考托者应记住的几条公理
1，托福作文就是新八股文
2，托福作文只要练好了人人可以拿27+
3，托福作文得高分不意味着你英语水平有多高
4，提高英语水平靠多听多读多背多说多写多练多译
首先让我们全面剖析新托福作文：（以下要求均为我自己的理解，非官方版本，官方要求请参照OG）
integrated writing/综合写作:要求考生在3分钟内读一篇文章，然后听一个lecture，在20分
（注：文章内容和lecture 钟内根据文章和lecture内容写一篇250字左右文章比较两者的观点。
内容注定是对立的，如果你考的不是对立的，那只有一种可能，你的RP次到了人神共愤的地步了。）
综合写作的八股在于：第一段指出reading passage和lecture内容是对立的；第二、三、四段从三个方面/点来说明他们的内容是怎样对立的；第五段总结一下他们之间确实是对立关系。
independent writing/独立写作：给定一个题目，要求考生在30分钟内写出400字左右的文章，要求逻辑清晰，论述有力，无明显的语法和词法错误。
独立写作八股在于：第一段陈述你的观点，支持哪一方；第二、三、四段从三个方面论述你的观点；最后一段总结一下，综上所述，某某观点是正确的。
综合写作：模板，套模板，一定要套模板！
理由：1，模板让你的思路更加清晰，这是ETS要求的。
2，20分钟！开玩笑，怎么凑到300字？当然要用模板！
3，阅读听力我都不怕，就怕作文，写三句话错两句，我怎么得26+？当然还是用模板，既然是模板就意味着是你精挑细选的句子，保证了写作的质量！
提醒：1，模板要富于变化，一篇只能用5句那你就要准备10句！
2，模板不能一味照搬别人的，避免重复！
3，保证模板里的句子没有语法和用词错误！
一般来说，大家把一下几个句子稍微变形，即完成了综合写作第一步
1. The lecture discusses…which differs from the main idea in the reading that… （用于第一段）
2. The professor made the point that …The reading , in contrast, held a different v iew .（用于第一或第二三四段）
3. Another important point showed in the listening material is that …but the reading presents a conflicting idea that…（用于第三四段）
4. Finally, the professor stated that ...which challenges the standpoint made by the writer who said that...（用于第四段）
5. In general, the professor discussed the problem of …that the reading viewed in a contrary\opposing\different angle.（最后总结段）
6. According to the lecture… on the other hand \while the reading stated that …
7. The professor made the point that… on the contrary\ in contrast\ however, the writer demonstrated an ideathat…
8. The lecture supports\illustrates the idea that…
9. The lecture contradicts\refutes\ is contrary to\ is the opposite of the idea that…
10. Contrary to the belief in the passage that …the professor says that…
11. The professor refutes the viewpoint showed in the passage that… by saying that…（6-11均用于第二三四段）
大家可以把连接词变化一下，把动词变化一下或句式稍变，11句话灵活运用。
除了模板以外，综合写作我们还需要做什么？
做笔记，做听力笔记！
99．9%的情况下，综合写作的主体内容是三个对立的观点，所以大家只要把这个三个点记下来，然后把阅读里相应的三点抠出来放到模板里面去，你的综合写作就做完了，就是这么简单！
独立写作怎么办？
很遗憾，独立写作没有固定的模板，起码我没用过。没有模板怎么能叫八股文呢？独立写作的八股在于它的题目很固定，如果不信，请翻看OG上给出了那几百道例题。
绝大部分题目是：**和**相比，你觉得哪个更好/更合理？/你更支持哪个观点？
一部分题目是：*******，你怎么办？/你是怎么看的？
还有极小部分发散性题目很少考，而前面两种其实是一种题目，不信？你看个例子。
Q：Your school has received a gift of money. What do you think is the best way for your school to spend this money? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.
这个题目没有给你二选一的选项，我们要做的是把它转化为二选一，捐款的用途无外乎这么几种：建图书馆、体育馆（还可细分篮球、**。。。）、学生公寓、办公大楼、买电脑。。。
这么多选项你只要从中挑选一个，然后把这个和其他的相比较这篇文章你就搞定了！
除了题目固定之外，写作的手法同样很固定。其实大家只要熟读范文100篇，不会背书也能写。而且能写高分作文。具体的方法就是在论坛找到那谁谁谁的185篇满分作文，挑选其中你觉得写的不错的把其中铺垫的句型，转换词挑出来，背一背，背多了你会发现所有的满分作文其实是一个套路出来的流水线作品（除极少数作文）。流水线作文谁不会写呢？那满分作文其实很简单的
关于托福作文的几个比较常见的问题：
1,多少字数合适？
ＯＧ上说综合写作１５０－２２５，独立写作３００。个人认为综合２５０字，独立３８０＋比较妥当，但是不用追求太多的字数，有字数没质量的作文绝对不能得高分。但是有质量的作文字数肯定少不了，ＥＴＳ要求Use specific reasons and details to supportyour choice，你想想达到这个要求的作文字数能太少吗？
2,要准备多少时间？
三到四周
第一周把***185范文看透，每个题目自己都分析一下，同时学习好的句子。后面两周每天练一篇综合一篇独立，练手感，同时练打字速度。（用老键盘练，不能用笔记本键盘）
3，托福作文这么八股，考了高分其实不算什么，为了达到北美大陆以后我们写起论文来杠杠的，我们一起为提高整体英语综合实力努力吧。多听多读多背多说多写多练多译！相信能就一定能
相信能就一定能
托福英语独立写作模板指导 很多学习者翻开作文书籍，就如同想打开一本武功秘籍，只希望看到5个字母trick(技巧) 。技巧固然十分重要，但在应试准备中，常常需要70%的基础和30%的技巧。这里要提醒大家的是，不可高估技巧的作用，犹如在武打片中，要想得到某某宝典和剑法，是需要付出惨痛的代价的。 如何运用托福英语写作模板 1. 熟悉和理解4大评分标准是高分关键 评分标准1：effectively addresses the writing topic and task. 要求考生有效地阐明主题，考生千万不要跑题。从笔者的教学经验看，考生全部跑题现象较少，但是局部跑题现象十分严重，这也是考生不能轻取高分的缘故。 评分标准2：well organized and well developed 逻辑条理清楚，发展充分。每次作者在讲写作时总是把它和阅读相对照。各位考生要想拿到独立写作满分必须真正理解八股文的结构，千万不要写中国式的八股文，而应写出美式八股文。 评分标准3：uses specific details and examples to support you view 考生的论据一定要具体、明确，且对论点有支持作用，而不能空洞和泛泛而谈。 评分标准4：displays language facility by demonstrating syntactic variety, word choice and idiom.(通过谴词造句和习惯表达来展示语言的熟练程度) 这一点是各位考生经常忽视,迷惘和不清楚的一点。新托福作文占总分120分的30分。我们对大家的要求是在作文上花的时间既要少又要拿高分，至少28分。凡是想拿到28分甚至满分
托福写作的高分表达方法 很多学生会选择，那么托福写作考试的高分技巧有哪些呢?跟着出guo一起来看看吧!下面是收集的有关托福考试写作技巧的资讯，欢迎阅读。 除了在句式上长短句相结合准确表达外，朗阁海外考试研究中心建议新托福考生要使用一些特殊的句式，以使句型多样化。句型多样化也是作文得到高分的条件之一。除了我们之前经常提到的高分句式，如倒装句、强调句、状语前置、插入语等，笔者还提出另外一个句式的多样变化，即主语多样化。下面笔者将列举几个句子概括介绍前面四种句型，而重点分析主语多样化。 正常句： Luck only works in extreme cases. 倒装句： Only in extreme cases does luck work.(否定词位于句首的倒装。) 正常句： The inter provides people aess to the latest information. 强调句： It is the inter that provides people aess to the latest information. (强调the inter) 正常句： The environment has been deteriorating severely along with the development of industry. 状语前置句： Along with the aelerating development of industry, the environment has been deteriorating severely.
正常句： However, new zoos try to duplicate animals’natural habitats as much as possible and give animals a fortable amount of space. 插入语： New zoos, however, try to duplicate animals’natural habitats as much as possible and give animals a fortable amount of space. (连词however做插入语) 主语多样 1. 她突然想到了一个主意。 She suddenly had an idea. 通常情况下，考生会马上对这句话进行翻译，基本不会动句子结构。但是以人作为主语的英语句子总是不能够很吸引人，所以这个句子如果稍微做下修改，以后面的宾语“主意”做主语，这个句子会发生一些变化。 An idea suddenly ourred to her. 2. 他开车心不在焉，几乎闯祸。 He was absent-minded when driving, and almost caused an aident. 这句话依然是拿人做主语，稍微改一下，把心不在焉这个形容词的名词形式做主语，会大不相同。 His absence of mind during driving nearly caused an aident. 3. 美利坚合众国创立于1789年。
智课网托福备考资料 托福写作提分技巧【语法篇】 托福写作要短期快速提分有一些小技巧是很好用的,应为很多托福考生对托福考试一直存在理解误区,只要走出误区,就会发现自己的写作成绩提升很快!了解更多考试资讯:400-077-0188. 今天我想说的就是帮助考友们可以在最短的时间内提升自己的分数,而这些小技巧之所以好用,绝大多数都是因为我们对托福考试的误区所造成的,因此只要走出这些误区,那么我们马上就能发现自己的分数有很大的提升。当然,我还必须说一句,就是有的人是认识的问题,也就是对托福考试的认识的问题,而大多数人的问题都是在能力上,而不是认识上,因此小伙伴们千万不要舍本逐末! 今天,老师要讲的这个暗爽提分小技巧,其实非常简单,就是语法! 很多小伙伴也许,不屑一顾,我也知道我语法不好,但是没有办法啊。其实,并不是这样的。要知道,很多小伙伴在准备托福作文的时候,第一在意的并不是语法,而是能不能写完作文,很多小伙伴都把自己的精力,花在如何套用各种各样模板或者句型上。这才是很多小伙伴在准备托福考试的时候,尤其是一开始的时候,最为在意的事情!其实当你这么做的时候,重点就错了! 其实对于写完作文这件事情,ETS并不是那么在意,要知道,有很多小伙伴没有写最后一段,或者最后一句话没写完,也是有28、29分的!而且,哪怕他们写完,作文也不
会到30分,满分。之所以会出现这种情况,就是因为,其实ETS的评分看的是你作文整体所体现出来的整体水平,这才是ETS最关心的!这里所谓的整体水平,就包括你 的遣词造句,包括你的例子是否可以很好地支持你的观点,这些内容才是ETS的加分点,至于很多人所关心的,写完一篇作文到底能打多少分?其实ET S并不能给出答案,因为不管你写的是300字,还是700字,只要写的好,分数就好,写的不好,800字的分数也仍然会很低。 是的,ETS不关心你写没写完! 反过来,ETS这位姑娘关心什么?ETS关心你是否品行正直,也就是关心你是否有语法错误。ETS关心你写的是否地道,也就是关心你是否能力拔群!这才是ETS最关心的!因此,你只要写的作文没有语法错 误,那么你的分数基本上就不会低于20分。要知道,如果每科都平均20分的话,那么你就已经有80分了哦! 那么语法错误到底怎么改?只要点破了,其实很简单,而且时间还很短。就是两点:第一,找人修改;第二,把错误的点总结,而且记下来,下次不要再犯错。 很多人总觉得,我学了这么多年英语,都没学好语法,语法怎能是几天就搞定的? 其实,我们常见的语法错误,也就是主谓一致,介词不能跟动词原形,等少数的几个问题,只要硬着头皮写3-5篇作文,就全都能暴露出来!一定要记住,写完一篇,就找人 改一篇,然后总结错误的内容,然后再写一篇,再找人改一篇,再总结错误的内容,保证在下一篇作文之中尽量不犯同样的错误,不怕写得慢,就怕犯同样的错误。只要这样,写过5篇作文,你的绝大多数错误也就都能解决了。如果,能写过10篇的话,而且都 找人改的话,你就应该不会再有什么语法错误了。一切就是这么简单!
托福写作高分范文仿写技巧作为托福考试写作部分两篇文章其中之一，独立写作主要以学生的学术知识背景和个人生活经验为基础来考察语语言的学习规律是相通的。有了正确的『输入』，才能有正确的『输出』。所以，要想在英文写作中有所提高，我们可以借鉴一些上乘的范文，对其思路、结构、语言等进行模仿，并最终应用在我们自己的文章中。这个过程就叫做『仿写』。今天文都国际教育小编就给大家介绍下托福写作高分范文仿写技巧。 如何做仿写? 托福写作高分范文仿写技巧Step 1 通读范文，了解通篇大意，仔细研究各段构思。 在教学过程中，我会为学生甄选符合国外考试评分标准的优秀范文。学生拿到这些范文后，可以从宏观的角度了解作者对于题目的观点，是采用了单边、双边还是中立的角度来进行论证。学生还可以从微观的角度，深度分析每个主体段，作者是如何通过有逻辑地说理，并配以恰当具体的例子，来证明此段的分论点。 以下为范?段落实例： Modern society places a lot of emphasis on success. Though success is clearly desirable, Ithink our intense focus on success is unhealthy and counter productive.People would be better served by learning how to adopt a positive attitude towards failure. 托福写作高分范文仿写技巧Step 2 学习优秀的语言点 针对每一篇范文，我会为学生总结出其中用法得到的词组和句式，并让学生趁热打铁，强化对这些语料的记忆。这种从整体中提取，呈现成个体的形式，会让学生对这些语料的印象更加深刻。 以下为提取实例：
climate change, outer space exploration. Culturally, what young people tend to believe and how young people decide to behave may become part of the trait of the nation. affects the society today will be solved during my life time?(61) DISAGREE a. It is true that some scientific problem will be taken under control. Flu=smallpox, HIV/AIDS, diabetes, energy efficiency. b. Many other scientific issues will not bear fruit if without hundreds of year 托福写作提纲 1. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The world is changing fast, people are less happy. AGREE a. The rapidly changing environment is towards a deteriorating direction and people suffer from all kinds of pollution. b. Coming with the conv enience which was brought by the advancement of technology, people 'lsife are at stake considering wars are always on edge. c. People ' srelationship with each other is alienated by Internet, telecommunication and other kind of virtual interaction patterns. 2. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important characteristic for politician is to accept responsibility for mistake. DISAGREE a. It is very important for politician to accept responsibility for mistake considering. Because only after recognized and took the responsibility of mistakes can politician make an effort to progress. b. The most important skill the politician should possess is communication skill. For one thing, it is important for politician to a good listener to public. c. Communication skill can help politician to express themselves better, consequently, having the policy or implementation carried out well. 3. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents should allow children to make and learn from their own mistakes. PARTIALLY AGREE a. It is very helpful to cultivate a child ' s sense of independence by letting him/her dealing with their own mistake. b. Their own experience will be more impressive to them and is a better way to educate children than solely didactic instillation. c. Nevertheless, this process should be carefully moderated by parents because children are lack the ability to draw a clear line between right and wrong. And they cannot always recognize the seriousness of their mistakes. 4. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people nowadays have no influence on decisions that determine the future of the society as a whole. DISAGREE a. Politically, youth play an increasingly crucial role in decision-making. b. Scientifically, youth ' s interesutdoyfwsitll determine where humankind will head to in the future. Disease combat, c. 5. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The most important problem that ' s efforts. Climate change, sending human
考托者应记住的几条公理 1，托福作文就是新八股文 2，托福作文只要练好了人人可以拿27+ 3，托福作文得高分不意味着你英语水平有多高 4，提高英语水平靠多听多读多背多说多写多练多译 首先让我们全面剖析新托福作文：（以下要求均为我自己的理解，非官方版本，官方要求请参照OG） integrated writing/综合写作:要求考生在3分钟内读一篇文章，然后听一个lecture，在20分 （注：文章内容和lecture 钟内根据文章和lecture内容写一篇250字左右文章比较两者的观点。 内容注定是对立的，如果你考的不是对立的，那只有一种可能，你的RP次到了人神共愤的地步了。） 综合写作的八股在于：第一段指出reading passage和lecture内容是对立的；第二、三、四段从三个方面/点来说明他们的内容是怎样对立的；第五段总结一下他们之间确实是对立关系。 independent writing/独立写作：给定一个题目，要求考生在30分钟内写出400字左右的文章，要求逻辑清晰，论述有力，无明显的语法和词法错误。 独立写作八股在于：第一段陈述你的观点，支持哪一方；第二、三、四段从三个方面论述你的观点；最后一段总结一下，综上所述，某某观点是正确的。
综合写作：模板，套模板，一定要套模板！ 理由：1，模板让你的思路更加清晰，这是ETS要求的。 2，20分钟！开玩笑，怎么凑到300字？当然要用模板！ 3，阅读听力我都不怕，就怕作文，写三句话错两句，我怎么得26+？当然还是用模板，既然是模板就意味着是你精挑细选的句子，保证了写作的质量！ 提醒：1，模板要富于变化，一篇只能用5句那你就要准备10句！ 2，模板不能一味照搬别人的，避免重复！ 3，保证模板里的句子没有语法和用词错误！ 一般来说，大家把一下几个句子稍微变形，即完成了综合写作第一步 1. The lecture discusses…which differs from the main idea in the reading that… （用于第一段） 2. The professor made the point that …The reading , in contrast, held a different v iew .（用于第一或第二三四段） 3. Another important point showed in the listening material is that …but the reading presents a conflicting idea that…（用于第三四段） 4. Finally, the professor stated that ...which challenges the standpoint made by the writer who said that...（用于第四段） 5. In general, the professor discussed the problem of …that the reading viewed in a contrary\opposing\different angle.（最后总结段） 6. According to the lecture… on the other hand \while the reading stated that … 7. The professor made the point that… on the contrary\ in contrast\ however, the writer demonstrated an ideathat… 8. The lecture supports\illustrates the idea that… 9. The lecture contradicts\refutes\ is contrary to\ is the opposite of the idea that… 10. Contrary to the belief in the passage that …the professor says that… 11. The professor refutes the viewpoint showed in the passage that… by saying that…（6-11均用于第二三四段） 大家可以把连接词变化一下，把动词变化一下或句式稍变，11句话灵活运用。 除了模板以外，综合写作我们还需要做什么？ 做笔记，做听力笔记！ 99．9%的情况下，综合写作的主体内容是三个对立的观点，所以大家只要把这个三个点记下来，然后把阅读里相应的三点抠出来放到模板里面去，你的综合写作就做完了，就是这么简单！
把教授如何反驳文章中三个分论点挺清楚，例子都是阅读文章里的所以不用记，听力里主要是在讲阅读文章中的例子有哪些缺陷或不严谨的地方，从而无法成为有效的论据，甚至成为别的观点的论据。 有自己的写作模式、写作套路。 先不限时写几篇，写完一篇就立刻打印出来逐字逐句修改（电脑上改容易偷懒），把过于简单的词和句子一一替换，注意别用太难的词和没把握的词，能用到6级词汇就差不多了，心情好了再拽两个托福词汇上去也就足够了。我觉得最好用的就是形容词和副词，可以记几个托福水平的精彩形容词和副词，选择自己看着顺眼的，在平凡的名词前加好看的形容词，在平淡的句子里随处放置抢眼的副词，这样文章一下子就丰富起来了。 插入语，句式变换，每段第一句试着倒装、或用被动语态 多用具体的详细的例子，别停留在就事论事上，可以试着延伸到生活的其他方面 注意线性思维，“总分总” 托福作文写五段，第一段是中心思想段，二三四是支持段落，最后是总结段落 无论是综合写作还是独立写作，考生追求的基本目标是把想说的意思用书面英语表达清楚，让阅卷人读懂和明白。从语言角度来说，有两大标准，即准确性和多样化。能够达到词词准确，又使用到不同的词句来表达相同、相似的意思，从语言角度来说已经符合托福考试的高分要求。 仿写。只看不写，永远不能将输入语言化成输出语言。尽量仿写整句，保持原句结构，替换内容！ In a word, it is rather superficial to simply say that.........+观点：In a word, it is rather superficial to simply say that parents are the best teachers。用一句话说，简单地认为父母是最好的老师是相当肤浅的。 综合写作部分的评分标准： 1、内容的完整性和准确性。简单地说，就是文章是否有将讲座中的关键信息点完整、准确地提 取出来，并和阅读材料中的相关内容有效地一一对应。如果讲座中的信息点有缺失，那么会有一定程度 的扣分；如果只写了有关阅读材料的观点，得1分。 文章的组织机构，词汇和语法的正确性和准确性。高分的作文需要做到条理清晰，结构连贯，用词 恰当，能够准确地表达讲座中的观点与阅读材料中的观点是如何相互联系的，只要作文中的错误不至于 使内容表述出现误解，一些偶尔出现的语言错误，如单词拼写、单复数问题等，不会对作文成绩产生很 大影响，当然，错误肯定是越少越好的。 独立写作部分的评分标准： 1、有效回应题目，阐明文章主题。一般来说，独立写作完全跑题的情况很少，但是很多考生在 展开讨论时所采用的论据，比较容易出现跟主题关联性不大的情况，即局部答非所问的现象，从而影响 了得分。2、逻辑条理清楚，论证充分展开。这一点的关键在于文章论证的展开，是否提供了大量的细节和例子来支持观点，而非泛泛而谈地说理。3、内容连贯一致，衔接自然流畅。达到内容连贯一致的文章通常全文围绕中心论点展开，而不会论据自相矛盾，也不会重复论证，有时候通过一些表示因果、先后、递进的关系连词可以起到粘合剂的作用。4、遣词造句地道，语言驾驭娴熟。托福考试终究是语言考试，最终还是要考查考生的语言运用能力，但是要注意的是，并不是要求考生通篇都用难词偏语长句，而是要会变化着用一些美国人常用的语句把自己的想法表达清楚，所以建议考生尽量多阅读和模仿英文原版材料，这样写出来的文章才能够原汁原味。
托福独立写作高分10大例子 很多考生在备考托福独立写作的时候都有这样的感觉：没有话可写。文都国际小编称，想要你的写作内容充实并用字数达到要求，一些通用资料还是很重要的。下面小编为大家准备了托福独立写作高分10大例子，大家一起来学习一下吧。 1. It can improve health condition and enhance our ability to respond quickly. Besides, as long as we keep doing it frequently, we can effectively lose weight and keep ourselves in good shape. In addition, it can better prepare us for any physical challenge in the future 2. He should tolerate relatively small mistakes committed by others. Making mistakes is somehow inevitable, as long as it’s unintentional, he is supposed to forgive it. The tolerance will breed gratitude from others. 3. During the process of communication, my interpersonal skills will improve considerably. This can help me cooperate with others more
The government should offer internet access to all of citizens at no cost. 1.Easier attaching to information 2.More convenient for citizens to communicate 3.Decrease burden for poor people Never do topics concerning internet fail to fascinate us under the ever-increasing development of internet nowadays in the modern society. A lot of people believe that internet is to citizens what water is to fish. From my perspective, I support that citizens accessing to internet should be free based on the following reasons. It is obvious that we are now in the new era of global information, so accessing the internet could be really important to us. If the government proposes that the citizens could use the internet for free, we will concerning about the cost no more so that we can check a lot of information posted online which means we are able to attach to information. Or else, citizens will have to choose cheaper but much slower ways to search for information such as going to the library or asking other people. For instance, I have homework to do every day and the teacher usually puts the materials I may need onto schoology—an online application that can store information. So when sometimes when I am outside home, I cannot use it because it will create cost, in this situation I feel it is necessary for the government to let us using the internet for free.
托福写作技巧：缺一不可话题作文指导 【新东方】轻松直达90分！年托福（T O E F L）金牌课程火热开售中>> 缺一不可 缺一不可的原因 什么文章可以使用缺一不可? 例：D o y o u a g r e e o r d i s a g r e e w i t h t h e f o l l o w i n g s t a t e m e n t?P e o p l e b e n e f i t m o r e f r o m t r a v e l i n g i n t h e i r o w n c o u n t r i e s t h a n f r o m t r a v e l i n g t o f o r e i g n c o u n t r i e s. S t r u c t u r e
T r a v e l i n g i n t h e i r o w n c o u n t r i e s m a k e s p e o p l e u n d e r s t a n d t h e i r o w n c u l t u r e s a n d h i s t o r y b e t t e r a n d t h u s t h e y c a n b e m o r e c o n f i d e n t a n d m a k e f r i e n d s w i t h f o r e i g n e r s m o r e e a s i l y. T r a v e l i n g t o f o r e i g n c o u n t r i e s a l l o w s p e o p l e t o e x p o s e t h e m s e l v e s t o t o t a l l y d i f f e r e n t c u l t u r e s s o t h a t t h e y b e c o m e m o r e t o l e r a n t a n d a r e a t t r a c t i v e t o f r i e n d s d o m e s t i c. T r i p s t o d i f f e r e n t p l a c e s b e n e f i t t h e m i n d i f f e r e n t w a y s,a n d i t w o u l d b e r i g i d t o s a y… 段落扩展示例
GOOD 29 When you are assigned an important presentation for work or school, you prefer to work on it right away so that you can work on it a little bit every day, or wait until you have a good idea about the presentation? Though novel ideas can help better assignments, I prefer to work on the presentation as soon as I am assigned it. First, the presentation cannot be done just by creativity, but by proper arrangement. A job plan, manageable, precise and rational, is not only the bed rock of completing but also the guarantee of time-saving. For instance, preparing the material for the topic, researching some knowledge in the textbooks and discussing the task with the other students in group are the things that you can do even when you do not have any inspiration. So redistributing your plan can avoid wasting your time waiting. Second, good idea is always late for your deadline, a regret that can be eliminated by right-away action. The more time you waste on planning and considering your presentation, the less time you will have to revise and complete your assignment. Take my brother Jim for an example. He is a freshman in university and quite into the first presentation in the opening of semester. Spending the last 4 days engaging in assembling the ideas, he, with barely nothing innovative, has no time typing a practicing so that he needs to stay up late the last night to catch up in time. As a result, he can not hand in the presentation when the deadline
(1)26====28;The most important problems in today’s world will be solved in our lifetime. Job is an essential part of our normal life and it is a perpetual （永久的）topic that is argued by any part of society in any decade. Recently, it is heatedly discussed that people should choose a steady job or a high salary but unsteady one. Different people have different ideas. Some people prefer a steady job, because they feel at ease need to worry about losing it. The others hold the opinion that choosing a high salaries is much better, even though it is easy to lose. As far as I am concerned, I don't think the former job is better than the latter one. It is undeniable that a steady job is good for people to have a peace life. They just do what they need to do. Though the salary is not as much as an unsteady one , they are still satisfied with it. Because ,as we know some people don't want to experience much ,all they need is to live happy and without any accidents. Therefore, a steady job is really a good choice. Especially for the people who are not qualified or skillful or the people who are not very ambitious. Maybe a steady job is much suitable for them. Nevertheless, though(和nevertheless不重复?) a steady job has its advantage, I still think a high salary job which is easy to lose is a better choice. For the first reason, a high salary job can help people enjoy their life better. If they have more money they can make sure their children receive a good education, it will be benefit for the children' s future. people who choose a high salaries job also can guarantee their old parents receive a better medical treatment. They can buy big houses, expensive cars and so on .Second, this kind of jobs are likely to be those that are different to deal with. Therefore, the job must be a challenge for the people who choose it.Not only can gain more money, but also help people have an opportunity to improve themselves. Especially for the people who are eager to challenge themselves and full of ambitions. They don't fear to lose the job, they just cherish the experience.
托福写作高分攻略丨了解文化差异避开“中式思维”影响 一.敢于表达“自我” 众所周知，托福写作部分通常以议论文形式考察学生，要求学生对某一话题进行探讨，是否赞同及理由是什么。在此类文章下，西方写作要求作者鲜明地展现自己观点，突出作者的“自我”，而我们学生往往表现的“唯唯诺诺”，似乎不敢直接说出自己的想法，拉长文章篇幅，却让读者疑惑。 二.“直线思维”写作 举例说明，儿时写游记作文时，大家最喜欢在开头写“今天秋高气爽”，而每每和外国友人提起此，他们都纷纷表示“然后呢?”，因为在西方人眼里天气好就是天气好，无它。 而中国文化里“秋高气爽”隐指“心情舒畅”，我们更希望塑造一种语境让读者猜测，这在西方文化里是行不通的。托福写作里，我们鼓励学生在每个主体段第一句直接提出论点，就是为了迎合西方写作思维，把最想表达的以最直接的方法，放在最显眼的位置，使考官一目了然，想高分进击。 三.了解托福写作考察重点 托福写作考察的是学生对语段的转述、总结能力，对事物观点的看法，而不仅仅是英语语法和词汇的运用。常见到学生文章里用复杂的句型和高深的词语，细看却内容空泛，没有思想。这也是为什么很多学生认为自己辛苦背句型却得不到高分的原因。 要想避免在写作中免受“中式思维”的影响，必须要敢于表达自我，采用“直线思维”的方式写作，这样才更有可能拿到托福写作高分。反之，如果持续按照“中式思维”去写文章，可能会一直卡在托福写作提升的瓶颈期。 托福写作：常见立场介绍 1.持一立场 针对某一个论题，每一种观点都有它的理由。同样，在托福作文中也不存在着唯一的观点和内容。这时，你可以从两个完全相反的观点中选择一个立场。关键在于你如何说服读者：尽管存在着相反的立场，你的观点从总体上来说仍然是最具说服力的。 一般说来，应该选择那个政治上正确的或者大多数考生会选择的观点。当然，如果你不擅长写这种文章，你可以适当地调整一下内容以适应你较习惯的舒服的表达方式。但总的说来，文章要均衡，不要包含高度争议性的论述。不要把这里当成思想家的论坛。写一篇高度争议性的文章只会让读者对你产生偏见，同时也会使电脑评分器费解，因为这种文章和其数据库里所储存的文章差别太大。所以，针对问题时尽量使用较冷静平和的语气。尽管如此，你也不能不选择一个立
写作技巧第一讲 ——七个句子成分 一、主语 1. 句子要说明的人或事物。 2. 名词、代词、动名词、动词不定式、what从句、that从句、how从句等 3. 动词原形不能做主语。 练习：主语成分 1.Some towns, cities, regions(区域) and countries seem to have better education than others. 2. Fifty years ago in the UK, getting good grades and scoring high on tests were important but not critical(至关重要的) to life chances. 3. It is important to keep calm and carry on while working under pressure.(主语后置) 4. It is certainly true that scientists are gaining a clearer understanding of the outer space, thanks to many years of research and better data.(主语后置) 5. It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school. 二、谓语 1. 说明主语的动作、状态或特征。 2.永远只能由动词构成。 练习：谓语成分 1.Today many local and national newspapers carry advertisements and information about holidays. 2.Spending time with other children and sharing experiences can make children more sociable(喜欢社交的). 三、宾语 1.宾语表示动作行为的对象。 2.跟在及物动词之后。 3.名词、代词、动名词、动词不定式、that从句、what从句、how从句等。 4.当动词是be (am, is, are) 动词时，be动词后面的名词或形容词也可以做表语。