雅思小作文写作
Writing Notes
Date: July, 9th, 2017
Task I
1.Three Types
i.Data: Bar Chart, Line Graph, Table, Pie Chart
◆图表类型：动态图、静态图
◆动态图：有两个或以上时间
◆重点
●趋势
●特殊值：起点、重点、最高点、最低点、交叉点
◆静态图：只有一个或者没有时间
●比较描述对象：使用倍数、比较级
ii.Process: Flow Chart
iii.Map
◆Describe the change
◆Eg: Hospital is located to the west of car park
2.评分标准
i.Task Achievement/ Task Response
◆Cover the Requirements of the task
◆No off topics
◆不能添加主观想法，只能描述
ii.Coherence and Cohesive
◆使用路标性词汇：顺承和转折
iii.Lexical Resource
◆使用非高频词汇
◆Use words and phrases naturally and appropriately
◆Vocabulary diversity
◆Accurate spelling words
iv.Grammatical Range and Accuracy
◆Accurate grammar of sentences
◆Use different ranges of sentences, structures to achiever grammatical
3.写作方法
i.开头段
◆图表词改写
●The chart : bar chart, line chart, pie chart, table, diagram
◆动词shows改写
●注意时态
●Shows: illustrates, gives information about, compares, indicates, demonstrates
◆关键词（一定要改写）
●数量改写
?The number of + 可数
?The amount of + 不可数
?The quantity of + 可/不可数
?The figure for +可/不可数
●百分比改写
?The percentage of : the proportion of
●句式变化
?Compares + 不同事物 + in terms of + 相同事物
●名词变化
?Expending : expenditure
◆地点（可以不改写）
◆时间可以改写
●From 1980 to 2000: between 1980 and 2000, during the period from 1980 to
2000, over the period of 20 years, over a 20-year period
◆EG: The bar charts compares three types of telephone calls in terms of the
amount of time spent in the UK between 1995 and 2002.
ii.主段写法
◆第一段: 起点数值对比 + 部分趋势
◆第二段：剩下趋势 + 终点值对比
◆数字三种表述方法
●数值放在句首
?EG: 60 million tonnes of goods were transported by road in the UK.
●数值放在句末
?Stand at = be; stood at = was = totalled
?EG: The amount of goods transported by road in the UK was 60
million tonnes.
●There Be 句型
?EG: There were 60 billion tonnes of goods transported by road in the
UK.
◆比较句的写法 Comparisons
●“ compared to”, “ compared with”, “ in comparison with” + 短语
?EG: 6% of single aged person lived in poverty, compared to only 4% of
aged couple
●“while”, “ whereas” + 句子
?EG：6% of single aged person lived in poverty, while the proportion of
aged couple living in poverty was 4%.
◆3个数值的对比写法
●第一个数值 the percentage at the start
●第二个数值 add a comparison
●第三个数值 the figure for
●EG: 1999, 35% of British people went abroad for their holidays, compared
to 28% of Australians spent their holidays in a different country. The
figure for the USA stood at 31%.
●若有3个以上的数值，可以用the figure for 数值C and 数值D were X and X
respectively.
◆趋势的写法
●时间过渡短语
?Over the following ____ years
●动态图词汇
?缓慢上升： increase/ rise (rose)/ grow (grew)/ go up (went up)/ an upward
trend + gradually/ gently/ slightly/ moderately/ steadily
?急速上升：+ sharply/dramatically/ rapidly/ substantially/significantly
◆慎用： soar/ surge/ leap/ stood up
?缓慢下降： decrease/ drop/ fall/ decline/ go down/ a downward trend +
gradually/ gently/ slighted/ moderately/ steadily
?急速下降： + sharply/ dramatically/ rapidly/ substantially/ significantly
◆慎用： plunge/ slump/ plummet
?达到顶峰： reach a peak/ peak at
?持平： remain constant ( unchanged ) / level off / stabilize
?达到最低点： reach a bottom at / bottom out (at)
?波动上升或下降： fluctuate with an overall upward trend ( downward trend)
/ increase (decrease) with a few fluctuations
?顺承：similarly/ and/ likewise/ also/ besides ( 均为副词，前面加句号)
?转折： on the other hand/ however/ by contrast/ in contrast (副词，前面
加句号)； but (conj.)
?接下来： then/ afterwards ( adv.)
?尽管： although/ despite
?约数
◆以上：just above/ over / more than
◆以下：just below/ almost/ nearly
◆左右：about/ around/ approximately
?超过：outnumber/ overtake
◆EG: The consumption of chicken overtook/ outnumbered that of
( the figure for) beef in 2000.
?介词： with, of, to ,by, at
◆With: 有的含义，后面加短语
●EG： Obama won the election with 52% of the vote
◆AT: 用在加在句尾的数字，at 接数字
●EG： The percentage of votes for Obama was highest, at 52%.
◆In: a rise IN
◆动态图句式
●基本句型（主句 + 动词 + 副词）
?EG: The number of divorces rose gently from 20 million to 35 million
from 2000 to 2010.
●There be 句型
?EG： There was a gentle rise from 20 million to 35 million in the
number of divorces between 2000 and 2010.
●被动态
?EG： A gentle rise from 20 million to 35 million can be noticed/ seen
in the number of divorces during the period from 2000 to 2010.
●Witness 句式: 主语为时间
?The period from 2000 to 2010 witness/ saw a gentle rise from 20
million to 25 million in the number of divorces.
●Underwent/ Experienced 句式
?The number of divorces underwent/ experienced a gentle rise from 20
million to 35 million from 2000 to 2010.
●分词结构
?The number of divorces was 20 million, rising to 35 million.
◆时间的表达
●From 时间 on wards 从...时间以后
●Looking into the future
◆将来的表达
●Be expected to
●Predicted
●Projected
●Anticipated
◆当线超过4根及以上时
●第一段：起点数值对比
●第二段：整个趋势 +终点描述
?先写不变的先，再写变化最大的线，最后写剩余的线
?EG: Over the following 4 years, there was relatively little change in
the figures for the top three mobile phone features. However, the
percentage of people using their phones to access the internet jumped
to 41% in 2008 and then to 73% in 2010. There was also a significant
rise in the use of mobiles to play games and record video, with figures
reaching 41% and 35% respectively. + 剩余终点值对比
iii.结尾写法
◆1-2句，不需要提及数字
◆最高线、最低线
◆趋势对比
◆变化率对比
◆段首连接词： the summarize/ it is noticeable that/ it is clear that
Date: July, 23rd, 2017
Task I
1.静态图
1.开头段与动态图类似，注意改写
◆两个数值的对比：倍数、比较级、compare, while
◆EG: domestic water use = consumption of residential water
◆EG: account for the majority/minority = the largest proportion in
◆EG: expenditure = spending on
◆EG: to be more specific, according to the chart/graph
◆EG: people aged from 26 to 29 = 26-29 year olds
2.主段
◆原则
●不要以国家或地区作为分类描述对象
●维度相同时，描述对象可以选择，先做概括，在看数值
●没有国家或地区，按照维度小的作为描述对象
●多余12个数值需要筛选来描述
?最高值
?第二高值
?最低值
?类比差异（比例）最大的值
◆句式
●最高级、最低级
?The number(数量)/percentage of A is largest/highest/maximal/
Lowest/smallest
?EG: The proportion of sole parents living in poverty was highest, 21%.
●比较级
?Be higher/ larger than that
? A is considerably higher than B. 超过很多
? A is marginally higher than B. 超过一点点
?EG: The proportion of single aged person living in poverty (6%) was
higher than that of aged couple (4%)
?EG: The consumption of chicken was higher than that of beef/the
figure for beef.
●倍数
? A is less than/ more than twice/three times B. (A =B*2)
a)EG: The consumption of chicken was twice that of beef.
b)EG: The proportion of the elderly in 2005 was three times the
figure in 1995. (15% versus 5%)
?Double/ triple/ quadruple
a)EG: Rent as a percentage of the household expenditure more than
doubled between 1975 and 1985.
?Twofold/threefold 用于动态图 adj & adv
a)EG: The consumption of chicken increased twofold from 1990 to
1995 (adv)
b)EG: There was a twofold increase in retail sales. (adj)
c)EG: The rent on average increased threefold in the past five
years.
?Twice/ three times as ... as/ compared to
a)EG: Television was twice as popular as washing machine in 1999.
b)EG：The consumption of chicken was twice as much (可数用many)
as that of beef.
●占据
?Account for = constitute= take up = occupy
◆多重数值比较
●最高值（最高级）-次高值（比较级）-最低值（倍数）-同级比较剩余数值
?EG：The percentage of spending on food was highest in Turkey
(32.14%) around 3% higher than that（后面是地名可以省略） in Ireland
（28.91%） and more than twice the figure for Sweden (15.77%).
The figures for another two countries were similar, 16.36% in Italy
and 18.80% in Spain.
●Rank 排名
? A ranked first (%) followed by B in类别, while the figures for C and D
were remarkably lower at (%) and (%) respectively.
a)EG: Italy ranked first at 9% followed by Spain in
clothing/footwear.
? A ranked second, ahead of/ behind 对象in 类别
a)EG：In 1999, Australia ranked second behind the USA in domestic
waste generation.
●对比 while/ compared to / in contrast
?最高值（最高级）-中间数值（对比写法+原级）-剩余数值/较低值/最低数值
（对比+比较级）
a)EG: Italy has the highest proportion of expenditure on clothing
and footwear (9%). In contrast, these items constituted/occupied/
accounted for around 6% of expenditure in Ireland, Spain and
Turkey, while the figure was even smaller in Sweden (5.4%).
?最高值(比较级)-中间数值（对比+比较级）-剩余数值/较低值/最低数值(对比+
比较级)
a)EG: Turkey had higher proportion of expenditure than other
countries on leisure and education. The percentage of spending was
lower in Italy and Sweden (roughly 3.2%), compared to the lowest
figure in Spain (1.98%).
●动态点起点数值比较（与动态图一致）
◆不同对象描述之间的过渡
●趋势不同
?The opposite trend can be noticed/seen, when looking at the figure for
●趋势相同
?The similar trend can be noticed/ seen, when looking at the figure for
3.总结
◆最值
●EG： Overall, we can see that playing computer games is marginally more
popular than chatting. However, completely different trends can be seen
if we look at the specific figures for boys and girls. 万能句型）
◆归纳对象的共同点和其他对象的不同点
●EG：It is noticeable that the largest proportion of consumer spending in
each country went on food, drinks and tobacco. On the other hand, the
leisure/education category has the lowest percentage in the table shown.
2.地图题
i.原则
◆方位描述（第一张图）
◆变化描述（第二张图）
ii.句式
◆三种方位
● A is/lies/stands/is located/ is situated in (包含)/ on (内部相邻)/ to (分开)
the west of B
?EG： The hospital is located in the south of the school.
●There be + 定语从句
?EG: There is a hospital which lies in the south of the school.
●倒装
?EG: In the south of the school lies a new hospital.
◆表达
●距离: A lies 100 km to the north of B
●邻近: A is adjacent to/ is just off/ is next to / is close to/ in the vicinity
of B.
●对面: A is on the opposite side of B = A is opposite to B
●包围: A is surrounded by B.
●代替: the original/ previous/ former
●(路)连接: lead to/ connect to
●尺寸: enlarge/ extend/ doubled/ tripled/increased four-
fold/halved/reduced
?EG: The size of the library is planned to be enlarged two-fold.
●消失: remove/no longer exist/ be demolished （不用disappear）
●新添
? A will be established/ built/ constructed in
? A newly-built/a newly-established/ a newly-constructed will be seen
●原有事务改为
?Be transformed/ reconstructed/ redeveloped/ converted to B
? A be replaced/ substituted by B
? A gives ways to make room for B
iii.主段
◆Turning to the next map, the east part of the island nearly remains constant,
but there are significant changes after developing tourism. First, two
accommodation areas are established in the west as well as in the middle of
the island with footpaths linking each house. Between them, there is a
restaurant in the north and a reception in the south, both of which are
connected by vehicle tracks directly to the pier where sailing boats are
parked. Additionally, swimming is available for tourists now probably due to
the newly-built footpaths which link the west accommodation area with the
beach.
iv.总结
◆To summarize, considerable changes take place on the island after the
development of various tourist facilities.
3.大作文 Task II
i.要求
◆时间：40 min
◆字数：280 words (>250 words)
◆题型：议论类、报告类、混合类
◆占分比例：2/3
ii.评分标准（与小作文的区别）
◆不偏题
◆观点清楚
◆每个问题都要回答
◆细节（不能想当然），解释清楚、充分展开
◆论证逻辑
●EG: Smoking puts health at great risk. It has associated with many serious
diseases. According to research, the likelihood for tobacco users to have
heart problems is far greater that those who stay away from this habit.
Indeed, the percentage of smokers’ getting heart attack and lung cancer
is 10 times higher than that of nonsmokers’.
●EG:Criminals-offenders-prisons-lawbreakers-people who broke laws-people
committing crimes
●EG: Overworking, coupled with poor diet, leads to physical degeneration iii.原则
◆On topic
◆Details supporting your opinion
◆四段式或五段式
◆简单句和复杂句交错使用
◆词汇
●词汇范围，使用less common 词汇，注意用词替换
?反向词汇
a)increase-alienation
b)demotivate-motivate
?同向词汇
a)Toxic gas = exhaust fumes
b)Alleviate=relieve=mitigate stress
?EG: Alleviate financial burden
?EG: Soil erosion was mitigated by planting tress
?EG: these measures are designed to alleviate the situation
c)Clear fuels = non-fossil fuels = renewable fuels
d)Support=advocate
e)Opponents=sceptics
●语法没有错误
?常犯错误：一个句子出现多个谓语动词/句子成分残缺/词性错误/主谓不一
致
?可数：pl. 或 a/the + n
?不可数: the + n (特指)/什么都不加
◆Linking 明暗交错使用
●明连接：firstly, secondly, thirdly
?EG: There are several reasons why people believe that more money
should be allocated to encourage the use of bicycles in cities. Firstly,
they argue that bicycles are an environmentally friendly form of
transport. Whereas motorized vehicles pollute the atmosphere with a
whole host of toxic gases, bicycles produce no emissions whatsoever.
Secondly, bicycles take up far less space on public roads, and traffic
congestion would therefore be significantly reduced if more people
use them. Finally, from a health perspective, it can be argued that
riding a bicycle regularly is not only good cardiovascular exercise for
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雅思小作文真题 【篇一：雅思作文题目汇总】 一、教育 1、教育应该包括哪些内容？ 母题：it is generally believed that education is of vital importance to the development of individuals and the well-being of societies. what should education consist of to fulfil both these functions? (050312) 提示：本题围绕教育的两大功能来展开（个人与社会），准备好这篇文章，即可应付教育类话题中的最大分支—教育的功能，做到以不变应万变。对于社会角度，可以从促进经济发展、增加社会流动性(social mobility)、维护社会稳定这几个方面来展开，对于个人，可以写改变思维模式、有利于就业和便利生活来写。 子题：大学应当教授理论知识还是实践技能？大学的是应当把学生培养成合格的公民还是让他们自己得益？准备未来职业最好的方法是上大学还是尽快离校积累工作经验？大学要不要扩招？中学阶段应当提供通才教育还是专才教育？要不要延长义务教育年限？要不要让农村地区的学生更容易上学？老师要教学生如何判断是非吗？ 2、学校的科目谁来选择？(060916) 母题：some people think that the government should decide which subjects students should study at the university, while others think that students should be allowed to apply for the subject they prefer. discuss the two views and give your opinion. 提示：这类题目采取的策略就是“双批判”，因为题目中提供的两种选择往往都是错误的。
雅思写作小作文范文118篇之范文14 以下是三立在线雅思网给大家分享的雅思写作小作文范文118篇：范文14。希望对大家的雅思备考有所帮助，更多雅思备考资料欢迎大家随时关注三立在线雅思网。 范文14 The computer is widely used in education，and some people think teachers do not play important roles in the classroom. To what extend do you agree or disagree? In this period of communication,computer has been used in all kinds of fields widely, and plays a particular role in our lives. Especially computer has become more and more important in educational field, therefore dozens of people considered teachers could be replaced computers that will go with the current of the times. The above point is certainly wrong; this essay will outline three reasons. The main reason is that people’s brain better than computer. Firstly, people design all kinds of computer’s programs. Secondly, computer doesn’t have logistic ideation. Computer only can defend on that designer inputted computer’s programs to judge a question’s right or wrong. In other words, computer can’t defend on thinking that computer independently analyzes a question’s right or wrong. In case, designer inputted programs that are wrong. Computer output the result that also will be wrong. If this kind of problem happened in classroom, students would be infused plenty of wrong information.
雅思作文常见开头结尾形式 注：如下方式，雅思写作针对性强，且略带模板印迹，同学应在充分理解结构的基础上，用上面的方法去灵活写作 雅思大作文第一段一定要包括这样三个基本要素：“背景句”，“话题”和“观点”。这三个部分是完整统一的，一定不能忽略。 第一，背景句：背景句主要起到引题的作用，但要紧密联系题目中的话题。其方法是围绕题干中的关键词或核心词展开。 背景句的写作方法： 1 联系社会背景：任何一个话题肯定都于一定的社会发展息息相关，所以联系关键词的社会背景是一种最简单、最常用的方法。具体可以有以下5种句式： 1) The 21st century witnesses --- 2) With the development of science and technology,--- 3) In modern society, --- 4) It is quite common these days that --- 5) Recently,--- 例如：There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. Do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phones? 参考背景句： The late 20th century witnessed the boom of science and technology, which gave rise to a series of technological innovations, including the mobile phone. 或with the development of science and technology, the mobile phone is more and more available to and popular with common people. 2 重述话题：有的时候题干里是有一个背景介绍的，这时候我们只需将题目所给话题重新复述一遍即可。但切忌原样照搬照抄，不过可以将原文中的词汇和句式进行同义转换。转换句型可以有以下三种． 1) it is generally believed that --- 2) it is said that--- 3) it is reported that--- 例如：Nowadays, people are facing more and more work-related stress. State the possible reasons for this phenomenon and make some recommendations about how to combat it. 参考背景句： It is generally believed that individuals are confronted with psychological and physical stress coming from work. 3解释中心词: 即将中心词进行解释或展开说明。此种方法一般适合容易下定义的词比如图书馆。可以有以下三个句型： 1)It is known to all that --- 2)As is known to all, --- 3)--- is known as--- 例如：The main purpose of public libraries is to provide books and they should not waste their
The table below shows the amount of waste production (in millions of tonnes) in six different countries over a twenty-year period. The chart compares the amounts of waste that were produced in six countries in the years 1980, 1990 and 2000. In each of these years, the US produced more waste than Ireland, Japan, Korea, Poland and Portugal combined. It is also noticeable that Korea was the only country that managed to reduce its waste output by the year 2000. Between 1980 and 2000, waste production in the US rose from 131 to 192 million tonnes, and rising trends were also seen in Japan, Poland and Portugal. Japan’s waste output increased from 28 to 53 million tonnes, while Poland and Portugal saw waste totals increase from 4 to 6.6 and from 2 to 5 million tonnes respectively. The trends for Ireland and Korea were noticeably different from those described above. In Ireland, waste production increased more than eightfold, from only 0.6 million tonnes in 1980 to 5 million tonnes in 2000. Korea, by contrast, cut its waste output by 12 million tonnes between 1990 and 2000.
1. 该表格描述了在...年之...年间...数量的变化。 2. 该柱状图展示了... 3. 该图为我们提供了有关...有趣数据。 4. 该图向我们展示了... 5. 该线形图揭示了... 6. 这个曲线图描述了...的趋势。 7. 数据(字)表明... 8. 该树型图向我们揭示了如何... 9. 该数据(字)可以这样理解... 10. 这些数据资料令我们得出结论... 11. 如图所示... 12. 根据这些表(数字)... 13. 如表格所示... 14. 从图中可以看出，...发生了巨大变化。 15. 从图表我们可以很清楚(明显)看到... 16. 这个图表向我们展示了... 17. 该表格描述了...年到...年间a与b的比例关系。 18. 该图描述了...总的趋势。 19. 这是个柱型图，描述了...
20. 如图所示，两条曲线描述了...的波动情况。 21. 在...至...期间，...基本不变。 22. 在...年到...的期间 23. 1995年至1998三年里... 24. 从那时起... 25. ...月(年)至...月(年)...的数量基本不变。 26. 数字急剧上升至... 27. ...至...期间...的比率维持不变。 28. ...的数目在...月(年)达到顶点，为... 29. 比率维持在... 30. ...的比例比...的比例略高(低)。 31. ...与...的区别不大。 32. 该图表表明...的数目增长了三倍。 33. ...逐年减少，而...逐步上升。 34. ...的情况(局势)到达顶(高)点，为...百分点。 35. 数字(情况)在...达到底部。 36. 数字(情况)达到底部(低谷)。 37. a是b的...倍。 38. a增长了...
题目： The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. 范文： The first diagram illustrates the process of cement manufacture, and the second diagram shows the materials that go into the production of concrete. It is clear that there are five stages in the production of cement, beginning with the input of raw materials and ending with bags of the finished product. To produce concrete, four different materials are mixed together. At the first stage in the production of cement, limestone and clay are crushed to form a powder. This powder is then mixed before it passes into a rotating heater. After heating, the resulting mixture is ground, and cement is produced. Finally, the cement is packaged in large bags. Cement is one of the four raw materials that are used in the production of concrete, along with gravel, sand and water. To be exact, concrete consists of 50% gravel, 25% sand, 15% cement and 10% water. All four materials are blended together in a rotating machine called a concrete mixer. (160 words, band 9)
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雅思小作文table 【篇一：雅思小作文表格图实例分析】 雅思小作文表格图实例分析 朗阁海外考试研究中心 表格图是雅思小作文的常考图形之一，也是烤鸭们在备考时必须要准备的一类题型。那么烤鸭们具体应该如何准备表格图呢？下面，朗阁海外考试研究中心的专家将以一道具体的实例，就这一题型的解题思路和步骤做出详尽的分析和解答。 the table below shows personal savings as a percentage of personal income for selected countries in 1989, 1999 and 2009. personal savings as a percentage of personal income 一、审题，决定大体写作方式 首先，读题目，了解到这幅表格图是关于“几个国家的人民个人收入中存款的百分比”以及三个时间点（据此，正文部分描述存款率是时态基调为过去时）。表格上方的title和题目表述一样，没有额外信息，因此，读一遍即可。 然后，审具体表格，决定大致写作方向和方式，即分段方式。表格的审图需要注意以下几个方面：横轴，纵轴和总体数据特征。此图中的横纵轴分别是时间和7个研究对象——7个国 家。横纵轴中间有一栏为时间，那说明，此图原则上应该按曲线图原理来写——即，描述7个国家存款率上升或下降趋势；但是，经过下一步对表格中数据总体特征的总结发现：7个国家的存款率在这一段时间内总体呈现下降趋势。这一发现说明，如果继续按照曲线图原理描述，文章会非常单调，而且对比的空间也不大；相反，同一年份里，
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Writing Notes Date: July, 9th, 2017 Task I 1.Three Types i.Data: Bar Chart, Line Graph, Table, Pie Chart ◆图表类型：动态图、静态图 ◆动态图：有两个或以上时间 ◆重点 ●趋势 ●特殊值：起点、重点、最高点、最低点、交叉点 ◆静态图：只有一个或者没有时间 ●比较描述对象：使用倍数、比较级 ii.Process: Flow Chart iii.Map ◆Describe the change ◆Eg: Hospital is located to the west of car park 2.评分标准 i.Task Achievement/ Task Response ◆Cover the Requirements of the task ◆No off topics ◆不能添加主观想法，只能描述 ii.Coherence and Cohesive ◆使用路标性词汇：顺承和转折 iii.Lexical Resource ◆使用非高频词汇 ◆Use words and phrases naturally and appropriately ◆Vocabulary diversity ◆Accurate spelling words iv.Grammatical Range and Accuracy ◆Accurate grammar of sentences ◆Use different ranges of sentences, structures to achiever grammatical 3.写作方法 i.开头段 ◆图表词改写 ●The chart : bar chart, line chart, pie chart, table, diagram ◆动词shows改写 ●注意时态 ●Shows: illustrates, gives information about, compares, indicates, demonstrates ◆关键词（一定要改写） ●数量改写 ?The number of + 可数 ?The amount of + 不可数 ?The quantity of + 可/不可数 ?The figure for +可/不可数 ●百分比改写
雅思大作文的写作方法:直接表达法 雅思大作文的写作方法:直接表达法 直接表述观点 Well, do you think people can tell you their real thoughts just through phone? Without person-to-person contact, it is unlikely for you to dig deep into their minds and unlikely to get truth. 大部分情况下，英文是首句中心句，段落其他部分是支持中心句的内容，所以听到首句就是主要意思，因此这种模式相对简单，表示观点的词，比如赞成(support, be for ,go for be on the side of, quite agree with)，中立( mutual, just so so, you can try it, not the best)，反对( not good, be against, not recommend, better avoid )，喜欢(be favor of, like, prefer)，一般态度(its ok, but)，不喜欢(dislike)，必须( must, it is necessary)，依情况而定( it depends)，没必要( not necessary)，等等。 以下举几个直接表达观点的例子，大家可以看一下。 直接观点表达：
Another hazard for your back are the shock waves which travel up your spine when you walk, known as heel strike. A real find for our patients has been the shock-absorbing shoe . A cheap but very effective solution.支持 Finally, a word about the state-of-the-art relief- the TENS machine-a small battery-powered gadget which delivers subliminal electrical pulses to the skin. Our experience indicates that your money is better spent on the more old-fashioned remedies.反对 【雅思大作文的写作方法:直接表达法】 1.雅思写作方法 2.雅思大作文写作方法 3.雅思小作文写作方法 4.常见的作文五大写作方法 5.2015雅思小作文流程图的写作方法 6.雅思大作文主体段写作方法 7.雅思大作文的写作方法:客观利弊法 8.雅思小作文流程图的写作方法「精编」
【优质】雅思小作文真题范文：咖啡的制作-优秀word范文 本文部分内容来自网络整理，本司不为其真实性负责，如有异议或侵权请及时联系，本司将立即删除！ == 本文为word格式，下载后可方便编辑和修改！ == 雅思小作文真题范文：咖啡的制作 The diagram shows the stages in the process of making chocolate . Chocolate comes from the cacao tree , which is grown in parts of South America , Africa and Indonesia . The tree produces large red pods which contain white cocoa beans . Firstly , when the pods are ripe , they are harvested , the beans are removed and they are fermented for several days in large wooden boxes . During the fermenting process , the beans turn brown . Next , the brown beans are spread in the sun to dry . They are then put in large sacks and transported by train or lorry . After this , the beans are taken to a chocolate factory where they are roasted in an oven at temperatures of between 250 and 350 degree Celsius . After being roasted , the beans are crushed and the outer shell is removed . This part is not needed for making chocolate . Finally , the inner part of the bean is pressed and liquid chocolate is produced .
雅思小作文模板句必备50句型 A 1.the table shows the changes in the number of...over the period from...to... 该表格描述了在...年之...年间...数量的变化。 2.the bar chart illustrates that... 该柱状图展示了... 3.the graph provides some interesting data regarding... 该图为我们提供了有关...有趣数据。 4.the diagram shows (that)... 该图向我们展示了... 5.the pie graph depicts (that).... 该圆形图揭示了... 6.this is a cure graph which describes the trend of... 这个曲线图描述了...的趋势。 7.the figures/statistics show (that)... 数据(字)表明... 8.the tree diagram reveals how... 该树型图向我们揭示了如何... 9.the data/statistics show (that)... 该数据(字)可以这样理解... 10.the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that... 这些数据资料令我们得出结论... 11.as is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table... 如图所示... 12.according to the chart/figures... 根据这些表(数字)... 13.as is shown in the table... 如表格所示... 14.as can be seen from the diagram, great changes have taken place in... 从图中可以看出，...发生了巨大变化。 15.from the table/chart/diagram/figure, we can see clearly that...or it is clear/apparent from the chart that... 从图表我们可以很清楚(明显)看到... 16.this is a graph which illustrates... 这个图表向我们展示了... 17.this table shows the changing proportion of a & b from...to... 该表格描述了...年到...年间a与b的比例关系。 18.the graph, presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in... 该图以圆形图形式描述了...总的趋势。 19.this is a column chart showing... 这是个柱型图，描述了...
一.思大作文的15大考察内容 考察频率最高专题： ? 1. 教育：儿童，中学，大学教育体制和方法 ? 2. 科技发展对生活的影响 ? 3.文化的组成因素和保护 ? 4.生活方式的转变和社会观念 ? 5. 全球化及其影响 ? 6. 环境问题和环境保护 ?7. 政府投资 考察次重点专题： ? 1. 艺术的价值 ? 2.媒体的作用 ? 3.广告的影响 ? 4.动物的保护和动物实验 ? 5.城乡差距和城市化 ? 6.犯罪 ?7.弱势群体：妇女的权利，妇女参军 ?8.体育 雅思写作错误检查表（10条） 1.使用了正确的语法结构：时态语态，主谓一致，从句，用词准确(名词，动词，形容 词的形式)，介词，冠词 2.句式有变化 3.使用了一定量的词汇 4. 拼写没有错误 5. 观点明确，语意精准不模糊 6. 每段主题句都表明了该段中心思想，所有拓展句支持句都紧扣主题 7. 大量的过渡性词语(逻辑连接词)，使句子间和段落间都具有逻辑性和条理性 8. 提供了足够的细节，例子或论据 9. 每一段话都得到充分展开 10. 每一段话都紧扣文章主题 如何应用： a.1347当做检查项目，其他当做考前提醒 b.时间紧，就改第一段和每段的前两句话 三.大作文首段基本写作策略---三步走 1.转述背景，扩展题目(setting/ background information )：把题目所提供的背景再用自 己的话拓展转述同义替换一下 题目：It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sports or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to be a good sports person or musician. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 考官写的开头段： The relative importance of natural talent and training is a frequent topic of discussion when people try to explain different levels of ability in, for example, sports, art or music. 2. 说明意图(statement of purposes)：
老外写的小作文范文，比较直观~~ 第一篇 作文题目 第一篇范文参考 model answer: The two graphs show that oil was the major energy source in the USA in both 1980 and 1990 and that coal, natural gas and hydroelectric power remained in much the same proportions. On the other hand, there was a dramatic rise in nuclear power, which doubled its percentage over the ten years. Oil supplied the largest percentage of energy, although the percentage decreased from 42% in 1980 to 33% in 1990. Coal in 1990 was the second largest source of energy, increasing its proportion to 27% from 22% in the previous decade. Natural gas, the second largest source in 1980 at 26%, decreased its share very slightly to provide 25% of America’s energy ten years later. There was no change in the percentage supplied by hydroelectric power which remained at 5% of the total energy used. Nuclear power the greatest change: in 1990 it was 10%, twice that of the 1980s. (152 words)