雅思写作高分作文精选第4期
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Scientists and the news media are presenting ever more evidence of climate
change. Governmnets cannot be expected to solve this problem. It is the
responsibility of individuals to change their lifestyle to prevent further
damage.
What are your views?
You should write at least 250 words.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your
own knowledge or experience.
Recently scientists worried about climate change have urged governments to
introduce measures to reduce the greenhouse gas emissions
that are seen as its
main cause. Simoultaneouslty, politicians and environmentalists have urged
individuals to make changes to their lifestyle. I shall argue that governments
and individuals should take join responsibility for this problem.
Firstly, industry accounts for a large proportion of the greenhouse gas
emissions, and this can only be controlled by government action. Measures could
be taken to discourage pollution, such as limiting or taxing the use of fossil
fuels. Alternatively, subsidies could be offered to
industries to clean up their
production processes. If these ideas were adopted, I believe that businesses
would regard pollution as a financial issue.
Secondly, only discussion between governments can ensure that solutions are
successful. The Kyoto agreement, for example, tried to reach global agreement on
how to address the problem. Without such co-operating, it seems to me that
efforts to reduce fuel consumption are unlikely to be effective.
However, national and international policies will only secceed if
individuals also change their lifestyle. For example, people could think more
carefully about how they use energy in their homes. By using less electricity,
installing energy-efficient light bulbs and electrical appliances, or investing
in solar panels, individuals can make a real difference.
In addition, I think individual attitudes to transport need to change.
Instead of making short tips by car, people could choose to walk, cycle, or take
a bus. Since cars are a major source of the problem, changing our behaviour in
this area would have a major impact.
In conclusion, I would maintain that only a combination of international
agreement, national policies, and changes in individual behaviour will succeed
in preventing further damage to the environment.
(291 words)
Growth in air travel harms environment(飞行增多危害环境) Climate change experts from the Tyndall Climate Research Centre in Britain have said urgent action（紧急行动）is needed to curb the rapid growth in air travel（抑制飞行的快速增长）if the government is to meet its commitments（实现承诺）on tackling global warming（处理温室效应）. This report from Stephen Evans: Falling ticket price and rising incomes are leading to rapid growth in global air travel.（导致国际航空业迅速发展的原因是机票价格的下降和收入水平的提升。）According to the British government, the number of British air passengers, for example, will more than double in the next quarter of a century（下一个25年）. Increases of such an order would mean much more aviation fuel（燃油）being burned and aviation fuel may be more harmful to the environment than other fuels because the resulting smoke is emitted at high altitudes（高海拔）. A group of scientists at the environmental research group, the Tyndall Centre, says that if Britain is to meet its overall target for cutting damaging emissions（减少有害气体排放）, other uses of fuel like for heating homes or driving cars would have to be cut dramatically. The British government wants the use of aviation fuel covered by international agreement on the environment. The difficulty for any individual government（任何政府）is that taxing fuel used at its own airports might push airlines to move their operations to competing airports in other countries. https://www.doczj.com/doc/661940579.html,/worldservice/learningenglish/newsenglish/witn/2005/09/050921_aviation.sh tml Calls to control low-cost flights（限制廉价航空） Cheap flights（廉价航空）on no frills airlines may not be a burden on our wallets but they will dearly cost the UK's environment（严重危害环境）, campaigners believe. Scientists predict that if carbon dioxide emissions continue to increase, global warming will bring higher annual temperatures and heavier rainfall（温室效应会带来更高的气温以及更大的降水）- with all the associated problems（相关的问题）. +将来时）it is . Agencies such as the Sustainable Development Commission (SDC) want our air tickets to reflect "the true cost of flying" to the environment. To green groups, this involves the aviation industry having to pay tax on the fuel（航空业应该为燃油使用赋税）it puts in planes.
2019年雅思写作小作文流程图解析及范文：废纸回收 The chart below shows the process of waste paper recycling. 范文： The flow chart shows how waste paper is recycled. It is clear that there are six distinct stages in this process, from the initial collection of waste paper to the eventual production of usable paper. At the first stage in the paper recycling process, waste paper is collected either from paper banks, where members of the public leave their used paper, or directly from businesses. This paper is then sorted by hand and separated according to its grade, with any paper that is not suitable for recycling being removed. Next, the graded paper is transported to a paper mill. Stages four and five of the process both involve cleaning. The paper is cleaned and pulped, and foreign objects such as staples are taken out. Following this, all remnants of ink and glue are removed from the paper at the de-inking stage. Finally, the pulp can be processed in a paper making machine, which makes the end product： usable paper. (160 words, band 9)
雅思写作大作文范文 在英文写作中，逻辑关系至关重要。所以在实际教学中我们都会把逻辑关系作为一个很重要的内容来教授。这些逻辑关系主要涉及：并列或递进关系、让步或转折关系、因果关系和举例等。其中举例论证是一种很常用的论证方式，因为举例论证运用具体实例来论证观点，所以更具信服力，也更易于读者理解，因此受到作者及读者的普遍欢迎。下面专家将通过它的连接方式与您共同探讨一下举例论证以及如何举例子。 一、外显连接 如：it is undeniable that mobile phones have facilitated our lives in many different ways. For example, when an emergency ours, such as a traffic aident or a violent crime, mobile phones can help the victims to call the police or an ambulance immediately for help. 本例中，for example 引出例子论证“mobile phones have facilitated our lives in many different ways.”而后面的such as 则引出emergency 的具体形式。For instance 与它的用法完全相同，即后面要接句子例证。 Like, such as, take…as 等
直接名词（或相当于名词的词）。由于这些都是基本常识，这里不再赘述。 为了使连接词多样化，建议考生运用下面的一些短语（或句式）连接论点和论据：…is a case in point; …serve as a typical example;…can be taken as an example; one example is that… another one is that等。 如：Working part time when you are studying in university is beneficial to your life. I myself is a case in point（or ‘my experiences serve as a typical example’）. Through those experiences, I have learned to be independent and responsible. 二、内化连接 实际上，大家看原汁原味的文英文文章会发现有些信息的连接不用外显式，而是通过某些特定的词或者特定的方式给读者以清晰的层次感，从而使文章信息传递更通畅。 下面我们来看一下哪些例证可以省去连接词，实现内化连接。
Crime 类范文 犯罪类 There are an increasing number of juvenile delinquents. What are the causes of this phenomenon? 只分析一个方面（产生原因），写成5段式 开头段（不少于4句） In this day and age, the incidence of juvenile offenses has been growing at an alarming rate. Today, the sheer number of juvenile offenders has reached staggering proportions. A recent survey conducted by the Chinese Academy of Social Sciences revealed that one out of four crimes today was carried out by minors. Hence, it is imperative that we pinpoint the causes of this disturbing phenomenon. 主体段1（不少于4句） In the first place, many instance of juvenile delinquency have been attributed to the violent or pornographic content of some TV shows and video games. Now we are facing a proliferation of blood and guts and nudity on TV, the computer and the Internet. Many youngsters, especially boys, get addicted to such scenes. Lacking the capacity to distinguish between right and wrong, they develop criminal tendencies. 主体段2（不少于4句） In the second place, parental neglect and domestic violence play a pivotal role in the increase of youth crimes. Today there are an ever-growing number of dysfunctional families. The children raised in such families tend to be afflicted with constant fear. In the end, they develop a hatred for society and other individuals. 主体段3（不少于4句） In the third place, there is a definite correlation between the increase of juvenile crime rate and the rise of adult crime rate in society. The more adult crimes, the higher the probability of youngsters falling prey to adult offenders. Many youths are tempted by evil adults into committing crimes. And some others are victims of adult offenses and become criminals themselves to get their revenge on society. 结尾段（不少于2句） In sum, many factors contribute to the surge of juvenile delinquency. It is crucial that we take vigorous measures to tackle these problems and ensure that the future or our nation—that is, the youngsters, have a more promising future ahead of them. Crime 类8分范文 Some people think the media should not report details of crimes to the public. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 一边倒写法=写完全同意或者完全不同意：五段式 开头段（不少于4句） With the crime rate hovering at high level, the print media as well as the electronic media dedicate large proportions of their space or airtime to detailed crime coverage. Whether the media should present detailed accounts of crimes has triggered spirited debate. Many assert that the news media should stop giving details of crimes. Speaking for myself, I totally agree with their views. 表示同意可以替换成approve of /wholeheartedly support/ cannot agree with their view more/ consent to/ am for 不同意可以替换成disagree with/ am against/ am opposed to / object to/ disapprove of/ cannot go along with 主体段1（不少于4句） In the first place, given the mercenary motives behind most detailed crime coverage, it is imperative that we discourage such coverage. The principal purpose of reporter covering criminal acts is to boost newspaper circulations or television ratings; much detailed crime coverage is biased or exaggerated. It only serves to leave a multitude of citizens constantly fearful about crime. 主体段2（不少于4句） In the second place, detailed reports of crimes by the press afford the potential criminals very useful learning materials. Reporting crimes in graphic detail helps those who are in the process of plan some criminal act to perfect their plans. Drawing on the well-documented crime stories in the media, would-be criminals learn how to avoid the mistakes in their crime. And this may aggravate the already soaring crime rate. 主体段3（不少于4句） In the third place, detailed reports of heinous crimes may traumatize the victims of the reported crimes. The reporters rarely consult the victims before they describe details of horrific crimes to the public. Hence, such reports become nothing more than an attempt to satisfy the curiosity of some base minds. Without
满分雅思大作文赏析 对于雅思写作的复习，一些雅思大作文范文，例文还是很有必要自己观摩的，为此小编特收集整理了这篇雅思大作文九分例文点评，分享给大家。希望考生能从中总结出对自己有用的知识点。 满分雅思大作文赏析 范文第一段： C h i l d r e n w h o g r o w u p i n f a m i l i e s w h i c h a r e s h o r t o f m o n e y a r e b e t t e r p r e p a r e d t o d e a l w i t h t h e p r o b l e m s o f a d u l t l i f e t h a n c h i l d r e n w h o a r e b r o u g h t u p b y w e a l t h y p a r e n t s.T o w h a t e x t e n t d o y o u a g r e e o r d i s a g r e e? S o m e f e e l t h a t t h e c h i l d r e n o f l o w i n c o m e f a m i l i e s a r e b e t t e r e q u i p p e d t o d e a l w i t h d i f f i c u l t i e s p o s e d b y t h e r e a l w o r l d w h e n t h e y g r o w u p a n d t h e y a l s o b e l i e v e t h e p r i v i l e g e d c h i l d r e n o f w e a l t h y f a m i l i e s a r e l e s s f i t t o d e a l w i t h t h e s e d i f f i c u l t i e s .T h e i m p l i c a t i o n s a n d v e r a c i t y o f t h i s a r g u m e n t s e e m s e l f-e v i d e n t,b u t i n f a c t r e q u i r e c l o s e r e x a m i n a t i o n.(58w o r d s) 名师点评：
雅思大作文专项突破：追随时尚 本文收集整理了雅思大作文专项突破：追随时尚。这是目前常见的、高频的雅思写作话题，同学们在备考时可以边写边学，积累写作素材，以便在考试中更胸有成竹。 Topic 24: Fashion is difficult to follow, and some people argue that we should not follow it. They think that we should dress what we like and feel comfortable. Do you agree or disagree? 解析: 支持追随潮流(following fashion)的观点： ? 时装是自我表达( a means of self-expression)的一种休现，表现人的性格和喜好(reflect one's personality or likes)，让人们在生活巾体验不同角色(allow people to try on many roles in life)，同时便世界更加丰富多彩(diversity and variety of the world in which we live); ? 新时代的时尚(fashion in the new era)并不一定意味着高消费，也并非一定穿某种款式的衣服才算时尚;
? 时装源于生活(root in daily life),反映生活趋势(reflect that life)，充分考虑了消费者的需求C consider consumer demand)，不像人们想的那样肤浅(not as superficial as some people think) 反对追随潮流(following fashion )的观点： ? 潮流变化太快，盲目追求潮流(follow fashion blindly)是浪费时间和金钱; ? 失去了自己的喜好和判断(dwell too much on what others think); ? 鼓励人们将衣服和地位、社会阶层还有财富联系在一起(associate clothing with status, social class and wealth),这是一种歧视。 范文 Fashion refers to a style of clothing worn by most people of a country. The growing concern about fashion in recent years comes as no surprise, considering the fact that fashion is very often at odds with the traditional function of clothing, protecting wearers from the extremes of weather. In my opinion, fashion is not a betrayal but an indicative of a principle that wearing clothing is for both functional and social reasons. Fashions are linked to personal style. Fashions allow wearers to express emotion and solidarity with other people. People dress to their mood and according to circumstances. Buying fashionable clothes is a
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2016年1月9日雅思写作真题之雅思小作文TASK1 男女同学在课外参加体育运动的时常比例。 difference in the percentage of sports in outdoor school hours TASK1 日雅思写作真题之雅思小作文1月142016年The number of people taking part in a wildlife survey in Britain between 2001 and 2009. TASK1
日雅思写作真题之雅思小作文月年2016123The three pie charts below show the production, consumption of coffee and where the profit goes around the world. )数据仅供参考( 2016年1月30日雅思写作真题之雅思小作文TASK1 Task 1 The diagram shows how an office building looks at
present and the plan for its future development. TASK1 月年2016218日雅思写作真题之雅思小作文 Changes of average monthly salary and prices of black and white TV in Japanese Yen from 1953 to 1973 TASK1日雅思写作真题之雅思小作文2月20年2016
The chart and graph show the categories of workforce in Australia and the unemployment within 3 groups. 2016年2月27日雅思写作真题之雅思小作文TASK1 Task 1 The graph below shows the unemployment rate in Ireland and the number of people leaving the country between 1998 and 2008. TASK1
Technology & media 类 科技类 People today can perform the everyday tasks such as shopping, banking or even business transactions, without meeting others face-to-face. What effects will this phenomenon have on individuals and society as a whole? 开头段（不少于3+1句） The interactivity of the Internet and the mobile phone has enabled a multitude of people to purchase their desired items or pay their phone bills without stepping out of their offices or homes. And many others can even register for tests or sign contracts online. This sweeping trend of going about everyday business in the virtual world has triggered a marked decline in face-to-face contact between people. Thus, it is essential that we identify the implication of this trend on both individuals and society as a whole. 主体段1（不少于1+6句） The impact of this phenomenon on individuals is profound. First, Individual efficiency in business transaction and banking will be greatly enhanced. And those who dread shopping are spared the chore of browsing around in shops. Secondly, the increasingly sedentary lifestyle will engender a higher incidence of ailment. More overweight people means more patients suffering from cardiovascular diseases such as vein hardening, diabetes and hypertension. Thirdly, the absence of face-to-face contact may induce distrust between business partners. An inherent sense of disbelief is apt to ruin a telecommunicated negotiation when negotiators can only see videos of each other transmitted via the Internet. 主体段2（不少于1+6句） This trend also has widespread repercussions on society as a whole. In the first place, the burgeoning e-commerce will, doubtless, boost corporate efficiency immeasurably. And higher efficiency means more earnings and less costs for businesses. In the second place, online fraud, be it banking or trading, retail or wholesale, is sure to abound in the cyberspace. We must search for practicable and effectual means of curbing it. In the third place, the proliferation of e-commerce may exacerbate man's overdependence on technology. And that can render our lives unspontaneous and our tempo of life too fast and furious. 结尾段（不少于2句）
雅思小作文写作
Writing Notes Date: July, 9th, 2017 Task I 1.Three Types i.Data: Bar Chart, Line Graph, Table, Pie Chart ◆图表类型：动态图、静态图 ◆动态图：有两个或以上时间 ◆重点 ●趋势 ●特殊值：起点、重点、最高点、最低点、交叉点 ◆静态图：只有一个或者没有时间 ●比较描述对象：使用倍数、比较级 ii.Process: Flow Chart iii.Map ◆Describe the change ◆Eg: Hospital is located to the west of car park 2.评分标准 i.Task Achievement/ Task Response ◆Cover the Requirements of the task ◆No off topics ◆不能添加主观想法，只能描述 ii.Coherence and Cohesive ◆使用路标性词汇：顺承和转折 iii.Lexical Resource ◆使用非高频词汇 ◆Use words and phrases naturally and appropriately ◆Vocabulary diversity ◆Accurate spelling words iv.Grammatical Range and Accuracy ◆Accurate grammar of sentences ◆Use different ranges of sentences, structures to achiever grammatical 3.写作方法 i.开头段 ◆图表词改写 ●The chart : bar chart, line chart, pie chart, table, diagram ◆动词shows改写 ●注意时态 ●Shows: illustrates, gives information about, compares, indicates, demonstrates ◆关键词（一定要改写） ●数量改写 ?The number of + 可数 ?The amount of + 不可数 ?The quantity of + 可/不可数 ?The figure for +可/不可数 ●百分比改写
2017雅思A类写作大作文真题范文 1.07 教育类 Task：Art classes, like painting and drawing, are not as important as other subjects, so some people think that it should not be a compulsory subject at high school. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Schools are places where students acquire knowledge and skills needed for further achievements. Given the pressure that students are facing, some cannot help wondering whether art classes should still be compulsory. Those holding the view that art classes should not be compulsory might think that art consumes too much of students' time. Fierce competitions students will face when applying for universities necessitate total devotion to academic subjects. College students who intend to take science as their major are even expected to be fluent in foreign languages now so that essays written by foreign scholars are not barriers in their academic pursuit. In other words, high school students are supposed to show higher levels of academic competence,which seemingly makes art unessential. However, art classes are by no means only intended for entertainment. Children even dabbling in art tend to be more creative in mind. Those skilled in music or painting can interpret the world in a way that we cannot expect from a layman. This kind of ingenuity is also a rare quality constantly found in great scientists, whose contributions have served to create a totally new field for the latter generations. In his reply to a question about death, Albert Einstein considered his departure from the mortal world to be forever farewell to another great musician. With a sigh he answered "I cannot listen to Mozart anymore". Thus, can we simply regard art classes to be selective?
雅思写作素材Animal Animal 类 范文 Some people think animal experimentation should be stopped because it is cruel. Others think it is necessary for the development of science. Discuss both vieals anity at different times of the human history. In modern times, experiments upon animals have long been a breeding ground for spirited debate. Some animal right activists argue that al experiments altogether because putting animals through experimentation is unjustifiable on moral grounds. Yet some other people contend that the advancement of science necessitates animal testing. Personally, I believe both their vieerit and demerit. Granted, empirical evidence suggests that many animal experiments are performed callously fort or pain that laboratory mammals endure. First and foremost, improper confinement of test animals such as locking them up in cramped cages is inhumane. It can gravely disrupt natural