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考研英语ESSAY写作创作流程

研究生入学考试英语写作部分占总分的20分,是考研英语成绩决定高低胜负的重要题型。每年阅卷都会发现考生的写作水平参差不齐,分数在0到20分之间散布,较多考生集中在中档的10分左右。仔细审阅可看出中档分数作文从扣题、思想、逻辑、措词、语法、修辞、拼写各个环节会出现各种各样的问题。总的印象(global impression)表现为结构逻辑混乱,语言错误较多,用词用语汉语化,不能表现出考生的最佳水平。如何在考试最后的40分钟合理控制时间,从容完成较高水平的创作,正是本文要准备解决的问题。

考研写作要求用200词写出一篇高质量的议论文,其形式有图画、图表、提纲等专门类型。近5年则集中表现为具有学术分析特点的图表作文和灵活多变、隐含寓意的图画作文,令大批考生面对题目不知所措。用有限的200词表现宏大的主题则需要精确设置构架,内容、例子紧扣主题,并且严谨地遣词造句。如果没有一定的审题布局考虑而一味即兴冲动写作会使文章杂乱无章、缺乏逻辑。把握合理的创作流程就会大大改变这种局面。

(一)审题构思过程(5—10分钟完成)

图画作文

1.列出重要图画细节词

以2002年考题为例,图片中是一个美国女孩身着传统的中国少数民族服装,面带微笑。审题时果断列出可能用到的语汇如:traditional costume, ribbons, necklaces, earrings, majority group, sweet smile, charming features.没有这些词汇的罗列,第一自然段的描述过程将耗费很多时间。

2.以小见大联想把握象征意义

图画作文关键在于透过表面看实质,精确地点出图画的象征寓意,构思联想不到位会导致跑题或无话可说的尴尬局面。如前题的例子,要毫不犹豫地把图画和所定题目挂钩联想,并要以小见大把握象征意义,美国女孩代表着西方文化或西方人,传统中国少数民族服装则是个象征符号,代指典型的传统中国文化。女孩面带微笑正好传达出西方人接受或热爱中国文化、世界经济文化融合和中国文化走向世界的深刻意义。

3.把握背景原因和两条建议

联想的过程深入,很容易想到中国改革开放、加入世贸以及全球化(globalization)的国际大趋势。又可以联系到美国的jeans, rock music, Hollywood movies, MacDonald fast food等cultural symbols在世界的传播普及,进一步阐述“民族的就是世界的”这一命题。文章的收尾部分不妨参照考研作文模式提出两点建议:要保存珍惜传统民族文化;对待西方文化要“取其精华,去其糟粕”,把优秀的文化发扬光大等等。缜密的逻辑构思足以使你表达出丰富的语言,展现出一个考研学生应有的理论素质。

图表作文

1.选出典型的数据—纵横对位

面对图表应当首先结合主题,观察图表数据变化,如果表格、柱形和曲线都比较复杂,则需先确定典型数据,如最高点、最低点以及骤升骤降的时间变化范围,在表格和座标图中精确地纵横对位,想象如何使用demonstrate a dramatic change, increase dramatically, decline sharply, go up steadily, remain on the decline这样的图表术语描述数据变化。

2.把握变化—联系背景原因

想象这种变化和主题的必然联系,拓展思维确定出原因一二三来。如北京市民人均收入增加一定和近几年经济飞速发展、就业生存方式多样化和全面建设小康社会的国策相关联;沙尘暴次数猛增反映出中国西北土壤沙漠化、森林砍伐现象严重和城市房地产开发毁坏绿地植被的多元因素。

3.建议或未来发展趋势

针对第二段分析的原因提出合理建议,基本思路可遵循以下两点:政府指定法律法规扭转(推进)现有局面;个人树立某种意识主动参与解决问题。最后展望一下人类解决问题后的美好明天,一篇议论文的格局已了然于胸。

(二)下笔创作过程(20—25分钟)

1.丰富提纲内容

有把握的同学可以立即动笔创作,把已定的思路充分表达出来。但思路还是不清楚、害怕跑题或无话可说的同学应把提纲丰富起来,如用汉语简单写出每段的三个方面,用简洁的词或符号代替即可,提纲具体化可以让自己沿着一个严谨的框架前行,避免天马行空、意识流主宰思维的危险。

2.每段按一定句数创作

160-200词的作文不等于长篇大论,又有明确的提纲控制,考生必须做到言简意赅。达到字数要求不难,要看自己有限的语言是否言之有物,表达切题且有力度。对规模作出合理控制只需有以下的意识:3段式作文开篇段落引出话题,评价现状或描述图画图表,尽量用3-4句完成任务,其中设置一个长句,使得第一段达到50—60个单词。

中间拓展段是论述主题并展现实力的黄金段落,要阐明图画图表寓意并且深刻分析原因背景,点出几个方面,结构有层次感,语言有闪光点和深度,写出7-8句比较合理,总字数控制到80-100字。

结论段不止下结论,还要提出2-3点解决问题的建议。并且设置一个漂亮的结束句,使用排比、强调、倒装、虚拟句型体现句式变化,写出5-6句不算太多,总字数在70-80字左右。

3.创作有气势的开篇句

由于考研阅卷往往在写作第一段确定文章分数档次,最后一段往往被考官忽视,开篇的三句话要有爆发力,充分表现考生的语言水平和写作实力。因此要把平时积累的优秀句型应用到第一段开篇,如:It is universally acknowledged that……

It is generally accepted that……

It goes without saying that……

As is vividly depicted in the picture, a lovely American girl is dressed in traditional Chinese costume……

The above graph reveals a dramatic decline in the production of……To be specific……

4.注意2、3两段的段首句和层次感

英语议论文写作讲究拓展阐述部分有段首句和支持段首句的若干论据。分层次表达又要避免数字排列的机械感,讲究启承转合的多样化表达,因此2、3两段就有可以依据的优秀表达模型。

如:阐释原因段

Three fundamental factors can account for this sharp change.

Above all……In addition……Last but not least,……

建议措施段

To crack this hard nut, people have worked out many effective measures.

Not only can……, but……as well. More importantly……

5.尽量长短句搭配,每段构造1—2个长句

都是短句的作文略显水平稚嫩,写作功力尚需磨练,都是长句的作文又显得罗嗦冗赘,卖弄不成反倒做作。真正的优秀文章应做到长短句搭配合理,行文流畅,难简结合,曲径通幽,平实中见功力。大批考生缺乏写作训练,往往在作文中忽视运用长句。要试试在每段中设置出1个有特色的长句,如并列句、排比句、定语从句、状语从句等,使得文章流畅而不失难度。

6.创作有特色的篇末结束句

文章的结尾不好,苍白平淡,则给人虎头蛇尾的感觉,很有可能因为一句话而减弱前面的文采印象,所以要有意识安排一个闪光句型在结尾,让考官读到结尾时能眼睛一亮。如:

倒装:

Only in this way can laid-off workers completely shrug off poverty and regain their dignity in life.

强调:

In conclusion, it is persistent work that is conducive to your grasping a large vocabulary.

虚拟:

Given all the above arguments, it is high time that the authorities enforced some reforms to convert traditional education strategiessintosquality-oriented education.

7.注意笔迹工整

写作中笔迹是否工整美观直接影响考试成绩,因为没有时间打草稿,学生的创作基本上是一气呵成,如果字体潦草,则大大淹没了文字内容的魅力,极有可能一败涂地。所以要有细心落笔的意识,动笔节奏慢而沉稳,仔细写每一句话。只要具备了一定的句型知识,200词的作文很容易完成。不要仓促下笔,一路狂草,造成悲剧结果。

(三)修改润色过程(5—10分钟)

写作完成后不要急于放松休息,以下的语言文字润饰工作可以让你的作品锦上添花,不留遗憾。Taking every detailsintosconsideration,让精心设计的文章突破16分也就有希望了。浏览检查不可能推翻全部内容,因为时间有限,也为了保持卷面整洁,修改工作要以纠正明显的语法拼写错误为主。为了避免用语单调重复,也可将若干机械平淡的语言替换掉,实现语言的丰富多变。要对以下几个角度多加注意,保证在语法用词上一丝不苟。

1.主谓一致

每句中主语名词与谓语动词的数是否一致,句法基本功较强则不会出现此类错误。但一时疏忽之下有可能写出Every person have…We was的错误搭配,微不足道的小错却往往能给作文以致命的打击。

2.名词单复数

看所有名词的单复数使用是否合理。大胆运用的equipments和wildlives都属于刺眼而典型的误用复数错误。

3.时态一致

议论文讲究以现在时统一全文,描述规律、现状,提出原因、建议只需用一般现在时、一般将来时、现在进行时、现在完成时就可以完成规范写作。除非在图表作文中提到过去年代,如1993年等,则必须将时态调整为一般过去时。

4.搭配

介词使用往往是最敏感的语言内容之一,阅卷老师凭丰富的经验足以轻松断定用词的正误。何时应用in, on, to, with, for, at, of也涉及到语言基本功的层面。考生对不熟悉的搭配要及时放弃或替换,以免因小失大。

5.拼写

词汇量不大的同学不要贸然挑战高难词汇,否则会在拼写上漏洞百出。多字母、少字母、错字母都会成为难看的风景,让人愈加挑剔。

6.用词

用词丰富、精确到位需要长期的摸索与积累,考试时用词不当和中文式英文措词难免出现。但考生要对把握不住或字对字翻译的表达提高警惕,没有把握的表达则果断放弃调整。好的用词令人刮目相看,而拙劣的表达令人难以忍受。这一点只能在考试中适当把握尺度,总之不要盲目冒险。

总之,我们只有40分钟完成写作。少些即兴冒险,多些理性沉稳,把握写作流程,突破自己的一般水准。希望考生们能超常发挥,把自己的语言知识精华展现在试卷上。

ESSAY写作句型突破---十大功能段落句型

1)话题引出段

Nowadays, there is a growing concern over the issue of ……People in growing numbers are directing their attention to ……With the development of ……, the problem of …has become increasingly serious.

Whe n it comes to ……, people’s notions may vary from one to another.

Recently, a heated discussion has sprung up as to ……Traditional virtue/value has it that……, yet people are……currently.

2)图画图表描述段

As is vividly shown in the picture,……

It is clearly depicted in the picture that……

This picture depicts a thought-provoking scene of ……According to the figures given in the chart,…..

The chart above provides a series of essential figures, illustrating the changes taking place in a time span of …years.

3) 观点对比段

Opposite voices are now rising in the debate. Some people firmly believe that……. On the contrary, quite a few people argue that……

The controversial issue has aroused opposite opinions. One focuses on …….. ;the other opinion revolves around…… 4)利弊列举段

Every coin has two sides, and this issue is no exception. Above all, …In addition…More importantly… However, the negative influence it renders should not be neglected. ..not only …but also

Is this phenomenon a blessing or a curse.? The following list of advantages and disadvantages can explain everything.

5)举例说明段

For instance;

Take…for an example;

A case in point is……

The following illustrations can serve as strong evidence of the phenomenon.

6)原因列举段

Why should this phenomenon take place? There are generally three factors accounting for it.

Having taken everything into consideration, we may attribute the sharp change to three aspects.

7)意义阐释段

The purpose of the picture is to show us that due attention has to be paid to….

The fact/phenomenon that…… indicates that … …Having scrutinized the details of the picture, we can discuss the implications subtly conveyed from it.

8)归纳结论段

I n conclusion,

In my opinion,

As far as I am concerned,

Taking into account all the analyses above, we may

confidently come to the c onclusion that……

9)预测趋势段

There is no denying that ……will continue increasing/decreasing in the better/worse direction. Undoubtedly, the tendency reflected from the chart will undergo a continuous increase/decrease in the near future. 10)建议措施段

Therefore, it is imperative that we should take some drastic measures.

As far as I am concerned, two effective measures must be immediately taken to pull through the crisis.

考研 (英语一)写作大作文范文及思路

一、图画作文 1.写作攻略 图画作文是较难的题型之一,近几年考研英语写作试题均为图画题型,因此考生应该特别认真地对待。这类题一般要求考生仔细看图,根据题目要求写成自己的作文。实际上,图画作文也可以当作三段式的提纲作文来写。第一段用来描述图画并揭示其寓意(寓意一般用一句话来概括就可以),第二段分析原因,最后一段发表评论或提出建议,其中第二、三段应该是写作的重点。面对此类题型,考生应首先确定主题,然后再动笔。具体写作要点: (1) 仔细研究作文指令,弄清楚作文的要求,是否有标题?是否有提纲?然后从题目中找出中心词,分析修饰词,准确地抓住题目的中心思想。 (2)认真解读图画,因为图画是作文的信息基础。考生应对图画进行全面而细致的研究,尤其要注意图画中人或物(人与物)的体貌表情特征和背景,确定人物之间,人物与背景之间的主要关系,以便正确掌握图画所传达的信息。 (3)如果图画以系列形式(既两幅以上)出现,考生除需掌握每一幅图画的信息外,还应该对图画之间的相互联系有所理解,在整体上把握图画所传达的信息。 (4)面对图画作文,考生应该展开合理而丰富的联想,用生动恰当的言辞抒发自己对图画的所思、所想、所感。 (5)注意图画作文中的文字说明。文字说明非常重要,通常十分清楚地提供一些写作要点,考生在看说明时要看清主、谓、宾,正确理解说明的意义。 (6)草拟提纲,合理组织材料。根据图画内容的不同采用不同的段落发展方式。如图画式作文写作多要求进行描写图画。对于漫画式写作,漫画描写本身并不重要,但文章的寓意却要力求准确,不要拖泥带水。 (7)系统且突出地展开段落。展开段落要根据画面内容进行,最好能围绕每一段的主题句进行。 (8)检查与修改。考生应重点检查图画内容是否准确地被表达出来,题目所给提示是否完整地反映在文章之中。如果存在与画面不相符的内容,或未能完全涵盖题目所给提示,考生应对文章做出相应修订。 2.必背模版句型 As is described in the picture... 这幅图描述了…… The purpose of the picture is to show us that... 这幅图的目的是为了给我们展示…… We can deduce form this picture that... 从这幅图中我们可以推断…… The picture indicates / conveys the meaning that 这幅图指出/传达…… More and more people have come to realize... 越来越多的人已经意识到…… Now it is commonly held that... but I doubt whether... 现在大家都普遍认为……,但我怀疑…… As is shown in the picture, we can see clearly the relationship between... and ... 从图中我们可以清楚的看到……和……的关系。 No wonder most see the problem of... as that of ... rather than that of... 难怪大多数人把……看成……的问题,而不是……的问题。

破解考研英语短文写作-五种作文类型.

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