Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to become financially responsible adults, children should learn to manage their own money at a young age. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Contemporarily, it’s a universal phenomenon that
Contemporarily, a universal phenomenon has prevailed that
once a child desires for something, he will tell his parents and in most cases they would undoubtedly guarantee to meet his demands, which indulges his endless appetency as well as turns him into a hedonist. In reaction to the phenomenon, a controversial debate has aroused attention among the general public that whether a child ought to have the ability to manage his own money from childhood. From my perspective, I prefer him to acquire this skill from an early start and keep to it. The following show my reasons and examples. Firstly, forming a habit of managing the money is conductive to getting a feel of money for through comparing the prices between two different items are they able to distinguish which is more expensive and gradually it will give them a clearly sense of the cost performance.
Also, realizing the source of the money helps them to comprehend that money is never easily earned, nor should it be carelessly spent.
In this way do they have the responsibility to be considerate of parents’desires and have the motivation to fight for a better future so that their parents can have a worry free life at old age. What’s more, money management helps reduce crime and violence. For example, they can get what they want through financial management instead of robbery.
Secondly, in the long term the children who have the ability of money management are pervasively more independent for through mastering money they learn self-management as well as self-decipline, which are of vital importance to their personality formation and character cultivation during the puberty thus the career paths. Take my ladybro Sara, as a vivid example.
Through her careful calculation and strict budgeting, she has not only paid the tuition but also earned her long awaited earphones. In addition, by taking a part-time job as a tutor, she keeps herself occupied and enjoy the repletion as well. That’s why I appreciate her and what I need to learn from her.
Admittedly, it’s undisputed that the little kids are lack of self-regulation and most often their expenditure is a senseless waste to some degree. Under these circumstances, it requires the adults’ proper guidance and interpretation. For instance, when you are asked to buy a toy which is too expensive, the first thing you should do is to tell your honey that there’s no such thing as a free lunch and you couldn’t afford it. Instead, you can buy him an ice cream as an extra reward for his thoughtfulness.
In a nutshell, we have to admit that children may be too young to manage money themselves, however, it’s because of their nescience that they ought to be instilled in healthy values and thus they are easier to absorb them as well as apply them to real life for I firmly believe that a financially responsible adult never fall behind at the starting line. Therefore, it’s essential to manage money when one is young.
托福综合写作7范文托福作文的综合写作应该写托福作文写作应该分为三个层次，也就是我们确定中心思想后应该找三个理由来支持。托福写作还有一个五段论，第一段为中心思想，二三四为支持段落，第五段总结观点。这个就是所谓的八股文。但是形式不能太明显，在表达中多加入自己的思想，八股文的形式会隐晦一些。一般这种写作可以助你在托福作文中取得高分。 构建综合写作整体，你可以从以下这几个方面入手：第一，将听力及阅读中的核心观点提炼出来，并指明对应的两个观点是支持还是对立；第二，分为几个段落，分别从不同角度总结出两个观点的论据。最后，重申主要论证观点并注意切忌掺加个人观点。听力结束后，考生还会有时间回看阅读文章，所以不用完整记忆阅读文章的论点和论据，记下核心即可。 有问题，可以再问我。 我觉得 ___老师讲的不太对，我自己本身也在 ___培训过，感觉他们讲的方法都是很过时的方法，不太适用于新托福的考试。下面是我自己考了四次托福的感想： 2、其实考试的时候，观点找错的情况似乎不太会发生。。。因为阅读里面都有提示了啊。。。一般不会弄错的，所以不用担心，
重点是细节不要搞错，要挺清楚细节说了那几点，尽量不要落下那个点，细节齐全 3、写得时候模板适当用用，但是表全部都用，那样文章就有点僵硬了，你自己读着通顺就好啊。 4、文章内部用词要有多样性，要适当地用一些高级的词汇，如重要的这个意思，你不要只用important, 这样显得你不认识多少单词，可以用significant, vital, essential, of great importance, core, 这种意思相近的单词或者是意群来表达，这样他们就认为你词汇量大了。 5、写综合写作最能体现你的词汇量和句型的多边性，所以不要直接照抄听力或者是阅读的内容，这样就表现不出你自己了，多看看新概念4里面的表达方法，哪些句型神马的都很好，对考试很有用！！！ 6、模板没有对错之分，你自己需要好一个模板，然后自己用自己弄出来的，这样比较好，不过这种东西都差不多，重点还是看个人的表达神马的，还有词汇量什么的。
这些托福写作满分句式你都会吗？ ETS 对于托福独立写作的文章有三大要求：文章的组织，文章的论证以及文章的语言。对 于那些本身文章的结构和论证问题不大的童鞋，语言如果能够写的再高大上一些，毫无疑 问会大大的加分的;同时对于那些经常性找不到思路或者不知道自己在说啥的亲们，如果语言能够搞得牛逼一些的话呢，很多情况下也能唬住考官拿到相对不错的分数。这也就解释 了为啥我们身边经常有出分的同学说，语言不重要，文章说的清楚就行;或者有的同学说，文章逻辑不重要，语言华丽就好;当然了，如果我们能做到两者兼顾的话分数肯定会更加牛逼的。 虽然语言很重要，但是我相信大部分同学都会说语言的提高根本不是短时间内可以做到的。当然，如果我们想通过自己去泛读各种英文材料来提高自己的语言确实需要一定的时间， 因为我们不知道我们需要读什么，也就是说我们所读的东西很难转化成我们在考场上写作 文的时候能用的东西，这个过程就会变得比较痛苦。为了解决这个问题，我们在此推出写 作部分易学、实用、而且拿分的句型，希望能在大家的备考过程中，对提高大家的语言实 力有或多或少的帮助。 托福写作句型1 原文材料： "The new rules should thus expose polluters to a scissor-style pressure:from above,through the central-planning system,and from below,from the media and organisations such as Mr Ma's." 推荐句型： xxx be exposed to a scissor-style pressure: from above, through…, and from below, from…. 推荐理由： 压力毫无疑问是一个写作和口语考试中非常常用的一个万能理由，因为它可以跟很多东西 相关，比如压力的来源(生活压力，学习压力，工作压力)，压力的影响(身体差，心情不
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托福写作辅导：托福考试满分作文欣赏（１）Which one do you prefer, to solve problems on your own experience and knowledge, or to ask others for advice? As knowledge and experience serve as twim towers in problem-solving, one is often presented with two major paths that pave the way for final fulfillment, eitther to wrack his brain, just like what happened to Neuton, siiting for many years under an apple tree and eventually figuring out ond of the greatest universal rules that govern the whole globe, or to seek for others’ widsom through their advice, just as in the case of Benjinin Franklin, gathering great minds under one roof and then establishing a most world-renown libray. Both ways work. When a practical goal is involved, however, Benjimin Franklin may best be regareded as a role model in this respect and asking people for advice often turn out to be the prime alternative. Experience and knowledge borrowed or learned from others’ advice contribute greatly to effectiveness and effeciency for a goal-accomplishment. Not all experience and
银川海派英语【托福写作】素材之环境篇 托福独立写作素材之环境篇 Hi everybody. This Monday I'm heading to Alaska for a three-day tour of the state. I've been looking forward to this for a long time. Not only because Alaska is one of the most beautiful places in a country that's full of beautiful places-but because I'll have several opportunities to meet with everyday Alaskans about what's going on in their lives. I'll travel throughout the state meeting with Alaskans who live above the Arctic Circle with Alaska natives and with folks who earn their livelihoods through fishing and tourism. And I expect to learn a lot. One thing I've learned so far is that a lot of these conversations begin with climate change. And that's because Alaskans are already living with its effects. More frequent and extensive wildfires. Bigger storm surges as sea ice melts faster. Some of the swiftest shoreline erosion in the world-in some places more than three feet a year. Alaska's glaciers are melting faster too threatening tourism and adding to rising seas. And if we do nothing Alaskan temperatures are projected to rise between six and twelve degrees by the end of the century changing all sorts of industries forever. 语言素材： 1. 谋生：earn/seek one’s livelihood/living 2. 渔业和旅游业： fishing and tourism 3. 气候变化：climate change 4. 承受…影响： live with + adj+ effects 5. 越来越频繁和严重的森林火灾：more frequent and extensive wildfires 6. 随着海冰融化速度加快，风暴更加汹涌：bigger storm surges as sea ice melts faster 7. 最快速的海岸线腐蚀：the swiftest shoreline erosion 8. 导致海平面上升：adding to rising seas This is all real. This is happening to our fellow Americans right now. In fact Alaska's governor recently told me that four villages are in “imminent danger” and have to be relocated. Already rising sea levels are beginning to swallow one island community.
托福写作高分作文观点例子等4个注 意要点分析 托福写作要写出高分作文，考生在写作的各个方面都有许多细节要点值得注意，那么托福写作中考生主要应该注意哪些要点呢?面就和大家分享托福写作高分作文观点例子等4个注意要点分析，来欣赏一下吧。 托福写作高分作文观点例子等4个注意要点分析 托福作文观点要持一立场 针对某一个论题，每一种观点都有它的理由。同样，在托福作文中也不存在着唯一的观点和内容。这时，你可以从两个完全相反的观点中选择一个立场。关键在于你如何说服读者：尽管存在着相反的立场，你的观点从总体上来说仍然是最具说服力的。 一般说来，应该选择那个政治上正确的或者大多数考生会选择的观点。当然，如果你不擅长写这种*，你可以适当地调整一下内容以适应你较习惯的舒服的表达方式。但总的说来，*要均衡，不要包含高度争议性的论述。不要把这里当成思想家的论坛。写一篇高度争议性的*只会让读者对你产生偏见，同时也会使电脑评分器费解，因为这种*和其数据库里所储存的*差别太大。所
以，针对问题时尽量使用较冷静平和的语气。尽管如此，你也不能不选择一个立场。你必须选择一个将要“出现”在开头段落和结论段落里的观点。当然，考试时，题目会让你选择一种观点，但你必须明确地表述出来。 托福作文内容要有深度 托福写作每篇*只有20-30分钟，这么短的时间内你不可能覆盖每一个推理，反驳和例子。当你开始考试时，抽出几分钟的时间确定要写的论点和例子。你不必包含每个论题和概念。大部分学生都没有足够的时间覆盖他想覆盖的内容。所以，只要选择其中最具说服力的点和例子。其实，判分者也不期望你对每个论题都作深入的探讨。 这里最重要的是你的作文不要离题，抓住要点。不要扯远了也不要过分集中在某个例子上。 托福作文例子注意要点分析 托福写作题目会告诉你可以利用自己的经历来展开你的论点，得出结论。这种方法是可以的，但不要过分。你的推理依据应该更偏向于所学到的知识而非个人经历。你所举的例子或者知识可能很吸引人，但不要试图深入。因为托福作文测试的是你基本写作能力，而非你的专业知识。留学生：尽量多读一些美国杂志，以适应美国人写作的习惯和跟上时代的潮流。
1. 一般功能词汇 因果关系 →导致，产生give rise to, lead to, result in, be responsible for, prompt 解析：give rise to, lead to, result in表示一般性的“导致、产生、造成”；be responsible for 不仅表示“为…负责”，也可以表示“产生”（being a source or cause），但多指“产生某种负面后果和不利局面”；prompt表示“激发”（To move to act; spur; incite），有“快速产生”之意。 Fast-paced modern life is responsible for the consumption of junk food. The bishop's speech has prompted an angry response from both political parties. Sharon Stone’s remarks about China’s Sichuan earthquake prompted angry responses from the Chinese public. →产生于result from, originate in (from) 解析：result from表示“产生于”；originate in (from)表示“发源自” 例句：Youtiao originated in China. →归因于attribute ...to, blame…on, be the (main) culprit of 解析：attribute A to B表示“将A归因于B”；blame A on B，表示“将A（负 面的）归咎于B”；culprit本意表示“罪犯”(one charged with a crime or an offense)，比喻义表示“造成某种负面后果的原因”（the reason for a particular problem or difficulty） 例句：Children today are getting increasingly overweight. Experts believe that excessive consumption is the main culprit. →使某人做某事prompt sb to do sth, motivate sb to do sth 解析：prompt指“令某人做出某种具体行动的原因，强调快速激发”； motivate指“成为某人的做某事的动机” Many great businessmen are motivated not but the desire for money. →原因cause, reason 解析：cause指“造成某事客观原因”，reason指“用来解释的理由”。Reason 并不一定就是cause.跟cause有关的几种常用搭配： 真实原因real cause,
托福写作写完文章如何检查 托福写作的评分标准中对于*的细节有比较高的要求。因此写完作文后检查也成为了一个必要的步骤。下面就和大家分享托福写作写完*如何检查，希望能够帮助到大家，来欣赏一下吧。 托福写作写完*如何检查 托福写作为何要检查? 对于检查这个环节，可能不少同学觉得有点多余，毕竟写*本身时间上就已经很赶了，还要再留时间检查只会让时间压力变得更大。但认为，如果考生想要追求作文高分，保证作文成绩在20甚至25分以上，那么加入检查环节就是必不可少的了。大家可以去参考一下ETS官方给出的托福作文评分标准，无论是独立写作还是综合写作对于*的语言细节都有一定要求，虽然可以容忍少量的细节错误，但总体来说想要拿到作文高分，对于这些细节还是建议大家尽量避免出错为好。 托福写作留多少时间检查? 而对于托福写作需要花多少时间检查，在看来其实只要知道了检查重点，考生也不需要花费多 托福写作需要检查哪些细节?
那么，托福写作的检查环节，考生的检查重点应该集中在哪里呢?下面这4个细节希望大家能多多加注意： 1. 拼写错误 拼写错误是非常低级而且极其容易被机器检查出来的。会出现拼写错误主要有两种原因，要么是考生词汇没背熟强行使用了一些自己没掌握拼写的词汇，要么就是考生打字速度太快出现了手误。而无论是哪种原因，拼写错误大家一定要认真检查出来，特别是那些习惯了在word里打字拼写错误会被程序自动纠正的同学，托福考试中可没这种功能来帮忙，想要发现拼写错误只能靠自己检查出来了。 2. 时态问题 时态问题属于语法错误，其实在托福写作中并不太应该出现，原因很简单，因为托福作文大部分时候只要用好现在时就可以了，只有少数情况下引用发生在过去的事例或者名人名言时可能才会用到。所以对于这类时态问题大家检查的时候只要看一下是不是有时态混用，出现了非现在时的时态就能及时发现和改正了。 3. 词性误用 词性误用的情况表现比较多的形式是形容词和副词的混淆。这个在看来其实是属于词汇基本功的问题，大家对于自己不熟悉
智课网 TOEFL 备考资料 托福写作环境类素材分享 在托福写作中,经常出现环境类的题目,对于这类题目,相信大家在进行托福写作练习的时候也接触过,下面是一些环境类的托福写作素材,分享给大家。 新托福写作中有一道环境类名题: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Governments should focus on the preservation of the environment than on the economic development. 这道题说理不算太难,但举例的时候却很难找到真正 to-the-point 的实例。 其实目前正在美国引起轩然大波 (is causing quite a stir的墨西哥湾漏油事件(the Gulf of Mexico Oil Spill / BP Oil Spill 就是最新也最扣题的好例子。 小奥不仅在和 Larry King的访谈中高喊“ 我已经出离愤怒 (I'm furious!",而且昨天第三次亲赴漏油地点视察,超过了他访问民主党支持者们最关心的阿富汗战区的次数。 更重要的是,由于漏油还在不断漂浮并且已经影响到渔业 (fishing industry和旅游业 (tourism等多个产业,最终给美国经济带来的损失很可能将超过 500亿美元。如果大家觉得 500亿对美国来说没什么,请想想美国经济目前并未企稳 (remain highly volatile,再想想 500亿 USD 可就是 3000多亿 RMB 。 解决环境问题对于发展经济的重要性,在墨西哥湾漏油事件中得到了最残酷但也是最真实 (harsh but factual的证明。 以上是对于环境类的托福写作素材的介绍,希望大家看了之后能够有所了解,并更好的进行托福写作练习。
托福独立写作的审题原则和布局（上） 新托福写作考试的第2部分为独立写作，要求考生在30分钟内完成一篇字数在300字左右的议论文。而朗阁海外考试研究中心的专家们根据对ETS最新的评分标准的解读，发现阅卷者评判考生的文章遵循的原则是：“Readers should focus on what the examinee does well”。这就意味着整个评分过程是考察考生表现出优点的过程，而并非对考生的文章吹毛求疵的过程。因此，即使是一篇满分的文章，也是允许考生有少量错误的。在本文中，笔者将就独立写作部分的审题原则以及如何进行观点筛选作一简单说明。 一、字数 对于独立写作的字数要求，官方的说法是：“An effective response is typically about 300 words long. If you write fewer than 300 words, you may still receive a top score, but experience has shown that shorter responses typically do not demonstrate the development of ideas needed to earn a score of 5.”。可见，若想得到高分，考生最好能将文章写到300字以上，虽然有些文章字数不足但仍可得到满分，但是毕竟这种情况比较罕见，要充分对于考题展开论述，从而有利地支持文章观点，充足的字数是必须的。 二、题目的解读 独立写作最近几年在中国大陆地区的考题基本上是以支持/反对型为主的，理论上来说考生同意或者反对题目的表述，然后展开进一步论证都是可以的，但是朗阁海外考试研究中心的专家们发现有些考题并非考生可以“随心所欲”的“自由发挥”，比如当题目中包括了一些“绝对”含义的词，如only, must, fully以及形容词或者副词最高级的时候，考生在答卷时就不能采用“完全同意”的立场。比如2008年9月28日考题： Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The only effective way for government to encourage energy conservation is increasing the price of gasoline and electricity. 考生可以部分同意，即提高能源价格是一种有效措施之一，但同时还有其他办法；也可以完全反对，即不能光靠提高能源使用价格来节能，还要靠别的方法措施等。所以在审题时，我们还是建议考生要多花点时间把题目的意思读透，最好在心里把题目的中文含义反复地翻译给自己听几遍，从意思出发，再决定自己的立场，这样就可以避免由于审题的不全面而导致很大的失分。
2020年1月5日托福独立写作真题回忆原创答案范文 20200105 分享科学发现政府类利弊 Do you agree or disagree with following statement? The government and the corporation should share all their scientific discoveries with other countries in the world? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 参考答案： There exists the perception that it is necessary for the government and the corporation to share all their scientific founding with other countries in the world. From my perspective, I completely disagree with this point of view. First, certain discoveries have already cost too much money and work. It does not make sense to hand them over to others for free. For example, the USA government spent millions of dollar sending people to the moon. It took thousands scientists and specialists’hard work to create the spaceship that sent the astronauts thousands of miles away from Earth. The whole program cost Americans at least a decade before they could confidently send Neil Armstrong to the moon obit. Therefore, there is no way for Americans to give away the data they gain from Apollo program to Chinese, Russian, or the world. Second, the government and the corporation sharing scientific discoveries with other countries may lose competitiveness. For example, Intel can manufacture the most powerful computer chip that can allow computers or smart phone to function as efficiently as possible. If it shares its discoveries about how to improve computer chips to Chinese companies, the Chinese may stop buying chips from Intel and Chinese will produce their own chips instead. Consequently, Intel will lose the Chinese market. Similarly, when Russians reveal the secret of powerful plane engines to Chinese, Chinese will have no interest buying Russian planes. Third, sharing scientific discoveries with rogue counties may endanger the world. For example, although many countries know how to make nuclear bomb, they all keep the secret to themselves not only because they all sign treaty to prevent the proliferation of nuclear weapon but also they fear that some evil organization which gets their hands on nuclear weapon may use it to attack them. So, it is not
托福写作辅导：托福考试满分作文欣赏（１） Which one do you prefer, to solve problems on your own experience and knowledge, or to ask others for advice? As knowledge and experience serve as twim towers in problem-solving, one is often presented with two major paths that pave the way for final fulfillment, eitther to wrack his brain, just like what happened to Neuton, siiting for many years under an apple tree and eventually figuring out ond of the greatest universal rules that govern the whole globe, or to seek for others ’ widsom through their advice, just as in the case of Benjinin Franklin, gathering great minds under one roof and then establishing a most world-renown libray. Both ways work. When a practical goal is involved, however, Benjimin Franklin may best be regareded as a role model in this respect and asking people for advice often turn out to be the prime alternative. Experience and knowledge borrowed or learned from others’ advice contribute greatly to effectiveness and effeciency for a goal-accomplishment. Not all experience and knowledge related to problem-solving can be obtained by personal effort alone due to limitations of mind and capabilities of each individual. A single thought in someone’s mind is, more often than not, far less shining compared with group ’s wisdom. That explains the famous old saying that one sees further when standing upon the shoulders’ of past great giants; that explains why a great leader is always with greater minds; that also explains why teamwork in corperation is highly emphasized in the 21st century. Brainstorm and exchange of ideas between different thoughts never fail to enhance capabilities of each individula involved, a team, a company, an institution, a country, or even the entire global village. Asking others’ advice instead of getting everything done on one’s own promotes democracy and communication too. In terms of democracy, it is necessary to give others rights and chances to speak since the problem may concern them in different ways, and their saying in turn reflects our respect toward freedom of speech as well as their wisdom. In terms of communication, idea exchange sometimes focuses more than solutions, and hereby better mutual understanding about perspectives, principles, praticalities and personalities of each other. Admittely turning to others for help and suggestion by no means refers to absolute and irresponsible dependence. Consideration upon different thoughts and ideas broadens our mind, enlarges our vision, furthers understanding, enhances more effective and efficient brainstorm, and stresses mutual respect in groups and communities, which undoubtedly gives rise to better, if not the best solutions. As is paraphrasedfrom John F Kenedy, brainstormed, there is little we cannot do while divided, there is little we can do. 托福写作辅导：托福考试满分作文欣赏(2) Case of Benjinin Franklin, gathering great minds under one roof and then establishing a most world-renown libray. Both ways work. When a practical goal is involved, however, Benjimin Franklin may best be regareded as a role model in this respect and asking people for advice often turn out to be the prime alternative. Experience and knowledge borrowed or learned from others' advice contribute greatly
托福写作议论文的范文 托福写作议论文的范文 父母对孩子的管教 Some people think that parents should plan their children's leisure time carefully. Other people believe that children should decide for themselves how to spend their free time. Which idea do you agree with? Give reasons for your choise. 托福议论文写作试题分析： 一条件: 父母对孩子的管教/孩子的空闲时间的安排/有人认为父母应为孩子指定使用空闲时间的详细计划/有人认为孩子应该自己安排空闲时间。 二要求: 说明自己同意何种观点并说明理由。 三写作分析: 本题为家常话题,尚无定论,可选任意一种观点表示同意,并说明理由.也可辩证地看问题,在分析的基础上提出自己不同的见解. 动笔前应先决定写法,若摆脱绝对肯定与否定的方式,写作时宜用归纳法,通过步步深入的分析,最后得出比较客观的结论.这种写法比较复杂, 难度较大,写作时思维一定要清晰,不然就会产生混乱. Should parents plan their children's leisure time carefully? Or should they let their children decide for themselves how to spend their free time? before answering these two qusetions, we should first of all ask another question: do children know how to plan to spend their free time? The answer to this question is both "yes" and "no". Our common sense tells us that some children spend their free time in a planned way while some others, especially the younger ones, just play as they like without any paln at all. The above answer leads to three more relevant questions about those children who know how to plan their leisure time: How have they obtained the ability? Is the ability innate? Or is the ability learnt? Our observations tell us that this ability is not born but learned from others---their parents, teachers, other adults, or other children. With these questions settled, the answer to the first two questions should be verry clear. Parents should not give their children a free hand at the beginning. INstead, they should plan their childrren's leisure time carefully, making sure that
把教授如何反驳文章中三个分论点挺清楚，例子都是阅读文章里的所以不用记，听力里主要是在讲阅读文章中的例子有哪些缺陷或不严谨的地方，从而无法成为有效的论据，甚至成为别的观点的论据。 有自己的写作模式、写作套路。 先不限时写几篇，写完一篇就立刻打印出来逐字逐句修改（电脑上改容易偷懒），把过于简单的词和句子一一替换，注意别用太难的词和没把握的词，能用到6级词汇就差不多了，心情好了再拽两个托福词汇上去也就足够了。我觉得最好用的就是形容词和副词，可以记几个托福水平的精彩形容词和副词，选择自己看着顺眼的，在平凡的名词前加好看的形容词，在平淡的句子里随处放置抢眼的副词，这样文章一下子就丰富起来了。 插入语，句式变换，每段第一句试着倒装、或用被动语态 多用具体的详细的例子，别停留在就事论事上，可以试着延伸到生活的其他方面 注意线性思维，“总分总” 托福作文写五段，第一段是中心思想段，二三四是支持段落，最后是总结段落 无论是综合写作还是独立写作，考生追求的基本目标是把想说的意思用书面英语表达清楚，让阅卷人读懂和明白。从语言角度来说，有两大标准，即准确性和多样化。能够达到词词准确，又使用到不同的词句来表达相同、相似的意思，从语言角度来说已经符合托福考试的高分要求。 仿写。只看不写，永远不能将输入语言化成输出语言。尽量仿写整句，保持原句结构，替换内容！ In a word, it is rather superficial to simply say that.........+观点：In a word, it is rather superficial to simply say that parents are the best teachers。用一句话说，简单地认为父母是最好的老师是相当肤浅的。 综合写作部分的评分标准： 1、内容的完整性和准确性。简单地说，就是文章是否有将讲座中的关键信息点完整、准确地提 取出来，并和阅读材料中的相关内容有效地一一对应。如果讲座中的信息点有缺失，那么会有一定程度 的扣分；如果只写了有关阅读材料的观点，得1分。 文章的组织机构，词汇和语法的正确性和准确性。高分的作文需要做到条理清晰，结构连贯，用词 恰当，能够准确地表达讲座中的观点与阅读材料中的观点是如何相互联系的，只要作文中的错误不至于 使内容表述出现误解，一些偶尔出现的语言错误，如单词拼写、单复数问题等，不会对作文成绩产生很 大影响，当然，错误肯定是越少越好的。 独立写作部分的评分标准： 1、有效回应题目，阐明文章主题。一般来说，独立写作完全跑题的情况很少，但是很多考生在 展开讨论时所采用的论据，比较容易出现跟主题关联性不大的情况，即局部答非所问的现象，从而影响 了得分。2、逻辑条理清楚，论证充分展开。这一点的关键在于文章论证的展开，是否提供了大量的细节和例子来支持观点，而非泛泛而谈地说理。3、内容连贯一致，衔接自然流畅。达到内容连贯一致的文章通常全文围绕中心论点展开，而不会论据自相矛盾，也不会重复论证，有时候通过一些表示因果、先后、递进的关系连词可以起到粘合剂的作用。4、遣词造句地道，语言驾驭娴熟。托福考试终究是语言考试，最终还是要考查考生的语言运用能力，但是要注意的是，并不是要求考生通篇都用难词偏语长句，而是要会变化着用一些美国人常用的语句把自己的想法表达清楚，所以建议考生尽量多阅读和模仿英文原版材料，这样写出来的文章才能够原汁原味。