五句，删除of
第六处：第七句，me改为mine
第七处：第八句，but改为and
第八处：第九句，become改为been
第九处：第十一句，在someone后加who
第十处：第十二句，real改为really
【文章大意】本文是记叙文，叙述了作者在一个寒冷下雨的晚上，上了一辆出租车，结果司机不认识路，作者感到不愉快，这时，有一对老夫妻也上了同一辆车，这位老人告诉了司机路线，原来这位司机三天前才开始工作。
【解析】
第一处：考查形容词。句意：那是个寒冷的雨夜。and后是形容词cold，修饰后面的名词，所以and前后都应该用形容词，rain是名词，rainy形容词。故答案为：rain改为rainy。
第二处：考查动词时态。句意：我上完了课。and was about to go back可知，and后用的一般过去时，and前也是叙述的过去的事，所以finish也用一般过去时。故答案为：finish改为finished。
第三处：考查非谓语动词。句意：令我惊讶的是，司机道歉说他不认识路。句子没有连词，已经有谓语动词made，所以says应该变为非谓语动词，句子的主语the driver与say之间是主动关系，所以应该用saying，
故答案为：says改为saying。
第四处：考查名词。句意：出租车司机怎么会不认识路呢？句式：How come是固定搭配,意为：怎么会?怎么回事?怎么搞的?它和Why一样,可以用来引导一个问句。所不同的是，如果用How come来提问,就表示你觉得某件事很奇怪,有点想不通；并且以How come开头的问句使用的仍是陈述句的语序。如：How come you didn't tell me earlier? (=Why didn't you tell me earlier?)你怎么不早点儿告诉我?另外，以How come开头的问句有时也可说成：How comes it (about) that? / How is it that?如：How comes it that you're so late?(=How is it that you're so late?)你为什么来得这么迟?故答案为：What改为How。
第五处：考查短语。句意：我有点生气。a little修饰形容词angry。故答案为：删除of。
第六处：考查代词。句意：他们的目的地和我的一样，所以他让他们上车了。The same as相比较的对象应该是同类的，应该是他们的目的地与我的目的地相比，me指人，mine=my destination。故答案为：me改为mine。
第七处：考查连词。句意：两个人向我们打招呼，爷爷给司机指路。这里前后句是并列关系，不是转折关系。故答案为：but改为and。
第八处：考查动词。句意：他刚当了三天的出租车司机。根据时间状语for+时间段，所以谓语动词应该用持续性动词，become是非持续性动词，变成be表示状态的词。时态用现在完成时。故答案为：become改为been。
第九处：考查定语从句关系词。句意：有时我在方向上犯错误，但总有人会帮助我。someone是先行词，指人，缺少定语从句的关系词，关系词在定语从句中作主语，所以不能省略，所以在someone后加关系词who，故答案为：who。
第十处：考查名词。句意：外面很冷，但我觉得很暖和。felt是感官动词，后跟形容词warm，形容词前用副词来修饰，real是形容词，really副词，修饰形容词warm。故答案为：really。
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专题练习一 A (2017·山西省大同市灵丘县模拟) The Art of War is an ancient Chinese military book __1__(date) from the 5th century BC.__2__ (write) by the ancient Chinese military strategist Sun Tzu (“Master Sun”，also spelled Sunzi), the book consists of 13 chapters, each of __3__ is devoted to one aspect of warfare. It is__4__ (common) thought of __5__ a great work on military strategy and tactics(战术). It __6__ (place) at the head of China's Seven Military Classics in 1080 by Emperor Shenzong of the Song Dynasty , __7__ it has long been the most influential strategy text in East Asia. It has had__8__ influence on Eastern and Western military thinking, business tactics, legal strategy and beyond. Its first complete English translation was completed and published by Lionel Giles in 1910. __9__ (leader) such as Mao Zedong, General V o Nguyen Giap, General Douglas MacArthur and so on have drawn__10__ (inspire) from the work. 答案与解析 文章介绍了“孙子兵法”这本中国古代杰出的军事作品，以及对后人的影响。 1．dating考查非谓语动词。此处dating from是现在分词短语作定语，修饰book。 2．Written考查非谓语动词。分析句式可知，write和句子主语the book 之间是被动关系，故用过去分词形式表示被动。 3．which考查关系代词。根据句式可知，此处是一个非限制性
高二英语短文改错练习题（一） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 练习1： Dear Miss Veans, I was wondering that whether you could help us revise a short play adapting from our English textbook. One of the stories we have read interest us a lot. It is about the adventures of three men—a naturalist, his colleague and a sailor, they are captured at sea by Captain Nemo. At board Nemo’s submarine, they take an adventure across the world beneath the ocean, meeting many challenges—huge icebergs, angry sharks and terrified squids. Fortunately, the three men survive. One day the submarine is sucked into a huge maelstrom and the three prisoners made their bid for freedom. In word, it is an exciting story. Could you kindly give us some guidances? First of all, could you check the language for us? Secondly, please give us some advice on our acting. If possibly, could I meet you in your office at 10 a.m. to discuss it with you? We are looking forward to your reply.
高考英语短文改错20篇 1 Have you ever heard from the saying: All work and no 76． play make Jack a dull boy?What this means is that if you 77． study all the times you will become a boring person. You 78． must go out and having fun with your friends, otherwise 79． you will lose him. No one wants to be friends with the 80． person who that only works and studies. Perhaps you have 81． a confidence problem. Please try remember that the work 82． you do is for yourself rather than for anyone else. You do 83． not have to compete your classmates. No one can be 84． happier in studying seven days and seven nights a week. 85． 2 Dear Tracy， Although I'm 1 6 years old，but my father still treats 76. _____ me as a careless children. He doesn’t value my opinions.77. _ _____ He is very strict with me and often punishes me about 78. _ _____ leaving things lying around in the house while he did this 79. _ _____ all time. I think he fails to set an example to me to 80. _ _____ follow. But he often says：“Doing as I say，not as I do.”81. _ _____ Even worse，he points out my past mistakes to guests，82. _ _____ making me feel hurting. I love my father, but I can’t83. _ _____ bear what he does. I have been tried many times 84. _ _____ to talk with he but he never listens. Please, help me. 85. _ _____ Puzzled 3 Every morning Steve went to work by train. As he 76. _____________ has a long trip, he always buys newspaper. It helps 77. _____________ make the time passing more quickly. One Tuesday 78. _____________ morning, he turned over the sports page. He wanted 79. _____________ to see the report about an important football match 80. _____________ the night before. The report was so interesting that he forgot to get off at his station. He did not know it unless 81. _____________ he saw the sea. He got off at the next station, and had to wait 82. _____________ a long time for a train to go back. It was no doubt that he arrived 83. _____________ late at the office. His boss was angry when Sieve told to him 84. _____________ why he was late. “Work is very important than football! ”. 85. _____________
短文改错专练 ①In my family, there are three people. My father is hardworking but goes to work in the field every day. 1. _______ He isn’t good at talk but he gets on well with other 2. _______ people. My mother is very much kind and is 3. _______ friendly to everybody. So when I have the problem 4. _______ I will turn to her for help. My friends say I am clever. 5. _______ When the teacher asks us very difficulty questions, 6. _______ I’ll think quickly and stand to answer. At home my 7. _______ Father often thinks I’m silly. He said if I decide 8. _______ To do something, it takes him much times to stop me. 9. _______ This is how I need to improve in the future. 10. _______ ②Dear Ms. Smith, I appreciate your help very well. On the first day of 1._______ Camp, you came up to myself while I was sitting alone. After 2._______ That, you always gave me specially attention and inspired 3._______ to me to join in activities. As a result, I gradually got to know 4._______ The other campers. Because the help you gave me that summer, 5._______ My life changed. I gained so much confidence that I go back 6._______ To school as new person. My grades improved. I became 7._______ Very active but made new friends. Today, I got a letter that 8._______ Said I had been admitting to a college. I am proud of it. I just 9._______ Want to thank you for helping me becoming a different person. 10._______ Yours, Bob ③Dear John. Last summer I take a part-time job in the International 1.________ Camp for children. I have been told one more worker 2.________ will be needed this year and I think you are fit it. How 3.________ about join as? The camp is at the foot of a small hill 4.________ close to a river. It is so a beautiful place! We can hear 5.________ birds singing happy all around. Everybody sleeps in 6.________ tents, that is very exciting. We usually work only five 7.________ hours a day, so we will have plenty of spare time visit the 8.________ area and have a fun, I am sure it will be an unforgettable 9.________ experience. If you have interests in it, reply to me soon. 10.________ 3.
2020英语专题卷 专题十一：短文改错说明类专练 短文改错（每题1分，共40分） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。 A Chinese Dream is made up of ordinary people dreams. If someone asks me how 考点11 my Chinese dream is, and 考点12 I will answer it without hesitation：to be a good doctor. The reason when 考点10 I want to be a doctor is because考点11 I want to save as many lives that 考点13 I can. If 考点13 I was young, I got seriously injured in a terrible accident. Thanks to the doctors’ efforts, so I was brought back to life. Since then, which考点11 has always encouraged me is to be a good doctor. To make sure of 考点11 my dream can be realized, I have been studying hard so as 考点13 I can be admitted into a good medical college. Only in this way can I achieve my goal. B As we all know, to change the entire world is absolute考点06 impossible. But a number of small change考点04 can make a big difference. Every one has tasks that they fear to doing考点08. Think of a task that your dear one hated考点09, and do it for him or her! You can imagine the pleasure where 考点13 you see your bathroom unexpectedly cleaned. Next, whether your talent is singing, cooking and考点12 giving good advice, share it. You may not think your talent is interesting, but they
高一英语短文改错题练习题三篇 篇一：高一英语短文改错题练习题8篇 1 When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other when fifty. You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle. 2 Today is the happy day in this holiday. Although I was very tired, but I found myself in these busy days. I am afraid of taken a bus usually, the awful smell of the bus drive I mad, make me feel carsick. But today I did feel carsick. I can defeat carsickness finally. At night I went out with an old friend who I ever like him, but all of us were busy in the examination at the high school that we hadn't been together. I was such surprised as I received his calling. At first, I thought we would never meet before we graduated. Thank him gave me a happy day! 3 Dancing is my hobby and otherwise, when I heard there would be a get-together to celebrate the 60th National Day in the evening of October 1st, I signed up for the performance. Luckily, I become a member of the
高二英语短文改错练习 ▲按改错题的正确格式改正下列短文中的错误。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用(\)划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。 2.文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。 改错一 David joined the army when he was eighteen. And for several months he taught how to be a good soldier. He did quite good in everything except shooting. One day he and his friends are practising their shooting, and all of them did well besides David. At last the officer said, “David! You are quite hopeless! Do not waste your bullet. Go behind the wall, and shoot you.” David felt ashamed. He went behind the wall and a few seconds late the officer and the other young soldiers heard a sound of a shot “Heavens!” the officer said, “has t hat silly man really shooted himself?” He ran behind the wall anxio us. But David was all right. “I am sorry, sir,” he said “And I missed again. 改错二 One day we were having English class when Mr Black saw a boy reading a picture-book and said, “Tom , how do you usually do after
1. Three friends and I was driving on a highway. While we were going at least 50 miles per hour, we passed over a car. It had broken down, stopped on the side of the road. My friend slows down, and pulled behind the other car. He got out of the car immediate and before I knew it he was helping the other person push the car down the road to a spot where wasn’t so close to the passing cars. From the way they were pushing the car, it looked as if my friend was pushing them all by himself. I thought my friend help a complete stranger like this was a great thing, but I won’t forget his good nature or character. 2. Dear Brad, I’m very glad to hear from you. In your last letter you ask about the post-80s in China. Actually I am the boy who belongs to this group. Comparing with our parents, life for us is getting much hard. The job market is tough and the house is expensively to afford. Now many girls prefer to marry with a man who owns a house and a car. Therefore, I don’t think love built on house and cars is true love, and I doubt how long it will last. As a matter of fact, though situations are tough today, a lot of we post-80s are making great efforts live a good life. I believe we will have a nice future. Li Hua 3. Good morning, ladies and gentlemen, Some of us are having problems about our parents, as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries. I fully understand why we are comfortable about it, but it is no need to feel too sadly. Our parents are checking in our bags or diaries to make sure we’re not getting into troubles. They have probably heard of some horrible stories about other kids and thinking we might do the same. Or perhaps they just want to connect with us and are doing it all wrong. My suggestion is: Tell them we want them to trust us as many as we’d like to trust them. If you don’t think you can talk to them, write them a letter and leave it lie around --- they are bound to read it. Thank you!
2016高考英语短文改错专练（一） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ）,并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。 Passage 1 Las t Sunday, it was my father’s funny day. After supper, my father went to see the film. But in our surprise, he came back just about half an hour later. I asked him what was the matter. He smiled and told us about the funny thing what had happened in the cinema. He was sitting in his seat while a woman came to her and said the seat was hers. Surprising, they looked at their ticket carefully, only to find the seats shown in their tickets were the same while the colors were different. So they looked at the tickets carefully. After a while, my father apologized to the woman, saying, “Sorry, I make a mistake. Take this seat, please.” The fact was that his ticket found out under the glass on his desk was for the film a month ago. Passage 2 It was my first Mid-Autumn Festival spent with my parents when I was 12. In the early morning, my parents and I went to the park at their car. There were lots of visitors stood in the front of the ticket window. We waited a long time and buy three tickets. In the Tiger Mountain of the park, I was too eager to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my steps through the crowd. Unfortunately, I got separated from my parents. I had hard time looking for him, but I had no luck. Wandering in the park, I felt alone without any companions. Worse still, I had no money, so I had to walk home, covered as much as 5 kilometers. Passage 3 September 15, 2013 Fine One week ago, we finished our mid-exams. Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurt my foot. I was in greatly pain at that moment, but I tried to act as if nothing has happened until the class was over. Though I had difficulty walk back to my classroom, I still didn’t tell anyone but even refused the offer of help of my classmates. As result, the hurt i n my foot became bad. Now I know I’m wrong. We can tell others our need for