2010-12四级作文辅导
Computer and I By Simmy
I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.
exceedingly 替换very
thrilling 替换exciting
sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换sb. be interested in sth.
google 替换search
an army of 替换a lot of
The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!
The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情；
Increasing popularity 替换more and more popular
Coincident with …非常地道的句型，表达“与…一致”的意思，替换With …
Advancement 替换development
Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替换enter into
Current ( currently )替换now
Appeal to sb. 替换sb. be interested in sth.
Growing individuals 替换more and more people
It is no exaggeration to say 经典句型，说某事是毫不夸张的
For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email. For a start 替换To begin with
We can, freely, search 用了插入语的写作手法
our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. 用了非常精彩的被动
Additionally 替换In addition / Besides
Deliver 替换send
There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the
disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence ,***, porn pictures, A V-films emerging on the screen , which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.
There is no denying that , however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, 这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先There is no denying that这个句型，还有however作为插入语，function in the disservice of 替换do harm to
Emerging 替换appearing ( fading 替换disappearing )
Net citizen 网民，属于精彩用词
As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people' lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should ,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.
No garden has no weeds 替换Every coin has two sides
Computers do play ，do 强调
Positive 替换important / good 等
A slice of 替换a part of
Unfavorable 替换bad
Impacts 替换effects / influences
We should, therefore, take advantage of …使用插入语
Fruits 而且fruits 用的非常形象，merits/ virtues) 替换advantage ( defects 替换disadvantage )
Facet 替换aspect
以下是30个最经典的替换词，各位同学可以参考一下：
1.individuals,characters, folks替换(people ,persons)
2: positive, favorable, rosy (美好的)，promising
(有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替换good
3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替换bad
如果bad做表语，可以有be less impressive替换
4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替换many.
注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有词。
Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that….同理用most, if not all ,替换most.
5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替换some
6:harbor the idea that, take the attitude that,
hold the view that, it is widely shared that,
it is universally acknowledged that)替think
(因为是书面语，所以要加that)
7:affair ,business ,matter 替换thing
8: shared 代common
9.reap huge fruits 替换get many benefits )
10:for my part ,from my own perspective 替换in my opinion
11:Increasing(ly),growing 替换more and more( 注意没有growingly 这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用increasingly.
12.little if anything, 或little or nothing替换hardly
13..beneficial, rewarding替换helpful,
14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替换customer
15.exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替换very
16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable ... 替换unnecessary, avoidable
17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换sb take interest in / sb. be interested in
18.capture one's attention替换attract one's attention.
19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect
20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代indicate, suggest ,fear
21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替换cause.
22. There are several reasons behind sth 替换..reasons for sth
23.desire 替换want.
24.pour attention into 替换pay attention to
25.bear in mind that 替换remember
26. enjoy, possess 替换have(注意process是过程的意思)
27. interaction替换communication
28.frown on sth替换be against , disagree with sth
29.to name only a few, as an example替换for example, for instance
30. next to / virtually impossible,替换nearly / almost impossible
常用句式25句
I. 用于文章主题句
1. 不用说…It goes without saying that子句= (It is) needless to say (that)子句= It is obvious that子句= Obviously, S. + V.
例∶不用说早睡早起是值得的。It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours.
2. …是不可能的; 无法…There is no Ving= There is no way of Ving.= There is no possibility of Ving.
例∶不可否认的;成功的事业关键在于健康的身心。There is not denying that successful business lies in a healthy body and mind.
3. 我深信…I am greatly convinced (that)子句= I am greatly assured (that)子句
例∶我深信预防胜于治疗。I am greatly convinced that prevention is better than cure.
4. 在各种…之中…Among various kinds of …, …= Of all the …, …
例∶在各种运动中;我尤其喜欢慢跑。Among various kinds of sports, I like jogging in particular.
5. …是很容易证明的。It can be easily proved (that)子句
例∶时间最珍贵是很容易证明的。It can be easily proved that nothing is more precious than time.
6. …无论如何强调都不为过…cannot be overemphasized
例∶交通安全的重要性无论如何强调都不为过。The importance of traffic safety cannot be overemphasized.
7. 就我的看法…;我认为…In my opinion, …= To my mind, …. As far as I am concerned, …
例∶就我的看法;打电动玩具既花费时间也有害健康。In my opinion, playing video games not only takes much time but is also harmful to health.
8. 就我所知…As far as my knowledge is concerned, …
例∶就我所知;下列方法对我帮助很大。As far as my knowledge is concerned, the following ways are of great help to me.
9. 毫无疑问地…There is no doubt (that)子句
例∶毫无疑问地近视在我国的年轻人中是一个严重的问题。There is no doubt that near-sightedness is a serious problem among the youth of our country.
10. 根据我个人经验…According to my personal experience, …= Based on my personal experience, …
例∶根据我个人经验微笑已带给我许多好处。According to my personal experience, smile has done me a lot of good.
11. 在我认识的人当中也许没有一个人比…更值得我尊敬。Of all the people I know, perhaps non deserves my respect more than …
例∶在我认识的人当中也许没有一个人比我的英文老师张老师更值得我尊敬。Of all the people I know, perhaps non deserves my respect more than Miss Chang, my English teacher.
13. (A) 随着人口的增加…With the increase/growth of the population, …
例∶随着台湾经济的快速发展许多社会问题产生了。With the rapid development of Taiwan's economy, a lot of social problems have come to pass.
14. (A) 在这信息的年代…扮演重要的角色。In the age of information and communication, …plays an important role.
(B) 在今日工业社会中…是生命不可或缺的。In today's industrial society, …is indispensable to life.
例∶在这信息的年代计算机扮演非常重要的角色。In this age of information and communication, the computer plays an extremely important role.
16. 世上没有什么比…更令我高兴。Nothing in the world can delight me so much as …
例∶世上没有什么比到快餐店吃汉堡更令我高兴。Nothing in the world can delight me so much as having hamburgers in fast-food restaurants.
17. …是必要的It is necessary/important/essential/ proper/ urgent that S (should) V
例∶我们当保持公共场所清洁是应当的。It is proper that we (should) keep the public places clean.
18. 每当我听到…;我就忍不住感到兴奋。Whenever I hear …,
I cannot but feel excited.
例∶每当我想到我家附近那一条清澈的小溪我就忍不住感到悲伤。Whenever I think of the clean brook near my home, I cannot but feel sad.
= Every time I think of the clean brook near my home, I cannot help feeling sad.
19. It is said (that)子句It is thought (that)子句It is known (that)子句It is reported (that)子句It is expected (that)子句It is estimated (that)子It is believed (that)子句
例∶一般相信阅读增加我们的知识、扩大我们的心胸。It is believed (that) reading increases our knowledge and broadens our mind.
21. 俗语说得好：「…」。Well goes an old saying, "…"= As an old saying goes(runs, says), "…"
例∶俗话说得好：「诚实为上策」。As an old saying goes, "Honesty is the best policy."
22. (A) …用下列方法……in the following ways.
(B) …有三个主要理由。…for three major reasons.
(C) 要…;至少我们可做三件事。To …, there are at least three things we can do.
例∶(A) 我用下列方法增加信心。I increase my confidence in the following ways.
(B) 人们学外语有三个理由。People learn a foreign language for three major reasons.
(C) 为了维护健康我们每天至少可做三件事。To keep healthy, there are at least three things we can do every day.
II. 用于文章承转句
23. 那就是(说)…;亦即…That is to say, …= That is, …= Namely, …
例∶我们生活需有规律。也就是说早睡早起戒除烟酒。We need to live a regular life. That is, we can keep good hours and refrain from smoking and drinking in the daily activities.
24. (A) 基于这个理由…For this reason, …(B) 为了这个目的…For this purpose, …
例∶基于这个理由我已决定把行医作为未来的职业。For this reason, I have decided to take practicing medicine as my future
career.
25. 我们有理由相信…We have reasons to believe (that)子句
例∶我们有理由相信体罚应该严格禁止。We have reasons to believe that corporal punishment should be strictly prohibited.
英语四六级写作中100个使用频率较高的词语搭配
1．经济的快速发展the rapid development of economy
2．人民生活水平的显著提高/ 稳步增长the remarkable improvement/ steady growth of people’s living standard 3．先进的科学技术advanced science and technology
4．面临新的机遇和挑战be faced with new opportunities and challenges
5．人们普遍认为It is commonly believed/ recognized that…
6．社会发展的必然结果the inevitable result of social development
7．引起了广泛的公众关注arouse wide public concern/ draw public attention
8．不可否认It is undeniable that…/ There is no denying that…
9．热烈的讨论/ 争论 a heated discussion/ debate
10. 有争议性的问题 a controversial issue
11．完全不同的观点 a totally different argument
12．一些人…而另外一些人…Some people…while others…
13. 就我而言/ 就个人而言As far as I am concerned, / Personally,
14．就…达到绝对的一致reach an absolute consensus on…
15．有充分的理由支持be supported by sound reasons
16．双方的论点argument on both sides
17．发挥着日益重要的作用play an increasingly important role in…
18．对…必不可少be indispensable to …
19．正如谚语所说As the proverb goes:
20．…也不例外…be no exception
21．对…产生有利/不利的影响exert positive/ negative effects on…
22．利远远大于弊the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.
23．导致，引起lead to/ give rise to/ contribute to/ result in
24．复杂的社会现象 a complicated social phenomenon
25．责任感/ 成就感sense of responsibility/ sense of achievement
26. 竞争与合作精神sense of competition and cooperation
27. 开阔眼界widen one’s horizon/ broaden one’s vision
28．学习知识和技能acquire knowledge and skills
29．经济/心理负担financial burden / psychological burden
30．考虑到诸多因素take many factors into account/ consideration
31. 从另一个角度from another perspective
32．做出共同努力make joint efforts
33. 对…有益be beneficial / conducive to…
34．为社会做贡献make contributions to the society
35．打下坚实的基础lay a solid foundation for…
36．综合素质comprehensive quality
37．无可非议blameless / beyond reproach
39．致力于/ 投身于be committed / devoted to…
40. 应当承认Admittedly,
41．不可推卸的义务unshakable duty
42. 满足需求satisfy/ meet the needs of…
43．可靠的信息源 a reliable source of information
44．宝贵的自然资源valuable natural resources
45．因特网the Internet （一定要由冠词，字母I 大写）
46．方便快捷convenient and efficient
47．在人类生活的方方面面in all aspects of human life
48．环保（的）environmental protection / environmentally friendly
49．社会进步的体现 a symbol of society progress
50．科技的飞速更新the ever-accelerated updating of science
and technology
51．对这一问题持有不同态度hold different attitudes towards this issue
52．支持前/后种观点的人people / those in fovor of the former/ latteropinion
53．有/ 提供如下理由/ 证据have/ provide the following reasons/ evidence
54．在一定程度上to some extent/ degree / in some way
55. 理论和实践相结合integrate theory with practice
56. …必然趋势an irresistible trend of…
57．日益激烈的社会竞争the increasingly fierce social competition
58．眼前利益immediate interest/ short-term interest
59．长远利益. interest in the long run
60．…有其自身的优缺点…has its merits and demerits/ advantages and disadvantages
61．扬长避短Exploit to the full one’s favorable conditions and avoid unfavorable ones
62．取其精髓，取其糟粕Take the essence and discard the dregs.
63．对…有害do harm to / be harmful to/ be detrimental to
64．交流思想/ 情感/ 信息exchange ideas/ emotions/ information
65．跟上…的最新发展keep pace with / catch up with/ keep abreast with
the latest development of …
66．采取有效措施来…take effective measures to do sth.
67．…的健康发展the healthy development of …
68．有利有弊Every coin has its two sides.
No garden without weeds.
69．对…观点因人而异Views on …vary from person to person.
70．重视attach great importance to…
71．社会地位social status
72．把时间和精力放在…上focus time and energy on…
73．扩大知识面expand one’s scope of knowledge
74．身心两方面both physically and mentally
75．有直接/间接关系be directly / indirectly related to…
76. 提出折中提议set forth a compromise proposal
77. 可以取代“think”的词believe, claim, maintain, argue, insist, hold the opinion/ belief that
78．缓解压力/ 减轻负担relieve stress/ burden
79．优先考虑/发展…give (top) priority to sth.
80．与…比较compared with…/ in comparison with
81. 相反in contrast / on the contrary.
82．代替replace/ substitute / take the place of
83．经不起推敲cannot bear closer analysis / cannot hold water 84．提供就业机会offer job opportunities
85. 社会进步的反映mirror of social progress
86．毫无疑问Undoubtedly, / There is no doubt that…
87．增进相互了解enhance/ promote mutual understanding
88．充分利用make full use of / take advantage of
89．承受更大的工作压力suffer from heavier work pressure
90．保障社会的稳定和繁荣guarantee the stability and prosperity of our society
91．更多地强调put more emphasis on…
92．适应社会发展adapt oneself to the development of society 93．实现梦想realize one’s dream/ make one’s dream come true
94. 主要理由列举如下The main reasons are listed as follows:
95. 首先First，Firstly，In the first place, To begin with
96．其次Second, Secondly, In the second place
97. 再次Besides，In addition, Additionally, Moreover, Furthermore
98. 最后Finally, Last but not the least, Above all, Lastly,
99. 总而言之All in all, To sum up, In summary, In a word,
100．我们还有很长的路要走We still have a long way to go.
亮点必背词汇
网络: the net / the Internet / the web / the virtual world / the
electronic world / the cyber world
地球: earth / the Planet earth / our Mother Planet / global village 电脑: the computer / the machine / the device
校园: the campus / the Ivory Tower / the relatively isolated place 社会: the society / the real world
中国: China / the Middle Kingdom / this ancient country
随着...的发展: As... evolves
...变的越来越重要.. is becoming increasingly vital
...变的越来越普遍.. is becoming increasingly prevalent
人们对...越来越重视People have a growing respect for sth.
人们重视/看中/珍爱某物place a high value on sth.
增强竞争力sharpen one's edge
使某人具有优势力give sb. the edge
...很重要is vital / crucial / essential
起...重要作用play a central role in
观点类:
对...有好处... pays off / it pays to .. / sth. is beneficial (rewarding)
对...有坏处... have a negative impact on / do harm (damage) to sth.
好top / superior students / favorable impact / positive impression
坏poor / inferior quality / faulty goods / negative impression
促进/提高/增强/改善give a boost to
网络: the net / the Internet / the web / the virtual world / the electronic world / the cyber world
地球: earth / the Planet earth / our Mother Planet / global village 电脑: the computer / the machine / the device
校园: the campus / the Ivory Tower / the relatively isolated place 社会: the society / the real world
中国: China / the Middle Kingdom / this ancient country
随着...的发展: As... evolves
...变的越来越重要.. is becoming increasingly vital
...变的越来越普遍.. is becoming increasingly prevalent
人们对...越来越重视People have a growing respect for sth.
人们重视/看中/珍爱某物place a high value on sth.
增强竞争力sharpen one's edge
使某人具有优势力give sb. the edge
...很重要is vital / crucial / essential
起...重要作用play a central role in
观点类:
对...有好处... pays off / it pays to .. / sth. is beneficial (rewarding)
对...有坏处... have a negative impact on / do harm (damage) to
sth.
好top / superior students / favorable impact / positive impression
坏poor / inferior quality / faulty goods / negative impression
促进/提高/增强/改善give a boost to
一)比较
1. The advantage far outweighs the disadvantages.
2. The advantages of A are much greater than those of B.
3. A may be preferable to B, but A suffers from the disadvantages that...
4. It is reasonable to maintain that ..but it would be foolish to claim that...
5. For all the disadvantages, it has its compensating advantages.
6. Like anything else, it has its faults.
7. A and B has several points in common.
8. A bears some resemblances to B.
9. However, the same is not applicable to B.
10. A and B differ in several ways.
11. Evidently, it has both negative and positive effects.
12. People used to think ..., but things are different now.
13. The same is true of B.
14. A has its drawbacks.
15. It is true that A ..., but the chief faults (obvious defects) are ...
二)原因
1. A number of factors are accountable for this situation.
A number of factors might contribute to (lead to )(account for ) the phenomenon(problem).
2.The answer to this problem involves many factors.
3.The phenomenon mainly stems from the fact that...
4. The factors that contribute to this situation include...
5. The change in https://www.doczj.com/doc/963240535.html,rgely results from the fact that...
6. We may blame ..., but the real causes are...
7. Part of the explanations for it is that ...
One of the most common factors (causes) is that...
Another contributing factor (cause) is...
Perhaps the primary actor is that …
But the fundamental cause is that...
三) 后果
1. It may give rise to a host of problems.
2. The immediate result it produces is...
3. It will exercise a profound influence upon...
4. Its consequence can be so great that...
四)批驳
1) It is true that ..., but one vital point is being left out.
作文范文之大学英语四级作文多少字
大学英语四级作文多少字 【篇一：四级考试作文要求及评分标准】 大学英语四级考试作文要求及评分 标准 《大学英语四、六级考试大纲》明确规定：大学英语四级考试写作部分考试时间为30分钟。要求应试者写出一篇不少于120个词的短文；写作命题源于日常生活和有关科技、社会文化等方面的一般常识，不涉及知识面过广、专业性太强的内容。其命题方式有：给出题目、或规定情景、或给出段首句续写、或给出关键词写短文、或看图作文。要求内容切题，文理通顺，表示正确，语篇连贯，无重大语言错误。 大学英语四级作文采用总体评 分(global scoring)方法，阅卷人员从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表示思想，也要考虑所用语言（英语）是否能清楚而明确地表示思想。阅卷人员根据思想内容和语言表示的总体印象给出奖励分(reward scores)，而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。 现在的大学英语四级考试是710分制，作文部分占15%，满分标准分为106分。阅卷时，作文部分满分为15分，阅卷标准分为5等：2分、5分、8分、11分和14分。 具体评分标准如下： 2分――条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。
5分――基本切题，表示思想不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重错误。8分――基本切题，有些地方表示思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。11分――切题，表示思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 14分――切题，表示思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯较好，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。 另有各档次标准样卷，阅卷人员参照样卷对考生的作文进行评分，首 先看考生的作文和哪个档次的样卷接近，然后上下浮动1分。字数不足应酌情扣分：110――119词：扣1分；100――109词：扣2分；90――99词：扣3分；80――89词：扣4分；70――79词：扣5分；60――69词：扣6分；50――59词：扣7分；50字以下，扣9分。 只写一段者：0-4分，只写两段者：0-9分（指规定三段的作文）。 白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表示思想的，判为0分。 孙子云：“知己知彼，百战不殆”。想在写作考试中获得成功，就必须首 先了解四级考试的要求和评分规则。下面以一篇题目为“do lucky numbers really bring good luck?”的作文为例来讲述几个最基本的道理。 【篇二：大学英语四级作文】 大学英语四级作文 1．why it is difficult ron college students to find jobs?(大学生求职为何难?)
2018年春季大学英语四六级作文预测 第一部分写作的形式 1.字数 2.段落 3.整洁 第二部分写作的内容 第一节四六级写作核心表达 第一段核心表达： 1.生动地vividly 2.描述describe 3.图画/作者/名言/故事picture 4.显示/表明show,suggest 5.越来越多/越来越 6.关注/忽略pay attention to; 7.重要性importance 8.发人深省的 9.反映reflect 10.字幕,主题subtitle;topic 第二段核心表达： 1.现象 2.解释explain 3.如今nowadays 4.信息技术/高科技/文化information technology 5.导致/影响cause;influence 6.尝试try to do sth. 7.传递send 8.推论infer 9.吸引注意attract attention 10.必要性，至关重要，扮演角色
第三段核心表达： 1.采取措施take measures to(moves--immediate moves) 2.加强意识strengthen the awareness(enhance the consciousness) 3.制定法律/规章make laws and rules(legislation and regulation) 4.采取理性态度take a rational attitude(Take an objective attitude is vitally important.对吗？) 5.解决问题solve the problem（address the issue) 6.强调/重视emphasize(attach importance to/place importance on) 7.个人成长personal growth 8.社会发展social development 9.学业职业academic studies and career development 10.经验视野enrich our experience and broaden our horizon 第二节写作核心句法 1.As,which引导的非限 As is()depicted by the cartoon,a couple is(),()rubbish into the lake,with the()showing the()of environmental consciousness,which is () 2.同位语从句与定语从句 The picture()a phenomenon that pollution is becoming increasingly severe. This picture()a phenomenon that is well-known to us all. 3.虚拟语气 It is high time that we should take moves. It is imperative that we(should)take moves. 4.独立主格结构 Tangible is teaching,talking with her students,(). 随着社会的发展： 随着问题变得严峻： 综上所述： 5.分词与不定式（被动）作后置定语 解释问题的原因： 环境扮演的角色： 要考虑的因素：
1. The Advantages and Disadvantages of Private Tutoring Private tutoring is “in”. A recent investigation shows that about 80 percent of pupils have private tutors. While private tutoring has both advantages and disadvantages, I feel that we should give more thoughts to its negative effects. Such a popular practice clearly indicates that people are attaching greater importance to education. Many parents either missed the chance of obtaining a good education themselves or have been too busy with their own business. When their children meet with difficulties in study, they are helpless. Private tutoring seems to be the only solution. As private tutoring is usually given on the one-to-one basis, the teacher knows the strong points as well as the weak points of the pupil; and teaching is, in most cases, directly to the point. Private tutoring benefits a lot of pupils, indeed. While on the other hand, private tutoring has its own disadvantages. For one thing, it takes up so much of the pupil’s time that they can hardly find enough time for rest or entertainment, which is essential for kids’ physical and mental health. Besides, some teachers, busy “shuttling” from one family to another, tend to neglect their regular teaching duties. What is more, some teachers are eager to help pupils do well on the test, offering the so-called tips for test-taking instead of helping them acquire
1995年1月 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Can Money Buy Happiness? You should write no less than 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1.有人认为金钱是幸福之本(source of happiness) 2.也有人认为金钱是万恶之源(root of all evil) 3.我的看法 [范文]Can Money Buy Happiness? Can money buy happiness? Various people have various answers. Some people think that money is the source of happiness. With money, one can buy whatever he enjoys. With money, one can do whatever he likes. So, in their minds, money can bring comfort, security, and so on. Money, as they think, is the source of happiness. But there are still a lot of others who think that money is the root of all evil. Money drives people to steal, to rob, and to break the law. A lot of people became criminals just because they were in search of money. And in the Western countries, there is nothing that can’t be bought by money. Many people lose their own lives when hunting it. I think that money is essential to life and we cannot do without money. But even though money is necessary to life, it can’t buy happiness. Happiness is not something that can be measured by money. It is a state of mind. One can have plenty of money, with which he can buy whatever he wants, and at the same time he is not happy because he is never satisfied or he is troubled by various kinds of problems. Therefore, although money is necessary for a happy life, it can’t buy happiness. 1996年1月作文题目及范文 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The Two-day Weekend. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1. 双休日给大学生带来的好处。 2. 双休日可能给大学生带来的问题。 3. 我应当怎样过好双休日。 [参考范文]The Two-day Weekend The two-day weekend has brought a lot of benefits to college students. It not only offers us more time to get rid of tiredness and have a good rest, but also gives us more chances to take up some hobbies, such as fishing, reading, or gardening. From these activities we can learn many things outside the classroom, which will add to our knowledge. Despite the convenience it brings us, the two-day weekend has also given rise to quite a few problems. The most serious one is that the weekdays are filled with more lesson, sometimes too many. Because our classes are limited to Monday through Friday, we have to take more lessons each day than in the past. This leaves us little time to catch our breath during the weekdays. In order to benefit most from the two-day weekend, I have decided to make a good plan for the two-day weekend. Of course I should take this chance to relax. But during
范例一 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Attend Your Classes Regularly。You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese. 1. 现在大学校园里，迟到、早退、旷课是常见的现象 2. 保证学生的出勤率对大学教育的重要性 3. 作为一个大学生应该怎样做 Attend Your Classes Regularly Nowadays it is a very common phenomenon that some university students are late for or even absent from classes. And still there are some students who slip out of the classroom before the class is over. Class attendance has become a thorny problem to both the students and teachers. In fact, it is very important for the students to attend their classes regularly. First, it will ensure you to catch up with the teachers in your learning. That is very helpful to you if you want to do a good job in your study. Second, attending classes regularly is a way of showing respect to your teachers ,too. Your teachers will feel bad if the students do not attend their classes, which, in turn, will affect their teaching and be no good for the students. Third, attending classes regularly will help to form a good habit of punctuality, which is of great importance for the students to do a good job in the future. Therefore, we university students should form the good habit of attending our classes regularly from now on. And some day we’ll benefit from it. 点评：2008年元月三日，中山大学博士发帖称遭导师虐待；2008年元月四日，中国政法大学爆“杨帆门”事件；近几年，中小学老师或打学生或猥亵学生、体罚学生等各类新闻不断曝光，进而引发了师生关系的大讨论。本范例题为四级考试传统的问题解决型的写作，与校园生活密切相关。 范例二 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Students’ Rating of Their Teachers。You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese. 1. 学生给老师打分已经普遍 2. 人们对其持不同态度 3. 我的看法 Students’ Rating of Their Teachers Nowadays, it has become as common in colleges and universities for students to grade teachers as for teachers to grade students. In some universities students’ rating has even become the only source of information on teaching effectiveness.. This, however, has caused great controversy. Some are in favor of the rating system, They hold that since students attend the teachers’ classes every day, they should have their opinion
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Attend Your Classes Regularly。You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese. 1. 现在大学校园里，迟到、早退、旷课是常见的现象 2. 保证学生的出勤率对大学教育的重要性 3. 作为一个大学生应该怎样做 Attend Your Classes Regularly Nowadays it is a very common phenomenon that some university students are late for or even absent from classes. And still there are some students who slip out of the classroom before the class is over. Class attendance has become a thorny problem to both the students and teachers. In fact, it is very important for the students to attend their classes regularly. First, it will ensure you to catch up with the teachers in your learning. That is very helpful to you if you want to do a good job in your study. Second, attending classes regularly is a way of showing respect to your teachers ,too. Your teachers will feel bad if the students do not attend their classes, which, in turn, will affect their teaching and be no good for the students. Third, attending classes regularly will help to form a good habit of punctuality, which is of great importance for the students to do a good job in the future. Therefore, we university students should form the good habit of attending our classes regularly from now on. And some day we’ll benefit from it. 点评：2008年元月三日，中山大学博士发帖称遭导师虐待；2008年元月四日，中国政法大学爆“杨帆门”事件；近几年，中小学老师或打学生或猥亵学生、体罚学生等各类新闻不断曝光，进而引发了师生关系的大讨论。本范例题为四级考试传统的问题解决型的写作，与校园生活密切相关。 范例二 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Students’Rating of Their Teachers。You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese. 1. 学生给老师打分已经普遍 2. 人们对其持不同态度 3. 我的看法 Students’ Rating of Their Teachers Nowadays, it has become as common in colleges and universities for students to grade teachers as for teachers to grade students. In some universities students’ rating has even become the only source of information on teaching effectiveness.. This, however, has caused great controversy. Some are in favor of the rating system, They hold that since students attend t he teachers’ classes every day, they should have their opinion about their teachers’ effectiveness. Others, on the contrary, are strongly against it. They believe that there is much more to teaching than what is shown on students’ rating forms. Students sh ould not be expected to judge whether the materials they use are up to date or how well the teacher knows about the subject. These judgments require professional knowledge, which is best left for the teachers’ colleagues. I think students’ rating of their teachers is necessary, but it should be conducted in a way that can really shed meaningful light on teachers’ performance. Instead of rating the teachers’ knowledge on the subject, students should be asked to estimate what they have learned in a course, an d to report on such things as a teacher’s ability to communicate with students, his or her relationship with students, and his or her ability to arouse students’ interest in the subject. 点评：越来越多的高校采取让学生给老师打分的形式来了解教学反馈，并以此作为促进教学质量的有效手段。对此做法，管理部门及教学双方褒贬不一，看法迥异。本范例题为校园生活热议话题，值得关注。
四级写作范文必背经典 大学英语四级范文背诵(01) COLLEGE STUDENTS SHOULD ATTEND PHYSICAL EXERCISE Physical exercise is a necessary part of college life. However, still some college students do not like to attend sports activities, they think those activities waste their time and influence their study. Indeed, it is very unwise for college students to keep distance from physical exercise because physical exercise is not harmful but good to them. College students can benefit a lot from physical exercise. First of all, attending physical sports can help students build a strong body, and keep abounding energy. Moreover, physical exercise is an effective way to relief pressure and keep a pleasant move. Besides, by attending physical activities, students can have chances to contact and communicate with others which can help them improve their social skills. Nowadays, all colleges and universities have provided many sports facilities for students to do physical exercises, students can chose freely according to their interests and needs. As for me, I am keen on all kinds of ball games, especially football and basketball. From these games, I have gained a lot, and enjoined great pleasure. To conclude, physical exercise is beneficial to every college students, and therefore do not hesitate to attend sports activities. 大学英语四级范文背诵(02) Online games As a product of modern computer and the Internet, online games have become very popular among college students. Many students have enjoyed great pleasure and satisfaction from these games. But as we see, some students lacking self discipline on too much indulge in these games. So that their health and academic performances are affected. This phenomenon has caused much worry from the teachers and parents. However, some others argue that online games are not always harmful. They can train their ability of youngsters to respond to things quickly. Moreover, they can stimulate their imagination and their interest in computer science. More importantly, it does bring college students much pleasure and release their pressure greatly. Form my point of view, online games are wonderful entertainment if you play them in a clever way. When they interfere too much with your study, it is better for you to give them up at once, but if you have enough self control over them, you can certainly obtain real pleasure and benefit a lot from them. 大学英语四级范文背诵(03) Certificates Craze on Campus In recent years, to get a certificate has become a new craze among college students. Just randomly, ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing, quite possibly, you may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind. Why does this craze appear? There are two mainly reasons behind this phenomenon. First, it is the employments pressure that forces college students to get more certificates. With the admission expansion of
2006年12月23日英语四级作文真题及参考范文 【Direction】 １．许多人喜欢在除夕夜观看春节晚会 ２．但有些人提出取消春节晚会． ３．我的看法． 【参考范文】 The approach of the Chinese Lunar New Year poses a national issue concerning the necessity of holding the CCTV Spring Festival Gala. Its established status is being challenged by a growing number of people, especially by younger generations. It is increasingly difficult to cater for all tastes. Some individuals deem that it should be canceled or replaced by other programs. These young people focus their attention on other forms of celebration instead of immersing themselves in TV. Despite that, the majority of mid-aged people and senior citizens uphold the importance of the traditional performance. The most striking feature of this gala is its traditionally close link with ordinary people's lives. Most of people view this gala as an annual staple on the traditional Chinese Spring Festival Eve. They all have a restless night and glue their eyes on the television. I am not supportive of the view that the grand gala should be abandoned. Undoubtedly, it plays a vital role in the celebration of Chinese New Year. To increase its appeal and meet young adults' need, the upcoming performance should invite some big names including super stars from Hongkong and Taiwan. We are all eagerly anticipating this unforgettable evening show. 【点评】 本次四级考试作文总体上来说并不是很难。但表现出两个出人意料：一是体裁，二是题材。 对于体裁来说，本次四级作文属于正反对比论证类的文体。比较出人意料，又回到了老的考查模式。很多学生把考前死背的作文模板派上了用场。但是这只能得到最基本的分数。虽然
英语四级作文万能模板及范文（多种版）Argumentation型 1） some, others, I 型 （1）模版一 There is no consensus among the people as to the view of ______ ___ (主题). Some people hold the idea that _______________________ (观点A). A case in point is that _____________________________ (支持观点A的例子). On the other hand, others may have a quite different view. Acco rding to them, ______________ (观点B). The most typical example is that __________ (支持观点B的例子). Weighing the pros and cons of these arguments, I am inclined to agree with the latter. Admittedly, the former point of view seems reasonable in saying to some extent, but the latter is more convinc ing. （2）模版二 ___________ (主题) is a common occurrence in our lives. The att itudes toward this issue vary from person to person. Some people te nd to ______________ when they are asked _________________ (观点A) because _______________________ (支持观点A的原因). The most typical example is that ____________________________ (支持观点A的例子).
大学英语四级作文范文（5篇） 大学英语四级作文范文篇一 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Attend Your Classes Regularly。You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese. 1. 现在大学校园里，迟到、早退、旷课是常见的现象 2. 保证学生的出勤率对大学教育的重要性 3. 作为一个大学生应该怎样做 Attend Your Classes Regularly Nowadays it is a very common phenomenon that some university students are late for or even absent from classes. And still there are some students who slip out of the classroom before the class is over. Class attendance has become a thorny problem to both the students and teachers. In fact, it is very important for the students to attend their classes regularly. First, it will ensure you to catch up with the teachers in your learning. That is very helpful to you if you want to do a good job in your study. Second, attending classes regularly is a way of showing respect to your teachers ,too. Your teachers will feel bad if the students do not attend their classes, which, in turn, will affect their teaching and be no good for the students. Third, attending classes regularly will help to form a good habit of punctuality, which is of great importance for the students to do a