1.说明涨价原因
? ? Dear Sir or Madam:
? ? Enclosed is our new price list which will come into effect the end of this month. You will see that we have increased our prices on most models. We have, however, refrained from doing so on some models of which we hold large stocks. The explanation for our increased prices stems from the fact that we are now paying 10% more for our raw materials than we were paying last year, along with some of our subcontractors having raised their prices as much as 15%.
? ? As you know, we take great pride in our product an dare proud of the reputation for quality and dependability we have built over 15years. We will not compromise that reputation because of raising costs. We have, therefore, decided to raise the price of some of our products.
? ? We hope you will understand our position and look forward to your cooperation.
? ?? ?2. 说服买家涨价之前下单
? ? Dear Sir or Madam:
? ? This is regarding our quotation dated 2 November, and our mail offer dated 8 November concerning the supply of widgets(小机具).We are prepared to keep our offer open until the end of this month. ? ? For your information, the market is firm and growing. There is very little likelihood of any significant change in the visible future. As this product is in great demand and the supply is limited, to secure your order, we would recommend that you accept this offer without delay. ? ? ?3.对价格作出让步
? ? Dear Sir or Madam:
? ? Thank you for your mail. We are disappointed to hear that our price for your required product is too high for your acceptance. You mentioned that Japanese goods are being offered to you at a price approximately 8% lower than our quote.
? ? We accept your position, but we are of the opinion that the quality of the other makes does not measure up to that of our products. Although we are keen to do business with you, we regret that we cannot accept your counter offer.
? ? We do want to try and work with you, and meet your request, but the best we can do is to reduce our previous quotation by 3%.We hope that this will meet your approval.
? ? We look forward to hearing from you.
? ? 4.答复在30日有效期的信用状付款的建议
? ? Dear Sir or Madam:
? ? Thank you for your order of 500b/w TV sets by your letter dated 17 July.
? ? We have considered your proposal to pay by a 30-day letter of credit. We do not usually accept time credit; however, in view of our long and mutually beneficial relationship, we are willing to make an exception this time.
? ? I must stress that this departure from our usual practice relates to this transaction only. This one-time accommodation does not set a precedent for future transactions.
? ? I am enclosing our sales contract covering the order. I would be grateful if you would follow the usual procedure.? ?
? ?5. 答复直接付款的要求
? ? Dear Sir or Madam:
? ? Thank you for your letter dated 2 October requesting payment against documents for contracts and 483.
? ? We are pleased to say that we agree to your request. We wish, however, to make it clear that in our future transactions, involved for each transaction is less than US$5,000 or the equivalent in Renminbi. Should the amount exceed that figure, payment by letter of credit will be required.
? ? We would like to say that this exception is allowed only in light of our long and mutually beneficial association.? ?
? ? 6.同意修改付款条件
? ? Dear Sir or Madam:
? ? We thank you for your letter dated 6 June and are pleased to acknowledge your order No. 463 of the same date for ceramic tiles.
? ? The modified terms of payment you propose are quite acceptable and a telex has been dispatched to you to this effect.
? ? All the items in your order can be supplied from stock and will be packed and shipped immediately upon the remittance by telegraphic transfer being received.
? ? The following documents will be air mailed to you immediately after shipment is made:
? ? 1. Bill of lading in duplicate
? ? 2. Invoice, FOB Shanghai in triplicate
? ? 3. Guarantee of quality
? ? We will, of course, notify you by telex as soon as your order is shipped.
? ? You can rely on us to give prompt attention to this and any future orders you may place with us.
? ?7. 就要求以承兑交单付款作答复
? ? Dear Sir or Madam:
? ? Thank you for your request for a trial delivery of ceramic resistors but regret to say that we cannot agree to your proposal.
? ? As an exception, the best we can do for the trial delivery is to offer you direct payment at sight terms.
? ? If you accept our proposal, you run very little risk, since our brand products are well known for the quality, attractive design and reasonable price. Our lines sell very well all over the world and have done so for the last 30 years. We do not think you will have any difficulty in achieving a satisfactory performance with this item.
? ? If you find our proposal acceptable, please let us know and we can then expedite the transaction. ? ?8. 要求开立信用状
? ? Dear Sir or Madam:
? ? This is in regards to your order for 5,000widgets and our sales confirmation No. 341. We would like to remind you that the delivery date is approaching and we have not yet received the covering letter of credit.
? ? We would be grateful if you would expedite the establishment of the L/C so that we can ship the order on time. In order to avoid any further delay, please make sure that the L/C instructions are in precise accordance with the terms of the contract.
? ? We look forward to receiving your response at an early date.? ?
? ? 9.修改信用状
? ? Dear Sir or Madam:
? ? Your letter of credit issued by the Royal Bank of Canada has arrived.
? ? Upon further examination, we have found that transshipment and partial shipment are not allowed. ? ? As direct sailings to Portugal are infrequent, we have to transshipment may be necessary. With regard to partial shipment, it would speed matters up if we have in stock instead of waiting for the whole shipment to be completed.
? ? With this in mind, I send you a letter today asking for the letter of credit to be amended to read “part shipment and transshipment allowed”.
? ? I trust this amendment will meet your approval and you will send e-mail to us that effect without delay.? ?
? ? 10.延长信用状期限
? ? Dear Sir or Madam:
? ? Thank you for your letter of credit covering your order for 10,000 widgets.
We regret to say that, owing to a delay on the part of our suppliers, we will not be able to get the shipment ready before the end of this month. We faxed you earlier today to that effect. ? ? We expect that the consignment will be ready for shipment in the early part of August. We are arranging to ship it on the Great Wall-sailing from Shanghai on 7 August.
? ? We are looking forward to receiving your faxed extension to the letter of credit so that we can effect shipment of the goods.
? ? We send our sincere apologies for the delay and trust that it will not inconvenience you.? ? ? ? 11.请示提供信用资料
? ? Dear Sir or Madam:
? ? Thank you for you interest in our products. We hope the samples we sent you on 5 February were up to your expectations.
? ? We would like to sort out the credit formalities as soon as possible possible so that we can begin trading. Could you provide us that we can begin trading. Could you provide us with the requisite financial information so that we can open your new account immediately？
? ? Please include a recent financial statement, the name of your bank and references,together with any other relevant credit details. The information you provide will, of course, be held in the strictest confidence.
? ? We look forward to a long and prosperous relationship with your company.
? ?? ? 12.拒绝赊销
? ? Dear Sir or Madam:
? ? Thank you for your order No. 6565 dated 1 July for 100widgets.
? ? I regret to say that our records show that we do not have sufficient letter of credit. We can fulfill your order only upon the receipt of a confirmed, irrevocable letter of credit. ? ? We are sorry for the delay and await your instructions.
? ? 13.要求按现金提货方式装运订货
? ? Dear Sir or Madam:
? ? Thank you for your order dated 28 April for 40 widgets. We would like to arrange for immediate shipment. Unfortunately, we do not have sufficient credit information to offer you open account terms at this time. Would it be acceptable to ship this order cash on delivery？
? ? If you wish to receive open account terms for your next order, please provide us with the standard financial statement and bank reference. This information will be held in the strictest confidence.
? ? We look forward to hearing from you.
14. 延迟付款
? ? Dear Sir or Madam:
? ? Thank you for your letter dated 24 March. We are very sorry to hear about your company’s current financial problems.
? ? We have considered your request to delay payment of your outstanding balance of US$ until 1 May of this year. We are happy to tell you that we can agree to your proposal.
? ? We must add, however, that this preferential treatment is being given only because of your current circumstances. It cannot be taken as a precedent for our future commercial relationship.
? ? We wish you better times ahead.?
? ? 15.确认供货
? ? Dear Sir or Madam:
? ? As a result of our recent exchange of information, we have a strong interest to work with your proposal.
? ? Please see the following terms and conditions as a confirmation of the start of our business relationship.
? ? Product Name:? ? Spec. Number:? ? Quantity:? ? Price:? ? Packing:? ? Payment:
? ? We hope that this first transaction will come to a successful conclusion for both of us. We look forward to continuing a mutually beneficial trade between our companies.
2020 商务信函格式文档Document Writing
商务信函格式文档 前言语料：温馨提醒，公务文书，又叫公务文件，简称公文，是法定机关与社会组织在公务活动中为行使职权，实施管理而制定的具有法定效用和规范体式的书面文字材料，是传达和贯彻方针和政策，发布行政法规和规章，实行行政措施，指示答复问题，知道，布置和商洽工作，报告情况，交流经验的重要工具 本文内容如下：【下载该文档后使用Word打开】 商务信函写作格式，署名即写信人签名，通常写在结尾后另起一行(或空一、二行)的偏右下方位置。以单位名义发出的商业信函，署名时可写单位名称或单位内具体部门名称，也可同时署写信人的姓名。重要的商业信函，为郑重起见，也可加盖公章。英文商务信函的书信格式 1.thetoppartofabusinessletter 日期：date:23decemberXX 地址：mr.jamesgreen salesmanager bbbplc 55-60oldst,londone66hg 称谓：dearmr.green(deargentlemen,dearsir,dearsirs,dearmadam) 2.thebodypartofabusinessletter 标题(可以不要)
正文 3.lookatthetwoendingsofbusinessletterbelow.noticetheusefulp hrasesthatareusedintheseletters. (1)pleaseletmeknowifthisisconvenience. ilookforwardtohearingfromyou. bestwishes yourssincerely, (signature) ms.gillianjanes personnelnanager (2)pleasephoneustoconfirmthedetails. welookforwardtoreceivingyourcomments. yoursfaithfully (signature) forms.gillianjones personnelmanager 中文商务信函的写作格式 如同一般信函，商业信文一般由开头、正文、结尾、署名、日期等5个部分组成。 (1)开头 开头写收信人或收信单位的称呼。称呼单独占行、顶格书写，称呼后用冒号。 (2)正文
国际商务信函范例 EXAMPLES OF INTERNATIONAL BUSINESS LETTERS 1.请求建立商业关系 自米兰阿里斯托鞋类公司取得贵公司的联系地址，特此修函，祈能发展关系。多年来，本公司经营鞋类进口生意，现欲扩展业务范围。盼能惠赐商品目录和报价表。如价格公道，本公司必大额订购。烦请早日赐复。 We have obtained your name and address from Aristo Shoes, Milan, and we are writing to enquire whether you would be willing to establish business relations with us. We have been importers of shoes for many years. At present, we are interested in extending our range and would appreciate your catalogues and quotations. If your prices are competitive we would expect to transact a significant volume of business. We look forward to your early reply. 2.回复对方建立商业关系的请求 本月16日收到有关商务关系的来函，不胜欣喜。谨遵要求另函奉上最新之出口商品目录和报价单。款项烦请以不可撤销保兑之信用证支付。如欲订货，请电传或传真为盼。 Thank you for your letter of the 16th of this month. We shall be glad to enter into business relations with your company. In compliance with your request, we are sending you, under separate cover, our latest catalogue and price list covering our export range. Payment should be made by irrevocable and confirmed letter of credit. Should you wish to place an order, please telex or fax us. 3.请求担任独家代理 本公司担任多家厂家的独家代理，专营精制棉织品，包括各种家用亚麻制品，行销中东。与贵公司向有业务联系，互利互作。贵公司纺织部亦十分了解有关业务合作之情况。盼望能成为贵公司独家代理，推广在巴林市场的货品。上述建议，烦请早日赐复，以便进一步联系合作。 We would like to inform you that we act on a sole agency basis for a number of manufacturers. We specialize in finished cotton goods for the Middle East market: Our activities cover all types of household linen. Until now, we have been working with your textiles department and our collaboration has proved to be mutually beneficial. Please refer to them for any information regarding our company. We are very interested in an exclusive arrangement with your factory for the promotion of your products in Bahrain. We look forward to your early reply. 4.拒绝对方担任独家代理 9月1日有关建议担任家用亚麻制品独家代理的来信收悉。谨致衷心谢意。目前时机尚未成熟，不能应允该安排深感抱歉。然而，本公司乐意与贵公司先试行合作，为今后合作打下基础。为证明担任独家代理的能力，贵公司宜就上述货品作市场调查，还应扩大现有营业额。奉上该货品之报价单，敬希查照。专此候复。 Thank you for your letter of 1 September suggesting that we grant you a sole agency for our household linens. I regret to say that, at this stage, such an arrangement would be rather premature. We would, however, be willing to engage in a trial collaboration with you company to see how the arrangement works. It would be necessary for you to test the market for our products at you end. You would also have to build up a much larger turnover to justify a sole
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商务函的格式及范文格式 商务信函属于商务礼仪文书范畴，是指企业与企业之间，在各种商务场合或商务往来过程中所使用的简便书信。其主要作用是在商务活动中用来建立经贸关系、传递商务信息、联络商务事宜、沟通和洽商产销;询问和答复问习题、处理详细交易事项。其品种包括联络函、推销函、订购函、确认函、索赔函等多种。 文种特性 〔一)语气白话性 每一封商务信函的往来都是不同的企业之间或者企业彼此之间的一种情感交流。人都是感性的，所以商务信函更多地体现了感性的一面。而不是人们想象的商务信函应该用一种特殊的“生意腔”，信函读起来使人感到非常热情、友好，就像朋友之间的谈话那样简单、自然、人性化。无论是歉意的道歉函，还是善意的劝说函，或者购买函，完全可以通过信函中的语气、语调来表现。 (二)内容直接性 企业每天都要阅读大量信函文件。商务信函不需要用华美的词句。所
以，商务信函要写得简明扼要，短小精悍，切中要点。用简洁朴实的语言来写信函，使信函读起来简单、清楚、容易理解。当涉及数据或者详细的信息时，如时间、地点、价格、货号，等等，要用语准确，使交流的内容更加清楚，这更有助于加快商务活动的进程。 (三)态度真诚性 商务信函要能够充分体现真诚、礼貌。不管说什么，都要带着诚意去说。把写好的商务信函拿起来读一遍，确保假如此时对方正在电话中与你通话，他一定能够感受到你的自然、真诚和礼貌。这里所说的礼貌，其实不是简单用一些礼貌用语，而是体现了一种为别人考虑，多谅解对方心情和处境的态度。 (四)主旨单一性 商务信函具有纯粹的业务性，一般要求专文专事，内容集中单一，围绕公务，突出主旨。 (五)格式标准性 商务信函构造类似于一般的书信，有称呼、有正文、有署名。外贸商务函、电的写作则必须按照国际惯例，用英语或对方国家所使用的语
竭诚为您提供优质文档/双击可除 商务信函咨询中文 篇一：八种经典中英文商务信函范文 八种经典中英文商务信函范文 第一种、介绍信LettersofIntroduction 实例之一： Dearmr./ms.Thisistointroducemr.FrankJonesournewmark etingspecialistwhowillbeinLondonfromApril5tomidApri lonbusiness.weshallappreciateanyhelpyoucangivemr.Jo nesandwillalwaysbehappytoreciprocate.Yoursfaithfull y尊敬的先生/小姐，现向您推荐我们的市场专家弗兰克琼斯先生。他将因公务在四月15日到四月中旬期间停留伦敦。我们将非常感谢您向琼斯先生提供的任何帮助，并非常高兴施以回报。您诚挚的 实例之二： Dearmr./mswearepleasedtointroducemr.wangYouourimpor tmanagerofTextilesDepartment.mr.wangisspendingthree weeksinyourcitytodevelopourbusinesswithchiefmanufac
turesandtomakepurchasesofdecorativefabricsforthecom ingseason.weshallbemostgratefulifyouwillintroducehi mtoreliablemanufacturersandgivehimanyhelporadvicehe mayneed.Yoursfaithfully尊敬的先生/小姐，我们非常高兴向您介绍我们纺织部的进口经理王有先生。王先生将在你市度过三周，他要与主要的生产厂家拓展商务并为下一季度采购装饰织品。如能介绍他给可靠的生产厂家，向他提供所需的任何帮助或建议，我们将不胜感谢。您诚挚的 第二种、约定Appointments 实例之一： Dearmr./msmr.Johngreenourgeneralmanagerwillbeinpari sfromJune2to7andwouldliketocomeandseeyousayonJune3a t2.00p.m.abouttheopeningofasampleroomthere.pleasele tusknowifthetimeisconvenientforyou.Ifnotwhattimeyou wouldsuggestYoursfaithfully尊敬的先生/小姐我们的总经理约翰格林将于六月2日到7日在巴黎，有关在那开样品房的事宜，他会于六月3日下午2：00点拜访您。请告知这个时间对您是否方便。如不方便，请建议具体时间。您诚挚的 以下为回信范文 Dearmr./msThankyouforyourletterinformingusofmr.gree n’
商务函电范文大全 篇一：12种经典商务信函范文-中英对照 12种经典商务信函范文-中英对照 第一种、介绍信Letters of Introduction 实例之一： Dear Mr. / Ms., This is to introduce Mr. Frank Jones, our new marketing specialist who will be in London from April 5 to mid April on business. We shall appreciate any help you can give Mr. Jones and will always be happy to reciprocate. Yours faithfully 尊敬的先生/小姐， 现向您推荐我们的市场专家弗兰克·琼斯先生。他将因公务在四月15日到四月中旬期间停留伦敦。 我们将非常感谢您向琼斯先生提供的任何帮助，并非常高兴施以回报。 您诚挚的 实例之二： Dear Mr. / Ms, We are pleased to introduce Mr. Wang You, our import manager of
Textiles Department. Mr. Wang is spending three weeks in your city to develop our business with chief manufactures and to make purchases of decorative fabrics for the coming season. We shall be most grateful if you will introduce him to reliable manufacturers and give him any help or advice he may need. Yours faithfully 尊敬的先生/小姐， 我们非常高兴向您介绍我们纺织部的进口经理王有先生。王先生将在你市度过三周，他要与主要的生产厂家拓展商务并为下一季度采购装饰织品。 如能介绍他给可靠的生产厂家，向他提供所需的任何帮助或建议，我们将不胜感谢。您诚挚的 实例之一： Dear Mr./Ms, Mr. John Green, our General Manager, will be in Paris from June 2 to 7 and would like to come and see you, say, on June 3 at 2.00 p.m. about the opening of a sample room there. Please let us know if the time is convenient for you. If not, what time you would suggest? Yours faithfully, 尊敬的先生/小姐 我们的总经理约翰格林将于六月2日到7日在巴黎，有关在那开样品房的事宜，他会于六月3日下午2：00点拜访您。
写作中文商务信函并不要求您使用华丽优美的词句。所有您需要做的就是，用简单朴实的语言，准确的表达自己的意思，让对方可以非常清楚的了解您想说什么。围绕这一点，精品学习网总结了几方面的内容，希望对您写中文商务信函有借鉴作用。 中文商业商务信函的写作格式 如同一般信函，商业信文一般由开头、正文、结尾、署名、日期等5个部分组成。 (1)开头 开头写收信人或收信单位的称呼。称呼单独占行、顶格书写，称呼后用冒号。 (2)正文 信文的正文是书信的主要部分，叙述商业业务往来联系的实质问题，通常包括： ①向收信人问候； ②写信的事由，例如何时收到对方的来信，表示谢意，对于来信中提到的问题答复等等； ③该信要进行的业务联系，如询问有关事宜，回答对方提出的问题，阐明自己的想法或看法，向对方提出要求等。如果既要向对方询问，又要回答对方的询问，则先答后问，以示尊重； ④提出进一步联系的希望、方式和要求。 (3)结尾 结尾往往用简单的一两句话，写明希望对方答复的要求。如“特此函达，即希函复。”同时写表示祝愿或致敬的话，如“此致敬礼”、“敬祝健康”等。祝语一般分为两行书写，“此致”、“敬祝”可紧随正文，也可和正文空开。“敬礼”、“健康”则转行顶格书写。 (4)署名 署名即写信人签名，通常写在结尾后另起一行(或空一、二行)的偏右下方位置。以单位名义发出的商业信函，署名时可写单位名称或单位内具体部门名称，也可同时署写信人的姓名。重要的商业信函，为郑重起见，也可加盖公章。 (5)日期 写信日期—般写在署名的下一行或同一行偏右下方位置。商业信函的日期很重要，不要遗漏。 通知：
商务信函范文 篇一：12种商务信函范文 第一种、介绍信Letters of Introduction 实例之一： Dear Mr. / Ms., This is to introduce Mr. Frank Jones, our new marketing specialist who will be in London from April 5 to mid April on business. We shall appreciate any help you can give Mr. Jones and will always be happy to reciprocate. Yours faithfully 尊敬的先生/小姐， 现向您推荐我们的市场专家弗兰克·琼斯先生。他将因公务在四月15日到四月中旬期间停留伦敦。 我们将非常感谢您向琼斯先生提供的任何帮助，并非常高兴施以回报。您诚挚的 实例之二： Dear Mr. / Ms, We are pleased to introduce Mr. Wang You, our import manager of Textiles Department. Mr. Wang is spending three weeks in your city to develop our business with chief manufactures and to make purchases of decorative fabrics for the coming season.
We shall be most grateful if you will introduce him to reliable manufacturers and give him any help or advice he may need. Yours faithfully 尊敬的先生/小姐， 我们非常高兴向您介绍我们纺织部的进口经理王有先生。王先生将在你市度过三周，他要与主要的生产厂家拓展商务并为下一季度采购装饰织品。 如能介绍他给可靠的生产厂家，向他提供所需的任何帮助或建议，我们将不胜感谢。 您诚挚的 第二种、约定Appointments 实例之一： Dear Mr./Ms, Mr. John Green, our General Manager, will be in Paris from June 2 to 7 and would like to come and see you, say, on June 3 at 2.00 p.m. about the opening of a sample room there.Please let us know if the time is convenient for you. If not, what time you would suggest. Yours faithfully, 尊敬的先生/小姐 我们的总经理约翰格林将于六月2日到7日在巴黎，有关在那开样品房的事宜，他会于六月3日下午2：00点拜访您。
竭诚为您提供优质文档/双击可除 商务书信格式范文 篇一：商务感谢信格式范文 商务感谢信格式范文 感谢信是一种礼仪文书，用于商务活动中的许多非协议的合同中，一方受惠于另一方，应及时地表达谢忱，使对方在付出劳动后得到心理上的收益，它是一种不可少的公关手段。 感谢信的写作格式是书信体。写作时应篇幅短，中文200字左右即可；对收信人为自己做的好事了然于胸，不要忘了什么；把对方给你带来的好处都写清楚，不要含糊其词；表示感谢的话要合乎商家往来的习惯，语气不应过于卑屈。谢意之外，如果允许别人什么应切实可行，能说到做到。 xxxx电缆有限公司于xx年x月x口在南京举行隆重开业典礼，此间收到全国各地许多同行、用户以及外国公司的贺电、贺函和贺礼。上级机关及全国各地单位的领导，世界各地的贵宾，国内最著名的电缆线路专家等亲临参加庆典，寄予我公司极大的希望，谨此一并致谢，并愿一知既往与各
方加强联系。进行更广泛、更友好的合作。xxxx电缆有限公司 董事长:xxx 总经理:xxx xx年x月x日 篇二：商务电子邮件格式 商务电子邮件格式 在电子邮件的写作中要注意哪些呢？如何写好一封规 范的电子邮件呢？ 在写电子邮件时候，要采用日常办公运用的商业信函格式，使用正规的文字，不用或避免应用网络语言，诸如3Q、IFu等。 主题栏：主题明确，一目了然，让人看了知道个所以然，不会是一头雾水，不知所云，当作垃圾邮件删除掉。 称谓：准确，切不可含糊不清。是先生别称成了小姐；是小姐别喊成了先生。这是大忌讳！一次，青岛一家公司发信到公司，把我们公司的运营总监张可先生称呼成了张可小姐。搞得张先生郁闷一天。当你搞不清对方准确的性别时候，那就称老师就没错。主体：简明，扼要，把事情说清楚就可以了，不要罗嗦，拖泥带水的。事情多，写的多，那最好是分成几小段，看的清楚明了。 祝语：可以写祝您工作愉快，工作顺利，或者顺祝商祺
商务写作 (B u s i n e s s W r i t i n g) 一、商务信函概述 一、正确的观念 1.商务信函是一种“推销”函 商务信函是一种常用的商业联系媒介，实际上商务信函是一种“推销”函，写信人总是在推销着什么，或是物品、或是服务等。 要写好商务信函不仅要具备相关的业务知识，掌握好法规和条款等，还应具备扎实的语言基础，熟悉信函的书写形式和行文要求。 2.商务信函的基本特点 商务信函书写的重点应放在“效率”上，应易读易懂；语气真诚、友好、客气；语言简短、朴实、自然；内容清晰、准确、具体；行文正确、完整。 3.商务信函无定律 好的信函并没有固定不变的写作模式，因人而异。写信时，应充分考虑收信方的观点和看法、背景和所处环境。 二、应用原则 1.“挨达”AIDA原则：在拟就一封商务信函时，应首先考虑的原则： A— Attention 注意 I— Interest 兴趣 D— Desire 意愿
A— Action行动 个“C”的行文原则 明晰Clearness 具体Concreteness 简洁Conciseness 诚意Conscientiousness 正确Correctness 个性Character 礼貌Courtesy 完整Completeness 体谅Considerateness 优美Concinnity 三、商务信函的构成要素 1.信头（Letterhead） 是指发信人所在公司的名称和地址，通常是预先印制好的，一般位于信纸的正上方。 内容包括：电话号码、电报挂号（Cable Address）、传真（Fax）和电传（Telex）号码、信件编号或索引号码以及写信日期。 例如： 英国—— date/month/year 27 February,2008 美国—— month/date/year February 27,2008 2.信内地址（Inside Address） 即收信人的姓名和地址，通常是在日期下面隔两行，位于书信正文的左上方。 3.称呼（Salutation）
研究生课外作业 课程名称商务英语 研究生姓名 班级MEM 苏州班 学号 任课老师职称副教授 所属学院管理学院 专业工程管理 作业题目商务写作（商务信函）
商务写作（商务信函） Practice: write a letter of complait according to the following ad and handwritten notes.
Dear Director: I am a student of C&S English Center. I am writing to complain about your poor service against your advertisement. In the first place, you promise to have Experienced and highly-qualified teachers, but in fact,the teacher is poor. In addition, you offer the personal placement for our year-long customers, but the test result is not accurate. In the third place, you will arrange the foreign teachers according to our time, but they did not arrive classroom on time. In the fourth place, the Mini-test every month should be extra charged. In the fifth place, English Movie + Culture Teaching become movie viewing only. In the sixth place, nearly 20 students were in my class which are much more than Maximum 10 students. The last one place, we will have a gift with good quality of note book, but finally, we find the quality is very pool. I appreciate it very much if you could improve your service, preferably according to your commitment for the services, and I would like to have this matter settled within two days. It will be nice for you to conduct investigation at your end and reply to us. Yours sincerely,
?中文商务信函得写作格式 ?［加入收藏] ?中文商业商务信函得写作格式?如同一般信函,商业信文一般由开头、正文、结尾、署名、日期等5个部分组成。 (1)开头?开头写收信人或收信单位得称呼。称呼单独占行、顶格书写,称呼后用冒号、 (2)正文?信文得正文就是书信得主要部分,叙述商业业务往来联系得实质问题,通 常包括: ?①向收信人问候; ②写信得事由,例如何时收到对方得来信,表示谢意,对于来信中提到得问题答复等等; ③该信要进行得业务联系,如询问有关事宜,回答对方提出得问题,阐明自己得想法或瞧法, 向对方提出要求等。如果既要向对方询问,又要回答对方得询问,则先答后问,以示尊重; ④提出进一步联系得希望、方式与要求。 (3)结尾?结尾往往用简单得一两句话,写明希望对方答复得要求。如“特此函达,即希 函复。"同时写表示祝愿或致敬得话,如“此致敬礼”、“敬祝健康”等。祝语一般分为两行书写,“此致”、“敬祝”可紧随正文,也可与正文空开、“敬礼”、“健康”则转行顶格书写。 (4)署名?署名即写信人签名,通常写在结尾后另起一行(或空一、二行)得偏右下方位 置。以单位名义发出得商业信函,署名时可写单位名称或单位内具体部门名称,也可同时署写信人得姓名。重要得商业信函,为郑重起见,也可加盖公章。 (5)日期?写信日期—般写在署名得下一行或同一行偏右下方位置。商业信函得日 期很重要,不要遗漏。
中文书信礼仪得格式及举例 提称语,用在对方称呼后面,表示尊敬—-?父母:膝下、膝前、尊前、道鉴?长辈:几前、尊前、尊鉴、赐鉴、道鉴 师长:函文、坛席、讲座、尊鉴、道席、撰席 平辈:足下、阁下、台鉴、大鉴、惠鉴?同学:砚右、文几、台鉴?晚辈:如晤、如面、如握、青览?女性:慧鉴、妆鉴、芳鉴、淑览 祝愿语-— 父母:恭请福安,叩请金安?长辈:恭请崇安,敬请福祉,敬颂颐安 师长:敬请教安,敬请教祺,敬颂海安?平辈:顺祝 署名——?对长辈:叩禀敬叩拜上?对平辈:谨启鞠启手书?对晚辈:字示白谕 ?开头语 惠书敬悉,情意拳拳、接获手书,快慰莫名。昨得手书,反复读之。?谕书敬读,不胜欣慰。拳拳盛意,感莫能言。顷接手示,甚欣甚慰、?久不通函,至以为念、前上一函,谅已入鉴。喜接来函,欣慰无量、 顷奉惠函,谨悉一切。顷接手示,如见故人。得书甚慰,千里面目。 得书之喜,旷若复面。数奉手书,热挚之情,溢于言表。 顷奉手教,敬悉康与,至为欣慰、久未闻消息,唯愿一切康适。 手书已接多日,今兹略闲,率写数语、? 钦佩语?奉读大示,向往尤深、喜接教诲,真解矇矣、大示拜读,心折殊深、?谨蒙悔语,用祛尘惑。大作拜读,敬佩之至。顷读惠书,如闻金石良言、 ?思念久钦鸿才,时怀渴想。德宏才羡,屡屡怀慕、蒙惠书并赐大著,拜服之至、? 语 分手多日,别来无恙? 岁月不居,时节如流。别后月余,殊深驰系。 一别累月,思何可支？海天在望,不尽依依、别后萦思,愁肠日转。?离别情怀,今犹耿耿。别来良久,甚以为怀。近况如何,念念、?前上一函,谅达雅鉴,迄今未见复音,念与时积。???问候语 春寒料峭,善自珍重。阳春三月,燕语雕梁,想必心旷神怡!?当此春风送暖之际,料想身心均健。春日融融,可曾乘兴驾逰？?春光明媚,想必合家安康。时欲入夏,愿自珍重。?赤日炎炎,万请珍重、渐入严寒,伏福躬无恙。?入秋顿凉,幸自摄卫。汗暑无常,伏维珍重自爱。 ?自术语 敝寓均安,可释远念。阖寓无恙,请释悬念。贱体初安,承问极感、
商务书信范例 各位读友大家好，此文档由网络收集而来，欢迎您下载，谢谢 informal letter of invitation dear miss smith, my brother peter will be staying with us for a few days during the christmas holidays and my wife and i have planned a family dinner for him next saturday evening at seven oclock so that he can meet some of our friends . we should be delighted if you could join us. i hope you will let me know that you can come. 敬爱的史密斯小姐： 我弟弟彼得将在圣诞节假期期间到我们家住几天，我和妻子计划在下星期六晚七时在家中为他设便宴，以便他可以和我们一些朋友见面。若您能出席我们会感到很高兴，希望您告诉我您能来。 formal letters of invitation mr. and mrs. andrew wang request the
pleasure of your company at a dinner in honor of their parents fiftieth wedding anniversary on sunday, the fifth of july at eight oclock new asia hotel 100 deep water bay road hong kong r. s. v. p. 谨订于七月五日星期日晚八时在香港深水湾道100号新亚洲大酒店为我们父母的金婚纪念举行晚宴，敬请光临王楷康夫妇敬约 敬请回复宴。 各位读友大家好，此文档由网络收集而来，欢迎您下载，谢谢
Dear Sirs, We have obtained your address from the Commercial Counsellor ofyour Embassy in London and are now writing you for theestablishment of business relations. We are very well connected with all the major dealers here oflight industrial products, and feel sure we can sell largequantities of Chinese goods if we get your offers at competitiveprices. As to our standing, we are permitted to mention the Bank ofEngland, London, as a reference. Please let us have all necessary information regarding yourproducts for export. Yours faithfully。 求商务函电还盘函翻译。1.5月21日来信收到，得知贵方对我们的文具很感兴趣，但以为我方4月30日的价格偏高，无法成交。 2. 我们的报价已被贵地其他客户所接受，已有大批成交而且询价单滔滔而至，我方无奈下降报价。 3. 希望贵方从新考虑，早日来传真告知。 counter offer thank you for your e-mail of May 21.we learn that you areinterested in our school tools ,but you cann't accept our higherprice of Api.30. our quotation has been accepted by other clients ,a greet oforders have been bargained and large enquiries are pouring in ourcompany.so we cann't cut down our price. please think better of above,we are looking forward to your earlyfax. 求商务函电翻译 1.潜在的客户the potential customers 2.粗暴搬运rough handling 3.经营范围scope of business 4.中性包装neutral packing 5.样品本samples 6.分批装运partial shipment
中文商务信函范文 写作中文商务信函并不要求您使用华丽优美的词句。所有您需要做的就是，用简单朴实的语言，准确的表达自己的意思，让对方可以非常清楚的了解您想说什么。围绕这一点，精品学习网总结了几方面的内容，希望对您写中文商务信函有借鉴作用。中文商业商务信函的写作格式 如同一般信函，商业信文一般由开头、正文、结尾、署名、日期等5个部分组成。 (1)开头 开头写收信人或收信单位的称呼。称呼单独占行、顶格书写，称呼后用冒号。 (2)正文 信文的正文是书信的主要部分，叙述商业业务往来联系的实质问题，通常包括： ①向收信人问候； ②写信的事由，例如何时收到对方的来信，表示谢意，对于来信中提到的问题答复等等； ③该信要进行的业务联系，如询问有关事宜，回答对方提出的问题，阐明自己的想法或看法，向对方提出要求等。如果既要向对方询问，又要回答对方的询问，则先答后问，以示尊重；
④提出进一步联系的希望、方式和要求。 (3)结尾 结尾往往用简单的一两句话，写明希望对方答复的要求。如“特此函达，即希函复。”同时写表示祝愿或致敬的话，如“此致敬礼”、“敬祝健康”等。祝语一般分为两行书写，“此致 ”、“敬祝”可紧随正文，也可和正文空开。“敬礼”、“健康”则转行顶格书写。 (4)署名 署名即写信人签名，通常写在结尾后另起一行(或空一、二行)的偏右下方位置。以单位名义发出的商业信函，署名时可写单位名称或单位内具体部门名称，也可同时署写信人的姓名。重要的商业信函，为郑重起见，也可加盖公章。 (5)日期 写信日期—般写在署名的下一行或同一行偏右下方位置。商业信函的日期很重要，不要遗漏。 通知： 本厂已迁移到上述地址, 特此通知。 I inform you that I have now removed my factory to the above address. 我方已在本市开设贸易与总代理店, 特此通知。同时,
竭诚为您提供优质文档/双击可除 商务信函范文信头 篇一：商务信函的格式和范文 商务信函的格式和范文 商务信函属于商务礼仪文书范畴，是指企业与企业之间，在各种商务场合或商务往来过程中所使用的简便书信。其主要作用是在商务活动中用来建立经贸关系、传递商务信息、联系商务事宜、沟通和洽商产销；询问和答复问题、处理具体交易事项。其种类包括联系函、推销函、订购函、确认函、索赔函等多种。 文种特性 〔一）语气口语性 每一封商务信函的往来都是不同的企业之间或者企业 领导者彼此之间的一种情感交流。人都是感性的，所以商务信函更多地体现了感性的一面。而不是人们想象的商务信函应该用一种特殊的“生意腔”，信函读起来使人感到非常热情、友好，就像朋友之间的谈话那样简单、自然、人性化。无论是歉意的道歉函，还是善意的劝说函，或者购买函，完
全可以通过信函中的语气、语调来表现。 （二）内容直接性 企业每天都要阅读大量信函文件。商务信函不需要用华丽的词句。所以，商务信函要写得简明扼要，短小精悍，切中要点。用简洁朴实的语言来写信函，使信函读起来简单、清楚、容易理解。当涉及数据或者具体的信息时，如时间、地点、价格、货号，等等，要用语精确，使交流的内容更加清楚，这更有助于加快商务活动的进程。 （三）态度真诚性 商务信函要能够充分体现真诚、礼貌。不管说什么，都要带着诚意去说。把写好的商务信函拿起来读一遍，确保如果此时对方正在电话中与你通话，他一定能够感受到你的自然、真诚和礼貌。这里所说的礼貌，并不是简单用一些礼貌用语，而是体现了一种为他人考虑，多体谅对方心情和处境的态度。 （四）主旨单一性 商务信函具有纯粹的业务性，一般要求专文专事，内容集中单一，围绕公务，突出主旨。 （五）格式规范性 商务信函结构类似于一般的书信，有称呼、有正文、有署名。外贸商务函、电的写作则必须依照国际惯例，用英语或对方国家所使用的语言书写，在文法和书写格式上也要符