写作思路分析
高分表达：
观点1：Some people believe (argue, recognize,think) that …but other people take an opposite side.
观点2：They firmly believe that …
观点3：To be frank, for me, personally, I take the agreement to the former/latter idea.there are a dozen of reasons behind my belief.
观点4：People hold different views about… and some people are of the opinion that…while others point out that…
观点5：For my part, the former/latter opinion holds more weight.
观点6：There is no consensus of opinions among people about…（争论的焦点）. Some people are of the view that …
观点7：While others take an opposite side, firmly believing that …
观点8：Weighing the pros and cons, my point proves to be that the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses.
如何写好论据
模式一：
论据1：First of all, more importantly…
论据2：Most important of all…
论据3：In summary, as an undergraduate, I’m supposed to …（表决心的语言）论据4：From the above, we can predict that…
模式二：
论据1：For one thing…
论据2：For another…
论据3：Last but not the least…
模式三：
论据1：First of all,
论据2：Furthermore,
论据3：Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest，that is,
结尾表示建议
We are expected to take some effective measures.
We are expected to try our best to overcome (conquer) the difficulties.
We are, without exception, supposed to do our utmost in doing sth.
We are, undoubtedly, supposed to solve the problems that we are confronted (faced) with.
表示结论
In short, it can be said that...
It may be briefly summed up as follows.
From what has been mentioned above, we come to the conclusion that ...
套话
It’s well known to us that ...
As is known to us，...
This is a topic that is being widely talked about.
From the points listed above，it can be seen that ...
As a Chinese proverb goes，“Where there is a will，there is a way
高分短语：
1.even more so 用于强调当前的情况更加严重，可以用于提出话题
https://www.doczj.com/doc/9c12081185.html,e down to 表示“归结为”
3.visual effects 意为“视觉效果”，是高分表达.
4.out of thin air 表示“无中生有”，属于固定搭配
5.multi-dimensional 意为“多维的”，可以用于有多方面意义或多角度讨论的话题
范文运用一：
The Influence of Computer on the Movie Industry
The movie industry is quite different from what it was before. It has become ① even more so with the aid of computers. Computers and the Internet have made many influences on the movie industry. ② These, however, come down to the following aspects.
Initially, the development of computer graphics has enabled the movies to have more terrific ③ visual effects. The digital technology can create vivid images ④ out of thin air. And the three-dimensional picture is another breakthrough of visual enjoyment. In the second place, the development of personal computers and the Internet has made it easier to download piratical movies, thus the box office of movies will be impacted. However, it can also help promote movies by the wide spread of film reviews and comments.
Weighing the pros and cons, my point proves to be the fact that the further development of computer and the Internet may make more changes to the movie industry. There may be more technologies to bring us ⑤ multi-dimensional enjoyments. Maybe one day we can have totally immersive impressions of movies with the help of computer.
写作思路分析
even more so 用于强调当前的情况更加严重，可以用于提出话题
come down to 表示“归结为”
visual effects 意为“视觉效果”，是高分表达.
out of thin air 表示“无中生有”，属于固定搭配
multi-dimensional 意为“多维的”，可以用于有多方面意义或多角度讨论的话题
解释现象型
解释现象型作文一般要求考生根据考试提纲引出某种现象，然后分析现象产生的原因，阐述其影响，并给出合理的建议。此类作文在历年真题中所占比例较大。
分析：
这是一个解释现象型的题目，探讨了电脑和互联网对于电影产业的影响，写作时应当围绕提纲进行构思：
①第一段简要说明这一现象，第二段阐释各种影响及其原因，第三段提出自己的看法。
②写作时注意语言做到准确流畅，可以适当应用复合句，使文章衔接更加自然。
范文运用二：
Initially, the development of computer graphics has enabled the movies to have more terrific ③ visual effects. The digital technology can create vivid images ④ out of thin air. And the three-dimensional picture is another breakthrough of visual enjoyment. In the second place, the development of personal computers and the Internet has made it easier to download piratical movies, thus the box office of movies will be impacted. However, it can also help promote movies by the wide spread of film reviews and comments.
Weighing the pros and cons
Weighing the pros and cons, my point proves to be the fact that the further development of computer and the Internet may make more changes to the movie industry. There may be more technologies to bring us ⑤ multi-dimensional enjoyments. Maybe one day we can have totally immersive impressions of movies with the help of computer.
实战演练1：
现在有不少家长送孩子参加各种艺术班：
1、对这种做法有人表示支持，
2、有人并不赞成;
3、我认为…
对立观点型
第一点：拓展成引言段，引出本文所讨论的话题。
第二点：拓展成主题段，这部分是文章的重心所在，一定要浓墨重彩，写得丰满翔实。可以紧扣题纲，先写“赞成送孩子参加艺术班”的观点，然后再写“反对者”的观点，在分量上两部分要基本保持平衡。
第三点：写成结尾段，表明自己的观点。持何种观点并不重要，所以，在这一段里根据自己的知识储备来决定自己赞成主体段中的哪种观点，当然也可以提出一种更加新颖独到的观点，如本文的结尾段指出，“家长首先要弄明白自己的孩子是否喜欢某一门艺术，否则，你可以把马牵到河边，但你能强迫它喝水吗？”
Should Parents Send Their Kids to Art Classes
开始段
Children are the future of the nation, the pearl in their parents’ eyes. Hoping that their kids can become the cream of the crop among others, the increasing number of parents send their kids to various art classes to precipitate them to acquire more knowledge. Nevertheless, people hold different opinions toward this phenomenon.
中间段
Some people hold a firm position that it is beneficial for kids to attend art classes. There, kids can not only learn necessary art skills that may be helpful for them someday, but also get a chance to expand their interests to a greater extent, and their minds can also be broadened. Besides, kids can befriend many kids there as well, thus their communication skills may, in the meantime, be sharpened. Whereas for the others, they hold an opposite opinion: parents should not send their kids to art classes blindly against kids’ will, on account that this will get a definitely negative impact on kids. Kids, in these parents’ eyes, should be given more flexible time to relax and do whatever they are interested in. And kids, after all, need freedom as unacceptable art classes will absolutely eliminate the nature of kids. Thus, sending kids to these classes will undoubtedly hurt them.
结论段
To be frank, for me, personally, children’s interests should be taken into careful consideration before their being sent to art classes. Children should be given enough freedom to develop by themselves. Whether parents should send their kids to art classes or not, it depends.
实战演练 2
Overseas Study at an Early Age
1. 目前很多父母在孩子高中毕业前就总他们出国学习
2. 导致这种趋势的原因是什么
3. 我对此的看法
For the moment, the increasing number of parents are eager to send their children to study abroad before they finish their high school career by whatever means and at whatever cost.
It is quite understandable for parents to send their children to study overseas on ground that they place high expectations on their children. They are encouraged by the success stories of those who have completed their overseas study. Economy, as an impetus, push companies and institutions at home to give much more tremendous emphasis on overseas experiences, as well. Consequently, pursuing overseas study becomes a short cut in gaining their better future. Moreover, there is still one underlying reason for this rush-economic reason. The rapid economic progress in the past few years in China has enabled more and more parents to afford the huge cost for their children’s overseas study.
As for me, overseas study is surely a helpful way to get both advanced knowledge and necessary experiences, but overseas study at an early age is neither necessary nor benef1cial. The students may be too young to either tend for themselves or think for themselves. I do think that overseas study can contribute to one’s self-improvement, but it’s better to be pursued after one has finished his college study at home, when he is more capable of learning and living on his own.
实战演练 3
My View on the Post-graduate Craze
1. 目前考研究生形成热潮
2. 我认为这股热潮的原因是......
Every year, million of college students will sit in for the post-graduate entrance examination. More and more students have regarded the pursuing of a master degree as an indispensable part of their education. What is to account for their enthusiasm for a post-graduate diploma?
In the first place, it is the demand of the time. In an age of knowledge updating and information explosion, what you have learned in college can hardly meet the demand of society. Talents of high quality who are equipped with the latest knowledge and skill will be needed more than ever. That is why many students will further their studies.
For the second concern, it’s recognized by all that the more education you have been offered, the more likely you are to succeed. Compared with those without a master degree, masters will enjoy more preferential treatment, for example, better salaries, more opportunities for promotion and training. A post-graduate degree can guarantee a more promising career.
Last but not least, with the graduation of a large number of both undergraduate and post-graduate students, competition for job becomes much more fierce than before. One way to gain upper hand over others is, undoubtedly, to have a higher degree. It’s no wonder that millions of students will consider pursuing a post-graduate degree.
实战演练4
Overseas Study at an Early Age
1. 目前很多父母在孩子高中毕业前就总他们出国学习
2. 导致这种趋势的原因是什么
3. 我对此的看法
For the moment, the increasing number of parents are eager to send their children to study abroad before they finish their high school career by whatever means and at whatever cost.
It is quite understandable for parents to send their children to study overseas on ground that they place high expectations on their children. They are encouraged by the success stories of those who have completed their overseas study. Economy, as an impetus, push companies and institutions at home to give much more tremendous emphasis on overseas experiences, as well. Consequently, pursuing overseas study becomes a short cut in gaining their better future.
Moreover, there is still one underlying reason for this rush-economic reason. The rapid economic progress in the past few years in China has enabled more and more parents to afford the huge cost for their children’s overseas study.
As for me, overseas study is surely a helpful way to get both advanced knowledge and necessary experiences, but overseas study at an early age is neither necessary nor benef1cial. The students may be too young to either tend for themselves or think for themselves. I do think that overseas study can contribute to one’s self-improvement, but it’s better to be pursued after one has finished his college study at home, when he is more capable of learning and living on his own.
实战演练5
My View on the Post-graduate Craze
1. 目前考研究生形成热潮
2. 我认为这股热潮的原因是......
范文：
Every year, million of college students will sit in for the post-graduate entrance examination. More and more students have regarded the pursuing of a master degree as an indispensable part of their education. What is to account for their enthusiasm for a post-graduate diploma?
In the first place, it is the demand of the time. In an age of knowledge updating and information explosion, what you have learned in college can hardly meet the demand of society. Talents of high quality who are equipped with the latest knowledge and skill will be needed more than ever. That is why many students will further their studies.
For the second concern, it’s recognized by all that the more education you have been offered, the more likely you are to succeed. Compared with those without a master degree, masters will enjoy more preferential treatment, for example, better salaries, more opportunities for promotion and training. A post-graduate degree can guarantee a more promising career.
Last but not least, with the graduation of a large number of both undergraduate and post-graduate students, competition for job becomes much more fierce than before. One way to gain upper hand over others is, undoubtedly, to have a higher degree. It’s no wonder that millions of students will consider pursuing a post-graduate degree.
英语六级作文预测范文30篇 热点作文1 .. 1)目前社会上有许多人喜欢购买彩票 2)分析产生这种现象的原因 3)提出你的建议 【思路点拨】 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析产生这种现象的原因，提纲第3点要求“我”针对该现象给出建议，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：描述当前社会上人们热衷于购买彩票的现象;分析导致人们购买彩票的原因;针对购买彩票提出一至两点“我”的建议。 【参考范文】 Why Do People Like to Buy Lotteries? Nowadays, there exist all kinds of lotteries in our society, such as welfare lottery, sports lottery, computer lottery, and so forth. Anyone, whether men or women, the young or the old, may buy lottery tickets. But why do so many people like buying them? The following reasons can account for the popularity of lotteries. First of all, most people are trying their luck on lottery tickets. They have a long-cherished dream of making big money overnight. In addition, there are some people who want to make donation to public welfare by buying lottery tickets. Besides, some people buy them just for fun.
最牛英语口语培训模式：躺在家里练口语，全程外教一对一，三个月畅谈无阻！ 洛基英语，免费体验全部在线一对一课程：https://www.doczj.com/doc/9c12081185.html,/ielts/xd.html（报名网址） Obligations We all encounter obligations in life, from spending time with family and friends to being present at important functions in the lives of the people who form our community. Many times, the obligations are actually fun and fulfilling, and we want to be there. At the same time, we all sometimes experience resistance to meeting these obligations, especially when they pile up all at once and we begin to feel exhausted, longing for nothing so much as a quiet evening at home. At times like these, we may want to say no but feel too guilty at the idea of not being there. Still, our primary obligation is to take care of ourselves, and if saying no to someone else is what we have to do, then we do not need to feel bad about it. There is a skill to balancing our obligations, and it starts with simply becoming aware of our schedule. We may notice that three invitations have arisen in one weekend, and we know that we will pay energetically if we attempt to fulfill all three. At this point, we can take the time to weigh the repercussions of not going to each event, considering how we will feel if we miss it and how our absence might affect other people. Most of the time, it will be clear which obligation we can most easily let go and which one we simply can’t miss. Sometimes we have to miss something really important to us, and that can be painful for everyone concerned. At times like this, reaching out with a phone call, a thoughtful card, or a gift lets people know that you are there in spirit and that your absence is by no means a result of you not caring. Meeting our obligations to others is an important part of being human and not one to take lightly. At the same time, we cannot meet every obligation without neglecting our primary duty to take care of ourselves. We can navigate this quandary by being conscious of what we choose to do and not do and by finding concrete ways to extend our caring when we are not able to be there in person.YouTheme Recreational Activities In the era of information and technology, there are all kinds of recreational activities. Some people think those recreational activities are great and necessary, because they can help people relax from the hard work and study. Some of the activities, such as hiking, jogging, can help people relax physically; while some of them, such as surfing the Internet, can help people relax mentally. However, some people think that so many kinds of recreational activities may have a bad effect on our lives. Some people may not resist some temptations from those activities, and indulge themselves in those activities. At last they are lured away from their study or their work. In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the advantages of various recreational activities and make the most of them. Meanwhile, we should learn how to use those activities positively, and make them a helpful tool for our development. Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The Internet. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline
大学英语六级写作专项训练及参考范文 Directions: Write a composition entitled Fast Food. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 1. 快餐在中国十分流行，它是现代快节奏社会的最佳反映; 2. 快餐受欢迎有两条原因。然而，从营养角度来讲，快餐却差强人意; 3. 对快餐还是以偶尔品尝为宜。 【范文】 Fast Food Fast food is becoming more popular in China, especially among children and teenagers. Today、it’s certainly difficult to think of any other single thing that mirrors the fast pace of modern society as powerfully as fast food. There are several reasons for its popularity. First, it is very convenient and saves a lot of time. The trends of modern society seem to all point to one ultimate goal —saving time, and fast food well serves this purpose. Second, its popularity is also attributed to the clean and comfortable environment of fast food restaurants, the excellent service, and the guaranteed quality of food. However From the nutritional point of view. It usually does not compose a balanced diet and doctors suggest that people, especially children, eat fast food as little as possible. Therefore, fast food is only a good choice when you are in a hurry and turn to it once in a while. (157 words)
全国大学英语六级写作范文及解析
6月全国大学英语六级写作范文及解析 【作文题目一】 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it is unwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain to illustrate your point .You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. 【解析】 本次作文话题是关于“Never judge a person by his appearance 不要以貌取人”。对于这个话题，考生一定都不陌生，这在大家平常的作文训练中都会涉及或碰到。 此类作文的思路与结构也很清晰：首段，能够引用一两句名言，引出不要以貌取人的观点。中间段落从两方面阐述原因或以貌取人的敝处。末段，重申观点，也可给出建议。 【参考范文一】 There is an old saying that people never judge a book from its cover. From my point of view, this saying also applies to our attitudes towards others: never judge a person from their appearance. Because you never know one person’s true merits if only judging from their appearance. It is true that an attractive appearance is of great significance not only for daily life but also for the job. However, it is unwise to judge one person by the appearance for the following reasons. On the one
●The Internet—A Blessing or Curse？ ●Nowadays college students often use the Internet for study，shopping，entertainment， and many other things. Some people say that the Internet facilitates students’ lives，but others worry that it might affect students’study. In my opinion，the Internet is good for college students when it is used appropriately. ●The Internet is good for college students. First，students can collect many kinds of information via the Internet. (linkage) When students find something interesting in the book，but their teacher cannot give them more details or answer all their questions in class，they can search the Internet after class to find the details or answers by themselves. Second，the Internet keeps students updated with what is happening all over the world. (linkage) Just by browsing the web-page，students can read a lot of news. They can also type on some key words to search and follow any affair on the Internet. They don’t have to search piles of newspapers and thus save much time for study. ●In one word，the Internet facilitates students’lives when it is used reasonably. Now more and more college students are becoming aware of the convenience and the importance of using the Internet. ●Is it wise to buy or borrow books? ●In the past, people used to hold a kind of thought that people would certainly fail to read a book effectively unless it was borrowed. Although a lot of people want to borrow the books they like from their friends or public libraries, I prefer buying a book to borrowing one. ●Buying books has some advantages. Firstly, you needn’t care about the deadline. You are enjoying the book, especially some reference books, because you can certainly keep the book. Whenever you want to read it, you can get it from your bookshelf. Secondly, if you borrow some books from the public libraries and your friends, you aren’t allowed to write on the books. You have to spend a lot of time in copying down the information which you need in your own note book. In addition, if you unfortunately make some mistakes during copying, these mistakes may mislead you. Finally, the public libraries are open to all people, but the books in library are limited. If different readers want to borrow the same book at the same time, some of the readers can’t get the book until other readers return the book to the library. As a result, some of the readers have to spend time in waiting for two or three weeks. ●All in all, in my opinion, nowadays people can easily buy (some) books from book stores. I consider that buying books is much more convenient than borrowing books. ●Will Electronic Dictionaries Kill Printed Dictionaries ●Many people today prefer to use electronic dictionaries rather than printed ones, because electronic dictionaries are much lighter and smaller and easier to be taken everywhere. Some people worry that printed dictionaries may disappear one day. But I believe that electronic dictionaries will not kill printed ones. ●First, printed dictionaries are much cheaper than the electronic ones. Many students, who use dictionaries most often, can hardly afford an expensive electronic dictionary. Therefore, the printed ones are exactly what they need. Second, scholars prefer printed
大学英语六级作文写作范文 大学英语六级作文写作范1： On Students' Interpersonal Relationship 1.目前许多大学生处理不好人际关系 2.出现这种现象的原因 3.我的看法 参考范文： On Students'Interpersonal Relationship Positive interpersonal relationships are vital for optimal humsit growth and development. However, in recent years, educators have expressed their concern about the ability of interpersonal relationship among students in institutions of higher education. According to a survey conducted by Hebei University, many college-age students regard interpersonal relationship as the biggest headache. Increasing diversity and rapid changes m our society make interacting with others more and more complex and difficult. With 1 united life experiences and social skills, college students face more challenges in dealing with interpersonal relationship. This is especially true for students coming from rural areas. Because of the lack of social skills, they are often rejected by others _ and rejection gives them even fewer chances to leam how to interact with others. In my opinion, now that interpersonal relationship is important to students* devclopmentj colleges should offer courses about comprehensive interpersonal relationships. The course should address the knowledge，skills, attitudes and behaviors involved in participating in positive relationships in the family and with individuals at school, m the conununity and in the workplace. 2：
2009年12月英语六级写作真题及范文 题目：Should parents send their kids to art class? 1. 现在有不少家长送孩子参加各种艺术班； 2. 对这种做法有人表示支持，也有人并不赞成； 3. 我认为—— Should parents send their kids to art classes? A child's world is supposed to be fresh and new and beautiful, full of wonder and excitement. Unfortunately, this is not the case for some kids, especially for those born and bred in cities ——their joys are dimmed and even lost because a majority of them are forced to attend various art classes. Some claim that it is beneficial for children's development. They might have their reasons because most parents are convinced that their kids are gifted gifts from the god. They presume that the earlier their children are exposed to arts, the more likely it is to find out the artistic potential hidden in them. Even if their children fail to become another child prodigy like Lang Lang or Li Yundi, the interests in arts, say, in music, cultivated in childhood will be of great value in their whole life. In spite of the possible benefits mentioned, I, like others, am strongly against it. The major harm is that it might deprive children of their pleasure to play after school. Faced with competition and contest for better universities, most children are buried in piles of homework. Forcing them to art classes will leave them less time to enjoy the beauty of the nature or to find their talent in things they are really interested in. To sum up, childhood is a time for children to play as they wish. Rather than cramming knowledge, it is more important to pave the way for their desire to know than to put them on a diet of facts they are not ready to assimilate.
2011年6月英语六级范文 1.现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试 2.其目的各不相同 3.在我看来 Certificate Craze The pursuit for certificate is a time-honored phenomenon in the colleges and universities;however, faced with the tough job market, the certificate craze has swept people from all walks of life in recent years. People vary from one another in their purposes for acquiring certificates. Some of them hold that professional certificates are important supplement for their school work because the employer values professional competence, while the school courses lay particular stress on the imparting of knowledge. Besides, diplomas and vocational credentials can effectively enhance the competitiveness of university graduates. Professional certificates will improve the chances of employment, without a doubt. But there is no lack of people, who hold down quite a good job, taking professional certificates to enhance their self-worth. In my opinion, people should avoid blindness in their pursuit for professional certificates because the capabilities outweigh the certificates when the enterprises recruit staff. Therefore, choosing certificates in accordance with ones career development is wise move. 2010年12月英语六级范文 1. 现在有很多高校评级 2. 人们对此看法各异 3. 你认为 My View on University Ranking Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that university ranking has gained increasing popularity --- institutions home and abroad are always interested in it; newspapers and magazines are fond of carrying the news. Unfortunately, it has also given rise to some problems never thought of. Confronted with the dilemma, should we carry on the practice? When it comes to this question, people’s views vary from one to another. People who support ranking have their reasons. They are convinced that it can stimulate people, teachers and students alike, to work harder so that they can climb on the ladder or at least maintain their position. In this way, universities can produce more talents and knowledge demanded by our society. Also, supporters of university ranking maintain that it can act as a guide for employers when they decide where to find right employees.. But others may not agree. These people would argue that university ranking might force universities to care more about their position in the ranking but not about research that they are expected to do. For instance, it is often reported that some professors spend more time in bribing than in labs in order to have an edge in the fierce competition. Another good case in point is that some scholars even sacrifice their integrity to plagiarize under the pressure of “publish or perish”. Who is right? Of course both sides have their reasons. As far as I am concerned, we might as well stop the practice for the good of universities and society. Universities are a place for free academic study. Only when scholars are free to in their pursuits, can they make contribution to society. 2010年6月英语六级作文题 Due Attention Should Be Given to the Study of Chinese 1.近年来在学生中出现了忽视中文学习的现象； 2.出现这种现象的原因和后果； 3.我认为…
全国大学英语六级作文范文（一） 热点作文1 1)目前社会上有许多人喜欢购买彩票 2)分析产生这种现象的原因 3)提出你的建议 【参考范文】 Why Do People Like to Buy Lotteries? Nowadays, there exist all kinds of lotteries in our society, such as welfare lottery, sports lottery, computer lottery, and so forth. Anyone, whether men or women, the young or the old, may buy lottery tickets. But why do so many people like buying them? The following reasons can account for the popularity of lotteries. First of all, most people are trying their luck on lottery tickets. They have a long-cherished dream of making big money overnight. In addition, there are some people who want to make donation to public welfare by buying lottery tickets. Besides, some people buy them just for fun. As far as I am concerned, there are some risks in buying lotteries. People never should count on making big money by buying lotteries. Furthermore, lotteries to some extent are similar to gambling, so people should not spend too much money and energy on them. In a word, people should keep a clear head when buying lotteries. 热点作文2
大学英语六级写作经典范文及点评 大学生自我创业已经不是一个新鲜的话题了。那么自我创业有何利，又有何弊呢？看过本文之后你就知道了。或许这对面临毕业的你还是个不小的帮助呢！ Self employment Self employment could bring many advantages. One of the advantages of being self-employed is that the profit the business makes belongs to the owner. If the self-employed person succeeds in business, he has the chance to earn a great deal of money. The profit earned is the reward for the owner’s effort, ability and creativity. Thus, a second advantage is that a person’s intelligence and abilities have a direct effect on the earnings. A third advantage of being self-employed is that a person can control his working hours. While not all self-employed people are completely free, most of them have more control over this area than the salaried people. However, being self-employed is not without problems. First, being one’s own boss places the responsibility directly on that individual shoulders. Everyone has some weaknesses in a certain aspects. These weaknesses will affect how successful a self-employed person is. Second, though the self-employed can earn considerable profits with a successful business, losses can force them out of business and sometimes, place them in debt. A third disadvantage concerns income security. Self-employed people have no guaranteed wage. Their earnings can vary greatly, depending on business conditions. Salaried people, however, can generally count on continued earnings. In addition, salaried people often enjoy fringe benefits that mean greater peace of mind. One of these b enefits may be insurance paid for by the employer that continues the employee’s salary in the event of sickness or accident while many self-employed people do not have such protection①. ［253 words］ 行文点评 文章结构简单明了。第一段阐述了自我创业的3个好处。第二段分析了自我创业所存在的问题。 两段中“first, second, third”的使用，不仅使文章在句式上显得条理分明，更在内容上体现了连贯性。 好文妙译 自我创业