小学英语日记带翻译范文篇一
The end of the summer, should have a good rest! But my mother is very busy. As the daughter of course I want to help my mother to do some. Early in the morning I got up, washed the dishes, sweep the floor, cooking and so on, at noon, I tired, lying on the bed, fan fan, more comfortable.
译文：终于放暑假了，应该好好歇歇了!可是妈妈很忙。作为女儿的我当然要帮妈妈分担些了。一大清早的我就起来了，帮妈妈洗碗，扫地，做饭等等，到了中午，我快累死了，往床上一躺，扇扇电风扇，舒服多了。
小学英语日记带翻译范文篇二
his morning I woke up at 6 o ’clock is to the kitchen for mom made a bowl of beef and tomato noodles, mother looked at me as she do breakfast is very happy, she finally put all eat noodles, very delicious, also say I grew up, not a kid, can look after himself, I listened also very happy.
译文：今天早上我6点钟就醒来了然后到厨房为妈妈做了一碗牛肉西红柿面，妈妈看了我为她做的早饭很高兴，最后她把面条全部吃
了，说很好吃，还说我长大了，不在是小孩了，可以自己照顾自己了，我听了也很开心。
小学英语日记带翻译范文篇三
What a fine day today ! I’m very happy in this fine day . Because today I don’t have to do my homework and I can play with my good friends .There is lots of snow now ,so we make a snow man .That’s really interesting .We play with snow to about 6:30 .Of course I must go home now. What a fan day !
译文：多么好的天气阿!在这样的好天气里我非常高兴，因为今天我不用写作业，并且可以和朋友们出去玩。这里现在有很多雪，所以我们堆了一个雪人。那真的很有趣。我们玩雪，一直到晚上6：30。当然现在我必须回家了。多么有趣的一天啊!
小学英语日记带翻译范文篇四
No sooner had the winter vacation begun than I returned to my native town. Of course I must make good use of it; In the morning I reviewed my lessons and read newspapers or magazines. In the afternoon I played ball games with my friends or went fishing in the river. At night I watched television with my family. hardly had the
小学英语研修日志 一、课堂听力训练的原则 １、坚持用英语组织教学，除非用英语解释不清楚时。（在学生的生活和学习环境中，英语教师是唯一能让学生感受到英语氛围的渠道，这就需要我们这群转岗教师要尽快提高自己的口语水平，可以从同事那里学，可以从网络优质课老师那里学，还可以从歌曲中学。） ２、尽可能用正常的语速教学。（不要故意放慢速度，否则显得发音不地道，也不利于学生听力培养。用正常语速对老师来说更是挑战，我们可以通过听录音、听广播、看电影、练朗读等方式来让自己的发音语速更地道。） ３、课文录音是很好的听力训练的材料，要让学生合上书听，可以出示适当的问题帮助学生更好的理解文本。（看着书会干扰听的信息的摄取，听之前教师可以设置适当的问题，让学生有目的地听。同样读也要专一的读才能很好的理解文本。以前只是为赶教学而教书，重结果而轻过程，以后就知道了，要充分利用教材。） Listen to the tape with the books closed, not opened. Put up proper questions to help your students to understand the contents better. ４、要培养学生良好的听力习惯。（学生模仿能力强，此基础上还要培养学生静心、耐心、注意观察等习惯。） 二、说的教学应遵循的原则 １、说的练习要循序渐进，机械模仿是必不可少的，在此基础上可以拓展、应用。如：值日生报告。每天上课前三分钟由值日生来展示（可一个人也可找同伴配合），要形成常规，让学生有所准备地展示，而不是搞突击灵活指定。 ２、对话练习切忌两人或几人离得太远，要以同桌或小组为主，营造对话的真实感觉。 ３、拓展练习中，要创设信息差。如：学习Ｗhat’s your name?教师对着全班同学一个一个问，学生一个一个回答：Ｍy name is …看上去练得挺热闹，但旁观者看来不可思议，怎么老师连自己的学生都不认识？其实稍稍一改就行了，让每个学生给自己起个英文名字，课堂上用英文名字来操练，这样就真实些了。 ４、说的练习要依据教材，不要拘泥于教材，可以将前面知识联系起来。如：三年级学习食物时练习Ｗhat do you like? I like …之后，可以用I like …来复习学过的颜色、小动物等。 三、读的教学原则 读在这里指的是阅读。
《英语日记大全带翻译》 英语日记大全带翻译（一）： Saturday， my grandma made dumplings， one of the dumplings like obedient little ducks swimming in the bowl。 My in the mind have a little not to eat them。 But the smell of fragrance and let me greedy slobber， I eat up tit-bit。 But I eat dumplings， the heart have a kind of feeling can not tell。译文：星期六我奶奶家包饺子了，一个个 的饺子像听话的小鸭子在碗里游来游去。我心里有点不忍心吃他们了。但是那扑鼻而来的香味又让我馋得流口水，我就大口大口地吃了起来。但是我吃完饺子，心里有一种说不出来的感觉。 英语日记大全带翻译（二）： This morning I woke up at 6 o clock is to the kitchen for mom made a bowl of beef and tomato noodles， mother looked at me as she do breakfast is very happy， she finally put all eat noodles， very delicious， also say I grew up， not a kid， can look after himself， I listened also very happy。译文：这天早上我6点钟就醒来了然后到厨房为妈妈 做了一碗牛肉西红柿面，妈妈看了我为她做的早饭很高兴，最后她把面条全部吃了，说很好吃，还说我长大了，不在是小孩了，能够自我照顾自我了，我听了也很开心。 英语日记大全带翻译（三）： August 12，2012 Friday Today， I did housework for grandmother。 She is not very healthy and I decide to do housework for her more frequently。 And she will feel happy and bee better。 Suddenly， an idea hit me that its terrible to grow old becuase you have to worry about both your health and others opinions。 Once again， I make a decision to be a good girl。译文：这天，我帮忙了奶奶做家务。奶奶的身体不好。我以后要常帮她做事。这样她就会高兴身体也会好一些。突然觉得，人老了真不好。不但身体不会好，而且一不留意就会惹得大家厌恶。我又做了一个决定，以后必须要做个乖孩子。 英语日记大全带翻译（四）： It was sunny and very hot today。 I got up early and helped my parents cook breakfast。 Then I washed the dishes and cleaned the room。 After a short rest I did my homework in the morning。 In the afternoon I went swimming in the nearest swimming pool with my friends。 It was really cool to swim in such a hot day。 I surfed the internet and read a storybook in the evening。 I really had a busy and interesting day。译文：这天天气晴朗比较热。我起得很早，帮父母做早饭。然 后我洗碗打扫屋子。休息一会后我上午做作业。下午我和朋友去我家最近的游泳池游泳。 在如此炎热的夏天游泳的确很棒。晚上我上网、看故事书。我这天很忙过得很搞笑。 英语日记大全带翻译（五）： I got up early this morning。 After breakfast I went to the beach near my home with my friends。 We went there by bike。 As soon as we
1. 感谢信 假设你是李华，梁教授去年六月推荐你去悉尼大学深造，现在你已经被悉尼大学化学学院录取，请写封信向梁教授表示感谢。 【优秀满分范文】 Dear Professor Liang, I am writing to extend my gratitude to you. Because of your help，now I am a student of Chemistry Department of Sydney University. Last June, when I applied to become a graduate student of Sydney University, you really gave me a lot of valuable help. You not only wrote a recommendation for me to Professor Wells who works in the Sydney University，but also gave me careful and patient instructions on how to fill the application forms and write the application letters. It is your unreserved help that enables me to obtain this splendid opportunity of further education. For the following two years I will study hard to reciprocate （回报）your sincere help and expectations with excellent grades. Yours truly, Li Hua 2. 道歉信 假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你和在上海上学的英国朋友Tom约好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封电子邮件： 1. 表示歉意； 2. 解释原因； 3. 另约时间。 注意：1. 词数120~150；2. 可适当增加细节。
英语教育实习日记六篇 篇一 今天，黄校长给我们介绍说，观看家长们接送小孩子是他们掘港小学的风景线和传统。他们称之为“爱心的传递”。刚开始我不能理解为什么这样称呼。也许黄校长看出了我们的疑惑，便讲解、指导了一番。让我们明白了这份爱和责任是如何传递的。 从孩子们下车，到父母们给他们脱掉厚厚的防晨寒的衣物，再到目送孩子们进了校园。这样一切的行为和眼神，都被身在一旁的我们看在眼里，感动在心里。我曾观察到这样一位母亲。目送女儿进了校门之后，本可放心离开。但她一边调转摩托车，目光却一直停留在渐行渐远的女儿身上。调转完毕后，她仍足足驻留了有十五秒钟，直至女儿的背影完全消失不见，才慢慢离开。 黄校长说，只要看到家长们这样的眼神，他们就必须把学校的教育办好，承担好这份沉甸甸的爱和责任。这样的思想，这样的追求，以前丁老师也给我们灌输过。但那时太过不以为然，我们以为好好对学生、认真对学生、全心全意为学生，这又有何难?这两天才明白，哪有我们想象的那么容易! 孩子是家里的，是每个家庭的希望。要想成为一名合格的教师，最基本的道德素质就是爱心和责任。具备了这两点，你才能拥有承担这份沉甸甸责任的资格。 篇二
今天恰逢如东县赛课的最后一天，在校园观察行后。我们一行人便匆匆从掘港小学 赶往赛课地点宾山小学，果还是晚了一步，错过了第一课。但接下来的四课，还是让我 看到了很多，思考了很多，受益匪浅。 前两堂课，由于所教授的内容均为“Seeingthedoctor”，沈老师和陆老师的设计思路 有些大同小异，只是在相同环节采取不同的表现形式。但从这儿我们不难看出，那种共 同的教授模式是合理的，至少在平日的课堂教学里是有效的。除此之外，陆老师在巩固 环节中添加了一些英文谚语，在学生们无意识的时候，便给他们灌输了英语文化、英语 意识。我个人认为这样的做法是很不错的、可取的。 第三课“Ourschoolbuilding”，由一位男老师——陈剑执教。他的课堂中有很多亮点，比如“Doyouknow”和“Self—assessment”等这些很自主、很人文的环节，我非常地欣赏。而且由于是一位男英语老师，一亮相便吸引了学生们的眼球，为课堂良好氛围的创造打 下了夯实的基础。整堂课中不乏欢声笑语，这样的课堂是我期望、和期待创造的。 今天的最后一堂课也是“Ourschoolbuilding”。执教者，Zoe，她的课堂环节设计紧凑，创立了一个非常真实、引人入胜的课堂语言环境。而且整堂课进行得环环相扣、衔接自然，引导学生们一步一步走进课堂，掌握知识。 四堂课虽说只有两篇授课内容，但授课形式各有千秋，授课效果也各有不同。我们 要从中学会发现优点并吸收，认识缺点并改善。 集思广益，才能创造出更好更优的课堂。 篇三
小学英语教师日记随笔 作为天下间最光辉的职业，教师的日记总是包含着许多正能量的，以下就是来自作者为大家整理的小学英语教师日记随笔，欢迎阅读和借鉴。 小学英语教师日记随笔【第一篇】：小学英语教师教学随笔 作为教师，我们有责任使每个学生学好英语。我们农村学校缺少英语学习环境，我就把我的英语自修与英语教学结合起来，与学生共同学习；人与人之间存在着一定的差异，这是客观的，要大面积提高教学质量，必须面向全体学生，因材施教，充分调动每一个学生的积极性主动性，让每个学生主动地、生动活泼地学习和发展，一步一个脚印，最终都有所学。 英语语言有三个方面，即语音、语法以及词汇。语音是根本的。语法和词汇都是通过语音得到体现的。在学习英语的过程中，学好发音是十分重要的第一步。只有学好发音，才能听懂别人说的话，也才能让别人听懂你说的话。能听能说，英语就算学活了。只有学好发音，才能把所学的语言材料以正确的形式在脑子里存储下来，以正确的形式使它重现，从而加强对语言的感受，最有效地掌握语法和词汇，提高实际使用的能力。因此，学好发音是不可缺少的第一步。发音没有认真学好，不仅英语说不好，连朗读都有困难；这样，就很难学得活和学得牢，也很难较快地尝到学习英语的甜头。一开头学好语音，学英语的方法对，路子宽，以后收效会越来越大的。 从第一节英语课开始我就渗透语音教学，教给学生发音，强调发音要领，持之以恒，以听说为主方向，让学生在有意和无意中真正感受到英语。学生学习英语，光会说几个单词、几句简单的日常用语，如“Hello！Bye-bye！”是远远不够的，不能引起他们学习的兴趣，英语离他们是遥远的，所以要创造条件使学生充分地去练习听说。Let’s play中的绕口令，以及我平时教给学生的一些句子都可以看作是例句，课上课下、师生之间、同学之间进行“有意练习”、“无意练习”。 学习英语的另一块基石就是词汇，不管是听说还是读写，都离不开词汇，所以，一定要重视词汇教学。一是让学生自己通过课本插图、我去引导明确单词中文意义，二是学生自己看清单词字母组成、利用音图拼读出来；学有余力的学生
小学英语作文范文（必背） Mike is a student. He is my good friend. He is busy at the weekend. He is going to read a magazine this Saturday morning. He is going to go to the zoo this Saturday afternoon. He is going to buy a book this Sunday morning. He is going to learn Kungfu this Sunday afternoon. He is going to watch TV this Sunday evening. 小学英语作文范文（必背） 2、看图写作文。（园地29页） 题目：A Happy Day in Spring 提示：下图是Mr. Black 一家人在春天的某一天在野外游玩的场景。请用一般现在时描写图中所呈现出的内容。可作适当的想象和发挥。 要求：1、条理清晰，意思明确、连贯，句子通顺，标点正确，书写工整、规范。 2、不少于70个单词。 A Happy Day in Spring It’s spring. It’s sunny and cloudy today. There are many big trees in the park. Mr. Black’s family have a picnic in a park. They bring many food there. They bring fruit, drink and bread. Mr. Black and Mrs. Black talk with each other. They talk very happily. Ann reads a magazine. Tom likes flying a kite. The kite flies very well. They are hungry now. They want to eat their food. They are very happy. 小学英语作文范文（必背） 3、根据下面提供的内容，写一篇英语短文。要求语句通顺，条理清楚，字数不少于50个单词。 Mary 是个英国女孩，五年级学生，十二岁。她向别人自我介绍，并介绍她的家庭。她有个双胞胎姐姐，爸爸是医生，妈妈是老师，她非常爱他们，他们也很爱她。 My name is Mary. I come from England. I am an English girl. I am a student. I am in Grade Five. I like my teacher. Her English is good. There are four people in my family. I have a twin sister. My father is a doctor. My mother is a teacher. I love them very much. They love me, too.
Grammar or Communication There appears a phenomenon that more attention is given to cultivating communication skills while grammar is neglected in English teaching. Under this prevailing trend, many people hold the belief that communication is the main purpose of teaching English; some even go so far to say many tests don’t take grammar seriously. However, many factors should be responsible for this phenomenon. On the one hand, with wide criticism from the public and media, grammar is thought to be the cause of the so-called “deaf and dumb”English. On the other hand, influenced by communicative teaching method, many teachers insist that communication skills should be the priority in English teaching. As a consequence, many a student cannot write an article without serious grammatical, spelling and tense mistakes. As far as I’m concerned, grammar and communication should be balanced in English teaching, neither should be overemphasized at the expense of the other. With grammatical abilities, a good article will be written; with communicative skills, “deaf and dumb” English will meet its fate.
小学英语研修日志 这次远程研修，我有了很多收获，感谢远程研修专家们的指导。 课程改革的实行,进一步推动了小学英语教材的进程.教师的教学理念、教学行为在发生着深刻的变化.小学开设英语课程逐渐被人们所接受,作为一个工作在一线的小学英语教师,我对英 语教学有自己的理解，经过这次培训，使我在对学生实行认读训练、课文教学方面都有很深的感触，使用到自己的教学中，也显得更加得心应手，作为一名英语老师，我更注重将双语实行整合，在对学生实行认读训练时有更深的体会，听、说、读、写的训练，通过听、说、做，先培养语感，培养兴趣，然后进入教学。让学生在快乐中学习英语，让知识中获得成功感。 一、复习学过的单词。 小学英语课时较少，小学生容易忘记上一节课的内容，尤其是新学的单词和句子，我就上节课所学内容，采用师生问答、生生问答、小组间问答等多种形式实行复习，能够有效的复习上节课或以前所学的内容，为新授内容打基础。 二、尽量创设各种情景组织教学，鼓励学生大胆对话。 创设情境，能够提升英语课堂兴趣，增强学生的求知欲，提升学生的听说水平，是学生练习听与说的良好机会，达到学生先模仿后学习的目的。 三、结合直观教具辅助教学。
准备与教学内容相关的实物、图片、简笔画等是常用的直观教具。如刚开始学字母时，就可让学生用字母卡片实行同桌、分组、找朋友等多种形式的听说训练。学单词、学对话等都能够用卡片实行灵活的学习，也能够让学生自己动手做图片卡、单词卡、句型卡。有利于师生实行听说训练，而且也能促使学生动脑动手，激发学生的学习兴趣，提升课堂效率，教学效果非常好。 四、扮演角色，实行会话，发挥学生的表演才能。 英语是一门语言，应体现它的应用功能，我认为学生会用英语才是关键，所以要给学生充足的自由发挥的空间，通过小组合作学习、师生合作学习，让他们充分的发挥主观能动性，展示所学的内容。这样学生学了英语用了英语，同时也增强了了学生的自信心。首先：操练方式多样化。其次：让学生指读课文。再次：教给学生基本的发音方法。最后：创设英语环境。 英语是一门实践性、交际性很强的学科，而小学阶段的英语课以激发学生的学习兴趣，在实践中交流为主要目的。要求课堂活动化，让每个孩子在生动、有趣的课堂情境和丰富多彩的课堂活动中说说、唱唱、演演、玩玩，在学中用，在用中学。而现在我所处的这种英语教学困境，让我对小学英语教学产生了畏惧和倦怠，迷茫和困惑。 总来说之，小学英语教学任重而道远。为了上好每节课，我认真钻研教材，斟酌教法，制作教具，做了很多即能节省时间又能直观教学的准备工作。但到了五，六年级，很多学生就失去了学习英语的积极性。如何能真正持久的让小学生对英语感兴
小学英语六年级下册日记随笔 英语日记可能几乎都没人写过或者听过，但是，不妨想一想，英语日记对英语作文会有很大的影响的，一篇好的英语日记需要下很大的功夫，更多关注随笔网。 小学英语六年级下册日记随笔1 Its my grandmas birthday today. She lives with my uncle in a village not far from Taiyuan. We decided to visit her. At eight oclock in the morning, my parents and I went to a shop and bought a big birthday cake. It took us two hours to go there in my fathers car. My grandma and uncle were very glad to see us. I shook her by the hand and said, "Happy birthday to you!" She smiled happily. Then we sat down to talk, and we had a wonderful time together. At 5 oclock in the afternoon we said goodbye to them and went home. 小学英语六年级下册日记随笔2 I have happy weekend. On Saturday morning I always have English CLASses at school. I study hard in the CLASsroom.
二年级小学生英语日记大全 Wednesday, January 21st, 20XX Pencil sharpener I have a rabbit-like pencil sharpener. It's colored. It has birdie patterns on both sides. There's a small drawer in front of it that holds the scraps. There's a handle behind it that can be turned. It has two ear-like control keys on it. I like it very much. Every day. It is inseparable from it. Thursday, January 22nd, 20XX Dishwashing The person in charge of washing dishes in my family is me. I arranged it like this: my parents and I three people wash in turns. Yesterday it was my turn to wash the dishes. First I put on my apron and sleeves. My mother gave me hot water. I put detergent in myself. The first time I washed with detergent, the second time I washed with clean water. Friday, January 23rd, 20XX Wash socks This morning I washed a pair of socks, the first time with soap, the second time with clean water, the third time to wash again can be sunburned.
Students and Mobile Phone 1. 大学生使用手机增多及其原因 2. 大学生使用手机所带来的问题 3. 你自己的观点 With the rapid economic development, the mobile phone has found its way into campuses and a host of students take advantage of this wonderful gadget to communicate with each other. This phenomenon gives rise to this question: What are the advantages and disadvantages of the mobile phone? It is widely believed that it greatly facilitates students' campus life. Many instances could be found to support this type of opinion. A graduating student in our university bought a mobile phone in the course of hunting for his job. He told me that through the mobile phone he could easily keep in touch with the employer of the company he intends to work with and would not miss any opportunities. However, everything has both positive and negative facets. The mobile phone also has many disadvantages. For instance, the ringing of the mobile phone often disturbs the teacher's teaching and other students' learning. Personally, the advantages of the mobile phone outweigh the disadvantages of it as long as we don't interfere with others while using it. It is reported that ten big cities in China are being ranked among the top twenty cities with the highest pollution index in the world. This means it is high time we did something to bring the situation under control. Pollution: An Increasing Concern in China 1. 中国的污染的现状 2. 造成污染的原因 3. 解决的办法 Many factors are contributing to the deteriorating situation: industrial wastes pumped into the air, the lakes and rivers; a increasing number of automobiles crowding into the streets; the widespread use of plastic bags etc. To my view, stiffer laws and regulations must be implemented to check pollution. Industries that release wastes without permission should be heavily fined. Cars should be equipped to minimize the exhaust they release into the air. And the use of plastic bags and disposable meal boxes should be banned. What’s more, the media should play an important role in implanting a sense of environmental consciousness into people’s mind. If everybody works toward a common goal of making the environment better, we can create a cleaner and lovelier world for us and for the coming generation.
小学生英语日记范文（六篇） 导读：本文小学生英语日记范文（六篇），仅供参考，如果觉得很不错，欢迎点评和分享。 On Thursday afternoon, one of our family had finished the melon seeds, and I saw grandma taking the broom to sweep the melon seeds. I took the broom from my grandmother and said, "grandma, I'll sweep it!" "No," she said. I didn't give my grandmother, and I started to sweep it. I swept up with a broom and I didn't let go of any corner. Sweeping and sweeping, I felt a little tired. After a while, I swept the ground, and swept the melon skin to a place. I thought: after the sweep, it should be taken with a dustpan and then poured into the trash can. Thinking about it, I took the dustpan and collected the melon seed skin and poured it into the garbage bin. Grandma saw me clean up the floor and said excitedly, "grandson, you are so sensible. You are really grown up!" After listening to what grandma said, I laughed happily. I will do more to help grandma do what she can. 【篇二】
小学生简短英语日记范文 In my family, you can see a cat, the cat is very beautiful.now let me draw it for you. he has got white hair and two big eyes, they are blue and bright. he has got four short legs and his ears are small, his tail is long. i finish it now. how lovely! after school, i play with him first, he is my best friend. i like him very much! oh, do you want to know his name? i’d like to tell you, his name is “mimi”. 【篇二】小学生简短英语日记范文 This afternoon we had a P.E. lesson. Our teacher taught us to practise the long jump. When the bell rang， we gathered on the playground. After warming-up exercises， the teacher told us about the long jump and showed us how to do it. We followed the teacher and practised one after another. Soon came my turn and I felt a little nervous. I failed the first time but I didn’t stop practising. At last I managed to jump over three meters. 【篇三】小学生简短英语日记范文 It is very hot and wet today and is called sauna weather. During my mom did the cooking in the kitchen, I saw her head was sweaty.I told her I could help her and she accepted. After cooking,we were all sweaty .However, mum and I all felt happy. She said I was growing up and became her good assistant.
分享有特点的中考英语作文（附得分和老师点评） 2008年中考英语作文题目： Write at least 60 words about the topic “Love around me”. （以“我身边的爱”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名以及其他相关信息，否则不予评分）（总分16分） Use the following points as a guide. （短文须包含下列要点） Is there any love around you? (Give one or two examples.) How do you feel when you get love from him/ her/ them? What are you going to do to show your love? -----------------------------以上为背景-------------------------------------- 下面我将为大家分享在这个题目下的几篇有特点的学生作文，附实际得分和我的点评。 说明：由于是前几年的作文了，这里面的作文在其他网上也能搜到。拿出来分享一个是会加上我的点评，这个是网上搜不到的~另一个也是希望孩子们更明确作文的写法和得高分的要素。 第一篇： I live on a planet which is full of love. I can get love form my teachers, friends and my parents. When I get love from them, I feel warm and happy. They are the most important people in my life. I should show my love to them. I will help my parents to do some housework if they are tired. I will help my friends when they are in trouble. I should show my love to the person who gives me love. 实际得分情况：5+6+1=12 张老师点评：这篇文章其实是相当有文采的。开篇第一句话和最后一句话都正确使用了定语从句，这已经足以为其争取到1分的文采分了。整篇文章除了第一句有点不符合常理（planet不能用full of love，应该用world）和第6句help后面不应该用to之外，其他句子都没有语病，扣1分的语言分也可以理解。但是本文最大的败笔就在于遗漏了一个要点！题目要求对自己周围的love给出1-2个例子，但是本文中没有任何例子，于是被扣了2分的内容分，非常可惜。正所谓“要点不全就是错，妙笔生花又如何？” 第二篇 Love never leaves me. My parents, teachers, classmates and so on give love to me. My mother always come to my room and close the windows when I fall asleep on the cold night. My classmates and teachers always give me a hand when I have something difficult to do. I feel very warm and happy when I get love from all these people around me. I will give my father a cup of tea when he finish all the works. I will help my mother to do some housework. Love around me all the time. 实际得分情况：7+5+0=12 张老师点评：要点一个不缺，7分到手。全文除了反复使用when引导的时间状语从句之外，无任何复杂句型，因此文采分为0并不冤枉。我要说的是被扣掉得2分语言分，不知道大家有没有看出来扣在哪里？先给大家5分钟时间看看吧。
英语师范生教育实习日志 实习日志部分： 1实习内容： 今天是第一天实习，很激动，在指导教师王老师的安排下我正式开始了校外实习工作。上午第三节课是王老师的课，他是六年级一班二班的英语教师，我跟着他在六一班进行了第一次听课，这节课王老师讲的知识内容不多，主要是带着同学们读课文，学生们读的很认真，学习英语的劲头很足。 感想与体会： 王老师有着十几年的教龄，对小学英语教学有着丰富的教学经验，听过他的课能深刻体会的到，我想，要成为一名优秀的英语教师不仅要对教材非常熟悉，了解重点知识内容，还要结合学生年龄特征会选择适合的教法，教学之路诸多艰辛，需要不懈的努力。 2今天王老师在六二班上了一节习题课，习题课上王老师认真的分析了基础训练上的题目，了解学生出错的原因，学生普遍出现的问题主要集中在最后一道阅读理解题上，有的单词不认识，有的没看清题目，还有的做题太粗心。 我觉得某些同学对英语的学习兴趣还是很不足，需要培养，学习的兴趣是关键，如果兴趣十足才会从内心喜欢这门学科，自然就能学好这门课程，由此如何培养学生的学习兴趣是一个重要的研究课题，需要教育实践者和教育研究者不断的尝试，不断的发现，从各个方面提高学生的学习兴趣。 3按照昨天王老师的安排，今天早上要和学生一起上早读 早上很早就来到了学校，站在教室外面整理自己的心情。随着一声声清脆的“老师好”的传来，心中油然升起一种自豪与欣慰。 走进教室，跟学生简单问候，便进入了今天早读的正题：领读单词和课文，学生读的都很认真学习的状态很好。 学习了这么多年英语我总结到学好英语没有所谓的好方法，和捷径，而是需要多读，多练，多背，英语是一门语言学科，是交流的工具，这离不开说，所以口语才是最重要的，而早读是一个很好的练习英语的机会，学生大声的朗读课文内容，在不断的朗读过程中熟悉英语，然而现在的应试教育太注重学生做题能力，相对忽视了口语……