托福独立写作模板

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www.ylongedu.com 写作 独立写作模板 一、 结构篇 1、开头 Sample one(适用于有一些背景or有一个中心词而且编得出来那个quotation的所有情况(二选一,agree or disagree,除了个别); On contemporary society(一般的背景)/ With the advent of the technologically advanced society (the information explosive era(与科技有关的背景),XX(中心词) serves as a catalyst for our future success/XX is synonymous with knowledge and the road to success/XX plays an essential/increasingly important role in…/XX is enjoying an increasingly high popularity among people./很简单的一句背景 , However, people(universities, government, citizen, society, government,) are/is invariably faced with such a question/ can’t help wondering:改写题目1.Confucian (Yu Qiuyu, Mark Twain, William

Shakespeare), (one of) the greatest and most influentialChinese philosophers (scholars, educators, writers, thinkers, statesmen), has insightfully commented, “___编____”I cling to an unshakable belief that his comment gives the answer to this question: 改写题目2. Among countless factors which contribute to my position are following conspicuous ones(最后一定排比结尾,且如果字数够了这一句就不要). www.ylongedu.com 要做的:想一句简单的背景+编一句名言+改写两次题目 Sample two:(如果sample one的名言编不出来或者不适合编如leisure time,就用下面的) On contemporary society(一般的背景)/ With the advent of the technologically advanced society (the information explosive era(与科技有关的背景))/ On account of …,XX(中心词) serves as a catalyst for our future success/XX is synonymous with knowledge and the road to success/XX plays an essential/increasingly important role in… /XX is enjoying an increasingly high popularity among people./ 很简单的一句背景( 如so…that…/not only…but also).However,when it comes to the choice between AA and BB/When asked about whether改写题目1, people get into a dilemma. According to my personality and experiences/As far as I am concerned/From my perspective, I cling to an unshakable belief that改写题目2.以下最后决定怎样写:Among countless factors which contribute to my position are following conspicuous ones(最后一定排比结尾)/AA not only…but also(2)/There are various merits AA brings about, first of all, to…; secondly, to…;and lastly…(3). 要做的:想一句简单的背景+改写两次题目+总起(最后写)

2、分点一:分层论证 Basic to any understanding of the benefits we can get from www.ylongedu.com _______ is that__________/ First and foremost, On one hand_________, On the other hand_________ Besides/ What’s more/ In addition. 这一段主要说理,在分论点里可以加一些小的例子细节,重点是要用一些精华句子!

3、分点二:举例论证 Further lending credence to my position is that____________ (简单阐述/例子字不够就多讲点废话)I can think of no better illustration than the example of(典型例子)/ A case in point is that(不是很典型)________,…..(例子见后面) 一句话总结例子:As a result,强调句/倒装句/表利弊的句型/反面论证如果没有会怎样

4、让步段: Agree or disagree: Admittedly,_____,to some extent, may directly or indirectly ____/has its undeniable detriments. For instance,

_______ However, the valuable merits of_______ considerably overshadow the drawbacks/ on no account________./ 二选一:Admittedly,BB also has certain merits which deserve some words here. For example, ____(字数不够就多讲点) www.ylongedu.com However,BB 的缺点或AA也可以做到. Compared with AA, (which 可以总结所有优点或针对BB的一方面, )it pales. 5、结尾段: Therefore, due to the above mentioned reasons, which

sometimes correlate with each other to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive than any single one of them(字不够了用), I reinforce my stand point that 改写题目3 Only via(by/through /with/when/after) ___can we__________; only via(by/through /with/when/after) ___can we________; and only via(by/through /with/when/after)___can we_______ Or It is A that...;it is A that...;and it is A that...(不好写或显得累赘就不要了)

二、 语言篇 1、 基本句型  因果 On account of/owing to/due to+ N For the reason that/as/since+句子 It is due to____that eg:It is due to his persistence and perseverance that he eventually reached his acme.(强调句) derive/arise/stem from来源于 www.ylongedu.com eg:His success derives from his persistence and perseverance. ascribe A to B 归结于 eg: His success can be ascribed/attributed to his persistence and perseverance  条件 A serves as a catalyst for B(our further success) If/on condition that/provided that/as long as________  让步 Despite the fact that/regardless of 2、 经典句型  倒装 1) Only via(by/through /with/when/after) __do/did/can we__ ef: Only after going to the beach of Hawaii will I know about American typical type of spending leisure time. 2) Hardly/Seldom/Scarcely can__ ef: Hardly can we imagine a world/our life without/devoid of 3) So +adj+主谓倒装+that__ 4) Not only 主谓倒装 but also... eg: Not only should education prepare children to compete