高中英语《Book7 Unit4 Writing A letter of apology》优质课教案、教学设计
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规范！规范！规范！向细节要品质！
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【2018 年考纲解读】
☆ 总体要求：准确使用语法和词汇；使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思。
☆ 高分特点 1. 切中主题：认真审题，准确把握写作任务的主旨，确保内容围绕主题展开。
2. 内容完整：覆盖所规定的各个内容要点，完整地实现交际目的。
3. 表达准确：语言运用要贴切、规范、得体，有能力支撑交际目标顺利达成。
4. 行文连贯：各要点间关系紧密，脉略清晰，相辅相成。
5. 亮点若干：扩展的思想性，语言的多样性和灵活性。 A letter of apology 教学设计
设计教师： 单位：
【训练目标】 A letter of Apology
【真题再现】
(2016 课标全国III)
假定你是李华，与留学生朋友 Bob 约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，
内容包括：
1. 表示歉意；
2. 说明原因；
3. 另约时间。注意：
1.词数 100 左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【习作修改】
How are you going recently, Bob? I am very sorry to say that I couldn’t go to the bookstore with
you on this Saturday. I want to go out with my parents for a picnic, that can relax me and broaden
my horizons. I hope this sudden change will not cause too much trouble to you.
Can we go to the bookstore on Sunday? We will meet at the school gate at 8 a.m. in the morning
in order to have more time to choose books. If you don’t like it, please let me know what time suit
you. I am looking forward to hear from you.
【难点突破】
一、写得正确 (单句改错)
1. I am writing to tell you my apologize
2. I feel terribly sorry and I have to take part in an activity.
3. The reason is why I will attend an important party.
4. If you are convenient, I will wait for you at 8 a.m. at the school gate.
5. I am sorry to say that I can’t accompany you to go to the bookstore.
6. I hope we can book other time to meet. 规范！规范！规范！向细节要品质！
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二、写得地道（感悟改写）
1. I am writing to give my apology to you.
2. You don’t be angry. I will go with you on Sunday.
3. We can meet at the school gate at 8 a.m. this Sunday.
三、写得得当(选材精当)
1. Suddenly, I want to read books at home.
2. My mother is ill and I have to take care of her.
☆Your own convincing reason:
四、写得连贯 (活用过渡语)
1. I will take part in a social activity. , I have to say sorry to you.
2. We planned to go to the bookstore this Saturday. , I can’t do it as planned.
, I’m writing to express my heartfelt apology to you.
五、写得漂亮 (句式升格)
1. We can not only have more time to select books but also attend a book signing.
2. I have an unexpected party to attend. I can’t accompany you to the bookstore.
3. We can leave early. We will have more time to read books in the bookstore.
4. The activity is very important to me and I don’t want to miss it.
5. I have just been asked to help my English teacher to prepare for a lecture. It is to be held this
Saturday.
【当堂达标】
【课后扩展】
假设你是光明中学的学生 Mary，你答应了要去参加你好朋友 Helen 周末的生日聚会，
但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给她写一封电子邮件： 规范！规范！规范！向细节要品质！
1. 表示歉意；2. 解释原因；3. 另约时间见面。注意：
1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【评分要点】
书写 扣题 要点 准确 连贯 亮点 得分
_一、常用词汇 【限时写作】
道歉信
_二、常用句型
【整理背诵】
三、写作模板
Dear_ ,
Para1:
Para2:
Para3:
Yours
Li Hua
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