一、中考英语书面表达汇编
1．（·江苏中考模拟）写作
81. 春天，许多人都喜欢参加各种户外活动。为了倡导中学生接近大自然，某中学生英文报举办了一次征文活动，请你根据以下问题，用英语写一篇短文参加征文。
提示：1）What’s the benefit （好处） of outdoor activities? （1-2 opinions）
2）Which is your favourite outdoor activity? How and why? （1-2 examples）
3）What do we need to pay attention to when we do outdoor activities? （At least 1 suggestion）
要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
3）词数：100词左右，开头已给出，不计入词数；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s great t o get close to nature.
【答案】It’s spring now. Many people like to go out for some activities. I think it’s a good way to get close to nature.
When we are outdoors and in the natural world, we can not only breathe fresh air and enjoy the beautiful scene, but also relax ourselves for the coming study or work.
There are many different ways we can get out into the natural world, such as hiking, cycling, camping and climbing. Cycling is my favourite. I join a cycling club, and often go out with other members. While cycling, we can forget our worries and have fun together. Also, we can learn to be a part of a team and help each other.
Whatever you do, remember to stay safe. When you’re outside, it’s better to be with your parents or friends.
【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达以“outdoor activities”为话题，结合所给的写作材料，写一篇报刊征文稿。根据内容提示可知本文会使用到一般现在时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出人物的感想和看法。
写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练、要点齐全。文中in the natural world, not only…but also, get out, such as, also等词（组）的恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；本文还采用了丰富的句型，比如：It is +形容词+（for sb.） to do sth.；There be句型；时间状语从句等复合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，这是一篇不错的范文。
2．（·河南中考模拟）书面表达
近几年来，越来越多的中国人出国旅游，但一些游客的不文明行为也成为国内外舆论关注的焦点。直接影响着中国“礼仪之邦”之形象。新华旅游局呼吁文明出游，游客应认真思考如何做一名“合格的旅游者”，请以How to be a qualified tourist 为题目写一则英语短文，谈谈自己的看法。
1 、保护环境，不随地吐痰，不乱扔垃圾。
2 、遵守公共秩序，不在公众场所喧哗，购物时排队。
3 、保护文物古迹，不到处乱涂乱刻，不攀爬触摸文物。
4 、节约用水用电，用餐不浪费。
注意：
1. 文章必须包括提示内容，可以适当扩展，增加细节使行文连贯；
2. 词数80左右；
3. 开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
4. 参考词汇：文物古迹cultural relics 文物artifacts
How to be a Qualified Tourist
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【答案】Recently, more and more Chinese people travel abroad , but some of them have bad manners .The poor behaviors or some Chinese have done great harm to our good reputation. How should we be a qualified tourist? In my opinion ,We have to understand and respect foreign cultures. First, we are supposed t o protect the environment ,We shouldn’t spit or throw the rubbish everywhere. Second, we should obey the public order .We had better not shout loudly in public places , We have to wait in line when we are shopping .Third, we should protect the cultural rel ics. We mustn’t paint or carve on the monuments. We shouldn’t climb or touch
artifacts. At the same time, we should save water and electricity. We are not supposed to waste food when we have meals . In this way, we'll win respect for ourselves as well as our country.
【解析】写作分析：
这篇写作需要围绕“如何做一个合格的游客”展开写作，具体的要点已经给出了。写作的时候可以适当借助祈使句来表示“不应该做…”，需要注意使用恰当的方式引入文章，衔接好每个要点。
写作亮点：
开头应该对写作的背景进行一定的交代。“bad manners”表示礼貌状况不好，然后讲到了这些行为对中国的名声有害（have done great harm to our good reputation），这里用到了现在完成时，表示伤害已经造成了，产生了不好的影响，时态的妙用是一个亮点。紧接着发问引入主题。借助first, second等词串联起自己的观点。相关短语使用恰当，“are supposed to”（应该…），“spit or throw the rubbish everywhere”（四处乱扔垃圾），“protect the cultural relics”（保护文化遗产），最后文章有简练的收尾，we'll win respect for ourselves as well as our country.（我们会为我们自己和我们的国家赢得尊重），简练，完成了写作任务。
3．（·山东中考模拟）书面表达
有没有那么一件事是你一直想做的，但又因为种种原因迟迟未付诸行动？也许是被搁置的新年愿望，或许是对父母的一句“我爱你”，抑或是一直没有动身前往的地方？请将“It’s never too late to ...”补充完整，并以此为题写一篇英语作文。词数：不少于100词。
要点：1. 写一件让你心心念念的事；2. 谈谈你一直想做这件事，但没能实现的原因；
3. 谈谈你下一步的计划。
注意: 1.所写内容应包括所提供的信息，可适当发挥；2.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
【答案】It’s never too late to fulfill my promise
Molly and I used to go to the beach and watch the sunrise together. She said that she wanted to go to Hainan with me and see the beautiful scenery when we grow up. I happily agreed.
Ten years had passed since I mad e that promise. However, I didn’t do anything about the promise because I was busy with my study. My mother also disagreed with me. “You should know study is the top priority （首要任务）for a student. You are just a teenage girl, there’s no way you can go ther e without an adult’s help.” I always felt upset when my mother said something like this.
I talked to Molly about it. “My mother won’t allow me.” I sighed （叹息）. “It’s a really long way. What should we do?” said Molly. “I don’t know.” I replied, “But we can make a plan by choosing a perfect time first.”
“I’d like to set off when the summer holiday begins,” she said. “We can go there with both our parents. I want us to go there together. Just the way I have promised you.” I said.
【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，将“It’s never too late to ...”补充完整，并以此为题写一篇英语作文。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般过去时，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Molly and I used to……，She said that……，I didn’t do……，I talked to……等句式的应用。写作
中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我想长大了去海南看美丽的风景，接下来介绍我一直想做这件事，但没能实现的原因，最后介绍我下一步的计划。此处used to do sth, want to do sth, grow up, be busy with, by doing sth, set off等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
4．（·广东中考模拟）书面表达
假如你是九年级一班的李新，你们的新外教Peter想去北京参观故宫博物院，希望你能给他作一个大概的介绍。请根据以下要点提示，用英语给他发一封电子邮件。
要点内容：
1.紫禁城（the Forbidden City）的基本情况（又名……；建于1406-1420；古代皇帝emperor 寝宫；……）
2.游客情况及地位（1987年UNESCO World Heritage；世界上最大的古代宫殿；……）
3.希望他尽快成行。
写作要求：80词左右；条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确。
Dear Peter,
I’m Li Xin.____________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Xin
【答案】Dear Peter,
I’m Li Xin.I hear you are coming to Beijing to visit the Palace Museum .Let me introduce it to you.It is also called Purple Forbidden City. It is the largest and most well reserved imperial residence in China today.It was built in 1406. It took 14 years to build the Forbidden City. The first ruler who actually lived here was Ming Emperor Zhudi.Many visitors from the world visit it every day. In 1987,the United Nations Educational,Scientific and Cultural Organization recognized the Forbidden City was a World Heritage,the largest ancient palace in the world.We all like it.I think you will also like it.I am looking forward to coming soon.
Yours,
Li Xin
【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文，要求写一封电子邮件给你的新外教Peter，向他介绍北京故宫博物院。给出的要点比较全面，只要稍加发挥想象即可。写作时注意邮件的格式，时态主要为一般现在时，人称主要为第一、第三人称。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；
尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。
要点内容：
1.紫禁城（the Forbidden City）的基本情况（又名……；建于1406-1420；古代皇帝emperor 寝宫；……）
2.游客情况及地位（1987年UNESCO World Heritage；世界上最大的古代宫殿；……）
3.希望他尽快成行。
点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后要检查主题是否明确，表达方式是否恰当，所用时态、人称是否符合要求，语法、拼写、标点、移行、大小写等方面是否有误等。
5．（·北京中考模拟）假如你是李华，为庆祝 6月 5日世界环境日，你们学校组织主题为“我们的地球我们的家园（ One Earth One Family）”的志愿者活动?请你写一封电子邮件给外教 Peter，邀请他来参加活动?主要内容包括 :活动的时间和地点，你们准备做些什么，以及你们做这些事情的原因?
提示词语 :plant，recycle，speech，clean，beautiful
提示问题 :1. When and where will the activity be held?
2. What will you do for it?
3. Why will you do that?
Dear Peter，
I'm writing to invite you to take part in our celebration of Environment Protection Day.
Looking forward to seeing you there.
Yours，
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter，
I'm writing to invite you to take part in our celebration of Environment Protection Day.
The celebration will be held in the Olympic Park at 2 pm on June 5.
Our main activities will be planting trees and learning how to recycle. First，each student will
be given the chance to plant one tree. Planting trees helps keep the air clean and will also make our
city more beautiful. Please prepare to get your hands dirty and dress accordingly. Our second activity
will be all about recycling. Our teacher，Mr. Parker will give us a speech about how to recycle and
reuse in life at 4 pm. This will be a great opportunity to learn how to do it and come with an open mind.
Environment Protection Day only comes once a year，so I really hope you can attend our
activities.
Looking forward to seeing you there.
Yours，
Li Hua
【解析】假如你是李华，为庆祝 6月 5日世界环境日，你们学校组织主题为“我们的地球我们的家园（ One Earth One Family）”的志愿者活动?请你写一封电子邮件给外教 Peter，邀请他来参加活动?主要内容包括 :活动的时间和地点，你们准备做些什么，以及你们做这些事情的原因?动笔前先要认真阅读要点，围绕要点组织材料，然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称，一般将来时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
take part in参加； keep the air clean 保持空气干净
6．（·江苏中考模拟）俗话说，国有国法，家有家规。家规是中华民族传统文化的重要组成部分。我们的国家主席习近平多次强调良好家风家规的重要性。假如你是李华，请你根据以下表格内的要点提示，并结合你的家庭实际情况，给你的英国笔友Sam写一封信，向他介绍一下你的家规，并向他展示一个温情智慧的中国家庭。
要点提示：
三条家规尊老爱幼，礼貌待人诚实守信，不断学习按时作息，杜绝熬夜
你对你家家规的看法......
简单阐述你是如何受益的......
写作要求:
1.文章须包括所给内容要求，可适当发挥，使行文流畅、通顺；
2.省略号部分请各用2-3句话作适当发挥；
3.词数90左右。文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sam,
Haven’t written to you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of our Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules. There are many rules that we have to follow.
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What about you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua 【答案】Dear Sam,
Haven’t written t o you for a long time! As you know, family rules are an important part of you Chinese traditional culture. Today I’m writing to tell you something about my family rules.
There are many rules that we have to follow. First, you should respect the old and love the young. You are also supposed to be kind to other. Next, it’s a good habit to be honest and keep your words. What’s more, you should keep studying , go to bed and get up on time. You mustn’t stay up too late.
In my opinion, every family must keep rule s and children shouldn’t develop bad habits, like telling lies and be rude to others. We should be strict with ourselves.
The family rules also make a great difference to me. I learn to think about others’ feelings and Chinese traditional culture.
What ab out you? Do you have any family rules? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon! Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】
本文属于材料作文，向山姆介绍你的家规并向他展示一个温情的中国家庭。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如be supposed to, be kind to, keep your words, what’s more, in one’s opinion, develop bad habits, be rude to, be strict with, make a difference to以及it is a good habit to be honest中it作形式主语。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
7．（·济宁市第八中学中考模拟）书面表达
假如你们学校正在开展研究性学习（exploring learning strategies），请你根据下表提供的信息，写一篇短文，让更多的学生了解你校开展研究性学习的一些情况。
注意：1. 短文应包括表格提示的所有内容，可适当发挥；
2. 词数：100词左右。开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
过去现在
课堂老师讲解知识点，学生听
讲，记笔记，没有足够的时
间独立思考问题。
老师提出问题，学生相互讨论，并
学会与他人合作,从而找出解决问题
的方法。
课后做大量的作业。丰富多彩的课外活动，如：读自己喜欢的书，去图书馆或上网查资料等。
个人
感受
……
Great changes have taken place in our studies since our school began to carry on exploring learning strategies. ________________________________________
【答案】Great changes have taken place in our studies since our school began to carry on exploring learning strategies. In the past, teachers kept on explaining the language points in class. We students just listened and took some notes. So we didn’t have enough time to think abo ut problems by ourselves /independently. We had to do much homework after class. But now teachers show the problems to us first, then we discuss them for a while in pairs or groups. We try to find out the ways of solving problems, through which we’ve learn t how to work/ study/ cooperate with others. After class, we can have different activities. For example, we can read books we like, go to the library or surf the Internet for useful information and so on.
In a word, now we are the owners of our study and w e’re happy.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇材料作文。本文主要所用时态主要是一般过去时和一般现在时。仔细阅读内容提示，根据提示内容列好提纲。内容要包括所提供的信息及要点，可适当发挥。字数在100词左右。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。根据要点列提纲：
自从学校开始开展研究性学习以来，我们的学习发生了很大的变化。过去，老师在课堂上不断地讲解语言要点。我们学生只是听并做了一些笔记。所以我们没有足够的时间独自思考问题。课后我们不得不做很多家庭作业。但是现在老师们先把问题展示给我们，然后我们成对或分组讨论一会儿。我们试图找出解决问题的方法，通过这些方法，我们学会了如何与他人合作学习。下课后，我们可以进行不同的活动。例如，我们可以阅读我们喜欢的书，去图书馆或者上网寻找有用的信息等等。
总之，现在我们是我们学习的主人，我们感到很高兴。
【点睛】
文中能很好的利用连词（In the past ，So, But now, then，In a word）使文章更紧凑，条理。特别注意了时态语态的正确运用（In the past, teachers kept on explaining the language points in class. / But now teachers show the problems to us first, then we discuss them for a while in pairs or groups. t.），文中用到了复杂句式结构（We try to find out the ways of solving problems, through which we’ve learnt how to work/ study/ cooperate with others..）。学习中要牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。写作前列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。切忌堆砌词语、句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。注意表达的顺序。注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。要养成检查的习惯，注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。
8．（·天津中考模拟）书面表达
86. 上周日下午，你去天津图书馆读书，发现了一些不文明现象。请根据以下提示点，写写你的经历和感受。
1. 在图书馆二楼，有一个大约四岁的小男孩，在大声喧哗、跑跳；
2. 他的妈妈没有阻止他，而是在一旁大声接打电话；
3. 你走过去，告诉他这样做是不对的；小男孩表示歉意然后悄悄回到座位。
4. 对此现象，你的感受和想法……
参考词汇： some uncivilized phenomena一些不文明现象
1. 字数80-100个；
2. 开头字数已给出，不计入总字数；
3. 要点齐全，行为连贯，适当发挥。
Last Sunday afternoon, I went to Tianjin Library to read my favourite books there.
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_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Last Sunday afternoon, I went to Tianjin Library to read my favourite books there. When I was on the second floor, I found some uncivilized phenomena. I saw a boy who was about 4 years old shouting and running noisily. He didn’t read the books at all. What’s more, his mother didn’t stop him and just talked on the phone loudly. What should I do then? I walked towards the little boy and told him that it was wrong to do so. The boy said “sorry” and went back to his seat quietly.
In my point of view, this mother set a bad example for her child. It is important for her to tell his son some public rules. As long as everyone follows these rules, all of us will be in a civilized society.
【解析】
【详解】
上周日下午，你去天津图书馆读书，发现了一些不文明现象。请根据以下提示点，写写你的经历和感受。这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般过去时态，主语是第一人称和第三人称，注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如：He didn’t read the books at all. What’s more, his mother didn’t stop him and just talked on the phone loudly. 学习中注意总结,
牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.
9．（·安徽省蚌埠龙湖中学中考模拟）当前，我市各学校正在开展“好书伴我成长”活动。
请你根据活动主题并结合表格信息，以“Growing up with Good books”为题，用英语写一篇
约80个单词的倡议书，向全校同学发出倡议。
要求：1.倡议书应包含所有要点；2.倡议书的开头已给出，不计入总词数；3.文中不得出现真实姓名与学校名称。
Growing up with Good books
My dear friend,
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【答案】My Dear Friends,
Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds, but also make us cleverer and happier. Our study can be improved if we read more good books. The more we read, the more we will learn and the brighter our future will become. However, some students spend much time in listening to music, watching TV or going online to play games. It takes much of their spare time. So I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books, especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world.
Let’s start reading now. And let it become a part of our life!
Thank you!
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如not onl y…but also，the more …the more，spend much time in doing，listen to music，watch TV，go online，play games，much of，like to do，so that，a part of等。而非谓语动词结构Reading is very important./ some students spend much time in listening to music, watching TV or going online to play games.和Our study can be improved if we read more good books./ So I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books, especially read classics so that we can spread our Chinese traditional culture to the world.等复杂从句结构的运用，既丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。
【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
10．（·长沙市开福区青竹湖湘一外国语学校中考模拟）书面表达
健康的生活习惯是非常重要的。你认为健康的生活习惯应该是怎样的呢？请根据以下的信息提示，写一篇短文。
内容：1、健康饮食；
2、早睡早起，不熬夜；
3、参加运动，强身健体。
要求：
1、必须包括所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2、80词左右；
3、文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。
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【答案】Healthy habit
I think healthy habits are important for us. As we all know, healthy life habits will bring us good health. How can we develop healthy habit?
First of all, we must keep a balanced diet. Eating too much or too little, or choosing wrong food may cause many illness. Moreover, we should take exercise every day. We can walk to school instead of taking a bus. Doing sports for an hour every day is also a way to keep us strong. Last but not least, we’d better go to bed early and get up early. The body needs enough sleep to work well. Children at our age should have at least eight hours’ sleep every night.
As long as we have good healthy habits, it will be easy for us to keep healthy and enjoy the health.【解析】
【详解】
本文属于话题作文，阐述你认为健康的生活习惯是什么样的。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。
亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如as we know, develop healthy habit, keep a balanced diet, instead of, had better do, at least, as long as, it is adj for sb to do, first of all, moreover以及last but not least。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
【点睛】
写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：
认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。
构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。
初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。
修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词
数是否符合要求等。
11．（·山东中考模拟）书面表达
下面的图片描述了昨天下午发生在四年级三班教室里的情景。小林和小刚之间的对话，让你想到了什么？请根据你对图片的理解，用英语写一篇 100 词左右的短文。
内容包括：1. 完整描述图片内容； 2. 简要阐述你的观点和看法。写作要求：1. 可以根据图片信息，进行适当的发挥；
2. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。提示词：手提电脑 laptop
【答案】Yesterday afternoon, Xiao Lin and Xiao Gang from Class 3 Grade 4 had a talk. They showed off the Children’s Day gift. Xiao Lin’s mom bought him a telephone and Xiao Gang’s dad bought a laptop for him. They were very proud. Other students envied them very much. But I think it is not proper to compare with each other. The main task of students is studying. So their attention should be focused on study. Of course their parents can buy some gifts for the holiday, but I think the gift must be suitable for their children, such as books, school things, dictionaries and so on., which are good for them. Things like cell phones and laptops are of little use to primary school students, just distracting them.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文要求我们观察图片，将图片中发生的场景用英语表达出来，是一篇看图作文。首先学生们应仔细观察图片，了解图片中发生的场景，弄清楚它主要想传达的意思，然后用英语将这些内容表达出来。审题可知，这篇短文的内容应主要包括两个部分：首先要描述图片中发生的事情；其次对该事情阐述自己的观点和看法。短文应主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时，第三人称来叙述，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应注意：首先短文内容应符合图片表达的意思，不能会错意，写偏、写错；可以根据图片信息适当发挥，使文章更加充实、完整。其次要注意英语句式表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。用从句子的整体结构出发，写完整的句子。句式结构可以简单句为基础，穿插并列句或复合句结构。为提升作文水平，应注意应用高级词汇和复杂结构。同时语句之间使用恰当的衔接成分，使文意连贯、自然。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求以及图片信息，介绍了图片中发生的事情，并对这件事发表了自己的看法。短文有以下几个优点：首先短文内容符合题目要求，作者
通过观察图片，正确了解了图片传达的信息，确定了文章的中心。文章内容完整、充实，叙述清晰、有层次。作者观点明确，理由充分。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般过去时和一般现在时、第三人称来叙述，正确使用了谓语动词的形式，注意了过去式，尤其是不规则动词过去式的变化，语法规范，用词准确。最后短文中句式结构文章，符合英语的表达习惯，简单句、并列句、复合句交替应用，文章富有节奏的变化。短文中还使用了丰富的句型，如Xiao Lin’s mom bought him a telephone and Xiao Gang’s dad bought a laptop for him.、
But I think it is not proper to compare with each other.、Of course their parents can buy some gifts for the holiday, but I think the gift must be suitable for their children, such as books, school things, dictionaries and so on., which are good for them.、Things like cell phones and laptops are of little use to primary school students, just distracting them.等。
12．（·无锡市江南中学中考模拟）书面表达
亲子关系是目前广受关注的话题。假设你是张华，你正在以“如何与父母更好地相处” 为题进行英语自主课程研究。通过搜集资料，你查找到中国青少年研究中心（CYCRC）近日就中美两国亲子关系进行了问卷调查，结果如下表。请你根据下表选取并整合你认为有用的信息，结合你的实际经历以How to get along well with parents为题写一篇感想。
注意事项：
1.内容须根据表格数据和实际经历合理展开；
2.要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合情境；
3.词数在90个左右，首尾已经在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
4. 内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置。
【答案】How to get along well with parents
More and more people begin to focus on the parent-child relationship. Here’s my understanding of how to get along well with our parents.
CYCRC did a survey in the United States and China. The results showed that 48.1% of Chinese children often talk to their parents, far fewer than the Americans. More understanding lies in American parent-child relationship. I think we should not only talk often but open our heart. For example, when I got low marks in exams, I always talked to my parents. They helped me find the reason and encouraged me. I also shared my secrets and worries with them. A good relationship
requires efforts from both parents and children.
As children, getting well with parents is of great importance to us. We should find a proper way to create a healthy parent-child relationship.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以How to get along well with parents为题，就中国青少年研究中心（CYCRC）近日对中美两国亲子关系问卷调查的结果进行介绍，并结合自己的实际经历，发表自己的感谢。写作前，应仔细审题，观察所给表格，弄清楚表格中每一项的内容以及它的意义。然后结合自己的实际情况，对如何与父母良好相处，发表自己的看法。短文应主要以一般现在时为主，第一人称和第三人称来叙述。写作时应注意：内容应密切结合表格中所给的数据以及自己的实际经历，有叙述，有议论。合理安排各部分内容之间的关系，注意分清结构，表达要有条理。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能根据汉语式思维逐词翻译，应从句式的整体结构出发，使用适当的单词、短语和句型表达。句式结构要完整，可以简单句为基础，穿插使用并列句和复合句以及其他复杂句式。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使行文连贯、自然。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，介绍了中美两国亲子关系的对比，并结合自己的实际对如何与父母相处，发表了个人看法。短文有以下几个特点：首先文章内容完整，符合题目要求。短文分三段：第一段引出文章的话题parent-child relationship，点明文章主旨Here’s my understanding of how to get along well with our parents；第二段对调查结果的第一项内容进行了介绍，并结合自己的经历，讲述了如何与父母相处。这是文章的主体部分，叙述非常详细，内容也很充实，所占篇幅也最大；最后一段作者重申主题，点明了良好亲子关系的重要性。其次短文使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，语句通顺。句式结构完整，以简单句为主，也使用了宾语从句、状语从句、并列句、非谓语动词等复杂句式和结构。行文连贯、自然，表达流畅。短文中较好的句型有：The results showed that 48.1% of Chinese children often talk to their parents, far fewer than the Americans.、I think we should not only talk often but open our heart.、I also shared my secrets and worries with them. A good relationship requires efforts from both parents and children、We should find a proper way to create a healthy parent-child relationship.等等。
13．（·天津中考模拟）书面表达
生活中好友间也会因各种原因闹些小矛盾，当你与朋友间产生不愉快后，你会如何处理此类问题呢？请根据以下提示点谈谈你的想法。
1. 上周日，你的好友Lisa，弄丢了你最心爱的图书，这是妈妈送给你的生日礼物；
2. 但是Lisa并没有因此而道歉，你很难过；
3. 你喜欢阅读，认为读书可以开阔眼界，所以你很珍惜自己的每一本书籍；
4. 接下来你打算……参考词汇：cherish珍惜open up one’s eyes开阔眼界
要求：
1. 字数80-100个；
2. 开头已经给出不计入总词数；
3. 要点齐全，行为连贯，适当发挥。
When I have trouble with my best friend
There are always problems around us, even between close friends. Let me tell you something about myself. Last Sunday.
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【答案】When I have trouble with my best friend
There are always problems around us, even between close friends. Let me tell you something about myself. Last Sunday my best friend Lisa lost my favourite book that was a birthday present from my mother. The book is very meaningful for me. What’s more, she didn’t apologize to me about this, I felt quite sad. I love reading, because it can open up our eyes and increase our knowledge. I cherish every book of mine and they are my treasure.
So I am going to have a serious talk with Lisa in order to tell her my true feelings. I think we can buy a new one and read it together. In fact, understanding is the most important thing between friends.
【解析】
【分析】
本文是一篇材料作文。
【详解】
根据题干“生活中好友间也会因各种原因闹些小矛盾，当你与朋友间产生不愉快后，你会如何处理此类问题呢？”要求可知，本文用一般过去时，人称用第一人称。
英语作文一般分为三个部分：
第一部分：开篇点题——我将介绍和好友闹矛盾的一件事情。
第二部分：文章主体——具体介绍这件事情的始末。
根据事情发展顺序，从先到后交代事情的经过，我做了什么，为什么会和好友有矛盾。
这些内容用一般过去时，注意动词的过去式变形。
1. 上周日，你的好友Lisa，弄丢了你最心爱的图书，这是妈妈送给你的生日礼物；
2. 但是Lisa并没有因此而道歉，你很难过；
3. 你喜欢阅读，认为读书可以开阔眼界，所以你很珍惜自己的每一本书籍；
4. 接下来你打算……
第三部分：总结全文——好友之间应该互相理解。
14．（·浙江中考模拟）假如你是李华，是某英文电台“ Say it”栏目的兼职编辑。最近你收到一名叫王平的中学生发来的电子邮件，向你们栏目组求助。请你根据电子邮件内容给她回复一封电子邮件，帮助她解答困惑。
Dear Li Hua,
I' m a middle school student. Recently I argued with my parents over using Wechat. You know
Wechat has become a part of our everyday life, but my parents don’t allow me to use it. What 's worse, they have changed my password（密码）so that I can’t use it. There has been a "cold war" between us for over a week. What should I do?
Yours,
Wang Ping
要求：1．语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；
2．词数80-100左右，电子邮件的格式、开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
参考词汇：欺骗tick；许可permission
Dear Wang Ping,
I'm sorry to hear that you are having problems with your parents because of using
Wechat.________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________
I believe things will get better,
Yours
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Wang Ping
I‘m sorry to hear that you are having problems with your parents because of using Wechat. In fact, yo ur problem is very common . Cheer up and let’s find a good way to solve it.
You may be tricked or get into trouble when you use Wechat. Also, using it for a long time is bad for your health, especially for your eyes. Maybe your parents worry about these things. In my opinion, communication is very important. Why not have a good talk with your parents about how to use Wechat properly? Try telling them you won’t use it for too long and won’t use it when you are studying. What more. tell them you’ll never add strangers without their permission.
I believe things will get better.
Yours
Li Hu 【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇应用文写作，写一封回信。本题给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，确定写作内容，并适当发挥。根据内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态和将来时态，写作中注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意
连贯。
【点睛】
这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者根据题目要求,层次非常的清晰。短文中需要作者自己补充的内容完成得也不错这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型Maybe your parents worry about these things. In my opinion, communication is very important.；Why not have a good talk with your parents about how to use Wechat properly?
15．（·北京中考模拟）“书山有路勤为径, 学海无涯苦作舟”, 成功不会从天而降, 美好的未来需要靠不断努力来创造?
某英文网站正在开展以“天道酬勤” 为主题的征文活动?假如你是李华, 请用英文写一篇短文投稿, 讲述你通过勤奋, 取得进步甚至成功的经历, 并谈谈你的感受?
提示词语: diligence （勤奋）, make progress, effort, proud
提示问题: ? What did you achieve by working hard?
? What did you do to make it?
? How did you feel about it?
【答案】Diligence is a must for us to reach our goals. I never realized it until I tried every effort to win the English speech competition last year.
It was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. To give a better performance, I made full use of my spare time to prepare for it. I recorded my lines and asked my foreign teacher to correct my pronunciation. Then I kept practising day and night. Besides, I seized every chance to speak in front of my family or friends. The more I practised, the more confident I became. In the end, I won the competition and got a prize.
It was so great that all my efforts paid off.I felt so proud of myself.
【解析】
【详解】
这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下你通过勤奋, 取得进步甚至成功的经历。所提供的材料中列举了“书山有路勤为径, 学海无涯苦作舟”, 成功不会从天而降, 美好的未来需要靠不断努力来创造。主要从：你努力工作取得了什么成绩？?你是怎么做到的？?你觉得怎么样？这几个方面去介绍。时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料和提示词的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具
有条理性。
【高分句型一】
It was quite a big challenge for me because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public. 这对我来说是一个很大的挑战，因为我对自己的英语口语没有那么自信，在公共场合说话也很害羞。
句子because I was not that confident about my oral English and I was shy to speak in public.是
由because引导的原因状语从句。
【高分句型二】
The more I practised, the more confident I became. 我练习得越多，就越自信。
这句话用到了“the+比较级，the+比较级”结构。表示“越……，就越……”的意思。
二、中考英语阅读理解汇编
16．阅读短文，从每题所给的A、B、C和D四个选项中，选出最佳选项。
Garrison had been treasuring his last piece. All he had left now was a sheet of the beautiful brown paper Pa had brought back from his last sailing trip.
"You've been quiet," Pa said, "Could I see your picture?"
Garrison handed over his sketch. Pa studied it, then looked at his son. "You're ten now, eh?" Garrison nodded, hoping Pa wouldn't say that he was too old to be fooling around with pencils and paper.
"When I was ten, I wanted to work on my father's ship," Pa said, "When Thomas was ten, he asked me to let him plant the corn."
Garrison's throat （嗓子）tightened. "I know I'm not like either of you." Pa looked at the drawing again.
"No, you are like both of us. You work hard, like Thomas. And you're like me, too. I have wandering feet, but you have a wandering mind. We need to see things differently.
Garrison frowned. "I'd rather love the land, like Thomas, or the sea…"
Pa patted his hand. "Thomas cares about our family very much-that's why he's worked so hard to bring us food. And my love for the sea makes good money. But there's more in life than food and money. There's happiness, for one. Does it make you happy to draw?"
Garrison nodded.
"And it makes me happy to look at your drawings. Not many folks can catch happiness on a piece of paper. Some might say drawing's a waste of time, but they don't understand how things are. Why, asking you to stop drawing like asking Thomas to stop farming, or me to stop going to sea. It would be like asking us to stop breathing, wouldn't it?"
Garrison considered this, then replied, "No, sir. Not quite like breathing. If I couldn't draw any more, it would be… like someone took away my voice." He hung his head. In his mind he could hear Thomas laughing, "It's not like you ever speak up, anyway."
But Pa patted his shoulder and said, "That would be a pure shame. Your voice is important, Garrison, whether it's out loud or on paper. And speaking of paper…" Pa smiled. "Take a look in my bag."
Garrison reached into the bag and found a sketchbook. For a moment he was speechless
happiness seemed to fill his body and stick in his throat. Then he managed to find his voice. "Oh, Pa-thank you."
（1）Why did Garrison's throat tighten?
A. Because he felt thirsty.
B. Because he felt very scared.
C. Because he knew he was not like Pa or Thomas.
D. Because he thought Pa would stop him drawing.
（2）When Garrison frowned, he most probably felt ________.
A. unhappy
B. worried
C. afraid
D. ashamed
（3）What can we infer from the passage about Garrison?
A. He lived in a big wealthy family.
B. He was his father's favourite son.
C. He would go on with his drawing.
D. He would learn to work on the farm.
【答案】（1）D
（2）B
（3）C
【解析】【分析】主要讲了Garrison的爸爸送给Garrison一本素描书，让他继续绘画。（1）细节题。根据"When I was ten, I wanted to work on my father's ship," Pa said, "When Thomas was ten, he asked me to let him plant the corn."可知爸爸说自己10岁时在爷爷船上工作，Thomas10岁时学习种植玉米，所以他认为爸爸会阻止他绘画，故选D。
（2）细节题。根据前文可知Garrison害怕爸爸不让他继续绘画，所以是担心的，故选B。（3）推断题。根据Garrison reached into the bag and found a sketchbook. For a moment he was speechless happiness seemed to fill his body and stick in his throat. Then he managed to find his voice. "Oh, Pa-thank you."看看爸爸送给他一本素描书，所以他继续绘画，故选C。
【点评】考查阅读理解。本文涉及细节题、推断题常考题型，细节题要注意从文中寻找答案；推断题需要联系上下文，推断出需要的信息。
17．阅读下面短文，从每题所给的A、B、C三个选项中，选出最佳选项。
Many people love travelling to different countries, but if you plan to go abroad, you should know how to behave in different situations around the world.
Most travelers enjoy meeting new people, but sometimes you can be rude without saying anything. In Russia, you should never shake hands in a doorway, and if you're travelling in Thailand, never touch people's heads or point your feet at people. When the Japanese meet new people, they like giving business cards-but you should read the card carefully, not just put it in your pocket.
江苏英语高考常用书面表达写作模板 一、对比观点题型 (1)要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。 1. 有一些人认为…… 2. 另一些人认为…… 3. 我的看法…… The topic of ……(导入话题) is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say (A观点) is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ……(支持A观点的理由一). What is more, ……(支持A观点的理由二). Moreover, ……(支持A观点的理由三). While others think that (B观点) is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly, ……(支持B观点的理由一). Secondly (Besides), ……(支持B观点的理由二). Thirdly (Finally), ……(支持B观点的理由三). From my point of view, I think ……(我的观点). The reason is that……(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former(latter) is surely a wise choice. (2) 给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点。 ……(导入话题) …… Some people believe that……(观点一). For example, they think……(举例说明)．And it will bring them……(为他们带来的好处). In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing, ……(我不同意该看法的理由一). For another thing, ……(反对的理由二)． From all what I have said, I agree to the thought that……(我对文章所讨论主题 的看法)． 二、阐述主题题型要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述。 １．阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义。２．分析并举例使其更充实。 The good old proverb……(名言或谚语)reminds us that……(释义). Indeed, we can learn many things from it. First of all, ……(理由一). For example, ……(举例说明). Secondly, ……(理由二). Another case is that ……(举例说明). Furthermore, ……(理由三)．In my opinion, ……(我的观点). In short, whatever you do, please remember the saying……A. If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you’ll necessarily benefit a lot from it. 三、解决方法（how to…）题型 要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径。 １．问题现状。２．怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)。 In recent days, we have to face this problem……（提出一种现象或某种困难作 为议论的话题）, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ……(说明这种现 象或这种困难的现状)．Second, ……(进一步说明这种现象或这种困难的现状). Confronted with ……（这种现象或这种困难的）, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ……(解决这种现象或 这种困难的方法一). For another……(解决这种现象或这种困难的方法二). Finally, ……(解决这种现象或这种困难的方法三). Personally, I believe that ……(我自己的解决这种现象或这种困难的方法). Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is waiting for us because ……(解决这种现象或这种困难的方法的效果).
第二节书面表达（满分25分） 假如你是某高中学生李华，你校美国外教Jim 对中国传统文化很感兴趣。近期，学校邀请某大学王教授到校举行“孔子及其思想”的讲座。请给Jim写一封信，介绍讲座的有关事宜，并邀请他来参加。 1. 讲座时间：5月16日（星期六）上午8：00-11:00点； 2. 讲座地点：1号教学楼三楼302室; （Room 302 on the third floor of No.1 building） 3. 活动安排：8:00-10:00：听讲座；10:00-10:30：讨论及提问；10:30-11:00诵读孔子经典名句。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3. 开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ Yours, Lihua 第二节书面表达（满分25分） 参考范文 Dear Jim, I have good news to tell you. There will be a speech about “Confucious and confucianism” made by Professor Wang in Room 302 on the third floor of No.1 building. The talk will last two hours from 8 to 11 on May 16th Saturday. As I know, you like the culture of China, so I’d like to invite you to attend it. The activity mainly consists of three parts, two-hour listening and half an hour’s discussion as well as thirty minutes’Confucius classic reading. I will be very glad if you come. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Lihua 亮点强化 There will be... ...将会（发生，举办......）speech=lecture n.演讲，讲座 in Room 302 在302房间on the third floor 在三楼 from 8 to 11 从8点到11点As I know 正如我所知道的 consist of 包括I’d like to do sth. 想去做某事 half an hour 半小时classic adj.古典的 第二节书面表达(满分25分) 假设你是高三学生李华，你的表弟王林今年将要上高中。请你给他写着一封邮件，从以下两个方面提出建议。 1. 学习方面； 2. 课余生活方面。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不得出现考生的具体信息； 4. 信的开头以为你拟好，不计入总词数。 Dear Wang lin, I’m glad to know that you are going to be a senior high school student this September. _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ Yours, Lihua 第二节书面表达(满分25分) 参考范文 Dear Wang Lin, I’m glad to know that you are going to be a senior high school student this September. As a senior 3 student, I have so much experience to share with you. High school life is full of challenges. Making good use of your time will be of great benefit to efficient study. It is also helpful to preview your lessons before class and take notes in class. High school life can be very colorful as well.I suggest you participate in some meaningful activities, such as sports and voluntary work to develop yourself properly and thoroughly. The coming three years will be the most beautiful time in your life. I believe that with your efforts, you’ll make it fruitful and wonde rful. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 亮点强化 be glad to do 很高兴去做..... share with 与......分享 be full of 充满make good use of 充分利用 be of great benefit 大有益处take notes 做笔记 meaningful adj.有意义的thoroughly adv.彻底地 fruitful adj.肥沃的，果实累累的 1
高考英语书面表达背诵 范文25篇 -CAL-FENGHAI-(2020YEAR-YICAI)_JINGBIAN
高考英语书面表达背诵范文25篇 ---多背范文，表达加分！！ 书面表达(一) 假定你叫李华，今年六月份将从北京新华中学高三毕业，打算到美国哥伦比亚大学上学。现在请你根据下面表格的个人信息，用英语写一封 注意： 1. 信件必须包括以上内容，不能逐句翻译，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 2. 词数100左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：哥伦比亚大学the University of Columbia 范文 Dear Sir or Madam， I'm writing in the hope that I can obtain a chance to further my study in computer science in your university. First, please allow me to take a brief introduction of myself. I’m Li Hua, a girl born in June, 1993. I’m graduating from Beijing Xinhua High School this coming June with each course excellent. I have a keen interest in computers and the Internet. Besides, I’m good at English. I know th at the University of Columbia ranks among the most famous universities in the USA, and that’s the very reason why I’m now applying to further my university study in your Computer Science Department. I would appreciate it if you could take the trouble to provide me with some information and send me the necessary application materials. By the way, my email address is lihua93@https://www.doczj.com/doc/102008816.html,. I’m looking forward to your reply. 2
全国各地高考英语书面表达汇总9套 新课标I卷 假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教MS Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。 注意： 1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。 示例1 Dear Ms Jenkins, I'm Li Hua from your English writing class last term. I'm writing to ask for your help. I'm applying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation, and I have just completed my application letter and resume. However, I am not quite sure of the language and the format I've used. I know you have a very busy schedule, but I'd be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes. Please find my application letter and resume in the attachment. Thank you for your kindness! Yours, Li Hua 示例2 Dear Ms Jenkins, I am Li Hua, I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor. In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign
高考英语书面表达经典范文大全（14个类型） Part One: 提纲式作文： 1. 假设你是一名新闻记者，请根据以下表格信息给英语报社写一篇新闻报道。 【参考范文】 The H1N1 flu broke out in Mexico in April this year and it has spread to many countries in the world. To our disappointment, by the afternoon on August 30, 80 confirmed cases of H1N1 flu had been reported in a school in Henan province, resulting in the fact that all the middle schools there had to delay the new term. Fortunately, it is estimated by the experts that the death rate of the H1N1 flu virus is lower than 1%, still lower when compared with that of SARS and bird flu. The best way they give the public to prevent it is to wash hands more often, drink more water and have enough sleep. With the help of our government, we believe that we are able to win the battle against the disease. 【好词好句】 1. To our disappointment, 80 confirmed cases of H1N1 flu had been reported... , resulting in the fact that .... 2. It is estimated by the experts that...when compared with... 2. 据报道中国每年都会发生几十万起交通事故, 许多人都因此而丧生.请针对这一社会问题按以下要点写一篇短文。 1. 描述此社会问题； 2. 造成此状况的主要原因(2至3个原因)； 3. 提出解决的办法（2个） 注意: 1.词数100左右 2.可适当发挥,以使行文连贯 【参考范文】 It is reported that many people lose their lives annually in China, owing to hundreds of thousands of traffic accidents. Several factors account for the serious problem. Firstly, the fast growing number of private cars contribute to heavy traffic jams, making it likely for car accidents to happen. Secondly, drunk driving may be a deadly killer. Thirdly, some drivers ignore the speed limit and drive too fast. Faced with this severe problem, the government should take firm action to decrease the accidents. In my view, it would be a good idea to develop public transportation. Meanwhile, we should appeal to people to follow traffic rules, and get tough with drunk drivers. Only in this way can we create a harmonious world and enjoy a happier life. 【好词好句】
书面表达范文100篇 1 May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make. The Students’ Union is going to hold a party on Saturday evening, August 15, to welcome our friends from the United States. The party will be held in the roof garden of the Main Building (主 搂) .It will begin at 7:30 p.m. There will be music, dancing, singing, games and exchange of gifts. Will everybody please bring along a small gift for this purpose? Remember to wrap it up, sign your name and write a few words of good wishes ( 祝愿). Don’t forget: 7:30 Saturday evening, roof garden, Main Building. There’s sure to be a lot of fun. Everybody is welcome. 2 Dear Peter, We’re so glad you’re coming to join us on Sunday. Here is how you can find us. We’ll have our picnic in the People’s park. You know where that is, don’t you? After you enter the park by the main gate, walk straight on till you come to a stream. Cross the stream and turn right. After walking for a while, you’ll come to a hill. Walk round to the other side of the hill. There you’ll see a lake. We’ll have our picnic there in the small woods by the lake. I’m sure you’ll have no trou ble finding us. Do come. 3 Today we visited a farm. Early in the morning, we met at the school gate and went there together The farm workers gave us a warm welcome. Then the head of the farm showed us around. How glad we were to see the crops and vegetables growing well. At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After a ten minu tes’ break, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes(笑话) or stories. Two of us even played a game of chess. The time passed quickly. Before we knew it,we had to say goodbye to the workers. 4. Today is the 16th Teacher’s Day. This morning, the headmaster praised the teachers who did well in their teaching work and gave some teachers medals for their having completed thirty years of teaching. Our English teacher was among them. This afternoon some of my classmates and I went to visit him in his office and we were warmly received by him. We had a talk with him for some time.He encouraged us to study hard and be good students. By talking with him we were deeply inspired. 5 Dear manager, I learn from the newspaper that a secretary of the English language is wanted in your company.I beg to apply for the post. My name is Li Hua, a girl of twenty-six. I graduated from the English Department of a university four years ago.I’ve been working as a guide of English for four years.And I take more pleasure in the job as a secretary.I can speak good English as well as Chinese. I want very much to be accepted by your company.Please give me an answer if these satisfy you. Yours faithfully,
书面表达参考句型： 1. It is necessary/important for…to… 2. It is necessary/important that… 3. It is wise/kind of … to… 4. It’s a good way/idea/choice to … 5. It’s our duty责任to… /that we should… 6. It’s a pity that… 7. You will find it + adj. + to do…8. …make(s) it easy/possible to … 9. In order to…, you …10. Remember (not) to do… 11. Make sure that you…12. You/We’d better (not) do… 13. 祈使句，and/or you’ll…14. 动名词作主语：…ing…. is… 15. It’s said/reported/true that…16. Besides,/Moreover,/What’s more, 17. In my/his opinion,…18. As we know,… 19. As a result/Therefore, …20. In a word / All in all,…总之，一句话21. In general总的来说22. 宾语从句、状语从句、定语从句 23. There’s no doubt that… 熟记各册重点句型并巧妙运用到书面表达中 书面表达答题注意事项： 1. 根据所给开头确定格式（齐头式或缩进式）。并根据开头，确定是从第一段续写，还是从第二段开始。 2. 认真审题，确定文章人称（第一、二、三人称皆有可能。以下范例中各人称都有。） 3. 分段（根据情况分为三段四段都可以。不分段或者分段过少过多将予以扣分。） 4. 近两年所给信息中四字居多，切忌单纯翻译词组和中国式英语，应扩充为句子，要用熟悉的有把握的短语，恰当使用高级句型（如上述参考句型）。书面表达绝对不是简单地翻译句子，要注意逻辑性。 5. 检查要点是否齐全，尤其是自拟内容。 6. 逐字检查，包括每句动词的时态、单词拼写、大小写及标点符号等。 7. 全文中必须要有高级句型和连接词，详见参考句型。 8. 词数90左右，尽量达到词数，不宜超过120。言多必失。 9. .建议最好打草稿，如果时间紧迫可以在草稿纸上写个框架（或提纲）。卷面上不得随意涂改，保证卷面清晰字迹工整。
安徽 假设你是李华。美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文 刊物，该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。请你给他写封回信，主要内容如下： 表示赞成。 提出你喜欢的栏目。 简要说明理由。 注意： 1．词数100左右。 2．信的开头和结尾已为你写好。 3．适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 4．参考词汇：栏目一column ﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡﹡ June 8 Dear Mr. Green, I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together.______________________________________________________________ __________________________________________ Yours faithfully Li Hua June 8 Dear Mr. Green, I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. It is indeed a wonderful idea and everyone hopes for its success. I would like the magazine to have three columns : News, Teachers' Advice and Students' V oice. From the News column we can learn about what is going on in both of our schools. In Teachers' Advice, our teachers can give us such help as we may not be able to get in the classroom. Students' V oice will allow us to freely express our thoughts and feelings about our lives and studies. I believe that this magazine will surely strengthen our ties, and I am looking forward to reading it. Yours faithfully, Li Hua 北京 第一节情景作文（20分） 假设你是李华，要给英国笔友Harry写封信，介绍你班两位同学精选班长的 过程。请按下图顺序描述。 注意：1.信的开头已为你写好。 2.词数不少于60. 提示词：竞选班长monitor election
2017高考英语祝贺信Congratulatory Letter书面表达写作 祝贺信 祝贺信是社交中的一种礼仪性信函。通常包括以下几个方面的内容：说明祝贺事由，表达热烈、诚挚的祝贺；围绕祝贺事件表述贺喜内容；表达美好祝福。 写作"三步走"： 说明事由并表达自己衷心的祝贺->展开评论事件、赞扬收信人->再次表达良好祝愿 在写作主要内容的时候，可以重点赞扬一下当事人的优秀能力和取得成就的原因、并展望他将来的美好发展前景等。 Tips in English Here are some principles that congratulatory letters follow: 1. The purpose of writing the letter is to make your reader feel certain that he or she deserves the special message of recognition and praise. 2. The note should be brief, dealing with the primary topic only. These messages are most effective when they conduct no business. 3. The whole message should carry a tone of being positive and conversational(会谈的，谈话的). 4. Be sure to send the letter within a few days of the event. Any delay in delivery of the message would make your effort worse than no effort at all. 开头常用句式 It was exciting news for me to learn of … Please accept my sincere/hearty/warm congratul ations on … It was a great pleasure to send you my congratulations on … I was delighted to learn of your success /achievements in … I am really happy to learn that you have been elected… 结尾常用句式 Wish you good luck! We wish to share your honor and joy. I wish you success and fulfillment in the years ahead. May all go wonderfully in your new post! May every happiness be yours! All my best wishes for an even more prosperous future/successful career! May each succeeding year bring you great happiness and prosperity. Every good wish to you for much health, happiness, and prosperity! 闪光词汇及词组： delighted: adj. 高兴的，欣喜的achievement: n. 成就，功绩 essential: 本质的，基本的，重要的play a ... role: 起......的作用 enhance: v. 提高，增强comprehensive: adj. 全面的 embrace: v. 拥抱pave the way for: 为...铺平道路 brilliant: adj. 灿烂的 书面表达祝贺信写作模版祝贺信
2020年中考英语书面表达30篇背诵(名师精选热点话题+满分范文背诵，建议下载)
书面表达 类别1事物介绍类 第1篇 现在越来越多的人热衷于户外运动，它不仅能让我们放松身心，也有助于强身健体，那么你最喜欢的户外运动是什么呢？请用英语写一篇短文介绍你喜欢的一项户外运动。 要求：1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 2.必须包含所给提示信息，并作适当发挥； 3.短文中不能出现真实的人名、地名和校名； 4.不少于80词（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Outdoor activities Reasons that you like it Playing basketball... Climbing mountains exercise; easy and cheap; get away from daily work... There are many kinds of interesting sports,such as basketball,football,swimming and running._________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ Would you like to have a try?
2018届高考英语书面表达解析及写作技巧 2018-08-10英语：高考书面表达解析及写作技巧一、解读书面表达书面表达是一个综合性题目，要求考生根据所给图画、图表、提纲(或者开放性)等，运用所学知识将提示信息组成句子，句子连成段，段连成篇。 它不断要求考生有丰富的语言语法知识，而且有较强的语言表达能力和逻辑思维能力。 它也是一种融形式、文体、交际三位于一体的试题，所考查内容都体现在表达和传递信息的交流能力，因此，书面表达有交流性、实用性、合理性等特点。 近几年来高考书面表达正在一步步地向考试要考语言运用能力这一方向改进，并采用了新的评分标准，因此要求考生语言的准确性和得体性，注重上、下文连贯，注重表达方式多样化。 新的评分标准提倡考生使用高级词汇和复杂句式，运用过渡性词汇增强文章连贯性。 如果考生在表达中只是运用了简单句，虽然表达了要求的信息，那么得分也不会高。 因此，近几年高考要求考生掌握词汇要丰富，句式表达要复杂，适当地使用情感性语言。 二、各种题型的应试对策1图画作文要求考生首先仔细观察，读懂图意，抓住要点，按图片顺序编拟提纲，同时要注意图片所给的时
间、背景等相关信息，确定写作的人称、时态和语态。 在写作时还要适当地使用一些关联词、过渡句来加工润色，使文章层次清楚、通顺畅达。 这种作文的难点在于要求考生能自己编拟出合适的要点，并且表达上要连贯。 2图表作文要求考生能分析把握该图表要表达的内容，确定主题，然后从图表中归纳出相应要点来写作。 这种作文能有效考查考生的篇章结构组织能力，要求写作具有逻辑性。 3提纲作文要求考生首先将所给出的要点进行组织，按照一定的逻辑顺序用明白、恰当、得体的语言来表达；要尽量消除汉语式的英文表达。 这种作文切忌逐字逐句汉译英，使得文章支离破碎，不忍卒读。 相对来说，这种作文难度相对较小。 4（半）开放性作文要求考生能根据相当简短的提示来写作；或者要求续写一段文字，或者写出你的感想等等。 这种形式为考生张扬个性提供了空间，答案不唯一，淋漓尽致地考查了考生发散思维和创新思维能力。 它还可能包括改写、缩写等其他形式。 近年来不少自主命题省（市）的高考试题有向（半）开放性过渡的趋势。
高考英语书面表达背诵文25篇 ---多背文，表达加分！！ 书面表达(一) 假定你叫华，今年六月份将从北京新华中学高三毕业，打算到美国哥伦比亚大学上学。现在请你根据下面表格的个人信息，用英语写一封信，申请 注意： 1. 信件必须包括以上容，不能逐句翻译，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 2. 词数100左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：哥伦比亚大学the University of Columbia 文 Dear Sir or Madam， I'm writing in the hope that I can obtain a chance to further my study in computer science in your university. First, please allow me to take a brief introduction of myself. I’m Li Hua, a girl born in June, 1993. I’m graduating from Beijing Xinhua High School this coming June with each course excellent. I have a keen interest in computers and the Internet. Besides, I’m good at English. I know that the University of Columbia ranks among the most famous universities in the USA, and that’s the very reason why I’m now applying to further my university study in your Computer Science Department. I would appreciate it if you could take the trouble to provide me with some information and send me the necessary application materials. By the way, my email address is lihua93@sina.. I’m looking forward to your reply.