浙江3套新高考英语试题读后续写部分及参考答案

2022年（有答案）浙江省高三（下）同步英语试卷（读后续写与概要写作）（11-20）一、书面表达1. 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要．Playing endless games of hide﹣and﹣seek with your toddler can get tired very quickly．And sometimes parents need a break from pretending not to know the very obvious spot where their child is hiding．Well，you no longer have to feel guilty about letting your kids sit down in front of the television for an hour or two，because it's been proven that，in certain circumstances，screen time for your kids can actually be beneficial．The key thing to remember is that unsupervised and too much screen time isn't good for your kids，but some situations let you relax and will keep your kids entertained．One example is video chatting with family．The American Academy of Pediatrics reported that maintaining strong relationships with your family members that live far away is an important part of development．Being able to visually see their faces and chat with them at the same time is good for your kids，even if it's on a screen．So let your little child sit on the couch，having a video chat with Grandma and Grandpa，and you can go and catch up on other things around the house．Another way to incorporate screen time in a beneficial way is to watch TV together．Turn on an educational kid show and sit next to your toddler to answer any questions that they might have．The AAP says that a few hours of television a week is fine as long as you make it a family activity and encourage your kids to ask questions about the show．One show in particular that can be extremely beneficial to watch together is Daniel Tiger's Neighborhood on PBS．Researchers at Texas Tech University reported that kids who watched 10 episodes over a two﹣week period had higher levels of confidence，and they were able to recognize emotions better．So don't feel guilty at letting your kids sit inside for a little while；all parents need a break．2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语．Paragraph 1：I had to admit that my disappointment was growing steadily．Paragraph 2：Suddenly my wife walked up to me．3. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事．Once，when I was a teenager my ________ and I were standing in line to buy ________ for the ________．Finally there was only one family between us and the ticket counter．This ________ made a big impression on me．There were eight ________，all probably under the age of twelve．You could tell they didn't have a lot of ________．Their clothes were not expensive，but they were clean．The children were well﹣behaved，all of them standing in line，two﹣by﹣two behind their parents，holding hands．They were excitedly talking about the clowns，elephants and other acts they would see that night with their brothers or sisters in a low voice．One could sense they had never been to the circus before．It promised to be a highlight of their young lives．The father and mother were at the head of the line，standing ________ as they could be．The ________ was holding her husband's hand，looking up at him as if to say，"Youare my knight in shining armor．"He was smiling and responding in pride，looking back at her as if to say"You got that right"．The ticket lady asked the father how many tickets he wanted．He proudly responded，"Please let me buy eight children's tickets and two adult tickets so I can take my family to the circus．"The ticket lady gave the price．The man's wife let go of his hand，lowered her head and her lips began to ________．The father leaned a little closer and asked，"How much did you say？"The ticket lady told him the price again．The man obviously didn't have enough money．How was he supposed to turn and tell his eight children that he didn't have enough money to take them to the circus？Actually we were not ________ in one sense，so I understood how the kids would feel．I felt sorry for them．注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语．Paragraph 1：Seeing what was going on，my dad seemed to have an idea．Paragraph 2：Then my father and I went back home．4. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3．续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语．Paragraph 1：With a giant tear in her eye， the little girl looked up at him．Paragraph 2：Later that evening when Pappy was closing up the shop， he heard a familiar ringing．5. 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要．According to a study published in the journal Neuron，memory champions aren't all that different to us．People with an average memory can greatly improve their memory ability by using what's known as the "mind palace" method．In order to do this，you need to picture a place you're familiar with，such as your living room．Then，you have to remember this place in as much detail as possible as this is your own mind palace．Suppose you want to remember a shopping list．You can start by spreading out all the items around your living room in your mind．This means each item on your list is connected with a remembered place in your living room．You travel to that remembered place as you recall the list．To explore the effects of this method on the brain，researchers gathered 51 participants with average memory levels and no previous memory training．After 40 days of daily 30﹣minute training，participants doubled the amount of words they could remember﹣they went from recalling an average of 26 words out of 72，to an impressive 62．Four months later，even without continued training，their recall performance remained high．In addition，the training also affects the way our brain cells connect．After training，the way that the participants' brain cells connect began to be like those of memory champions compared to scans taken before training．Researchers believe this could be responsible for their increased memory．But what makes this research so fascinating is that it seems to prove that the talent to store things in your mind isn't determined by genes．The research found there was no difference in brain structure between memory champions and normal people，which means memory champions are not born with different brains．It's clear that more studies are needed to find out what's going on here，but the"mind palace"method might be your best bet to never forget an important name，date or appointment ever again．6. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语．Paragraph 1：The next day we remembered the brand﹣new tent we had brought with us．Paragraph 2：We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way．7. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事．It was summer，and my ________ wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before．He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West．We took a plane to Albuquerque，a big city in the state of New Mexico．We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon．________，my dad's friend，picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos．His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle．My dad and I spent the night in the guest room of the ________ listening to the frogs and water rolling down the ________ nearby．Very early in the morning，Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast．"The day starts at dawn on my farm，"he said．After breakfast，I went to help Aunt Tina ________ the chickens，while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the________ out to graze（吃草）．I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses．They looked really cool．In the afternoon，I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride，and he said yes，as long as my dad went with me．I wasn't going to take a horse ride by myself anyway．So，my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats，got on our horses，and headed slowly towards the mountains．"Don't be ________ for supper，"Uncle Paul cried，"and keep to the________so that you don't ________！""OK！"my dad cried back．After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of ________．It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks，the deep green pine trees，and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene．It looked like a beautiful woven（编织的）blanket spread out upon the ground just for us．注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语．Paragraph 1：Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse．________Paragraph 2：We had no idea where we were and it got dark．________8. 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要．It's a really good idea to visit colleges before you apply because their websites can all start to look and sound the same．Nothing will give you the sense of what it will actually be like to live on a college campus（校园）like visiting and seeing for yourself the dorms，classrooms and athletic equipment and，of course，the students．It seems a little crazy once senior year hits to find the time to visit college campuses，and it can also be pricey if the schools you are applying to happen to be more than a car ride away．But keep in mind that you are making a decision about the next four years of your life，and do all the research you can to make sure you are making the right one．There's no excuse not to visit the schools in your local area．In fact，a lot of college applications even ask if you have visited campus，and obviously，if you live across the country that won't be as much of a possibility，but if you live nearby，go check it out！If campus visits aren't going to happen before you apply，at the very least you should find some time between applying and getting your acceptance letters to visit the schools you'd like to attend．It can save you a lot of heartache if you rule out now the things that you don't like about certain campuses，things that you wouldn't know unless you actually visit．Now，if time and money are making it impossible，then check out the online college fairs at CollegeWeekLive．It's a chance to chat online with admissions officers，students，and college counselors（顾问），and it won't cost you a penny！You can register for its onlinecollege fair at collegeweeklive．com．While visiting an online college fair can't take the place of an actual campus visit，it can be a very useful tool that along with all your other research will help you make an informed decision about which colleges or universities you'd like to attend．9. Directions： Read the following passage． Summarize the main idea and the main point （s） of the passage in no more than 60 words． Use your own words as far as possible．Becoming an attractive employeeThe 2008 financial crisis created an unstable job market． Fast﹣forward to the present，and the economy has not fully recovered． Thus， it's of vital importance for job seekers to carefully strategize their approach to job application． And it is especially important forthose new to the workforce． They should look at making themselves as attractive as possible to employers．For young people， information technology skills will play an increasing role in the future． As the generation to have grown up in the Information Age， they are quite confident when it comes to showing off their interests and skills in this field． This makes them a natural fit for companies seeking expertise in technology， marketing， and networking． They should emphasize these skills when applying for jobs that require the ability to multitask．Another attractive quality is experience． It is important that an applicant's résumés list any activities that involved teamwork and goal﹣driven responsibilities． Membership in a sports or social club and participation as a volunteer are good examples of this． These activities involve goal management and planning， along with the ability to focus while competing ona team． When hiring committees see this， they see a candidate who is capable of workingin a variety of environments．Finally， an attractive quality when job﹣hunting is a great attitude toward a potential job． Young job seekers are known to be overconfident because they have been praised for everything they have done． But they must realize that the employment market is about how an employee will be a good fit for a company， not the other way around． In fact， in an interview， an important question to ask is "What would be expected of me as an employee？"In today's tough job market， young job seekers need to provide a potential employer with good reasons to hire them．10. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；（4）．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语．Paragraph 1：Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse．Paragraph 2：We had no idea where we were and it got dark．参考答案与试题解析2022年（有答案）浙江省高三（下）同步英语试卷（读后续写与概要写作）（11-20）一、书面表达1.【答案】Studies have proven that screen time may actually benefit kids under certain circumstances．（屏幕时间在某些方面对孩子有益）One of the benefits is that video chatting with grandparents helps strengthen family relationships．【高分句型一】（加强家庭的关系）Moreover， watching educational kid shows together with parents can enhance children's emotional development．【高分句型二】（有助于孩子的情感发展）In both cases， kids are entertained and parents can make themselves relax for a while．（使孩子放松）【考点】概要写作【解析】高分句型一：One of the benefits is that video chatting with grandparents helps strengthen family relationships．译文：其中一个好处是与祖父母进行视频聊天有助于加强家庭关系．分析：that引导表语从句．高分句型二：Moreover， watching educational kid shows together with parents can enhance children's emotional development．译文：此外，与家长一起观看教育性儿童节目可以促进儿童的情感发展．分析：动名词作主语．【解答】Studies have proven that screen time may actually benefit kids under certain circumstances．（屏幕时间在某些方面对孩子有益）One of the benefits is that video chatting with grandparents helps strengthen family relationships．【高分句型一】（加强家庭的关系）Moreover， watching educational kid shows together with parents can enhance children's emotional development．【高分句型二】（有助于孩子的情感发展）In both cases， kids are entertained and parents can make themselves relax for a while．（使孩子放松）2.【答案】答案：Paragraph 1 ：I had to admit that my disappointment was growing steadily． I was wondering whether I could get a gift when my younger son ran to me， who was really kind enough to save my face．【高分句型一】He asked me to admire his gift which he deeply believed was carefully chosen by Santa Claus． He said happily that he would share some of the gifts of his and allow me to choose one from them． I thanked him from the bottom of my heart，still feeling disappointed．【高分句型二】（没有收到礼物我感到很失望）Paragraph 2：Suddenly my wife walked up to me． It seemed that she had guessed how I felt． She askedme to look at the Christmas tree which was decorated with so many boxes． I thought shewas showing off her efforts on the decoration but she took off a small box and passed it to me smiling and saying it was for me． I opened it and saw a letter which read We will never forget you． Merry Christmas! " Under the letter was a watch which was clicking with delight． I was moved to tears．（家人没有忘记我让我感动）（ 162 words）【考点】读后续写【解析】分析：高分句型一：I was wondering whether I could get a gift when my younger son ran to me，who was really kind enough to save my face．翻译：我在想我是否能得到一份礼物，这时我的小儿子跑来找我，他真的很好地救了我一命．本句使用了宾语从句whether I could get a gift，时间状语从句正在做某事这时was wondering ……when my younger son ran to me，定语从句who was really kind enough to save my face．高分句型二：I thanked him from the bottom of my heart， still feeling disappointed．翻译：我从心底感谢他，仍然感到失望．本句使用了现在分词短语做伴随状语still feeling disappointed．【解答】答案：Paragraph 1 ：I had to admit that my disappointment was growing steadily． I was wondering whether I could get a gift when my younger son ran to me， who was really kind enough to save my face．【高分句型一】He asked me to admire his gift which he deeply believed was carefully chosen by Santa Claus． He said happily that he would share some of the gifts ofhis and allow me to choose one from them． I thanked him from the bottom of my heart，still feeling disappointed．【高分句型二】（没有收到礼物我感到很失望）Paragraph 2：Suddenly my wife walked up to me． It seemed that she had guessed how I felt． She asked me to look at the Christmas tree which was decorated with so many boxes． I thought shewas showing off her efforts on the decoration but she took off a small box and passed it to me smiling and saying it was for me． I opened it and saw a letter which read We will never forget you． Merry Christmas! " Under the letter was a watch which was clicking with delight． I was moved to tears．（家人没有忘记我让我感动）（ 162 words）3.【答案】father,tickets,circus,family,children,money,proud,mother,shake,wealthy【考点】读后续写【解析】分析：高分句型一：with his lip shaking and tears streaming down his cheeks， he replied，翻译：他嘴唇颤抖，眼泪顺着脸颊流下来，回答说：本句使用了with复合结构with his lip shaking and tears streaming down his cheeks高分句型二：The $ 20 bill that my dad gave away was what we were going to buy our own tickets with．翻译：我爸爸给的20美元是我们自己买的票．本句使用了表语从句what we weregoing to buy our own tickets with．【解答】答案：Paragraph1． Seeing what was going on， Ty dad seemed to have an idea． He put his hand into his pocket， pulled out a $ 20 bill and dropped it on the ground． Then my father picked up the bill and said， Excuse me， sir， this fell out of your pocket．" The man turned around and saw the money． He knew what was going on． He looked straight into my dad's eyes， and held my dad's hand tightly， and with his lip shaking and tears streaming down his cheeks， he replied，【高分句型一】Thank you， thank you，sir． This really means a lot to me and my family．（爸爸决定帮助他们）Paragraph 2：Then Ty father and I went back home． The $ 20 bill that my dad gave away was what we were going to buy our own tickets with．【高分句型二】Although we didn't get to see the circus that night， we both felt a joy inside us that was far greater than seeing the circus could ever provide． It's more blessed to give than to receive． Nothing can be truer than that．（帮助别人的幸福感）（ 164 words ）．4.【答案】答案： Paragraph 1：Wіth a gіant tеar іn hеr еyе，thе lіttlе gіrl lооkеd uр at hіm． She managed a forced smile， murmuring Thank you， any way and turned toward the doorway． Suddenly Pappy t hought of his estranged daughter． Feeling a lump in his throat，Pappy called out，． How much have you got to spend， Missy？" At this，' the little girl emptied her purse onto the counter﹣﹣two dollars． After a quick struggle in his mind，﹣Pappy said， "Today is Christmas Day a nd this is your lucky day． The bell costs exactlytwo dollars． Holding the special bell close to her chest， the child danced out．【高分句型一】（爸爸忍痛割爱把铃铛卖给了这个小女孩）Paragraph 2： Later that evening when Pappy was closing up the shop， he heard a familiar ringing． He couldn't believe his ears! There in the doorway stood the little girl， ringing th e bel l and smiling sweetly．【高分句型二】 Puzzled， Pappy approached her． Have you changed your mind，" little lady？" No， "． the child grinned，Momma says the presentis for you． Before Pappy had time to say another word， the child's mother steppedin． Holding back her tears， she gently said， Hello， Dad．"（父女团聚）（ 143 words）【考点】读后续写【解析】高分句型一：Holding the special bell close to her chest， the child danced out．翻译：孩子把那只特制的铃铛放在胸前，跳着舞出来了．本句使用了现在分词短语做伴随状语Holding the special bell close to her chest高分句型二：There in the doorway stood the little girl， ringing the bell and smiling sweetly．翻译：小女孩站在门口，按了门铃，甜甜地笑着．本句使用了现在分词短语做伴随状语ringing the bell and smiling sweetly．本句使用了倒装句in the doorway stood the little girl．【解答】答案： Paragraph 1：Wіth a gіant tеar іn hеr еyе，thе lіttlе gіrl lооkеd uр at hіm． She managed a forced smile， murmuring Thank you， any way and turned toward the doorway． Suddenly Pappy t hought of his estranged daughter． Feeling a lump in his throat，Pappy called out，． How much have you got to spend， Missy？" At this，' the little girlemptied her purse onto the counter﹣﹣two dollars． After a quick struggle in his mind，﹣Pappy said， "Today is Christmas Day a nd this is your lucky day． The bell costs exactlytwo dollars． Holding the special bell close to her chest， the child danced out．【高分句型一】（爸爸忍痛割爱把铃铛卖给了这个小女孩）Paragraph 2： Later that evening when Pappy was closing up the shop， he heard a familiar ringing． He couldn't believe his ears! There in the doorway stood the little girl， ringing th e bel l and smiling sweetly．【高分句型二】 Puzzled， Pappy approached her． Have you changed your mind，" little lady？" No， "． the child grinned，Momma says the presentis for you． Before Pappy had time to say another word， the child's mother steppedin． Holding back her tears， she gently said， Hello， Dad．"（父女团聚）（ 143 words）5.【答案】People can remember things better by using the "mind palace" method， which involves memorizing all the details in a familiar place in the mind and connecting things to be remembered with it．【高分句型一】（"心灵宫殿"的方法）A research has proved memory training has great and lasting effects on people's memory and influences the connection of brain cells．（记忆训练有好处）Interestingly， the research indicates people aren't born with different memory ability．（人们天生记忆能力不同）Anyway，the "mind palace" method is worth trying．【高分句型二】（值得尝试"心灵宫殿"）【考点】概要写作【解析】高分句型一：People can remember things better by using the "mind palace" method，which involves memorizing all the details in a familiar place in the mind and connecting things to be remembered with it．译文：人们可以通过使用"心灵宫殿"的方法更好地记住事物，这包括在头脑中熟悉的地方记住所有的细节，并将要记住的事物与之联系起来．分析：which引导定语从句．高分句型二：Anyway， the "mind palace" method is worth trying．译文：总之，"心灵宫殿"的方法值得一试．分析：be worth doing值得做．【解答】People can remember things better by using the "mind palace" method， which involves memorizing all the details in a familiar place in the mind and connecting things to be remembered with it．【高分句型一】（"心灵宫殿"的方法）A research has proved memory training has great and lasting effects on people's memory and influences the connection of brain cells．（记忆训练有好处）Interestingly， the research indicates people aren't born with different memory ability．（人们天生记忆能力不同）Anyway，the "mind palace" method is worth trying．【高分句型二】（值得尝试"心灵宫殿"）6.【答案】Paragraph 1：The next day we remembered the brand﹣new tent we had brought with us． We decided to camp along the river． The views there were surprisingly beautiful﹣the warm sunshine，the fresh air， the clean water． We sat on the grass， enjoying the splendid nature【高分句型一，现在分词enjoying作状语】． However， when Dad was about to put up our tent，he was disappointed to find that it had been left in the hotel． Well， Dad had to go back to fetch it to continue our camping．【要点一，我们在帐篷露营的情景】Paragraph 2：We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way． Every time we got to a new place，Mom would cheer up like a child【高分句型二，every time作连词引导时间状语】． She would get off the car excitedly， laughing and dancingaround． Together we enjoyed the modern sights in the big cities， the historical buildings in the small towns and the amazing scenery in nature． When we came back to the hotel afterthe tiring but excellent visit， Mom would hug us and kiss us on our faces． How sweet she was! Absent﹣minded and forgetful as she was， she never forgot to express her love to us【高分句型三，as尽管，句子用部分倒装，引导让步性状语从句】．【要点二，我们旅途欣赏美丽风景，心情愉快】【考点】读后续写【解析】【高分句型一】 We sat on the grass， enjoying the splendid nature．我们坐在草地上，欣赏大自然的壮丽．现在分词enjoying作状语．【高分句型二】 Every time we got to a new place，Mom would cheer up like a child．每次我们到了一个新地方，妈妈都会像孩子一样高兴起来．every time作连词引导时间状语．【高分句型三】Absent﹣minded and forgetful as she was， she never forgot to express her love to us．尽管她心不在焉，健忘，但她从未忘记向我们表达她的爱．as尽管，句子用部分倒装，引导让步性状语从句．【解答】Paragraph 1：The next day we remembered the brand﹣new tent we had brought with us． We decided to camp along the river． The views there were surprisingly beautiful﹣the warm sunshine，the fresh air， the clean water． We sat on the grass， enjoying the splendid nature【高分句型一，现在分词enjoying作状语】． However， when Dad was about to put up our tent，he was disappointed to find that it had been left in the hotel． Well， Dad had to go back to fetch it to continue our camping．【要点一，我们在帐篷露营的情景】Paragraph 2：We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way． Every time we got to a new place，Mom would cheer up like a child【高分句型二，every time作连词引导时间状语】． She would get off the car excitedly， laughing and dancingaround． Together we enjoyed the modern sights in the big cities， the historical buildings in the small towns and the amazing scenery in nature． When we came back to the hotel afterthe tiring but excellent visit， Mom would hug us and kiss us on our faces． How sweet she was! Absent﹣minded and forgetful as she was， she never forgot to express her love to us【高分句型三，as尽管，句子用部分倒装，引导让步性状语从句】．【要点二，我们旅途欣赏美丽风景，心情愉快】7.【答案】dad,Uncle Paul,farm house,river,feed,sheep,late,track ,get lost,sight【考点】说明文语法填空词汇运用题阅读理解综合【解析】书面表达属于读写任务类类作文，根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．注意以下要求：1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：Startled by the white fluffy rabbit， the horse almost threw me off its back．（高分句型一）句中Startled by the white fluffy rabbit为过去分词短语作状语被白色的兔子吓了一跳，马几乎把我从背上摔了下来．It was then that we enjoyed a symphony of nature﹣﹣﹣the warm breeze ruffling through the trees，the insects buzzing and other animals contributing their unique sounds…（高分句型二）句中使用了It is/was+强调部分+that+其他，这是强调句型就是在那个时候我们享受了大自然的交响乐﹣﹣温暖的微风吹过树林，昆虫嗡嗡作响，其他动物发出独特的声音．【解答】Paragraph1：Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse． Startled by the white fluffy rabbit，the horse almost threw me off its back．（高分句型一）I hurriedly tightened my grip and couldn't help letting out screams． But after we regained our calm， I was amused both bythe thrill and the innocence of the little creature． Seeing it fleeing， cheerily， I turned tomy dad， "Dad， can we follow it？" My dad nodded with a tolerant smile． Soon without consciousness， we were miles away up into the mountain and we lost track of the rabbit and of course， the track Uncle Paul had asked us to keep to．（在追逐兔子的过程中迷路）Paragraph2：We had no idea where we were and it got dark． We had to get off the horses and tried to figure out the way back， but after many attempts， we still failed﹣﹣﹣we got lost． I grew a bit anxious， but with dad around， I felt all right． As darkness thickened， dad believed it was safer to stay on the spot and waited for help． It was then that we enjoyed a symphony of nature﹣﹣﹣the warm breeze ruffling through the trees， the insects buzzing and other animals contributing their unique sounds…（高分句型二）This serenity ended as we heard shouts and torches came into our sight． At this time， I felt extremely grateful，to Paul and Tina， to this vacation with my dad， and to nature．（和父亲感受大自然的美好并且等到了救援）8.【答案】It can help you make a right decision to visit the college that you are going to attend before you apply．【高分句型一】（在申请前参观大学）If you live near to the college， you should find a chance to visit it to reduce much trouble afterwards．（住的近的话，去看看大学）If you have no enough money or time to go， at least you should communicate online with those people who are familiar with the college．【高分句型二】（和熟悉大学的人交流）【考点】概要写作【解析】高分句型一：It can help you make a right decision to visit the college that you are going to attend before you apply．译文：它可以帮助你做出一个正确的决定，在申请前参观你将要就读的大学．分析：that引导定语从句．高分句型二：If you have no enough money or time to go， at least you should communicate online with those people who are familiar with the college．译文：如果你没有足够的钱或时间去，至少你应该在网上与那些熟悉大学的人交流．分析：if引导条件状语从句，who引导定语从句．【解答】It can help you make a right decision to visit the college that you are going to attend before you apply．【高分句型一】（在申请前参观大学）If you live near to the college， you should find a chance to visit it to reduce much trouble afterwards．（住的近的话，去看看大学）If you have no enough money or time to go， at least you should communicate online with those people who are familiar with the college．【高分句型二】（和熟悉大学的人交流）9.【答案】Due to the financial crisis in 2008， job market is not stable． As a result， job seekers should try to attracct their employers．（就业者应该尽可能吸引雇主） First of all， it is vital for young people to master information technology skills．（科技能力）Besides，young employees should have much experience， enabling them to work in a variety of environment．【高分句型一】（经验丰富）Last but not least， job seekers should take a positive attitude towards work， which will make a good impression on their employers．【高分句型二】（积极的态度）【考点】概要写作【解析】高分句型一：Besides， young employees should have much experience， enabling them to work in a variety of environment．译文：此外，年轻员工应该有很多经验，使他们能够在各种环境下工作．分析：使用现在分词作状语．高分句型二：Last but not least， job seekers should take a positive attitude towards work，which will make a good impression on their employers．译文：最后但并非最不重要，求职者应该对工作采取积极的态度，这会给他们的雇主留下好印象．分析：这句话使用主从复合句，which引导非限制性定语从句．【解答】Due to the financial crisis in 2008， job market is not stable． As a result， job seekers should try to attracct their employers．（就业者应该尽可能吸引雇主） First of all， it is vital for young people to master information technology skills．（科技能力）Besides，young employees should have much experience， enabling them to work in a variety of environment．【高分句型一】（经验丰富）Last but not least， job seekers should take a positive attitude towards work， which will make a good impression on their employers．【高分句型二】（积极的态度）10.【答案】。

阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

A In a small village, the parents of a little boy were very depressed due to his bad temper. The boy used to get angry very easily and hurt others with his words. While he forgot what he spoke in anger, his friends and neighbors avoided him. His mother and father tried many ways to make him give up his anger and develop kindness. Unfortunately, all their attempts failed. Finally, the boy’s father came up with an idea.One One day, day, day, his his father father gave gave him a huge huge bag bag of nails, asking him to hammer one one nail nail to to the the fence every time he lost his temper. The little boy found it funny and accepted what his father had said. His anger drove him to hammer 30 nails into the fence on the first day! Over the next few days, days, the the the little little little boy boy boy found found found it it it very very very difficult difficult difficult to to to hammer hammer hammer the the the nails nails nails into into into the the the fence fence fence and and and decided decided decided to to control his temper. Gradually, the number of nails hammered into the fence was reduced and the day arrived when he hammered none! Now, Now, his his his father father father told told told him him him to to to remove remove remove the the the nails nails nails every every every day day day as as as he he he had had had controlled controlled controlled his his his anger. anger. Several days passed and the boy was able to pull out most of the nails from the fence. The father appreciated him and asked him pointing to one of the holes. “What do you see there?”The boy replied, “A hole in the fence!”He told the boy, “the nails were your bad temper and they were hammered into people. You can remove the nails but still see the holes in the fence. The fence never looks the same! It has scars all over! The fence never looks the same! It has scars all over! Your bad temper and anger were like that! Use words for good. Use them to show your heart !”________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ B Over the past few years, there has been a big increase in the number of people sharing information online. In this article, we will learn about some positive factors for people to share information online. We often share information with our friends in the office or at home to educate, entertain or pleasantly surprise them. In this way we can connect with others. This is also true while sharing information online. If you look at the Face book wall posts of your friends, you will realize that most of their updates are usually famous quotes, entertaining videos, inspirational images, funny jokes, etc. 94% of those who responded to a survey by the new York Times said they put a lot of thought into how the content they are sharing will be beneficial to others. A lot of people share information online to portray their true self to the outside world. Some people, especially those who are shy and not comfortable talking about their areas of interest in the presence of others, find it extremely convenient to share that information online with like-minded individuals. 78% of the respondents in the study of The New York Times said they shared information online because it helps them develop better relationships. Today, a lot of people do not have the time to meet each other in person, and the Internet has become a great substitute. A lot of people rants and pubs. now “meet” each other online, rather than in conventional places like restauLastly, when we share our thoughts online, we are actively engaging with the vast community of people who are a part of the World Wide Web. Sharing information will make a difference to the viewpoint of others, or add to their understanding about the world.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ A There was a little bad-tempered boy in a small village. To help him give up his anger, his father asked him to hammer a nail into a fence whenever he became angry and remove one whenever he didn ’t lose his temper. Gradually the boy could control his temper. This story tells us just like holes in the fence, a bad temper and anger can hurt others forever. B People People increasingly increasingly increasingly share share share information information information online online online for for for several several several positive positive positive reasons. reasons. reasons. Most Most Most people people people hope hope what what they they they share share share will will will benefit benefit benefit others. others. others. Some Some Some people people people show show show their their their true true true self self self by by by sharing sharing sharing information information online. People also do this to keep in touch with friends and make new acquaintances. Quite a few people share their thoughts online hoping to influence others ’ viewpoints in a positive way. 。

2022年（有答案）浙江省高三（下）同步英语试卷（读后续写与概要写作）（51-60）一、书面表达1. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事．She arrived in ________ not knowing what to expect．Her ________ knew the place，as he had made a number of business trips there over the years．"You'll be happy there，"he said．"I promise you．And the Thais are very friendly．You'll see．""But the ________，"she said．"And all that noise．The children…"He touched her arm softly．"There's traffic in ________ too，remember．And the children will be fine．Thefirm will provide us with a maid﹣two if you want．You'll have all the help you need withthe children．"He had been right．She liked living in Bangkok，and soon stopped missing Sydney，which they had come from．It was easy to keep in touch with ________，too，as they were often able to break their overseas journeys with a stop in Bangkok．"They stay the perfect length of time for ________，"she wrote in a letter．"Three days to catch up on things and then they move on．Guests are like fish，aren't they？After three days they begin to go off．"Her husband enjoyed his job．He had reached the highest class of an international firm of accountants，and had been put in charge of the Bangkok ________．They were popular in the society of the capital，and，she being photogenic，her picture often appeared in the pages of The Bangkok Tatler．She went to charity auctions（拍卖）and fashion launches at the silk houses．And he liked this．"It's good for business for you to be seen，"he said．"Consider it work．Enjoy yourself．"However，on a Friday afternoon in the monsoon（季风）season，just as a heavy purple cloud was building up over the northern edge of Bangkok and the air was becoming heavyand wet，a woman from the office knocked at the door．She let the woman in and could tell immediately that something had happened．The Thais smiled in a particular way when they were distressed，and this was such a ________．Something very serious had happened．注意：（1）．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；（2）．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；（3）．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；（4）．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语．Paragraph 1："He's had an accident，"she thought immediately．Paragraph 2：As time went by，the wife…2. 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要．A year ago Dave Fuss lost his job driving a truck for a small company in west Michigan．His wife，Gerrie，was still working in the local school cafeteria，but work for Dave was scarce，and the price of everything was rising．The Fusses were at risk of joining the millions of Americans who have lost their homes in recent years．Then Dave and Gerrie received atimely gift﹣﹩7，000，a legacy（遗产）from their neighbors Ish and Arlene Hatch，who died in an accident．"It really made a difference when we were going under financially，"says Dave．But the Fusses weren't the only folks in Palo Alto and the neighboring town of Lowell to receive the unexpected legacy from the Hatches．Dozens of other families were touched by the Hatches' generosity．In some cases，it was a few thousand dollars；in others，it was more than ﹩100，000．It surprised nearly everyone that the Hatches had so much money，more than ﹩3 million﹣they were an elderly couple who lived in an old house on what was left of the family farm．Children of the Great Depression，Ish and Arlene were known for their habit of saving．They thrived on（喜欢）comparison shopping and would routinely go from store to store，checking prices before making a new purchase．Through the years，the Hatches paid for local children to attend summer camp when their parents couldn't afford it．"Ish and Arlene never asked if you needed anything，"says their friend Sand Van Weelden．"They could see things they could do to make you happier，and they would do them．"Even more extraordinary was that the Hatches had their farmland distributed．It was the Hatches' wish that their legacy﹣a legacy of kindness as much as one of dollars and cents﹣should enrich the whole community and last for generations to come．Neighbors helping neighbors﹣that was Ish and Arlene Hatch's story．3. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事．We don't want our kids to be hurt．We don't want our kids to be ________their daddy．But they are．He won't come back．It is not like a movie．We can't hit the rewind button．We can only ________ from here．Learning how to do that is a process．________ is a________．I have been very ________ since my husband's death．I am angry that my husband________ died so young．I am angry that my kids have to grow up without their father's company．I am angry that Edgar was no longer on the earth．He was such a good man，a good friend，a good worker，a good husband and a good father．When I see how his death has hurt my kids，I am angry！But I must learn how to not let my anger rule over me．It takes time．One thing I have discovered is that grief is never﹣ending．It will never go away．It will always be there in some form in our life．It is a hole that can never be filled．That brings me to my next point﹣the ________．It's the empty space that remains where Edgar used to be．Betty，my young daughter，is the one who came up with this picture．No matter what we are doing in life，Edgar will never again physically be there to be a part of us．That reality breaks my heart．When talking about her ________，now that her precious ________ had gone，Betty talked about there being sadness in everything．And then she said that there was a hole in everything without him．In her words，"We can go to Canobie Lake Park，but Daddy isn't there to have fun with us，and we can laugh，but he isn't there to laugh with us．"Those words broke my heart．I hate it that my kids must endure this pain in the rest of their life．Grief is a journey that is full of ups and downs and bumps（肿块）and bruises（瘀青）．It won't get easier；you just learn how to live with it．注意：（1）．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；（2）．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；（3）．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；（4）．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语．Paragraph 1：The truth is that the hole will never go away．Paragraph 2：I will be honest and say that it has been a rough road for my kids．4. 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要．The Diet Zone：A dangerous placeDiet Coke，Diet Pepsi，diet pills，no﹣fat diet，vegetable diet…We are s urrounded by the word"diet"everywhere we look and listen．We have so easily been attracted by the promise and potential of diet products that we have stopped thinking about what diet products are doing to us．We are paying for products that harm us psychologically and physically（身体上）．Diet products significantly weaken us psychologically．On one level，we are not allowing our brain to admit that our weight problems lie not in actually losing the weight，but in controlling the consumption of fatty，high﹣calorie，and unhealthy foods．Diet products allow us to jump over the thinking stage and go straight to the scale（秤）instead．All we have to do is to swallow or recognize the word"diet" in food labels．On another level，diet products have greater psychological effects．Every time we have a zero﹣calorie drink，we are telling ourselves without our awareness that we don't have to work to get results．Diet products make people believe that gains come without pain，and that life can be without resistance and struggles．The danger of diet products lies not only in the psychological effects they have on us，but also in the physical harm that they cause．Diet foods can indirectly harm our bodies because consuming them instead of healthy foods means we are preventing our bodies from having basic nutrients（营养成分）．Diet foods and diet pills contain zero calorie only because the diet industry has created chemicals to produce these products．Diet products may not be nutritional，and the chemicals that go into diet products are potentially dangerous．Now that we are aware of the effects that diet products have on us，it is time to seriously think about buying them．Losing weight lies in the power of minds，not in the power of chemicals．Once we realize this，we will be much better able to resist diet products，and therefore prevent the psychological harm that comes from using them．5. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事．I'm ________，but English is not my first language．Today I am an English teacher．I would like to say that failures are not disastrous．Have faith，keep ________，and never________，and you will see your hard work pay off．I was a slow learner when I was little．Before five，I couldn't even speak in full sentences．Unlike most other children，I seldom interacted with others；I neither cried nor threw tantrums．My extreme quietness made my parents wonder if I was mentally slow，but they were not sure．Actually，I have to confess that my memories of my early childhood are quite unclear．My learning problems were the result of my mother taking some medicine ________ she became pregnant with me．Although I was born without any physical defects（缺陷），the medicine did affect my early intellectual development．When I was in elementary school，I learned very slowly and was as quiet as a doll．While my teacher was teaching，my mind often wandered outside the classroom to the playground．As a fifth grader，I finally startedinteracting with my classmates．That was the first time in my memory that I had some friends．After heading at full speed for my junior high education，my learning situation got stuck in the mud again．In my country，students entering junior high school had to take an________ test．It was a test for schools to evaluate students' learning abilities so that they could arrange them into different levels of classes based on their IQ test scores．I was placed in the "________" as a result of my below﹣average IQ score．Most of my teachers taughtus using easy and slow methods because they considered us incapable of learning much．However，I never wanted to ________ that I might one day succeed．To prove that when God closes a door，He will definitely open up a big window，a miracle occurred．That's when I discovered a strong ________ for English．注意：（1）．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；（2）．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；（3）．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；（4）．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语．Paragraph 1：At the age of 13，I found myself deeply interested in English．Paragraph 2：My story proves everyone has the ability to learn．6. 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要．Most people agree that honesty is a good thing．But does Mother Nature agree？Animalscan't talk，but can they lie in other ways？Can they lie with their bodies or behavior？Animal experts may not call it lying，but they do agree that many animals，from birds to chimpanzees，behave dishonestly to fool other animals．Many kinds of birds are very successful at fooling other animals．For example，a plover，a kind of bird，sometimes pretends to be hurt in order to protect its young．When a predator （猎食动物）gets close to its nest，the plover leads the predator away from the nest．How？It pretends to have a broken wing．The predator follows the "hurt"adult，leaving the baby birds safe in the nest．Another kind of bird，the scrub jay，buries its food so it always has something to eat．Scrub jays are also thieves．They watch where others bury their food and steal it．But clever scrub jays seem to know when a thief is watching them．So they go back later，unbury the food，and bury it again somewhere else．Birds called cuckoos have found a way to have babies without doing much work．How？They don't make nests．Instead，they get into other birds' nests secretly．Then they laytheir eggs and fly away．When the baby birds come out，their adoptive parents feed them．Chimpanzees，or chimps，can also be sneaky．After a fight，the losing chimp will give its hand to the other．When the winning chimp puts out its hand，too，the chimps are friendly again．But an animal expert once saw a losing chimp take the winner's hand and startfighting again．Chimps are sneaky in other ways，too．When chimps find food that they love，such as bananas，it is natural for them to cry out．Then other chimps come running．But some clever chimps learn to cry very softly when they find food．That way，other chimps don't hear them，and they don't need to share their food．As children，many of us learn the saying"You can't fool Mother Nature"．But maybe you can't trust her，either．7. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事．Ryan Jay is 27 and lives in London．He has been ________ from acute lymphoblastic leukaemia for the past four years，and finished his maintenance treatment________ago．Ryan hopes to join in________ for acute lymphoblastic leukaemia sufferers．It was just after Christmas in 2010 when Ryan，then aged 23 and a student at Sheffield University，started to notice symptoms．He was working a winter job in a bookshop back home in London，but he was finding just walking the shop floor exhausting，despite sleeping well，and he had noticed angry rashes（皮疹）appearing in random places________．After a month of experiencing extreme tiredness and rashes，along with an increasingly bad complexion and eventually，heart palpitations（心悸），Ryan went to visit his GP．However，having a runny nose，which doctors later released was ________his damaged immune system，he was told he simply had a cold．With his symptoms worsening，Ryan visited four different walk﹣in（无需预约的）centres in a day，only to be told the same thing each time that he had a cold．Unsatisfied with the response，he resolutely walked back into one walk﹣in centre and showed a different doctor his rashes．This time he was immediately booked in for a ________ test at Royal Hallamshire Hospital，with the GP paying for his cab to get there．It was only then that he was finally d________ with acute lymphoblastic leukaemia．For the five weeks that followed，Ryan lived in a haematology（血液学）ward，regularly being pumped with intense chemotherapy and ________（类固醇治疗）．It was during this time that he was told that he ________ remission，but it was going to be a long，arduous treatment plan．The treatment plan was，in fact，three and a half years，with the first nine months involving intense，weekly doses of chemotherapy．In mid﹣February of 2011，he was discharged from hospital．He remained in Sheffield fora further four weeks，receiving intense chemotherapy ________（药物），before relocating back home with his family and being admitted to Churchill Hospital，Oxford．注意：（1）．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；（2）．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；（3）．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；（4）．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语．Paragraph 1：Over the next three years， as a result of his treatment， Ryan lost most of his hair， missed his graduation and missed out on travelling．Paragraph 2：Ryan's biggest challenge， however， has been coping mentally．8. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事．When ________ was diagnosed with the Attention Obstacle Disorder，my first reaction was relief﹣I finally knew the reason for ________．However，I was also overwhelmed with sadness，fear and anger．I felt sorry for ________ and for myself．Like many others in similar circumstances，my question to God was"Why me？"Through the grace of God，I am now able to ________ my gratitude．I believe God chose me to raise my son because He knew that I would give him the best I have ________．Hewill teach me to love and understand him for who he is．I am ________ that I have my son，and grateful that God chose me to be his mother．There is power and healing in gratitude．How can gratitude help us in our everyday lives as mothers？________ around you，and think about the difference you can make in your family's life just by being thankful for all the great things they do．When life is good，gratitude is easy．That's to say，when you express gratitude，you show your love and ________．Everyone needs to feel these things every day．Sometimes as mothers we feel that no one appreciates us﹣it is true that mothers are usually last on the list to be thanked．One way you can teach gratitude is by example．________ when it seems your children or husband are doing everything wrong，find a reason to thank them．Take the time and energy to look for the good．Think about the things that your family does that deserve a"Thank you"．You might say to your husband，"Thank you for working so hard for our family，"or，to your child，"I really ________your sense of humor﹣it feels good to laugh．"Expressing your gratitude helps family members to understand how it feels to be appreciated．And if they still don't catch on，let them know when you feel unappreciated．You can also tell them how great it makes you feel when they do express gratitude．注意：（1）．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；（2）．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；（3）．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；（4）．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语．Paragraph 1：Gratitude is a wonderful motivator when you need cooperation．Paragraph 2：Sometimes we get so busy and caught up in daily life that we forget to be grateful．9. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事．I was born in Mexico．I don't remember much about my first few years growing up there﹣________never had money，and there weren't any jobs．It was ________ for my brother and me．Mother's only choice was to take us to a homeless ________﹣I was ________ being homeless．That afternoon when we arrived at the Bible Tabernacle shelter，I was so scared．The shelter was dark and crowded with families，but we had nowhere else to go．Everyone who wanted to live in the shelter had to keep their ________ outside in large storage lockers．All we brought from Mexico were two bags of clothes and a doll for me．But while in the shelter，we had to have head lice（虱子）removed and were forced to throw out all our clothes and replace them with used stuff．We had to throw away these beautiful hand﹣made dresses from Mexico．I always felt like a Cinderella when I wore them．Each day at 6 a．m．，everyone was required to go to Bible reading．Then we went to our lockers and gathered what we needed for the day﹣clothes，books．Next，we'd waiti________ to take a shower，which was timed．Once，my mom accidentally went over the time limit and was humiliated（使丢脸）when the staff came in to tell her she had to get out．It made me ________．And I really hated the ladies' room，but I couldn't say anything to ________ her．It had one mirror，a sink and two doorless fences，so in fact there was no privacy！At 8 a．m，we ate breakfast．I felt like a beggar，standing in that long line．When it got too noisy，the director flashed the lights in the dining room and said，"Stop serving！"Then everyone quieted down．It made me feel so low，like we were nothing．________，I came straight home because dinner was at 4 p．m．If you missed it，you wouldn't eat．So I couldn't ________ with friends or do after﹣school activities．注意：（1）．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；（2）．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；（3）．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；（4）．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语．Paragraph 1：After dinner，we had to attend the church service．Paragraph 2：My friends had no idea that I lived in a shelter．10. 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要．An apprenticeship（学徒制）is a form of on﹣the﹣job training that combines workplace experience and classroom learning．It can last anywhere from one to six years，but four years is typical for most．An apprentice spends the majority of the time in a workplace environment learning the practical skills of a career from a journeyman（熟练工）﹣someone who has done the job for many years．The rest of the apprentice's time is spent in a classroom environment learning the theoretical skills the career requires．Being an apprentice is a full﹣time undertaking．One of the advantages of apprenticeship is that it does not cost apprentices anything．The companies that hire them pay for their schooling．What's more，it offers apprentices an"earn while you learn"opportunity．They usually start out at half the pay of a journeyman，and the pay increases gradually as they move further along in the job and studies．Near the end of the apprenticeship，their wages are usually 90 percent of what a journeyman would receive．Apprenticeship also pays off for employers．It can offer employers a pool of well﹣trained workers to draw from．Despite the advantages，apprentices are usually required to work during the day and attend classes at night，which leaves little time for anything else．Sometimes，they might be laid off（下岗）if business for the employers is slow．Once they have completed the apprenticeship and become journeymen，they receive a nationally recognized and portable certification and their pay also increases again．Some journeymen continue employment with the companies where they are apprenticed；others go onto different companies or become self﹣employed contractors．参考答案与试题解析2022年（有答案）浙江省高三（下）同步英语试卷（读后续写与概要写作）（51-60）一、书面表达1.【答案】Bangkok,husband,traffic,Sydney,Australianfriends,guests,office,smile【考点】读后续写【解析】高分句型一：She usually missed her husband whenever the woman visited her．译文：每当这个女人来看望她，她总想念她的丈夫．分析：whenever引导的让步状语从句．高分句型二：Therefore she went to charity auctions as usual， did what she liked and enjoyed herself．译文：所以她像往常一样去了慈善拍卖会，做她喜欢做的事情，享受自己的生活．分析：what引导的宾语从句．【解答】Paragraph 1："He's had an accident，"she thought immediately．The woman told her why her husbandhad a traffic accident． On the way to the office， when he and his driver turned a corner onto a narrow street， suddenly there was a small elephant and its keeper coming towards them． The car hit the elephant． As a result， the car turned over， and they were underthe car． The passers﹣by called the police at once． Soon the ambulance came， taking them to the hospital as fast as possible． However， her husband was hurt badly， so hedidn't come backe to life．（女人回忆和丈夫的车祸过程）Paragraph 2：As time went by，the wife still stayed at Bangkok， but her children returned to Sydney． She usually missed her husband whenever the woman visited her．【高分句型一】They talked about the past， children and husband． Though she was sad sometimes， the Thai woman's smile never happened． Therefore she went to charity auctions as usual， did what she liked and enjoyed herself．【高分句型二】 Little by little， she loved Bangkok than before． At last， she picked up from the sorrow．（随着时间的推移，女人慢慢从悲痛中恢复过来）2.【答案】The Fusses were in financial difficulty．（Fusses遇到经济困难） Fortunately，unexpected help came to the couple and their problem was finally solved．【高分句型一】（人们来帮忙）It turned out that the Hatches， the Fusses' thrifty but generous neighbors，wanted to give away their possessions．（邻居捐赠）Born into the Great Depression， the Hatches developed the habit of saving， and accumulated much money．【高分句型二】（累积财富）They'd like the neighbors to follow their example and spread their kindness．（传播善良）【考点】概要写作【解析】高分句型一：Fortunately，unexpected help came to the couple and their problem wasfinally solved．译文：幸运的是，这对夫妇得到了意外的帮助，他们的问题终于解决了．分析：and连接并列句．高分句型二：Born into the Great Depression， the Hatches developed the habit of saving，and accumulated much money．译文：哈奇出生于大萧条时期，养成了储蓄的习惯，积累了很多钱．分析：过去分词作状语．【解答】The Fusses were in financial difficulty．（Fusses遇到经济困难） Fortunately，unexpected help came to the couple and their problem was finally solved．【高分句型一】（人们来帮忙）It turned out that the Hatches， the Fusses' thrifty but generous neighbors，wanted to give away their possessions．（邻居捐赠）Born into the Great Depression， the Hatches developed the habit of saving， and accumulated much money．【高分句型二】（累积财富）They'd like the neighbors to follow their example and spread their kindness．（传播善良）3.【答案】without ,go forward,Grief,journey,angry,Edgar,hole,new life,daddy【考点】读后续写【解析】高分句型一：I lost him but he will be with me forever， for we used to have so many good memories．译文：我失去了他，但是他永远和我在一起，因为我们曾经有过如此多美好的回忆．分析：but连接两个表转折的句子，for引导原因状语从句．高分句型二：It's also so sad to know he isn't there when I take care of my children．译文：当我照顾孩子们的时候，意识到他再也没在身边，这也是非常难过的．分析：it充当形式主语，句子的真正主语是动词不定式，know后面接宾语从句，when引导时间状语从句．【解答】Paragraph 1：The truth is that the hole will never go away．I will always love and miss Edgar． But griefis a journey． He is with God now． His death is a painful hole to my new life． I lost him but he will be with me forever， for we used to have so many good memories．【高分句型一】 I miss him﹣ my children's daddy． I wish to meet him again because he is the best father．（作者对Edgar的思念之情）Paragraph 2：I will be honest and say that it has been a rough road for my kids．It's never been the same since then， and they think of him all the time． It's also so sad to know he isn't there when I take care of my children．【高分句型二】It's so difficult to sleep at times and all they are thinking of is him． He is their world and he means everything to them．Without him here，they do not feel free． They miss him every day． Nothing here will be the same．（失去Edgar对孩子们而言是艰难的）4.【答案】Diet products are misleading people psychologically and physically．（节食产品误导人们）One psychological effect of diet products is that people tend to watch their weight rather than their diet．【高分句型一】（人们看重体重）Besides， diet products make people believe losing weight is effortless． On the other hand， diet products lack basic nutrients，harming people physically in an indirect way．【高分句型二】（节食产品的害处）Therefore， we should take diet products seriously and work to lose weight．（锻炼减肥）【考点】概要写作【解析】高分句型一：One psychological effect of diet products is that people tend to watch their weight rather than their diet译文：饮食产品的一个心理效应是人们倾向于关注自己的体重而不是饮食．分析：that引导表语从句．高分句型二：On the other hand， diet products lack basic nutrients， harming people physically in an indirect way．译文：另一方面，饮食产品缺乏基本的营养，间接地伤害了人们的身体．分析：现在分词作状语．【解答】Diet products are misleading people psychologically and physically．（节食产品误导人们）One psychological effect of diet products is that people tend to watch their weight rather than their diet．【高分句型一】（人们看重体重）Besides， diet products make people believe losing weight is effortless． On the other hand， diet products lack basic nutrients，harming people physically in an indirect way．【高分句型二】（节食产品的害处）Therefore， we should take diet products seriously and work to lose weight．（锻炼减肥）5.【答案】anEnglishself﹣learner,moving on,give up hope,when,IQ,bottom class,lose faith,passion【考点】读后续写【解析】高分句型一：I realized that no matter how hard or how unfair my situation was， I could choose to keep moving on rather than give up．译文：我意识到无论我的情况多么艰难和不公平，我能选择继续前进而不是放弃．分析：that引导的宾语从句，从句中含有no matter how引导的让步状语从句．高分句型二：No matter what you are interested in， you need to set a goal， and keep yourself working for that goal．译文：无论你对什么感兴趣，你需要设立一个目标，然后让你自己一直努力朝着目标前进．分析：no matter what引导的让步状语从句．【解答】Paragraph 1：At the age of 13，I found myself deeply interested in English．Aside from reading English textbooks， I developed a habit of reading English magazines， listening to English programs， and keeping an English diary． Moreover， I summarized almost every story inbooks or magazines to improve my writing skills． In order to strengthen my speaking ability，I often told myself those stories in English． I realized that no matter how hard or how unfair my situation was， I could choose to keep moving on rather than give up．【高分句型一】Where there is a will， there is a way． With over 10 years of self﹣study， I successfully pass the exams and became an English teacher．（作者从小对英语的激情，导致她后来成功成为英语老师）Paragraph 2：My story proves everyone has the ability to learn．Success has nothing to do with IQ． No matter what you are interested in， you need to set a goal， and keep yourself working for that goal．【高分句型二】Never lose faith or let go of your hope． Hope brings about passion． Passion makes you move forward， and once you learn with passion， your dreams will come true．（作者通过自己的例子告诉所有人大家都有学习的能力）6.【答案】Dishonesty often helps animals survive．（不诚实帮助动物生存）A plover protects its young from a predator by pretending to be injured ， clever scrub jays cheat others by changing their food's hiding places， and the cuckoo finds its baby adoptive parents secretly．【高分句型一】（举例说明）Some losing chimps pretend to be friendly for a further fight and some lower their cry to keep others away from the food they find．【高分句型二】（黑猩猩的例子）【考点】概要写作【解析】高分句型一：A plover protects its young from a predator by pretending to be injured ，clever scrub jays cheat others by changing their food's hiding places， and the cuckoo findsits baby adoptive parents secretly．译文：一只扑克鸟假装受伤来保护它的幼崽不受捕食者的伤害，聪明的松鸦通过改变食物的藏身之处来欺骗别人，而布谷鸟则秘密地发现它的养儿父母．分析：protect sb from doing sth保护某人免受．高分句型二：Some losing chimps pretend to be friendly for a further fight and some lower their cry to keep others away from the food they find．译文：一些输了的黑猩猩假装友好地继续战斗，一些则降低了他们的哭声，让其他黑猩猩远离他们找到的食物．分析： losing 是现在分词作定语，不定式作目的状语．【解答】Dishonesty often helps animals survive．（不诚实帮助动物生存）A plover protects its young from a predator by pretending to be injured ， clever scrub jays cheat others by changing their food's hiding places， and the cuckoo finds its baby adoptive parents secretly．【高分句型一】（举例说明）Some losing chimps pretend to be friendly for a further fight and some lower their cry to keep others away from the food they find．【高分句型二】（黑猩猩的例子）7.【答案】in remission,one year , any activity,across his body,as a result of ,blood,iagnosed,steroid treatment,had a good chance of,medication【考点】。

2024年浙江首考作文第四部分写作（共两节，满分40分）第一节（满分15分）请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动，内容包括：1.介绍这项运动；2. 说明推荐理由。

注意：1. 写作词数应为80 个左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。

Stand Up and Exercise, Everybody!Everybody! Are you tired of sitting in class all day? How about incorporating some physical activity into your daily routine? One great option is the “Stand Up and Stretch” exercise. This simple routine involves standing up from your desk, stretching your arms, legs and back, and taking a few deep breaths. It’s a quick and easy way to get your blood flowing and reenergize your body and mind. This exercise is remended for several reasons.First, it helps to bat the negative effects of prolonged sitting, such as back pain and stiffness. Second, it can improve your focus and concentration, making it easier to stay engaged in class. Lastly, it promotes a healthy and active lifestyle, which is essential for overall wellbeing.So, next time you feel a bit sluggish during class, remember to stand up and stretch! It’s a small change that can make a big difference in your day.本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿，向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运动。

真题读后续写2020年1月浙江卷:小狗的陪伴一、试题呈现阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

“I’m going to miss you so much, Poppy,” said the tall, thin teenager. He bent down to hug his old friend goodbye. He stood up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying not to let his emotions (情绪) get the better of him.His parents were not quite able to keep theirs under control. They had driven their son several hours out of town to the university where he would soon be living and studying. It was time to say goodbye for now at least. The family hugged and smiled through misty eyes and then laughed.The boy lifted the last bag onto his shoulder, and flashed a bright smile. “I guess this is it,” he said. “I’ll see you back home in a month, okay?” His parents nodded, and they watched as he walked out of sight into the crowds of hundreds of students and parents. The boy’s mother turned to the dog, “Okay, Poppy, time to go back home.”The house seemed quiet as a tomb without the boy living there. All that week, Poppy didn’t seem interested in her dinner, her favorite toy, or even in her daily walk. Her owners were sad too, but they knew their son would be back to visit. Poppy didn’t.They offered the dog some of her favorite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit on the sofa, but the old girl just wasn’t her usual cheerful self. Her owners started to get worried. “What should we do to cheer Poppy up?” asked Dad. “We’ve tried everything.”“I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy,” smiled Mom. “Without anybody left in the house but us, this place could use a bit of fun. Let’s get a little dog for Poppy.”It didn’t take long before they walked through the front door carrying a big box. Poppy welcomed them home as usual, but when she saw the box, she stopped. She put her nose on it. Her tail began wagging (摆动) ever so slowly, then faster as she caught the smell.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。

阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。

（注：根据全国卷读后续写的特点，删除了原题中的划线词及续写要求）（2021年1月浙江卷）Pumpkin (南瓜) carving at Halloween is a family tradition. We visit a local farm every October. In the pumpkin field, I compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin. My dad has a rule that we have to carry our pumpkins back home, and as the eldest child I have an advantage -I carried an 85-pounder back last year.This year, it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year-old brother, Jason, was the winner. Unfortunately, we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides, but I was determined to prove my point. All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table, with my mom filming the annual event. I'm unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter, but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time.With the pumpkin resting on the table, hole uppermost, I bent over and pressed my head against the opening. At first I got jammed just above my eyes and then, as I went on with my task, unwilling to quit, my nose briefly prevented entry. Finally I managed to put my whole head into it, like a cork (软木塞) forced into a bottle. I was able to straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting on my shoulders.My excitement was short-lived. The pumpkin was heavy. "I'm going to set it down, now," I said, and with Jason helping to support its weight, I bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest. It was only when I tried to remove my head that I realized getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in. When I pulled hard, my nose got in the way. I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use. "I can't get itout!" I shouted, my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed space.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；Paragraph 1:I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer.__________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2:The video was posted online the Monday before Halloween.__________________________________________________________________________________范文1I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. Sweating and nearly tearing, I could imagine how silly and strange I was at that moment based on the continuing laughter from my parents and Jason. （非谓语动词及宾语从句）With every angle tried in vain for myannoyance.（with复合结构）At last, Dad determined to break the pumpkin with the help of the sharp knife. "It's done!" the voice from my dad seemed to be the most beautiful melody, and a breath of fresh air eventually entered. With my head getting out of the pumpkin and my body straightening, what I had seen was a close-up-camera. My dearwhen her daughter was in suffering!That video was posted the day before Halloween. To our surprise, the video managed to catch much attention from people online, racking up（赢得、获得）hundreds of thousands of views. Neighbors and friends recognized the pulling head person was me and regarded me as a celebrity. It was when some reporters and TV stations called for interview that I truly realized how hot and popular this video became.（强调句）During Halloween, which was a festival of trick and treat, I tricked myself instead. Though I was dissatisfied with my ugly gesture and stupid image, I was satisfied with the happiness and fun that I brought to others. Undoubtedly, it became the most unforgettable Halloween even if I still had no idea of whose pumpkin was heavier yet.范文2I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. The hard pumpkin weighed stubbornly upon my shoulder, not wanting to budge at all.（非谓语动词）Through the thick wall of the pumpkin's meaty shell, I could hear my dad and Jason struggling to hold back their laughter while supporting me to pull my oversized orange astronaut helmet off.（比喻）I attempted the artful removal of pumpkin head calling out all of my hidden gymnastic abilities in ways that I knew I never could have moved. To put it simply, my body was like an octopus （章鱼）crawling out of a borrowed conch shell（海螺壳）, and my mom captured all the tactful（机智的、圆滑的）escape on camera.That video was posted online the Monday before Halloween. Never had I ever felt so embarrassed but never had I ever been so famous! （倒装句）Instantly, without a few hours, it became a hit that the video started racking up hundreds of thousands of views. My emotions were soconflicted between whether I should be happy or sad. As it turned out, my dad managed to hold on to the pumpkin and keep it steady so that I could perform my dance routine. Together, the choreography（编舞）appeared quite hilarious（滑稽的）. Until today, I am still unsure what to make of that unforgettable Halloween and super thankful for my dad's rescue.范文3I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. Panicky though I was, my family found my foolish display more comical than dangerous.（倒装句）To my disappointment, instead of trying to help, Jason reached for his phone. While mom and dad was working hard to help calm me down in between fits of laughter, Jason recorded the whole ordeal（磨难、严峻考验）. He was determined to keep a video record of the events in its full entirety, surely to tease me with it for a long time to come. Pull as I might, my head couldn't budge（稍微移动）.（倒装句）Finally, after some olive oil to help ease the friction and a final pull with all my might, I stumbled back to the ground--my head free and the pumpkin firmly grasped by mom and dad.That video was posted online the Monday before Halloween. If I didn't feel humiliated enough at home, I got to live with my foolishness in school as well. It was not long before I was given the nickname "Pumpkin Head", and it stuck. The nickname could not come at a better time; my friends begged me to seriously consider putting my head back in the pumpkin for our annual trick-or-treating adventures the next night. At this point, I could not do anything but smile and chuckle（轻声笑）along with the rest of my friends. Acts of foolishness can happen to anybody. After all, I would have done the same to Jason or my friends if they werethe ones stuck in the pumpkin.（虚拟语气）With the arrival of Halloween night, I went around my community with my friends,trick-or-treating with my head in another pumpkin that mom and dad had found for me. This time, I made sure to cut a big enough hole.。

浙江2024高考英语读后续写首考满分范文全文共3篇示例，供读者参考篇1Title: A Test of Success: The Perfect Score in the Zhejiang 2024 High School English Reading Comprehension SectionIntroduction:In the year 2024, thousands of high school students across Zhejiang province embarked on a journey towards their academic dreams – the high school entrance examination. Among the various subjects tested, the English reading comprehension section proved to be a significant challenge for many. However, for one exceptional student, this test became a platform to showcase their impeccable comprehension skills and achieve the ultimate goal – a perfect score.Main Body:The reading comprehension section of the Zhenjiang 2024 high school entrance examination consisted of five passages, each with a set of questions testing the students' understanding of the text. The passages covered a wide range of topics, from science and technology to literature and history. For the averagestudent, this section required careful reading, critical thinking, and effective time management. However, for the student who scored a perfect 100%, these challenges were mere stepping stones towards success.The student's journey towards excellence began long before the examination day. With a passion for reading and a thirst for knowledge, they devoured books, newspapers, and online articles on a daily basis. Their dedication to improving their English language skills was unparalleled, and it reflected in their performance on the reading comprehension section.As the examination day arrived, the student remained calm and composed, knowing that they had prepared diligently for this moment. They tackled each passage with precision, carefully analyzing the text, identifying key information, and answering the questions with confidence. Their ability to understand complex ideas, infer meaning from context, and make logical connections between ideas set them apart from their peers.In the end, when the results were announced, the student's hard work and determination paid off. They had achieved a perfect score in the English reading comprehension section, a feat that seemed unimaginable to many. The student'sachievement was not only a testament to their academic abilities but also a source of inspiration for their peers and teachers.Conclusion:The story of the student who achieved a perfect score in the Zhejiang 2024 high school English reading comprehension section serves as a reminder of the power of dedication, perseverance, and passion. By setting high standards for themselves and committing to their goals, this student was able to overcome challenges and achieve success. Their achievement is a testament to the limitless potential that lies within each of us, waiting to be unleashed through hard work and determination. As we look towards the future, let us remember the lessons learned from this remarkable student and strive to reach our own goals with the same level of determination and commitment.篇2Title: A Bright Future: The Story of the 2024 Zhejiang College Entrance ExaminationAs the sun set on the bustling city of Hangzhou, the students of Zhejiang province sat in eager anticipation, their hearts pounding with excitement and nerves. It was the year 2024, and the much-anticipated college entrance examination was aboutto begin. For many, this was the culmination of years of hard work and dedication, and the gateway to a brighter future.The first rays of dawn broke through the horizon, signaling the start of the examination. The testing rooms were filled with the sound of pencils scratching against paper, as students poured their knowledge and skills onto the answer sheets. The questions were challenging, but the students were well-prepared, having spent countless hours studying and practicing for this moment.As the day wore on, the students emerged from the examination halls, their faces a mix of relief and exhaustion. Some lamented the questions they had struggled with, while others beamed with confidence, knowing they had given it their all. But one thing was certain – they had all left their mark on the test, showcasing their abilities and potential.Weeks went by, and the results were finally announced. The students gathered in the school auditorium, hearts pounding once again as they awaited their fate. The atmosphere was tense, but as the names were called and the scores revealed, a sense of pride and accomplishment filled the room. Many had achieved outstanding results, with some even scoring a perfect 100%.They had proven themselves on the biggest stage, and the future looked brighter than ever.As the students celebrated their achievements, they knew that this was just the beginning. The college entrance examination was a stepping stone towards their dreams and aspirations, and they were determined to seize every opportunity that came their way. With their scores in hand, they began to apply to their dream universities, armed with the confidence and determination that had carried them through the examination.The year 2024 had been a monumental one for the students of Zhejiang province. They had faced the challenges of the college entrance examination head-on, and emerged victorious. As they looked towards the future, they knew that the road ahead would be paved with obstacles and hardships, but they were ready to face them with courage and resilience. The story of the 2024 Zhejiang College Entrance Examination would go down in history as a testament to the power of hard work, perseverance, and the unwavering spirit of youth. And as the sun set once again on the city of Hangzhou, the students of Zhejiang province knew that their futures were bright, and that they were ready to take on whatever challenges came their way.In conclusion, the 2024 Zhejiang College Entrance Examination was a turning point for the students of Zhejiang province, a momentous occasion that marked the beginning of a new chapter in their lives. As they looked towards the future, they knew that the opportunities before them were endless, and that with determination and perseverance, they could achieve anything they set their minds to. The story of the 2024 Zhejiang College Entrance Examination was a shining example of the power of education and the resilience of youth, and it would be remembered for years to come as a testament to the potential of the next generation.篇3Title: A Bright Future: Reflecting on the Zhejiang 2024 High School English Reading TestThe Zhejiang 2024 High School English Reading Test was a milestone in my academic journey. The diverse range of texts challenged my understanding of society, culture, and literature. As I sat down to write the essay portion, my mind raced with ideas and insights that the test had sparked.The first passage, a contemporary poem, spoke of the struggles of modern life. It resonated with me, as I consideredthe pressures of school, society, and family. The questions that followed pushed me to analyze the author's use of language and structure, deepening my appreciation for poetry as a form of expression.Next came a scientific article on climate change. The urgency of the topic struck a chord with me, as I considered the impact of our actions on the environment. The questions prompted me to think critically about the causes and effects of global warming, and the potential solutions that we can collectively pursue.The third passage, an excerpt from a classic novel, transported me to a different time and place. I immersed myself in the author's vivid descriptions and complex characters, contemplating the universal themes of love, loss, and redemption. The questions challenged me to interpret the text through a historical and literary lens, expanding my understanding of the novel's cultural significance.Finally, the essay prompt asked me to reflect on the connections between the three passages and my own experiences. I drew upon my personal insights and observations to craft a cohesive argument that synthesized the themes of individuality, responsibility, and resilience. As I polished my finaldraft, I felt a sense of accomplishment and pride in my ability to articulate my thoughts in a clear and persuasive manner.In conclusion, the Zhejiang 2024 High School English Reading Test was a rigorous yet rewarding experience that tested my analytical skills and critical thinking abilities. It challenged me to engage with diverse texts and perspectives, inspiring me to approach literature and life with a newfound curiosity and insight. As I look towards the future, I am confident that the lessons I have learned from this test will guide me towards success in my academic and personal endeavors.。

读后续写：情感描写速记法（上）（解析版）目录Part 1：友情类故事构造“三步法” (1)第一步：友情出现危机或困难（故事冲突） (1)第二步：友情弥补（解释、认错、弥补） (3)第三步：友情升华（懂得珍惜） (5)Part 2如何速记情感描写 (5)秘诀（一）：情感是人“手” (6)秘诀（二) ：情感是对手 (6)秘诀（三）：情感是压迫者 (7)秘诀（四）：情感是动物 (7)Part 3素材积累：翻译练习 (8)Part 4：高考真题再现 (10)1. 2021.6月新高考全国1卷：母亲节的惊喜 (10)Part 5模拟题 (12)1．（2022.山东淄博.一模） (12)2．（2022.福建福州.模拟预测） (14)Part 1：友情类故事构造“三步法”第一步：友情出现危机或困难（故事冲突）1、内疚1. 被愧疚感压得喘不过气来的Asad迅速捡起钱包，大步走向Fahad，“我在那边捡到的，我想这是你的。

”Overwhelmed by guilt（充满内疚）,Asad quickly picked up the wallet andstrode to Fahad, “I found it over there, and I think it is yours. ”2.他低声嘟囔着，躲闪着Asad那双闪闪发光的眼睛，不知怎的，甚至不敢看他们。

Murmuring in a low voice（小声地低语）, he dodged Asad’s shining eyes, somehow even not daring to look into them.3.她现在什么也做不了，只能感到后悔在心里燃烧。

She now could do nothing but feel the regret burning in her heart（感觉内疚在她心里燃烧）.4.Ariana点点头，开始感到内疚。

Ariana nodded, beginning to feel guilty（开始感到内疚）.2、困难与帮助1. 不知道该怎么办，他走出教室，坐在食堂前的长凳上。