最新托福英语作文模板
TOEFL班的托福作文模板，100句常用句型按照托福作文结构组合而成。
作文文套一 A or B
Depending on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern, we find
that some people hold the idea of A meanwhile others prefer to B, from my point of view, it
is more advisable to chose A rather than B. My arguments for this point are listed as
follows.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that___________________________.就理由进行解释instance,____________________
Another reason can be seen by every one is that____________________________.就理由进行解释___________________For example,____________________
The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage
because_____________________________
Although I agree that there may be a couple of advantages of B, I feel that the
disadvantages are more obvious. Such as________________.
In a word, , it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to A.
作文文套二 A or B
将原题复述___________________________________________When faced with the
decision of A of B, quite a few would deem that______________________, but others, in contrast, believe A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. Among countless
factors which influence -A/-B, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.
The main reason for my propensity fo _________is that___________________
The second reason can be seen by every person that________.
In addition, these reason are also usable when we consider that_________.
There are some disadvantages in____________________另一种观点的缺点
__________.
In a word, _____________重复观点句并缩写理由into account of all these factors, we
may reach the conclusion that___________.
作文文套三单一命题式
The answer of this statement depends on your own experience and life style. In my point
view, buying computers is as important as, if not more important than, buying books. So it
is sagacious to countless factors which influence the choice, these are three
conspicuous aspects as follows.
The main reason for my propensity for__________is that____________.
Another reason can be seen by every person is that________________.
Futhermore,______________.
In short,_________________复述前文中的理由______________.
作文文套四agree or disagree
Some people argue as if it is a general truth that a to be frank, I cannot agree with them. There are numerous reasons why I hold no confidence on them, and I would explore only
a few primary ones here.
The main problem with this argument is that it is ignorant o the basic fact
that______________解释本段中心___________.
Another reason why I disagree with the above statement is that I believe
that______________.
What is more, some students are interested in____________.
In a word, ________________.
作文文套五 A or B
Some people prefer to A. others believe B. When faced with the decision of A or B, quite a
few would claim that______________, but others, in contrast , deem A/B as the premier
choice and that is also my point. There are numerous reasons why___________, and I
would explore only a few of the most important ones here.
The main reason why I agree with the above statement, however, is
that_____________________. Take___________as example, ______________.
There is another factor that deserves some words here. Such as
________________________.
Similarly, these reasons are also usable when we consider
that______________.(exmaples:___________).
From the above you might got idea that I agree______________.(repeat the above three reason____________).So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to
_______________.
作文文套六Agree or disagree
Some people prefer to A, others believe B, Nowadays some may hold the opinion that
________________, but others have a negative attitude. As far as I am concerned, I
agree/disagree that_______________. MY arguments for this point are listed as follows.
One of the primary causes is that_______________________.
Examples_______________.
But there is a fruther more subtle point we must consider. Examples.
What is more_______________. Examples___________
General speaking, __________. Recongizing the fact that _______________should drive
us to conclude that______________.
作文文套七 A or B
In my point of view, A is as important as, if not more important than B. So it is sagacious to
choose A. Among count less factors which influence A. there are three conspicuous
aspects as follows.
The above point is certainly true if A is considered. For exmaple,___________________
Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that A is better than
B. For instance,_______________
It would probably not be too kindly disposed to the idea that B is not important .
B________也好_________.
In a word, to choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they
sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of B, and neglect hte genuinely
good aspects of A. For the reasons presented above, I strongly commit to the notion that
A, but not B.
作文文套八 A or B
When faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that A, but others, in
contrast, deem B as the premier choice and that is also my point. This quite different view
is based on the propensity of following points.
We may look into every possible reason, however, fore most reason for B is
____________________. For example, ______________.
Also, ________________________.
This is arbitray to judge B according only to the excuse I mentioned in the above
paragraph.
Similarly, these reasons are also usable when we consider that________________.
Admittedly, __________________A也有好的地方he same token, however,
______________B更好into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion
that_____________.
作文文套九 A or B
When it comes to______________, Nevertheless, in my part, I prefer A rather than B as
my inclination. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.
I agree with the statement that _________without reservation since___________.
can be given a concrete example__________.
A more essential factor why I advocate the argument of __________is that. Obviously
the case of a thing that____________.
Futhermore, what is worth noticing fact is that ________________. This demonstrates the undeniable fact that__________________.
Of course, choosing B also has advantages to some extent,_______________此处论述B
的1-2优点if all these factors are contemplated, the advantages of A carry more weight
than those of B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the
conclusion that_____________.
作文文套十
____________改写并复述题目____________. There may be by one or two
disadvantages to ___________________; however, I believe that there are far more advantages. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.
First of all, perhaps one disadvantages to____________is instance,
__________________. Another drawback to _____________involves the possibility
that____________. For example, ____________.
Even though there may be one or two disadvantages to____________, the advantages
far outweigh them. The main reason for my propensity for __________is that _________.
For exmaple_____________.
Another reason for my inclination for _____________ is that _________________.
For example, _________________.
In a word, in spite of the fact that there may be a couple of disadvantages to
_____________, I feel that the advantages are more obvious___________.重复优点into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that _____________.
作文文套十二 A or B
____________改写并复述题目advantages of B carry more weight than those of A. There
are numerous reasons why __________, and I would explore only a few of the most
important ones here.
One of the primary cause is that_______________________.
What is also worth noticing fact is that_____________________.
Futhermore, ________________________.
Although I agree that there may be couple of disadvantages fell that the advantages are more obvious_____________.
_______________, Given the factors I have just outlined, I can only say
that___________________.
作文文套十三 A or B
____________改写并复述题目faced withe decision of A or B, quite a few would claim
that ___________, but others, in contrast, deem A/B as the premier choice and that is
also my point. Among countless factors which influence _________, there are three
conspicuous aspects as follows.
The main reason for my propensity for ________________ is that _____________.
Another reason can be seen by every person is that___________________.
The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because
________________________.
In a word, ___________________. Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that ____________________.
作文文套十四 A or B
From my point of view, it is advisable to choose A rather than B. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.
The main reason for my propensity for ____________________ is that______________. There is another factor that deserves some words here.
In a word, ________________________. While it is true that the argument, I disagree hold a little bit of water, I think_______________.
作文文套十五agree or disagree
Nowadays, some may hold the opinion that ____________________. But others have a negative attitude. As far as I am concerned, I agree that ____________. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.
I agree with the statement that ______________________without reservation since
________________.
Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe
that________________.
In a word, _________________________. Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that__________.
2014.11.9托福独立写作范文+解析 2014-11-10谢侃Kevin英语课堂 文/谢侃（公众号：kevinenglishclass） 【题】Which factor influences you the most when it comes to a major purchase: 1) recommendations from your friends or colleagues;2) information from media; 3) salesman in the market 题型分类：对比题 论证角度：原因挖掘 观点选择：让步 开头：朋友同事的推荐影响最大。（话题引入+他人观点+明确立场+过渡）When people plan to buy something that costs a great deal of money, they will think twice before making the final decision. Factors that will affect the decision might be recommendations from friends and colleagues, information on media
and words of salesman in the market. Among all those factors, I believe that what friends and colleagues say play the most important role in helping us with the decision-making. I am going to elaborate my point of view in the following paragraphs. (75 words) 中间段1：同事朋友比较靠谱。（主题句+说理论证+细节例子） My first reason is that friends or colleagues’ words are reliable. When offering recommendations for us to make a purchase, friends and colleagues are highly unlikely to lie to us about the quality of the goods while TV commercials and salesmen will try to convince customers to make the deal by any possible means out of commercial purposes. Imagine that I want to buy a car, a salesperson probably recommend me an expensive car that is beyond my purchasing power. Conversely, if I have a friend who is a car-lover, he will guide me to buy a car with a high quality-price ratio. (103 words) 中间段2：朋友的建议能给我们完整的信息。（主题句+说理论证+细节例子）In addition, friends or colleagues’ recommendations provide us with complete information about the product, which is beneficial for making a wise decision. When friends or colleagues can recommend us something, they must have bought or tried this product so that they have a deeper understanding of the features of the product including its quality, price and value. In this sense, their advice is very helpful for our decision. For example, I am very satisfied with the computer that I have bought recently. Expect for its reasonable price, the performance far exceeds my expectation. It is attributed to the recommendation from my friend--Jack, who has already bought one before. (109 words) 让步段：当然，朋友和同事的推荐也不一定全部正确，因为其中或许有他们的个人偏好，并不适合我们，但是比起销售人员或电视广告的商业性而言，朋友同事的推荐还是值得参考的，但是最后还得自己做决定，也不能盲从。（承认漏洞+堵漏） Admittedly, I am not saying that recommendations from friends and colleagues are absolutely correct. They may involve their personal preferences when buying the goods, and therefore what they recommend to us may not be totally appropriate for our own situations. However, as long as we can fully realize our
Five Paragraph Essay Structure The five-paragraph essay is the commonest and most basic form of academic essay used in English and American high schools. Below you will find a map of the essay structure, and we will be using this structure in all of our argumentative and persuasive essays. Introduction (3-4 sentences) 1.Hook – Attracts the readers attention and introduces the main idea 2.Bridge – Develops the topic enough to explain the thesis statement 3.Thesis Statement – Introduces the topic and controlling ideas of the essay Main body Paragraph 1 (5 sentences) 1.Topic sentence – Introduces the topic and controlling idea for this paragraph (this controlling idea should be linked to the thesis statement) 2.Development – The topic should be expanded and more information introduced (5W1H) 3.Evidence – An example/fact should be used to prove your opinion 4.Development – Further develop the fact and show how it proves your point 5.Concluding sentence – Pulls together and summarises main point from topic sentence and paragraph Main body Paragraph 2 (5 sentences) 1.Topic sentence – Introduces the topic and controlling idea for this paragraph (this controlling idea should be linked to the thesis statement) 2.Development – The topic should be expanded and more information introduced (5W1H) 3.Evidence – An example/fact should be used to prove your opinion 4.Development – Further develop the fact and show how it proves your point 5.Concluding sentence – Pulls together and summarises main point from topic sentence and paragraph Counter Argument (4-5 sentences) 1.Counter argument –Introduces opposition’s strongest argument 2.Refutation – Explain why that argument is not valid or appropriate 3.Example – Use an example to support your refutation 4.Development (optional) - Further develop the fact and show how it proves your point 5.Concluding sentence - Pulls together and summarises main point from refutation Conclusion 1.Restate thesis – Restate the main topic and controlling idea from the thesis statement (paraphrased) 2.Summary – Summarise the main points from the article to support your opinion 3.Conclusion – Create a new idea/thinking point based on the points raised in the article
托福综合写作7范文托福作文的综合写作应该写托福作文写作应该分为三个层次，也就是我们确定中心思想后应该找三个理由来支持。托福写作还有一个五段论，第一段为中心思想，二三四为支持段落，第五段总结观点。这个就是所谓的八股文。但是形式不能太明显，在表达中多加入自己的思想，八股文的形式会隐晦一些。一般这种写作可以助你在托福作文中取得高分。 构建综合写作整体，你可以从以下这几个方面入手：第一，将听力及阅读中的核心观点提炼出来，并指明对应的两个观点是支持还是对立；第二，分为几个段落，分别从不同角度总结出两个观点的论据。最后，重申主要论证观点并注意切忌掺加个人观点。听力结束后，考生还会有时间回看阅读文章，所以不用完整记忆阅读文章的论点和论据，记下核心即可。 有问题，可以再问我。 我觉得 ___老师讲的不太对，我自己本身也在 ___培训过，感觉他们讲的方法都是很过时的方法，不太适用于新托福的考试。下面是我自己考了四次托福的感想： 2、其实考试的时候，观点找错的情况似乎不太会发生。。。因为阅读里面都有提示了啊。。。一般不会弄错的，所以不用担心，
重点是细节不要搞错，要挺清楚细节说了那几点，尽量不要落下那个点，细节齐全 3、写得时候模板适当用用，但是表全部都用，那样文章就有点僵硬了，你自己读着通顺就好啊。 4、文章内部用词要有多样性，要适当地用一些高级的词汇，如重要的这个意思，你不要只用important, 这样显得你不认识多少单词，可以用significant, vital, essential, of great importance, core, 这种意思相近的单词或者是意群来表达，这样他们就认为你词汇量大了。 5、写综合写作最能体现你的词汇量和句型的多边性，所以不要直接照抄听力或者是阅读的内容，这样就表现不出你自己了，多看看新概念4里面的表达方法，哪些句型神马的都很好，对考试很有用！！！ 6、模板没有对错之分，你自己需要好一个模板，然后自己用自己弄出来的，这样比较好，不过这种东西都差不多，重点还是看个人的表达神马的，还有词汇量什么的。
As the economy and technology develop at an incredible speed in today’s society, there are an increasing number of people believing that the most important problems affecting our society today could be solved within our lifetime. In my view, however, this is out of the question and the three most significant problems affecting the society, namely war, environmental destruction and disease, will still influence us and may not be entirely resolved forever. War is a problem afflicting humans since they took into being in the first place. Wars take place when different countries have conflicting benefits, which is unlikely to be eliminated as long as the boundaries between countries still exist. For instance, in the Middle East where water is extremely scarce, many countries are in conflict in contention for water resources. Since every country acts for the sake of its own benefit, it seems that people in the region are incapable of living together in harmony. Eternal world peace, therefore, is unlikely to be achieved in our lifetime. Environmental destruction emerged not long before but it is becoming increasingly severe and can not be ignored. With the large-scale utilization of fossil fuels and rapid development of industry, huge amounts of pollutants are being produced, contaminating the environment to a large degree. The disposal of these pollutants being a tough task, it is hardly possible that we can completely get rid of them within a short period of time. Furthermore, even if we can come up with optimal methods for dealing with these substances, there remains the problem that these methods may cost too much and obstruct the development of economy. Last but not least, the well-being of people around the world is threatened by a variety of diseases, ranging from AIDS to cancer, the cures for which have not been discovered yet. Diseases set off panics among humans, affect their normal life and leave people badly off with the high medical expenses. There are thousands of scientists devoting themselves to finding cure for diseases, but new types of diseases keep emerging and there is no eliminating all of them. In summary, the problems with the most significance today are going to be passed on to our offspring. To eliminate these problems thoroughly, there is still a long way to go.
杜昶旭 说到范文，我想所有学习英文写作地同学都不会陌生，而且每个人几乎都能给自己一个理由来相信范文对于学习写作来说有至关重要，不可或缺地作用.最直接地一点，绝大多数人都是在“不会写”地时候开始想到看范文，并且希望能从范文中找到让自己“会写”地秘诀.可是，范文真地会有用么？如果有地话，范文会起到怎样地作用？我们又应该如何使用范文？文档来自于网络搜索 想要回答这些问题，我们先要搞清楚一个概念——什么是范文？当我们单纯思考这个概念地时候，可能所有人都能很清楚地知道范文地含义，无非就是对于某个题目来说写得很好地文章呗.再具体一点，对于托福、这样地标准化考试来说，满足考试地评分标准，能够在考试中获得高分地文章，我们就可以称之为“范文”.说到这儿，大家不妨想想自己是否真正地思考过你所看到地“范文”是否满足这两个条件：满足考试地评分标准；能够在考试中获得高分. 经过思考，你有没有发现，你曾经读过地大多数“范文”，其实未必满足这两个条件，而你却从来没有怀疑过它们作为“范文”地资格，就直接相信了.举个例子来说，市面上流行地作文范文集是非常多地，可是除了官方提供地范文以外，又有哪些文章是经过验证，真正能得到分地呢？有地同学会说，书地前言里作者说是分地文章啊……天哪，作者又不是地阅卷人，他怎么就确定是分呢？于是，“范文”地权威性就是首先需要被质疑地.文档来自于网络搜索 看到这里，有地同学会安慰自己了：“无所谓嘛，反正范文就算不是分，也是写地不错地，我也同样可以参考啊.”我这里姑且不说是不是真地“不错”（请参考上一段地思考过程，从什么叫“不错”开始想起），就算是真地“不错”吧，可是对于一篇文章来说，要想做到不错得有多少种写法呢？说一个最简单地例子，对于“春天”这个话题，历史上曾经有多少人写过？难道优秀地作品就只有一份？显然，对于同样地题目来说，想要得到高分，会出现许多写法，所以范文地写法并不是得到高分地充分必要条件，甚至连充分条件都不是！也就是说，按照范文地写法去写，未必能得高分；不按照范文地写法去写，也可能得到高分！所以，“范文”地通用性也是需要被质疑地.文档来自于网络搜索 又有同学还仍然在继续安慰自己：“好好好，就算上面两个我都承认，但是，范文里地句子，例子总是可以借鉴地吧？”我们先来说说例子吧，我曾经在《如何学习英文写作（一）》中谈到了“写什么”地问题，想不出例子地确是很多同学最痛苦地事情之一，于是，依赖于范文中写地几个例子就成为了这些同学唯一地选择.然而，这并不是一个好地习惯和方法.对于证明一个观点或者理由来说，我们会有无数个例子可以选择，而“范文”所提供地仅仅是其中地一种.我们姑且先认为“范文”地例子是“合适和准确”地，那也绝不是唯一可用地例子.更何况，对于这些例子是否“合适和准确”仍然需要具体情况具体分析.很多时候，同学们会用“想不出来”或者“想不出更好地”这样地理由来搪塞自己，从本质上说，同学们地这种想法还是思想懒惰和拒绝思考地结果.而从解决问题地角度来说，如果你不会做一件事儿，最主要地就是去学习如何解决，而不是选择逃避. 因此，正确地做法是努力让自己去想出新地例子来，或者参加同学地集体讨论.文档来自于网络搜索 再来看看句子.地确，英语当中有很多固定地句型结构，谁也没有权利要求你不去使用或者不去学习.但是，大量地可以使用地句子结构并不存在于所谓地“范文”中，而是在其他地于都材料里（比如托福和地阅读文章）.显然，同学地句子结构和表述方式匮乏已经成为很多人写作难以下笔地一个借口，而怎么解决这个问题，大多数人仍然迷茫.不用担心，这个问题我会专门写一篇文章来告诉大家如何解决，但是，绝不是看范文！如果说，你所读到地范文是一个写地，那我们可以认为它地句子结构是可以学习地；但如果范文是写地，那我很难相信里面地句子结构是准确并符合英语表述习惯地.文档来自于网络搜索 好了，如果你有耐心，并且仔细阅读和思考到了这里，那你应该会告诉自己，你所使用地“范文”集是应该继续被你每天背来背去，还是应该静静地躺在垃圾箱或者书橱里颐养天年了.如
托福独立写作高分范文4 ● 绝对词型 185题库 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best https://www.doczj.com/doc/8d9543019.html,e specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Obviously, in most cases the earliest teachers people have are their parents, and parents are generally most concerned about the development of their children. However, it is not completely true to say that parents are the best teachers. Parents may, nevertheless, help their children much more than do good teachers. Most parts of children education are virtually beyond teachers' reaches. It is parents that supplement. Psychology studies have shown us that parents' love sometimes has astonishingly magic power to their children. Forest Gump's mother is a good example. On the other hand, parents might do their children harm more than do bad teachers as well. The natures of those children whose parents have misbehaviors are often severely distorted. In reality, not all parents are good teachers. As normal individuals, some parents more or less have some bad habits. Even though parents almost instinctively devote themselves to cultivating their offspring, the outcome might turn out to be disappointment, for all children tend to unconsciously or subconsciously copy everything including bad ones from their parents. Another deficiency of parents as teachers is the fact that most parents are lack of common senses of education. All too often we observe some parents tend to pursue their cherished but failed dream by forcing their children to develop in a prearranged direction. Ironically, when their children do not follow the instructions, the children will be regarded as disobedient or allegedly rebellious. In fact, it is parents rather than their children that virtually disobey common senses. Moreover, some parents are qualified as good teachers, but not all of them are the best ones. When children are in the preliminary school, it is not surprising that parents are perhaps capable of teaching their children almost every subject even better than professional teachers in the school. But the situation will not last long. We live in a world where knowledge is accumulated by multiplying and at the same time becomes more and more specialized. Therefore, to be a professional in a certain field today takes much longer time than has ever been before. No parent is able to be professional in all fields, though they might be experts in one or more fields. Wise parents often release rather than charge their children as early as possible. They are aware of the possibility outside the family. In a word, it is rather superficial to simply say that parents are the best teachers.(403)
托福考试报名英文地址该怎么写？ 2014-05-26 11:04:58 来源: 新东方(北京) 在托福考试报名中，考生注册neea需要填写英文地址，对于一些不太了解英文地址写法的同学，填写起来可能会有一些困难，新东方网小编特意为您汇总整理英文地址的格式和常用名词，希望对各位托福报名考生有所帮助。 1、英文地址格式 和中文刚好相反，按地址单元从小到大的顺序从左到右书写，并且地址单元间以半角逗号分隔(,)，同时邮政编码可以直接写到地址中，其位置通常位于国家和省(周)之间，书写格式如下： xx室, xx号，xx路，xx区，xx市，xx省，xx国 下面我们看一个简单的例子： 上海市延安西路1882号东华大学186信箱(邮编：200051) Mailbox 186,1882 West Yan'an Rd.,Donghua University,Shanghai 200051 2、托福考试报名英文地址书写框
3、英文地址常用名词 *** 单元 Unit *** *** 省 *** Province *** 市 *** City *** 区 *** District *** 镇 *** Town *** 县 *** County *** 村(乡)*** Village *** 街 *** Street
*** 路 *** Road *** 公司 *** Com./Crop/LTD.CO *** 厂 *** Factory *** 花园 *** Garden *** 酒楼/酒店 *** Hotel *** 大学 *** University/College *** 号楼/幢 *** Building *** 住宅区/小区 *** Residential Quarter *** 巷/ 弄 *** Lane *** 楼/层 ***/F ***号宿舍 *** Dormitory *** 室/房 *** Room *** 号 *** No. *** 信箱 *** Mailbox 4、更多范例 虹口区西康南路125弄34号201室 Room 201, No.34, Lane 125, Xikang Road (South), Hongkou District 河南省南阳市中州路42号 No.42, Zhongzhou Road, Nanyang City, Henan Province
托福英语作文写作万能句模板 1.____ is now being questioned by more and more people. ____正受到越来越多人的质疑。 2. Although many people claim that, along with the rapidly economic development, the number of people who use ____ are decreasing and ____ is bound to die out. The information I've collected over the recent years leads me to believe that ____ will continue to play extremely important roles in modern society. 即使很多人认为随着经济的高速发展，用____的人数会减少， ____可能会消亡，不过，这几年我收集的一些信息让我相信 ____仍然会继续在现代社会发挥极其重要的作用。 3. experts point out that increasing ____ not only causes serious problems such as global warming but also could threaten to end human life on our planet. 专家指出：持续增加的污染不但会导致像世界变暖这样严重的问题，而且还将威胁到人类在这个星球的生存。 4. In view of such serious situation, environmental tools of transportation like ____ are more important than any time before. 考虑到这些严重的状况，我们比以往任何时候更需要像____这样的环保型交通工具。 5. Using ____ contributes greatly to people's physical fitness as well as ____. 使用____有助于人们的身体健康，并____。
托福写作辅导：托福考试满分作文欣赏（１） Which one do you prefer, to solve problems on your own experience and knowledge, or to ask others for advice? As knowledge and experience serve as twim towers in problem-solving, one is often presented with two major paths that pave the way for final fulfillment, eitther to wrack his brain, just like what happened to Neuton, siiting for many years under an apple tree and eventually figuring out ond of the greatest universal rules that govern the whole globe, or to seek for others ’ widsom through their advice, just as in the case of Benjinin Franklin, gathering great minds under one roof and then establishing a most world-renown libray. Both ways work. When a practical goal is involved, however, Benjimin Franklin may best be regareded as a role model in this respect and asking people for advice often turn out to be the prime alternative. Experience and knowledge borrowed or learned from others’ advice contribute greatly to effectiveness and effeciency for a goal-accomplishment. Not all experience and knowledge related to problem-solving can be obtained by personal effort alone due to limitations of mind and capabilities of each individual. A single thought in someone’s mind is, more often than not, far less shining compared with group ’s wisdom. That explains the famous old saying that one sees further when standing upon the shoulders’ of past great giants; that explains why a great leader is always with greater minds; that also explains why teamwork in corperation is highly emphasized in the 21st century. Brainstorm and exchange of ideas between different thoughts never fail to enhance capabilities of each individula involved, a team, a company, an institution, a country, or even the entire global village. Asking others’ advice instead of getting everything done on one’s own promotes democracy and communication too. In terms of democracy, it is necessary to give others rights and chances to speak since the problem may concern them in different ways, and their saying in turn reflects our respect toward freedom of speech as well as their wisdom. In terms of communication, idea exchange sometimes focuses more than solutions, and hereby better mutual understanding about perspectives, principles, praticalities and personalities of each other. Admittely turning to others for help and suggestion by no means refers to absolute and irresponsible dependence. Consideration upon different thoughts and ideas broadens our mind, enlarges our vision, furthers understanding, enhances more effective and efficient brainstorm, and stresses mutual respect in groups and communities, which undoubtedly gives rise to better, if not the best solutions. As is paraphrasedfrom John F Kenedy, brainstormed, there is little we cannot do while divided, there is little we can do. 托福写作辅导：托福考试满分作文欣赏(2) Case of Benjinin Franklin, gathering great minds under one roof and then establishing a most world-renown libray. Both ways work. When a practical goal is involved, however, Benjimin Franklin may best be regareded as a role model in this respect and asking people for advice often turn out to be the prime alternative. Experience and knowledge borrowed or learned from others' advice contribute greatly
托福独立写作高分范文 1 ●让步型 2012/2/25 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Two people can become gooe friends enen if one of them has more money than the other. Generally, I disagree with the statement that two people can be friends if one is richer than the other. In many TV, plays and movies, there is often the story of a poor boy and a rich girl eventually becoming friends. However, their fairytales only ever happen in fiction. In the reality, this never happens because rich and poor people have very different goals in life and very different lifestyles. To begin with, different goals in life between the rich and the poor are a vital barrier for them to become friends. Even from the beginning of their lives, they undertake different missions. Po or people’s goal in life is mostly to lead a decent life, and to be able to buy things such as a comfortable house and a functional car. However, rich people’s goal in life is to continue their parents’ business. For example, disadvantaged people are fight ing for survival in the cutting-throat competition of this society, such as paying the mortgage and the credit card, while rich people have to think about how to expand their family business in other countries. So they are not living in the same world and do not bear the same chance to know each other, let alone become friends. Second, the different ways of living prevent the friendship from taking shape between them. On this point, poor people will definitely repel rich people because they feel less confident. For example, when they finish their jobs, what can poor people afford to do every day is to simply go back home and be with their family members. Rich people, on the other hand, have many different choices in how to spend their free time. For instance, rich people can go to gulf club to enjoy the fresh air and indulge themselves in equestrian event or racecourse. Therefore, talking about the similar lifestyle which paves the road of friendship, these two groups of people are speaking different language. Admittedly, exceptions do exist in some special aspects. Basketball players serve as good examples. In NBA, about 50 percent of players were born in slums. However, when they finally earn tons of money, they still are contacting and helping their friends who were not rich at all. Allen Iverson is a NBA player, but he always holds the parties with his friends in slums and does what he can do to help his friend to get rid of poverty. All in all, in most cases, people with huge difference in their economic conditions cannot be friends for lack of lifestyle and life goals in common, despite few exceptions. (431) Collins 原版范文 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional methods of food preparation.