外研版九年级上册模块作文总结
话题一自然和旅行
你的美国朋友John 计划暑假来中国旅游。请你根据以下图示，用英语在QQ 中给他留言，介绍并推荐你的家乡南宁，词数80 左右。
Nanning : Location（位置）：south of China，capital of Guangxi
Population：over 38 million
Environment：air ，mountain ...
Places of interest ：Qingxiu Mountain，South Lake ...
Others ......
要求:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数;
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓、校名及提示信息以外的地名
【审题指导】
1. 体裁：应用文
2. 话题：介绍并推荐你的家乡福建
3. 人称：描述景点以第三人称为主，介绍个人观点用第一人称或第二人称
4. 时态：主要使用一般现在时
范文
Hi, John. I’m glad to hear that you’re planning to travel around China during the summer vacation. I’d like to invite you to my hometown Nanning for a visit.
Nanning lies in the south of China and it’s capital of Guangxi. It has a population of over 38 million. Because of the nice environment, it’s known as Green City, which attracts millions of tourists from home and abroad. If you come, you can enjoy fresh air, blue skies as well as beautiful mountains . Many famous places of interest like Qingxiu Mountain and South Lake are well worth visiting. Besides, you can taste various kinds of delicious food like Laoyou noodles.
I’m looking forward to meeting you!
话题二节假日
假如你是李明，你的英国笔友Mike给你发了一封电子邮件，想了解中秋节，请你向他介绍中秋节，内容包括：
要求：1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2.词数：80 词左右（开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
3.不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
【审题指导】
1. 体裁：说明文
2. 话题：介绍中秋节
3. 人称：以第一、二人称为主
4. 时态：通常使用一般现在时
【范文】
Dear Mike,
It’s fantastic that you will come to China and spend the Mid-Autumn Festival with a Chinese family.
August 15th is the middle of the fall of the year, so it is called the Mid-Autumn Festival. On that day, all our families get together and have a big dinner. We also eat moon cakes, enjoy the full moon and guess the riddles written on the lanterns.
As a guest, you must pay enough attention and give proper praise to the host when he introduces the dishes. Don’t use your chopsticks to pick a dish in the plate everywhere. Moreover, it is necessary to send gifts to important people during the Mid-Autumn Festival.
Enjoy your stay in China.
Li Ming
话题三英雄
请根据下文提供的信息, 用英语写一篇介绍航天英雄景海鹏的短文。
信息：1. 1966 年出生于山西。
2.2016 年10 月17 日与陈冬一起执行神舟十一号飞行任务。飞行时间：33 天；
飞行使命：与天宫二号完成对接；开展系列科学实验。
3. 曾三次执行太空飞行任务；2008 年获“英雄航天员”称号。
提示词：mission 使命；dock 对接；a series of 一系列
写作要求：1. 词数80 左右。 2. 根据要点提示，可以适当发挥。
【写作指导】
1. 体裁：记叙文
2. 话题：描写了景海鹏的人生经历
3. 人称：第三人称
4. 时态：主要使用一般过去时
范文
Jing Haipeng is our national hero. He was born in Shanxi Province in 1966. And he was an excellent pilot. Chen Dong and he went into space by China's Shenzhou XI Spacecraft on October 17th, 2016. Their mission was to dock with the
TiangongⅡSpace Laboratory and do a series of scientific experiments in the lab. They successfully have been sent up into space three times. He was awarded the title of
the“Hero Astronaut”in 2008. He will be remembered by all the people in China.
话题四Home alone
假如你是Daniel, 你们班这周英语角的话题是独自在家的安全性，请针对此话题写一篇短文来谈谈你的看法，并借此机会提高大家的安全意识吧! 词数：80左右。
【审题指导】
1. 体裁：议论文
2. 话题：谈谈独自在家的安全性
3. 人称：第一人称
4. 时态：主要使用一般现在时
【思路】
How to keep safe?DO
First, lock the door.
Then, be careful with...and keep some phone numbers in mind. DON’T Finally, we shouldn’t stay up too late.
范文
Sometimes we may stay at home alone so it’s important to keep ourselves safe. First, we should lock the door. If someone knocks at the door, make sure that we know the person before opening the door. Then we should be careful with fire and electricity. And we should keep some phone numbers in mind, such as 120, 110, 119 or those our parents’ phone numbers. Finally, although we can enjoy ourselves when we’re home alone, we shouldn’t stay up too late. Or we’ll feel sleepy next day.
话题五成长问题
假如你是Lucy，你的父母给你选了许多课外活动，报了各种培训班，但是你不喜欢，因为你觉得自己压力太大，平时功课已经很忙了。你打算如何向他们讲清楚却又不伤害他们呢？请你给父母写一封80词左右的信，信中要包括以下内容(可适当发挥)：
1．感谢父母为你付出的爱；
2．你为什么不喜欢他们给你选的课外活动；
3．你对父母的要求，建议他们怎样正确地关心孩子。
提示：activity，after-school class，freedom，push sb.so hard，plan，under so much
pressure
Dear Mum and Dad，
I'm very happy to live with you.
You choose many activities and many kinds of after-school classes for me.These are good for my study.It shows that you care about me very much.But I don't like them.I have too much homework every day.If you push me so hard，I'll have no freedom.I want some free time to plan for my weekend，such as making some friends，seeing a film and reading some books.I don't want to be under so much pressure.I don't think it's good for my study.I hope you can care for me in a right way.Thank you for your understanding!
Yours，
Lucy
话题六绿色环保
作为一名中学生, 在日常生活中应该怎样做才能保护我们的环境呢? 请根据下面的提示以“How to protect our environment”为题, 写一篇80 词左右的短文。
1. 禁止乱扔垃圾。
2. 尽量以步代车或骑自行车。
3. 节约用水、电，杜绝浪费。
4. ……
【审题指导】
范文
How to protect our environment
As students, what can we do to protect our environment? Here is my advice.
First, we can't throw away rubbish here and there. If possible, we should walk or ride a bike instead of taking a taxi or driving a car, because cars and taxis make a lot of pollution. Don't waste water or electricity . Always use reusable cups and lunch boxes so that we can reduce waste. Also, we should care for flowers and trees and take an active part in planting trees.
I believe that if everyone protects our environment, it will become better.
话题七运动
请你以“My Favourite Sport”为题，描述在日常生活中你最喜欢的一项体育运动。要求：内容完整，主题明确。
步骤构思列纲
1 开篇点题：确定你最喜欢的运动项目My favourite sport is…
2 具体描述：进行这项运动的时间及它
的特点
play…at weekends；
with friends；
dangerous but exciting
3 运动的益处make me strong，healthy and bright
1. 体裁：议论文
2. 话题：日常生活如何保护环境。
3. 时态：主要使用一般现在时。
范文
My Favourite Sport
My favourite sport is basketball. Basketball is popular among teenagers.I like it very much. I play basketball with my friends at weekends.Some people think playing basketball is more dangerous than some other sports. But it's an exciting sport.I think nothing is more exciting than playing basketball.Playing basketball makes me strong，healthy and bright.
九年级上册各模块话题作文总汇及范文 Module 1 （主题：旅游） 泰山位于山东省中部，是世界自然奇观之一。请你用英语就“游览泰山”这一话题写一篇短文。内容包括： 1.游览的时间，天气状况，乘坐的交通工具。 2.爬泰山时沿途看到的风景。 3.登顶时享受到的景色和感受。 作文要求：语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 Mount Tai in the centre of Shandong Province is one of the greatest wonders of the natural world. Many visitors all over the world visit it every year. Last Saturday I visited Mount Tai. When I arrived there at about 5:00 am by bus, it was raining. But as soon as I got out of the bus, I couldn’t wait to climb up the mountain. Luckily, ab out half an hour later, the clouds cleared and the rain stopped. Along the path I enjoyed lots of beautiful sights, such as the sea of clouds and strange rocks. When I arrived at the top of the mountain, the sun was just rising. I enjoyed the beautiful rising sun with thousands of tourists. I was tired but very excited. I hope to visit Mount Tai again next year! Module 2 （主题：节日） 母亲节是感恩母亲的日子，可是一些同学却忽视了这一节日。为了让学生能记住在母亲节时感恩母亲，你班将要举办以“母亲节”为题的英语演讲比赛。现在请你准备一篇80词左右的演讲稿参加比赛。短文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 写作要点： 1.母亲节的时间（五月第二个星期日）。 2.人们在母亲节所做的事。 3.明年母亲节的计划（你想为母亲所做的两件事）。 Mother’s Day is a day to show thanks to mothers. It is on the second Sunday of May every year. On that day, people usually give their mothers some flowers and help them with housework. When the sons or the daughters live or work or study very far from homes, they usually send some cards to show their thanks and best wishes to their mothers. On Mother’s Day next year, I’m going to do something special to show my love to my mother. First, I’m going to make a beautiful ca rd with my thanks and best wishes on it. Then, I’ll cook a delicious dinner for her.I’m sure my mother will be very happy. That’s all! Thanks! Module 3 （主题：英雄） 在学习和生活中，帮助你，影响你的人都可能会成为你尊敬的英雄。假设你尊敬的英雄就是你的英语老师，请根据下列要点写一篇80字左右的英语短文。 1.英语老师大约40岁，耐心，友好，喜欢笑。 2.学习上，经常鼓励我；当我生病时，细心照顾我。 3.十多年来，一直在资助贫困的孩子们。 4.……补充1-2点对老师的评价及感想 范文： My English teacher is Mr. Zhang. He is about 40 years old. Mr. Zhang is very patient and friendly. He often smiles while he is talking. When I have problems in study, he always encourages me. When I am ill, he takes good care of me, so he is like my father. What’s more, he has helped lots of poor children for more than ten years so that they can have a chance to get a good education. I think my English teacher is a great hero. I will help others like him in the future. He sets a good example to us. Module 4 （主题：计划） 假设你的父母因事要离开你一天，你如何安排自己的生活和学习呢? 英语老师要求学生以此话题在课下进行讨论。现在请你根据以下要点写一篇80字左右的英语发言稿在明天的英语课上发言。 1.在前一天晚上，为自己制定一个计划。 2.我会把钟调到6点叫醒我，以免上课迟到。 3.早餐喝牛奶吃面包，中午在学校吃午饭。 4.放学后，首先完成作业，然后……(补充你会做的事及原因) 范文： If my parents leave me home alone for a day, how will I plan for my life and study? On the night before the day, I will make a plan for myself. I will make sure the clock will wake me up at 6:00 in the morning so that I
九年级上册单元作文范文 1、根据中文提示和英文提示词语，写一篇短文。 今年暑假，你们学校将组织你们前往澳大利亚参加友好活动。学校要求你们写一篇有关北京的简介，以便在交流活动期间向外国朋友介绍和宣传北京。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 所提供的英文提示词语必须涉及。 提示词语：capital of China, lie in the north, many places of interest, autumn, best season, Chinese traditional food… _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______ 范文： Beijing is the capital of China with a long history. There are lots of places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace and so on. Since it lies in the north of China, the winter here is long and it snows sometimes. Autumn is the best season in Beijing, for it is neither too cold nor too hot. One of the most famous traditional foods is Beijing duck. We held the 2008 Olympic Games successfully. By hosting the Olympic, we have had the chance to let the world know more about China and Beijing. So come to Beijing and you’ll enjoy it. 2、以“My favourite book”为题，写一篇不少于60词的英文短文。 范文： My favourite book My favourite book is Harry Potter. It’s written by J. K. Rowling. Harry Potter is a magical school student who wears glasses and has no parents. He is very brave and clever. When I first read the book, I found it very exciting and interesting. So I read it again and again, each time I have different feelings. Now the book is very popular with young students. If you haven’t read the book yet, read it now and you’ll find a wonderful world. 3、随着阳关体育运动在全国的开展，“每天锻炼一小时，健康工作50年，幸福生活一辈子”的理念深入人心，校园里出现了可喜的变化：运动时间延长了，运动项目增加了，学生体质增强了，校园生活丰富了。请以“Sports in Our School”为题给校刊写一篇报道。 内容要点提示： 1.time for sports 2. kinds of sports 3. changes of student s’ health and study 4. change of school life 要求：1、80词左右，可适当发挥；2、文中不得出现真实的地名和人名。 范文： Sports in our school Sports in our school have changed a lot. Now we have more than three P.E. classes a week, and we have at least one hour to exercise every day.
外研版-九年级上册-重点语法总结 Module 1 时态复习，到目前为止，我们已经学过了英语中常用的时态，包括一般现在时、一般过去时、现在进行时、过去进行时、一般将来时和现在完成时。在本模块中，我们将对这些时态的用法进行总结。 首先，我们将本模块中出现的有代表性的句子归纳如下： 1.一般现在时 （1）定义： 一般现在时表示经常或习惯性的动作或一般性事实。 （2）用法： ①表示事物或人物的特征、状态。如：The sky is blue.天空是蓝色的。 ②表经常反复性发生的动作。如：I get up at six every day.我每天六点起床。 ③表示客观现实。如：The earth goes around the sun.地球绕着太阳转。 ④表示平日的喜好。I like bananas. We don’t like vegetables. （3）构成： ①be动词：主语+be(am,is,are)+其它。如：I am a boy.我是一个男孩。 ②行为动词：主语+行为动词(+其它)。如：We study English.我们学习英语。 当主语为第三人称单数(he, she,it等)时，动词词尾有所变化。 第三人称单数动词词尾的变化有几种形式： ①一般情况加-s reads, says, takes ②sh、ch、s、x、o结尾的加-es teaches, washes, goes, misses, mixes ③以辅音字母加y结尾的词变y为i再加-es studies, cries, carries 如：Mary likes Chinese.玛丽喜欢汉语。 Miss Gu teaches us English. 顾老师教我们英语。 （4）句式变化： ①be动词的变化。 否定句：主句+be+not+其它。如：He is not a worker.他不是工人。 一般疑问：Be+主语+其它。 如：-Are you a student? -Yes，I am. / No,I’m not. 特殊疑问句：特殊疑问词+一般疑问句。如：Where is my bike? ②行为动词的变化。 否定句：主语+don’t(doesn’t )+动词原形(+其它)。如：I don’t like bread. 当主语为第三人称单数时，要用doesn’t构成否定句。如：He doesn’t often play... 一般疑问句：Do( Does )+主语+动词原形+其它。如：- Do you often play football? - Yes,I do. / No,I don’t. 当主语为第三人称单数时，要用does构成一般疑问句。
M1 根据中文提示和英文提示词语，写一篇短文。 暑假已经结束了，你一定旅游过很多地方，去北京旅游了吗？请你根据提示写一篇有关北京的简介，以便宣传北京。 注意：1. 80词左右； 2. 所提供的英文提示词语必须涉及。 提示词语：capital of China, lie in the north, many places of interest, autumn, best season, Chinese traditional food… Beijing is the capital of China with a long history. There are lots of places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace and so on. Since it is in the north of China, it is very long here and it snows sometimes. Autumn is the best season in Beijing because it is neither too cold nor too hot. One of the most famous traditional foods is Beijing duck. We held the 2008 Olympic Games successfully. Because of the Olympics, we have had the chance to let the world know more about China and Beijing. So if you have time , plese come to Beijing and you’ll enjoy it. 2.长城有两千多年的历史, 全长约6,700公里, 它是世界上最伟大的人工 (man-made)奇迹之一. 请根据所给提示及你对长城的认识，向外国游客作一介绍。要求70词左右. The Great Wall is one of the greatest man-made wonders in the world. It’s about 6,700 met ers long, 6.7 meters high and 4.5 meters wide, with a history of over 2,000 years. From far distance, it looks like a huge dragon. All the work was finished by hand. Many people gave their lives to build it. Now it has become a place of interest. Many people from all over the
写作论证要合理 【目标导航】 1.论点要正确、鲜明。 2.论据要真实、充分，有较强的说服力。 3.论证必须符合正确的推理形式。 4.写驳论性质的文章要做到对准靶子、抓住要害、注意分寸。 【课时安排】 2课时。 【课时分配】 建议第一课时进行作文指导与写作，第二课时进行批改、评讲、修改。 了解作文文题，熟悉作文要求，搜集相关素材，为习作做准备。 一、《怀疑与学问》一文中指出，做学问不要盲从或迷信，要有怀疑的精神。请你也写一段文字论证这一观点。200字左右。 二、俗话说：“知足常乐。”有的人却说：“知足未必常乐。”试围绕“知足与快乐”这一话题，自定立意，自拟标题，写一篇议论文。不少于600字。 三、中国有句古话，叫“有钱能使鬼推磨”。对此，你怎么看？请自定立意，自拟题目，写一篇驳论文。不少于600字。 【新课导入】 写作议论文，不论是立论还是驳论，都要摆事实讲道理，也就是要进行论证。论证，就是围绕观点，把经过选择的论据组织起来，使二者有机结合，从而推导出令人信服的合理的结论。今天这节课，我们就共同探讨如何做到论证合理。【写作要求】
1.在标题或者文章开头，明确表达自己的观点。 2.恰当安排论证的结构，注意层次清晰，逻辑严密。 3.注意对运用的材料进行分析，突出材料对观点的支撑或证明作用。 【技法点拨】 1．例证法列出观点后举出具体实例证明观点的例证法在议论文中用得最多最广。它也是卓有成效的一种推理方法。因为任何观点不能孤立存在，而事实胜于雄辩，最具说服力，所以例证法是一般议论文都要用到的。 2.因果法通过对事理原因或结果的周密分析，从而证明论点的正确性、合理性的一种论证方法。也称为因果分析法。事物都有自己的原因和结果，从结果中找原因，或从原因推导结果，就是找出事物产生、发展的来龙去脉和规律，这就起到了证明论点的合理性和正确性的作用。 3.引证法引用经典作家的言论、科学原理、人尽皆知的常理等作为论据来直接证明论点的论证方法。引用的东西，用来作讲道理的依据。恰如其分的语言表达，利于友情的沟通。 4.对比法这是一种常用的、有说服力的论证方法。把两种事物加以对照、比较，从而推导出它们之间的差异点，使结论映衬而出的论证方法。也称比较法。事物的特征和本质在对比中最容易显露出来，特别是正反相互对立的事物的比较，具有极大的鲜明性，能给人留下深刻的印象。经过对比，正确的论点更加稳固。 5.比喻法比喻是一种修辞手法。从这个角度讲，议论文中运用比喻，是以具体的事物把抽象的道理形象地表达出来，借以增强文章的感染力。因而又常借用比喻的方法来进行论证。 【范文引路】 放弃是一种美德 人必须随时准备好放下些什么，比如爱情，比如成功，这样，生活才会更主动些。 ——题记这段话，是博尔赫斯《沙之书》中的一个片断，也许大师说得更深奥些。可大意如此，不会错。
初三英语写作公开课课教学设计 双沙中学李育新 2011.6.2 课型：专题复习课 教学内容：初三英语书面表达专题复习 教学目标： 1.指导学生掌握书面表达语篇结构的组织技巧。 2.帮助学生学会使用常用的连接词、过渡词和过渡句，提高文章的连贯性。 3.培养学生在有限的时间内快速构思、罗列提纲的能力。 4. 指导学生小组合作评改学生习作。 教学重点：1.帮助学生学会使用常用的连接词、过渡词和过渡句，提高文章的连贯性。 2. 培养学生在有限的时间内快速构思、罗列提纲及扩展成文的能力 教学难点：1.帮助学生学会使用常用的连接词、过渡词和过渡句，提高文章的连贯性。 2. 培养学生在有限的时间内快速构思、罗列提纲及扩展成文的能力讨论法 教学方法：自主学习，合作学习 教学辅助手段：电脑（或实物投影仪） 学情分析： 1. 书面表达是写的一种途径，是英语交际的重要组成部分。初中阶段对于英语写作的要求，实际上是“有指导的写作”(Guided Writing)。它通过提供情景(文字、图画、表格)，让学生用学过的英语语言来描述事物或事件并表达一定的思想，以此达成和检验对所学英语语言知识的实践应用能力。客观地说，书面表达一直是我们英语教学的一个难点，也是学生应试的一个难点。 从中考英语试卷的抽样调查情况来看，英语写作是得分最为薄弱的一个题项。究其原因，一是学生写作练习的时间少，二是教师平时缺乏对学生进行系统的写作知识的指导。（比如，如何用词、句、组段、谋篇等）。这些原因造成了学生从最初不会写盲目写到不愿写。惧怕写，直至最后拒绝写的恶性循环。 2. 学生分析我校学生生源较差，学生英语学习两级分化严重，因此尽管经过3年的学习与训练，仍有相当一部分学生作文得分在6-7分之间甚至更低。书面表达中式英语较多，连贯性较差。很多学生对书面表达中快速构思和罗列提纲能力较差。本堂课希望通过指导、帮助提高学生学会使用常用的连接词、过渡词和过渡句，提高文章的连贯性,帮助学生在有限的时间内快速构思、罗列提纲能力。 二、教学流程设计
外研版英语九年级上册知识点总结 Module 1 Wonders of the world 短语归纳 1.wonders of the world世界奇观 natural wonders 自然奇观man-made wonders 人造奇观 2.join in参加；加入(活动) = take part in 3. I’m not sure. 我不确信 4. agree with sb. 同意某人的看法sb. agree with sth. 某人适应（食物、气候）agree to do sth. 同意做某事agree to sth.(plan /decision/suggestion) 同意/赞成agree on sth.( plan/ ) 在……方面意见一致 5. on the eastern coast of ...在、、、、、、的东海岸 6. in one’s opinion据某人看来;按某人的意见 7. more than = over 多于，超过8. produce electricity 供电 9. millions of 数百万的；数以百万计的 10. would like to do sth. = want to do sth. 想做某事 Would like sb. to do sth. 想要某人做某事 11. early morning 大清早12. become grey变成灰色 13. get out of ...从....出来 14. go through 意为“穿过，强调从物体内部穿过”；从头至尾的练习 15. fall away突然向下倾斜 16. look over 从（某物上面）看过去：仔细检查 look across眺望 look down to 俯视;向下看 17. on top of 在.....顶部18. at the bottom of在.....的底部 19. on both sides在两边20. be famous for意为“以.......而闻名” 21. do an interview做采访do an interview with sb. 采访某人 22. draw a picture of 画一副......的图画23. go down下去；下沉；坠落 24. wait for 等候25. dozens of 许多 26. in height高度；在高度上 用法集萃 1.agree with sb 同意某人agree to do sth 同意做某事 2.would like to do sth 想要做某事 3.in +一段时间在.....（多长时间）之后，常用于回答How soon 的提问 4.have been/gone to 以及have been in的区别 5.because of+名词因为。。。。。 6.without doing sth 没有做某事 7.be afraid of doing sth. / be afraid to do sth. 害怕做某事 8.one of +the +形容词最高级+可数名词复数最......的.....之一 9.look forward to doing sth 盼望做某事 Module 2 Public holidays 短语归纳 1. since then 从那以后 2. have a three-day holiday 有三天的假期 3. public holiday 公众假日 4. have one day off 有一天的休息时间 5. all kinds of 各种各样的 6. take a vacation spend a vacation 度假介词短语：on / for vacation
篇一：初三英语写作公开课课教案 初三英语写作公开课课教学设计 双沙中学李育新 2011.6.2 课型：专题复习课 教学内容：初三英语书面表达专题复习 教学目标： 1.指导学生掌握书面表达语篇结构的组织技巧。 2.帮助学生学会使用常用的连接词、过渡词和过渡句，提高文章的连贯性。 3.培养学生在有限的时间内快速构思、罗列提纲的能力。 4. 指导学生小组合作评改学生习作。 教学重点： 1.帮助学生学会使用常用的连接词、过渡词和过渡句，提高文章的连贯性。 2. 培养学生在有限的时间内快速构思、罗列提纲及扩展成文的能力 教学难点：1.帮助学生学会使用常用的连接词、过渡词和过渡句，提高文章的连贯性。 2. 培养学生在有限的时间内快速构思、罗列提纲及扩展成文的能力讨论法 教学方法：自主学习，合作学习 教学辅助手段：电脑（或实物投影仪） 学情分析： 1. 书面表达是写的一种途径，是英语交际的重要组成部分。初中阶段对于英语写作的要求，实际上是“有指导的写作”(guided writing)。它通过提供情景(文字、图画、表格)，让学生用学过的英语语言来描述事物或事件并表达一定的思想，以此达成和检验对所学英语语言知识的实践应用能力。客观地说，书面表达一直是我们英语教学的一个难点，也是学生应试的一个难点。 从中考英语试卷的抽样调查情况来看，英语写作是得分最为薄弱的一个题项。究其原因，一是学生写作练习的时间少，二是教师平时缺乏对学生进行系统的写作知识的指导。（比如，如何用词、句、组段、谋篇等）。这些原因造成了学生从最初不会写盲目写到不愿写。惧怕写，直至最后拒绝写的恶性循环。 2. 学生分析我校学生生源较差，学生英语学习两级分化严重，因此尽管经过3年的学习与训练，仍有相当一部分学生作文得分在6-7分之间甚至更低。书面表达中式英语较多，连贯性较差。很多学生对书面表达中快速构思和罗列提纲能力较差。本堂课希望通过指导、帮助提高学生学会使用常用的连接词、过渡词和过渡句，提高文章的连贯性,帮助学生在有限的时间内快速构思、罗列提纲能力。 二、教学流程设计 课后反思： 本节课从提问学生写作中最大的困惑入手，引出本节课的主要教学目标，在写作中学会构思和使用连词。通过比较两篇学生的英语习作，让学生认识到连词在英语写作中的重要性。通过分析一篇学生的范文，让学生了解怎样去运用关联词，怎样去组织一篇文章，最后让学生根据提供的材料完成一篇习作，并互相评价，修改。 我认为本节课在以下几个方面处理得较好： 1. 课堂教学组织严谨，教学各个环节环环相扣，很流畅，由提问引出主题，通过比较学生习作认识到连词使用的重要，通过分析学生习作教学生学会怎么运用，最后进行实践。 2. 学生书信写作练习的设计比较新颖。从一位学困生的角度，用广州话说出对老师的感激，及今后的打算，容易引起学生写作的兴趣。 3. 考虑到本校学生生源的实际情况，写作任务经过了层层分解，从文章结构的构思，到语言的组织，时态的运用等给足了提示，使写作任务的难度降低了，让大部分学生都可以完成写作任务。
人教版九年级英语Unit 5写作课教学设计 were used by were used for are made of are regard as When …are used…? Sky lanterns are a kind of Chinese traditional art. Let’s say something about them. a free talk with students about the famous products in Ezhou. the conversation should have some information in 3a. Step 2：Before-writing Show students the picture of Ya Hui duck neck. Have a free talk with them about the duck neck like the following. T: What is it? Do you know? S: Ya Hui duck neck(可用汉语说：雅惠鸭脖子) T: Do you know some details about it? Let’s have a look.
鸭脖子制作过程： Step 3：While-writing the students to make up sentences about Ya Hui neck duck using the information and the questions in 3a. T: We’ve know something about Ya Hui neck duck. Let’s look through the information and the questions in 3a. Then fill in the chart using the information. What the product is What it is made of/from Who it is made by Where it is made What it can do Why it is special After they finish, let the students check their answers with their partners. Then choose some students to answer the questions using full sentences. the students write the article using the sentence patterns in 3b. When they’re writing, the teacher walks around the classroom. Give the students some help if they need. Step4：After-writing 1. After the students finish their articles, show them an evaluation criterion (评价标准) on the screen. Let the students exchange their articles to correct.
1： 走过雨季 每当听到17岁那年的雨季我感慨万千，也许少了童年的稚气，但是那风舞的季节总是无情， 牵动落泪的丝绪！ 我感动过，因为勇敢者的行为号召世人迈着前进的步伐！回想往事，我便少了一份童真，其实这也是一种流逝！ 不管纯真年代是否还存在，我都不会去追问青春无悔！5.12大地震让我追随那勇敢者的魅力，亲吻伟大祖国！ 岁月似流水，生命如夏花！也许我记念过去崇尚未来！上天总喜欢开玩笑，而人们喜欢傻笑，那我喜欢微笑于他人！ 我时时走在热闹的大街上，不时回望那一张张不熟悉的脸，也许是年领的限定，我总是生活在疼痛与忧伤的季节里！ 那也正如实而不华的佳果，也如美酿！ 诗云： 青春逝了，雨季别了！ 我愿追风而舞了！ 我如愿丢失去了！ 我不知前路的去向了！ 风在舞动，我心飞翔！ 她走在雨季中了！ 他追着去了！ 他她们沉醉其中了！ 不经意的逝去了， 我却盼望了， 雨季就这么走了， 而我们也成长了！ 我轻松走过雨季，回望来时的路，也是别样景色！总是一份忧伤自扰，何必多一些烦恼，少了一份宁静呢？路在脚下， 我们得一步一个脚印的走下去！那么一路疯狂，一路向阳！ 例文2： 雨的自述 风中的云，轻飘飘的在空中游荡。渐渐的，云厚了，重了，灰了。而我就在此时离开了她，来到这给世界，我轻飘飘的落在田圃，滋润田野，落到长河中，交织出悠扬的曲子，落入海洋里，成为永不会消失的水。 我刚烈，无所畏惧，伴着霹雳，带着风的怒吼，雷的咆哮，来到北方的土地上，编奏着自己的交响乐。我打在屋顶上，溅起层层水花，打在窗户上，啪啪直响。我像一片巨大的瀑布，从东南横扫着北方的土地。雷在低低的云层中轰响着，为我伴奏，闪电时而用它那耀眼的白光，划破黑沉沉的夜空，照出狂风中狂乱地摆着的田禾，一条条金线似的鞭打着大地的我和在雨中吃力地迈动着脚步的人影，我虽然无所畏惧，但我的生命却很短，只有短短一刹那，渐渐的我就被那刚从云后跳出的太阳征服了。 我轻轻柔柔，缠缠绵绵，淅淅沥沥，丝丝缕缕，我迷恋江南的景色，远山近水，亭台楼阁，水面无波，垂柳婀娜，一片静谧，我迫不急待的争脱云的士束缚，进入这画中世界，去聆听、去欣赏、去感触。所以我总是轻轻柔柔，绵绵，淅淅沥沥，丝丝缕缕，朦朦胧胧，人们笔下的江南，天地间烟雨茫茫，茫茫烟雨，雨也朦胧，景也朦胧，人也朦胧， 待雨过天晴，被我洗涤一新的江南又出现在蓝莹莹的碧空下，变得丰姿绰约，宛若刚出的美人，碧玉般洁净，兰花般可爱，亭亭玉立，脉脉含情，呵，江南如此娇美，不也有我一份功劳吗，
九年级上册各模块话题作文总汇及范文Module 1 （主题：旅游） 泰山位于山东省中部，是世界自然奇观之一。请你用英语就“游览泰山”这一话题写一篇短文。内容包括： 1.游览的时间，天气状况，乘坐的交通工具。 2.爬泰山时沿途看到的风景。 3.登顶时享受到的景色和感受。 作文要求：语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 Mount Tai in the centre of Shandong Province is one of the greatest wonders of the natural world. Many visitors all over the world visit it every year. Last Saturday I visited Mount Tai. When I arrived there at about 5:00 am by bus, it was raining. But as soon as I got out of the bus, I couldn’t wait to climb up the mountain. Luckily, ab out half an hour later, the clouds cleared and the rain stopped. Along the path I enjoyed lots of beautiful sights, such as the sea of clouds and strange rocks. When I arrived at the top of the mountain, the sun was just rising. I enjoyed the beautiful rising sun with thousands of tourists. I was tired but very excited. I hope to visit Mount Tai again next year! Module 2 （主题：节日） 母亲节是感恩母亲的日子，可是一些同学却忽视了这一节日。为了让学生能记住在母亲节时感恩母亲，你班将要举办以“母亲节”为题的英语演讲比赛。现在请你准备一篇80词左右的演讲稿参加比赛。短文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 写作要点： 1.母亲节的时间（五月第二个星期日）。 2.人们在母亲节所做的事。 3.明年母亲节的计划（你想为母亲所做的两件事）。 Mother’s Day is a day to show thanks to mothers. It is on the second Sunday of May every year. On that day, people usually give their mothers some flowers and help them with housework. When the sons or the daughters live or work or study very far from homes, they usually send some cards to show their thanks and best wishes to their mothers. On Mother’s Day next year, I’m going to do something special to show my love to my mother. First, I’m going to make a beautiful ca rd with my thanks and best wishes on it. Then, I’ll cook a delicious dinner for her. I’m sure my mother will be very happy. That’s all! Thanks! Module 3 （主题：英雄） 在学习和生活中，帮助你，影响你的人都可能会成为你尊敬的英雄。假设你尊敬的英雄就是你的英语老师，请根据下列要点写一篇80字左右的英语短文。 1.英语老师大约40岁，耐心，友好，喜欢笑。 2.学习上，经常鼓励我；当我生病时，细心照顾我。 3.十多年来，一直在资助贫困的孩子们。 4.……补充1-2点对老师的评价及感想 范文： My English teacher is Mr. Zhang. He is about 40 years old. Mr. Zhang is very patient and friendly. He
Module 1 （主题：旅游） ①.泰山位于山东省中部，是世界自然奇观之一。请你用英语就“游览泰山”这一话题写一篇短文。内容包括： 1.游览的时间，天气状况，乘坐的交通工具。 2.爬泰山时沿途看到的风景。 3.登顶时享受到的景色和感受。 作文要求：语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 Mount Tai in the centre of Shandong Province is one of the greatest wonders of the natural world. Many visitors all over the world visit it every year. Last Saturday I visited Mount Tai. When I arrived there at about 5:00 am by bus, it was raining. But as soon as I got out of the bus, I couldn’t wait to climb up the mountain. Luckily, about half an hour later, the clouds cleared and the rain stopped. Along the path I enjoyed lots of beautiful sights, such as the sea of clouds and strange rocks. When I arrived at the top of the mountain, the sun was just rising. I enjoyed the beautiful rising sun with thousands of tourists. I was tired but very excited. I hope to visit Mount Tai again next year! 要求：1 2．词数：100词左右(已给出的开头不计入总词数)。 Welcome to Liu Gong Island The summer vacation is coming. Where would you like to visit? Haven't you decided? Come to Liu Gong Island! Liu Gong Island which covers/has __an_area_of__ 3.15 km2/square kilometres is__in_the_east_of__ Weihai. It is 4.08 km/kilometres long/in length, 1.5 km/kilometres wide/in width. It only takes you 20 minutes to __get_to__ the island from the travel port by ship./It's 20 minutes' ship ride from land. The history museum on the island is educational. The zoo is interesting to visit. And it is exciting/more interesting to travel/tour around the island either on land or by boat. There are __all_kinds_of__ trees and grass everywhere./It is covered with grass and trees. It is very easy to travel/come to Weihai. You can come by bus, by train or by plane. You can spend a day happily on the island./You will have a happy/nice/wonderful day on the island.It is a good place to visit/is worth visiting. Visitors/Tourists from __all_o v er_the_w orld__ come to visit it every year. Wish you a good trip! ③.假如你刚从海南岛回来，请用英语写一篇关于海南岛的报道。词数：60—90。不要署名。内容包括以下要点： 1．中国第二大海岛；2．气候温暖，空气新鲜； 3．有海滩，有高大的椰子树；4．可以游泳、钓鱼、划船等； 5．海口市是海南岛的省会，也是海南岛最大的城市；6．可以品尝各种海鲜。 参考词汇：island岛，coconut palm tree椰子树，seafood海鲜 Hainan Island is in the southern part of our country. On Hainan Island, you could enjoy bright sunshine, fresh air and beautiful scenery. You w ill ne v er forget that. Haikou city is the capital of Hainan Pro v ince w hile it is also the biggest city on the island. You could either go to v isit the flo w er markets or enjoy the delicious seafood. You could find many beautiful beaches. People lo v e w alking along the seaside or s w imming in the sea. There are many tall coconut palm trees to see. Welcome to Hainan Island!I'm sure you w ill ha v e a good time there. Module 2 （主题：节日） ①母亲节是感恩母亲的日子，可是一些同学却忽视了这一节日。为了让学生能记住在母亲节时感恩母亲，你班将要举办以“母亲节”为题的英语演讲比赛。现在请你准备一篇80词左右的演讲稿参加比赛。短文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。