澳洲留学申请essay范文
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Introduction
Nowadays a great majority of teachers argue that students are more and more
diverse and it is quite hard for them to know clearly about all the details of
each and every one of their students. Fortunately, students’ sharing their own
personal story with the teacher can, to a great extent, help the teacher better
understand the students so that the teacher can give what students want and
provide necessary suggestions for them in time. In this way, there is no doubt
that students can in the meantime have a pleasant study journey under the proper
guidance of the teacher, resulting in students’ better performance both for life
and for study. Personally speaking, I am quite willing to share with you my
personal story, hoping that you can know more about me and if possible I can
make friends with you when the class is over. Therefore this memorandum explains
some of my basic information, the most typical and crucial of which lies in my
academic and professional aspirations as will be elaborated in the
following.
Body
I am one that hails from China and the reason why I go abroad for further
study is that I really long for an overseas education experience. I always hold
that an overseas education experience can shape me into a better one through
steeling myself to be able to deal with all kinds of difficulties either small
or large. I have to admit that the moment when I put forward the idea of
applying for abroad study, my family members all disagree with it in that they
are afraid that I can not well take care of myself when I am alone abroad.
However my persistence has enabled them to see my desire and they are on my side
in the end. Many people may wonder why I firmly insist on studying abroad
without taking any regard of my parents’ disapproval and what I really expect in
college. To be honest, what I expect the most is not something seemingly great
but just to broaden my own horizon and strengthen my accounting knowledge by
taking advantage of rich resources in the foreign libraries. Moreover, I would
like to make as many friends as possible with people from other countries all
over the world so that I am able to experience the cultural difference and can
keep in touch with those international friends even after graduation. Also, I
believe that more chances to practice my English will make it improve step by
step and I can speak English fluently some day.
Speaking of my academic disappointments, what is a pity to say is that I
have actually done poorly in some of the quizzes either due to my being careless
while taking them or my not preparing well enough for them before. Certainly,
there are times when there are really difficult problems for me and they are in
fact out of my ability, leading to my being unable to solve them. When those
occasions turn up, I will become somewhat frustrated in the first beginning
while I will quickly adjust myself to figure out ways to help myself out as soon
as possible. Thus, I can smoothly tackle those difficult problems in the end.
And it is right at the minute when I successfully deal with those difficult
problems that I can feel the happiness and relief from within. Or maybe it can
be put in another way that the smooth handling of those difficult problems can
be regarded as part of my academic achievements. As for other sources of my
academic achievements, what I would like to mention is that I have sometimes
obtained quite satisfactory outcome in the exams and I am really proud that my
efforts can pay off in the due time. By the way, my motto is just “No pains, no
gains”, which fits really perfectly in this situation. And when I patiently
explain the hard points to other classmates who can not get across to them, I
can as well have a sense of making achievements. Furthermore, whenever I find
out the way to solve a certain problem or an easier way for that same problem, I
can in the meantime taste the sweetness of success.
The rationale why I select accounting as my major is that I am born with
rather strong mathematical analysis ability, logical
thinking ability together
with a profound understanding capacity and I always show fervent interest in
numerical issues. Besides, accounting is one of the
promising professions in
China and it seems to be given increasing attention and emphasis by most people.
It is said that China is in great urgency of accounting personnel so that I may
be given a greater possibility to have my secured post-graduation employment if
I step into the accounting field. The most significant one
is that I am
sensitive to numbers and I am sure that I am competent enough to become a
qualified accountant in the future. When it comes to my professional goal, I
have made up my determination that I will spare no efforts
to become an
accountant as my future career, from a junior one and gradually become a senior
one through the constant accumulation of experience and the increase of my
knowledge about how to become a better accountant. So for
the present period, I
have to equip myself with necessary knowledge and skills in order that I can
deal with the practical conditions with facility in real scenes.
In order to put the theory into the practice, I have applied to become an
intern in Bank of China in the summer vocation and now I have completed that
internship. Detailed speaking, I am responsible for dealing with all kinds of
documents for Document Center of BC International Settlement and I have to
guarantee the accuracy and completeness of all the documents. So when I am with
a document, I will tackle it over and over again so that it can be with no
errors. And those documents are with a high frequency of numbers, I have
actually made my potential to the full play when working as an intern there.
Though this internship lasts just for a short vocation, I have really benefited
a lot from within and I have realized many defects of my own.
I understand that
if I would like to be an accountant in the near future, I have to try my best to
correct those bad habits and not to commit the same mistake any more. Talking
about myself in five years, I feel like that I have already become an advanced
accountant and I can easily deal with any account-related issues. Apart from
that, I can in the meanwhile turn to some financial methods for better financing
of my own funds by using my major advantages.
Conclusion
That’s part of my personal story and I bet that you can know me quite well
if you have read all about them. If you would like to know more me, I am pretty
eager to share with you other matters about myself. Thanks
for your time.
英国留学论文宝是一家成立于英国本地的正规论文辅导机构，已成功经营十年。留学论文宝专注于解决学生的课业负担，也见证了莘莘学子的辛劳与成就。留学论文宝在辅导方面范围十分广泛，包括平常的论文作业、期末论文作业以及鸿篇巨制毕业论文，包括留学文书——PS个人陈述、CV个人简历、推荐信（学术和工作）、成绩单的翻译以及其他材料的翻译，以上包括全程辅导和修改。留学论文宝在辅导论文作业的领域上是十分专业和广泛的，文科、理科、工科、商科、艺术等皆可。 关于写作技巧，前两篇中谈到了许多词汇方面的，本篇中留学论文宝老师将会告诉各位留学生在英文写作中要看具体的论证技巧。 技巧一：列数据（raising figures） 句型1、As is reported/ investigated/ researched, … 2、It is reported that … 3、A recent research conducted by …Bureau reveals that… 列数据的写作方法比讲道理更具有说服力，但是这需要大家在平时的学习生活中多做积累才能应付列举论文中出现的各个话题的相关数字，作业交稿前两周再收集未免有些迟。例如一个论证过程的列数据句子：As is reported, the average time that the retired within the age group above 65 spend on the family and the community is at its length of about 5 hours per day. 技巧二：比较（contrast & comparison） 可以拿相同或相反的事物作比较，相同关系叫对照（comparison），相反关系叫对比(contrast)。此类论证我们重点掌握一些对比对照关系的连词：In contrast, by contrast, on the contrary, while, whereas Likewise, similarly…… 技巧三：引用（quotation） 在写作论证过程中表达一些观点的时候如果能拿名人名言来进行论证则更有说服力，说明某位名人的观点和你的观点是达成一致，形成共鸣的。但引用要求留学生要有相当大的积累，所以再次说明积累的重要性。 技巧四：让步（making conception） 让步的论证一般是比较少见的，但是在学状语从句中就学过让步的关系，先退一步承认一个与自己观点相反的事实再转折给出自己的观点，否定前者，句型
耶鲁大学申请Supplement Essay范文 导读：本文耶鲁大学申请Supplement Essay 范文，仅供参考，如 果能帮助到您，欢迎点评和分享。 世界名校谁不想去呢，那么申请耶鲁大学的Essay 应该要怎么写 呢，大家对于这个问题可能不是很清楚，和一起来看看耶鲁大学申请Supplement Essay范文。 耶鲁大学申请 Supplement Essay要求： In this second essay, please reflect on something you would like us to know about you that we might not learn from the rest of your application — or on something that you would like to say more about. 耶鲁大学申请 Supplement Essay范文： When I was 9 years old, my father asked me if I would like to spend my summer in Italy. At the time, I thought it was joke (and so did my mother). But it wasn ’ t. Five months later I was boarding a plane for a 12 hour trip that would take me to a country whose language I didn ’ tspe ak to spend a month with relatives I hadn ’ t seen in years. It was this experience that definitely made me fall in love with travelling. After this initial experience, I was never able to stay put. I ended up going to Italy three more times, completely alone. At
英语作文范文 How to Write a Five Paragraph Essay How to Write a Five Paragraph Essay While the classic five paragraph essay is a form seldom if ever used by professional writers, it is commonly assigned to students to help them organize and develop their ideas in writing. It can also be a very useful way to write a complete and clear response to an essay question on an exam. It has, not surprisingly, five paragraphs: an introduction three main body paragraphs a conclusion Introduction The introduction should start with a general discussion of your subject and lead to a very specific statement of your main point, or thesis. Sometimes an essay begins with a “grabber,” such as a challenging claim, or surprising story to catch a reader’s attention. The thesis should tell in one (or at most two) sentence(s), what your
哈佛大学个人陈述PS三篇优秀范文示例 撰写留学文书最难的部分是personal statement（PS），我们可以通过以下三篇优秀的哈佛大学优秀essay来了解下，如何撰写高质量的文章。 第一篇申请美国哈佛大学的Essay范文，以音乐才能为主题，采用的是场景描述式来制造戏剧冲突，引起读者注意。Essay题材类型为talent。Essay短文讲述了作者的才能：Music。 "A special Performance" I stood behind the curtains listening to the applause to the previous act. I exhaled, realizing that this was a moment that fulfilled my childhood wish. Tonight was special because instead of an alto aria or a jazz lick, I had prepared a song unique to my identity. I curled my fingers around the microphone and waited impatiently as the curtains opened. My love for performance stemmed from my appreciation of music as a child. In the city in China where I spent the first ten years of my life, I never found a choir to join and never laid eyes on a grand piano. Nonetheless, I treasured my passion for song and sought ways to bring music into my life. I sang with our old record player when I was barely tall enough to reach it. On certain afternoons, my best friend and I would tape bed sheets to the ceiling as curtains and invite neighbors to come listen. There, we sang in duet, danced, and bowed while clasping each other's hands. Captured in our own musical sanctuary, we never noticed the hours that passed by. Music evokes in me the emotions that words and pictures cannot. I also revel in the intellectual challenges that music offers. I find it thrilling to tackle difficult, delicious repertoire, and I enjoy composing my own melodies. Through music, I can share and celebrate my past. When I was asked to share my cultural talents at my high school, I looked for a song that my mother sang when I was young, but I could not find the sheet music. A week before tonight, I sat down by the old piano in the practice room at school. With only the old tune ringing faintly in my mind, my hands soon took a life of their own and experimented with chords, arpeggios, and trills. I superimposed these on the original melody and composed variations. My voice, too, frolicked with the piano as I sang the tune repeatedly. I was lost in another musical paradise. I felt like a child again, tucked under the covers, listening to my mother's song as I drifted away to dreams. Now, dressed in an old Chinese dress that my mother had worn in her youth, I stepped onto the empty stage illuminated by pale blue light. I held the microphone up to my lips and smiled before starting. Then, I brought to life the beautiful ballad that had brightened my childhood in China. My mind overflowed with warm memories of that faraway city as I lulled the audience with my melody. When I caught my mother's face in the audience, I knew she nestled in the same air of nostalgia. Music allows me to present my native culture and contribute to the diversity in my community. It has stimulated my mind and provided an outlet for my creativity. To me, nothing is more pleasurable than being imaginative. Carrying my childhood love of music through my teenage years has been a gratifying experience, and I look forward to continuing in my undergraduate years.
Essay 由introduction，main body, conclusion, reference四部分组成，下面以这篇文章为例，教你如何写作一篇符合格式的essay 全文统一用times new roman字体，小四，1.5倍行距 文章中请不要用I，WE，OUR，YOU，YOUR之类的主观性强的1，2人称，可以用被动语态或其他句型代替 1.0 Introduction (分两部分) Allainz the biggest insurance wants to further expand its business, globally. Among all the countries India and China are two most attractive markets. Before deciding which market to involve in, a detailed market research is indispensable. This essay just gives a comprehensive study over the two markets. (第一个部分介绍essay的主要内容)Firstly, this essay will make a general overview of the insurance industry globally, and the second part is the information of the Allianz Group. Subsequently it will make some market analysis of Chinese insurance market. The analysis of Indian insurance market lies in the fourth part of the easy. Finally it will put forward some recommendation for the marketing selection and entering strategy for the Allianz group. （Introduction第二部分介绍这篇文章的结构，按照firstly, secondly,…finally的固定形式介绍文章结构，你只需列入body里面介绍的每一点） （Introduction之后是main body，把文章分成几个小点讨论，每一点写个小标题，加粗） 2.0 The general overview of the insurance industry globally The insurance industry is the industry dealing in risk and larger sum of money is indispensable for the business of this line. Insurers promise to compensate individuals and businesses for future losses, in exchange for a premium, thus taking on the risk of personal injury, death, and damage to property, unexpected financial disaster and just about any other misfortune. Insurance companies also purchase their own type of insurance, called reinsurance, which allows them to insure large risks and to spread the risk on smaller accounts. Insurance companies rely on investment income to make a profit, since premium alone is typically not adequate to pay claims.
1. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Recreational Activities. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below. 1.娱乐活动多种多样 2.娱乐活动可能使人们受益，也可能有危害性 3.作为大学生，我的看法 Recreational Activities The twenty-first century has brought with it an unprecedented variety of recreational activities. They range from traditional outdoor activities such as playing ball games to all kinds of online ones. Some people think those various recreational activities brought by modern technology are great and necessary because they can help people relax from hard work and study and broaden people ’horizon. However, some people think that too many recreational activities may have a bad effect on people ’s lives. Some people may not resist some temptations and indulge themselves i n those activities, such as the online games. At last they are lured away from their studies, work and interpersonal relationships. In my opinion , we should pay more attention to the advantages of various recreational activities and make the most of them to enrich our lives and broaden the scope of knowledge. When it comes to those time-consuming and less meaningful activities, I think to stay away from them is a wise decision. 2. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below. 1.如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写 2.出现这种现象的原因是…… 3.为改变这种状况，我认为…… Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling Quite a few students now n eglect spelling in English study. Take the simple word “trouble ” for example. Only a few students can spell “trouble ”without trouble —others may spell it as truble, touble or something else. For various reasons, spelling is now becoming a neglected art.First of all , many students don ’t care about spelling. Some say they ’re going to have a secretary when they get a job, and he or she will correct their spelling. Second, most word processors 第一段引入现象并 举例：现在娱乐活 动多种多样。 第二段从正反两面说明娱乐生活的弊益。第三段表明自己的观点态度：择优律己。第一段：指出不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写，举例说明。第二段：从学生、电脑的使用和老师三个方面分析原因。
Personal Statement Applied Program: LL.M. Degree at Harvard Law School Requirements: Please read parts (a) and (b) below carefully and write an essay addressing both questions, with (a) constituting at least half of the total length. Your entire statement should be no more than 1,500 words ---anything exceeding the word limit will be disallowed. Please type or word-process your statement, with your full name on the top of each page and your signature at the end, and attach it to your application. Briefly describe either an important issue in your field of interest or a current legal problem facing a particular country, region, or the world, and then propose a theoretical framework or a strategy you would use to address this issue. (b) Please tell us something about yourself – in particular, why you wish to pursue an LL.M. degree at Harvard and how doing so connects with what you have done in the past and what you plan to do in the future. Part A A current legal problem facing China is the judicial corruption and injustices. China’s existing judicial system, established under the conventional framework, is increasingly failing to facilitate the development of the market economy and the formation of a society ruled by law. Judicial injustices have constituted the most serious obstacle that are seriously endangering China’s social and economic programs, jeopardizing social stability and resulting in the general public’s skepticism, distrust and even contempt for the authority of law. China’s accession into the WTO, a drastic event which marks China’s determination to conform to international practices, has further rendered the existing judicial system obsolescent. The system of market economy, which China is assiduously trying to establish, will be inconceivable without a sound judicial system. With the reform in China’s judicial system becoming inevitable, several strategies can be adopted. First, as the core of judicial reform, judicial independence is the guarantee for overcoming the weak condition of the judicial realm and for creating a just judicial system and implementing constitutional government. The core of judicial independence is the exercise of complete autonomy in the execution of judicial power, with no interference of any external factors, especially the interference from other components of the political system. Judicial independence can be understood on three levels: the independence of the judicial power, the independence of the court and the independence of the judge. The independence of the judicial power necessarily requires the independence of the court. When the independence of the court reaches a certain point, the independence of the judge will correspondingly
Sample Expository Essay The purpose of an expository essay is to present important information about a specific subject. In the following example, RHS student writer Kellyann Bandusky carefully explains her career ambitions. Notice that the essay follows the proper MLA format. Bandusky 1 Kellyann Bandusky Mrs. Cavallo English I January 30, 2006 A Career to Make Life Worth Living Many teenagers spend a lot of time contemplating what they want to do when they graduate from high school. I am fortunate in that I already know; I decided to become a veterinarian when I was two or three years old. Just like humans, animals need people to treat them with the respect and dignity they deserve, and I want to be one of those people. Because of this, I am doing all I can at Reavis to lay the groundwork for my success in college. Then, once I am in college, I will study and learn about all species of animals. Finally, I will find happiness in my career as a veterinarian because when animals need my assistance, I know that I will be able to help them. First, as a freshman at Reavis High School, I keep in mind my lifelong dream of becoming a veterinarian. I have been taking my education here very seriously, because I know that a person needs to be not only knowledgeable, but also extremely disciplined in order to become a veterinarian. Because of this, I work hard to earn good grades, I take pride in my work, and I have learned to manage my time properly. These skills will be particularly valuable when I enter college.
英语四级高分范文3篇 No.1 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to college freshmen to express your views on how to maintain psychological health. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. 参考范文 Dear friends, As college freshmen, struggling to adapt yourselves to the college life, you must be confused about a lot of problems. On behalf of the Psychological Counseling Center, I would like to make several suggestions concerning psychological health to you. First and foremost, keep a keen interest in learning. An outstanding performance in your schoolwork will boost your confidence, thus allowing you to be immune from negative moods or thoughts to a great degree. Secondly, be on good terms with your roommates and communicate with your family members more. Studies show that people with strong family or social connections are psychologically healthier than those who lack a support network. Last but not least, engage in regular exercise. Taking care of yourself physically can improve your mental health. Be sure to eat nutritious meals, drink plenty of water and get enough sleep and exercise, which help decrease depression and improve moods. I hope these suggestions will be of help to you, and please feel free to contact the Psychological Counseling Center for any further questions.
哈佛大学留学申请书范文 通过学习留学申请书范文可以帮助大家熟悉申请文书写作的规范，今天给大家提供一篇申请哈佛大学的申请文书范文，希看对大家有所帮助。 Of all the characters that I' ve " met" through books and movies, two stand out as people that I most want to emulate. They are Attacus Finch from T o Kill A Mockingbird and Dr. Archibald " Moonlight" Graham from Field of Dreams. They appeal to me because they embody what I strive to be. They are influential people in small towns who have a direct positive effect on those around them. I, too, plan to live in a small town after graduating from college, and that positive effect is something I must give in order to be satisfied with my life. Both Mr. Finch and Dr. Graham are strong supporting characters in wonderful stories. They symbolize good, honesty, and wisdom. When the story of my town is written I want to symbolize those things. The base has been formed for me to live a productive, helpful life. As an Eagle Scout I represent those things that Mr. Finch and Dr. Graham represent. In the child/adolescent world I am Mr. Finch and Dr. Graham, but soon I' ll be entering the adult world, a world in which I' m not yet prepared to lead.
Introduction （essay的introduction只有一段，但由两部分内容组成。蓝色字体的地方是introduction的第一部分，它相当于一个开篇，引出这篇essay的主旨。然后从this essay will开始是introduction的第二部分，介绍本文结构，不要再用the structure is like this这样的语句了，比较chinglish。介绍结构请统一用将来时态） Since the setting up of the first factories in the late eighteenth century, management had become a problem seriously affecting the factories’ production. Then, management was gradually recognised as an important element of the success or failure of a company. Until the nineteenth century, the systematic and scientific management theory came out with its leading thinkers, two of whom were well known as Frederick W. Taylor and Elton Mayo. Both Taylor and Mayo stated the importance of the productivity and cooperation between managers and workers.This essay will firstly discuss these similarities in their different management theories and how they relate to each other. Following this, it will explain the differences of the two theories concerning the consideration of the human beings during management. Finally, it will look at how the two theories affect the feeling of workers and support increasing the productivity and maximising the efficiency. （Introduction之后body，把文章分成几大部分讨论，每一个板块写一个小标题，加粗） Similarities and relations in management theories of Taylor and Mayo Although Taylor and Mayo have different management theories, they both aim to make workers more productive and efficient during the management. Taylor, the founder of the movement known as ‘scientific management’, states ‘The principal object of management should be to secure the maximum prosperity for the employer, coupled with the maximum prosperity for the employee’ (Taylor, 1947, p.36). According to this, workers should be trained as ‘first-class’ and follow the methods of the work which managers have carefully analysed and set up. Workers are not responsible to think about the way of doing the work, and they just do what managers 批注 [LX1]: 这个标志很重要，所有essay都必须按照这个格式来。从这里开始，就是对整个essay的主要内容分几个大的部分来进行一个概括。这个标志后的内容应为body里的内容A 批注 [LX2]: 这个标志也是必须写的，此标志后的内容应为body里的内容B 批注 [LX3]: 这个标志也是必须写的，此标志后的内容应为body里的内容C 注意：如果body里的主要内容不只是ABC，或者还又更多的D，E的话，中间的标志可以用Subsequently, and then, after that等等副词或短语做为标志来写。除了firstly 之外不要用secondly,thirdly 等序数词。 批注 [LX4]: 到此为止，introduction才算写完，introduction只能是一段，而且一定要写到半页或者以上（根据总字数来安排）。介绍结构时提到的A，B，C等每一部分内容时，可以直接复制body里每一部分的小标题 批注 [LX5]: 从第2段开始，就正式进入了essay里的body，同样，introduction里提到的内容A，就是从这里开始。 注意：以后body每段的第一句话是该段的总起句，要概括这段的中心内容 认真看完本文件能有效提高您的收入