写作强化阶段讲义
吴浩George
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学习目标：
1.全面地了解IELTS写作
2.明确IELTS写作的要求
3.了解议论文的分类和主要类型的文章结构
4.掌握一种有效的句子构成法：四步句子速成法
5.了解各种图表作文的特征和各类图表的典型写作句型
6.熟悉各个话题的实用词汇和短语
第一讲：
第一部分：IELTS写作概述
An overview of the IELTS writing test 解决三个问题：
1.What: What is the format of the IELTS writing test?
Components of the writing test: task writing
T ask 1: to write a summary of some graphic or pictorial information.
Data：line chart, pie chart, bar chart, table, mixture
●Facts: flow chart, maps
T ask 2: to produce a written argument on a given topic.
●Opinion:
A/B(option A/option B), A/D(advantages/disadvantages) ●Solution:
Causes, Effects, Solutions
2.Why: Why is the test designed in this way?
The nature and goal of each task
T ask one
T ask two
3.How: How to achieve the writing goal of each task?
The criteria of the writing test
总结：IELTS写作就是用西方的思维方式和地道的英语表达来阐述合理的想法。
第二部分：议论文概述：
1.议论文的分类
1)问题现象类：
问题出现的原因
问题带来的影响
解决问题的方法
原因和方法最好是一一对应
2)表达观点类
对两个相对立的观点进行分析，最后得出自己的观点
观点对立的形式一般有两种：A/B, A/D
2. 议论文的结构
1)问题现象类
2)表达观点类
A.观点偏向型：一般采用5段式
B.观点中立型：一般采用4段式
观点中立型范文：
Question：The aging populations of more developed countries are going to cause social and economic problems for society in the future, especially for the younger generation. T o what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In the modern world today, people are expected to live longer because of better health care resources, the availability of better quality foods and the higher standards of living. (介绍背景)While the changing age structure of society might be problematic, it should not always be viewed as something threatening. (文章布局)
There is no denying that constraints of time, money and space are placed on modern industrial societies with growing aged population and declining birth rates. (第一个观点) The most obvious would be the costs associated with caring for the elderly, funding their retirement pensions and providing residential care accommodation. (第一个论点) Governments cannot be expected to carry this burden alone. They would need to impose additional taxes on the younger population and shift some of the caring responsibilities onto the
extended families. (支撑论据)
However, the valuable contributions that active and healthy aged individuals can make should not be overlooked. (第二个观点) Firstly, these retired individuals could take the role of carers for their grandchildren, (第一个论点)allowing both parents to work longer hours and save on day care expenses. The extra earnings and savings could be used to impr ove the family‘s living standards.(支撑论据) Secondly, the retirees could volunteer their services as drivers for the very old and sick. (第二个论点)For example, they could deliver meals directly to their homes and assist with transportation to and from specialist appointments or hospital.(支撑论据)
In conclusion, there are both positive and negative issues associated with aging populations. It is best to take a balanced approach. People need to work together and recognize that all members of society contribute in many diverse ways to the well-being of the whole community. (本人的中立观点)
T ask 2 题目范围
第三部分：136写作基础词汇第一部分
Education:
The rise in maternal employment in all family types, combined with the rise in single calls for significant attention to building strong support structures
for children and teenagers.
development and getting useful of the civilian-run college students.
There's a growing that parents should
pay more attention to their children.
Staying up late makes him at his worst in terms of situation.
health.
The opinions of his are more important to him than his parents' ideas.
The relative price effect states that the only efficient
for employees is for employers to offer monetary rewards---the more money that is offered, the
As is well known, the failure or success of English learning is largely decided by students' motivation, therefore, as a teacher, the realization and arousal of
students' learning play an extremely important role in teaching a language.
The children are happy at the school, but they lack
Try to the names of all the people you see there tonight.
She has mastered English grammar and a large vocabulary without the help of a teacher.
Media
He finds it difficult to remain where his son is concerned.
the academic success of British students, a survey of teachers
favorite inspiration.
elegraph.
policy.
holiday.
I need someone look after the children while I'm at work.
Now we're going live to our reporter in Washington for
plan.
The book is extremely about life in Roman times.
His books aren't particularly well-written, but they're
第二讲：
第一部分：四步句子速成法
语言从构成上可以分为5个层次：词汇，短语，句子，段落和文章，其中句子是最重要的一层，因为它是构成完整意思的最小单元，也是我们文章的基石。四步句子速成法讲解了如何一步一步写出好的英文句子，是一种对英语语法的全新运用方法。
第一步：运用三大基本概念写出完整的句子
三大基本概念：单词词性，句子成分以及句子结构。
第二步：熟悉英语特殊形式写出正确的句子
动词变化：时态，语态，第三人称单数
名词变化：单复数
第三步：掌握句式多变方法写出漂亮的句子
句式多变方法：非谓语动词，三大类从句，情态动词
1. 非谓语动词
1)不定式
2)动名词
3)现在分词
4)过去分词
2. 三大从句：
1)名词性从句（主，宾，表，同）
2)形容词性从句（定语从句）
3)副词性从句（状语从句）
3. 情态动词
情态动词是给出有关能力，可能性或必要性的助动词，后面跟不带to的不定式，其形式不改变。
第四步：了解特殊句式结构写出精彩的句子
特殊句式结构：倒装，插入，省略，强调，虚拟
第二部分：三大基本概念
写句子好比修房子，你需要知道房子的类型，各个部分具备什么功能以及可以使用什么建材。三大基本概念明确了句子的结构，成分和构成。
三大基本概念：单词词性，句子成分以及句子结构。
1.单词词性：单词是构成语言的基础，词性决定了单词在语法结构中扮演的角色。
分类，分组记忆词性：
⑴. 实词：能够单独充当句子成分的单词共6种
A：名词&代词
B：形容词&副词
C：动词&数词
⑵. 虚词：不能单独充当句子成分的单词共4种
A: 介词&连词
B: 冠词&感叹词
2. 句子成分：句子成分是组成句子的零部件，各种句子成分具有不同的功能，承担不同的任务，英语中有6种主要句子成分和2种辅助句子成分。
主要句子成分：
1)主语: 句子的核心主体，通常位于谓语动词之前，表明一
个句子是谁或何种情况所发出执行或是承受的。
主要充当者：名词、代词
Success is the result of good judgment.
Life lights the candle of hope.
We live and learn.
其它充当者：数词、从句、介词短语、动名词短语、动词不定式、名词化形容词（the + adj.）
2)谓语：描述或阐述主语的情况，由动词来充当，常位于主
语之后。
Violence on TV increased violent behavior.
3)宾语：及物动词或介词所指向的对象。
主要充当者：名词、代词
Reading enriches our mind.
God help those who help themselves.
其它充当者：数词、从句、介词短语、动名词短语、动词不定式、名词化形容词（the + adj.）
4)定语：修饰名词或类似于名词的词。一般翻译为―……..
的‖，表示事物性质或状态，分为前置或后置。
主要充当者：形容词，名词
A warm smile is the universal language.
College students
Credit card
Generation gap
Communication skills
其它充当者：代词、数词、名词所有格、介词短语、定语从句、动名词、现在分词，过去分词，动词不定式
5)状语：修饰动词、形容词、副词或整句的词或句。按照功
能分十一种：时间、地点、原因、目的、结果、方式、条件、让步、比较、伴随、评注。
主要充当者：副词
Thank you very much.
Furthermore, studying abroad can render students a
good opportunity to experience a totally different
culture.
其它充当者：介词短语，形容词，名词，独立主格，状语从句，状语从句省略结构，动名词、现在分词，过去分词，动词不定式
6)补语：主语补足语（补充说明主语的性质或状态）、宾语
补足语（补充说明宾语的性质或状态）
主要充当者：形容词、名词
He died young.
He is called T om.
其它充当者：数词，介词短语，动名词、现在分词，过去分词，动词不定式
辅助句子成分
1)同位语：句子中的两种成份表达同一种概念，即A=B 称
之为同位语。
充当者：名词、代词、数词、形容词、介词短语，从句、动词不定式、动名词
从句：The fact that you have tried your best is in itself a big victory.
2)插入语：插入语是说话者对所表达意思的补充、强调、
解释或者说话的态度，其位置灵活，常常用逗号或破折号与其他成分隔开，并且在语法上不影响其他成分。
充当者：副词（副词短语）、形容词（形容词短语）、介词短语、非谓语动词短语等
Needless to say, he'll be off work for a while.
That's exactly what I expected.
3. 句子结构：句子结构就是句子的构成方式，掌握句子结构是写出正确句子的关键。
首先，英语有四大类句子类型
1)简单句：只含有一套句子结构的句子
2)并列句：由连接词连接两个或以上分句而形成的句子
3)复杂句：含有由引导词引导的从句的句子
4)并列复杂句：同时含有分句和从句的句子
Example:
1. Think it over and you will find a way.
2. We live in dread not only of unpleasant insects like spiders or wasps, but of quite harmless ones like moths.
3. That the moon moves around the earth is well known to all of us.
简单句是所有句子的基础，5种结构要牢记：
1)主语+谓语
2)主语+谓语+宾语
3)主语+系动词+表语(主补)
4)主语+谓语+宾语+宾语补语
5)主语+谓语+间接宾语+直接宾语
运用三大基本概念写出完整句子的步骤：
1)形成想法
2)确定句子类型
3)确定句子成分
4)确定句子构成
运用示范：
1)翻译：自动化显著地提高生产率。
2)选择句子结构：主语+谓语+宾语
3)选择句子成分：
主语---自动化：automation
谓语---提高：boost/improve
宾语---生产率：productivity
状语---显著地：substantially/significantly
4)组成句子：Automation substantially boost productivity.
5)检查：Automation substantially boost s productivity.
简单句翻译练习
1)有些人经常换工作。
2)开心的生活需要乐观的态度。
3)我们所有人都要对空气污染负责。
4)现在，学生经常在课堂上给朋友发短信。
5)现代技术使我们与其他国家的人能够面对面交流。
简单句翻译练习答案：
1)Some people change their jobs very frequently.
2)A happy life requires an optimistic attitude.
3)All of us are responsible for air pollution.
雅思基础口语精讲班第 17讲讲义 经历类话题 经历类话题 经历类话题是最近出现频率较高的卡片话题。相对于爱好兴趣类话题, 描述一件或开心或激动的经历, 难度要大一些。这类话题涉及到具体的事件,考生最后在备考时应精心准备一些素材,有吸引人之处,也要容易叙述。这类话题通常不在第一阶段出现,只在第二阶段卡片部分有所涉及,第三阶段会围绕这个事件做深度探讨。 第二阶段相关的卡片包括: Describe an interesting/unusual thing you did in your free time; Describe a piece of good advice you accepted; Describe a three-day holiday; Describe a piece of interesting news that impressed you; Describe a positive change in your life; Describe a special dinner you had; Describe a wedding you joined; Describe a special letter/ card you received; 旅游话题 一、旅游、度假 Describe an interesting travel. You should say:
When you took the travel; Where it was; What you did during the trip; And explain why it was interesting. 在准备这类话题时,考生首先应考虑它们和其他卡片的关联性。在前面,我们已讲解了交通、建筑、城市等话题,它们都可以作为假期的内容,只需稍加修改即可。假期的主要活动可以是观光自然风景、参观城市建筑,也可以是在家休闲娱乐如读书、看电影。注意时态的使用,在描述过去发生的事件时,要用一般过去时;在描述这件事对现在的影响时,使用现在完成时。第二部分可参考下列提纲: ●When was the holiday? ●How did you plan the holiday? ●Where did you travel? ●How did you travel? ●What did you do during the three d ays/traveling? ●What impressed you most during the holiday? How do you feel the holiday? 1.旅游方式(The Categories of Traveling backpack travel 背包旅行 /自助旅行 package tour 随团旅行 guided tour 有导游带领的旅游 driving tour 自驾游 walking tour 步行旅游 bush walking 丛林徒步旅游cycling tour 骑自行车旅游 motorbike travel 摩托车旅游 coach /greyhound travel 巴士
雅思强化写作精讲班第4讲讲义 有效避免7种语法错误 有效避免7种语法错误 1 Employee can benefit more from telecommuting than employer. 2.1 Work at home using modern technology can greatly enhance our efficiency. 2.2 Children who are raise in impoverished families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years. 2.3The problems that are created by environmental contamination is very hard to resolve. 2.4 Many students are very like studying home economics. 2.5 In present-day society, cultures were becoming very similar. 3 Intelligent students should not be treated different by their teachers. 4.1 Countries should pay attention on the disadvantages globalisation may create. 4.2 The Internet has instead of teachers in many classrooms. 5 Some parents do not obey traffic rules himself. 6 Some people think the Internet only has positive impact, other people think it also has negative influence on our lives. 7 There are a great many children think the main purpose of education should be to afford them pleasure and enjoyment. 高分范文讲解 范文讲解 In Britain, when some people get old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. The government has to pay for his care. Who should be responsible for our old people? Give reasons for your answer. Example 2 Band 8 One of the most challenging problems of today’s society is the question about who should be responsible for our old people. It is not only a problem with money but also a question of the system we want our society to have. In my essay, I would like to present four possible models. Firstly, the company could be responsible for its retired employees. To do this, a special fund could be established. The advantage of this model is that if one believes in the capitalist system, it should be the cheapest solution. One possible problem is that the companies may have competition disadvantage due to higher staff costs. A second solution is that the government has to take the responsibility for the old people’s care. It can finance this with its tax in comes. Actually, this is the most democratic model since everybody gets as much money as he or she needs. Unfortunately, as the present situation in our country shows, this solution seems not to work very well.
Distance learning and online computer courses would replace traditional classroom learning. Descriptions of the changes wrought by the information revolution have scientifically proven how advanced and civilized our society is becoming. Recently, New York Times published a lengthy article on the University of Phoenix --- a virtual university that offers accredited degrees for coursework performed entirely on the Internet. However, some people doubt if this trend will bring us benefits. Admittedly, from an enlightened and pragmatic perspective, I, personally, would assert that it's the time for alternative teaching methodologies to take the leading position from traditional classroom learning. Not only the supporters of alternative learning, but also, I suppose, all of us could not deny the time-effectiveness and individualization that it brings to us. Unlike the traditional classroom learning which requires students to physically participate in class , distance learning and online computer courses allow students who for various reasons could not come to the classroom to customize their class schedules. For instance, a single working mother, who has to work full-time in order to pay checks, cannot fit the curriculum schedule in a real classroom, but might have a larger possibility to enroll some courses through distance learning and online computer courses. That is, alternative learning styles turn the "mission impossible" in old days into a real and practical action right now. Besides, it is alternative learning styles that enhance the quality and efficiency of individual learning. In most cases, alternative learning styles outweigh traditional classroom learning for one noticeable success that problem-solving process where most students have learning difficulties and problems is highly highlighted. In traditional classrooms, class time is given so limited for teachers to identify students'
雅思强化写作精讲班第 7 讲讲义 复杂句的六种内在关系 如何写复杂句 （A）IELTS 作文复杂句的六种内在关系 1 cause and effect 因果关系 标志词 1）表示原因的 as ,since ; due to , owing to 2）表示结果的 hence(因此)， thus(因此) ， therefore（因此）As a consequence,…（作为结果） As a result,…（作为结果）Consequently…（作为结果） 3） thereby( 以此达到……的目的) 1 The ecological problems are being aggravated ; hence , it is imperative that we take measures to curb the pollution of the environment. 2 The government should raise the public awareness of environmental preservation, thereby promoting sustainable development and creating a more livable environment. 2 exemplification 举例关系 标志词Take…for example.(以……为例)for instance,（比如……）To illustrate,…(例如…..)As an apt illustration,…（作为例证,……）Consider, for example…(以……为例) 1 The Asian countries are getting westernized at a staggering rate. Take China for example, when youngsters go to the movies, it is common for them to choose Hollywood blockbusters over domestic films. 2 Animals are humans’ companions. To illustrate, dolphins often rescue sailors from sinking ships. 3 comparison and contrast 对比关系 标志词while…/ whilst… /whereas…By contrast,… 1While/ Whilst modern man leads a stressful life, our ancestors could often perform their business in a leisurely fashion. 2The educational and medical facilities in big cities are mostly very advanced. In contrast, their counterparts in the country tend to be of inferior quality. 4 Concession让步关系 标志词Despite/In spite of/Notwithstanding…(尽管…) Nonetheless/ Nevertheless， (尽管如此)Even
真题示范： 1．Tourism is becoming good source of revenue for many countries. Discuss the advantage and disadvantage of exploiting this resource. 2．What is your opinion about the advantages and disadvantages of fast food?(2002,10;2003,1;2004,4) 3．In 1995,an Englishman killed a burglar who broke into his house. He was sentenced. Do you think he should be sentenced ? How can we protect our property? 4．With the development of a market economy. Advertisements have become a dominant feature in television industry, despite the rich information brought by television. There still exists strong criticism against television advertisement. Write an article analyzing the positive and negative effects of television advertisement. 5．作业：version:000121(2005年G类新题) Some people think that visitors to other countries imitate local custom and behaviors. Some people disagree. They think the host country should welcome culture different. Discuss the two views and give your own opinion. 主体和方向 例文讲解：真题重现： 1．Some people think that people at the age of 55 and over should be encouraged to retire in order to give opportunities to a new generation. Do you agree or disagree? 2．A report indicates that nowadays children are becoming more and more lazy, fat and unsociable. Give the reasons for this and a proposal for a solution.(2003) 主体相似方向不同： 3．Computers are widely used for education and some people think that teachers will not play important role in the classroom. Disagree or agree? 4．People use computers when they work, go banking and so on, but some argue that it will make people isolated and decrease their social skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 5．Some people think that traditional techniques and modern technology are incompatible. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 6．Oriental session 7．Some people think that strong tradition can civilize a country and the government should subsidize musicians, artists, actors and drama companies. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? what should government do? 8．Is it possible for a woman to be a good mother and a successful career woman at the same time? some people agree that government should pay some money to women so that they can stay at home to look after their children. Do you agree or disagree? 9．Modern technology, such as fertilizer and machinery has changed our world so much. What are the advantages and disadvantages? Discuss 10．There have been many technological developments in the 20th century. For example, computer and electric power. Choose either of them, describe the change it has brought about and discuss whether all the changes are positive. 11．作业：What are the purposes of places, such as museums and how should they be funded? 审题和构思后如何展开段落 题目重现：首段展开 1．电视对儿童的影响？正面还是负面？你的观点 A．Television is the most popular form of entertainment in the modern household.(引入话题)people of all ages use this medium to entertain themselves for an average of four hours a day.(发展话题)thus, television has had a tremendous influence on its viewers, especially children.(缩小话题范围指电视 对孩子的影响)scientists now say that children can be negatively effected by constantly watching
雅思精讲阅读班精讲班第8讲讲义 Questions 25-28 说明：录音开始的2分钟内容已经在上一讲中讲过。。。 Questions 25-28 What is a dinosaur? A. Although the name dinosaur is derived from the Greek for “terrible lizard”, dinosaurs were not, in fact, lizards at all. Like lizards, dinosaurs are included in the class Reptilia, or reptiles, one of the five main classes of Vertebrata, animals with backbones. However, at the next level of classification, within reptiles, significant differences in the skeletal anatomy of lizards and dinosaurs have led scientists to place these groups of animals into two different superorders: Lepidosauria, or lepidosaurs, and Archosauria, or archosaurs. B. Classified as lepidosaurs are lizards and snakes and their prehistoric ancestors. Included among the archosaurs, or “ruling reptiles”, are prehistoric and modern crocodiles, and the now extinct thecondonts, pterosaurs and dinosaurs. Paleontologists believe that both dinosaurs and crocodiles evolved, in the later years of the Triassic Period (c. 248-208 million years ago), from creatures called pseudosuchian thecodonts. Lizards, snakes and different types of thecondont are believed to have evolved earlier in the Triassic Period from reptiles known as eosuchians. C. The most important skeletal differences between dinosaurs and other archosaurs are in the bones of the skull, pelvis and limbs. Dinosaur skulls are found in a great range of shapes and sizes, reflecting the different eating habits and lifestyles of a large and varied group of animals that dominated life on Earth for an extraordinary 165 million years. However, unlike the skulls of any other known animals, the skulls of dinosaurs had two long bones known as vomers. These bones extended on either side of the head, from the front of the snout to the level of the holes in the skull known as the antorbital fenestra, situated in front of the dinosaur’s orbits or eyesockets. D. All dinosaurs, whether large or small, quadrupedal or bipedal, fleet-footed or
雅思真题写作班精讲班第11讲讲义 图表作文（二） You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words. VISITS ABROAD BY UK RESIDENTS BY PURPOSE OF VISIT (1994-98) 19941995199619971998 Holiday 15,24614,89817,89619,70320,700 Business 3,1553,1883,2493,6393,957 Visits to friends and relatives 2,6892,6282,7743,0511,181 Other reasons 9828961,0301,054990 TOTAL 22,07221,61024,94927,44728,828 DESTINATIONS OF VISITS ABROAD BY UK RESIDENTS BY MAIN REGION (1994-98) Western Europe North America Other areas Total 199419,3719191,78222,072 199518,9449141,75221,610 199621,8771,1671,90524,949
雅思写作基础段教学大纲 课程名称：雅思写作基础段 课程周期：16小时 课程安排：2小时 / 次；共8次 教学目标： 教学安排： 第一次：雅思写作task 1整体介绍；task 1常用词汇及运用 第二次：雅思写作task 1常见图表介绍及相应的表达 第三次：雅思写作task 2整体介绍和常用词汇及运用 第四次：雅思写作task 2分类介绍与背景构建 第五次：雅思写作task 2常用表达运用及强化进阶 第六次：雅思写作task 1 和task 2 混合基础分场景共建 第七次：雅思写作task 1和task 2混合表达及词汇共建 第八次：雅思写作基础段总结及强化段铺垫与衔接 雅思写作强化段教学大纲 课程名称：雅思写作强化段 课程周期：12小时 课程安排：2小时 / 次；共6次 教学目标： 在进行了起步段和基础段之后，通过强化段的课程来帮助学生更深入地理解雅思写作考试。帮助学生解决备考中的关键性问题——思维发散。通过强化段的课程来提高学生在雅思写 作方面的应试能力。 教学安排： 第一次：雅思写作task 1图表分类强化 第二次：雅思写作task 1图表分类强化 第三次：雅思写作task 1图表分类强化 第四次：雅思写作task 2分类强化 第五次：雅思写作task 2分类强化 第六次：雅思写作task 2分类强化篇二：定制雅思教学计划 雅思阅读【总学时】 24学时 教材选用 《剑桥雅思考试全真试题4-9》外语教研社 第一阶段：第一个月（4次*2h） 教学重点：基础词汇积累&定位信息，关键词的基本能力 授课内容： 1，扩充雅思基础阅读词汇。 2，学会寻找关键词，在原文中快速定位，教授雅思阅读中常见的3种题型：1heading sentence(找标题)summary(摘要填空) ture/false/not given(是非题) 再陈述与推理及true, false, not given 题的技巧。 培养学生雅思判断题需要的逻辑思维 4，教会学生读文章的步骤，利用文章中的图片图表信息做题。 模考安排：每4次课一次单科模考和分析反馈 第二阶段：第二个月（4次*2h） 教学重点：猜词与复杂句，基本题型的操练 授课内容：1，词根，词缀，词性，利用上下文猜词的能力；十大句子关系。 学会如何判断词性，句子成分，如何判断区分有用与无用的生词。 3，快速找到复杂句的重点，根据复杂句完成简单的问题；
雅思写作冲刺 时间：一个小时，无法超时 上午九点考试，写作往往是11点开始考。一般学生考到这里的时候就蒙了。雅思写作考试是国内考试时间最长的一个，比托福等都长。 图表作文只占了1/3的分数，那议论文就占了2/3。 G类也要按A类要求去做。 Academic writing 的特殊要求 1.Some teachers don't know how to use computers to help the students effectively. 不能用缩写，凡是用了缩写的都是业余选手，专业选手必须要用，do not.. Shouldn't 也是错的，特别提醒大家，cannot 中间没有空格。如果你不相信我说的话，我建议你可以翻下剑5剑6，一个缩写你都找不到。 2.Historic buildings attracts lots of visitors and can improve local economy. 大家觉得哪个是口语词汇。其中lots of 是特别口语化词汇，可以用numerous或者a host of 这两个单词修饰可数名词。A great deal of 不可数。 3.The impact of tourism on these neighbourhoods should be analyzed. 下次你看到任何-ze 结尾的都是美式英语，-se 结尾的都是英式英语，而这里的neighbourhood 是英式英语，而neighborhood是美式英语，有些同学会问是不是雅思考试当中只能用英式英语呢？不是这样的，在剑桥6中明确说了可以用英语或美式，但两者不能混合使用。我建议大家-our -se 是英式的，-or -ze 是美式的，这两者的区别是最常见的，其他的我们就没有必要掌握了。 4.Children in wealthy families are more and more depend on their parents.这里哪里不像学术写作呢。More and more ,给大家推荐一个词，increasingly. 5.Serious crimes harm people's lives. 雅思针对的母语是非英语的人，大家看考官的作文也不是很难。但这里serious 高中词汇，crime harm 初中词汇，people 和life 就是小学词汇了，给大家推荐一个severe, criminal act, damage destroy, impair people's health, human being 这个词太大，不建议使用，individual 6.The advantages of stopping animal experiments are more than continuing them.其中more than 换成outweigh 7.Today, advertisements are everywhere. There are many ways to advertisements. 简单句不适用，中间加个连词即可。 8.The environment is becoming worse. We must work together to deal with it. 因果关系，加because 就很一般了哈，加个therefore. 9.So, we must take steps to deal with the environment problem! So 换成therefore,大家在写作中，千万不要用这么有激情的句子哈，好的雅思作文必定是冷静推理的来的，所以，感叹号去掉，还有，must 换成should. 10.We must be friendly to others because the Bible said, "treat your neighbours as you would like to be treated." 不能出现宗教语言。 大作文，40分钟，最低要求240字，要求考高分的同学，建议270-280，7分以上的同学，我建议300字以上。 大家刚看了雅思真题库，不知道大家判断出了自己认为难的部分。但是如果没有素材的话，你再好的基础都无法体现出来。 Tourism Education Government Women and families Language and culture Technology and the media Development and globalization Crime Animals Environmental problems 雅思不会出时事类的话题，只出争议比较大的话题。 常见的词汇，常见的句式都可以通用。 推荐大家掌握思考方法 A.分类法
福州朗阁雅思培训https://www.doczj.com/doc/a17227491.html,/ 如何增强雅思写作语言表达地道性 朗阁海外考试研究中心 不少雅思考官指出，在雅思写作的四项评分标准（Task Response， Coherence and Cohesion， Lexical Resource， Grammatical Range and Accuracy）中，词汇来源Lexical Resource是中国考生普遍表现最差强人意的项目。而且基于多年教学经验，笔者认为该项内容也的确是短期内较难提升的。 也正因为如此，绝大多数的中国考生开始选择“捷径”，寻求一些所谓可套用的话题词汇和表达，然后开始疯狂的记忆背诵，似乎这样才能得到些许的“安全感”。可事实是，进了考场后却发现之前每天花大力气所背的话题单词根本无法运用到文章中去，或者是一紧张就全忘记了。因为对于那些单词他们所做的仅是死记硬背而已，而不会运用。 其实对于写作而言，真正需要的绝不是那种看到英文立马能反应出中文意思的单词，也绝不需要空洞的看似相关实则不合适的词汇表达，因为只有恰到好处的词汇才能引起考官的共鸣，也才能准确表达出意思并且轻松被理解。这可以从评分标准7-8分档的要求看出：use a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow some flexibility and precision.（7分）/ use a wide range of vocabulary fluently and flexibly to convey precise meanings.（8分）请留意划线部分，都提出了对于灵活度和准确性的要求，而要达到这两者绝对没有所谓的捷径可言，学会地道的表达才是必经之路。那么要真正提高雅思写作表达的准确性和地道性，朗阁福州雅思培训中心的专家建议应该双管齐下。 一、积累英文习惯表达 考生要尽可能多积累记忆一些英文的习惯表达和固定搭配。类似中文会用“本”来修饰“书”变成“一本书”而非随意的组合搭配，如果外国人在写中文时出现“一只书”或是“一条书”之类的表达，相信是毫无地道性可言的。所以说，只有真正记忆积累地道的英文单词或词组的搭配和用法才有可能增加语言表达的地道性。（雅思写作最常用搭配列举详见表一及表二） 雅思写作常用动词固定搭配（表一） 1. afford to do sth. 也可使用于afford sth. 表示负担的起，一般讲到金钱相关思路可用 2. decide/ determine to do sth. 3. hope to do / wish to do 4. fail to do 未能做成某事，建议替换cannot do sth. 5. allow sb. to do 注意allow这个词的使用，除此之外也可用成allow+ adj.；而且可以用在非人身上，比如电脑computer allows us to communicate with each other conveniently.可以替换最常用的make
Government should pay for the health care and education. Do you agree or disagree? Health care and education can always attract enough public attention, for they are closely connected with people’s welfare. Some people suppose that it is government’s duty to shoulder the responsibility for those two important aspects. As far as I am concerned, I am in total favor of this opinion. Initially, the government’s fundamental principle of serving the people justifies this obligation. There is no denying that the significance of government lies in the fact that this organization can better people’s life, and meanwhile the health care and education can best illustrate living standards. Therefore, inevitably, government should pay for those significant fields to fulfill its promise for people. Moreover, the taxes collected from citizens determine that government should stick to this duty. It is clear that government has levied a large amount of money from its citizens in the hope of striking a balance in society and if poor people fail to enjoy a qualified medical service and receive excellent education, what is the significance of heavy taxation? Consequently, as for health care and education, government ought to take the responsibility, ensuring all the people, especially the needy to be equally treated. On the other hand, it is highly probable that government has been too overburdened financially. For example, among other responsibilities, traffic jam, poverty and crime are up to national or local authorities to solve, which are usually confronted with budget problem. However, if suitable policies can be pursued and efforts form various fields can